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nahi bilkul bhi nahi...Aapne shayad kahani ke flow pe dhyan nahi diya.... Nidhi ek wife ki tarah ya fir ek lover ki tarah veer ke liye feel karti hai... Tabhi to veer ke halke se touch se bhi bechain ho jaati hai....veer bhi kai baar kahani me ye bol chuka hai ki Nidhi ke pyar me gir jayega aur shayad gir chuka hai aur yahan se kahani modna matlab readers ko jhatka dena sad wala.. Naina ji... Nidhi aur veer ke beech romance must hai warna kahani jis tarah se start huii hai uss tarah se rahegi nahi.... Baaki Werewolf bhai jaisa theek samjhe,but.... Aap unko request karke kahani ko flow bigadiye mat ye mera request hai aapse.... Hopefully aap mind nahi karengi mere baat ka:;
ab jab vivek ko raagini chhod ke jaa chuki hai ... toh kyun na vivek aur arohi ki shaadi kar di jaaye...Veer toh abhi mila nahi Rohini se
Fir kese!?
He only met with Rohini jab Ragini Vivek ke saath shaadi kar ghar me aayi thi. Shaadi ke baad se Veer never met her.
Vikash ki chabhi...ab jab vivek ko raagini chhod ke jaa chuki hai ... toh kyun na vivek aur arohi ki shaadi kar di jaaye...
Idea achha hai par fir balance banane ke liye Sumitra ki jagah Rajat ke saath Ragini honi chahiye...ab jab vivek ko raagini chhod ke jaa chuki hai ... toh kyun na vivek aur arohi ki shaadi kar di jaaye...
Idea achha hai par fir balance banane ke liye Sumitra ki jagah Rajat ke saath Ragini honi chahiye...
agar rajat aur ragini ki jodi dhamakedaar hai to us hisap se vivek aur nidhi ki jodi superhit hai....Idea achha hai par fir balance banane ke liye Sumitra ki jagah Rajat ke saath Ragini honi chahiye...
Subhah ho gayi hai par update nahi aaya abhi takThen toh aapko subah hi padhna padega lagta bro. Kyuki abhi maatr 2600 words hi complete hue hai. Aur update rehta hai 4000 words ke aas paas ka. Tab se likh raha hu mein.
Arre ye kya pehle Aarohi fir Nidhi... Ye galath baat hai... Ragini ko baraabar ka muka milna chahiye. To Rajat ke saath saath uske liye Ranga bhi... Kya bolte ho..agar rajat aur ragini ki jodi dhamakedaar hai to us hisap se vivek aur nidhi ki jodi superhit hai....
mohabbat ki ek nayi dastan
Vikas ki chabhi
veer ki nayi naweli nidhi bhabhi
us ragini aur soniya ki wajah se hi subhah story pe aane wala update nahi aa raha haiArre ye kya pehle Aarohi fir Nidhi... Ye galath baat hai... Ragini ko baraabar ka muka milna chahiye. To Rajat ke saath saath uske liye Ranga bhi... Kya bolte ho..
To fir to ek hi idea hai... In dono ko hi aapas mein fit kar dena... Bole to Sonia bheds Ragini... Problem ich khatam...us ragini aur soniya ki wajah se hi subhah story pe aane wala update nahi aa raha hai