Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

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[Naina]

Btw lagta hai wo jatin aur jo group hai uske sath ye log kayi dino se suhana aur soniya ka picha kar rahe honge... phir mauka milte hi us anguthi ko leke udan chu ho gaye... Shayad us hotel mein koi kaam karne wala bhi mila hua ho un logo ke sath..

maybe veer ko ab sirf jatin se hi nahi balki uske us group se bhi ladna hoga us anguthi ke liye...

 

[kingkhankar]

20k

Greed! Greed is very bad. But he deserves it being such a great writer.

 

[Sajid111]

UPDATE NO 28 KE BAD KOI UPDATE AAYI HAI KYA

 

[pawanqwert]

Bhai,

Kisi ko sikayat karne se pahle thoda soch liya karo,

Story ka update padne me 10-15 minute lagta hai par usi ko likhne me 3-4 ghante tak lag jate hai,

Aap to aise bol rahe hai ki Aapne Writer ko JOB par rakha hai, ki abhi tak Complete kyu nahi hua,

Thoda shant raho, Writer ki bhi Apni Zindgi hai,

8-9-10 baje tak bhi Subha hi hota hai.

Wait kar lo,
ya Aap bhi itne bade-bade Update time par dete hue, koi Story likhna suru kar do, phir dekhna,
Subha uthte hi Update ke liye aisi tarike se Update mangne walo ko Aap kya kahte.

Writer ne kaha hai ye Update MEGA update hoga, to unko likhne do.

सही कहा भाई

 

[Ashish120]

Waiting

 

[Lovekillsyou]

Waiting

 

[Werewolf]

Mega Update
(Diwali Special)

Update - 29 ~ Saving a Damsel in distress
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Ab tak...

Ekdum bhakkam bheed thi station me. Poora bhara hua tha. Aise me usse uss Jatin ko dhundna tha jo ab na keval train me rehne waala tha balki poore Jaipur me kahi bhi jaa sakta tha.

'Damnnn ittt!! Just where did he went???'

Usne kheejte hue mann me chillaaya. Lagta hai... Ye safar uska... Lamba hone waala tha.

Ab aage...

Jis raat Veer Train me baith ke Jaipur jaa raha tha, uss hi din Kavya aur Arohi college se chooth kar ghar jaa rahi thi. Par uss din unke saath kuch unusual sa ghatit hua. Kuch aisa jo chinta me daalne waala vishay tha.

Kavya choothate hi neeche aayi aur scooty ke paas khadi, apni badi behan Arohi ka wait karne lagi.

Wese toh unhe car se driver chorrne aata tha. Par aaj car kisi jagah busy thi. Aur iske chalte wo dono hi scooty se aayi thi. Arohi usse apne saath baitha ke laayi thi.

Jab Arohi ki class choothi toh wo neeche aayi aur Kavya ko scooty ke paas khada dekh wo muskuraayi.

Arohi : Chale!?

Kavya : Hmm? Ohh! Hmm!

Arohi ne notice kiya ki Kavya kuch chintit sii lag rahi thi.

Arohi : Kya baat hai!?

Kavya : Huh? N-Nahi toh? Kuch nahi...

Arohi (frowns) : Don't lie. Tell me! Kya hua?

Kavya : W-Wo...

Arohi : ??

Kavya : Veer Bhaiya aaj college nahi aaye. Na hi unhone mere bheje gaye messages ka reply kiya.

Kavya ki baat sunn Arohi usse bauhe sikodte hue ghuri. Veer ka zikr aate hi na jaane kyu uski zubaan pe taala lag jaata tha.

Aur usse uss din ka scene yaad aane lagta jis din Veer Kavya ko uski class me chorrne gaya tha.

Veer ki baat aate hi Arohi ne topic wahi pe close kar diya.

Arohi : Chalo!

Kavya : Hmm!

Wo dono Scooty pe baith apne raaste nikal gayi par beech raaste tak aate aate hi Arohi ko jese kuch gadbad mehsoos hui. Aur wo tezz tezz apni gaadi Traffic me lehraate hue chalaane lagi.

Kavya : Dii??? Aap itni tezz kyu chala rahi ho. Hum bhid jaenge...

Arohi : ...

Kavya : Diiiiii!???

Arohi : Someone is following us.

Kavya (shocked) : Huh??

Arohi ki baat sunte hi Kavya ekdum chakit reh gayi. Usne peeche mud ke dekha toh ek aadmi poora helmet lagaaye bike pe unke peeche aa raha tha.

Arohi : Don't look.

Usne warn kiya. Arohi mirror me kaafi time se uss bande ko apne peeche aata dekh rahi thi. Jaha jaha wo turn le rahi thi wahi wahi wo bhi turn le raha tha. Aur jese hi usse iss baat ka abhaas hua uski dhadkane tezz ho gayi.

Kavya uske saath thi. Aur Kavya ki uske kapdo par zorro ki pakad hi bata rahi thi ki wo darri hui hai.

Kavya : D-Dii! Wo hume follow kyu kar raha hai? M-Mein police ko phone lagau?

Arohi : Nooo! Don't worry! Bas pakad ke baithi raho. Hum pohuchne hi waale hai.

Jese hi Ghar ke mod ke liye turn aaya, Arohi ne zorr se acceleration dete hue scooty seedha society me ghused dii.

Kavya ne palat ke dekha...

Par...

Iss baar wo aadmi dur dur tak kahi nazar nahi aaya.

Arohi : Hmph! Stalkers! Itni hi dum rehti hai inki. Raah chalti ladkiyo ko dekhna, ghurna, unhe follow karna aur unhe cherrna.

Kavya : H-He won't come r-right?

Arohi : Nope! Iss se zyaada unki aukaat nahi rehti. Let's go!

Aur Arohi, Kavya ko baithaaye waha se apne ghar ki taraf gaadi aage badha deti hai.

Par baahar kaun tha?
Unhe iss baat ka shayad zara bhi andaaza nahi tha.

***

Wahi yaha Bhumika ki hotel se ring chori ho jaane ke baad jab police wagarah ko khabar karke Suhana aur Sonia ghar aayi toh iss waqt wo dono hi bhaiyankar tension me thi.

Suhana kamre me idhar se udhar bechain haalat liye tehal rahi thi aur baar baar chinta ke maare kuch kuch badbadaate jaa rahi thi.

Fir Achanak hi uski aankhein pal bhar ke liye kuch soch ke fel gayi aur wo palat ke forun hi Sonia ko dekhi jo bistar par hi chinta ke maare baithi hui thi.

Suhana : Kahi...

Sonia : ??

Suhana : Kahi wo Veer ne hi toh...!?

Sonia : ???

Suhana : Kahi usne hi toh ring nahi churaayi? Haa! Yahi hua hoga! Wo toh mujhse chidha hua tha pehle se hi. Haa! Zaroor! Ye ussi ka kiya dhara hai. Mujhe neecha dikhaane ke liye wo...

Wo aage bolti ki uske pehle hi uske honth wahi ruk gaye.

Kyuki saamne Sonia usse badi hi namm aankho se aur thode gusse me dekh rahi thi.

Suhana : Huh? S-Sonu? K-Kya hua? Tu aise...!?

Sonia : Kya aap ye kehna chaah rahi hai ki mene chori kii?

Suhana : Huh? What!? Ye...

Sonia : Veer mere saath baitha hua tha. What are you trying to imply Dii?

Sonia ke baat sunte hi Suhana ki bolti band ho gayi aur usne apna sarr jhuka liya.

Sonia : He was with me... Then how can he?? And why would he?

Suhana : Par... Light gol thi. Aur m-maybe... Usne...

Sonia (uchi awaaz me) : He was withhh meee...

Suhana : H-How did you know? Light o-off thi...

Sonia : Because I was holding his hand...

Suhana : Huh!???

Sonia : ....

Aur agle hi pal Sonia waha se baahar nikal ke bhaag gayi.

Suhana keval usse jaate hue hi dekhti reh gayi. Uski behan ka vyavhaar din pratidin badalta jaa raha tha. Par usse sabse zyaada abhi iss anguthi ki tension thi. Bhala kya jawaab degi kal wo apne Dad ko?

***

Uss din ke agle din, yaha Mumbai me hi ek basti ke paas kisi adde par kayi saare ladke ikhatta hue the.

Ranga inhi sab ke saath ek jagah baitha cigarette ke kash lagaane me busy tha.

Usne apna phone nikaala aur apne Bhau, Aatish ko call lagaaya.

*Ring* *Ring*

Aatish : Bolo Ranga!

Ranga : Bhau! Kaam ho gaya hai. Jatin kaamyaab raha. Train me baith gaya hai aur aapki bataayi gayi jagah pe bhi pohuch jaega.

Aatish : Badhiya! Isse kehte hai ek teer se do nishaane. Ring ke kho jaane se sab kuch ast vyast hone laga hoga. Aur yahi mauka hai fault dhundne ka. Security me antar zaroor aaega kyuki abhi dono hi behne jhep gayi hongi ring chori hone se. Na keval mein ab uss Sonia ko pakad sakta hu balki saath hi saath Ring ko bech bhi sakta hu jiske chalte kuch munaafa bhi ho jaega hahaha~

Ranga : Bhau! Aapne Jatin ko kaha ka address diya hai!?

Aatish : Mera puraana dost hai. Drug dealing karta tha pehle par ab heere jawaarato aur antique cheezo me deal karta hai. Ussi ke paas bheja hu. Wo accha daam dilwa dega anguthi ka.

Ranga : Ohhhh!

Aatish : Kya tumne apne chuhe ko sabak sikhaaya?? Yadi nahi toh jaldi wo kaam kar lena. Mujhe dubara bahaane nahi chaahiye.

Ranga : J-Jii! Bhau!

Par uski baat sunn'ne ke pehle hi call cut ho chuka tha.

Ye saara ka saara plan Aatish ka hi tha. Anguthi ko chori karwaane se zaahir sii baat thi ki situation create hoegi aur security bhi ast vyast rahegi. Issi beech wo Sonia ko bandhi banaane ka plan kiya hua tha.

Saath hi saath Jatin ko Ranga ne hi choose kiya tha. Jatin choriyo me maahir jo tha.

Hotel ke hi control room me maujood staff me se Jatin ki Pavan naam ke aadmi se pehchaan thi. Jiske chalte usne iss chori ko anjaam diya tha.

Jatin ye kehke hotel me ghusa tha ki wo rooms ke A.C sahi karne aaya hai.

Na keval Pavan ne Jatin ko andar karwaaya balki saath hi saath usne hi Lights off kari thi aur cameras shut down kiye the jiske chalte Jatin ring ko churaane me kaamyaab tha.

Uske haatho ki safaayi par toh Ranga bhi uski tareef karta tha.

Ranga ne Ring ke baare me sochna chorr, apne kisi chele ko phone kiya. Aur apne chele ki baat sunte hi uske chehre par muskaan aa gayi.

"Ab bataunga tujhe chuhe."

***

Idhar Mumbai se koso dur, Rajasthan me Veer ek tempo me baithe kisi gaav ki taraf prasthaan kar raha tha.

Tempo me kayi saare log ghuse pade the aur Veer apne muh pe ek saafa baandhe aur apna bag taange seat par baitha hua tha. Dacchakko se kabhi wo idhar hota toh kabhi udhar. Par uski nigaahe kahi khoyi hui sii thi.

'I must find him.'

Station se nikalne ke kuch derr baad hi mission update ho chuka tha jisme usse location ek gaav ki dii gayi thi.

Jatin ussi gaav me jaa raha tha. Uska maqsad kya tha ye Veer nahi jaanta tha par itna zaroor jaanta tha ki aaj kese bhi kar ke usse anguthi ko hathiyaana hi tha.

Jab tempo ruki toh Veer ko hosh aaya. Aur usne saamne driver ko prashn bhari nigaaho se dekha.

"Iske aage nahi jaegi tempo saahab. Aage raasta kharaab hai. Idhar hi utarna hoga."

Veer : Kya koi aur raasta nahi hai!?

Driver : Hai par lamba hai. Peeche se ghum ke jaana raha. Ab tempo waapas se waha nahi jaegi. Yaha se lautne ki sawaari lete hue station jaegi seedhe.

'Shit!!'

Na chaahte hue bhi Veer ko wahi utarna pada. Usne Driver ko paise diye aur apna bag liye aage chal diya.

Raasta waqai kharaab tha. Keechad bhi tha aur shaayad raaste ka nirmaad ho raha tha par beech me hi kaam rok ke lagta kaarigar nikal chuke the.

Usne dekha aane jaane waale log sabhi paidal bagal se apna perr keechad se bachaate hue nikal rahe the. Kuch cycle ko uthaate hue raasta cross kar rahe the.

Koodate faandte, keechad se bachte jese tese Veer uss raaste ke aage aaya. Aage ka raasta bhi kaccha tha par ab wo keechad nahi tha aur na hi sadak ubad khaabad thi.

Ye hissa gaav ka baahri hissa tha. Jese jese Veer galiyo se hote hue andar jaa raha tha, usse aas paas dukaane aur kacche ghar nazar aate jaa rahe the.

Veer ko aas paas ke log aise ghur ke dekh rahe the jese maano alien ko dekh rahe ho.

Yaha Ghar ghar koi gaay paala hua tha toh kis ke ghar bhains. Kul milaake udhar ka view Veer ko proper gaav waali feeling de raha tha.

[So? Kaha chal rahe hai hum?]

'Ek jagah dhundni hogi. Taaki ye bag kahi rakh sake. Aur fir usse dhundne nikal saku mein.'

[Hmm! I agree!]

'By the way.. Tum Level 4 par kab pohuchogi?'

[As soon as you complete this mission. Also, naye features bhi unlock hoenge. And, new skills bhi. Jo basic skills thi, unka Moderate level unlock ho jaega.]

'Ohh! So ab mein directly Moderate level skill le sakta hu. There's no need to...'

[No way master! Aapko basic leni padegi. Uske baad hi aap wahi skill moderate level ki purchase kar paoge.]

'Huh!?'

[For example- Yadi aapko Moderate Cooking Skill chahiye. Toh isse paane ke liye aapko pehle Basic cooking skill leni padegi. Otherwise wo kaam nahi karegi.]

'Shit!'

[Aapko kya laga? Ki seedha upar level ki skill purchase kar loge? ]

'Y-Yeah!'

[Hehe~]

Abhi wo Pari se aur baatein karta aur uss se aur sawaal karta par iske pehle ki wo kuch puch paata saamne se aa rahe shor ne uska dhyaan bhatka diya.

"Chorro... Chorro Maa ko... Chorrroooooo!!!"

Ek ladki chillaate hue ek aadmi ke haath ko pakde hue thi aur poori koshish kar rahi thi ki uske haath ko jhanjhor sake.

Uss aadmi ke haath ne ek aurat ke baal jakde hue the. Aur wo aurat dard bhara chehra liye khud ko churraane ki koshish kar rahi thi.

Saath hi saath yahi nahi ek aur ladka kisi ladki ko pakad ke ghaseet raha tha.

Aur inhi dono aadmiyo ke changul se unn do aurato ko churraane ke liye wo ladki athak prayaas kiye jaa rahi thi.

Veer ne kuch socha aur apna phone nikaala ki kuch pal baad hi...

"Mein kehti hu chorrrrooo."

*Chataak*

"Chal hatttt!"

Uss aadmi ne ek zorrdaar jhaapad uss ladki maara toh bechaari seedha neeche gir padi.

Veer ne bauhe sikodte hue saamne chal rahe drashya ko dekha. Usne fir agal bagal dekha toh usse ek aur jhatka laga. Aas paas ke log nazaara dekh rahe the par koi bhi kuch bol nahi raha tha na hi virodh kar raha tha.

Sab aise dekh rahe the jese maano unke saamne wo drishya ho hi nahi raha tha.

'They... How can they turn a blind eye to this?'

[Yahi Duniya hai master. Khud ko musibat me kyu daalna? Yahi soch ke koi bhi madad nahi kar raha hai. Will you act?]

'I...'

Veer ne ek baar fir saamne uss aurat ko dekha jo dard se apne nichle honth ko bheenche hue thi taaki uski awaaz na nikle. Wo iss se pehle mann me kuch keh paata ki tabhi...

*Ding*

[Mission : Save the Damsel in distress.
Rewards : ?? Points.
Time Limit : 1 Hour.]

'What the hell???'

[Isme mera koi haath nahi hai. You know right?]

Ab toh usse aage badhna hi tha.

Idhar wo aadmi uss aurat ko kheechte hue aage badh hi raha tha jab uske kandhe pe ek haath pada.

Peeche dekha toh ek anjaan yuvak muh me saafa baandhe khada hua tha.

Aur usse dekhte hi wo kheejte hue chillaaya,
"Hattttt ree!!"

Veer ke haath ko jhatkaate hue wo waapas se palat ke aage badhne hi waala tha ki ek baar fir uske kandhe par haath pada par iss baar haath sirf thehra hi nahi, uss haath ki pakad ne uske kandhe ko pakadte hue usse ghumaaya aur...

*Poooowwwwwwww*

Ek zordarr ghusa seedhe uske chehre par pada aur wo aadmi neeche dhadaam se gir pada.

Dusra ladka ye dekh Veer ki taraf aage badha aur usne apne haath chalaaya par Veer side hoke araam se uska wo haath pakad liya aur marod diya.

Jese hi Veer ne haath maroda aur uske peeche gaya tabhi uss ladke ne dusra haath peeche mud ke Veer ke sarr par maarna chaaha.

Par...

Sarr ko asaani se jhukaate hue Veer uss hamle se bhi bach gaya aur ab zyaada khel khelna usse sahi nahi laga.

Usne uss ladke ko apni orr kheecha, mutthi kassi aur...

*Pooowwwwwwww*

Ek ghusa seedha muh pe jad diya.

"Aaaargghhhh!!"

Karaahte hue wo neeche gira toh Veer ne apni nazre unn dono par se hata ke uss ladki ko dekha jo neeche giri hui thi.

Veer : Yaha thaana kidhar hai?

Ladki : Y-Yaha se thodi duri par...

Veer : Chalo fir! Inn dono ko le chalta hu mein.

Wo ladki haa me sarr hilaayi aur forun hi uth ke Veer ko raasta bataate hue aage chalne lagi.

Idhar Veer dono ko maarte maarte ghaseetate hue le jaa raha tha. Dono ke stats waqai kam the aur isliye Veer ne action lene ka risk liya tha.

Ye wo aadmi the jo bas aurato pe unhe maar ke apni mardaangi jataate the. Asli mard ke saamne inki hawa nikal jaati thi.

Jese hi Veer thaane pochucha, usne dono ko wahi patak diya.

Veer : Jao! Saari baat bataao.

Ladki : H-Hmm!

Waha ke officer ne jese hi uss ladki ki baatein suni toh wo do aadmi bhi apni chikni chupdi baato se jhooth bol Officer ko behlaane fuslaane lage.

Officer : Koi saboot hai?

Ladki : Huh??

Officer : Saboot ke bina kese hawalaat me daal du?? Kal ko yahi baat ye kehke tumhe yaha pe le aaye ki tum isse maar rahi thi toh? Saboot laao uske baad hi aage ki kaaryvaahi hogi...

"Ye toh kaafi hoga saboot ke liye hai na?"

Sabhi ke kaano me achanak hi Veer ki awaaz padi jiske haath me mobile tha aur ek video chal raha tha.

Video ussi samay ka tha jab wo aadmi uss aurat ko ghaseet ke le jaa raha tha aur uss ladki ko thappad maar raha tha.

Bas!

Uss se zyaada kisi cheez ki zaroorat nahi thi. Dono hi aadmi salaakho ke peeche the filhaal ke liye toh. Jab tak ki unhe churraane wala koi nahi aa jaata.

Veer aur wo ladki ghar ke liye laut rahe the toh Veer ko kayi baatein jaan'ne ko mili. Sabse pehli yahi ki ladki ka naam ~ Sonali tha.

Sonali ~


Veer : Toh wo tumhaara baap tha?

Sonali : Sautela... Sautela baap.

Sautela shabd sunte hi Veer ko apni sauteli maa, Shweta ki yaad aa gayi.

Veer : Aur wo tumhara Bhai?

Sonali : Sautela bhai!

Veer : Hmm! Toh? Kyu kar rahe the wo aisa?

Sonali : Juaa...

Veer : Hmm?

Sonali : Juaa me haar gaye the dono baap bete. Toh maa aur bhabhi ko utha ke le jaa rahe the. Unki izzat ka faaluda karne. Ya ye kahu ko izzat lutwaane. Haraam khor kahi ke... Juaa aur sharaab bas yahi kaam hai.

Sonali ke chehre par itna gussa tha, saath hi saath uske shabd bhi ekdum katu aur teekhe nikal rahe the apne sautele bhai aur baap ke liye.

Jese hi Veer aur Sonali ghar ke paas pohuche toh unhone dekha ki dono aurate baahar hi khadi hui thi.

Aur tabhi...

*Ding*

[Mission ~ 'Save the Damsel in Distress' has been completed.]

[30 points have been rewarded.]

'Too easy.'

Ghar ke saamne aate hi uski nazar unn dono mahilaao par padi.

'Hmm??'

Aur iss baar Veer ne uss aurat ko gaur se dekha toh wo hairaan reh gaya. Wo waqai ek khubsoorat aurat thi. Ek alag si hi banawat thi uski jo usse akarshit kar rahi thi.

'Check!'

[Name - Suman
Age - 37 years.

Bio - Suman! Ek boht hi sehansheel aurat hai. Apni bahu aur beti ko boht chaahti hai. Kayi saalo se behad pareshaan hai. Kisi anmol cheez ki talaash me hai.

Favourability - 30
Relationship - Strangers]

'Anmol cheez ki talaash!? What does that mean? Wait! Favourability 30? Wtf??? We just met. How can...!?'

[Maybe it's because you saved her.]

'Yeah! M-Maybe. But still...'

Veer Suman ko ghur ke dekh raha tha ki usne achanak bhaanpa ki Suman khud usse aankhein faade dekh rahi thi.

Wo bhauchakki sii Veer ko dekh rahi thi. Kabhi wo uske chehre ko dekhti toh kabhi seene ko aur uske honth khul rahe the aur fir band ho rahe the.

'Huh?'

Achanak hi wo tezz kadmo ke saath aayi aur uske perro par gir gayi.

Suman : M-Mere parivaar ki madad karne ke liye... A-Apka boht boht dhanyavaad! Mein... Mein...

Veer : Arre arre!? Ye aap kya...??

Usne agle hi pal Suman ko uske kandhe se pakad ke uthaaya aur uske haath Suman ke nagn haath se jab sparsh hue toh Veer ne forun hi haath peeche kar liye. Maano ek ghanti si baji uske dimaag me... Aur usse aisa karna sahi nahi laga. Usse aisa laga ki yadi usne aisa fir kiya toh ye boht gandi aadat bann baithega.

Gaav ki aurato me ek alag hi charm hota hai. Aur yahi charm Veer ko jese itna aakarshit kar raha tha ki uski nazre Suman par se hatt hi nahi rahi thi.

Wo saree pehn ne ka gaav ka dhang, uska shareer jo ki waqai patla bhi tha par halka gadraaya hua bhi.

Gehua rang, nain naksh ekdum aise ki unn naino se shabnam peene ka mann kare.

Sudol chaathi aur soorat aisi ki harr mard ko ek baar palat ke dekhne par majboor kar de. 37 ki umr hone ke bawajood wo kahi se bhi 37 ki nahi lag rahi thi.

Suman~


Par sabse chaukaane waali baat thi uska yu ajeeb nigaaho se Veer ko dekhna.

Uski aankho me ek ajeeb sii chamak thi aur wo ek taq Veer ko dekhe jaa rahi thi.

Suman : J-Jii M-Mein Suman...

Veer : Mujhe pata hai.

Suman : Huh??

'Fuckkkk!'

Veer : M-Mera matlab hai. Aapse milkar khushi hui.

Suman : Ohh! Aap-Aapka naam!?

Veer : Jii mera naam Veer hai.

Suman : V-Veer... Veer...

Suman kuch soch Veer ka naam budbudaane lagi jese maano rattne ki koshish kar rahi ho.

Suman : K-Kya aap yaha se hi ho?

Veer : Jii Nahi! Mein Mumbai se hu.

Suman (frowns) : Toh kya aapke... Aapke gharwaalo me se koi yaha ka hai?

Veer : Hmm? Nahi toh. Jaha tak mujhe pata hai aisa koi bhi nahi hai.

Suman : J-Jii! Accha! Inn... Inse miliye. Ye hai meri bahu Aabha.

Suman ne ishaara karte hue ek aurat ko aage bulaaya. Ye wahi aurat thi jisse kheench ke wo ladka le jaa raha tha.

Aabha ~


Ab jab Veer ne usse gaur se dekha toh paaya ki ye ladki bhi khubsoorat thi. Par isme abhi wo charm nahi tha jo Suman me maujood tha.

Aabha : J-Jii! Dh-Dhanyavaad!

Veer : It's okay!

Aabha : Hmm!?

'Ahh! She doesn't knows English.'

Veer : Mera matlab tha... Koi baat nahi.

Aabha : J-Jii!

Suman : Aur ye hai meri beti ~ Sonali!

Veer : Ohh haa! Hum ek dusre ko jaan chuke hai.

Suman : Accha!? Ye... Ye toh acchi baat hai. Ek baar fir... Mujhe aur mere parivar ko bachaane ke liye boht boht dhanyavaad!

Veer : Arre aisa keh ke aap mujhe...

'Hmm?'

Wo kehte kehte rukk gaya kyuki yu Suman ka ekdum ajeeb nigaaho se dekhna usse boht hi zyaada duwidha me daal raha tha.

'Fuck! Why is she looking me like that?'

[Who knows!?]

Suman : Kahiye na...

Veer : Wo... Baar baar dhanyavaad deke aap mujhe sharminda kar rahi hai.

Suman : Ahh!? Ni... Mein toh bas... Dhanyavaad de rahi thi. Dil se.

Veer (blushes) : Jii!

Suman : Aap yaha kisliye aaye hai? Aap idhar ke nahi hai toh!?

Veer : Kuch kaam tha.

Suman ne dekha ki Veer idhar udhar dekh raha tha jese maano kuch dhund raha ho.

Suman : Kisse dhund rahe hai aap?

Veer : Ohh! Yaha koi theharne ki jagah milegi kya?

Suman : Huh?

Veer uske uttar ka wait hi kar raha tha ki achanak hi uska haath Suman ne apne haatho me thaama aur usse kheench ke ghar ki orr le jaane lagi.

Veer : H-Huh?

Suman (smiles) : Aap humaare ghar me hi thehroge!

'Huh? Wtf???'

[She got attracted to you or what? Haha~]

Na keval Veer, balki Suman ki bahu, Aabha aur uski khud ki ladki, Sonali tak Suman ki iss baat se dang thi. Kya kaha tha abhi abhi Suman ne? Ki Veer unke saath rahega? Veer? Ek anjaan yuvak jis se mile abhi kuch minute bhi nahi huye. Wo saath me rahega?

Suman : Aaiye na! A-Aur ho sake toh... Mujhe 'Aap' nahi 'Tum' kehke sambodhit kariyega.

Veer : ?? No way!!! Aap mujhse umr me badi hai. Toh bhala mein aise kese...?

Suman : Mein aapse nivedan karti hu.

Veer : ??

Suman : Kripya kar mujhe 'Tum' kehke hi bulaaiye.

Veer : Par...

Suman : Ye mera aagrah hai.

Na chaahte hue bhi Veer ko Suman ki baat maan'ni hi padi. Akhir wo iss waqt badi hi aasha bhari nazro se jo dekh rahi thi usse.

Gaav me adhiktar ghar kacche the par Suman ka ghar kuch pakke maujood gharo me se ek tha waha.

Veer ko Sonali ke muh se uske ghar ki sthiti ke baare me idea lag chuka tha. Sonali ka Sautel Baap tha ~ Pushpendra.

Sautela bhai tha ~ Amit, jo ki saath hi saath Aabha ka pati bhi tha. Daaru aur juye ka dono baap bete ko aisa nasha tha ki aaj wo dono nashe me hi apni hi ghar ki mahilao ko bechne taiyaar the.

Khushkismat thi unki jo Veer sahi samay par udhar pohuch chuka tha, warna na jaane kya ho raha hota unke saath.

Kuch hi palo me Veer ghar ke andar tha aur ek bistar par baitha hua tha.

Veer : M-Mujhe nahi lagta ki aise time pe... I mean jab aapke husband baahar ho... Toh mera rukna sahi hoga. Aur haa, mujhe nahi pata tha ki wo dono aap dono ke pati hai. Ye baat mujhe waha pata chali.

Suman (smiles) : Aapko chinta karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai ma... Mera matlab hai... Veer jii!

Veer : ??

Suman : Aapne jo bhi kiya ekdum sahi kiya. Darasal, wo mera dusra pati hai. Mere pehle pati ka dehant hue kayi saal ho chuke hai. Pehle pati se mujhe Sonal hui. Wahi Amit uska ladka jo usse apni pehle patni se hua. Aur Aabha Amit ki hi patni hai.

Veer : Samjha!!

Suman : Pushpendra ke saath rehna ek majboori thi. Akhir ek mahila bina mard ke nahi jee sakti. Par ma... Mera matlab hai, Veer jii!! Mene kabhi Pushpendra ke saath sambhog nahi kiya. Wo hume rehne ke liye ghar de raha tha aur hum usse suwidhaaye. Yaani ki khaana banana, saaf safaayi, kapde dhona... Sab kuch. Siwae shareerik sambandho ke.

'Wtf??? Why is she talking about her sex life with me?'

Idhar Aabha aur Sonali ka bhi same haal tha. Wo muh khole stabdh sii Suman ko dekhe jaa rahi thi.

Suman : Kuch majbooriya thi jinke chalte hume ghar chorrna pada aur rehne ke liye sthaan chahiye tha toh Pushpendra se mene shaadi kii. Kyuki hume panapne ke liye ek ghar chahiye tha.

Veer : Wo jab itna kar sakta hai toh...

Suman : Nahi ma... Veer jii! Shadi ke waqt hi mene keh diya tha ki... Jis din Usne mere saath zabardasti kari, ussi din apne praan tyaag dungi. Usse ek mahila chahiye thi ghar chalaane ke liye.

Veer : Ohh!

Suman : Kherr! Boht ho gayi baatein. Aaiye ma... Veer jii! Mein aapko haath muh dhulwa deti hu.

Aur Suman ke saath aangan ke paas hi lage bathroom me jaake Veer ne apne haath perr dhoye. Bathroom toh nahi kahenge bas ek kamra tha boht chota jisme toilet seat ki vyavastha thi.

Veer din se shaam tak Suman ke ghar hi tha. Shaam ko wo kuch bahaana karke jese tese ghar se nikla aur gaanv me hi Jatin ko dhundne nikal pada.

Ek guessing thi uski ki shayad...

Shayad Mission update ho jaaye aur koi nayi location mil jaaye usse. Aur theek wesa hi hua. Jab wo raat ke kareeb 10:30 baje bazaar ke ilaake se thoda dur kahi chala jaa raha tha toh uski nazar do shawl pehne aadmiyo par gayi jo road se side me khade bada hi chhup ke baate kar rahe the.

Aur jese hi Veer ne unhe check kiya.

Uske chehre pe ek muskaan fel gayi. Kyuki unme se ek uska mission target tha.

'Found him!'

Mutthi kaste hue wo wahi uss Jatin ko dabochna chaahta tha par jese tese khud ko control kar wo wahi ruka raha.

Khaali ek peele rang ki street light jal rahi thi jiske chalte nazaara utna spasht nahi dikh raha tha.

Jese hi Jatin uss aadmi se baat kar alag direction me jaane ke liye hua. Veer ne uska peecha shuru karna shuru diya.

Par jese Jatin ko agle hi pal iss baat ka ehsaas hua aur wo bina peeche mude hi tezz kadmo ke saath aage bhaaga.

Veer kaha iss baar peeche rehne waala tha? Jitni bhi agility thi uski, uska poora istemaal kar wo bhi tezz tezz bhaagte hue uska peecha kiya.

Aur kisi ek jagah pe aake wo rukk gaya.

Saamne bhainso ka ek puraana tabela tha jo shayad ab istemaal nahi kiya jaata tha.

Harr jagah itna andhera tha ki Veer ko kuch dikhaayi tak nahi de raha tha. Aur na hi Jatin ko.

Jatin chhupa toh tabele me hi tha par roshni jese unki pareshaani banke khadi hui thi. Andhere me kuch dikhaayi nahi de raha tha aur Veer bas ahista ahista apne kadam tabele ki taraf badha raha tha.

Par usse darr tha...

Ki kahi Jatin koi surprise attack na karde uspe kisi hathiyaar se.

Isliye...

'Check!'

Jese hi Veer ne check kaha. Usse tabele ke andar chhupe Jatin ke sarr ke upar uski Status window nazar aa gayi.

Aur ab usse andhere ka koi darr nahi tha. Status window apne aap me neele rang se chamakti thi.

Ek evil sii muskaan liye Veer tabele ke peeche jaa pohucha.

'Kidhar gaya saala?' Jatin mann me soch dubak ke chhupa hua tha jab achanak usse apne kandhe pe ek haath mehsoos hua.

Jese hi usne peeche mud ke dekha...

"Surprise motherfucka..."

*Baaaaanggggggg!"

Ek ghoosa uske gaalo pe kisi train ki raftaar jitni tezz aake pada. Wo hamle se gir paata par uske pehle hi kisi ne uski collor ko pakad ke kheencha aur firse...

*Baaaangggggg!*

Ek aur ghoosa uske ussi gaalo pe jadd diya. Do ghuso ke baad hi Jatin ke muh se khoon nikalna shuru ho chuka tha. Full 50 strength punches the Veer ke ye.

Wo chaaro khaane chitt ho chuka tha. Keval bhaagne me tezz tha wo baaki ek baar pakad me aa jaaye uske baad Jatin jese kisi chuhe ki tarah tha jisse Veer ne raund diya tha.

'Hmph! Too easy!'

Veer ne jese hi uska jeb tatola, toh usse jis cheez ki talaash thi. Wo akhir mil hi gayi.

Jatin ke upar Veer ne fir aisa gussa nikaala ki uski haalat behaal kar dii.

Bechaari Pari tak kuch na bol paayi.

Aur usse uss haal me hi chorr Veer Suman ke ghar ki orr nikal pada.

Ghar ka raasta usse yaad nahi tha par yahi pe Pari ne uski madad kii. System ka feature Tracker jo tha wo raaste ko memorize kar leta tha.

Ye ek inbuilt function tha jisse Veer ne istemaal kiya aur finally wo Suman ke ghar laut aaya.

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Andar aate hi usse mahaul kuch alag sa laga.

Sabhi so rahe the lagta aur keval ek hi peele rang ka bulb jal raha tha.

Kivaad khule hue the jese shayad Veer ke liye koi jaaga hua tha.

Veer andar aaya aur aangan me usne haath muh dhoye aur apni shirt utaar side me taang dii.

Badan se paseene ko geele kapde se pocha aur wo kamre ki taraf badha...

Bag me se wo abhi apne liye nayi t shirt dhund hi raha tha jab usse apne peeche se ek awaaz aayi...

*Click*

Kivaad ki chatakni band hui aur darwaaze ke saamne Suman khadi hui thi. Uske dono haath uske peeche the jo chatakni ko band kar chuke the.

'Huh?'

*Chham chham*

Wo dheere dheere aage badhi, uski paayal ki awaaz hi keval uss sannaate me sunaayi de rahi thi.

Paas aate hue jese hi usne Veer ki nagn chhaati ko dekha toh uske gaal surkh laal pad gaye.

Maatr ek peele bulb ki roshni me Veer usse dekh paa raha tha. Usne bhure rang ka blouse pehna hua tha, saree ka pallu pehle se hi uski chaathi se alag tha jiske chalte Suman ka aadha cleavage wo dekh paa raha tha.

"Aap pareshaan ho. Hai na?"

Wo bolte hue uske aur sameep aayi aur uske bagal se aake baith gayi.

Halki roshni me wo alag hi qayamat lag rahi thi.

'What the hell?'

[System is going into sleep mode.]

'Huh??? Wtf??? Pariiiii??? What sleep mode??? Come back...'

[Enjoy the night!]

'Huh??? Come back here you idiot piece of shit... Pariiiiiii!!? Pariiiii???? Fucccccckkkkkkk!!!'

Agle hi pal Suman ne uske dono haatho ka thaama aur uthaate hue apne chehre ke paas laayi aur apne komal narm hontho se unhe choom lii.

'????'

Fir wo badi hi ajeeb sii nigaaho se usse dekhi aur uske seene ko. Aur fir uske haatho ko neeche le jaate hue usne Veer ke dono haath apne dono doodh ki thailiyo par rakh diye.

'Shiiiitttt!!!'

Ye ehsaas paate hi Veer ki aankhein apne aap band ho chali.

Uske haath unn do aamo par zorr se kasse hue the. Suman khud zorr zorr se saasein le rahi thi jiske chalte uski chhaathi upar neeche ho rahi thi aur Veer ke haath bhi ussi rhythm me upar neeche ho rahe the.

"Ye... Ye aap kya!?"

Veer ne bolna chaaha par agle hi pal uska muh band ka band reh gaya jab Suman ne aage badh ke uske honth apne muh me bhar kiye.

"Mmmphhh!????"

Aur dono bistar par gir pade...

*Slurp*

"Mmmmmm"

"Ssssss"

Na jaane kesi kesi awaazein aa rahi thi jab dono ke muh aapas me bhide hue the.

Veer ko last time sex kiye kaafi samay ho chuka tha. Tab se ab tak uske andar itna frustration bhara hua tha jisse release usse karna hi tha. Aaj shayad uska dherr saara stress release hone waala tha. Stress ke alaawa bhi kuch aur release hone waala tha.

Jab dono ki saasein ful jaane par alag hue toh dono ke hontho se laga hua ek thook ka bridge bann gaya.

Suman ki aankho me vaasna saaf saaf jhalak rahi thi. Wahi Veer ki khud ki aankhe kahi jese kho sii gayi thi.

Apne haatho ko peeche le jaate hue Suman ne blouse khola aur jhatke se apne seene se gira diya. Uske baad ka nazaara jo dikha, usse dekh ke Veer maano paagal se ho gaya tha.

Aam nahi, kharbooje the.

Itne sudol aur itne aakarshak ki pucho mat.

Usne apna thook nigla aur saamne maujood unn stano ko ghure jaa raha tha.

Suman toh ek aag ka shola thi. Aur jese agle hi pal Veer ko ye aag mehsoos hui jab Suman ne uske sarr ko pakad ke apne dono stano ke beech me kheech liya aur poora jakad ke daba liya.

'Fucccccckkkkk!'

Pata nahi Suman ne aisa kya kiya tha jiske chalte Veer ke andar kuch trigger ho gaya.

Aur fir na toh usne aav dekha na taav.
Suman ko apne neeche kar uski chuchhiyo ko aise maroda, aise nichoda ki zorr zorr se kamre me uski siskiyaa gunjne lagi.

Kuch hi palo me dono hi nagn awastha me aa chuke the. Aur Veer jese kisi aur hi duniya me jaa chuka tha.

Usne apna lund Suman ki baalo se bhari choot par lagaaya aur dhakke de de ke usse poora andar jad tak pohucha diya.

"Aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh!"

Wo siskiya lete hue Veer ko jakde rahi. Par harr dhakka usse jhanjhor ke rakh deta.

Tabadtod chudaayi ke chalte poora bistar charar marar ki awaaz kar raha tha aur ye awaaz koi aur bhi dusre kamre me sunn raha tha.

Bagal ke kamre me khaat par laiti Aabha apni dono taango ke beech apna haath daale hue thi. Uske gaal poore gulaabi ho chuke the. Apni Saasu maa ki siskiya sunn uski khud ki choot me halchal ho rahi thi jisse wo zorr se mal ke mitaana chaah rahi thi.

Sonali toh so chuki thi toh usse kuch andaaza nahi tha. Par...

Aabha ko harr ek cheenkh, harr ek siksiyaa aur unn dhakko ki awaaz bhali bhaati sunaayi de rahi thi.

Aur kuch iss hi prakaar ye raat unn sabhi ke liye yaadgaar bann gayi.

Agli subah jab Veer ki aankh khuli toh usse apne upar kuch bhaar sa mehsoos hua.

Jese hi usne aankhein khole ke dekha toh paaya ki...

Suman ekdum nangi apni dono doodh ki thailiya uske seene par tikaaye usse hi nihaar rahi thi aur muskuraa rahi thi.

Uske baad wo boli,

"Subah ho gayi... Ma-Maalik!"

'Huh?? Wait!!!! What did she sayyyy???'
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Aaj ek liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!
Like kar dena pasand aaye toh.
And sorry for the wait.

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[Werewolf]

fantastic update bhai

Awesome superb and laajawab update bhai

Next level update.
Veer ki lagna vali ha ya mission ma
And also this is one of hell fun mission.
So the reward should also be big atleast 80-100 points.
If want to give more then unlock new capabilities.
And this new mission will be a such a intersting one that just can't wait for the next update

Nice update bro....

Boht hi zabardast update tha suspence aur emotions se bhara hua....

Nice

Fantastic superb update

Ek time ke liye laga ki veer use train me hi pakad lega lekin lagta hai abhi veer ko rjasthan jana likha hua hai... Aurr shayad veer ko Rajasthan me koi apna ya fir koi naya dost male ya female koi bhi ho sakta hai..... Baki sab mila ke aaj ka update thik thak tha... Bas ek hi kami thi ki pura update bas chase karne me nikal gaya... Khair Werewolf bhai lekhak hain to jaise chahe story chalaye bas mera ek hi requuest hai ki iss ring wali scene ko nipta den jaldi se thoda slow aur bore kar rahi hai ye story ko... Baaki you are one of my favorite writers@Werewolf bhai....

Location toh system mein update ho jaega
Nice update bro

Tow veer bhai sahab hotel m Suhana ko achkee suna ker pahoch gaya Nidhi ki society m ki juhi ko door se dekh loonga
Lekin juhi khud hi achcnak se samne aa gayi
Veer n juhi k kaan m kia keh dia ki ek dam se maan gayi or jaane dia veer ko
Target train se jaipur ja raha h veer bhai sahab bhi train m pahoch gaye or haath bhi laga tha chor lekin saala dhkka dekher nikal gaya iss chakker m veer ki jaan jaate jaate bachi
Dekhte h or kita veer ko or kita struggle kerna padega iss chor ko pakadne m
Bahot behtareen zaberdast
Shaandaar update bhai

Superb update bro....
Waiting for next

NIce update bhai. Jatin ki location toh veer ko pari se mil hi jaye gi phir woh itna preshan q hy. Jatin akela chori nahi kar sakta, uss k saath hotel k staff mein se koi zaroor mila hua hy jis ne lights band ki.

Jabardast lajawab

Great update!

Nice update bhai diamond ki ring kab tak veer pata hai aur kis kis se dushmani leta hai dekhte hai aage sayad action scene aane bali hai

Amazing update..veer agar jatin sharma ko pakad liya to wo suhana ki ghamand tod dega..

वाह वाकई बंधु गजब के लिखते हो
पाठक सांस थामे आपके अपडेट पढ़ते हैं
सबसे खास वीर की निधि व जुही से मिलना अपने आप में लाज़वाब है

Majedar update bhai...waiting for next update eagerly...

And the chase begins.... Superb bhai

Waiting

Mast update bhai

Werewolf thanks buddy

Super update
Mujhe aaisa kyu lagta h veer ke upar hi chori ka ilzaam aa jye ga agar wo ring wapas karega

Badhiya update bhai maja aa gaya. Lakin ek baat btao itni mahngi ring chori ho gayi, waha kisi ke man me ye baag kyu nahi aayi ki ring veer ne churayi hai.

Aksaar log aisa hi karte hai. Na

bhai mene aapki story padhi bhot aachi he maza aagya pad ke likhte raho or stry aage badate raho

Wtf... 72 ki favourability... I mean really... I expected Juhi's favourability towards Veer to be the highest... Par fir bhi maine 55-60 expect ki thi... Iss se saaf pata chalta hai ke Juhi kis kadar Veer ko pyaar karti hai... Waise kya kaha Veer ne Juhi ke kaan mein... Maybe ye ki wo Nidhi ke bete ko unke paas le aayega??? Ab to Kavya ki favourability bhi dekhne laayak hogi...

Bhumika to sadme se baahar hi naa aayi hai abhi tak ke Veer ka kya lena - dena hai Sonia jaisi hasti se...

Arre zyada tension ki baat nahi hai... Maine kaha naa inka baap ek hi hai par Maa...

Jatin, shayad pichhle kisi update mein Ranga ke saath zikr hua tha iska... Shayad... Waise ye Golu jisne Veer ko bachaya kya iska role bhi hai aage iss kahani mein??


Hahahaha... Saala kaise kaise log hain yahaan... Khush kismat hain ke Pari ne inki baat nahi suni warna bhaari bhaari gaali galoch shuri ho gayi hoti...

Ab dekhna hai ke Veer kaise Jatin ko pakadta hai aur mission complete karta hai... Mission ki time limit 6 din hai... Issi baat se spasht hai ke kaafi thrilling hone waali hai ye chase...

Bhumika ko to ek hi din mai do do jhatke lage veer se veer ne suhana ko suna to diya itna jisse usko kuch relief to mila par system ne usey phir se suhana ke samne jane ki situation dedi task ke rup mai. But kya bhumika apne ghar veer ka zikr karegi ke usne veer ko itne badi hastiyo ke sath dekha shayad apni maa se kare lekin bhumika ki feelings abhi tak clear nahi hai veer ko lekar.
Chalo shreya aur juhi mulakat Hogayi veer ki aur juhi ki jo favourability usse to Iam not surprised kyunki bache to Maan ke savhe aur saaf dil ke hote aise jo jab juhi ne veer ko mamu kaha hai to uski itni favourability to banti hai ab veeer ne aisa kya keh diya juhi ke kaan jo wo itni asani se mangayi dekhte hai.
Shreya ka character jaha starting mai laga Tha ki ek akdu type ki ladki hai wahi jaise jaise kahani agey bad rahi hai shreya ek andar jo apni family ko lekar stress hai ya phir unki fikar usse ek alag shreya dekhne ko mil ragi hai.
Nidhi ke darshan karliye veer ne Jane se pehlee and ofcourse un dono ko bich ek anjana sa aisa connection hai ki nidhi ne bhi thik usi samay veer ko dekha.
Mission par Jane se pehle ragini ne veer ki madad kardi khana aur paise dekar lagta hai paise kahi na kahi kaam mai ayenge is mission ke dauran ke kyunki six days ka mission hai aise agar sach mai veer ko us jatin ko pakadne mai time lagega to usko khane aaur dusri zarurat ke liye paise bohut kaam ayenge.
Dekhte hai is mission mai agey kya kya dekhne ko milta hai aur kya pata is mission ke dauran hi veer ko nidhi ke pareshani dur karne ke liye kuch mada mila jaye.
Mission to abhi start huwa dekhte hai is mission ko pora karne se veer ko kitne onam milte?

Wow, what an update....Very good.

Bahut umda update

par 6 din ka mission aur 1-2 din me sayas Sonia Ke mom Ka birthday hai jisme dena tha Ring

hope Next update me mil Jaye Ring
Sonia Ke Bahan Ki Ye Nafrat ki wajah se kahi veer se close na ho jaye

lajwaab update ...
step sis se interaction abhi hoga ya bad me ye bhi dekhna padega atleast wo hate nahi karti to kuch to banta h ...


khubsurat updated bro

Bahut hi mast update bhai....

Good morning bro
Nice update

Super duper update bhai

Nice update

super

Awesome update bhai keep posting

Fantastic update...

Bhut hi shandar update

Nice update

Fantastic update

Mast update

Superb update

Fabulous update bhai

Zabardast update

Greate Update​

Nice update

Bhai update hamesha ki tarah saandaar h
Ab ESA lg rha h ki ragini veer ke prati apanepan ka ehsas bdta hi ja rha h or Juhi to ab nidhi ke baad sabse jyada pyaar veer ko hi krne lgi h

Ab dekhna ye h ki next update me veer ki Jatin ke sath ladai hoti h ya nhi ager hoti h to jaan ka jokhim kitna hota h but us se bi pehle veer Jatin ko dundega kese Or ab to ragini bi veer ki fiker krne lgi h jese pehle nidhi krti thi JB kbi veer kahi bahar jata tha

Nice update bhai waiting for next update

Superbbb Updatee

Par uss Jatin kab woh angoothi churayi aur kaise churayii.

Superb Update bro
Keep Posting

Behad sandar mindblowing superbbb speechless update...........
kitna acha speech diya tha suhana ko ab uske liye hi tapkne wla tha.......
keep posting bhai..........
waiting for next update.........

Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai bhai...
Nice and excellent update...

Ab to bhaiya agale episode kya hota hai writing for next update

A Very Detailed And Intense Update.
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JUHI - Such A Cute Girl And A Little Bit Mature Also.
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Aage Kya Hoga.
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Writer Saahab.
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Eagerly waiting.

Waiting for next

Nice update...

Awasome update dude

nice update broo........

Beshkimti update dost

Super update hai Bhai

Bohat he behtareen lajawab update waiting for next

Awesome update yaar
Story bhot hi zabardast simt ja rhi hai. Or bhot perfection se likh rhe hain ap khas krke apka detialed style. But is wja se dil nhi bharta updates se.
Uff Veer ki to sahi lene me lage hue hain ye missions. But apne veer ko yehi soorma bnaye ge.
Uff nanhi juhi gudiya ki itni favor ability omggg. Mamu ki jaga jald hi I think baba bole gi hmari gudiya.
Feeling sad for Nidhi. Isko to ek pal ka dhuk ni deskta koi. But hmara veer kitna nirdeyi hai. Nidhi ko plz hmesa is story me aise hi important rakhna mere khayal se sabse important. I'm really obsessed.
Mission to yeh complete ho hi jye ga bit dekhna yeh hai suhana ka reaction kia hoga.
Waiting

Ek baar phir bol raha hun eisi bhabi sabko mile....

Amazing update Werewolf bhai, this time the mission is like finding a needle in a haystack, Veer has less endurance, he should spend some points on endurance next time

Bhai next update jaldi dedo abb intezaar nahi ho raha hai...

Lajwab update bhai

Superb update broo..
Awesome ❤❤❤

Behad hi shanadar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

शानदार जबरदस्त भाई लाजवाब भाई
बोले तो एकदम zakass

Werewolf u rocks again.
But mere kiyal main veer ko itna weak nai show hona chahiye tha. Ziada bhi nai lkn isey thora ziada strong jitna show kia gaya hy. Otherwise keep it up

Supper updates bro

Superub

Bhai sandaar update tha Yr apki story incest h or ab tak 300 pages se upar ja chuke h fatal 28 update pr khi bhi abhi tak incest nhi mila itna hi nhi abhi tak hero ka only 1 sex update aya h to ab isme kab tak next sex hoga hero ka ky oh incest m hoga ya other bhai ye nhi Keh rha ki sex jada dalo pr thoda to ho baki ap samjdar ho bas ik request h ki sex na shi pr kisi ke sath romance hi dikha do bhai bat galt lgi ho to bura na mana pr jo ab tak lga whi bta rha hu agle update ka intezaar rhega

Awesome update

jahan uski sauteli bahan bhumika hairaan pareshaan thi ki ye ho kya raha hai suhaana aur veer ke bich... veer itna kuch suna diya phir bhi kyun suhaana chup thi.... wohi dusri taraf veer bhi hairaan pareshaan sath hi Gussa bhi aa raha tha ushe ki ye kaisa task hai... jis suhaana ne ushe har baar beijjati ki usiki madad karo wo ring dhund ke...

Well... Kashmakash mein fansha veer phir laut aaya ushi gali ushi ghar ke paas jahan uski dusri jindagi ki suruaat huyi thi... wo ghar jisme rehne wale teen log uske liye fikarmand the sath hi usse pyar aur care bhi karte the... par ye kaisi majburi ki wo chaah kar bhi abhi ke liye us ghar mein pravesh nahi kar sakta tha... Kyuki waha jaate hi nidhi ushe rok leti... kahi na jaane deti...
waise ghar ke bahar juhi aur shreya mil gayi... kuch baatein bhi huyi... juhi to ushe chhodne ka naam hi nahi le rahi thi... par shayad kuch promises ke chalte ant wo maan gayi...

veer ka khayal to ragini & family bhi to rakhti hai... waise us ghatana ke baad ekdum se ragini ka hriday parivartan ho gaya... ek waqt tha jab ragini ushe ignor kar deti thi... ya apne pati devar sang milke uske sath bura karne ke bare mein sochti thi... wohi ragini aaj uski kisi apne ki tarah khayal rakhti hai...

So finally veer ko us system ke jariye pata chal hi gaya ki wo chor kaha hai, chor ke piche nikla jaipur....btw us chor ke chalte bahut kuch jhel raha hai veer.... upar se wo chor jatin hai bada chalak.. veer to marte marte bacha train mein ushe pakadne ki koshish karte waqt.... ye Kaisa mission de diya veer ko..
upar se abhi bata bhi nahi rahi ke ki exactly abhi wo chor hai kaha...

kya veer us chor ko dhundh ke usse wo anguthi haasil kar paayega?
veer kab wapis nidhi ke ghar jaayega?
ragini jab jaan jaayegi ki veer kya karne gaya tha to uski reaction kya hogi?

let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills..

Gazab update

Waiting for next update....

Bhai ek baat karna Chahunga. Aap bahut acche lagte ho mujhe bahut pasand Aata Hai... But. Kahani bahut jyada Badi mat rakhna. Kahin Jyada time hone per aap Kahani bich Mein Na Chhod Do... Jaise "Raja Chauhan" bhai ne "Manhoos se mahan tak" me aur "enigma" bhai ne kia"Pyaar - 100 Baar " me... Kia

Story bahut Achcha likhate the lekin bich Mein Chhod Diya..

Baki Jaisi aapki ichcha

Are bhai har ek ka time hota h us hisab update aajata h

Aage ka update kya aaj aayega?

बिल्कुल सही कहा भाई आपने

बिल्कुल सही बात बोली भाई आपने

लेखक महोदय

हो सके तो देना जरूर

awasome update bhai
-ab veer chase karega unknown person ko jo hei chor jatin

jaipur gaye he veer to hangama to hoker rahega

ab dekhna ye he ke veer kitne time me chor ko pakarta he

werewolf bro aapki lekhni kabiletarif he jo itna sunder kalpana aapne pastut ki he ye drusya esha tha ke padne ke bad esa laga ke hum hi veer ke shath jaipur safar pe nikal gaye ho
mene hi veer ko girne se bachaya ho

Bhai isi tereh aap harama manorazan karte rahiye aage or aapka name ho



Dhanyawad

Next update kab ayega writer sir

Waiting for next update

Waiting for next uodate

20k wala kab aye ga

Lajwab Awesome Superbbbb Speechless update..........
Bohat khob superbbb.....

Waiting

Today any chance of update?

nice

Any chances today

Nice... Urgent update please

लड़कियों-महिलाओं की कृपा दृष्टि धीरे धीरे वीर को प्राप्त होने लगी है । लेकिन मुझे लगता है यह झुकाव उसके दीन-हीन होने के कारण है । और कुछ इसलिए कि उन्हें अपनी गलतियों का एहसास होने लगा है ।
पर सबसे बड़ा कारण " परी " नाम की अनोखी चीज है जो उसे फिजिकली एंड मेंटली स्ट्रांग करते जा रही है ।

जतीन नाम का चोर सुहाना के पहलू से ही बेशकीमती हीरे की अंगूठी चुरा ले गया और उन्हें पता तक नहीं चला । ये तो श्योर है कि अंगूठी लाइट जाने और उसके वापस आने के दरम्यान चोरी हुई थी और उस दौरान सुहाना के इर्द-गिर्द सिर्फ उसकी सहेलियां मौजूद थी ।
मुझे लगता है उसकी किसी सहेली की जतीन से सांठगांठ है । उसकी सहेली ने चोरी में मदद की होगी ।
क्योंकि अधिकांशतः चोरी और डकैती में एक इंफार्मर जरूर होता है ।

देखते हैं वीर किस तरह से जतीन तक पहुंचता है ! पर एक चीज समझा नहीं उसने ट्रैन का टिकट क्यों नहीं लिया ? रिजर्वेशन भले ही ना हुआ हो लेकिन साधारण टिकट तो ले ही सकता था ।

वीर के सम्पर्क में आने वाली सारी युवतियां अपने दांतों से निचले होंठ ही क्यों दबा लेती है ? यह भी एक इम्पोर्टेंट सवाल है ।‌‌‌‌‌‌‌

सभी अपडेट्स बेहद ही खूबसूरत थे ।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग अपडेट Werewolf bhai.

Aaj raat ke update ka besabri se intizar h bhai

Waiting for update.

bhai veer ring toh bacha ke layega lekin dega kisko....agar dene gaya toh ussi pe shak karenge muze toh lagta hai pehle se hi shak kar rahi hogi suhana usspe..!!

Waiting for next

Bhai waiting for next update... apki story bahut achi hai koshis kariya per fay update dena ki

Waiting when we get the Update bro???

Waiting for next update

Bhai diwali mage updated de do

Waiting

Waiting for update brother

Bhai me tour pe hun to read nahi kar pa raha hun... last 2 update read nahi kiya hai... kuch din baad sabhi updat read kar ke reviews dunga...HAPPY DIWALI

Waiting update bro

Mtlb aaj update nhi aane wala...

Bhai,

Kisi ko sikayat karne se pahle thoda soch liya karo,

Story ka update padne me 10-15 minute lagta hai par usi ko likhne me 3-4 ghante tak lag jate hai,

Aap to aise bol rahe hai ki Aapne Writer ko JOB par rakha hai, ki abhi tak Complete kyu nahi hua,

Thoda shant raho, Writer ki bhi Apni Zindgi hai,

8-9-10 baje tak bhi Subha hi hota hai.

Wait kar lo,
ya Aap bhi itne bade-bade Update time par dete hue, koi Story likhna suru kar do, phir dekhna,
Subha uthte hi Update ke liye aisi tarike se Update mangne walo ko Aap kya kahte.

Writer ne kaha hai ye Update MEGA update hoga, to unko likhne do.

Update 29 has been posted guys!
Also, Diwali ki shubhkamnaye!
Wishing you and your family a happy and safe diwali.

 

[Werewolf]

Index has been updated!

 

[Damha]

Update 29 has been posted guys!
Also, Diwali ki shubhkamnaye!
Wishing you and your family a happy and safe diwali.