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Thanks a lot mate.Werewolf again he had proven that he is the best writer on xforum literally i got goosebumps after reading this update everyday i come and check your index for update but after 1 month i was also a little frustrated why you were not giving update as i don't read new messages but after reading this you proved time you took was worth it
Yup! Some things have been explained. Some more will be explained in the next update. Jaw Long is still hiding some of his Trump cards. We'll see in the next update what will unfold. Thanks and keep supporting as usual.Msst update bhai
Things are making a lot of sense now
Ava ke ane se Veer ko thoda to rest Mille ga
Wha pr Erica bhi h
So ab veer ke chances kaffi high h
Renshu nr bhi dusri side apna kaam kr dia h
Baki jaw long ke kuch patte shyd abhi khulne baki
So
Waiting for next update
And hopefully ye walla thodi jldi aye
Next update probably Sunday ya Monday Tak dene ki poori koshish rahegi meri.Ava's return turned the all the prediction backwards really a funtastic update and bhai please don't take me wrong pr pls ap ye bta skte hai next update kitne time me aa skta hai btw happy holi to you and your family bro
Thanks a lot and keep supporting.Gajab bhai Pura system hi hila dala React kese kre smjh k bahar hogya bht hi gajab update hai ab age kya hoga uske lie intzaar nahi hoga bhai
You got that a little wrong.Mind blown! 2 legendary cards and multiple skills in use! Really well depicted fight scenes!
I write them in such a way that makes you feel like it's actually happening and it's not too out of the world.You were correct. These skills don’t project something that’s fiction - seem realistic enough that we can assume they are possible in this world.
Kudos
How Ava arrived here is actually given in the story itself. You just need to look carefully. Answer is already there...Great chapter! Ava! I never ever ever thought she’ll be back, that too in this situation! How long had she been keeping tabs on Veer! Veer really is lucky in so many ways!
Just excited for what you’ll have cooking up for next chapter
Jo Jo Jaw Long se fight karega... Rewards unhe milega... Jo zyada fight lega, zyada damage dega rewards use utne zyada milenge.Itnay saray SYSTEM HOLDERS wowwwww. Maza a gaya bhai simply marvellous. Jaw long kay marnay pa who will get the rewards veer or Avaa or they will share the rewards same like when crimson died.
Apne kisi loved one ko? Arey Bhai ju samjhe nahi kya abhi tak? Chalo koi baat nahi. Next update me mein toh sab clear kar hi dunga.Kya mast fight chl rhi Hy yh lrki zinda Hy àpni kisi Loved one ko bachane kyly
Janwron Sy Jan chot gi ab yh jaw long ka Koch acha sa seen kro
Àpni chipkali abhi tk tree py chipki hoi Hy
Thanks a lot Bhai.Bccccc….
Kya hi scenes create kiye hai bhai….
Can’t even imagine….
Padhke hi goosebumps aa rahe the
Never seen such a fight scene in any type of movie..
Love you bro..
Shukriya haha. Keep supporting.Holi ka asli gift to aap diye ho, bahut hi jabardast update, Happy Holi sir
Thanks a lot. Not all harem candidates end up being with the protagonist you know. Dil tootenge readers ke.Awesome update. Fight end hone ke baad Veer ka harem will have Erika, gorefano, Ava and Divya. Wow.
Awesome fight sequences. Renshu and Veer fight scenes were awesome.
Agli baar thoda jaldi update dijiyega.
Thanks a lot.This story is too good
And this update is superb and full action pack
Bro is baar Jayda wait mat karvana because maja nahi aata fir kaam sa kaam week me 1 update to aana hi chaiya
Thanks a lot. Keep supporting as usual.Happy Holi friend. Update was wonderful to read. As usual this update has given rise to many questions.
Thanks man.Tremendous action packed update Werewolf bhai...
Just loved it.
Haatho se...Koi itti axi story kese likh skta h
Sabse bada system toh mere hi paas hai.Kahi aapke pass b to system n h ?
Koi story writing ki skill le rakhi ho
ShukriyaBy the way update bahut achha tha ,
Jitna expect kiya tha usse jyada hi mila
DhanyavadAwesome Update Padhkar Dil Khush Ho Gaya
Bahut bahut dhanyavad bhai.Happy Holi
Kya hi bolein bhai..ik trah se akhon ke sahmne film chal rahi thi.....kya likh rahe ho yaar.. writing skills k kya kehne... Udhar Li ne mamla sulja liya hai or veer bhi kadi takkar de raha hai...jbb halat patli hui toh Ava aa gyi... Kyu aayi woh toh pta nhi pr abhi k liye toh good hai... Long ka ant toh veer k hatho chahiye bs.... Pr Erica lgta hai nyi musibat creat karegi... Woh abb lgegi Long k hatho i think....
As always you never disappoint us....dil khush ho gya..bs ik binati hai agar next update thoda jaldi ho sake toh ...baat bann jaye.... Aapki sehatzabi ki dua krte hein... Tandrus rahiye khush rahiye....hume entertain krte rahiye..
She's the key factor... Remember Veer's nightmare dream?Cutie Ava bhi is Veer ke pyaar mein gir gayi Jaane kya hoga us bechaari ka ab...
Sad ending ka apna hi maja hota hai bhai. Jab readers ko dukh ho, dard ho, writer ko gali dene ka man kare, request kare ki ending badal ho aur writer dam marte hue sab enjoy kare.Bas apni story ki tarah yaha bhi sad ending karwana hai bhai ko
Nah. ye to bahut typical old kahani lag rahi hai. I dont think our writer will write something like this but mujhe lagta hai erica will start handling her father’s empire and she will be the bridge between order and legion also vo khud par dhayan dena jada suru karegi and jab vapas veer se kabhi mulakat hogi then she will be much more powerful as compared to now. Baki to waqt hi bataega werewolf bhai to kuch bhi bol kar aage hint likh deta hai aur hume vapas update padhna padta haiSame...!!
Aur shayad marne se pehle wo veer se promise le, ki veer uske jane ke baad uski beti ka khayal rakhega.
Aur phir shayad Veer aur Erica dono hi sath me Mumbai jaye.....and Bingo.... Ek New girl ka, welcome to the house ho jaye.......who knows??
Yes yes lekin kya ava ne special skill khardi thi apni Maa ke liye? Lekin Jaha tak mujhe yaad hai usne woh points kisi aur skill ko upgrade karne mai use kiye tha but mere hisab se uss ke pass knowledge jarur hai ki asi skill ya phir card ho sakte hai jis se kisi ki jaan bachyi ja sakti hai baki toh werewolf bhai ke upar haiShe's the key factor... Remember Veer's nightmare dream?