Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

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[Lover_boy143]

Dekha ...Bhavna thakurain nikli
Birthday ke din sabse bada gift veer ko.... bas veer jaake bhavna ko rok le....


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Kahani suman aur us haweli ki.....
yahan ek baat to clear hai ki shayad hi suman kabhi us haweli mein gayi ho... na hi uski beti aur bahu..... ushe jo bhi pata hai haweli ya haweli walo ki seva karne ke baare mein ,apni nani ya maa baap ke jariye hi malum hua hai.... pendant ke chalte veer ko khush to kiya usne malik samajh ke lekin haweli aur usme rehne walo se related baatein batane se isliye mana kiya Kyunki uski nani ke mana karne ki wajah se....
Shayad suman ki nani sahit sabhi sevak ya shubhchintak logo ko dar ho kisi baat se... Lekin kyun......?

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kahani suhana aur soniya ki......

Kuch kirdaar aise hote hai jo bina matlab ke kahani mein ghuse chale aate hai.... aur khud ki musibat ko kahani ke original characters ke sir pe daal dete hai.....
For example..... ye suhana aur soniya ko hi dekh lo.... ye iske baap shailendra ya unki mom jyoti.... inlogo sar ke upar talwar banke latke the ranga,atish aur wo kutta slogan,
Ab soniya & family ne is kahani mein ghus ke kya kiya.....apni musbit ko veer aur uski family ke upar daal diya..
Kaise haramjade story characters hai ye chaaro.....
Veer ko car se thokte hi doubtful character mein tabdil ho chuki thi soniya.... ab shaq yakin mein badal chuka hai.....
Final baat Yahi hai ki Ye soniya & family veer ke liye hanikaarak hai.... veer se jeetna dur rahe ye log, veer ke liye hi aachha hai...
badi aayi anguthi wali
aur us silencer matlab shailendra ki baatein suno....ek anguthi chori ho jaane aise dikha raha hai jaise uski sari business hi dub gaye ho....are itne paise show off kahe kar raha phir party mein

khair ......
Waise veer aur jyoti ki birthday same date pe hai...Lekin Werewolf is baat pe kahe jor de rahe the
kahi veer aur jyoti mele mein bichhde huye judwa to nahi

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Main to big bang ke jaanne se hi kehti aa rahi hun ki ye pari ek no ki haaraman hai.....

ab dekho kis tarah ye haaraman baatein kar rahi hai.... kam se kam ek system aisi baat nahi kar sakti....
matlab saaf hai ye koi tharki alien hai ya phir haweli walo dwara banayi gayi koi hawasi insects cheej... jo veer ko Purnroop se hawas ka pujari banane ki koshish kar rahi hai...

nidhi, shreya, club wali, suhana, sonia aur ab to veer ke sang suman, sonali aur kavya bhi rehne wali hai
us pari ki to lottery lag gayi hai
ek ek mein ghus ke hawas ke khel aanand legi wo

Aur agar veer ne maana kiya to ushe majboor kar degi hawas ka khel khelne ke liye ye bolke ki. ...



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Sonali gusse mein pagal huye jaa rahi thi.... par veer kya chutiya hai jo itna bhi nahi pata ki madad karne ke baad bhi ye reaction kyun... Lol...are uski hi maa ke sath kuchhi ku karoge aur ab uske hi saamne aise dikhaoge ki veer zyada bhola insaan aur koi nahi to gussa to aayega hi na... sukar hai ki sonali gusse ki ghut pi gayi hai... warna lage ki railway station mein hi uska gala kaat deti sonali

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Sabse badi shocking moment ye ki abhi Readers veer ki mom ke bare mein jikar hi kar rahe the...yahan tak ki suman aur veer bhi discuss hi kar rahe the.... par ye kya bhavna ne to entry hi le li story pe....
btw ye veer apni tharki nigahon ko kabu mein rakhe to hi behtar hai uske liye.... bhavna saree nahi black t-shirt pehni hai....

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lagta hai kahani mein ek alag hi mod aane wala hai bhavna jis tarah se entry li hai....
aur sabse badi baat.... Bahot saare raaz se parda hatne wale hai....
1) brijesh & family ne aisa kyun kiya bhavna ke sath.? kyun usko is tarah buri yaad samajhkar gaali dete hai brijesh aur uske gharwaale..
2) bhavna apne bete ko sasuraal mein chhod ke kyun chali gayi thi? Jab ki wo jaanti thi ye baat bhali bhaanti ki uske sasuraal wale kaise kamine log hai?

3) ab tak kaha thi? Kya kar rahi thi?

4) sabse bada sawal ye ki us haweli ka kya matter hai.... ?
waise ek baat to sach nikli ki Bhavna THAKURAIN hai.....
btw birthday ke din finally veer ko apni mom mil gayi... sabse bada gift uski life mein koi gift hai to yahi gift hai....




shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan..
Aise hi likhte rahiye aur aur apni manoram lekhni se hum readers ka manoranjan karte rahiye...

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

Ye ab tak ka sb se best se b best wala
revo hai apka jawab nhi Naina ji❤
charan kahan hain apke
or wo 1 saal baad tu raja banega
Bht hansi ai is bat pe kasam se
ap b kamal karti hain

 

[arvindaa]

[Alias name - Geeta
Real Name - Bhavana Singh.
Bio - Bhavana! Ek behad hi strong woman hai. Boht peeda me hai jo kayi saalo se wo bardaasht karti aa rahi hai. Loves her daughter too much. Ek aas hai usse. Aur kisi ki talaash. Peshe se Archeologist hai.

i think veer will accidently fall in love for her real sister somewhere in around because the story suggests he have a sister

 

[Nevil singh]

Update - 30 ~ The Best Gift​

Ab tak...

Jese hi usne aankhein khol ke dekha toh paaya ki...

Suman ekdum nangi apni dono doodh ki thailiya uske seene par tikaaye usse hi nihaar rahi thi aur muskuraa rahi thi.

Uske baad wo boli,

"Subah ho gayi... Ma-Maalik!"

'Huh?? Wait!!!! What did she sayyyy???'

Ab aage...

Mumbai...
At Nidhi's Home...

Subah subah Nidhi badi hi pareshaan sii hall me hi sofe par viraajmaan thi. Haatho me phone tha aur aankho me nami.

'He doesn't even replies to me. Phone karti hu toh wo bhi nahi uthaana hai usse. Kya itna bura laga hai usse meri baato ka? Jo ab wo mujhse baat bhi nahi karna chaahta? Kya ho gaya tha mujhe bhi uss din? Uss... Uss din itna kese bhadak gayi mein uspe? Meri hi galti hai. Bura laga hai usse tabhi toh dekho na... Na mere calls utha raha hai, na meri baatein maan raha hai college roz aane ki, na messages seen kar raha hai. Itna... He's... He's stupid... Idiot... Pagal... He...'

Nidhi bechaari, Veer ke hi baare me sochi jaa rahi thi. Akhir uska contact jo nahi hua tha Veer se uss raat se. Bechaini se bharpoor thi wo iss waqt. Upar se Rajat ka alag tension. Kahi Rajat ne Veer ko kisi pareshani me toh nahi daal diya. Dherr saare sawaal umad rahe the uske mann me.

Apni aankho me bann rahe aasuo ko poch wo uthne hi waali thi ki uski jaangh pe uske gown ko kisi ne pakad ke kheencha,

Dekha toh Juhi thi jo abhi abhi apni aankhein malte hue uske paas aayi thi.

"Uth gayi meri bacchi!?" Nidhi ne usse thaamte hue apne seene se laga liya.

Juhi : Mmmm

Nidhi : Chalo! Ready kar du tumhe. School bhi jaana hai.

Juhi : Mummy aap yaha kyu baithi ho? Tiffin me kya rakhogi aaj?

Nidhi : Kuch nahi betu. Tumhaare Veer maamu... Boht tang karte hai tumhari mummy ko...

Juhi : Mmm? Veer maamu!? Veer maamu se toh mein parso hi mili thi Ehehehe~

Juhi ki baat sunte hi jese Nidhi ko ek jhatka laga. Uski beti bhala kab aur kaha mil lii Veer se?

Nidhi : ??? Tum?? Kaha!??? Kaha mili thi beta Veer se? Wo toh...

Juhi : Hmm? Parso jab mein maasi ke saath bazaar gayi thi toh waha se jab aaye... Toh Veer Maamu neeche hi khade thi bike pe.

'Bike!??? That means... It was him!!!!!!!'

Nidhi apni bacchi ko kass ke thaame usse ghur rahi thi. Aur uss se jaldbaazi me sawaal karte jaa rahi thi. Jese maano Veer se judi harr ek information wo Juhi se jaan'na chaahti thi.

Nidhi : T-Toh? F-Fir kya hua? Kya kaha usne? Aapke Veer maamu ne?

Juhi : Wo bole unhe kuch kaam hai aur chale gaye... Mummy! Mujhe toilet aayi hai...

Juhi itna bol Nidhi ke aachal se nikal tezz kadmo ke saath andar washroom me bhaag gayi.

Par Nidhi ka sawaal poora nahi hua tha. Sabse bada sawaal ki Veer iss waqt kaha reh raha hai...?? Ye toh woh puchna hi bhul gayi.

Ye khayaal aate hi jese hi wo palti aur Juhi ko awaaz lagaane waali thi ki tabhi, usne dekha ki Shreya darwaaze ki dehleez pe khade usse hi dekh rahi hai.

'???'

Shreya : Don't worry! Wo apni Bhabhi ke saath reh raha hai. Remember? Wahi Bhabhi... Jinhe wo uss din bachaane gaya tha?

Nidhi (surprised) : Tumhe...?? Noo!!! Wo tumse milne aaya aur tumne mujhe bataaya tak nahi Shreya? Itni badi baat...

Shreya : Chill!!! Uska kehna hai ki wo aapke saath nahi reh sakta. Kyuki wo aapki situation jaanta hai aur wo guilt conscious banda hai. Uss se aise nahi raha jaega. Isliye, wo waha reh raha hai.

Nidhi : Aur kaun tha jisne usse meri sacchaayi ke baare me bataaya!? Haa?

Shreya : I...

Nidhi : Mene tumhe mana kiya tha na Shreya? Mene mana kiya tha na? Fir kyu tumne usse...

Wo Shreya ko acchi khaasi sunaati par tabhi usse kuch shabd yaad aa gaye.

'Shreya ji ko mat daatiyega, unhone mujhe wo sab batana zaroori samjha isliye bataaya tha shayad.'

Aur bas...

Nidhi ke khule honth apne aap hi band ho gaye. Letter me Veer ne spasht likha tha ki Shreya jii ko na daanta jaaye. Ab bhala Nidhi uski baat kese nahi rakhti? Uski maujoodgi na hone par bhi, iss tarah se uska mehatv bann chuka tha uske ghar me.

"Idiot...!"

Wo badbadaati hui uthi aur seedhe kitchen me chali gayi.

Par saamne khadi Shreya sab kuch dekh paa rahi thi. Wo dekh paa rahi thi ki kitna significance tha Veer ka Nidhi ke upar aur saath hi saath Juhi par bhi... Even uske khud ke upar bhi.

Wo khud ek gehre chintan me doob gayi.

'I wonder how it would look if he was my Sister's husband!...'

'????'

'Huh?? Wtf!?? Wait! Mein kya sochne lagi??'

Apna sarr hilaate hue wo andar chali gayi.

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Rajasthan...
At Suman's home...

Veer : Hmm! Toh ab bataogi ki ye kya chakkar hai? Kyu mujhe aap...

Suman : Tum kehke bulaaiye mujhe maalik... Tum... Tum keh ke... Kripya kar!

'She..'

Veer (sighs) : Hmm! Toh ab bataogi ko ye sab kya chakkar hai? Kyu tum... Kyu tum mujhe maalik keh ke bula rahi ho?

Veer kal ki hui ghatna ke baad mann me dherr saare sawaal liye hue tha. Ab chuki wo dono ka hi clear mind tha, Veer ne forun hi sawaal puchna sahi samjha.

Wo iss waqt ussi bistar par baitha hua tha jispe kal raat dono ne hi rangreliyaa manaayi thi. Uske perro ke paas uski jaangh par haath rakhe Suman baithi hui thi jo keval muskuraa ke Veer ko dekhe jaa rahi thi.

Suman (smiles) : Ye toh hona hi tha ek na ek din maalik!

Veer (frowns) : Kya matlab!?

Suman : Maalik! Ye toh hona hi tha... Jis pal mene aapka seena dekha tha.

'Mera seena!?'

Sochte hue Veer ne jese hi apne seene par nazar maari toh usse nazar aaya...

Uska pendant. Wahi pendant jo uski Maa ne diya tha. Wo shirt ke baahar hi tha.

'Huh!?? So... That's why she kept looking at me like that!?'

Veer ne apne haatho me uss pendant ko thaama jo ek sone ki chain ka tha aur usme ek bada hi anokha sa neela patthar chipka hua tha.

Veer : Tumhara matlab hai ye?? Mera pendant?

Suman (nods) : Jii Haa maalik! Yahi! Aur isliye aaj se ye Suman aapki Daasi hai.

'Huh??? Wtf?? Did I heard that right!?'

[Hahaha~ You don't know. You just found the diamond. Wo Heere ki anguthi kuch bhi nahi, asli heera toh ab aapko mila hai master. Haha~ Who needs a diamond ring? When you can have a slave? Hahaha~]

'Oh come on Pari! This is serious.'

[Hehe~]

Veer (pendant pakadte hue) : Isme aisa kya hai?

Suman (surprised) : Maalik? Kya aapko waqai kuch nahi pata iske baare me?

Veer : Hmm? Nahi! Kyu?

Suman Veer ko aise dekh rahi thi jese maano koi bhoot dekh liya ho.

Suman : Maalik!??? Ya toh aap mazaak kar rahe hai ya anjaan bann rahe hai.

Veer : Dekho Suman...

Suman : *smiles*

Veer : ???

Suman : Mujhe accha laga aapne akhir kaar mujhe mere naam se bulaaya. Aur mera ye anurodh hai ki... Aage bhi... Aage bhi maalik... Aise hi mujhe bulaaye.

Veer : Ahem! Haa! Toh dekho Suman... Mein waqai kuch bhi nahi jaanta hu. Tum kya keh rahi ho meri samajh me kuch bhi nahi aa raha hai.

Suman : Par aisa kese ho sakta hai!? Huh!?? Zara rukiye maalik...

Wo hairaan hote hue kuch sochti hai aur fir Veer ko punah dekhti hai,

Suman : Ye aapko kisne diya? Aapke paas ye kese aaya?

Veer : Hmm? Ye!? Ye meri Maa ne mujhe janm ke waqt pehnaaya tha.

Suman (shocked) : Aapki Maa ne!?

Veer (frowns) : Hmm! Tum... Kya tum kuch jaanti ho?

Suman : Aapki... Aapki Maa ka naam kya hai!?

Veer : Bhavana!

Suman ye sunte hi forun khadi ho gayi hai aur muh faade Veer ko dekhne lagi. Stabdh nigaaho se wo usse ghur rahi thi.

Suman : Bh-Bhavana!?

'There's something wrong!'

[Ask her every possible detail master! Something is fishy!!!]

'Yeaaahhh!!'

Veer (frowns) : Tum! Kuch zaroor jaanti ho. Hai na!?

Veer ne khade hote hue agle hi pal kivaad ki chatakni andar se hi band kar lock laga diya.

Veer : Jawaab do!!

Suman haa me sarr hilaayi aur tezz kadmo ke saath almaari ki taraf gayi, usse khol wo kuch hi palo ke andar ek chaavi dhund ke laayi.

Uske baad wo neeche jhuki aur ussi bistar ke neeche se usne ek peti sarka ke nikaali.

Suman ki harr ek harqat Veer dekh raha tha aur uska dil zorr se dhadak raha tha. Zaroor... Zaroor kuch na kuch usse pata chalne waala tha jiske chalte usse shayad jhatke bhi lag sakte the.

Andar peti me se usne ek tasveer nikaali jo photo frame me saji hui thi aur Veer ki taraf badhaayi.

'??'

Sawaalia nazre liye jese hi usne wo photo dekhi...

Usse dikhaayi diya ki ek behad hi shandaar sa mahal ya haweli keh lo jo kaafi badi thi aur phoolo se saji hui thi. Koi bhi insaan nahi tha photo me. Keval ek mahal jitni badi haweli hi thi.

Veer (frowns) : Iska matlab kya hai!?

Suman : Maalik! Mein aapko zyaada kuch nahi bata sakti. Keval itna hi bata sakti hu ki...
Mein aur mera parivaar, mere purvaj asal me...
Hamesha se iss haveli me rehne waale logo ki seva karte aaye hai. Itne pehle se ki sahi anumaan lagaana naamumkin hai.

Veer : Kaun hai ye log? Aur ye haveli?

Suman : Mein nahi bata sakti. Mujhe maaf kijiyega. Mein vachan baddh hu. Bas itna jaan lijiye ki... Mein aur hamaare poorvaj iss haveli ke logo ke sevak the aur hai aur aane waale samay me bhi rahenge.

Veer : Par tumne abhi abhi kaha ki tum meri daasi...!? Wait!! Huh??

Jese usse realize hua...

Suman (smiles) : ....

Veer : Iska matlab toh yahi hua ki... Mein iss haweli se hu... Jo ki bilkul bhi sach nahi hai.

Suman : Ye jo aapke gale me tanga hua hai na??

Veer : Hmm!

Suman : Ye mene iss haveli me rehne waale logo ke paas dekha tha. Aur... Ye unka beshkeemti gehna tha.

Veer (surprised) : Yadi iss hisaab se chale toh... Doesn't that means ki meri Maa... Wo iss haveli ke logo me se ek thi?

Suman : ....

Veer : Ye log kaha hai abhi? Ye haveli kidhar hai?

Suman : Mein nahi bata sakti maalik! Mein vachan baddh hu.

Veer : Dammmn it!!! Toh... Toh ye toh bata sakti ho na ki tumhe ye vachan kisne diya?

Suman (nods) : Meri Nani ne...

Veer : Nani? Okay!! G-Good! Toh chalo... Kaha hai wo? M-Mujhe unse milna hai.

Suman : Maaf kijiyega par... Wo ab iss duniya me nahi hai maalik!

'Fuuuuccccckkkkkkk!!!!'

'There's something wrong!! Yadi Suman ka kehna hai ki wo aur uska parivaar Inn haveli ke logo ki sewa karta tha toh yaha toh wo meri sewa kar rahi hai. Keval mere pendant dekhne ke baad. Kyuki uske hisaab se ye pendant unn haweli ke logo ka beshkeemti gehna tha. Toh fir Mom ke paas kese aaya ye pendant? Did she stole it? No I don't think so. Iska matlab toh bas yahi darsha raha hai ki Mom inn haveli waale logo ke beech ki ek sadasya thi. Ya fir unhone Mom ko ye gehna diya ho? Par wo itna beshkeemti gehna kyu denge bhala? Aaaarrrghhhhhh!!!'

Veer ne kheejte hue apne baal noche. Itne saare sawaal umad rahe the ki uski kuch soojh nahi raha tha kya kare.

[Don't worry! Ye kaafi uljhi hui gutthi hai. Atleast aapko apni Mom ke baare me kuch information mili.]

'Yeaahhh! No wait....'

Kuch sochte hue wo forun hi palta aur Suman se pucha,

"Toh kya tum meri Maa ko jaanti ho? Bhavana?"

Suman Veer ko dekhi aur fir naa me sarr hila dii.

Suman : Nahi maalik!! Mein unhe nahi jaanti.

Veer (frowns) : Par tumhaare haav bhaav toh kuch aur hi the jab tumne mere muh se unka naam suna tha.

Suman : Jesa ki mene kaha maalik. Mein unhe nahi jaanti. Rahi baat mere haav bhaav ki... Toh mein iss se zyaada kuch bhi kehne ke liye vachan badhh hu maalik. Mujhe maaf kar dijiye maalik!

Suman ko Veer ne gaur se dekha aur ant me ek aah bhari. Kyuki Suman ko dekh ke hi pata lagaaya jaa sakta tha ki wo bilkul bhi jhooth nahi bol rahi thi.

Abhi wo baitha hi hua tha ki tabhi uska phone bajne laga,

Screen pe dekha toh...

'Ragini Bhabhi!?'

Veer : Hello?

Ragini : Happy Birthday Veeeeeeeerrrr!!

Ragini ki khil khilaati hui awaaz uske kaano me padi. Aur ye sunte hi Veer ke hontho pe ek muskaan fel gayi.

'I almost forgot... Ki aaj toh mera b'day hai. Bhabhi ko yaad tha!? I wonder... Aur kisse yaad hoga?'

[Fuck! It's your birthday master!? Happy Birthday my dear master.]

'Thanks Pari!'

[Ab gift ke taur pe fataak se mujhe Level 4 pe pohuchao.]

'Gift jiska b'day hota hai wo nahi deta idiot. Wish karne waale dete hai usse.'

[Huh? Ohh yeah! Fuck! I forgot! Ahahaha~]

Veer (sighs) : Thank you Bhabhi!

Ragini : Welcome! Toh!? Wo... Wo... Tum aa rahe ho na? Kab tak aaoge?

Veer : Kal! Aaj reservation karwa lunga. Aur aaj raat me baith jaunga. So kal tak...

Ragini ki tabhi udhar se thodi udaasi bhari awaaz aayi,

"Toh! Tum b'day par yaha nahi rahoge matlab."

Veer : Chaahta hu par possible nahi hai. Kal hi aa paunga.

Ragini : Well! Right! Kal then... I have a surprise for you! Kal aao... And... Acche se safar karna okay?

Veer (smiles) : Jiii!

Ragini : Okay! Toh... Mein rakhu..!?

Veer (smiles) : Jii!

Aur call end ho gaya.

Bechaari Ragini call toh badi hi utsaah se lagaayi thi. Par usse wish karne ke baad samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ki apne dewar se bhala ab aur kya baatein kare. Aur iske chalte usse khud pe sharam aa rahi thi. Wo jald se jald phone rakhi aur khud ko baatein sunaate hue andar chali gayi.

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Veer ka birthday toh tha hi par saath hi saath aaj kisi aur ka bhi b'day tha. Wo shaks aur koi nahi balki Suhana aur Sonia ki Maa thi ~ Jyoti!

Ek badi sii hotel me ek poora hall booked tha. Poore hall ko sajaaya gaya tha. Andar dherr saari lights jal rahi thi aur mand mand awaaz me instrumental music chal raha tha.

Waiters me saari ki saari khubsoorat ladkiya thi jo khubsoorat sii attire pehne guests ko kahi cold drinks toh kahi snacks serve kar rahi thi.

Toh kuch entrance pe unke swaagat ke liye khadi hui thi.

Guests bhi ek se badh ke ek the. Sabhi raees aur bade gharaano se belong kar rahe the.

Mahaul kul milaake boht khushnuma tha par...

Par iss waqt ussi hotel ke ek kamre me do behad hi khubsoorat auratein atyant hi chintan me doobi hui thi.

Ye aur koi nahi balki Suhana aur Sonia hi thi.

Suhana idhar se udhar tahelte hue khud ko shaant karne ki koshish kar rahi thi.

"Kuch nahi hoga Suhana! Phew! Calm down! Phew!"

Sonia : Wo aate hi honge.

Suhana : Tum mujhe aur darra rahi ho Sonu!

Par Suhana ki baat pe Sonia kuch na boli bas muh ferr ke kahi aur dekhne lagi.

Aur uska ye rukhapann Suhana ko andar hi andar tadpa raha tha. Wo Sonia ke sameep aayi aur uske chehre ko apne haatho se ghumaate hue apni orr kii.

Suhana : Ab bhi naraaz ho mujhse?

Sonia : ....

Suhana : Sonuuu! Please! Don't! Tere bina adhuri hu mein ye baat tu bhi jaanti hai. Aur mein tujhse maafi maang chuki hu na. Mene maana hai na ki uss Veer ne ring nahi churaayi hogi kyuki tum uske saath thi. Toh ab kya dikkat hai?

Sonia : ....

Suhana : Sonu!!! Maaf kar de!!! Dekh! Mein kaan pakadti hu.

Wo kaan pakad paati ki uske pehle hi darwaaza khula aur ek aadmi andar aaya. Upar se leke neeche tak wo mehnge kapdo se saja hua tha.

Sonia : Dad!?

Sonia aur Suhana ke pita, yaani ki desh ki jaani maani automobiles company ke maalik ~ Shailendra.

Shailendra : Bolo! Kya baat hai? Tumlogo ko beta waha hall me rehna tha. Sabhi guests kya sochenge?

Suhana apne pita ko dekh ekdum kaanp rahi thi. Akhir kese wo bataegi ki jo ring wo dene waale hai. Wo toh chori ho chuki hai.

Sonia : Dii ko aapse kuch kehna hai.

Shailendra : Hmm? Kya baat hai beta? Jaldi kaho... Baahar bhi jaana hai. Tumhari Mom bhi ready ho hi gayi hai.

Suhana Sonia ko hairani bhare bhaav se ghur rahi thi. Andar aane se pehle hi Sonia ne uss se kaha tha ki Sonia uski madad karegi. Par yaha toh wo jese uski taraf dekh hi nahi rahi thi.

'Oh no!!! Sonu!!! She's really mad...'

Yaha Sonia apne alag hi vichaaro me leen thi.

'Mene kitna call kiya Veer ko. Ki aaj party hai. I wanted to say sorry to him again. Par... Abhi tak uska koi reply na aaya. He probably hates me now. Akhir... Dii ne uski itni beizzati kii hai ki wo mujhe hi inn sab ka kaaran samajh baitha hoga. Par Veer... Kese batau tumhe... Sacchaayi!?'

Shailendra : Bolo beta!

Suhana : Wo... Wo...

Shailendra : Haa?

Suhana : Asal me...

Shailendra : Arre bolo bhi...

Suhana : Wo dedh crore ki ring chori ho chuki hai.

Wo ek saas me bol gayi.

Aur agle hi pal...

Poore kamre me sannaata sa chhaa gaya.

Shailendra : ???

Sonia : ....

Suhana : ....

Shailendra : K-Kya? Kya kaha tumne?

Suhana : Wo... Wo... Dedh crore waali ring... Jo aap Mom ko dene waale the wo... Wo chori ho gayi hai.

Aur agle hi pal Shailendra ki aankhein felti chali gayi.

Uske baad jab Suhana ne poori sachhai bataayi toh Shailendra ka gussa saatve aasmaan par pohuch chuka tha.

Wo aag baboola hoke Suhana aur Sonia dono ko dekh raha tha.

Aisa lag raha tha ki kisi bhi waqt wo dono ko tamaacha jadd dega.

Par usne aisa kiya na...

"Kal tak yadi Ring nahi mili... Toh Suhana... Hmph!"

Daant meeste hue wo agle pal hi mobile nikaal kaan se lagaaya aur baahar nikal ke...

*Slaaammmm*

Zorr se usne darwaaza band kar diya.

Aur Suhana ye dekhte hi bilakhte hue rone lagi. Wo jaanti thi ki jab uske Dad kuch nahi bolte the toh wo kitna naraaz aur gusse me rehte the. Sonia se chipak ke wo rone lagti hai.

Ab usse Veer ke kahe shabd yaad aa rahe the.

"Didn't you said that few minutes ago!? Money can buy happiness. Paisa sab kuch hai. Paisa hi khushiya laata hai. Paise se hi aap khush rehte ho? Paise se kabhi koi udaas reh hi nahi sakta. Didn't you said that!? Then why do you look sad now? Mujhe toh abhi keval yahi dikhaayi de raha hai ki... Paise se... You are not even happy... Look! How distressed you are. Look at yourself. Kaha gaye ab wo shabd??? Hmm?? I can't hear them..."

Iss waqt bhi...

Wo ro rahi thi. Aur kahi se bhi happy nahi thi. Uske shabd jese ekdum sahi saabit ho rahe the. Pata nahi kyu par iss baar Suhana ko Veer ka dhyaan aate hi... Iss baar usse gussa nahi aaya. Keval rulaayi hi chooth rahi thi.

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Idhar Veer reservation karwa ke Jaipur ke station pohuch chuka tha. Ragini ke diye gaye paise waqai boht kaam aaye the uske liye.

Na keval Suman ne idhar apne ghar me poora taala laga diya balki wo apne ghar ki chaavi bhi pados me de aayi ye kehke ki yadi uska pati waapas se aaye toh usse dhundne ki koshish na kare.

Keval Suman hi nahi, Aabha aur Sonali bhi uske sang thi. Suman ka kehna tha ki ab wo Veer ki daasi hai toh harr pal uske aas paas hi rahegi aur uski sewa karegi.

Shaam ko bhi Suman ke aakarshan ke chalte Veer se raha na gaya aur usne ek baar aur Suman ko pel diya.

Pehli baar me jo sex usne Suman ke saath kiya tha uske chalte usse 35 points mile the aur usse bachaane ke 30 points. Toh kul milaake uske paas 65 points maujood the jinhe wo spend nahi kiya tha.

Wo ghar lautne ke baad hi inn points ka sahi istemaal kese karna hai ye decide karne waala tha.

Ab chuki aa toh gaya tha wo station par usne dekha ki Sonali bade hi gusse se usse dekh rahi thi. Aur baat bhi nahi kar rahi thi. Bas dekhti aur gusse se aag baboola ho jaati. Par bolti kuch nahi. Veer ne bhi ignore karna hi behtar samjha filhaal ke liye.

Train aa chuki thi reservation unka AC 1 coach me tha. Veer samaan rakh ke abhi baahar hi aake kuch chips aur biscuits khareedne me laga hua tha jab usse sunaayi diya,

"Bhaiya!! Oo bhaiya! Hello jii!?"

Usne dekha toh paaya ki saamne ek dusri train me ek mahila khidki se apna ek haath nikaale kisi ko awaaz laga rahi thi.

Veer kuch soch aage badha toh agle hi pal uss mahila ki nazar Veer par gayi.

Dono ki nazre jab aapas me takraayi toh uss mahila ne forun hi firse pukaara,

"Betaa! Suno..."

Usne haath se ishaara karte hue Veer ko bulaaya.

Veer jab uske sameep aaya toh thoda hairaan reh gaya. Paas se gaur se jab usne dekha toh paaya ki...

Wo mahila waqai khubsoorat thi. Aur saree nahi balki ek kaali t shirt pehni hui thi. Jisme uski gori twacha alag hi khil ke dikhaayi de rahi thi.

Veer : Jiii!?

Aurat : Beta! Kya tum mere liye waha shop se ek paani ki bottle laa doge please? Mein khud le aati par... Meri back me thoda pain hai.

Veer (smiles) : Sure!

Aurat : Ohh! Th-Thank you beta!

Veer (smiles) : Isme thanks kesa? Aap rukiye! Mein aata hu.

Veer uske diye gaye paiso se ek bottle liya aur apni taraf se usne ek biscuit ka packet bhi liya aur wo leke uss aurat ke paas aaya.

Aurat (surprised) : Ye!?

Veer (smiles) : Ye meri taraf se... Rakh lijiye! Back me pain hai aapki. Aage station me aapko utarna na pade.

Aurat kuch derr ke liye usse dekhi aur fir ek badi hi pyaari sii muskaan usne dii.

Na jaane kyu par wo muskaan dekh Veer ekdum shaant pad gaya.

Aurat : Thank you beta! Wese iski koi zaroorat nahi thi par fir bhi thank you! Aur ruko...

Tabhi wo apne bagal me rakhe bag se kuch tatolti hai aur ek candy ka packet usse thama deti hai.

Aurat : Ye meri taraf se... Haha~

Veer (smiles) : Iski koi zaroorat nahi...

Aurat : Na na! Haha~ Ab ye rakhna padega. Thank you once again.

Veer (smiles) : Jii! Chalta hu! Safe journey!

Aurat (smiles) : Okay! You too!

Aur tabhi uss aurat ki train aur saath hi saath Veer ki bhi train chalne lagti hai.

Ek baar fir wo Veer ko khidki se dekhti hai toh paati hai ki Veer bhi usse hi dekh raha tha. Dono bas muskuraa dete hai.

Veer lapak ke train me chadhta hai par achanak usse pata nahi kya sujhta hai ki...

Wo palat ke ek baar fir uss aurat ko dekhta hai aur...

'Check!'

[Alias name - Geeta
Real Name - Bhavana Singh.
Bio - Bhavana! Ek behad hi strong woman hai. Boht peeda me hai jo kayi saalo se wo bardaasht karti aa rahi hai. Loves her daughter too much. Ek aas hai usse. Aur kisi ki talaash. Peshe se Archeologist hai.

Favourability - 70
Relationship - Mother.]

Aur ye padhte hi Veer ko uski life ka sabse bada jhatka laga tha.

Aaj usse apne janmdin par koi gift mila ho na mila ho. Ye jese...

Uske liye best gift tha.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!
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Bahad khubsurat update bhai

 

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writer is amazing. he has amazing collection of words, it seems i am watching a movie and everything is happening on screen infront of me.
for writer,
zindagi sy aik gila ha mujh ko
tu dair sy mila ha mujh ko

 

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Update -1 ~ Unforgetful Incident.​

*Thud*

Ek zorrdaar dhakka Veer ki peeth par pada aur wo saamne ki orr girte girte bacha.

"Hahahahaha!!!"

Aur tabhi peeche se kayi logo ki hassne ki awaazein sunayi dii.

Veer ke haath kaanp rahe the. Dhakke ke kaaran uska mobile phone girte girte bacha tha, usne forun hi usse apne kaapte hue haatho me kass ke thaama aur phone ki screen on karke wo contact list me se kisi ka naam dhund ke usne apna phone kaano ki orr badhaaya hi tha ki tabhi...

*Thud*

Ek aur dhakka zorr se uski peeth par pada, par iss baar wo khud ko sambhaal na saka aur saamne ki orr dhadaam se gir pada. Uska phone haatho se chhutak kar kayi tappa khaate hue zameen par jaa gira. Pata nahi sahi salaamat bacha bhi tha uska phone ya nahi.

Veer ne karaahte hue apni nazre upar kari aur dekha. Kareeb 5 se 6 ladke uske saamne khade hue the. Aur unka leader jiska naam Ajay tha wo apni Duke bike par adab ke saath baithe hue uski iss haalat par mazze le raha tha.

Ajay : Hahaha! Kyu be chuze! Bol!? Karega aisi harqat dubaara?

Apne kaapte hue perro ko Veer ne badi hi mushqil se control kiya aur utha.

Akhir uski galti kya thi? Aaj uske apne college me 2nd year ka pehla din tha aur pehle din hi uske saath ye sab ho raha tha?

Shaam ke 7 baj chuke the aur Veer jisse 2 ghante pehle hi apne ghar pohuch jaana chaahiye tha wo yaha 6 se 7 ladko dwaara bully kiya jaa raha tha.

Veer shuru se hi ek kamzor yuvak tha. Usse dekh ke aisa lagta tha maano uski rachna bhagwaan ne badi hi kathorta se kari ho.

Na wo padhayi me hoshiyaar tha, na dikhne me koi boht handsome tha, shareer se bhi kamzor tha, bol chaal me bhi ekdum peeche aur usme koi bhi talent nahi tha. Kul milaake ek bhondu sa insaan.

Apne naam ka ulta hi tha Veer. Veerta naam ki toh koi cheez hi nahi thi usme. Par bechaare usme uski kya galti thi? Wo toh jesa tha, wesa tha. Kya uski iss baat ka fayda uthaana zaroori tha?

Aaj wo yaha college ke peeche ki sunsaan sadko me maujood tha. Wo aana nahi chaahta tha par usse yaha laaya gaya tha.



Saamne khade uske college ke seniors uspe atyachaar karne ke liye usse yaha sunsaan jagah par lae hue the.

Par isme Veer ki galti kya thi?

Uski galti ye thi ki aaj college ke departure ke waqt wo ek khubsoorat senior ladki ko dekh raha tha jo ki laazmi tha. Wo thi hi itni khubsoorat ki koi bhi usse dekh ke apni nazre na hata paata. Wo patli kamar, teekhe nain, bhaari stan, perfect figure aur wo qaatilaana chehra. Kisi ko bhi madhosh kar de.

Par badqismati se Veer jab uss sundar ladki ko taad raha tha, Ajay ne usse aisa karte dekh pakad liya tha.

Aur bas, yahi Veer ki galti thi.

Wo ladki Ajay ki kaafi acchi dost thi jiske peeche Ajay haath dhoke kaafi samay se pada hua tha. Uss ladki ka naam tha Pragya, jo ki Ajay ki classmate thi.

Veer ki nazar ne hi Ajay ko itna gussa dila diya tha ki uska mann kar raha tha ki wo ussi waqt Veer ki aankhein noch le. Akhir himmat kese hui kisi ladke ki uski hone waali gf ko taktaki laga ke dekhne ki.

College me kisi ne bhi aaj tak uske khilaaf jaane ki himmat nahi kii thi. Toh fir akhir iss Veer ki kese himmat ho gayi?

Yahi baat Ajay ko bilkul na khali.

Veer ko yaha laake aaj wo usse accha sabak sikhaane waala tha. Taaki, bhavishya me koi bhi uski Pragya ko ghurne se pehle 100 baar soche.

Ajay (gurraate hue) : Mene kuch pucha tere se chuze. Bol? Karega aisi harqat firse?

Veer bhale hi kamzor tha par wo apne khud ke prati imaandaar zaroor tha. Usse pata tha usne koi galti nahi kii hai. Akhir ek sundar ladki ko yadi aapne kuch seconds dekh liya toh kya wo aapki galti hai? Bilkul bhi nahi! Veer toh keval Pragya ki sundarta ki prashansha kar raha tha mann hi mann.
Isme pitaayi ki baat kaha se aa gayi?

Aur yahi dhyaan me rakhte hue usne Ajay ke sawaal ka koi uttar nahi diya. Wo bas chup chaap apna nichla honth daanto se dabaaye hue sar jhukae khada raha. Uski mutthi zorr se kassi hui thi.

Ajay : Ye aise nahi maanega. Dose do saale ko.

Uski baat sunn uske saare saathi Veer ki taraf badhne lage. Jese jese Veer peeche jaata, wese wese wo aur kareeb aate.

Aur kuch pal ke andar hi Veer ab 6 logo se ghira hua tha. Iske pehle ki wo kuch keh paata, unn 6 ke 6 laundo ne Veer pe mukke aur laate barsaana shuru kar dii.

"Aaarghhhhhhh"

Veer ki karaahne ki awaaz sunsaan road me gunj rahi thi par na toh koi sunn'ne wala tha aur na hi koi madad karne waala. Wo ladke rukne ka naam nahi le rahe the.

Koi uske pait me maarta toh koi uske gaal pe, koi peeth pe vaar karta toh koi uski pasli pe. Aur harr ek hamle par Veer ke muh se ek dard bhari cheenkh nikal jaati jo uss sunsaan sadak ki shaanti ko jhanjhor kar rakh deti. Dekhte hi dekhte kuch hi palo me wo ab neeche gir chuka tha.

Usne apne haatho se apna sar bachaaya aur perr sikode par ladko ko toh jese farq hi nahi padna tha.
Apni laate uthaate hue unn sabhi ne uspe itne vaar kiye ki uske maathe aur hontho se khoon behne laga.

Jab Ajay ne qareeb aake wo laal khoon dekha toh usse andar hi andar ek sukoon sa mila. Jese uska gussa kuch hadd tak shaant ho gaya tha. Usne forun hi apne pantaro ko rok diya.

Apni laat uthaate hue usne apna joota Veer ke sar par rakh diya.

Ajay : Samajh aaya chuze? Yadi tune itna keh diya hota ki ahinda se tu aisi harqat nahi karega toh tere saath ye sab nahi hota.

Veer ne koi jawaab nahi diya. Wo bas apni jese tese adhkhuli aankho se Ajay ko ghur raha tha.

Ajay : Par tujhe bann'na tha hero. Hai na? Toh lo fir! Ab banke dikha hero. Kaan khol ke sunn le chuze, ahinda se tu yadi mujhe galti se bhi Pragya ke aas paas bhi dikha na toh teri gaand tod ke rakh dunga. Samjha behanchod?

Kehte hue Ajay ne apne perr ka bhaar badhaate hue Veer ka chehra masal diya jiske chalte uski ek aur cheenkh nikal gayi.

Ajay : Aulelelele bacche ko dard ho raha hai? Ruko abhi dard dur kar deta hu. Zara wo lollipop toh laana. Dekho idhar ek baccha ro raha hai.

Aur uski baat sunn sabhi ladke zorr zorr se thahaake lagaane lage.

Unn ladko me se ek ne apna bag khola aur ek lollipop nikaalte hue Ajay ko thama dii.

Ajay ne forun hi lollipop ka wrapper khola aur Veer ki taraf neeche jhuk gaya.

Ajay : Tujhe pata hai mein ye lollipop leke kyu ghumta hu hamesha? Taaki tujh jese bacche jab udham karne lagte hai na toh unki aqal thikaane laga saku.

Itna bol wo lollipop zorr se Veer ke muh me ghusa dii jiske chalte ek aur karaah Veer ke muh se nikli.

Ajay : Par fir bacche rone lag jaate hai toh akhir bade hone ke naate mera farz bhi toh banta hai na? Ki mein unhe chup karwau? Isliye uske liye ye lollipop. Ab acche bacche ki tarah ye lollipop chuso aur apne ghar ki orr nikal lena. Samjha?

Usne Veer ka gaal thap thapaaya aur jaane ke liye uth khada hua par jaane se pehle wo ek baar aur peeche muda aur Veer ko dekha.

Ajay : Police ya ghar me kuch bhi bataane ki koshish karna bhi mat chuze. Baad me tu hi pachtaega nahi toh. Infact, kisi ke saamne bhi muh mat kholna.

Ladka 1 : Ajay bhai halki bunda baandi shuru ho gayi hai, hume nikalna chahiye.

Uske ek dost ne jataaya toh Ajay ne bhi haa me gardan hilaayi.

Aur Ajay samet sabhi ladke apni apni bike par sawaar hue par tabhi Ajay ko kuch sujha aur wo apni bike neeche pade Veer ke ird gird ghumaane laga aur uske dost bhi yahi karne lage.

*Crack*

Veer ne zorr se uss lollipop ka apne daanto se katra. Uski aankhein gusse se laal thi par wo kuch bhi nahi kar sakta tha. Ladke uske ird gird bike ko ghuma rahe the aur agle hi pal Ajay ne uski orr thuka jiske chalte wo thook seedha jaate hue Veer ki shirt par gira.

"Hahahahaha"

*Vroom* *Vroom*

Hasste hue Ajay apni toli ke saath, bike par sawaar waha se nikal gaya. Aur uss sunsaan jagah pe ab keval Veer hi akela pada hua tha.

Bijli kadki aur tezz baarish shuru ho gayi. Yahi Veer ki kismat thi. Ab toh uske kapde bhi bheeg jaane the. Par baarish se ek baat acchi hui. Wo ye ki Veer ki shirt me gira Ajay ka thook dhul gaya.

*Thuu*

Lollipop ko zorr se thukte hue Veer khada hua toh wo ladkhada gaya aur girte girte bacha. Harr jagah itna dard tha ki pucho mat. Baarish tezz ho chuki thi aur wo langdaate hue apni scooty ke paas jese tese pohucha aur seat par tik ke baith gaya.

Baarish ke pani se uske maathe se nikal raha khoon bhi saaf hone laga tha. Usne apna phone uthaate hue apne jeb me daal liya. Pata nahi zinda bhi tha uska phone ya nahi, kyuki screen ki light abhi tak jal rahi thi.

Par Veer ko toh jese kuch farq hi nahi padna tha. Wo haafte hue bas baitha sadak ko ghur raha tha jaha abhi wo kuch derr pehle buri tarah laato aur ghuso ka shikaar hua tha.

Ab toh usme apni muthhi kassne tak ke liye dum nahi bacha tha. Kya kismat dii thi bhagwaan ne usse.

Aaj pehla din aur uske saath ye vyavhaar hua. Upar se tab, jab uski koi galti bhi nahi thi. Kya ek khubsoorat ladki ko dekhna gunaah tha? Jab uss ladki ne usse kuch nahi kaha toh bhala ye Ajay kon hota tha uske saath aisa suluk karne waala?

Na chaahte hue bhi Veer ki rulaayi chhuuth padi. Aur wo bina koi awaaz kiye zorr zorr se rone laga. Shareer poora bheeg chuka tha uska. Aur baarish ki boonde jese hi uske ghaavo par padti usse aur zyada dard deti.

Rote rote Veer ne apni scooty uthayi aur ghar ki taraf chal diya. Usse hi pata tha ki wo kitni mushqil se iss waqt scooty ko chala raha tha. Uske jeb me uska phone abhi bhi contact list show kar raha tha.

Shayad girne ke kaaran phone ki screen ek jagah jaa ke atak chuki thi. Uss contact list me uska koi bhi dost nahi tha. School me bhi uske dost nahi the aur aaj bhi college me wo akela hi baitha hua tha. Contact list me keval 3 hi naam the. Ek uske pita Brijesh ka, ek uski chachi Sumitra ka aur ek uski choti behan Kavya ka.

Jinhe call karne ki Veer uss waqt acting kar raha tha. Jii haa! Acting kar raha tha. Kyuki Veer jaanta tha, Brijesh ko pata chalega toh wo ulta aur maarega hi usse. Sumitra aur Kavya isme kuch nahi kar sakti thi. Rahi baat baaki family members ki toh unke numbers the hi nahi uske phone me.

Uske gharwaale uski madad bilkul na karte.

Akhir kyu?

Kyuki yahi toh uska parivaar tha. Keval naam ka parivaar tha baaki uski ghar me kya hi izzat thi wo bhali bhaati jaanta tha.

Ab tak usse ghar se nikaala nahi gaya tha yahi baat kaafi thi.

Usse itna prataadit kiya jaata tha ki pucho mat. Pata nahi kese wo unn sab ke beech itne saal tak jee liya.

Yadi koi aur hota toh gusse me khud hi bhaag gaya hota ya ab tak trast aa chuka hota aur na jaane kya kar liya hota. Par Veer chup chaap sab kuch sehta tha.

Kyuki usse pata tha ki virodh karne ka koi fayda nahi tha. Aur yadi wo jaata bhi toh kaha jaata? Wo 20 saal ka hi tha aur abhi toh usne college ki duniya bhi thik se nahi dekhi thi.

Par aaj jo hua uss se Veer ko itna toh samajh aa gaya tha ki college ki life ke bache hue baaki 3 saal uski school life se kayi guna battar hone waale the.

Veer tezz raftaar me gaadi chalaaye jaa raha tha. Baarish aur aasuo ke kaaran uski aankein dhundhli ho chali thi. Gaadiyo ki headlights ki roshni kisi jugnu ke prakaar uski aankho me aati aur jaati.

Kuch derr pehle hui ghatna uske imaan, uske gaurav, uski izzat ko chhalli kar ke uske dimaag me ghum rahi thi.

Par wo ruka nahi. Yu aasu bahaate hue wo apne ghar ki orr gaadi badhaata raha jo ab bas kuch hi dur tha.

'Badla toh mein lunga. I'll make them pay. Chun chun ke... Ek ek se chun chun ke badla lunga.'
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Kahani shuru ho chuki hai.
Ab se mein aur aap iss kahani ka safar saath me tay karenge aur isse ant tak pohuchaenge.
Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!

Bhut khub...
bhut badhiya mitr..

 

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Update - 2 ~ The Family​

Ab tak...

Kuch derr pehle hui ghatna uske imaan, uske gaurav, uski izzat ko chhalli kar ke uske dimaag me ghum rahi thi.

Par wo ruka nahi. Yu aasu bahaate hue wo apne ghar ki orr gaadi badhaata raha jo ab bas kuch hi dur tha.

'Badla toh mein lunga. I'll make them pay. Chun chun ke... Ek ek se chun chun ke badla lunga.'

Ab aage...

Mumbai, jisse Mayanagri ke naam se bhi jaana jaata hai, uss sheher me ek boht hi aalishaan bangle me kuch log badi hi serious hoke ek kamre me dheemi awaaz me baatein kar rahe the.

"Aaj kese bhi karke uska patta saaf kar do. Samjhe?" Ek ladke ne bhaari awaaz me kaha.

Uske peeche khade ek naujavaan ladke ne uski orr dekha aur haa me gardan hilaayi, "Tension mat lo Bhaiya. Aaj uska patta saaf ho jaega. Mene bada hi tagda plan banaya hai hahaha!"

"Kesa plan?"

"Bhaiya! Aap bas dekhte jao. Aaj Dada jii ke decision lete samay hi sab kuch hoega. Mein show grand rakhna chaahta hu hahaha!"

"Shabaash chote! Bas dhyaan rahe koi gadbad na ho. Aur yadi hoye bhi toh tumhara naam bilkul bhi saamne na aaye. Samjhe?"

"Haa Vivek Bhaiya! Don't worry! Ye Pranjal jo bhi karta hai ekdum solid karta hai." Pranjal ne apni chhaati thap thapaate hue kaha.

Vivek : Good!

Muskuraate hue Vivek, Pranjal ka bada bhai uske kamre se nikal gaya.

Abhi wo nikla hi tha ki darwaaze ke baahar hi uski nayi naveli patni, Ragini usse dekhte hi bol padi. "Arre! Tum yaha ho? Chalo jaldi! Kuch derr me Dada jii apna decision dene waale hai. Sabhi hall me ikkhatta ho rahe hai."

Ragini ek boht hi gazab ki stree thi. Uska jism itna perfect tha maano bhagwaan ne badi hi fursat se usse banaaya tha. 27 saal ki Ragini ke stan kasse hue the aur saree me toh wo qayamat hi dhaa deti thi.

Uska gora rang, patle hontho me halki gulaabi lipstick, kamar tak latakte khule kaale baal jo neeche se curled the, uske husn par chaar chaand laga dete the. Ragini ka baap TVS ke 2 showrooms ka maalik tha. Paiso ki toh koi kami hi nahi thi uske paas. Aur Vivek ko aisi patni mili thi, uski kismat ke akhir kya kehne the.

Par Vivek bhi koi aera gerra nahi tha. Jab aisi patni usse mili ho toh andaaza lagaana mushqil nahi tha ki Vivek ka khud ka parivaar kitna ameer tha.

Ragini ki baat sunn Vivek ne kamre me jhaanka.

Vivek (chillaate hue) : Chote! Chal baahar jaldi.

Pranjal : Bhaiya! Aap jao mujhe toh important kaam hai. Haha!

Ragini prashn bhari nazro se Vivek ko dekhi, "Pranjal ko kya kaam bhala iss waqt!?"

Vivek : Tum chalo! Aaj toh behatreen show hone waala hai. Hahaha!

Aur hasste hue Vivek Ragini ko leke waha se chala gaya.

Par Ragini ki toh samajh me hi naa aaya ki akhir chal kya raha tha. Ab jab uske pati ne kaha tha kuch badhiya hone waala hai toh Ragini keval intezaar hi kar sakti thi.

*Click*

Veer ne apne ghar pohuch kar apni scooty se chaavi ghumaate hue gaadi band kari aur usse jeb me rakhte hue wo gaadi se utra.

Wo apne ghar pohuch chuka tha. Keval naam ke liye ghar tha. Ek ghar me ek aadmi khushiya paata hai, apno ka pyaar paata hai, ghar me ekta rehti hai par uske ghar ka ekdum alag hi scene tha.

Jaha aadmi apne ghar pohuch kar sukoon paata hai aur khush hota hai, Veer iss waqt andar jaane se hi katra raha tha aur darr bhi raha tha.

Shaam ke 7:30 baj chuke the. Aur wo paani se bheega, halke khoon se sana hua yaha khada hua tha. Usne apni scooty ke mirror me apni shaqal dekhi toh paaya uski ek aankh poori neel pad chuki thi. Itni buri tarah dhoya tha usse Ajay aur uske saathiyo ne.

"Aaarghhhh!" Karaahte hue usne apna ek haath apni pasli par ferra.

Wo apne qadam aage badhaate hue darwaaze ki orr badha. Uska ghar jo ki nark se kam nahi tha. Wo itna aalishaan tha ki jisse log dekhne ke baad tareefo ke pul baandhne lagte the.

Par unhe kya pata tha ki uss bunglow me andar rehne waale log kese the.

Veer abhi badh ke darwaaze par aaya hi tha ki itne me uske kaano me kisi ki awaaz padi.

"Arre!? Ye mein kya dekh raha hu? Tau jii ka eklauta beta iss haal me? Aur wo bhi aaj apne college ke second year ke pehle din?"

Awaaz sunte hi Veer ke perr wahi tham gaye. Saamne nazar daudaayi toh dekha ki uske chacha ka chota beta, Pranjal saamne khada hua tha.

Jii haa! Wo bungalow Veer ka hi tha.

Pranjal forun aage badh usse sahaara dene ke liye hua toh Veer ne uska haath gusse me jhatak diya aur apne perro par hi khada raha.

Pranjal : Arre!? Arre!? Mein toh bas tumhari madad kar raha tha chote bhai! Tumhari ye haalat kisne kii? Naam batao tum khaali, dekhna tumhara Bhai kya haal karega uss shaks ka.

Par Veer jaanta tha. Jo kuch bhi iss waqt Pranjal ke muh se nikal raha tha, jhooth ke alaawa wo aur kuch nahi ho sakta tha.

Uske jaisa kapti aur sayaana insaan shayad hi Veer ne apni poori life me kabhi dekha hoga.

Pranjal : Chote bhai! Dada jii ka janmdin hai aaj. Gussa thook do bhai. Chalo accha meri madad karwa do.

Par Veer toh jese kuch sunn'na hi nahi chaahta tha. Wo andar jaane laga ki ek baar fir Pranjal ne uska kandha thaam liya.

Pranjal : Bhai! Aaj Dada jii apna decision sunaane waale hai. Unhe kitna accha lagega yadi tum unhe apne haatho se unke janmdin par gift doge. Hai na? Apna gussa apne upar haavi hone mat do chote bhai! Chalo! Andar tumhara sab intezaar kar rahe hai.

Veer bhale hi gusse me tha, par wo apne Dada jii ki badi hi izzat karta tha. Aur unhe maanta bhi tha. Aaj uske Dada jii ka janmdin tha aur usne pehle se hi apne Dada jii ke liye ek gift taiyaar kar ke apne kamre me rakha hua tha. Jese tese Veer ne apna gussa nigla.

Veer : Aap chalo! Mein apne kamre se Dada jii ke liye gift leke aata hu.

Pranjal : Arre kya keh rahe ho Bhai? Dada jii aur baaki sab pehle se hi tumhara intezaar kar rahe hai aur aise me tum unhe aur intezaar karwaoge? Tum apni haalat ke baare me mat socho. Hum sab toh tumhaare apne hi hai hai na? Fir humaare saamne kesi jhijhak? Aao...

Aur Pranjal usse kheechte hue bangle ke andar le gaya. Chaahte hue bhi Veer uska virodh na kar paaya.

Andar ghuste hi ek mini hall tha jaha baahari vyaktiyo ko baithaaya jaata tha. Aur khaas logo ko hi uske andar waale Bade hall me entry allowed thi.

Abhi Pranjal aur Veer dono hi mini hall me the jaha ek khubsoorat sa flower vase maujood tha. Uske ird gird ek laal ribbon lipta hua tha aur Happy Birthday ka ek tag bhi laga hua tha.

Jab Veer ki nazar uspe padi toh woh usse dekhte hi chaunk gaya. Jo ki laazmi tha. Wo flower vase itna mehnga aur itna sundar prateet ho raha tha ki koi bhi usse ek baar dekhne ke baad dubaara zaroor dekhta.

Pranjal (khush hote hue) : Yahi hai wo gift chote bhai. Tau jii yaani ki tumhaare Dad ne khud isse mangwaaya hai. Aur yadi tum Dada jii ko apne haatho se ye gift doge toh woh kitna khush ho jaenge nahi!?

Par Veer jaanta tha ki ye Pranjal jo iss waqt bhed jesa maasoom prateet ho raha tha wo asal me bhed nahi balki bhed ke vesh me ek bhediya tha.

Veer ne naa chaahte hue bhi haa me sar hilaaya aur vase uthaake wo dono hi andar bade hall me pravesh kiye.

Bada hall itna bada tha aur lights se itna jagmaga raha tha ki dekhne waale dekhte hi reh jae. Upar na jaane kitna mehnga ek jhumar latka hua tha jisse dekh ke bas muh se tareef nikalti.

Andar ek single seat luxury waale sofe par Veer ke Dada jii baithe hue the. Aaj unka 80th Birthday tha. Aur unke agal bagal waale sofe par unke do bete baithe hue tha. Bada beta jiska naam tha Brijesh. Aur chota beta jiska naam tha Karunesh.

Karunesh : Papa jii aapko party rakh leni chahiye thi.

Manorath : Hmph! Kabhi bhi ye galti mat karna. Ye sab party jo tum log karte ho na issi ke kaaran tumhaare dushman badhte hai. Jitni raeesi logo ko dikhaoge, utne hi galat iraade logo ke mann me umadte hai.

Veer ke Dada jii ne hidaayat dete hue kaha.

Idhar andar jese hi Veer aur Pranjal aae, sabhi ki nazre un dono par jaa tiki.

Veer ke pita, Brijesh ne jese hi apne ladke ki haalat dekhi toh uski aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi. Usne sofe ke hatte ko itni zorr se bheencha maano usse ukhaad ke hi fek dega.

Kya Brijesh ka ye gussa apne bete ko iss haalat me dekh ke uska ye haal karne waale ke upar tha?

Bilkul bhi nahi!

Balki Brijesh iss waqt apne bete par gussa tha. Yadi abhi koi aur maujood na hota toh usne khade hoke pehle hi 2-4 jhaapad Veer ko raseed diye hote.

Uska beta wo bhi aise haal me? Veer ka ye roop maano Brijesh ki image par ek chaata tha. Na jaane uske baaki ghar waale kya soch rahe honge ab aise me.

Yahi sochke usse itna gussa aa raha tha par uske pita ka aaj janmdin tha aur wo kuch bhi bakheda khada karna nahi chaahta tha.

Nakli smile dete hue usne apne bete Veer ko dekha.

Brijesh : Aa gaye!? Kaha reh gaye the itni derr tak? Aur ye kya haalat bana rakhi hai apni? Kis se maar kha ke aa rahe ho?

Veer ki maano ye sawaal sunte hi sitti pitti gul ho gayi. Apne Dad ki bhaari bharkam awaaz sunte hi uske andar ka darr jaag utha. Uske haanth kaanpne lage the.

Iske pehle wo kuch jawaab de paata, bagal me khade Pranjal ne tapaak se bola.

Pranjal : Tau jii! Yahi baat mene Veer se baahar abhi puchi thi. Toh Veer kehne laga ki aaj usse ek senior ladki pasand aa gayi thi. Aur Veer uss ladki ko kahi le jaana chaahta tha par ladki ke premi ne virodh kia aur Veer ko ye bilkul bhi pasand na aaya aur wo dono ek dusre se jaa lade. Ye ussi ka parinaam hai Tau jii.

Pranjal ki baat sunte hi Veer ko ek zorrdaar jhatka laga. Usne apni phati aankho se palat ke Pranjal ko ghura toh paaya ki Pranjal bada hi masoom sa chehra banae waha khada hua tha, jese kuch hua hi na ho.

Pranjal : Mene Veer ko samjhaya bhi ki aise maar peet karna bilkul bhi acchi baat nahi hai. Veer ko toh fir bhi kam chot aayi hai. Na jaane Veer ne uss ladke ko kitni buri tarah peeta hoga.

Aisi vaani boliye, mann ka aapa khoye...
Auran ko sheetal kare, aaphu sheetal hoye...

Par Kabir ki ye panktiya iss waqt vyarth thi.

Pranjal ne jo madhur vaani boli thi wo Veer ko sheetal karna toh dur usse itna aag babula kar rahi thi ki yadi uski bas chalti toh wo issi samay Pranjal par toot padta.

Pranjal ki image ghar me ek boht hi sanskaari ladke ki thi, par wo asal me kesa tha ye baat sabhi nahi jaante the.

Brijesh (gusse me) : Tumhari itni himmat Veer!

Manorath : Shaant ho jao! Halla nahi!

Brijesh : Par Papa jii...

Manorath : Ssssshhhhhh!!!

Brijesh : Hmph!

Manorath : Veer! Tumhe pata hai kya kiya hai tumne?

Veer : Nahi! Dada jii... Wo mein...

Manorath : Jo hua so hua. Ab iski charcha koi nahi karega.

Aur sab shaant ho gaye.

Veer ne jab Hall me maujood sabhi logo par nazre firaayi.

Toh uski nazar apne Dada jii ke daayi orr rakhe sofe par gayi jaha uske Dad, Brijesh ke bagal se baithi hui uski sauteli Maa (Step-mom), Shweta usse bauhe sikode hue dekh rahi thi.

Fir uski nazar Shweta ke bagal se baithi hui Shweta ki ekmaatr eklauti beti, Bhumika par gayi. Jo usse dekhte hi apna muh ferr lii.

Jab Veer ne Dada jii ke baayi orr rakhe sofe par nazar daudaayi toh dekha ki uske chacha Karunesh aur unki patni Sumitra yaani ki uski chachi dono hi nazre gadaaye usse hi ghur rahe the.

Sumitra usse bauhe sikode uske chehre ko hi dekh rahi thi.

Unki hi bagal se uske chacha ke bade bete Vivek aur uski patni Ragini bhi baithe hue the. Wo dono bhi usse hi ghur rahe the.

Aur jab Veer ne stairs par nazre daudayi toh dekha ki uske chacha Karunesh ki badi beti Arohi aur choti beti Kavya dono hi saath me cake lete hue neeche aa rahi thi.

Wo dono hi neeche aayi aur cake ko saamne rakhi kaanch ki ek table par rakha aur side wahi sofe par baith gayi.

Jaha Arohi ne usse ek baar dekh ke apni nazre ferr lii, wahi dusri orr Kavya usse aisi haalat me dekh apni bauhe sikode usse badi hi hamdardi se dekh rahi thi par boli kuch nahi.

Kaha ek taraf uske parivaar waale jo naye kapde pehne, sajke baithe hue tha aur kaha wo jo pitne ke baad ekdum geela aur khoon ke nishaan aur ghaavo se bharpoor.

Manorath : Doctor ko dikhwa ke apni dawa karwana mat bhulna.

Veer : J... Jiii

Brijesh (zorr se) : Ab khade khade intezaar kya kar rahe ho? Aage badho aur apne Dada jii ko tohfa do.

Manorath : Aao Veer!

Aur apne Dada jii ki sahuliyat se Veer aage badhte hue apne Dada jii ko gift dene jaane laga.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi dosto!
Dhanyavaad!

Bhut khub...

bhut badhiya mitr..

 

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Update - 3 ~ A Full Fledged Plan​

Ab tak...

Brijesh (zorr se) : Ab khade khade intezaar kya kar rahe ho? Aage badho aur apne Dada jii ko tohfa do.

Manorath : Aao Veer!

Aur apne Dada jii ki sahuliyat se Veer aage badhte hue apne Dada jii ko gift dene jaane laga.

Ab aage...

Veer ke Dada jii, Manorath uss par kayi hadd tak bharosa karte the. Kyuki jitni bhi shikaayat wo sunte aa rahe the, unhone aaj tak Veer ko kabhi apni aankho se koi galat kaam karte nahi dekha tha. Aur aaj ye pehli baar nahi tha jab Pranjal ke muh se unhone Veer ki ghatna ke baare me suna tha.

Ye toh saalo se chala aa raha tha. Koi na koi aake Manorath ke saamne Veer ke karmo ki shikaayat karta tha aur Veer keval sar jhukae khada rehta tha. Veer virodh kiya karta tha par uske paas apni baat ko sahi saabit karne ka koi proof nahi rehta tha. Aur isliye ab usne virodh karna bhi chorr diya tha.

Aaj bhi kuch aisa hi tha. Veer ke paas koi saboot nahi tha apni begunaahi saabit karne ka. Aur kya kehta woh? Kon uski baato ka yakeen karta?

Pichle kayi saalo se jo image uski ghar me bani hui thi, uske chalte toh koi uss par reham bhi nahi khaata tha.

Jab Veer apne haatho me wo flower vase lete hue aage badha tabhi achaanak se pata nahi kya hua uska perr fisla aur wo buri tarah saamne ki orr jaa gira.

*Crash*

Flower vase uske haatho se chhuth kar gol ghumte hue ek tezz shor karte hue neeche jaa gira aur ek hi jhatke me wo sundar sa vase dherr saare tukdo me bikhar gaya.

"Aaaaaaaaaaa," Waha baithi mahilae aur ladkiyo ke muh se kuch aisi hi hairaani bhari awaaz nikli.

Aur fir ek shaanti sii chhaa gayi.

Sab ki aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi. Sabhi Veer ko aise dekh rahe the jese maano usne kisi ka khoon kar diya ho.

Dekhe bhi kyu na, akhir wo flower vase itna keemti jo tha. Manorath ko shuru se hi paudhe aur flower vases ka boht shauk tha, yahi kaaran tha ki unke ghar me ek alag se garden bhi tha.

Iss waqt Veer ki haalat kharab thi. Usne khud apne Dada jii ke liye ek flower vase chunn ke rakha hua tha jisse wo baad me unhe dene waala tha. Iss vase ke saamne uska vase toh kuch bhi nahi tha. Par ab kya? Ab toh wo vase uske haatho toot chuka tha.

Bas! Brijesh jo apna gussa pehle hi badi mushqil se control kiye hue tha wo uth khada hua aur chillaaya.

Brijesh : Haram khor! Tujhe pata hai wo tohfa kitna mehnga tha?

Apne Dad ki garajti awaaz sunn ek baar fir wo sihar utha. Brijesh usse aag babula hoke khaa jaane wali nazro se ghur raha tha.

Manorath : Brijeesshhhh!!!

Brijesh : Papa jii... Aap... Aap jaante hai ye tohfa kitne ka tha? Ye flower vase 3 lakh ka tha. Mene khud import karwaya tha China se isse aapke liye... Aur iss bewakoof ne...

Vase ki keemat sunte hi waha khade logo ko jese ek bada jhatka laga. 3 lakh unn sabke saamne yu barbaad hoke bikhar ke jo pade hue the.

Sabse zyaada haalat toh Veer ki kharaab thi. Uski samajh nahi aa raha tha wo kare kya.

Brijesh se ab raha na gaya, wo wese hi kayi saalo se Veer se pareshaan tha. Veer uski harr umeedo par paani ferr deta tha.

Veer ki taraf tezz kadmo ke saath jaate hue wo usse ek zorrdaar thappad maarne hi wala tha ki...

Manorath : Brijeessshhh!!

Brijesh : Par Papa jii...

Manorath : Aaj mera janmdin hai. Aur mere janmdin ke din tum aisa suluk karoge toh matlab hi kya. Jo hua usse ek galti maan ke aage badho. Vase kitna hi mehnga kyu na ho, wo toh ab toot chuka hai. Ab uske peeche rone ka koi fayda nahi. Rahi baat paiso ki toh iske paise mein de dunga.

Brijesh : Ye aap kesi baatein kar rahe ho Papa jii? Aapka janmdin hai. Mein bhala aap se paise kyu lunga?

Manorath ki baat sunn Brijesh ne apne haath rok liye par uska gussa abhi tak kam nahi hua tha.

Pranjal : Dada jii, mene Veer se kaha tha baahar hi ki apne shoes utaar de kyuki baarish se geele ho chuke hai. Par Veer ne meri suni hi nahi. Bola ki maids toh ghar me lagi hi hai, wo kis kaam aaengi?

Aur uski baat sunn sabhi ki nazre Veer ke perro par gayi jo geele jute pehna hua tha aur farsh ko ganda kar raha tha.

Aur ye dekh Brijesh aur krodhit ho gaya. Tabhi Veer ki stepmom Shweta uth khadi huyi.

Shweta : Veer din ba din laaparwaah hota jaa raha hai.

Pranjal : Veer! Apne jute utaaro, idhar aao ye sleepers pehn lo aur ab galti ho gayi toh ho gayi. Ye dekho bhagwaan ka prasaad rakha hua hai. Dada jii ko ye prasaad do aur unse maafi maang lo.

Pranjal usse haath pakad ke uske jute utarwaata hai aur usse wahi Dada jii ke paas rakhi ek sleepers ko pehna deta hai. Pranjal ne wahi table pe rakhe hue dahi shakkar jo ki bhagwaan ko chadhaaya gaya tha usse katori me laake Veer ko thama diya.

Pranjal : Jao Veer! Dada jii ko prasaad do aur maafi maango.

Veer bechaara itna seham gaya tha aaj ki ghatnao se. Aaj uski zindagi ka sabse manhoos aur bura din tha.

Veer ne prasaad ki katori haath me thaami aur wo aage badha hi tha ki firse uska perr na jaane kese fisla aur prasaad ki katori uske haath se chhatak kar seedhe uske Dada jii ki orr jaa giri.

Aur saara ka saara prasaad uske Dada jii ke kapdo par jaa gira.

Bas! Brijesh ka jo gussa abhi apni limit par tha, wo cross ho gaya. Wo aage badha aur...

*Chataak* *Chataak* *Chataak*

Thappado ki jhadi laga dii aur Veer ke gaalo par raseed raseed ke maarte gaya.

Thappado ki goonj se Kavya sehamte hue sab kuch dekh rahi thi. Usse waqai Veer pe taras aa raha tha. Arohi bhi bauhe sikodti hui saamne ho rahe drashya ko dekh rahi thi.

Wahi Pranjal aur Vivek khushi se fule nahi sama rahe the.

Vivek (khuspusaate hue) : Yahi hai wo grand show... Haha!

Ragini : Ohhh! Toh tum iski baat kar rahe the. Par... Par ye kuch zyaada nahi ho gaya?

Vivek : Hmph! Zyaada kaha ye toh abhi bhi kam hai.

Ragini : Aur ye idea kis ka tha?

Vivek (smiles) : Chote ka...

Ragini (hairaani me) : Pranjal ka??? Devar jii kuch zyaada hi chatur ho rahe hai aaj kal...

Idhar thappado se Veer ke gaal laal ho chale the.

Brijesh (gusse me) : Tu jaanta hai aaj tune kya kiya hai? Haram khor!!! Wo prasaad hamaare kul ki devi ka tha. Aur tune usse zameen pe gira diya? Aur wo bhi Papa jii ke upar? Naye kapde bhi kharaab kar diye tune unke... 3 lakh ke tohfe ka chuna laga diya... Roz roz tere haath se kuch na kuch gadbad hoti hi hai. Beta nahi panauti hai tu... Mein kehta hu nikal jaa... Nikal jaa issi waqt ghar se... Aur ahinda se iss ghar me qadam bhi mat rakhna...

Aur Brijesh usko haatho se pakad ke ghaseet ke baahar le gaya aur zorr se dhakka dete hue usse darwaaze ke baahar fek diya.

Ghar me maujood sabhi log darwaaze ki orr tezz kadmo ke saath aae siwae Manorath ke...

Aaj tak Devi ke prasaad ka aisa apmaan unke kul me kisi ne bhi nahi kiya tha. Manorath khud abhi iss waqt atyant dukh aur gusse me tha. Issi kaaran usne Brijesh ko bhi iss baar nahi toka.

Aur wo wahi baitha hua chup chaap apne hi mann me Devi se shama maangne laga.

Brijesh : Nikal jaa! Nikal jaa iss ghar se... Aaj se tera aur mera koi sambandh nahi. Marr gaya aaj se tu mere liye... Mera koi beta nahi hai. Khabardaar yadi tune iss ghar me dubaara kadam bhi rakha toh...

Veer kaapte hue sab kuch apni aankho se dekh raha tha, ye pal bhar me kya se kya ho gaya. Aaj kyu uske saath ye sab hua?

Veer ki sauteli Maa, Shweta saamne ke nazaare ko badi hi khushi se dekh rahi thi. Uski mann ki muraad poori jo ho gayi thi. Ab uski beti hi jaydaad ki maalkin banegi. Yahi sochte hue wo apni beti ki orr mudi toh dekha ki uski beti, Bhumika ke chehre par koi expression nahi the. Aur ye jaan kar Shweta ko khushi hui. Ki uski beti ke mann me bhi Veer ke prati koi bhaav nahi hai.

Veer ke aasu uski aankho se lagataar bahe jaa rahe the. Par wo kuch nahi bola.

Wo chup chaap utha aur baahar ki orr chal diya. Usne apne jeb me se gaadi ki chaavi nikaali aur wo gaadi on karne hi waala tha ki peeche se Brijesh ki awaaz aayi.

Brijesh : Ye gaadi teri nahi hai...

Aur Veer chaavi ko gaadi me lage hi chorr kar ghar se baahar nikal aaya.

Usne ek jhalak peeche mud ke dekha. Shweta aur Bhumika usse bina koi bhaav ke dekh rahi thi. Brijesh ki aankho me bhayaanak gussa nazar aa raha tha. Wahi uske Karunesh chacha bhi usse bina koi bhaav ke dekh rahe the.

Uski Sumitra chachi thoda chintit zaroor prateet ho rahi thi.

Vivek aur Pranjal ke chehro par halki khushi nazar aa rahi thi. Ragini aur Arohi bauhe sikode jese kisi soch me doobi hui thi. Jab uski nazar Kavya par gayi toh Kavya ne sehamte hue sar jhuka liya.

Bas! Uske baad Veer palat ke ghar se dur jaane laga. Ghar ke security guards bhi Veer ko jaata hua dekh rahe the.

Achanak baadal garje aur baarish firse shuru ho gayi.

Par Veer na ruka. Aur kuch hi palo me wo apne gharwaalo ki nazro se ojhal ho chuka tha.

Iss waqt Veer ko baarish acchi lag rahi thi. Usse apni lag rahi thi. Jab Ajay se maar khaate waqt wo ghar laut raha tha tab bhi baarish ne uska saath diya tha. Aur abhi jaha uske ghar waalo ne usse ghar se nikaal ke usse akela chhorr diya tab bhi baarish uska saath de rahi thi.

Uske saath saath mausam bhi yu ro raha tha. Veer bina koi awaaz kiye rote rote bas chalta jaa raha tha.

Usne apne seene par latka pendant apne haatho me thaam liya. Ek bada hi pyaara sa pendant tha, ekdum alag type ka.

Usse bheenchte hue Veer ke aasu aur tezzi se behne lage. Ye woh pendant tha jo uski asli Maa ne usse pehnaaya tha.

Veer ko apni asli Maa ke baare me kuch bhi nahi pata tha. Bas itna pata tha ki uss Maa ne usse janm diya hai. Jab bhi wo Brijesh se apni Maa ke baare me puchta tha toh Brijesh bas ek hi baat bolta~ "Naam mat lo uss kameeni aurat ka..."

Uski Maa ka naam tha Bhawana. Veer ke janm ke ek saal baad hi dono ke beech talaak ho gaya aur Bhawana ghar se chali gayi thi.

Kaha gayi woh, kis haal me hogi abhi, zinda bhi hai ya nahi uski Maa usse kuch nahi pata tha. Yaha tak ki uski Maa ka naam bhi uske Dada jii ne usse bataya tha. Na hi uss aurat ko lekar ghar me charcha hoti thi na hi koi uske baare me koi topic chedhta tha.

Veer ko toh ye bhi nahi pata tha ki uski Maa kesi dikhti thi. Koi bhi photo album nahi tha, uski Maa se judi koi bhi cheez nahi thi ghar me.

Baarish ke kaaran sadko par abhi gaadiya bhi kam chalti hui nazar aa rahi thi. Usse nahi pata tha wo kaha jaa raha hai. Jab tak uske perr chal rahe the wo bas chalta jaa raha tha. Usse apni sagi Maa ki yaad aane lagi. Yadi wo yaha hoti abhi toh uski Maa uske saath kesa vyavhaar karti? Kya usse pyaar deti? Ya fir Brijesh ki hi tarah wo bhi...!?

Paani se bheega hua Veer main road par aa chuka tha, abhi wo mudne hi waala tha ki ekdum se ek car mod se aayi aur Veer ne palat ke car ko dekha.

Par tab tak boht derr ho chuki thi.

Car ka agla hissa uski pasli se takraaya aur thokar hote hi wo zorr se jaate hue dur gir pada.

"Ohhhh! Noooo...." Car me baithe ek aadmi ke muh se nikla.

Car ko jhatka lagte hi peeche baithi ek ladki forun hi aage ki seat se jaa bhidi, "Aaaahhhh!"

Aadmi : Madam aap theek toh hai na?

Ladki (sar malte hue) : Haa! Mein... Mein thik hu.

Fir jese hi uss ladki ne saamne dekha toh uski maano saasein hi atak gayi. Saamne ek ladka zameen par dala hua tha aur usse samajhne me derr na lagi ki abhi abhi uski car kis se takraayi thi.

Wo ladka waha baarish me car se bhid ke pada bheeg raha tha.

Ladki (ghabraate hue) : Ye... Ye....

Aadmi : Inn sab ka samay nahi hai Madam. Hume jald hi nikalna hoga.

Aur itna bol wo aadmi forun hi gaadi aage badhaane lagta hai.

Ladki (chillaate hue) : Ye kya bol rahe ho aap? Nahi... Hum aise usse chorr kar nahi jaa sakte...

Aadmi : Madam! Baat ko samajhiye... Iss waqt humaara yaha se nikalna boht zaroori hai.

Aur usne car ke accelerator par perr rakh car aage badha dii.

Ladki peeche mud window se uss ladke ko dekh rahi thi, uska nichla honth daato tale zorr se daba hua tha ki maano khoon hi nikal aae. Aankho me halke aasu bhi aa chuke the.

"I'm sorry..." Usne mann me kaha.

Aur wo car palak jhapakte hi logo ki nazro se ojhal ho gayi.

Idhar accident dekh aas paas ke jo bhi log dukaan ke neeche baarish se bachne ke liye khade hue the wo daudte hue aae aur Veer ko uthaane lage.
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Update - 4 ~ In the Hospital​

Ab tak...

Ladki peeche mud window se uss ladke ko dekh rahi thi, uska nichla honth daato tale zorr se daba hua tha ki maano khoon hi nikal aae. Aankho me halke aasu bhi aa chuke the.

"I'm sorry..." Usne mann me kaha.

Aur wo car palak jhapakte hi logo ki nazro se ojhal ho gayi.

Idhar accident dekh aas paas ke jo bhi log dukaan ke neeche baarish se bachne ke liye khade hue the wo daudte hue aae aur Veer ko uthaane lage.

Ab aage...

"Arre... Arre... Uthao... Uthao..."
"Jaldi... Jaldi..."
"Car wala madarchod bhaag gaya..."
"Uthwao bhailog..."

Aur waha maujood log forun hi Veer ke paas aake usse uthaane lage. Bina baarish ki parvaah kiye.
Yadi uske parivaar waale hote toh kya woh usse iss waqt uthaate?

Shayad haa? Ya shayad nahi!?

"Arre isse toh boht zyaada chot aayi hai, khoon beh raha hai kaafi, jaldi ambulance ko call karo koi..."

Waha khade ek aadmi ne chillaaya toh agle ne forun hi 108 dial karte hue ambulance bulwa lii.

Abhi wo log savdhaani se Veer ko utha hi rahe the ki itne me ussi mod se ek aur car aayi par bheed ke kaaran uss car ko rukna pada.

Car waale ne jab horn maari toh usse itni gaaliya padi ki usse na chaahte hue bhi rukna pada.

"Dhatttt behanchod!! Iski maa ki aankh..." Car waale ne steering pe zorr se haath maarte hue chillaaya.

Dusra aadmi : Ab kuch nahi ho sakta... Car ghuma lo...

Pehla aadmi : Boss ko pata chala toh woh hamaari gardan na udaa de...

Dusra aadmi : Mein Boss ko samjha dunga... Tum car ghuma lo...

Pehla aadmi : Thik hai.

Aur wo car reverse karke waha se nikal gaye.

Idhar log Veer ko utha ke ek shop ke neeche lita ke uski choto par rumaal ya kapda baandh ke jese tese khoon rokne ki koshish kar rahe the.

Kuch derr me hi ambulance aayi aur Veer ko leke hospital ki orr chali gayi.

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Veer ke ghar me...

Sabhi log iss waqt Manorath ke kamre me maujood the. Manorath apne bistar par baitha hua tha toh wahi baaki sabhi khade hue usse hi dekh rahe the.

Manorath : Aaj tak prasaad ka aisa apmaan hamaare ghar me kisi ne bhi nahi kiya.

Pranjal : Dada jii! Veer ko waqai aisa nahi karna tha.

Kavya : Par... Dada jii! Wo toh... Unhone jaan bujh ke nahi kiya hoga...

Pranjal : Kavya? Ye tum kya keh rahi ho? Pehli baar maante hai ki uska perr fisal gaya aur wo vase toot gaya par dusri baar bhi?

Pranjal ki baat sunn bechaari Kavya kuch virodh hi na kar paayi aur sar jhuka lii.

Sumitra : Jeth jii... Aapko aise... Veer ko ghar se nahi nikaalna tha.

Brijesh : Mene jo bhi kiya hai boht soch samajh ke kiya hai. Mein ye kadam pehle hi uthaane waala tha par hamesha Papa jii ke kaaran ruk jaata tha. Lekin aaj toh usne hadd hi paar kar dii. Akhir uss kameeni ki kokh se jo paida hua hai, aisa hi hona tha... Mere toh ek bhi gud nahi hai usme...

Manorath : Wo jaisa bhi hai iss parivar ka hissa hai. Usse jaake wapas le aao. Abhi zyada dur nahi gaya hoga.

Brijesh : Bilkul bhi nahi Papa jii. Mene aapko pehle bhi bol ke rakha hai. Ki jis din ye apni hadd paar karega uss din mein isse ghar se nikaal dunga. Aur aaj yahi hua hai... Ab mein usse iss ghar me ghusne tak nahi dunga... Aap apna faisla sunaaiye Papa jii...

Manorath : Toh tum log usse wapas nahi laoge?

Brijesh : Bilkul bhi nahi...

Manorath : Toh fir mera bhi yahi faisla hai. Zameen aur jaydaad kisko milegi ye bhi tab hi nirnay hoga jab parivaar ka harr ek sadasya ghar me maujood hoga.

Brijesh : Papa jii!??

Vivek : Dada jii!? Ye aap...!?

Manorath ke faisle se maano sabko ek jhatka sa laga. Jiss pal ke liye wo sabhi bekaraar the ki akhir kisko zameen aur jaydaad dii jaegi wo pal toh aaya hi nahi. Ulta ab jab tak ghar me Veer nahi aa jaata tab tak faisla tal chuka tha.

Manorath ke paas dherr saari zameen thi jiski keemat crores me thi aur jaydaad bhi. Aur ye sab kuch ghar ke ussi sadasya ko milne waala tha jo Manorath ki aankho me iske liye sahi tha.

Uske 2 petrol pump bhi rahe jo usne apne beto ko de diye the. Ek petrol pump ka maalik jaha Brijesh tha toh wahi dusre ka maalik Karunesh.

Karunesh ne dimaag se paisa kamaate hue apne bete Vivek ki upar lagaya aur aaj Vivek ki khud ki ek automobiles ki company thi. Bhale hi worldwide nahi thi abhi par uska business zorro shoro se chal raha tha.

Karunesh ki badi beti Arohi aur choti beti Kavya, Veer ke hi college me thi aur wo dono bhi B.Tech kar rahi thi. Jaha Arohi aur Veer ki branch same thi ~ IT.

Wahi Kavya CS branch se belong karti thi.

Pranjal bhi same college me tha par wo B.com kar raha tha. Uski building alag thi par saari buildings saath me hi thi, jis kaaran wo break ke time Arohi aur Kavya se milne jaata rehta tha.

Karunesh ko apne bete betiyo ki koi chinta nahi thi.

Par Brijesh ka aisa nahi tha. Brijesh ko bhi ek petrol pump diya gaya tha Manorath dwaara. Usne bhi dimaag se apni ek luxury hotel khulwaayi jo sheher me kaafi mashoor thi. Jaha wo petrol pump sambhaalta tha toh wahi uski hotel uski dusri patni Shweta sambhaalti thi.

Shweta ke hi saath uski beti, Bhumika bhi uska saath deti thi.

Aur aaj yahi faisla liya jaane wala tha ki kisko zameen aur jaydaad milegi.

Par sab kuch dhara ka dhara reh gaya.

Manorath : Mera faisla saaf hai. Jao aur mujhe akela chorr do abhi.

Vivek : Par Dada jii...

Manorath : Mene kaha jao... Aur Brijesh... Yadi tum Veer ko wapas nahi laane waale toh mujhe uske baare me harr cheez batao... Iss waqt kaha hai woh... Kiske ghar theher raha hai? Wo mera pota hai. Mein jaan'na chaahta hu wo sahi salaamat hai ya nahi?

Brijesh : Thik...

Aur ghar ke mukhiya ki awaaz sunn sabhi bemann waha se nikal gaye.

Idhar kamre me aate hi Vivek Pranjal pe toot pada.

Vivek : Chote ye kya kar diya tune? Ye daav toh ulta hi pad gaya. Dada jii ne toh faisla hi taal diya. Ab jab tak wo Veer nahi aa jaata tab tak Dada jii koi faisla nahi sunaenge.

Pranjal : Bhaiya! Ab mujhe kya pata tha aisa ho jaega? Mene toh yahi socha tha aaj Veer ko Dada ji ki nazro me gira dunga toh Dada jii uska naam lenge hi nahi. Par mujhe nahi pata tha Tau jii usse ghar se baahar hi nikaal denge.

Ragini : Mene kaha tha ye kuch zyada hi ho gaya hai.

Pranjal : Aap log tension mat lo. Hum log kese bhi karke Dada jii ko mana lenge aur wo jald hi faisla le lenge. Filhaal ek musibat toh gayi.

Vivek : Hmm!! Par chote tune wo sab kiya kese?

Vivek ke sawaal karne par Pranjal ne muskuraate hue jeb se kuch nikaala aur unn dono ko dikhaya.

Pranjal : Haha! Bhaiya! Saara kamaal iska hai.

Vivek (hairaani me) : Ye toh... Ye toh... Ye toh tufoil hai chote...

Pranjal : Haha! Haa bhaiya! Aapke hi yaha se laaya hu.

Tufoil ek aisa slippery oil jisse automobiles me use kiya jaata hai. Na keval ye automobiles ke liye balki ye apni slipness ke liye bhi jaana jaata hai.

Pranjal : Ye mene floor par daal diya tha. Aur mein Veer ko wahi se le gaya jaha ye oil mene daala tha. Bas! Fir kya tha, uska geela joota jese hi uspe pada, Veer fisla aur vase seedha neeche... Hahaha!

Ragini : Par wo prasaad ka kya?

Pranjal : Bhabhi! Wo bhi iska hi kamaal hai. Mene sleepers ke neeche bhi isse laga ke rakha hua tha.

Ragini (smiles) : Waah! Maan gaye tumhe bhi. Par wo chot ka kya jo Veer ko pehle se hi lagi hui thi?

Pranjal : Wo bhi mere kehne par hau tha Bhabhi. Mere kayi chelo me se ek hai wo Ajay. Mene usko keh ke rakha tha ki aaj pehla din hai toh koi bhi bahana bana ke aaj jamm ke thukaayi kar dena uss Veer ki... Aur usne yahi kiya hahahaha!

Vivek : Par chote, wo oil zameen par nazar kyu nahi aaya?

Pranjal : Kese aaega Bhaiya? Mene usse carpet ke ekdum bagal se giraaya tha hahaha!

Aur uske saath hi Vivek bhi hassne laga. Ragini muskuraate hue dono ko dekh rahi thi. Jaha ye jashn mana rahe the toh wahi koi aur tha jo iss waqt apni saaso se ladd raha tha.

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Hospital...

Nurse : Iski haalat boht critical hai Doctor.

Doctor : I know... Humse jo bann padega hum karenge.

Nurse : Jii! But iski family...!? Iska mobile toh kaam hi nahi kar raha hai.

Doctor : Mene ward boy ko bola hai wo iske phone ki SIM apne phone me daalke iske ghar waalo ko call karega.

Nurse : Hmm!!

Aur Veer ka treatment shuru ho chuka tha.

Ward boy ne jab Veer ki SIM daal ke Brijesh ko call kiya toh Brijesh ne ye soch ke call nahi uthaya ki zaroor Veer ne paise maangne ke liye phone kiya hoga aur gusse me usne apna phone hi band kar diya.

Ward boy ne jab Sumitra ko call kiya toh call lag hi nahi raha tha. Kese lagta? Pranjal ne apni maa ke phone me Veer ka number block jo kar ke rakha tha.

Fir usne akhiri number jo ki Kavya ka tha usse call kiya.

Idhar iss waqt Kavya Arohi aur Pranjal ke saath hi baithi hui thi. Number dekhte hi Kavya soch me pad gayi.

'Veer Bhaiya mujhe kyu call kar rahe hai?? Phone utha lu? Thik hai utha leti hu.'

Par iske pehle ki wo phone utha paati, Pranjal ne uska phone chhina liya.

Pranjal : Zara dekho toh... Veer ab hamari Kavya ko phone laga raha hai. Kyu Kavya?

Kavya : Phone dijiye Bhaiya.

Pranjal : Nahi! Zaroor ab apni pyari behan se paise maangne ke liye phone kar raha hoga. Kyuki baahar ab usse paiso ki zaroorat toh padegi hi...

Aur usne forun hi phone kaat ke uska number hi block kar diya.

Pranjal : Ab tumhe disturbance nahi hoga behan hahaha!

Kavya : Hmm?

Pranjal : Accha wo sab chorro, chalo hum sab pizza mangwaate hai.

Kavya : Mera mann nahi hai Bhaiya aap hi khao. Aaj Veer Bhaiya ke saath itna sab kuch ho gaya aur aapko pizza ki padi hai?

Pranjal : Arre ye kya baat hui yaar. Kavya tum ab bhi usse apna bhai maanti ho? Wo bhai kehne laayak nahi hai Kavya. Kherr chorro! Arohi didi aap toh khaogi na?

Arohi : Nahi!

Pranjal : Thik hai toh mein hi mangwa leta hu...

Aur wo waha se chala jaata hai.

Kavya apna phone liye sochti rehti hai ki akhir Veer ne usse kyu call lagaya hoga. Wo sochti hai ki agli baar yadi phone aaya toh woh zaroor uthaegi. Par usse kya pata tha ki Pranjal ne Veer ka number hi block kar diya tha.

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Idhar hospital me ek ward me ek ladki apni Maa ke paas baithi hui thi...

Ladki : Maa! Ab mein chalti hu... Tum dhyaan rakhna theek!

Aurat : Haa beta! Mujhe kya... Tumhaare Papa toh rahenge hi na mere saath. Ab tum jao... Raat ho rahi hai beta. Aur fir, Juhi akeli pados me zyada derr nahi reh paegi. Jaa beta...

Ladki : Jii Maa! Chalti hu. Tum dhyaan rakhna apna haa!? Koi bhi dikkat ho toh...

Aurat : Arre baba! Haa! Pata hai mujhe... Jaa ab tu...

Ladki : Thik!

Aur ladki apni Maa ke ward se baahar nikal aati hai.

Abhi wo aage badh ke nikalne hi wali thi ki usne dekha ki uski Maa ke bagal waale ward ke baahar doctor aur ward boy ke beech behas ho rahi thi jisse dekh wo rukk gayi.

Doctor : Dekho kese bhi karke iske parivaar walo ko inform karo.... Kese bhi karke...

Ward boy : Arre Sir! Kisi ne phone hi nahi uthaaya...

Doctor : Haa toh lagaate raho... Nahi toh fir police ko inform karo kyuki uske shareer pe maar peet ke bhi nishaan hai.

Inn dono ki behas chal rahi thi ki tabhi wo ladki jigyaasa purvak aage badhi aur usne ward me jhaank ke dekha, jab usne patient ka chehra dekha toh ekdum hi chaunk gayi aur uske muh se tezz swar me nikla, "Veeeeeeerr!????"

Doctor (palat'te hue) : Aap? Aap janti hai isse?

Ladki : Huh? Mein... Haa! Wo mera student hai. Mein usse pichle ek saal se jaanti hu.

Doctor : Bhagwaan ka shuqr hai chalo koi toh mila... Aapka shubh naam?

Ladki : Nidhi...

Doctor : Okay toh Nidhi jii... Aap idhar aaiye zara mere saath.

Kuch derr baad...

Nidhi Veer ke college me Maths padhaati thi. Aur iss saal wo Veer ki hi class ki classteacher thi.

Wo Veer ko jaanti bhi thi. Bhale hi Veer padhne me hoshiyaar nahi tha par Veer sabse shaant baccha tha uski class me. Aur ho bhi kyu na? Uske dost hi nahi the.

Aaj Nidhi apni Maa jinhe kal hi achanak minor heart attack aa gaya tha unhe hi dekhne ke liye hospital me aayi hui thi. Par ittefaaq se usse Veer bhi yahi mil gaya.

Veer ke liye saari kaagzi kaam Nidhi ne kiya aur yaha tak ki apne Pita jii se Nidhi ne Veer ke liye medical fees bhi advanced me kuch jama karwane ko keh diya.

Sab kuch itni jaldi hua ki Nidhi ki khud samajh me nahi aaya. Aur iss waqt wo ward ke darwaaze ki window glass se jhaakte hue Veer ko dekh rahi thi aur soch me padi hui thi.

'Ye achanak... Ye Veer haadse me kese...!? Aur iske Maa Baap phone kyu nahi utha rahe hai!? Kese Maa Baap hai? Mujhe kal jaake unse baat karni padegi.'

Nidhi ye soch hospital se nikal gayi.

Par uske jaate Veer ki haalat bigadna shuru ho gayi thi.

Nurse : Doctor...

Doctor : I know...

*Beep Beep Beep*

Uski heart beat bilkul band hone ki kagaar par aa chuki thi.

Ki tabhi achaanak se aisa kuch hua jiske chalte uski heartbeat waapas se normal ho gayi.

Doctor : Phew... He's out of danger now.

Aur kuch derr baad hi Doctors aur nurse Veer ki haalat stable roop me chorr ke baahar aa gaye.

Par kisi ko nahi pata tha...

Ki jab uski saasein jaane hi waali thi...

Tab uske andar ek awaaz gunji thi...

Jo kisi ko sunaayi nahi dii thi...

Aur wo awaaz ke bol the...

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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!

marvelous update.......
What the fuck is this man.......
[System has been activated]

 

[Jassybabra]

Nice update

 

[Htcw456]

Update - 5 ~ System Activation​

Ab tak...

Par kisi ko nahi pata tha...

Ki jab uski saasein jaane hi waali thi...

Tab uske andar ek awaaz gunji thi...

Jo kisi ko sunaayi nahi dii thi...

Aur wo awaaz ke bol the...

[System has been activated.]

Ab aage...

Veer ke accident ke kuch ghanto baad hi jab Brijesh ka phone baja tha aur screen par Veer naam jab usne dekha tha toh pata nahi kyu Brijesh ne call nahi uthaaya.

Shayad kuch derr pehle usne khud hi apne bete ko dhakke maar ke ghar se baahar nikaala tha iss kaaran vash? Ya fir wo abhi Veer ke muh se koi bhi baat nahi sunn'na chaahta tha. Kuch tha jo usse rok raha tha Veer se baat karne ke liye.

Ki tabhi uske phone par firse call aaya par ye uske khud ke vyakti ka tha.

Brijesh : Hello?

Aadmi : Saahab! Veer jii ka car se accident hua hai. Abhi wo xxxxxxxxxx hospital me bharti hai.

Aur ye sunte hi Brijesh uth khada hua. Aur forun hi hospital ke liye jaane laga.

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Agle din Kavya college me apni soch me ghum thi.

'Veer bhaiya ka call uske baad se aaya hi nahi. Kya karu? Call back karu? Iske pehle unhone kabhi mujhe call nahi kiya fir achanak kal kyu? Kahi koi dikkat toh nahi? Kal unke beech mein call na kar saki thi...'

Aur ye soch wo call lagaati hai par call nahi laga. Kese lagta? Ward boy ne Veer ki SIM waapas se uske phone me jo daal dii thi.

Ant me Kavya uske whtsapp par message daal deti hai ye puchne ki wo theek hai ya nahi?

Idhar Nidhi din me hi Veer ke ghar gayi thi taaki wo jaan sake ki kyu uske Maa Baap ne call nahi uthaaya tha.

Jab wo waha pohuchi aur jesa ravaiyaa usne dekha Brijesh, Shweta aur baaki ghar waalo ka Veer ke prati ye dekh ke usse itna gussa aaya ki wo khud ko control na kar saki.

Nidhi ek Maa bhi thi. Uski khud ki beti abhi choti thi aur aise me wo jaanti thi ki ek parent hona kya hota hai. Aise me jab usne Brijesh aur Shweta ka behaviour dekha toh bas wo bhadak uthi.

Nidhi : Kese Maa Baap ho aap log? Aapka Beta waha apni zindagi se ladd raha hai aur aap logo ko koi chinta hi nahi hai? Yaha tak ki aapne usse apne ghar se baahar hi nikaal diya!?

Brijesh : Dekhiye Madam! Veer ab iss parivaar ka hissa nahi hai. Rahi baat paise ki toh uske medical kharcho ki bharpayi mein kar chuka hu par iske baad ab wo jaane ki wo kaha rahega kese rahega... Aur aap hamare parivaarik maamlo se dur rahe toh hi accha hoga.

Nidhi : Bhul se bhi aise Maa Baap na de bhagwaan kisi ko...

Aur Nidhi apni namm aankhe liye waha se bhaag aayi. Usse Veer ke liye waqai boht bura lag raha tha. Kaha wo khud ko badqismat samajhti thi par ab Veer ko dekh usse mehsoos hua ki kam se kam usse Maa Baap ka pyaar toh mil raha tha par Veer ko toh wo bhi nahi mila...

Na jaane kya kya saha hoga uss bechaare ne ab tak?

Na jaane kese kese din bitaaye honge Veer ne unke beech rehke?

Idhar hospital me abhi shaam ke waqt Veer ko hosh aa chuka tha.

"Arrrghhh!" Ek karaah ke saath uski aankh khuli.

Aankho se dhundhlapan hata, saamne ka nazaara nazar aaya.

Usne dekha ki wo hospital me hai. Aankhein uski jal rahi thi. Usse sab kuch jese yaad aane laga...

Kya hua tha?

Haan! Aur kal ki saari vardaat flashback ki tarah uske dimaag me mandraane lagi.

Aur usne apna sar pakad liya...

Aankho se aasu behne lage...

Abhi wo soch hi raha tha ki itne me uske andar ek awaaz gunji jiske chalte uske raungte khade ho gaye.

[Sytem has been activated. You are now the owner of the system.]

Veer (ghabraate hue) : Huh? Kaun? Kaun hai?

Awaaz se maano Veer bechaara darr hi gaya. Usne apna sar idhar udhar hilaate hue dekha par wo awaaz kaha se aayi usse kuch bhi pata na chala.

[Name the System!!]

Veer (chillaate hue) : Kaun hai? Mein puchta hu kaun hai?

Aur firse ek awaaz uske dimaag me gunji...

[Analyzing Hindi language from owner's mind...

Processing...

Process completed.

Hindi Language has been recognised.]

Veer (chillaate hue) : Kaun hai? Saamne aao... Kiski awaaz hai ye jo mere sarr me gunj rahi hai...!?

Tabhi wahi awaaz firse uske mann me gunji...

Par iss baar uske bol alag bhaasha me the.

[Shaant! Mein System hu. Aur ab se tum mere master ho.]

Veer (darrte hue) : Kaun bol raha hai? Mujhe tum dikhayi kyu nahi de rahe?

[Mene kaha na Shaant! Mein ek system hu. Meri koi physical body nahi hai. Mein tumhare andar hu.]

Veer (ghabraate hue) : Me... Mere andar?

[Haa! Kya tumhe yaad hai kal tumhare saath kya hua tha? Tumhara accident hua tha. Aur tum marrte marrte bache ho tumhe pata hai? Yadi mene samay par madad na ki hoti toh tum zinda nahi bachte.]

Veer (chillaate hue) : Kesi madad? Tum mere andar kese ho? Baahar aao...

[Arre! Itni zorr se mat chillao. Andar mann me hi kaho jo kuch bhi kehna hai. Mein tumhaare mann, dil, dimag sab se judd chuki hu. Aur tumhare mann ki baat sunn sakti hu. Aise chillaoge toh log tumhe pagal samjhenge.]

Aur uss vichitr mann ki awaaz sunn Veer apne mann me hi baat karne laga.

Veer : Meri... Meri kuch samajh me nahi aa raha hai. Ye sab kya chal raha hai?

[I know! Abhi tumhe samajhne me time lagega. Bas itna samajh lo ki mein tumhe koi nuksaan nahi pohuchaane wali. Ulta mein tumhari madad ke liye yaha hu.]

Veer : Meri madad?

Veer ne kaapte hue pucha.

[Haa! Tumhari madad! Mein tumhari madad karungi. Hamesha tum apni kismat ko koste the na? Ab mein tumhara saath dungi aur tum apni kismat palat ke rakh doge.]

Veer : Wo... Wo kaise?

[Yahi toh mera kaam hai. Yadi mera istemaal sahi se kiya. Toh tum duniya par raaj kar sakte ho.]

Veer : Sach!?

[Ekdum sach.]

Veer : Toh kya tum ladki ho? Kyuki tumhari awaaz ladkiyo jesi hai.

[Nahi! Mein na hi ladki hu na hi ladka. Mein kisi bhi gender me apne aap ko dhaal sakti hu. Mene tumhaare mann me jhaank ke dekha toh pata chala tumhe ladkiya zyada pasand hai ladko ke muqaable isliye mene apni awaaz ladki ki rakhi hui hai.]

Veer (blush) : Huh? Obviously Mujhe ladkiya pasand hai. Ladke nahi. I'm not gay...

[Yadi kaho toh awaaz ladke ki rakh lu!?]

Veer : Huh? Nahi! Nahi! Aise hi theek hai.

[Hehehe~]

Veer : ..........

[Accha! Ab apni aankhein band karo aur mann me hi kaho ~ Status]

Veer (aankhein band karte hue) : Status!

Aur Veer ke itna kehte hi uske mann me ek window khul gayi,

[ Name - Veer
Age - 20
Status - Abandoned student.

Stats :
Strength - 3/100
Intelligence - 4/100
Agility - 3/100
Endurance - 7/100
Appearance - 6/100

Talents - 0
Points - 0 ]

Ye sab dekh ke Veer ke hosh hi udd gaye.

[Baap re Baap! Tumhara toh boht bura haal hai. Itne bekaar stats mene kabhi nahi dekhe apne life cycle me. Ye kya? Zero talents? Baap re!!! Tum reh kese liye itne din? Hmm? Endurance bas zyada hai tumhara. Arre haa! Itni maar khaoge toh ye toh zaahir si hi baat hai. Hehehe~]

Veer : Udaa lo... Tum bhi mera mazaak uda lo... Ab toh mujhe aadat pad gayi hai.

[Hey! Hey! Sorry! But ab tension mat lo. Mein hu na. Mein tumhe dekhna kaha se kaha pohucha dungi.]

Veer : Aur tum aisa kyu karogi? Kya milega tumhe aisa karke?

[Mera kaam hi yahi hai. Mera kaam hai logo ko sabse sarvashreshth banaana.]

Veer : Toh tumne mujhe hi kyu chuna?

[Mene chuna nahi. Jab mein yaha se guzri toh tum hi paas me the aur mein tumhare shareer me pravesh kar gayi. Apne aap ko Lucky keh sakte ho tum.]

Veer (shocked) : Yaha se guzri matlab?

[Uss baare me mein zyaada baat nahi kar sakti.]

Veer : Toh? Toh Doctor ko pata nahi chala? Ki tum mere andar ho?

[Hahaha~ Doctor kya... Tumhaari Prithvi me rehne waala koi bhi vyakti ye nahi bata sakta ki tumhaare andar mein maujood hu.]

Aur ek aur jhatka Veer ko. Ye kya bala ghuss gayi achanak se uske andar aake?

Veer : Aur tumhe Hindi kese aati hai??

[Arre buddhu abhi toh bataya, mein tumhare mann, dimaag aur dil se jud chuki hu. Aur abhi abhi toh seekhi tumhaare dimaag se hi. Isliye jitni Hindi tumhe aati hai utni hi mujhe bhi.]

Veer : O... Okay!

[Par tumhaare stats boht hi bekaar hai. Mujhe khud taras aa raha hai dekh ke. Tumhe jald se jald apne stats badhaane honge.]

Veer : Ye? Ye stats kya hai?

[Ye tumhari asli shamtaaye hai. Tumhari strength 3 hai yaani ki jo taaqat hai tumhare andar usse yadi number se darshaaya jae toh woh 3 hai. Intelligence matlab tumhari buddhi, agility tumhari furti, endurance tumhari sehan-sheelta aur appearance tumhare physical features yaani ki chehra body haath perr ye sab.]

Veer : Aur mein inhe badha sakta hu? Toh mere asli shareer me badlaav aaenge?

[Haa!]

Veer (shocked) : Baap re! Aise me toh mein fir...

[Tabhi toh kaha ki ab mein tumhari kismat palat ke rakh dungi.]

Veer : Par wo points kese badhenge?

[Missions karke. Samay samay par tumhe missions milenge aur jese jese tum unhe complete karoge tumhe points milenge. Unn points se tum apne stats badha paoge aur saath hi saath nayi skills khareed paoge. Saath hi saath jitni uplabdhiya aur naam kamaoge tumhe points milte rahenge.]

Veer : Mein kuch samjha nahi...

[Hmm! Tumhara intelligence kam hai na isliye abhi sab kuch tumhare bheje ke upar se jaega. Bas itna samajh lo. Jese jese tum missions poore karte jaoge, mera level aur saath hi saath tumhaara level badhta jaega. Jiske chalte aur bhi anokhi skills unlock hoti jaengi. Dhyaan rahe! Yadi mission ko time limit me poora nahi kiya gaya. Toh tum hamesha hamesha ke liye mujhe kho doge.]

Veer : O... Okay!!

[Hmm! Ek aur akhiri baat. Kabhi bhi... Kabhi bhi ghamand mat karna. Jis din tumhe ghamand aana shuru hua, uss din se hi tumhara ant bhi shuru ho jaega.]

System ki baat sunn Veer ke raungte khade ho gaye. Apna thook nigalte hue usne firse kaha.

Veer : Mujhe ab bhi yakeen nahi ho raha ki duniya me aisi bhi koi cheez hoti hai.

[Duniya me aisi koi cheez nahi hai. Saari duniya me mein hi ek hu jo tumhare andar iss waqt maujood hu. Mein iss planet se nahi hu. Aur planet ke baahar kesi kesi cheeze maujood hai ye tum insaan soch bhi nahi sakte.]

Veer : .........

Iske pehle ki Veer kuch aage keh paata, Nidhi uske ward me aa gayi.

Darwaaze ki aahat se jab Veer ne palat ke dekha toh apni ma'am ko dekh kar chaunk gaya.

Veer : Ma'am!?

Nidhi : Ohh God!! Finally... Tumhe hosh aa gaya.

Aur Nidhi tezz kadmo ke saath aage aayi aur Veer ka haath thaam lii...

Veer (shocked) : Nidhi Ma'am aap yaha!?

Nidhi ne fir saari baat usse bata dii. Jab usse pata chala ki Brijesh ne uska call nahi uthaaya tha toh uske chehre par dard bhari muskuraahat aa gayi. Nidhi usse bechain bhari nazro se dekh rahi thi.

Veer : Aapne mere liye medical fees dii!?

Nidhi : Mene toh sirf advance diya tha baad me tumhaare Dad ne saari pay kii.

Kehte hue usne Veer ka haath ek baar fir thaam liya.

Nidhi (bauhe sikodte hue) : Tumhe... Tumhe bura lag raha hoga na? Tumhare Maa Baap tumhe dekhne tak nahi aaye. Jese maano unhe koi parvaah hi nahi hai tumhari.

Veer (smiles) : Isme koi nayi baat nahi hai Ma'am. Ye sab toh roz ka hai. I'm not surprised. Haha~

Uski wo fake hassi dekh pata nahi kyu, par Nidhi ko apne dil me atyant hi dard mehsoos hua. Aur usne Veer ka haath aur zorr se bheench liya.

Tabhi Veer ke andar firse awaaz gunji,

[Apne mann me kaho 'Check' aur fir iss aurat ki taraf dekho.]

System ki baat sunn Veer ne wesa hi kiya aur jese hi usne check kehte hue Nidhi ko dekha toh uske hosh hi udd gaye.

Nidhi ke sar ke upar hawa me ek window mandraa rahi thi jisme kuch shabd likhe hue the ~

[ Name - Nidhi
Age - 30
Status - Divorce pending.

Bio - Nidhi ki ek beti hai jiska naam hai Juhi. Saath hi ek beta hai jisse wo apne saath rakhna chaahti hai par uske Pati Rajat ne usse apne paas rakha hua hai. Rajat se uska rishta kharaab chal raha hai jiske chalte Nidhi akeli apni beti ke saath ek ghar me rent dete hue rehti hai kyuki wo apne mata pita par bojh nahi bann na chaahti. Uski Maa ko do din pehle hi dil ka daura pada tha aur wo bhi issi hospital me bharti hai. Nidhi ki life boht hi dukh aur pareshaniyo se bhari hui hai.

Favourability - 20
Relationship - Student - Teacher ]

Ye sab kuch Veer ko Nidhi ke sar ke upar nazar aa raha tha.

Veer (ghabraate hue) : Ye... Ye aapke sar pe...

Nidhi : Huh? Kya hua? Mere sar pe!?

[Arre Buddhu! Ye sirf tum dekh sakte ho? Baaki koi nahi.]

Veer : Nahi! Ma'am! Wo mein aise hi...

'Itna toh mein ek saal me nahi jaan paaya Ma'am ke baare me jitna abhi jaan gaya. Kya kamaal cheez hai ye.'

Usne mann me socha.

'System? Ye favourability 20 ka kya matlab hai?'

[Iska matlab hai ki wo tumhaare baare me kya sochti hai. Ek prakaar se uske mann me tumhare liye jo bhaav hai usko darshaata hai.]

'Toh ye 20 matlab?'

[Matlab ki abhi wo tumhare liye sirf 20 favourability rakhti hai. Jese jese tumhara aur uska relation accha hoega ye badhta jaega. Yadi ye 80 ke upar hai matlab ki koi tumhe chaahta hai. Yadi ye 90 ke upar hai matlab ki koi tumhe dil se pyaar karta hai. Aur yadi 100 hai matlab ki dil-o-jaan se pyaar karne waala vyakti.]

'Samjha!'

Nidhi : Veer? Kaha kho gaye?

Jab Nidhi ne chutki bajaate hue apna haath uske saamne hilaaya toh Veer jese apne khayaalo se baahar aaya.

Veer : Haa! Wo mein... Ma'am...

Nidhi (haath thaamte hue) : Just forget about everything Veer! Aur kuch mat socho. Bas tumhe jald se jald thik hona hai. Okay? And don't think tumhara koi nahi hai. I'm with you okay? Abhi tum rest karo ab. Mein ab kal shaam ko hi aaungi. Aaj mene wese hi leave lii thi. Roz nahi le sakti.

Veer : Jii ma'am! Thank you!

Nidhi : Thank you kesa isme...?? *Smiles* Take care okay?

Veer : Hmmm!

Aur Nidhi uske ward se chali gayi. Veer keval Nidhi ko jaate hue dekhta raha.

Nidhi 30 saal ki ek aisi husn ki mallika prateet hoti thi ki maano keher hi dhaa de. Par limited paiso aur din bhar ki mehnat aur thakaan ke chalte jaise uska husn poora khil ke nahi jhalak paa raha tha. Kyuki wo dhyaan hi nahi de paati thi apne upar.

Ye dekh Veer ko waqai taras aa raha tha uss par. Uski khud ki Maa yaha admit thi par uske bawajood Nidhi ne uski madad ki aur uske liye advance me paise bhi bharwae. Wahi dusri orr uske gharwale jo saari sampatti se sampann hai unhone ek shan bhi nahi socha ki wo jee raha hai ya marr raha hai.

*Ding*

Aur achaanak hi uske dimaag me ghanti baji aur uske saamne ek window khuli.

[Mission : Solve Nidhi's problem.
Reward : ?? points
Time limit : 1 year ]

'Huh? Mission?'

[Haa! Mission mil chuka hai tumhe.]

'Nidhi Ma'am ki problem? Konsi problem?'

[Ye toh tumhe khud dekhna padega.]

'O... Okay!'

[Ab tumhara safar shuru ho chuka hai. Ya toh tum yahi ke yahi reh jaoge ya meri madad paa ke ek Badshaah banoge. Toh bolo? Kesa jeevan chahiye? Ek aam aadmi ki tarah jesa ki tum abhi jee rahe the ya fir ek Badshaah ka?]

Sawaal sunn ke Veer ne socha hi nahi. Usse pata tha usse kya jawaab dena hai.

Veer (smiles) : Ek Baadshah!!!!
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