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Update - 4 ~ In the Hospital​

Ab tak...

Ladki peeche mud window se uss ladke ko dekh rahi thi, uska nichla honth daato tale zorr se daba hua tha ki maano khoon hi nikal aae. Aankho me halke aasu bhi aa chuke the.

"I'm sorry..." Usne mann me kaha.

Aur wo car palak jhapakte hi logo ki nazro se ojhal ho gayi.

Idhar accident dekh aas paas ke jo bhi log dukaan ke neeche baarish se bachne ke liye khade hue the wo daudte hue aae aur Veer ko uthaane lage.

Ab aage...

"Arre... Arre... Uthao... Uthao..."
"Jaldi... Jaldi..."
"Car wala madarchod bhaag gaya..."
"Uthwao bhailog..."

Aur waha maujood log forun hi Veer ke paas aake usse uthaane lage. Bina baarish ki parvaah kiye.
Yadi uske parivaar waale hote toh kya woh usse iss waqt uthaate?

Shayad haa? Ya shayad nahi!?

"Arre isse toh boht zyaada chot aayi hai, khoon beh raha hai kaafi, jaldi ambulance ko call karo koi..."

Waha khade ek aadmi ne chillaaya toh agle ne forun hi 108 dial karte hue ambulance bulwa lii.

Abhi wo log savdhaani se Veer ko utha hi rahe the ki itne me ussi mod se ek aur car aayi par bheed ke kaaran uss car ko rukna pada.

Car waale ne jab horn maari toh usse itni gaaliya padi ki usse na chaahte hue bhi rukna pada.

"Dhatttt behanchod!! Iski maa ki aankh..." Car waale ne steering pe zorr se haath maarte hue chillaaya.

Dusra aadmi : Ab kuch nahi ho sakta... Car ghuma lo...

Pehla aadmi : Boss ko pata chala toh woh hamaari gardan na udaa de...

Dusra aadmi : Mein Boss ko samjha dunga... Tum car ghuma lo...

Pehla aadmi : Thik hai.

Aur wo car reverse karke waha se nikal gaye.

Idhar log Veer ko utha ke ek shop ke neeche lita ke uski choto par rumaal ya kapda baandh ke jese tese khoon rokne ki koshish kar rahe the.

Kuch derr me hi ambulance aayi aur Veer ko leke hospital ki orr chali gayi.

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Veer ke ghar me...

Sabhi log iss waqt Manorath ke kamre me maujood the. Manorath apne bistar par baitha hua tha toh wahi baaki sabhi khade hue usse hi dekh rahe the.

Manorath : Aaj tak prasaad ka aisa apmaan hamaare ghar me kisi ne bhi nahi kiya.

Pranjal : Dada jii! Veer ko waqai aisa nahi karna tha.

Kavya : Par... Dada jii! Wo toh... Unhone jaan bujh ke nahi kiya hoga...

Pranjal : Kavya? Ye tum kya keh rahi ho? Pehli baar maante hai ki uska perr fisal gaya aur wo vase toot gaya par dusri baar bhi?

Pranjal ki baat sunn bechaari Kavya kuch virodh hi na kar paayi aur sar jhuka lii.

Sumitra : Jeth jii... Aapko aise... Veer ko ghar se nahi nikaalna tha.

Brijesh : Mene jo bhi kiya hai boht soch samajh ke kiya hai. Mein ye kadam pehle hi uthaane waala tha par hamesha Papa jii ke kaaran ruk jaata tha. Lekin aaj toh usne hadd hi paar kar dii. Akhir uss kameeni ki kokh se jo paida hua hai, aisa hi hona tha... Mere toh ek bhi gud nahi hai usme...

Manorath : Wo jaisa bhi hai iss parivar ka hissa hai. Usse jaake wapas le aao. Abhi zyada dur nahi gaya hoga.

Brijesh : Bilkul bhi nahi Papa jii. Mene aapko pehle bhi bol ke rakha hai. Ki jis din ye apni hadd paar karega uss din mein isse ghar se nikaal dunga. Aur aaj yahi hua hai... Ab mein usse iss ghar me ghusne tak nahi dunga... Aap apna faisla sunaaiye Papa jii...

Manorath : Toh tum log usse wapas nahi laoge?

Brijesh : Bilkul bhi nahi...

Manorath : Toh fir mera bhi yahi faisla hai. Zameen aur jaydaad kisko milegi ye bhi tab hi nirnay hoga jab parivaar ka harr ek sadasya ghar me maujood hoga.

Brijesh : Papa jii!??

Vivek : Dada jii!? Ye aap...!?

Manorath ke faisle se maano sabko ek jhatka sa laga. Jiss pal ke liye wo sabhi bekaraar the ki akhir kisko zameen aur jaydaad dii jaegi wo pal toh aaya hi nahi. Ulta ab jab tak ghar me Veer nahi aa jaata tab tak faisla tal chuka tha.

Manorath ke paas dherr saari zameen thi jiski keemat crores me thi aur jaydaad bhi. Aur ye sab kuch ghar ke ussi sadasya ko milne waala tha jo Manorath ki aankho me iske liye sahi tha.

Uske 2 petrol pump bhi rahe jo usne apne beto ko de diye the. Ek petrol pump ka maalik jaha Brijesh tha toh wahi dusre ka maalik Karunesh.

Karunesh ne dimaag se paisa kamaate hue apne bete Vivek ki upar lagaya aur aaj Vivek ki khud ki ek automobiles ki company thi. Bhale hi worldwide nahi thi abhi par uska business zorro shoro se chal raha tha.

Karunesh ki badi beti Arohi aur choti beti Kavya, Veer ke hi college me thi aur wo dono bhi B.Tech kar rahi thi. Jaha Arohi aur Veer ki branch same thi ~ IT.

Wahi Kavya CS branch se belong karti thi.

Pranjal bhi same college me tha par wo B.com kar raha tha. Uski building alag thi par saari buildings saath me hi thi, jis kaaran wo break ke time Arohi aur Kavya se milne jaata rehta tha.

Karunesh ko apne bete betiyo ki koi chinta nahi thi.

Par Brijesh ka aisa nahi tha. Brijesh ko bhi ek petrol pump diya gaya tha Manorath dwaara. Usne bhi dimaag se apni ek luxury hotel khulwaayi jo sheher me kaafi mashoor thi. Jaha wo petrol pump sambhaalta tha toh wahi uski hotel uski dusri patni Shweta sambhaalti thi.

Shweta ke hi saath uski beti, Bhumika bhi uska saath deti thi.

Aur aaj yahi faisla liya jaane wala tha ki kisko zameen aur jaydaad milegi.

Par sab kuch dhara ka dhara reh gaya.

Manorath : Mera faisla saaf hai. Jao aur mujhe akela chorr do abhi.

Vivek : Par Dada jii...

Manorath : Mene kaha jao... Aur Brijesh... Yadi tum Veer ko wapas nahi laane waale toh mujhe uske baare me harr cheez batao... Iss waqt kaha hai woh... Kiske ghar theher raha hai? Wo mera pota hai. Mein jaan'na chaahta hu wo sahi salaamat hai ya nahi?

Brijesh : Thik...

Aur ghar ke mukhiya ki awaaz sunn sabhi bemann waha se nikal gaye.

Idhar kamre me aate hi Vivek Pranjal pe toot pada.

Vivek : Chote ye kya kar diya tune? Ye daav toh ulta hi pad gaya. Dada jii ne toh faisla hi taal diya. Ab jab tak wo Veer nahi aa jaata tab tak Dada jii koi faisla nahi sunaenge.

Pranjal : Bhaiya! Ab mujhe kya pata tha aisa ho jaega? Mene toh yahi socha tha aaj Veer ko Dada ji ki nazro me gira dunga toh Dada jii uska naam lenge hi nahi. Par mujhe nahi pata tha Tau jii usse ghar se baahar hi nikaal denge.

Ragini : Mene kaha tha ye kuch zyada hi ho gaya hai.

Pranjal : Aap log tension mat lo. Hum log kese bhi karke Dada jii ko mana lenge aur wo jald hi faisla le lenge. Filhaal ek musibat toh gayi.

Vivek : Hmm!! Par chote tune wo sab kiya kese?

Vivek ke sawaal karne par Pranjal ne muskuraate hue jeb se kuch nikaala aur unn dono ko dikhaya.

Pranjal : Haha! Bhaiya! Saara kamaal iska hai.

Vivek (hairaani me) : Ye toh... Ye toh... Ye toh tufoil hai chote...

Pranjal : Haha! Haa bhaiya! Aapke hi yaha se laaya hu.

Tufoil ek aisa slippery oil jisse automobiles me use kiya jaata hai. Na keval ye automobiles ke liye balki ye apni slipness ke liye bhi jaana jaata hai.

Pranjal : Ye mene floor par daal diya tha. Aur mein Veer ko wahi se le gaya jaha ye oil mene daala tha. Bas! Fir kya tha, uska geela joota jese hi uspe pada, Veer fisla aur vase seedha neeche... Hahaha!

Ragini : Par wo prasaad ka kya?

Pranjal : Bhabhi! Wo bhi iska hi kamaal hai. Mene sleepers ke neeche bhi isse laga ke rakha hua tha.

Ragini (smiles) : Waah! Maan gaye tumhe bhi. Par wo chot ka kya jo Veer ko pehle se hi lagi hui thi?

Pranjal : Wo bhi mere kehne par hau tha Bhabhi. Mere kayi chelo me se ek hai wo Ajay. Mene usko keh ke rakha tha ki aaj pehla din hai toh koi bhi bahana bana ke aaj jamm ke thukaayi kar dena uss Veer ki... Aur usne yahi kiya hahahaha!

Vivek : Par chote, wo oil zameen par nazar kyu nahi aaya?

Pranjal : Kese aaega Bhaiya? Mene usse carpet ke ekdum bagal se giraaya tha hahaha!

Aur uske saath hi Vivek bhi hassne laga. Ragini muskuraate hue dono ko dekh rahi thi. Jaha ye jashn mana rahe the toh wahi koi aur tha jo iss waqt apni saaso se ladd raha tha.

***

Hospital...

Nurse : Iski haalat boht critical hai Doctor.

Doctor : I know... Humse jo bann padega hum karenge.

Nurse : Jii! But iski family...!? Iska mobile toh kaam hi nahi kar raha hai.

Doctor : Mene ward boy ko bola hai wo iske phone ki SIM apne phone me daalke iske ghar waalo ko call karega.

Nurse : Hmm!!

Aur Veer ka treatment shuru ho chuka tha.

Ward boy ne jab Veer ki SIM daal ke Brijesh ko call kiya toh Brijesh ne ye soch ke call nahi uthaya ki zaroor Veer ne paise maangne ke liye phone kiya hoga aur gusse me usne apna phone hi band kar diya.

Ward boy ne jab Sumitra ko call kiya toh call lag hi nahi raha tha. Kese lagta? Pranjal ne apni maa ke phone me Veer ka number block jo kar ke rakha tha.

Fir usne akhiri number jo ki Kavya ka tha usse call kiya.

Idhar iss waqt Kavya Arohi aur Pranjal ke saath hi baithi hui thi. Number dekhte hi Kavya soch me pad gayi.

'Veer Bhaiya mujhe kyu call kar rahe hai?? Phone utha lu? Thik hai utha leti hu.'

Par iske pehle ki wo phone utha paati, Pranjal ne uska phone chhina liya.

Pranjal : Zara dekho toh... Veer ab hamari Kavya ko phone laga raha hai. Kyu Kavya?

Kavya : Phone dijiye Bhaiya.

Pranjal : Nahi! Zaroor ab apni pyari behan se paise maangne ke liye phone kar raha hoga. Kyuki baahar ab usse paiso ki zaroorat toh padegi hi...

Aur usne forun hi phone kaat ke uska number hi block kar diya.

Pranjal : Ab tumhe disturbance nahi hoga behan hahaha!

Kavya : Hmm?

Pranjal : Accha wo sab chorro, chalo hum sab pizza mangwaate hai.

Kavya : Mera mann nahi hai Bhaiya aap hi khao. Aaj Veer Bhaiya ke saath itna sab kuch ho gaya aur aapko pizza ki padi hai?

Pranjal : Arre ye kya baat hui yaar. Kavya tum ab bhi usse apna bhai maanti ho? Wo bhai kehne laayak nahi hai Kavya. Kherr chorro! Arohi didi aap toh khaogi na?

Arohi : Nahi!

Pranjal : Thik hai toh mein hi mangwa leta hu...

Aur wo waha se chala jaata hai.

Kavya apna phone liye sochti rehti hai ki akhir Veer ne usse kyu call lagaya hoga. Wo sochti hai ki agli baar yadi phone aaya toh woh zaroor uthaegi. Par usse kya pata tha ki Pranjal ne Veer ka number hi block kar diya tha.

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Idhar hospital me ek ward me ek ladki apni Maa ke paas baithi hui thi...

Ladki : Maa! Ab mein chalti hu... Tum dhyaan rakhna theek!

Aurat : Haa beta! Mujhe kya... Tumhaare Papa toh rahenge hi na mere saath. Ab tum jao... Raat ho rahi hai beta. Aur fir, Juhi akeli pados me zyada derr nahi reh paegi. Jaa beta...

Ladki : Jii Maa! Chalti hu. Tum dhyaan rakhna apna haa!? Koi bhi dikkat ho toh...

Aurat : Arre baba! Haa! Pata hai mujhe... Jaa ab tu...

Ladki : Thik!

Aur ladki apni Maa ke ward se baahar nikal aati hai.

Abhi wo aage badh ke nikalne hi wali thi ki usne dekha ki uski Maa ke bagal waale ward ke baahar doctor aur ward boy ke beech behas ho rahi thi jisse dekh wo rukk gayi.

Doctor : Dekho kese bhi karke iske parivaar walo ko inform karo.... Kese bhi karke...

Ward boy : Arre Sir! Kisi ne phone hi nahi uthaaya...

Doctor : Haa toh lagaate raho... Nahi toh fir police ko inform karo kyuki uske shareer pe maar peet ke bhi nishaan hai.

Inn dono ki behas chal rahi thi ki tabhi wo ladki jigyaasa purvak aage badhi aur usne ward me jhaank ke dekha, jab usne patient ka chehra dekha toh ekdum hi chaunk gayi aur uske muh se tezz swar me nikla, "Veeeeeeerr!????"

Doctor (palat'te hue) : Aap? Aap janti hai isse?

Ladki : Huh? Mein... Haa! Wo mera student hai. Mein usse pichle ek saal se jaanti hu.

Doctor : Bhagwaan ka shuqr hai chalo koi toh mila... Aapka shubh naam?

Ladki : Nidhi...

Doctor : Okay toh Nidhi jii... Aap idhar aaiye zara mere saath.

Kuch derr baad...

Nidhi Veer ke college me Maths padhaati thi. Aur iss saal wo Veer ki hi class ki classteacher thi.

Wo Veer ko jaanti bhi thi. Bhale hi Veer padhne me hoshiyaar nahi tha par Veer sabse shaant baccha tha uski class me. Aur ho bhi kyu na? Uske dost hi nahi the.

Aaj Nidhi apni Maa jinhe kal hi achanak minor heart attack aa gaya tha unhe hi dekhne ke liye hospital me aayi hui thi. Par ittefaaq se usse Veer bhi yahi mil gaya.

Veer ke liye saari kaagzi kaam Nidhi ne kiya aur yaha tak ki apne Pita jii se Nidhi ne Veer ke liye medical fees bhi advanced me kuch jama karwane ko keh diya.

Sab kuch itni jaldi hua ki Nidhi ki khud samajh me nahi aaya. Aur iss waqt wo ward ke darwaaze ki window glass se jhaakte hue Veer ko dekh rahi thi aur soch me padi hui thi.

'Ye achanak... Ye Veer haadse me kese...!? Aur iske Maa Baap phone kyu nahi utha rahe hai!? Kese Maa Baap hai? Mujhe kal jaake unse baat karni padegi.'

Nidhi ye soch hospital se nikal gayi.

Par uske jaate Veer ki haalat bigadna shuru ho gayi thi.

Nurse : Doctor...

Doctor : I know...

*Beep Beep Beep*

Uski heart beat bilkul band hone ki kagaar par aa chuki thi.

Ki tabhi achaanak se aisa kuch hua jiske chalte uski heartbeat waapas se normal ho gayi.

Doctor : Phew... He's out of danger now.

Aur kuch derr baad hi Doctors aur nurse Veer ki haalat stable roop me chorr ke baahar aa gaye.

Par kisi ko nahi pata tha...

Ki jab uski saasein jaane hi waali thi...

Tab uske andar ek awaaz gunji thi...

Jo kisi ko sunaayi nahi dii thi...

Aur wo awaaz ke bol the...

[System has been activated.]
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!

शानदार जबरदस्त भाई

 

[andyking302]

Update - 5 ~ System Activation​

Ab tak...

Par kisi ko nahi pata tha...

Ki jab uski saasein jaane hi waali thi...

Tab uske andar ek awaaz gunji thi...

Jo kisi ko sunaayi nahi dii thi...

Aur wo awaaz ke bol the...

[System has been activated.]

Ab aage...

Veer ke accident ke kuch ghanto baad hi jab Brijesh ka phone baja tha aur screen par Veer naam jab usne dekha tha toh pata nahi kyu Brijesh ne call nahi uthaaya.

Shayad kuch derr pehle usne khud hi apne bete ko dhakke maar ke ghar se baahar nikaala tha iss kaaran vash? Ya fir wo abhi Veer ke muh se koi bhi baat nahi sunn'na chaahta tha. Kuch tha jo usse rok raha tha Veer se baat karne ke liye.

Ki tabhi uske phone par firse call aaya par ye uske khud ke vyakti ka tha.

Brijesh : Hello?

Aadmi : Saahab! Veer jii ka car se accident hua hai. Abhi wo xxxxxxxxxx hospital me bharti hai.

Aur ye sunte hi Brijesh uth khada hua. Aur forun hi hospital ke liye jaane laga.

***

Agle din Kavya college me apni soch me ghum thi.

'Veer bhaiya ka call uske baad se aaya hi nahi. Kya karu? Call back karu? Iske pehle unhone kabhi mujhe call nahi kiya fir achanak kal kyu? Kahi koi dikkat toh nahi? Kal unke beech mein call na kar saki thi...'

Aur ye soch wo call lagaati hai par call nahi laga. Kese lagta? Ward boy ne Veer ki SIM waapas se uske phone me jo daal dii thi.

Ant me Kavya uske whatsapp par message daal deti hai ye puchne ki wo theek hai ya nahi?

Idhar Nidhi din me hi Veer ke ghar gayi thi taaki wo jaan sake ki kyu uske Maa Baap ne call nahi uthaaya tha.

Jab wo waha pohuchi aur jesa ravaiyaa usne dekha Brijesh, Shweta aur baaki ghar waalo ka Veer ke prati ye dekh ke usse itna gussa aaya ki wo khud ko control na kar saki.

Nidhi ek Maa bhi thi. Uski khud ki beti abhi choti thi aur aise me wo jaanti thi ki ek parent hona kya hota hai. Aise me jab usne Brijesh aur Shweta ka behaviour dekha toh bas wo bhadak uthi.

Nidhi : Kese Maa Baap ho aap log? Aapka Beta waha apni zindagi se ladd raha hai aur aap logo ko koi chinta hi nahi hai? Yaha tak ki aapne usse apne ghar se baahar hi nikaal diya!?

Brijesh : Dekhiye Madam! Veer ab iss parivaar ka hissa nahi hai. Rahi baat paise ki toh uske medical kharcho ki bharpayi mein kar chuka hu par iske baad ab wo jaane ki wo kaha rahega kese rahega... Aur aap hamare parivaarik maamlo se dur rahe toh hi accha hoga.

Nidhi : Bhul se bhi aise Maa Baap na de bhagwaan kisi ko...

Aur Nidhi apni namm aankhe liye waha se bhaag aayi. Usse Veer ke liye waqai boht bura lag raha tha. Kaha wo khud ko badqismat samajhti thi par ab Veer ko dekh usse mehsoos hua ki kam se kam usse Maa Baap ka pyaar toh mil raha tha par Veer ko toh wo bhi nahi mila...

Na jaane kya kya saha hoga uss bechaare ne ab tak?

Na jaane kese kese din bitaaye honge Veer ne unke beech rehke?

Idhar hospital me abhi shaam ke waqt Veer ko hosh aa chuka tha.

"Arrrghhh!" Ek karaah ke saath uski aankh khuli.

Aankho se dhundhlapan hata, saamne ka nazaara nazar aaya.

Usne dekha ki wo hospital me hai. Aankhein uski jal rahi thi. Usse sab kuch jese yaad aane laga...

Kya hua tha?

Haan! Aur kal ki saari vardaat flashback ki tarah uske dimaag me mandraane lagi.

Aur usne apna sar pakad liya...

Aankho se aasu behne lage...

Abhi wo soch hi raha tha ki itne me uske andar ek awaaz gunji jiske chalte uske raungte khade ho gaye.

[Sytem has been activated. You are now the owner of the system.]

Veer (ghabraate hue) : Huh? Kaun? Kaun hai?

Awaaz se maano Veer bechaara darr hi gaya. Usne apna sar idhar udhar hilaate hue dekha par wo awaaz kaha se aayi usse kuch bhi pata na chala.

[Name the System!!]

Veer (chillaate hue) : Kaun hai? Mein puchta hu kaun hai?

Aur firse ek awaaz uske dimaag me gunji...

[Analyzing Hindi language from owner's mind...

Processing...

Process completed.

Hindi Language has been recognised.]

Veer (chillaate hue) : Kaun hai? Saamne aao... Kiski awaaz hai ye jo mere sarr me gunj rahi hai...!?

Tabhi wahi awaaz firse uske mann me gunji...

Par iss baar uske bol alag bhaasha me the.

[Shaant! Mein System hu. Aur ab se tum mere master ho.]

Veer (darrte hue) : Kaun bol raha hai? Mujhe tum dikhayi kyu nahi de rahe?

[Mene kaha na Shaant! Mein ek system hu. Meri koi physical body nahi hai. Mein tumhare andar hu.]

Veer (ghabraate hue) : Me... Mere andar?

[Haa! Kya tumhe yaad hai kal tumhare saath kya hua tha? Tumhara accident hua tha. Aur tum marrte marrte bache ho tumhe pata hai? Yadi mene samay par madad na ki hoti toh tum zinda nahi bachte.]

Veer (chillaate hue) : Kesi madad? Tum mere andar kese ho? Baahar aao...

[Arre! Itni zorr se mat chillao. Andar mann me hi kaho jo kuch bhi kehna hai. Mein tumhaare mann, dil, dimag sab se judd chuki hu. Aur tumhare mann ki baat sunn sakti hu. Aise chillaoge toh log tumhe pagal samjhenge.]

Aur uss vichitr mann ki awaaz sunn Veer apne mann me hi baat karne laga.

Veer : Meri... Meri kuch samajh me nahi aa raha hai. Ye sab kya chal raha hai?

[I know! Abhi tumhe samajhne me time lagega. Bas itna samajh lo ki mein tumhe koi nuksaan nahi pohuchaane wali. Ulta mein tumhari madad ke liye yaha hu.]

Veer : Meri madad?

Veer ne kaapte hue pucha.

[Haa! Tumhari madad! Mein tumhari madad karungi. Hamesha tum apni kismat ko koste the na? Ab mein tumhara saath dungi aur tum apni kismat palat ke rakh doge.]

Veer : Wo... Wo kaise?

[Yahi toh mera kaam hai. Yadi mera istemaal sahi se kiya. Toh tum duniya par raaj kar sakte ho.]

Veer : Sach!?

[Ekdum sach.]

Veer : Toh kya tum ladki ho? Kyuki tumhari awaaz ladkiyo jesi hai.

[Nahi! Mein na hi ladki hu na hi ladka. Mein kisi bhi gender me apne aap ko dhaal sakti hu. Mene tumhaare mann me jhaank ke dekha toh pata chala tumhe ladkiya zyada pasand hai ladko ke muqaable isliye mene apni awaaz ladki ki rakhi hui hai.]

Veer (blush) : Huh? Obviously Mujhe ladkiya pasand hai. Ladke nahi. I'm not gay...

[Yadi kaho toh awaaz ladke ki rakh lu!?]

Veer : Huh? Nahi! Nahi! Aise hi theek hai.

[Hehehe~]

Veer : ..........

[Accha! Ab apni aankhein band karo aur mann me hi kaho ~ Status]

Veer (aankhein band karte hue) : Status!

Aur Veer ke itna kehte hi uske mann me ek window khul gayi,

[ Name - Veer
Age - 20
Status - Abandoned student.

Stats :
Strength - 3/100
Intelligence - 4/100
Agility - 3/100
Endurance - 7/100
Appearance - 6/100

Talents - 0
Points - 0 ]

Ye sab dekh ke Veer ke hosh hi udd gaye.

[Baap re Baap! Tumhara toh boht bura haal hai. Itne bekaar stats mene kabhi nahi dekhe apne life cycle me. Ye kya? Zero talents? Baap re!!! Tum reh kese liye itne din? Hmm? Endurance bas zyada hai tumhara. Arre haa! Itni maar khaoge toh ye toh zaahir si hi baat hai. Hehehe~]

Veer : Udaa lo... Tum bhi mera mazaak uda lo... Ab toh mujhe aadat pad gayi hai.

[Hey! Hey! Sorry! But ab tension mat lo. Mein hu na. Mein tumhe dekhna kaha se kaha pohucha dungi.]

Veer : Aur tum aisa kyu karogi? Kya milega tumhe aisa karke?

[Mera kaam hi yahi hai. Mera kaam hai logo ko sabse sarvashreshth banaana.]

Veer : Toh tumne mujhe hi kyu chuna?

[Mene chuna nahi. Jab mein yaha se guzri toh tum hi paas me the aur mein tumhare shareer me pravesh kar gayi. Apne aap ko Lucky keh sakte ho tum.]

Veer (shocked) : Yaha se guzri matlab?

[Uss baare me mein zyaada baat nahi kar sakti.]

Veer : Toh? Toh Doctor ko pata nahi chala? Ki tum mere andar ho?

[Hahaha~ Doctor kya... Tumhaari Prithvi me rehne waala koi bhi vyakti ye nahi bata sakta ki tumhaare andar mein maujood hu.]

Aur ek aur jhatka Veer ko. Ye kya bala ghuss gayi achanak se uske andar aake?

Veer : Aur tumhe Hindi kese aati hai??

[Arre buddhu abhi toh bataya, mein tumhare mann, dimaag aur dil se jud chuki hu. Aur abhi abhi toh seekhi tumhaare dimaag se hi. Isliye jitni Hindi tumhe aati hai utni hi mujhe bhi.]

Veer : O... Okay!

[Par tumhaare stats boht hi bekaar hai. Mujhe khud taras aa raha hai dekh ke. Tumhe jald se jald apne stats badhaane honge.]

Veer : Ye? Ye stats kya hai?

[Ye tumhari asli shamtaaye hai. Tumhari strength 3 hai yaani ki jo taaqat hai tumhare andar usse yadi number se darshaaya jae toh woh 3 hai. Intelligence matlab tumhari buddhi, agility tumhari furti, endurance tumhari sehan-sheelta aur appearance tumhare physical features yaani ki chehra body haath perr ye sab.]

Veer : Aur mein inhe badha sakta hu? Toh mere asli shareer me badlaav aaenge?

[Haa!]

Veer (shocked) : Baap re! Aise me toh mein fir...

[Tabhi toh kaha ki ab mein tumhari kismat palat ke rakh dungi.]

Veer : Par wo points kese badhenge?

[Missions karke. Samay samay par tumhe missions milenge aur jese jese tum unhe complete karoge tumhe points milenge. Unn points se tum apne stats badha paoge aur saath hi saath nayi skills khareed paoge. Saath hi saath jitni uplabdhiya aur naam kamaoge tumhe points milte rahenge.]

Veer : Mein kuch samjha nahi...

[Hmm! Tumhara intelligence kam hai na isliye abhi sab kuch tumhare bheje ke upar se jaega. Bas itna samajh lo. Jese jese tum missions poore karte jaoge, mera level aur saath hi saath tumhaara level badhta jaega. Jiske chalte aur bhi anokhi skills unlock hoti jaengi. Dhyaan rahe! Yadi mission ko time limit me poora nahi kiya gaya. Toh tum hamesha hamesha ke liye mujhe kho doge.]

Veer : O... Okay!!

[Hmm! Ek aur akhiri baat. Kabhi bhi... Kabhi bhi ghamand mat karna. Jis din tumhe ghamand aana shuru hua, uss din se hi tumhara ant bhi shuru ho jaega.]

System ki baat sunn Veer ke raungte khade ho gaye. Apna thook nigalte hue usne firse kaha.

Veer : Mujhe ab bhi yakeen nahi ho raha ki duniya me aisi bhi koi cheez hoti hai.

[Duniya me aisi koi cheez nahi hai. Saari duniya me mein hi ek hu jo tumhare andar iss waqt maujood hu. Mein iss planet se nahi hu. Aur planet ke baahar kesi kesi cheeze maujood hai ye tum insaan soch bhi nahi sakte.]

Veer : .........

Iske pehle ki Veer kuch aage keh paata, Nidhi uske ward me aa gayi.

Darwaaze ki aahat se jab Veer ne palat ke dekha toh apni ma'am ko dekh kar chaunk gaya.

Veer : Ma'am!?

Nidhi : Ohh God!! Finally... Tumhe hosh aa gaya.

Aur Nidhi tezz kadmo ke saath aage aayi aur Veer ka haath thaam lii...

Veer (shocked) : Nidhi Ma'am aap yaha!?

Nidhi ne fir saari baat usse bata dii. Jab usse pata chala ki Brijesh ne uska call nahi uthaaya tha toh uske chehre par dard bhari muskuraahat aa gayi. Nidhi usse bechain bhari nazro se dekh rahi thi.

Veer : Aapne mere liye medical fees dii!?

Nidhi : Mene toh sirf advance diya tha baad me tumhaare Dad ne saari pay kii.

Kehte hue usne Veer ka haath ek baar fir thaam liya.

Nidhi (bauhe sikodte hue) : Tumhe... Tumhe bura lag raha hoga na? Tumhare Maa Baap tumhe dekhne tak nahi aaye. Jese maano unhe koi parvaah hi nahi hai tumhari.

Veer (smiles) : Isme koi nayi baat nahi hai Ma'am. Ye sab toh roz ka hai. I'm not surprised. Haha~

Uski wo fake hassi dekh pata nahi kyu, par Nidhi ko apne dil me atyant hi dard mehsoos hua. Aur usne Veer ka haath aur zorr se bheench liya.

Tabhi Veer ke andar firse awaaz gunji,

[Apne mann me kaho 'Check' aur fir iss aurat ki taraf dekho.]

System ki baat sunn Veer ne wesa hi kiya aur jese hi usne check kehte hue Nidhi ko dekha toh uske hosh hi udd gaye.

Nidhi ke sar ke upar hawa me ek window mandraa rahi thi jisme kuch shabd likhe hue the ~

[ Name - Nidhi
Age - 30
Status - Divorce pending.

Bio - Nidhi ki ek beti hai jiska naam hai Juhi. Saath hi ek beta hai jisse wo apne saath rakhna chaahti hai par uske Pati Rajat ne usse apne paas rakha hua hai. Rajat se uska rishta kharaab chal raha hai jiske chalte Nidhi akeli apni beti ke saath ek ghar me rent dete hue rehti hai kyuki wo apne mata pita par bojh nahi bann na chaahti. Uski Maa ko do din pehle hi dil ka daura pada tha aur wo bhi issi hospital me bharti hai. Nidhi ki life boht hi dukh aur pareshaniyo se bhari hui hai.

Favourability - 20
Relationship - Student - Teacher ]

Ye sab kuch Veer ko Nidhi ke sar ke upar nazar aa raha tha.

Veer (ghabraate hue) : Ye... Ye aapke sar pe...

Nidhi : Huh? Kya hua? Mere sar pe!?

[Arre Buddhu! Ye sirf tum dekh sakte ho? Baaki koi nahi.]

Veer : Nahi! Ma'am! Wo mein aise hi...

'Itna toh mein ek saal me nahi jaan paaya Ma'am ke baare me jitna abhi jaan gaya. Kya kamaal cheez hai ye.'

Usne mann me socha.

'System? Ye favourability 20 ka kya matlab hai?'

[Iska matlab hai ki wo tumhaare baare me kya sochti hai. Ek prakaar se uske mann me tumhare liye jo bhaav hai usko darshaata hai.]

'Toh ye 20 matlab?'

[Matlab ki abhi wo tumhare liye sirf 20 favourability rakhti hai. Jese jese tumhara aur uska relation accha hoega ye badhta jaega. Yadi ye 80 ke upar hai matlab ki koi tumhe chaahta hai. Yadi ye 90 ke upar hai matlab ki koi tumhe dil se pyaar karta hai. Aur yadi 100 hai matlab ki dil-o-jaan se pyaar karne waala vyakti.]

'Samjha!'

Nidhi : Veer? Kaha kho gaye?

Jab Nidhi ne chutki bajaate hue apna haath uske saamne hilaaya toh Veer jese apne khayaalo se baahar aaya.

Veer : Haa! Wo mein... Ma'am...

Nidhi (haath thaamte hue) : Just forget about everything Veer! Aur kuch mat socho. Bas tumhe jald se jald thik hona hai. Okay? And don't think tumhara koi nahi hai. I'm with you okay? Abhi tum rest karo ab. Mein ab kal shaam ko hi aaungi. Aaj mene wese hi leave lii thi. Roz nahi le sakti.

Veer : Jii ma'am! Thank you!

Nidhi : Thank you kesa isme...?? *Smiles* Take care okay?

Veer : Hmmm!

Aur Nidhi uske ward se chali gayi. Veer keval Nidhi ko jaate hue dekhta raha.

Nidhi 30 saal ki ek aisi husn ki mallika prateet hoti thi ki maano keher hi dhaa de. Par limited paiso aur din bhar ki mehnat aur thakaan ke chalte jaise uska husn poora khil ke nahi jhalak paa raha tha. Kyuki wo dhyaan hi nahi de paati thi apne upar.

Ye dekh Veer ko waqai taras aa raha tha uss par. Uski khud ki Maa yaha admit thi par uske bawajood Nidhi ne uski madad ki aur uske liye advance me paise bhi bharwae. Wahi dusri orr uske gharwale jo saari sampatti se sampann hai unhone ek shan bhi nahi socha ki wo jee raha hai ya marr raha hai.

*Ding*

Aur achaanak hi uske dimaag me ghanti baji aur uske saamne ek window khuli.

[Mission : Solve Nidhi's problem.
Reward : ?? points
Time limit : 1 year ]

'Huh? Mission?'

[Haa! Mission mil chuka hai tumhe.]

'Nidhi Ma'am ki problem? Konsi problem?'

[Ye toh tumhe khud dekhna padega.]

'O... Okay!'

[Ab tumhara safar shuru ho chuka hai. Ya toh tum yahi ke yahi reh jaoge ya meri madad paa ke ek Badshaah banoge. Toh bolo? Kesa jeevan chahiye? Ek aam aadmi ki tarah jesa ki tum abhi jee rahe the ya fir ek Badshaah ka?]

Sawaal sunn ke Veer ne socha hi nahi. Usse pata tha usse kya jawaab dena hai.

Veer (smiles) : Ek Baadshah!!!!
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!

शानदार जबरदस्त लाजवाब भाई

 

[andyking302]

Update - 5 ~ System Activation​

Ab tak...

Par kisi ko nahi pata tha...

Ki jab uski saasein jaane hi waali thi...

Tab uske andar ek awaaz gunji thi...

Jo kisi ko sunaayi nahi dii thi...

Aur wo awaaz ke bol the...

[System has been activated.]

Ab aage...

Veer ke accident ke kuch ghanto baad hi jab Brijesh ka phone baja tha aur screen par Veer naam jab usne dekha tha toh pata nahi kyu Brijesh ne call nahi uthaaya.

Shayad kuch derr pehle usne khud hi apne bete ko dhakke maar ke ghar se baahar nikaala tha iss kaaran vash? Ya fir wo abhi Veer ke muh se koi bhi baat nahi sunn'na chaahta tha. Kuch tha jo usse rok raha tha Veer se baat karne ke liye.

Ki tabhi uske phone par firse call aaya par ye uske khud ke vyakti ka tha.

Brijesh : Hello?

Aadmi : Saahab! Veer jii ka car se accident hua hai. Abhi wo xxxxxxxxxx hospital me bharti hai.

Aur ye sunte hi Brijesh uth khada hua. Aur forun hi hospital ke liye jaane laga.

***

Agle din Kavya college me apni soch me ghum thi.

'Veer bhaiya ka call uske baad se aaya hi nahi. Kya karu? Call back karu? Iske pehle unhone kabhi mujhe call nahi kiya fir achanak kal kyu? Kahi koi dikkat toh nahi? Kal unke beech mein call na kar saki thi...'

Aur ye soch wo call lagaati hai par call nahi laga. Kese lagta? Ward boy ne Veer ki SIM waapas se uske phone me jo daal dii thi.

Ant me Kavya uske whatsapp par message daal deti hai ye puchne ki wo theek hai ya nahi?

Idhar Nidhi din me hi Veer ke ghar gayi thi taaki wo jaan sake ki kyu uske Maa Baap ne call nahi uthaaya tha.

Jab wo waha pohuchi aur jesa ravaiyaa usne dekha Brijesh, Shweta aur baaki ghar waalo ka Veer ke prati ye dekh ke usse itna gussa aaya ki wo khud ko control na kar saki.

Nidhi ek Maa bhi thi. Uski khud ki beti abhi choti thi aur aise me wo jaanti thi ki ek parent hona kya hota hai. Aise me jab usne Brijesh aur Shweta ka behaviour dekha toh bas wo bhadak uthi.

Nidhi : Kese Maa Baap ho aap log? Aapka Beta waha apni zindagi se ladd raha hai aur aap logo ko koi chinta hi nahi hai? Yaha tak ki aapne usse apne ghar se baahar hi nikaal diya!?

Brijesh : Dekhiye Madam! Veer ab iss parivaar ka hissa nahi hai. Rahi baat paise ki toh uske medical kharcho ki bharpayi mein kar chuka hu par iske baad ab wo jaane ki wo kaha rahega kese rahega... Aur aap hamare parivaarik maamlo se dur rahe toh hi accha hoga.

Nidhi : Bhul se bhi aise Maa Baap na de bhagwaan kisi ko...

Aur Nidhi apni namm aankhe liye waha se bhaag aayi. Usse Veer ke liye waqai boht bura lag raha tha. Kaha wo khud ko badqismat samajhti thi par ab Veer ko dekh usse mehsoos hua ki kam se kam usse Maa Baap ka pyaar toh mil raha tha par Veer ko toh wo bhi nahi mila...

Na jaane kya kya saha hoga uss bechaare ne ab tak?

Na jaane kese kese din bitaaye honge Veer ne unke beech rehke?

Idhar hospital me abhi shaam ke waqt Veer ko hosh aa chuka tha.

"Arrrghhh!" Ek karaah ke saath uski aankh khuli.

Aankho se dhundhlapan hata, saamne ka nazaara nazar aaya.

Usne dekha ki wo hospital me hai. Aankhein uski jal rahi thi. Usse sab kuch jese yaad aane laga...

Kya hua tha?

Haan! Aur kal ki saari vardaat flashback ki tarah uske dimaag me mandraane lagi.

Aur usne apna sar pakad liya...

Aankho se aasu behne lage...

Abhi wo soch hi raha tha ki itne me uske andar ek awaaz gunji jiske chalte uske raungte khade ho gaye.

[Sytem has been activated. You are now the owner of the system.]

Veer (ghabraate hue) : Huh? Kaun? Kaun hai?

Awaaz se maano Veer bechaara darr hi gaya. Usne apna sar idhar udhar hilaate hue dekha par wo awaaz kaha se aayi usse kuch bhi pata na chala.

[Name the System!!]

Veer (chillaate hue) : Kaun hai? Mein puchta hu kaun hai?

Aur firse ek awaaz uske dimaag me gunji...

[Analyzing Hindi language from owner's mind...

Processing...

Process completed.

Hindi Language has been recognised.]

Veer (chillaate hue) : Kaun hai? Saamne aao... Kiski awaaz hai ye jo mere sarr me gunj rahi hai...!?

Tabhi wahi awaaz firse uske mann me gunji...

Par iss baar uske bol alag bhaasha me the.

[Shaant! Mein System hu. Aur ab se tum mere master ho.]

Veer (darrte hue) : Kaun bol raha hai? Mujhe tum dikhayi kyu nahi de rahe?

[Mene kaha na Shaant! Mein ek system hu. Meri koi physical body nahi hai. Mein tumhare andar hu.]

Veer (ghabraate hue) : Me... Mere andar?

[Haa! Kya tumhe yaad hai kal tumhare saath kya hua tha? Tumhara accident hua tha. Aur tum marrte marrte bache ho tumhe pata hai? Yadi mene samay par madad na ki hoti toh tum zinda nahi bachte.]

Veer (chillaate hue) : Kesi madad? Tum mere andar kese ho? Baahar aao...

[Arre! Itni zorr se mat chillao. Andar mann me hi kaho jo kuch bhi kehna hai. Mein tumhaare mann, dil, dimag sab se judd chuki hu. Aur tumhare mann ki baat sunn sakti hu. Aise chillaoge toh log tumhe pagal samjhenge.]

Aur uss vichitr mann ki awaaz sunn Veer apne mann me hi baat karne laga.

Veer : Meri... Meri kuch samajh me nahi aa raha hai. Ye sab kya chal raha hai?

[I know! Abhi tumhe samajhne me time lagega. Bas itna samajh lo ki mein tumhe koi nuksaan nahi pohuchaane wali. Ulta mein tumhari madad ke liye yaha hu.]

Veer : Meri madad?

Veer ne kaapte hue pucha.

[Haa! Tumhari madad! Mein tumhari madad karungi. Hamesha tum apni kismat ko koste the na? Ab mein tumhara saath dungi aur tum apni kismat palat ke rakh doge.]

Veer : Wo... Wo kaise?

[Yahi toh mera kaam hai. Yadi mera istemaal sahi se kiya. Toh tum duniya par raaj kar sakte ho.]

Veer : Sach!?

[Ekdum sach.]

Veer : Toh kya tum ladki ho? Kyuki tumhari awaaz ladkiyo jesi hai.

[Nahi! Mein na hi ladki hu na hi ladka. Mein kisi bhi gender me apne aap ko dhaal sakti hu. Mene tumhaare mann me jhaank ke dekha toh pata chala tumhe ladkiya zyada pasand hai ladko ke muqaable isliye mene apni awaaz ladki ki rakhi hui hai.]

Veer (blush) : Huh? Obviously Mujhe ladkiya pasand hai. Ladke nahi. I'm not gay...

[Yadi kaho toh awaaz ladke ki rakh lu!?]

Veer : Huh? Nahi! Nahi! Aise hi theek hai.

[Hehehe~]

Veer : ..........

[Accha! Ab apni aankhein band karo aur mann me hi kaho ~ Status]

Veer (aankhein band karte hue) : Status!

Aur Veer ke itna kehte hi uske mann me ek window khul gayi,

[ Name - Veer
Age - 20
Status - Abandoned student.

Stats :
Strength - 3/100
Intelligence - 4/100
Agility - 3/100
Endurance - 7/100
Appearance - 6/100

Talents - 0
Points - 0 ]

Ye sab dekh ke Veer ke hosh hi udd gaye.

[Baap re Baap! Tumhara toh boht bura haal hai. Itne bekaar stats mene kabhi nahi dekhe apne life cycle me. Ye kya? Zero talents? Baap re!!! Tum reh kese liye itne din? Hmm? Endurance bas zyada hai tumhara. Arre haa! Itni maar khaoge toh ye toh zaahir si hi baat hai. Hehehe~]

Veer : Udaa lo... Tum bhi mera mazaak uda lo... Ab toh mujhe aadat pad gayi hai.

[Hey! Hey! Sorry! But ab tension mat lo. Mein hu na. Mein tumhe dekhna kaha se kaha pohucha dungi.]

Veer : Aur tum aisa kyu karogi? Kya milega tumhe aisa karke?

[Mera kaam hi yahi hai. Mera kaam hai logo ko sabse sarvashreshth banaana.]

Veer : Toh tumne mujhe hi kyu chuna?

[Mene chuna nahi. Jab mein yaha se guzri toh tum hi paas me the aur mein tumhare shareer me pravesh kar gayi. Apne aap ko Lucky keh sakte ho tum.]

Veer (shocked) : Yaha se guzri matlab?

[Uss baare me mein zyaada baat nahi kar sakti.]

Veer : Toh? Toh Doctor ko pata nahi chala? Ki tum mere andar ho?

[Hahaha~ Doctor kya... Tumhaari Prithvi me rehne waala koi bhi vyakti ye nahi bata sakta ki tumhaare andar mein maujood hu.]

Aur ek aur jhatka Veer ko. Ye kya bala ghuss gayi achanak se uske andar aake?

Veer : Aur tumhe Hindi kese aati hai??

[Arre buddhu abhi toh bataya, mein tumhare mann, dimaag aur dil se jud chuki hu. Aur abhi abhi toh seekhi tumhaare dimaag se hi. Isliye jitni Hindi tumhe aati hai utni hi mujhe bhi.]

Veer : O... Okay!

[Par tumhaare stats boht hi bekaar hai. Mujhe khud taras aa raha hai dekh ke. Tumhe jald se jald apne stats badhaane honge.]

Veer : Ye? Ye stats kya hai?

[Ye tumhari asli shamtaaye hai. Tumhari strength 3 hai yaani ki jo taaqat hai tumhare andar usse yadi number se darshaaya jae toh woh 3 hai. Intelligence matlab tumhari buddhi, agility tumhari furti, endurance tumhari sehan-sheelta aur appearance tumhare physical features yaani ki chehra body haath perr ye sab.]

Veer : Aur mein inhe badha sakta hu? Toh mere asli shareer me badlaav aaenge?

[Haa!]

Veer (shocked) : Baap re! Aise me toh mein fir...

[Tabhi toh kaha ki ab mein tumhari kismat palat ke rakh dungi.]

Veer : Par wo points kese badhenge?

[Missions karke. Samay samay par tumhe missions milenge aur jese jese tum unhe complete karoge tumhe points milenge. Unn points se tum apne stats badha paoge aur saath hi saath nayi skills khareed paoge. Saath hi saath jitni uplabdhiya aur naam kamaoge tumhe points milte rahenge.]

Veer : Mein kuch samjha nahi...

[Hmm! Tumhara intelligence kam hai na isliye abhi sab kuch tumhare bheje ke upar se jaega. Bas itna samajh lo. Jese jese tum missions poore karte jaoge, mera level aur saath hi saath tumhaara level badhta jaega. Jiske chalte aur bhi anokhi skills unlock hoti jaengi. Dhyaan rahe! Yadi mission ko time limit me poora nahi kiya gaya. Toh tum hamesha hamesha ke liye mujhe kho doge.]

Veer : O... Okay!!

[Hmm! Ek aur akhiri baat. Kabhi bhi... Kabhi bhi ghamand mat karna. Jis din tumhe ghamand aana shuru hua, uss din se hi tumhara ant bhi shuru ho jaega.]

System ki baat sunn Veer ke raungte khade ho gaye. Apna thook nigalte hue usne firse kaha.

Veer : Mujhe ab bhi yakeen nahi ho raha ki duniya me aisi bhi koi cheez hoti hai.

[Duniya me aisi koi cheez nahi hai. Saari duniya me mein hi ek hu jo tumhare andar iss waqt maujood hu. Mein iss planet se nahi hu. Aur planet ke baahar kesi kesi cheeze maujood hai ye tum insaan soch bhi nahi sakte.]

Veer : .........

Iske pehle ki Veer kuch aage keh paata, Nidhi uske ward me aa gayi.

Darwaaze ki aahat se jab Veer ne palat ke dekha toh apni ma'am ko dekh kar chaunk gaya.

Veer : Ma'am!?

Nidhi : Ohh God!! Finally... Tumhe hosh aa gaya.

Aur Nidhi tezz kadmo ke saath aage aayi aur Veer ka haath thaam lii...

Veer (shocked) : Nidhi Ma'am aap yaha!?

Nidhi ne fir saari baat usse bata dii. Jab usse pata chala ki Brijesh ne uska call nahi uthaaya tha toh uske chehre par dard bhari muskuraahat aa gayi. Nidhi usse bechain bhari nazro se dekh rahi thi.

Veer : Aapne mere liye medical fees dii!?

Nidhi : Mene toh sirf advance diya tha baad me tumhaare Dad ne saari pay kii.

Kehte hue usne Veer ka haath ek baar fir thaam liya.

Nidhi (bauhe sikodte hue) : Tumhe... Tumhe bura lag raha hoga na? Tumhare Maa Baap tumhe dekhne tak nahi aaye. Jese maano unhe koi parvaah hi nahi hai tumhari.

Veer (smiles) : Isme koi nayi baat nahi hai Ma'am. Ye sab toh roz ka hai. I'm not surprised. Haha~

Uski wo fake hassi dekh pata nahi kyu, par Nidhi ko apne dil me atyant hi dard mehsoos hua. Aur usne Veer ka haath aur zorr se bheench liya.

Tabhi Veer ke andar firse awaaz gunji,

[Apne mann me kaho 'Check' aur fir iss aurat ki taraf dekho.]

System ki baat sunn Veer ne wesa hi kiya aur jese hi usne check kehte hue Nidhi ko dekha toh uske hosh hi udd gaye.

Nidhi ke sar ke upar hawa me ek window mandraa rahi thi jisme kuch shabd likhe hue the ~

[ Name - Nidhi
Age - 30
Status - Divorce pending.

Bio - Nidhi ki ek beti hai jiska naam hai Juhi. Saath hi ek beta hai jisse wo apne saath rakhna chaahti hai par uske Pati Rajat ne usse apne paas rakha hua hai. Rajat se uska rishta kharaab chal raha hai jiske chalte Nidhi akeli apni beti ke saath ek ghar me rent dete hue rehti hai kyuki wo apne mata pita par bojh nahi bann na chaahti. Uski Maa ko do din pehle hi dil ka daura pada tha aur wo bhi issi hospital me bharti hai. Nidhi ki life boht hi dukh aur pareshaniyo se bhari hui hai.

Favourability - 20
Relationship - Student - Teacher ]

Ye sab kuch Veer ko Nidhi ke sar ke upar nazar aa raha tha.

Veer (ghabraate hue) : Ye... Ye aapke sar pe...

Nidhi : Huh? Kya hua? Mere sar pe!?

[Arre Buddhu! Ye sirf tum dekh sakte ho? Baaki koi nahi.]

Veer : Nahi! Ma'am! Wo mein aise hi...

'Itna toh mein ek saal me nahi jaan paaya Ma'am ke baare me jitna abhi jaan gaya. Kya kamaal cheez hai ye.'

Usne mann me socha.

'System? Ye favourability 20 ka kya matlab hai?'

[Iska matlab hai ki wo tumhaare baare me kya sochti hai. Ek prakaar se uske mann me tumhare liye jo bhaav hai usko darshaata hai.]

'Toh ye 20 matlab?'

[Matlab ki abhi wo tumhare liye sirf 20 favourability rakhti hai. Jese jese tumhara aur uska relation accha hoega ye badhta jaega. Yadi ye 80 ke upar hai matlab ki koi tumhe chaahta hai. Yadi ye 90 ke upar hai matlab ki koi tumhe dil se pyaar karta hai. Aur yadi 100 hai matlab ki dil-o-jaan se pyaar karne waala vyakti.]

'Samjha!'

Nidhi : Veer? Kaha kho gaye?

Jab Nidhi ne chutki bajaate hue apna haath uske saamne hilaaya toh Veer jese apne khayaalo se baahar aaya.

Veer : Haa! Wo mein... Ma'am...

Nidhi (haath thaamte hue) : Just forget about everything Veer! Aur kuch mat socho. Bas tumhe jald se jald thik hona hai. Okay? And don't think tumhara koi nahi hai. I'm with you okay? Abhi tum rest karo ab. Mein ab kal shaam ko hi aaungi. Aaj mene wese hi leave lii thi. Roz nahi le sakti.

Veer : Jii ma'am! Thank you!

Nidhi : Thank you kesa isme...?? *Smiles* Take care okay?

Veer : Hmmm!

Aur Nidhi uske ward se chali gayi. Veer keval Nidhi ko jaate hue dekhta raha.

Nidhi 30 saal ki ek aisi husn ki mallika prateet hoti thi ki maano keher hi dhaa de. Par limited paiso aur din bhar ki mehnat aur thakaan ke chalte jaise uska husn poora khil ke nahi jhalak paa raha tha. Kyuki wo dhyaan hi nahi de paati thi apne upar.

Ye dekh Veer ko waqai taras aa raha tha uss par. Uski khud ki Maa yaha admit thi par uske bawajood Nidhi ne uski madad ki aur uske liye advance me paise bhi bharwae. Wahi dusri orr uske gharwale jo saari sampatti se sampann hai unhone ek shan bhi nahi socha ki wo jee raha hai ya marr raha hai.

*Ding*

Aur achaanak hi uske dimaag me ghanti baji aur uske saamne ek window khuli.

[Mission : Solve Nidhi's problem.
Reward : ?? points
Time limit : 1 year ]

'Huh? Mission?'

[Haa! Mission mil chuka hai tumhe.]

'Nidhi Ma'am ki problem? Konsi problem?'

[Ye toh tumhe khud dekhna padega.]

'O... Okay!'

[Ab tumhara safar shuru ho chuka hai. Ya toh tum yahi ke yahi reh jaoge ya meri madad paa ke ek Badshaah banoge. Toh bolo? Kesa jeevan chahiye? Ek aam aadmi ki tarah jesa ki tum abhi jee rahe the ya fir ek Badshaah ka?]

Sawaal sunn ke Veer ne socha hi nahi. Usse pata tha usse kya jawaab dena hai.

Veer (smiles) : Ek Baadshah!!!!
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!

Bhai apne alg hi plot likha hey badiya

 

[Vickey.a]

Update - 4 ~ In the Hospital​

Ab tak...

Ladki peeche mud window se uss ladke ko dekh rahi thi, uska nichla honth daato tale zorr se daba hua tha ki maano khoon hi nikal aae. Aankho me halke aasu bhi aa chuke the.

"I'm sorry..." Usne mann me kaha.

Aur wo car palak jhapakte hi logo ki nazro se ojhal ho gayi.

Idhar accident dekh aas paas ke jo bhi log dukaan ke neeche baarish se bachne ke liye khade hue the wo daudte hue aae aur Veer ko uthaane lage.

Ab aage...

"Arre... Arre... Uthao... Uthao..."
"Jaldi... Jaldi..."
"Car wala madarchod bhaag gaya..."
"Uthwao bhailog..."

Aur waha maujood log forun hi Veer ke paas aake usse uthaane lage. Bina baarish ki parvaah kiye.
Yadi uske parivaar waale hote toh kya woh usse iss waqt uthaate?

Shayad haa? Ya shayad nahi!?

"Arre isse toh boht zyaada chot aayi hai, khoon beh raha hai kaafi, jaldi ambulance ko call karo koi..."

Waha khade ek aadmi ne chillaaya toh agle ne forun hi 108 dial karte hue ambulance bulwa lii.

Abhi wo log savdhaani se Veer ko utha hi rahe the ki itne me ussi mod se ek aur car aayi par bheed ke kaaran uss car ko rukna pada.

Car waale ne jab horn maari toh usse itni gaaliya padi ki usse na chaahte hue bhi rukna pada.

"Dhatttt behanchod!! Iski maa ki aankh..." Car waale ne steering pe zorr se haath maarte hue chillaaya.

Dusra aadmi : Ab kuch nahi ho sakta... Car ghuma lo...

Pehla aadmi : Boss ko pata chala toh woh hamaari gardan na udaa de...

Dusra aadmi : Mein Boss ko samjha dunga... Tum car ghuma lo...

Pehla aadmi : Thik hai.

Aur wo car reverse karke waha se nikal gaye.

Idhar log Veer ko utha ke ek shop ke neeche lita ke uski choto par rumaal ya kapda baandh ke jese tese khoon rokne ki koshish kar rahe the.

Kuch derr me hi ambulance aayi aur Veer ko leke hospital ki orr chali gayi.

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Veer ke ghar me...

Sabhi log iss waqt Manorath ke kamre me maujood the. Manorath apne bistar par baitha hua tha toh wahi baaki sabhi khade hue usse hi dekh rahe the.

Manorath : Aaj tak prasaad ka aisa apmaan hamaare ghar me kisi ne bhi nahi kiya.

Pranjal : Dada jii! Veer ko waqai aisa nahi karna tha.

Kavya : Par... Dada jii! Wo toh... Unhone jaan bujh ke nahi kiya hoga...

Pranjal : Kavya? Ye tum kya keh rahi ho? Pehli baar maante hai ki uska perr fisal gaya aur wo vase toot gaya par dusri baar bhi?

Pranjal ki baat sunn bechaari Kavya kuch virodh hi na kar paayi aur sar jhuka lii.

Sumitra : Jeth jii... Aapko aise... Veer ko ghar se nahi nikaalna tha.

Brijesh : Mene jo bhi kiya hai boht soch samajh ke kiya hai. Mein ye kadam pehle hi uthaane waala tha par hamesha Papa jii ke kaaran ruk jaata tha. Lekin aaj toh usne hadd hi paar kar dii. Akhir uss kameeni ki kokh se jo paida hua hai, aisa hi hona tha... Mere toh ek bhi gud nahi hai usme...

Manorath : Wo jaisa bhi hai iss parivar ka hissa hai. Usse jaake wapas le aao. Abhi zyada dur nahi gaya hoga.

Brijesh : Bilkul bhi nahi Papa jii. Mene aapko pehle bhi bol ke rakha hai. Ki jis din ye apni hadd paar karega uss din mein isse ghar se nikaal dunga. Aur aaj yahi hua hai... Ab mein usse iss ghar me ghusne tak nahi dunga... Aap apna faisla sunaaiye Papa jii...

Manorath : Toh tum log usse wapas nahi laoge?

Brijesh : Bilkul bhi nahi...

Manorath : Toh fir mera bhi yahi faisla hai. Zameen aur jaydaad kisko milegi ye bhi tab hi nirnay hoga jab parivaar ka harr ek sadasya ghar me maujood hoga.

Brijesh : Papa jii!??

Vivek : Dada jii!? Ye aap...!?

Manorath ke faisle se maano sabko ek jhatka sa laga. Jiss pal ke liye wo sabhi bekaraar the ki akhir kisko zameen aur jaydaad dii jaegi wo pal toh aaya hi nahi. Ulta ab jab tak ghar me Veer nahi aa jaata tab tak faisla tal chuka tha.

Manorath ke paas dherr saari zameen thi jiski keemat crores me thi aur jaydaad bhi. Aur ye sab kuch ghar ke ussi sadasya ko milne waala tha jo Manorath ki aankho me iske liye sahi tha.

Uske 2 petrol pump bhi rahe jo usne apne beto ko de diye the. Ek petrol pump ka maalik jaha Brijesh tha toh wahi dusre ka maalik Karunesh.

Karunesh ne dimaag se paisa kamaate hue apne bete Vivek ki upar lagaya aur aaj Vivek ki khud ki ek automobiles ki company thi. Bhale hi worldwide nahi thi abhi par uska business zorro shoro se chal raha tha.

Karunesh ki badi beti Arohi aur choti beti Kavya, Veer ke hi college me thi aur wo dono bhi B.Tech kar rahi thi. Jaha Arohi aur Veer ki branch same thi ~ IT.

Wahi Kavya CS branch se belong karti thi.

Pranjal bhi same college me tha par wo B.com kar raha tha. Uski building alag thi par saari buildings saath me hi thi, jis kaaran wo break ke time Arohi aur Kavya se milne jaata rehta tha.

Karunesh ko apne bete betiyo ki koi chinta nahi thi.

Par Brijesh ka aisa nahi tha. Brijesh ko bhi ek petrol pump diya gaya tha Manorath dwaara. Usne bhi dimaag se apni ek luxury hotel khulwaayi jo sheher me kaafi mashoor thi. Jaha wo petrol pump sambhaalta tha toh wahi uski hotel uski dusri patni Shweta sambhaalti thi.

Shweta ke hi saath uski beti, Bhumika bhi uska saath deti thi.

Aur aaj yahi faisla liya jaane wala tha ki kisko zameen aur jaydaad milegi.

Par sab kuch dhara ka dhara reh gaya.

Manorath : Mera faisla saaf hai. Jao aur mujhe akela chorr do abhi.

Vivek : Par Dada jii...

Manorath : Mene kaha jao... Aur Brijesh... Yadi tum Veer ko wapas nahi laane waale toh mujhe uske baare me harr cheez batao... Iss waqt kaha hai woh... Kiske ghar theher raha hai? Wo mera pota hai. Mein jaan'na chaahta hu wo sahi salaamat hai ya nahi?

Brijesh : Thik...

Aur ghar ke mukhiya ki awaaz sunn sabhi bemann waha se nikal gaye.

Idhar kamre me aate hi Vivek Pranjal pe toot pada.

Vivek : Chote ye kya kar diya tune? Ye daav toh ulta hi pad gaya. Dada jii ne toh faisla hi taal diya. Ab jab tak wo Veer nahi aa jaata tab tak Dada jii koi faisla nahi sunaenge.

Pranjal : Bhaiya! Ab mujhe kya pata tha aisa ho jaega? Mene toh yahi socha tha aaj Veer ko Dada ji ki nazro me gira dunga toh Dada jii uska naam lenge hi nahi. Par mujhe nahi pata tha Tau jii usse ghar se baahar hi nikaal denge.

Ragini : Mene kaha tha ye kuch zyada hi ho gaya hai.

Pranjal : Aap log tension mat lo. Hum log kese bhi karke Dada jii ko mana lenge aur wo jald hi faisla le lenge. Filhaal ek musibat toh gayi.

Vivek : Hmm!! Par chote tune wo sab kiya kese?

Vivek ke sawaal karne par Pranjal ne muskuraate hue jeb se kuch nikaala aur unn dono ko dikhaya.

Pranjal : Haha! Bhaiya! Saara kamaal iska hai.

Vivek (hairaani me) : Ye toh... Ye toh... Ye toh tufoil hai chote...

Pranjal : Haha! Haa bhaiya! Aapke hi yaha se laaya hu.

Tufoil ek aisa slippery oil jisse automobiles me use kiya jaata hai. Na keval ye automobiles ke liye balki ye apni slipness ke liye bhi jaana jaata hai.

Pranjal : Ye mene floor par daal diya tha. Aur mein Veer ko wahi se le gaya jaha ye oil mene daala tha. Bas! Fir kya tha, uska geela joota jese hi uspe pada, Veer fisla aur vase seedha neeche... Hahaha!

Ragini : Par wo prasaad ka kya?

Pranjal : Bhabhi! Wo bhi iska hi kamaal hai. Mene sleepers ke neeche bhi isse laga ke rakha hua tha.

Ragini (smiles) : Waah! Maan gaye tumhe bhi. Par wo chot ka kya jo Veer ko pehle se hi lagi hui thi?

Pranjal : Wo bhi mere kehne par hau tha Bhabhi. Mere kayi chelo me se ek hai wo Ajay. Mene usko keh ke rakha tha ki aaj pehla din hai toh koi bhi bahana bana ke aaj jamm ke thukaayi kar dena uss Veer ki... Aur usne yahi kiya hahahaha!

Vivek : Par chote, wo oil zameen par nazar kyu nahi aaya?

Pranjal : Kese aaega Bhaiya? Mene usse carpet ke ekdum bagal se giraaya tha hahaha!

Aur uske saath hi Vivek bhi hassne laga. Ragini muskuraate hue dono ko dekh rahi thi. Jaha ye jashn mana rahe the toh wahi koi aur tha jo iss waqt apni saaso se ladd raha tha.

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Hospital...

Nurse : Iski haalat boht critical hai Doctor.

Doctor : I know... Humse jo bann padega hum karenge.

Nurse : Jii! But iski family...!? Iska mobile toh kaam hi nahi kar raha hai.

Doctor : Mene ward boy ko bola hai wo iske phone ki SIM apne phone me daalke iske ghar waalo ko call karega.

Nurse : Hmm!!

Aur Veer ka treatment shuru ho chuka tha.

Ward boy ne jab Veer ki SIM daal ke Brijesh ko call kiya toh Brijesh ne ye soch ke call nahi uthaya ki zaroor Veer ne paise maangne ke liye phone kiya hoga aur gusse me usne apna phone hi band kar diya.

Ward boy ne jab Sumitra ko call kiya toh call lag hi nahi raha tha. Kese lagta? Pranjal ne apni maa ke phone me Veer ka number block jo kar ke rakha tha.

Fir usne akhiri number jo ki Kavya ka tha usse call kiya.

Idhar iss waqt Kavya Arohi aur Pranjal ke saath hi baithi hui thi. Number dekhte hi Kavya soch me pad gayi.

'Veer Bhaiya mujhe kyu call kar rahe hai?? Phone utha lu? Thik hai utha leti hu.'

Par iske pehle ki wo phone utha paati, Pranjal ne uska phone chhina liya.

Pranjal : Zara dekho toh... Veer ab hamari Kavya ko phone laga raha hai. Kyu Kavya?

Kavya : Phone dijiye Bhaiya.

Pranjal : Nahi! Zaroor ab apni pyari behan se paise maangne ke liye phone kar raha hoga. Kyuki baahar ab usse paiso ki zaroorat toh padegi hi...

Aur usne forun hi phone kaat ke uska number hi block kar diya.

Pranjal : Ab tumhe disturbance nahi hoga behan hahaha!

Kavya : Hmm?

Pranjal : Accha wo sab chorro, chalo hum sab pizza mangwaate hai.

Kavya : Mera mann nahi hai Bhaiya aap hi khao. Aaj Veer Bhaiya ke saath itna sab kuch ho gaya aur aapko pizza ki padi hai?

Pranjal : Arre ye kya baat hui yaar. Kavya tum ab bhi usse apna bhai maanti ho? Wo bhai kehne laayak nahi hai Kavya. Kherr chorro! Arohi didi aap toh khaogi na?

Arohi : Nahi!

Pranjal : Thik hai toh mein hi mangwa leta hu...

Aur wo waha se chala jaata hai.

Kavya apna phone liye sochti rehti hai ki akhir Veer ne usse kyu call lagaya hoga. Wo sochti hai ki agli baar yadi phone aaya toh woh zaroor uthaegi. Par usse kya pata tha ki Pranjal ne Veer ka number hi block kar diya tha.

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Idhar hospital me ek ward me ek ladki apni Maa ke paas baithi hui thi...

Ladki : Maa! Ab mein chalti hu... Tum dhyaan rakhna theek!

Aurat : Haa beta! Mujhe kya... Tumhaare Papa toh rahenge hi na mere saath. Ab tum jao... Raat ho rahi hai beta. Aur fir, Juhi akeli pados me zyada derr nahi reh paegi. Jaa beta...

Ladki : Jii Maa! Chalti hu. Tum dhyaan rakhna apna haa!? Koi bhi dikkat ho toh...

Aurat : Arre baba! Haa! Pata hai mujhe... Jaa ab tu...

Ladki : Thik!

Aur ladki apni Maa ke ward se baahar nikal aati hai.

Abhi wo aage badh ke nikalne hi wali thi ki usne dekha ki uski Maa ke bagal waale ward ke baahar doctor aur ward boy ke beech behas ho rahi thi jisse dekh wo rukk gayi.

Doctor : Dekho kese bhi karke iske parivaar walo ko inform karo.... Kese bhi karke...

Ward boy : Arre Sir! Kisi ne phone hi nahi uthaaya...

Doctor : Haa toh lagaate raho... Nahi toh fir police ko inform karo kyuki uske shareer pe maar peet ke bhi nishaan hai.

Inn dono ki behas chal rahi thi ki tabhi wo ladki jigyaasa purvak aage badhi aur usne ward me jhaank ke dekha, jab usne patient ka chehra dekha toh ekdum hi chaunk gayi aur uske muh se tezz swar me nikla, "Veeeeeeerr!????"

Doctor (palat'te hue) : Aap? Aap janti hai isse?

Ladki : Huh? Mein... Haa! Wo mera student hai. Mein usse pichle ek saal se jaanti hu.

Doctor : Bhagwaan ka shuqr hai chalo koi toh mila... Aapka shubh naam?

Ladki : Nidhi...

Doctor : Okay toh Nidhi jii... Aap idhar aaiye zara mere saath.

Kuch derr baad...

Nidhi Veer ke college me Maths padhaati thi. Aur iss saal wo Veer ki hi class ki classteacher thi.

Wo Veer ko jaanti bhi thi. Bhale hi Veer padhne me hoshiyaar nahi tha par Veer sabse shaant baccha tha uski class me. Aur ho bhi kyu na? Uske dost hi nahi the.

Aaj Nidhi apni Maa jinhe kal hi achanak minor heart attack aa gaya tha unhe hi dekhne ke liye hospital me aayi hui thi. Par ittefaaq se usse Veer bhi yahi mil gaya.

Veer ke liye saari kaagzi kaam Nidhi ne kiya aur yaha tak ki apne Pita jii se Nidhi ne Veer ke liye medical fees bhi advanced me kuch jama karwane ko keh diya.

Sab kuch itni jaldi hua ki Nidhi ki khud samajh me nahi aaya. Aur iss waqt wo ward ke darwaaze ki window glass se jhaakte hue Veer ko dekh rahi thi aur soch me padi hui thi.

'Ye achanak... Ye Veer haadse me kese...!? Aur iske Maa Baap phone kyu nahi utha rahe hai!? Kese Maa Baap hai? Mujhe kal jaake unse baat karni padegi.'

Nidhi ye soch hospital se nikal gayi.

Par uske jaate Veer ki haalat bigadna shuru ho gayi thi.

Nurse : Doctor...

Doctor : I know...

*Beep Beep Beep*

Uski heart beat bilkul band hone ki kagaar par aa chuki thi.

Ki tabhi achaanak se aisa kuch hua jiske chalte uski heartbeat waapas se normal ho gayi.

Doctor : Phew... He's out of danger now.

Aur kuch derr baad hi Doctors aur nurse Veer ki haalat stable roop me chorr ke baahar aa gaye.

Par kisi ko nahi pata tha...

Ki jab uski saasein jaane hi waali thi...

Tab uske andar ek awaaz gunji thi...

Jo kisi ko sunaayi nahi dii thi...

Aur wo awaaz ke bol the...

[System has been activated.]
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!

Ab aayega maza I konw war jone started

 

[Vickey.a]

Update - 5 ~ System Activation​

Ab tak...

Par kisi ko nahi pata tha...

Ki jab uski saasein jaane hi waali thi...

Tab uske andar ek awaaz gunji thi...

Jo kisi ko sunaayi nahi dii thi...

Aur wo awaaz ke bol the...

[System has been activated.]

Ab aage...

Veer ke accident ke kuch ghanto baad hi jab Brijesh ka phone baja tha aur screen par Veer naam jab usne dekha tha toh pata nahi kyu Brijesh ne call nahi uthaaya.

Shayad kuch derr pehle usne khud hi apne bete ko dhakke maar ke ghar se baahar nikaala tha iss kaaran vash? Ya fir wo abhi Veer ke muh se koi bhi baat nahi sunn'na chaahta tha. Kuch tha jo usse rok raha tha Veer se baat karne ke liye.

Ki tabhi uske phone par firse call aaya par ye uske khud ke vyakti ka tha.

Brijesh : Hello?

Aadmi : Saahab! Veer jii ka car se accident hua hai. Abhi wo xxxxxxxxxx hospital me bharti hai.

Aur ye sunte hi Brijesh uth khada hua. Aur forun hi hospital ke liye jaane laga.

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Agle din Kavya college me apni soch me ghum thi.

'Veer bhaiya ka call uske baad se aaya hi nahi. Kya karu? Call back karu? Iske pehle unhone kabhi mujhe call nahi kiya fir achanak kal kyu? Kahi koi dikkat toh nahi? Kal unke beech mein call na kar saki thi...'

Aur ye soch wo call lagaati hai par call nahi laga. Kese lagta? Ward boy ne Veer ki SIM waapas se uske phone me jo daal dii thi.

Ant me Kavya uske whatsapp par message daal deti hai ye puchne ki wo theek hai ya nahi?

Idhar Nidhi din me hi Veer ke ghar gayi thi taaki wo jaan sake ki kyu uske Maa Baap ne call nahi uthaaya tha.

Jab wo waha pohuchi aur jesa ravaiyaa usne dekha Brijesh, Shweta aur baaki ghar waalo ka Veer ke prati ye dekh ke usse itna gussa aaya ki wo khud ko control na kar saki.

Nidhi ek Maa bhi thi. Uski khud ki beti abhi choti thi aur aise me wo jaanti thi ki ek parent hona kya hota hai. Aise me jab usne Brijesh aur Shweta ka behaviour dekha toh bas wo bhadak uthi.

Nidhi : Kese Maa Baap ho aap log? Aapka Beta waha apni zindagi se ladd raha hai aur aap logo ko koi chinta hi nahi hai? Yaha tak ki aapne usse apne ghar se baahar hi nikaal diya!?

Brijesh : Dekhiye Madam! Veer ab iss parivaar ka hissa nahi hai. Rahi baat paise ki toh uske medical kharcho ki bharpayi mein kar chuka hu par iske baad ab wo jaane ki wo kaha rahega kese rahega... Aur aap hamare parivaarik maamlo se dur rahe toh hi accha hoga.

Nidhi : Bhul se bhi aise Maa Baap na de bhagwaan kisi ko...

Aur Nidhi apni namm aankhe liye waha se bhaag aayi. Usse Veer ke liye waqai boht bura lag raha tha. Kaha wo khud ko badqismat samajhti thi par ab Veer ko dekh usse mehsoos hua ki kam se kam usse Maa Baap ka pyaar toh mil raha tha par Veer ko toh wo bhi nahi mila...

Na jaane kya kya saha hoga uss bechaare ne ab tak?

Na jaane kese kese din bitaaye honge Veer ne unke beech rehke?

Idhar hospital me abhi shaam ke waqt Veer ko hosh aa chuka tha.

"Arrrghhh!" Ek karaah ke saath uski aankh khuli.

Aankho se dhundhlapan hata, saamne ka nazaara nazar aaya.

Usne dekha ki wo hospital me hai. Aankhein uski jal rahi thi. Usse sab kuch jese yaad aane laga...

Kya hua tha?

Haan! Aur kal ki saari vardaat flashback ki tarah uske dimaag me mandraane lagi.

Aur usne apna sar pakad liya...

Aankho se aasu behne lage...

Abhi wo soch hi raha tha ki itne me uske andar ek awaaz gunji jiske chalte uske raungte khade ho gaye.

[Sytem has been activated. You are now the owner of the system.]

Veer (ghabraate hue) : Huh? Kaun? Kaun hai?

Awaaz se maano Veer bechaara darr hi gaya. Usne apna sar idhar udhar hilaate hue dekha par wo awaaz kaha se aayi usse kuch bhi pata na chala.

[Name the System!!]

Veer (chillaate hue) : Kaun hai? Mein puchta hu kaun hai?

Aur firse ek awaaz uske dimaag me gunji...

[Analyzing Hindi language from owner's mind...

Processing...

Process completed.

Hindi Language has been recognised.]

Veer (chillaate hue) : Kaun hai? Saamne aao... Kiski awaaz hai ye jo mere sarr me gunj rahi hai...!?

Tabhi wahi awaaz firse uske mann me gunji...

Par iss baar uske bol alag bhaasha me the.

[Shaant! Mein System hu. Aur ab se tum mere master ho.]

Veer (darrte hue) : Kaun bol raha hai? Mujhe tum dikhayi kyu nahi de rahe?

[Mene kaha na Shaant! Mein ek system hu. Meri koi physical body nahi hai. Mein tumhare andar hu.]

Veer (ghabraate hue) : Me... Mere andar?

[Haa! Kya tumhe yaad hai kal tumhare saath kya hua tha? Tumhara accident hua tha. Aur tum marrte marrte bache ho tumhe pata hai? Yadi mene samay par madad na ki hoti toh tum zinda nahi bachte.]

Veer (chillaate hue) : Kesi madad? Tum mere andar kese ho? Baahar aao...

[Arre! Itni zorr se mat chillao. Andar mann me hi kaho jo kuch bhi kehna hai. Mein tumhaare mann, dil, dimag sab se judd chuki hu. Aur tumhare mann ki baat sunn sakti hu. Aise chillaoge toh log tumhe pagal samjhenge.]

Aur uss vichitr mann ki awaaz sunn Veer apne mann me hi baat karne laga.

Veer : Meri... Meri kuch samajh me nahi aa raha hai. Ye sab kya chal raha hai?

[I know! Abhi tumhe samajhne me time lagega. Bas itna samajh lo ki mein tumhe koi nuksaan nahi pohuchaane wali. Ulta mein tumhari madad ke liye yaha hu.]

Veer : Meri madad?

Veer ne kaapte hue pucha.

[Haa! Tumhari madad! Mein tumhari madad karungi. Hamesha tum apni kismat ko koste the na? Ab mein tumhara saath dungi aur tum apni kismat palat ke rakh doge.]

Veer : Wo... Wo kaise?

[Yahi toh mera kaam hai. Yadi mera istemaal sahi se kiya. Toh tum duniya par raaj kar sakte ho.]

Veer : Sach!?

[Ekdum sach.]

Veer : Toh kya tum ladki ho? Kyuki tumhari awaaz ladkiyo jesi hai.

[Nahi! Mein na hi ladki hu na hi ladka. Mein kisi bhi gender me apne aap ko dhaal sakti hu. Mene tumhaare mann me jhaank ke dekha toh pata chala tumhe ladkiya zyada pasand hai ladko ke muqaable isliye mene apni awaaz ladki ki rakhi hui hai.]

Veer (blush) : Huh? Obviously Mujhe ladkiya pasand hai. Ladke nahi. I'm not gay...

[Yadi kaho toh awaaz ladke ki rakh lu!?]

Veer : Huh? Nahi! Nahi! Aise hi theek hai.

[Hehehe~]

Veer : ..........

[Accha! Ab apni aankhein band karo aur mann me hi kaho ~ Status]

Veer (aankhein band karte hue) : Status!

Aur Veer ke itna kehte hi uske mann me ek window khul gayi,

[ Name - Veer
Age - 20
Status - Abandoned student.

Stats :
Strength - 3/100
Intelligence - 4/100
Agility - 3/100
Endurance - 7/100
Appearance - 6/100

Talents - 0
Points - 0 ]

Ye sab dekh ke Veer ke hosh hi udd gaye.

[Baap re Baap! Tumhara toh boht bura haal hai. Itne bekaar stats mene kabhi nahi dekhe apne life cycle me. Ye kya? Zero talents? Baap re!!! Tum reh kese liye itne din? Hmm? Endurance bas zyada hai tumhara. Arre haa! Itni maar khaoge toh ye toh zaahir si hi baat hai. Hehehe~]

Veer : Udaa lo... Tum bhi mera mazaak uda lo... Ab toh mujhe aadat pad gayi hai.

[Hey! Hey! Sorry! But ab tension mat lo. Mein hu na. Mein tumhe dekhna kaha se kaha pohucha dungi.]

Veer : Aur tum aisa kyu karogi? Kya milega tumhe aisa karke?

[Mera kaam hi yahi hai. Mera kaam hai logo ko sabse sarvashreshth banaana.]

Veer : Toh tumne mujhe hi kyu chuna?

[Mene chuna nahi. Jab mein yaha se guzri toh tum hi paas me the aur mein tumhare shareer me pravesh kar gayi. Apne aap ko Lucky keh sakte ho tum.]

Veer (shocked) : Yaha se guzri matlab?

[Uss baare me mein zyaada baat nahi kar sakti.]

Veer : Toh? Toh Doctor ko pata nahi chala? Ki tum mere andar ho?

[Hahaha~ Doctor kya... Tumhaari Prithvi me rehne waala koi bhi vyakti ye nahi bata sakta ki tumhaare andar mein maujood hu.]

Aur ek aur jhatka Veer ko. Ye kya bala ghuss gayi achanak se uske andar aake?

Veer : Aur tumhe Hindi kese aati hai??

[Arre buddhu abhi toh bataya, mein tumhare mann, dimaag aur dil se jud chuki hu. Aur abhi abhi toh seekhi tumhaare dimaag se hi. Isliye jitni Hindi tumhe aati hai utni hi mujhe bhi.]

Veer : O... Okay!

[Par tumhaare stats boht hi bekaar hai. Mujhe khud taras aa raha hai dekh ke. Tumhe jald se jald apne stats badhaane honge.]

Veer : Ye? Ye stats kya hai?

[Ye tumhari asli shamtaaye hai. Tumhari strength 3 hai yaani ki jo taaqat hai tumhare andar usse yadi number se darshaaya jae toh woh 3 hai. Intelligence matlab tumhari buddhi, agility tumhari furti, endurance tumhari sehan-sheelta aur appearance tumhare physical features yaani ki chehra body haath perr ye sab.]

Veer : Aur mein inhe badha sakta hu? Toh mere asli shareer me badlaav aaenge?

[Haa!]

Veer (shocked) : Baap re! Aise me toh mein fir...

[Tabhi toh kaha ki ab mein tumhari kismat palat ke rakh dungi.]

Veer : Par wo points kese badhenge?

[Missions karke. Samay samay par tumhe missions milenge aur jese jese tum unhe complete karoge tumhe points milenge. Unn points se tum apne stats badha paoge aur saath hi saath nayi skills khareed paoge. Saath hi saath jitni uplabdhiya aur naam kamaoge tumhe points milte rahenge.]

Veer : Mein kuch samjha nahi...

[Hmm! Tumhara intelligence kam hai na isliye abhi sab kuch tumhare bheje ke upar se jaega. Bas itna samajh lo. Jese jese tum missions poore karte jaoge, mera level aur saath hi saath tumhaara level badhta jaega. Jiske chalte aur bhi anokhi skills unlock hoti jaengi. Dhyaan rahe! Yadi mission ko time limit me poora nahi kiya gaya. Toh tum hamesha hamesha ke liye mujhe kho doge.]

Veer : O... Okay!!

[Hmm! Ek aur akhiri baat. Kabhi bhi... Kabhi bhi ghamand mat karna. Jis din tumhe ghamand aana shuru hua, uss din se hi tumhara ant bhi shuru ho jaega.]

System ki baat sunn Veer ke raungte khade ho gaye. Apna thook nigalte hue usne firse kaha.

Veer : Mujhe ab bhi yakeen nahi ho raha ki duniya me aisi bhi koi cheez hoti hai.

[Duniya me aisi koi cheez nahi hai. Saari duniya me mein hi ek hu jo tumhare andar iss waqt maujood hu. Mein iss planet se nahi hu. Aur planet ke baahar kesi kesi cheeze maujood hai ye tum insaan soch bhi nahi sakte.]

Veer : .........

Iske pehle ki Veer kuch aage keh paata, Nidhi uske ward me aa gayi.

Darwaaze ki aahat se jab Veer ne palat ke dekha toh apni ma'am ko dekh kar chaunk gaya.

Veer : Ma'am!?

Nidhi : Ohh God!! Finally... Tumhe hosh aa gaya.

Aur Nidhi tezz kadmo ke saath aage aayi aur Veer ka haath thaam lii...

Veer (shocked) : Nidhi Ma'am aap yaha!?

Nidhi ne fir saari baat usse bata dii. Jab usse pata chala ki Brijesh ne uska call nahi uthaaya tha toh uske chehre par dard bhari muskuraahat aa gayi. Nidhi usse bechain bhari nazro se dekh rahi thi.

Veer : Aapne mere liye medical fees dii!?

Nidhi : Mene toh sirf advance diya tha baad me tumhaare Dad ne saari pay kii.

Kehte hue usne Veer ka haath ek baar fir thaam liya.

Nidhi (bauhe sikodte hue) : Tumhe... Tumhe bura lag raha hoga na? Tumhare Maa Baap tumhe dekhne tak nahi aaye. Jese maano unhe koi parvaah hi nahi hai tumhari.

Veer (smiles) : Isme koi nayi baat nahi hai Ma'am. Ye sab toh roz ka hai. I'm not surprised. Haha~

Uski wo fake hassi dekh pata nahi kyu, par Nidhi ko apne dil me atyant hi dard mehsoos hua. Aur usne Veer ka haath aur zorr se bheench liya.

Tabhi Veer ke andar firse awaaz gunji,

[Apne mann me kaho 'Check' aur fir iss aurat ki taraf dekho.]

System ki baat sunn Veer ne wesa hi kiya aur jese hi usne check kehte hue Nidhi ko dekha toh uske hosh hi udd gaye.

Nidhi ke sar ke upar hawa me ek window mandraa rahi thi jisme kuch shabd likhe hue the ~

[ Name - Nidhi
Age - 30
Status - Divorce pending.

Bio - Nidhi ki ek beti hai jiska naam hai Juhi. Saath hi ek beta hai jisse wo apne saath rakhna chaahti hai par uske Pati Rajat ne usse apne paas rakha hua hai. Rajat se uska rishta kharaab chal raha hai jiske chalte Nidhi akeli apni beti ke saath ek ghar me rent dete hue rehti hai kyuki wo apne mata pita par bojh nahi bann na chaahti. Uski Maa ko do din pehle hi dil ka daura pada tha aur wo bhi issi hospital me bharti hai. Nidhi ki life boht hi dukh aur pareshaniyo se bhari hui hai.

Favourability - 20
Relationship - Student - Teacher ]

Ye sab kuch Veer ko Nidhi ke sar ke upar nazar aa raha tha.

Veer (ghabraate hue) : Ye... Ye aapke sar pe...

Nidhi : Huh? Kya hua? Mere sar pe!?

[Arre Buddhu! Ye sirf tum dekh sakte ho? Baaki koi nahi.]

Veer : Nahi! Ma'am! Wo mein aise hi...

'Itna toh mein ek saal me nahi jaan paaya Ma'am ke baare me jitna abhi jaan gaya. Kya kamaal cheez hai ye.'

Usne mann me socha.

'System? Ye favourability 20 ka kya matlab hai?'

[Iska matlab hai ki wo tumhaare baare me kya sochti hai. Ek prakaar se uske mann me tumhare liye jo bhaav hai usko darshaata hai.]

'Toh ye 20 matlab?'

[Matlab ki abhi wo tumhare liye sirf 20 favourability rakhti hai. Jese jese tumhara aur uska relation accha hoega ye badhta jaega. Yadi ye 80 ke upar hai matlab ki koi tumhe chaahta hai. Yadi ye 90 ke upar hai matlab ki koi tumhe dil se pyaar karta hai. Aur yadi 100 hai matlab ki dil-o-jaan se pyaar karne waala vyakti.]

'Samjha!'

Nidhi : Veer? Kaha kho gaye?

Jab Nidhi ne chutki bajaate hue apna haath uske saamne hilaaya toh Veer jese apne khayaalo se baahar aaya.

Veer : Haa! Wo mein... Ma'am...

Nidhi (haath thaamte hue) : Just forget about everything Veer! Aur kuch mat socho. Bas tumhe jald se jald thik hona hai. Okay? And don't think tumhara koi nahi hai. I'm with you okay? Abhi tum rest karo ab. Mein ab kal shaam ko hi aaungi. Aaj mene wese hi leave lii thi. Roz nahi le sakti.

Veer : Jii ma'am! Thank you!

Nidhi : Thank you kesa isme...?? *Smiles* Take care okay?

Veer : Hmmm!

Aur Nidhi uske ward se chali gayi. Veer keval Nidhi ko jaate hue dekhta raha.

Nidhi 30 saal ki ek aisi husn ki mallika prateet hoti thi ki maano keher hi dhaa de. Par limited paiso aur din bhar ki mehnat aur thakaan ke chalte jaise uska husn poora khil ke nahi jhalak paa raha tha. Kyuki wo dhyaan hi nahi de paati thi apne upar.

Ye dekh Veer ko waqai taras aa raha tha uss par. Uski khud ki Maa yaha admit thi par uske bawajood Nidhi ne uski madad ki aur uske liye advance me paise bhi bharwae. Wahi dusri orr uske gharwale jo saari sampatti se sampann hai unhone ek shan bhi nahi socha ki wo jee raha hai ya marr raha hai.

*Ding*

Aur achaanak hi uske dimaag me ghanti baji aur uske saamne ek window khuli.

[Mission : Solve Nidhi's problem.
Reward : ?? points
Time limit : 1 year ]

'Huh? Mission?'

[Haa! Mission mil chuka hai tumhe.]

'Nidhi Ma'am ki problem? Konsi problem?'

[Ye toh tumhe khud dekhna padega.]

'O... Okay!'

[Ab tumhara safar shuru ho chuka hai. Ya toh tum yahi ke yahi reh jaoge ya meri madad paa ke ek Badshaah banoge. Toh bolo? Kesa jeevan chahiye? Ek aam aadmi ki tarah jesa ki tum abhi jee rahe the ya fir ek Badshaah ka?]

Sawaal sunn ke Veer ne socha hi nahi. Usse pata tha usse kya jawaab dena hai.

Veer (smiles) : Ek Baadshah!!!!
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!

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[Werewolf]

Nice introduction nice story padhne me bhi maza aa raha bs ek kami h bhai......






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