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Week me 3 tho sufficient hogye bro. Aap bejijak liko hum he sath me. Iss rasbahari Kahani ko nichod nichod ke iska Luft utayenge !!! Dhanyawad nayi shuruwat ke liyeUpdates bro! Abhi toh kuch keh nahi sakta.
But koshish karunga ki week me atleast 3 updates toh araam se de paau.
Thanks a lot bhai!Week me 3 tho sufficient hogye bro. Aap bejijak liko hum he sath me. Iss rasbahari Kahani ko nichod nichod ke iska Luft utayenge !!! Dhanyawad nayi shuruwat ke liye
Thanks!congratulation for this new thread Werewolf bhai...
well new plot hain mere liye i hope interesting bhi ho...
for starting a new thread brotherSabhi ko sabse pehle Hello!
Ye meri iss forum par dusri kahani hogi. Pehli kahaani [Akhir kyu?From hatred to love] ko aap sabhi ne itna saraaha aur pyaar diya ki mujhe dusri kahaani likhne par majboor kar diya.
By the way meri pehli kahani padhi ya nahi? Nahi padhi toh jao yaar pehle usko padho. Fir ye nayi kahani me dubki lagaana.
Wese ek writer ki taaqat uski likhaawat hoti hai par saath hi saath wahi uski kamzori bhi hoti hai. Ek writer bina likhe reh hi nahi sakta. Wo kuch na kuch likhta hi rehta hai aur apni kalpanao se nayi nayi kahaniyo ko utpadit karta hai. Aisa hi haal kuch mera bhi hai. Isliye aapke saamne prastut hu apni ek aur nayi kahani lekar,
"Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery"
Ye kahani ekdum hi hatt ke hone waali hai. Aisi kahani aapne nahi padhi hogi. Kahani ki plot setting 'System' par adhaarit hai. Jinhone chinese aur japanese novels padhi hai iss setting ki unhe pata hoga. Par jinhone nahi padhi hai unke liye ye ekdum new hone waali hai. Isliye, mene socha kyu na iss plot setting ko yaha forum par introduce kiya jae.
Ab kuch key points dhyaan me zaroor rakhiyega kahani ko padhne se pehle kyuki baad me comment section me apun ko koi bakchodi nahi chahiye.
1. Story ka prefix wese toh mein fantasy rakhne wala tha par kyuki isme incest bhi hai kaafi maatra me toh mene incest rakh diya.
2. Story harem par based hai.
3. Story based toh real world me hi hai par kuch logics apply nahi honge.
4. Ye kahani kaalpanik hai. Isme charchit sabhi paatr keval meri kalpanao ka hissa hai. Yadi koi naam, vyavsaay, ya kuch aur asal zindagi me kisi se mel khaata hai toh ye keval ek sanyog hoga. Isse kisi galat nazariye sa na liye jae.
Bas ye 4 points ko dhyaan me rakhiyega.
Intro chota sa hi dunga, mein chaahta hu readers khud hi kahani padh ke characters ke baare me jaane taaki aap paatro se aur acche se familiar ho sake. Isliye, zyada bada intro nahi dunga.
Dhanyavaad!
Congratulations bhai for new story.......
aapko dubara story likhte dekh kr bahut khusi hui..........
keep posting bhai.............
Congratulations for new thread. .....
Mai manga comics padhta hun , mai shayad story ko acchhe se connect kar paunga,
All the best for future updates
waise title me baadshah ki jagah samraath hota toh tagda lagta.... hai na?
for starting the new thread.
Congratulations for new story
Best of luck brother
Congratulations for new thread bhai
welcome back bhai.
New kahani ke liye dher sari badhaiya dost
for the new story
Ek baar phir se nayi kahani shuru karne ke liye dil se bahut saari badhayi
For starting new story thread...
Welcome to new post
Co
For starting new story thread...
For completed 1k views on your story thread...
Paramparik rishton me chudayi aur kisi aisi aithihasik parampara jo kalpanao me dubki laagade vaisi EK Kahani ka intezar he. Meri mitravar
congratulation for this new thread Werewolf bhai...
well new plot hain mere liye i hope interesting bhi ho...
for starting a new thread brother
hope this story will touch our heart
Intro has been posted.Congrations for new thread bhai
Nice introIntroduction :
Characters ke baare me zyaada kuch nahi bataunga. Aap khud unke baare me padh ke unhe jaaniyega. Ek chota sa intro de raha hu taaki relationship samajh aa sake aapko.
1. Veer (age - 20 yrs) : Kahani ka Main character.
2. Manorath (age - 80 yrs) : Veer ke Dada jii. Paramparao aur anusaashan ko boht maante hai. Ghar me jo sabse anusaashit hai aur buddhimatta se bharpoor hai ussi ko ye mehatv dete hai. Inke 2 petrol pump the jo inhone apne baccho me baant diye.
3. Brijesh (age -56 yrs) : Veer ke Dad, Manorath ka bada ladka. Ek petrol pump ka maalik hai. Uske alaawa ek luxury hotel hai jisse uski patni sambhaalti hai.
4. Shweta (age - 47 yrs) : Veer ki sauteli Maa (Step-mom), Brijesh ki dusri patni. Shweta kahi se bhi 47 ki prateet nahi hoti. Ye Brijesh dwara banwai gayi hotel ki maalkin hai aur usse apni beti ke saath sambhaalti hai.
5. Bhumika (age - 25 yrs) : Shweta aur uske pehle pati ki eklauti beti, Veer ki Step-sister. B.com aur hotel management ka course karne ke baad ab apni Maa ke saath hotel sambhaalti hai.
6. Karunesh (age - 55 yrs) : Manorath ka dusra beta, Veer ke chacha. Brijesh ka chota bhai hai aur saath hi uss dusre petrol pump ka maalik.
7. Sumitra (age - 49 yrs) : Karunesh ki patni, Veer ki chachi. Gadrayi hui hai par moti kahi se bhi nahi. Badi badi chhuchiya, gori makhmali twacha, nain naksh jo madhosh kar de.
8. Vivek (age - 28 yrs) : Karunesh aur Sumitra ka bada beta. Karunesh ne Vivek pe kaafi paisa kharch kiya hai jiske chalte aaj Vivek ki khud ki ek automobiles ki company hai.
9. Ragini (age - 27 yrs) : Vivek ki patni, Veer ki Bhabhi. Qayaamat hai ekdum Ragini. Ek aisi ladki jisse harr koi apni banaana chaahe. Jisse dekh ke muh se bas yahi nikaalta hai ki kaash ye meri hoti.
10. Arohi (age - 22 yrs) : Karunesh aur Sumitra ki badi beti. Veer ke hi same college me uski senior hai. Kam bolti hai. Dikhne me khubsoorat aur alag kism ki beauty hai ye. Isse dekh ke nasha sa chadh jae kisi ko bhi.
11. Pranjal (age - 21 yrs) : Karunesh aur Sumitra ka chota beta. Abhi B.com kar raha hai same college se.
12. Kavya (age - 18 yrs) : Karunesh aur Sumitra ki choti beti. Chanchal, sharmeeli aur thodi savendansheel. Abhi abhi college me aayi hai toh abhi duniya daari ke baare utna sab nahi pata. Dikhne me ekdum Cute hai aur pyaari.
Ye tha intro, baaki characters samay aane par introduce hote jaenge.
Dhanyavaad!
Nice and superb introduction...Introduction :
Characters ke baare me zyaada kuch nahi bataunga. Aap khud unke baare me padh ke unhe jaaniyega. Ek chota sa intro de raha hu taaki relationship samajh aa sake aapko.
1. Veer (age - 20 yrs) : Kahani ka Main character.
2. Manorath (age - 80 yrs) : Veer ke Dada jii. Paramparao aur anusaashan ko boht maante hai. Ghar me jo sabse anusaashit hai aur buddhimatta se bharpoor hai ussi ko ye mehatv dete hai. Inke 2 petrol pump the jo inhone apne baccho me baant diye.
3. Brijesh (age -56 yrs) : Veer ke Dad, Manorath ka bada ladka. Ek petrol pump ka maalik hai. Uske alaawa ek luxury hotel hai jisse uski patni sambhaalti hai.
4. Shweta (age - 47 yrs) : Veer ki sauteli Maa (Step-mom), Brijesh ki dusri patni. Shweta kahi se bhi 47 ki prateet nahi hoti. Ye Brijesh dwara banwai gayi hotel ki maalkin hai aur usse apni beti ke saath sambhaalti hai.
5. Bhumika (age - 25 yrs) : Shweta aur uske pehle pati ki eklauti beti, Veer ki Step-sister. B.com aur hotel management ka course karne ke baad ab apni Maa ke saath hotel sambhaalti hai.
6. Karunesh (age - 55 yrs) : Manorath ka dusra beta, Veer ke chacha. Brijesh ka chota bhai hai aur saath hi uss dusre petrol pump ka maalik.
7. Sumitra (age - 49 yrs) : Karunesh ki patni, Veer ki chachi. Gadrayi hui hai par moti kahi se bhi nahi. Badi badi chhuchiya, gori makhmali twacha, nain naksh jo madhosh kar de.
8. Vivek (age - 28 yrs) : Karunesh aur Sumitra ka bada beta. Karunesh ne Vivek pe kaafi paisa kharch kiya hai jiske chalte aaj Vivek ki khud ki ek automobiles ki company hai.
9. Ragini (age - 27 yrs) : Vivek ki patni, Veer ki Bhabhi. Qayaamat hai ekdum Ragini. Ek aisi ladki jisse harr koi apni banaana chaahe. Jisse dekh ke muh se bas yahi nikaalta hai ki kaash ye meri hoti.
10. Arohi (age - 22 yrs) : Karunesh aur Sumitra ki badi beti. Veer ke hi same college me uski senior hai. Kam bolti hai. Dikhne me khubsoorat aur alag kism ki beauty hai ye. Isse dekh ke nasha sa chadh jae kisi ko bhi.
11. Pranjal (age - 21 yrs) : Karunesh aur Sumitra ka chota beta. Abhi B.com kar raha hai same college se.
12. Kavya (age - 18 yrs) : Karunesh aur Sumitra ki choti beti. Chanchal, sharmeeli aur thodi savendansheel. Abhi abhi college me aayi hai toh abhi duniya daari ke baare utna sab nahi pata. Dikhne me ekdum Cute hai aur pyaari.
Ye tha intro, baaki characters samay aane par introduce hote jaenge.
Dhanyavaad!