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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery
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Bahut hi Badiya intro he Bhai. Relations Samaj ke Bahut Maja Aya. Ab muje dekna he kavya ko kaise karunesh aur brijesh uski komal chuth kaise Chat dalthe he. Aur apna hero kaise uss maa Saman sumitra ki gaand Sung daltha heIntroduction :
Characters ke baare me zyaada kuch nahi bataunga. Aap khud unke baare me padh ke unhe jaaniyega. Ek chota sa intro de raha hu taaki relationship samajh aa sake aapko.
1. Veer (age - 20 yrs) : Kahani ka Main character.
2. Manorath (age - 80 yrs) : Veer ke Dada jii. Paramparao aur anusaashan ko boht maante hai. Ghar me jo sabse anusaashit hai aur buddhimatta se bharpoor hai ussi ko ye mehatv dete hai. Inke 2 petrol pump the jo inhone apne baccho me baant diye.
3. Brijesh (age -56 yrs) : Veer ke Dad, Manorath ka bada ladka. Ek petrol pump ka maalik hai. Uske alaawa ek luxury hotel hai jisse uski patni sambhaalti hai.
4. Shweta (age - 47 yrs) : Veer ki sauteli Maa (Step-mom), Brijesh ki dusri patni. Shweta kahi se bhi 47 ki prateet nahi hoti. Ye Brijesh dwara banwai gayi hotel ki maalkin hai aur usse apni beti ke saath sambhaalti hai.
5. Bhumika (age - 25 yrs) : Shweta aur uske pehle pati ki eklauti beti, Veer ki Step-sister. B.com aur hotel management ka course karne ke baad ab apni Maa ke saath hotel sambhaalti hai.
6. Karunesh (age - 55 yrs) : Manorath ka dusra beta, Veer ke chacha. Brijesh ka chota bhai hai aur saath hi uss dusre petrol pump ka maalik.
7. Sumitra (age - 49 yrs) : Karunesh ki patni, Veer ki chachi. Gadrayi hui hai par moti kahi se bhi nahi. Badi badi chhuchiya, gori makhmali twacha, nain naksh jo madhosh kar de.
8. Vivek (age - 28 yrs) : Karunesh aur Sumitra ka bada beta. Karunesh ne Vivek pe kaafi paisa kharch kiya hai jiske chalte aaj Vivek ki khud ki ek automobiles ki company hai.
9. Ragini (age - 27 yrs) : Vivek ki patni, Veer ki Bhabhi. Qayaamat hai ekdum Ragini. Ek aisi ladki jisse harr koi apni banaana chaahe. Jisse dekh ke muh se bas yahi nikaalta hai ki kaash ye meri hoti.
10. Arohi (age - 22 yrs) : Karunesh aur Sumitra ki badi beti. Veer ke hi same college me uski senior hai. Kam bolti hai. Dikhne me khubsoorat aur alag kism ki beauty hai ye. Isse dekh ke nasha sa chadh jae kisi ko bhi.
11. Pranjal (age - 21 yrs) : Karunesh aur Sumitra ka chota beta. Abhi B.com kar raha hai same college se.
12. Kavya (age - 18 yrs) : Karunesh aur Sumitra ki choti beti. Chanchal, sharmeeli aur thodi savendansheel. Abhi abhi college me aayi hai toh abhi duniya daari ke baare utna sab nahi pata. Dikhne me ekdum Cute hai aur pyaari.
Ye tha intro, baaki characters samay aane par introduce hote jaenge.
Dhanyavaad!
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veer ka pariwar ek sanyukt pariwar hain.. aaj bhi dadajee ka dabdaba hain pariwar mein... nahin toh budhho ko kaun puchhta hain... parichay se kadak swabhaw ke maloom hote hain... do bete hain inke....
veer kahani ka nayak... maa mar chuki hain... baap ne doosri shaadi kee usse ek sauteli behen bhi hain. jo iske baap se bhi nahin hain.... lekin uske baad uski baap ko unse koi santan prapt nahin hui... aur shayad aage bhi aasar nahin lagte... ab veer ka uski sauteli mata se kaise sambandh hain yeh toh aage kahani mein pata chalega...
pariwar mein abhi se shabkuchh batwara ho chuka hain dadajee ke jeete jee,, behtar hain isse aapsi matbhed kam honge... waise ek achambhit kar dene waali baat hain veer ke alawa uski koi aur sagi bhai ya behen nahin hain lekin phir bhi veer unke chhote chacha ke beto se umra mein kaafi chhota hain... jab kee unske papa bare hain toh shaadi jahir hain pehle hui hogi...
veer ke baare mein naam ke alawa aur kuchh nahin maloom dekhte hain aage kahani mein...
kuchh confusion hain jiske aage jawab kee ummeed...
veer kahani ka nayak... maa mar chuki hain... baap ne doosri shaadi kee usse ek sauteli behen bhi hain. jo iske baap se bhi nahin hain.... lekin uske baad uski baap ko unse koi santan prapt nahin hui... aur shayad aage bhi aasar nahin lagte... ab veer ka uski sauteli mata se kaise sambandh hain yeh toh aage kahani mein pata chalega...
pariwar mein abhi se shabkuchh batwara ho chuka hain dadajee ke jeete jee,, behtar hain isse aapsi matbhed kam honge... waise ek achambhit kar dene waali baat hain veer ke alawa uski koi aur sagi bhai ya behen nahin hain lekin phir bhi veer unke chhote chacha ke beto se umra mein kaafi chhota hain... jab kee unske papa bare hain toh shaadi jahir hain pehle hui hogi...
veer ke baare mein naam ke alawa aur kuchh nahin maloom dekhte hain aage kahani mein...
kuchh confusion hain jiske aage jawab kee ummeed...
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Nayi kahani ki bahut bahut badhai ho bhaiSabhi ko sabse pehle Hello!
Ye meri iss forum par dusri kahani hogi. Pehli kahaani [Akhir kyu?From hatred to love] ko aap sabhi ne itna saraaha aur pyaar diya ki mujhe dusri kahaani likhne par majboor kar diya.
By the way meri pehli kahani padhi ya nahi? Nahi padhi toh jao yaar pehle usko padho. Fir ye nayi kahani me dubki lagaana.
Wese ek writer ki taaqat uski likhaawat hoti hai par saath hi saath wahi uski kamzori bhi hoti hai. Ek writer bina likhe reh hi nahi sakta. Wo kuch na kuch likhta hi rehta hai aur apni kalpanao se nayi nayi kahaniyo ko utpadit karta hai. Aisa hi haal kuch mera bhi hai. Isliye aapke saamne prastut hu apni ek aur nayi kahani lekar,
"Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery"
Ye kahani ekdum hi hatt ke hone waali hai. Aisi kahani aapne nahi padhi hogi. Kahani ki plot setting 'System' par adhaarit hai. Jinhone chinese aur japanese novels padhi hai iss setting ki unhe pata hoga. Par jinhone nahi padhi hai unke liye ye ekdum new hone waali hai. Isliye, mene socha kyu na iss plot setting ko yaha forum par introduce kiya jae.
Ab kuch key points dhyaan me zaroor rakhiyega kahani ko padhne se pehle kyuki baad me comment section me apun ko koi bakchodi nahi chahiye.
1. Story ka prefix wese toh mein fantasy rakhne wala tha par kyuki isme incest bhi hai kaafi maatra me toh mene incest rakh diya.
2. Story harem par based hai.
3. Story based toh real world me hi hai par kuch logics apply nahi honge.
4. Ye kahani kaalpanik hai. Isme charchit sabhi paatr keval meri kalpanao ka hissa hai. Yadi koi naam, vyavsaay, ya kuch aur asal zindagi me kisi se mel khaata hai toh ye keval ek sanyog hoga. Isse kisi galat nazariye sa na liye jae.
Bas ye 4 points ko dhyaan me rakhiyega.
Intro chota sa hi dunga, mein chaahta hu readers khud hi kahani padh ke characters ke baare me jaane taaki aap paatro se aur acche se familiar ho sake. Isliye, zyada bada intro nahi dunga.
Dhanyavaad!
Nevil singh
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Mehrbaan aate aate bahut der kar di
Shukriya aapka bahut bahut
Nayi kalpnaao ko murt rupe dene ke liye
Nevil singh
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Kayamat dhaa gaya aapka yeh najraana bhaiIntroduction :
Characters ke baare me zyaada kuch nahi bataunga. Aap khud unke baare me padh ke unhe jaaniyega. Ek chota sa intro de raha hu taaki relationship samajh aa sake aapko.
1. Veer (age - 20 yrs) : Kahani ka Main character.
2. Manorath (age - 80 yrs) : Veer ke Dada jii. Paramparao aur anusaashan ko boht maante hai. Ghar me jo sabse anusaashit hai aur buddhimatta se bharpoor hai ussi ko ye mehatv dete hai. Inke 2 petrol pump the jo inhone apne baccho me baant diye.
3. Brijesh (age -56 yrs) : Veer ke Dad, Manorath ka bada ladka. Ek petrol pump ka maalik hai. Uske alaawa ek luxury hotel hai jisse uski patni sambhaalti hai.
4. Shweta (age - 47 yrs) : Veer ki sauteli Maa (Step-mom), Brijesh ki dusri patni. Shweta kahi se bhi 47 ki prateet nahi hoti. Ye Brijesh dwara banwai gayi hotel ki maalkin hai aur usse apni beti ke saath sambhaalti hai.
5. Bhumika (age - 25 yrs) : Shweta aur uske pehle pati ki eklauti beti, Veer ki Step-sister. B.com aur hotel management ka course karne ke baad ab apni Maa ke saath hotel sambhaalti hai.
6. Karunesh (age - 55 yrs) : Manorath ka dusra beta, Veer ke chacha. Brijesh ka chota bhai hai aur saath hi uss dusre petrol pump ka maalik.
7. Sumitra (age - 49 yrs) : Karunesh ki patni, Veer ki chachi. Gadrayi hui hai par moti kahi se bhi nahi. Badi badi chhuchiya, gori makhmali twacha, nain naksh jo madhosh kar de.
8. Vivek (age - 28 yrs) : Karunesh aur Sumitra ka bada beta. Karunesh ne Vivek pe kaafi paisa kharch kiya hai jiske chalte aaj Vivek ki khud ki ek automobiles ki company hai.
9. Ragini (age - 27 yrs) : Vivek ki patni, Veer ki Bhabhi. Qayaamat hai ekdum Ragini. Ek aisi ladki jisse harr koi apni banaana chaahe. Jisse dekh ke muh se bas yahi nikaalta hai ki kaash ye meri hoti.
10. Arohi (age - 22 yrs) : Karunesh aur Sumitra ki badi beti. Veer ke hi same college me uski senior hai. Kam bolti hai. Dikhne me khubsoorat aur alag kism ki beauty hai ye. Isse dekh ke nasha sa chadh jae kisi ko bhi.
11. Pranjal (age - 21 yrs) : Karunesh aur Sumitra ka chota beta. Abhi B.com kar raha hai same college se.
12. Kavya (age - 18 yrs) : Karunesh aur Sumitra ki choti beti. Chanchal, sharmeeli aur thodi savendansheel. Abhi abhi college me aayi hai toh abhi duniya daari ke baare utna sab nahi pata. Dikhne me ekdum Cute hai aur pyaari.
Ye tha intro, baaki characters samay aane par introduce hote jaenge.
Dhanyavaad!
Andaaj aisha hai to anjaam kaisha hoga
Veer ko to bhai hi bachaye in hasheenao se
Nevil singh
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Injaar rahega dost agle khyaal ka jo Kish aur le ude ish katha ka bahav
Welcome Back Werewolf bhai. kaafi intezar karvaya aapne aapni nayi story ki liye....
Introduction dekh ke hi pata lag gaya hai ki ye story bhi aapki pehli story jaise hi dhamakedar hogi.
lekin ek doubt hai jo mein aapse janna chatha hoon ki aapne introduction mein ye nahi bataya ki iss story mein female lead kon hai.....
Introduction dekh ke hi pata lag gaya hai ki ye story bhi aapki pehli story jaise hi dhamakedar hogi.
lekin ek doubt hai jo mein aapse janna chatha hoon ki aapne introduction mein ye nahi bataya ki iss story mein female lead kon hai.....
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Kaafi detail me socha hai aapne
Aur aapka sochna ekdum sahi hai.
Aage kahani padhenge toh saare doubts clear hote jaenge.
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Thank you so much bhai!
I know mein late ho gaya thoda.
Thoda busy tha
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Female lead samay aane par khud pata chal jaegi