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There is one thing in last two updates that does not match with your incredible writing skills.....
Aur woh hai Dhananjay ki boli.
Dhananjay gaon se hai, lekin harr gaon ki ek jaisi bhasha nahi hoti. Dhananjay Rajasthan se hai, lekin uske bolne ka dhanga kahi purvanchal, Uttar Pradesh jaisa hai.
Acha hota ki uski jaban ne marvari yaa mewari rang hota, bajay banarasi bhojpuri ke.
Mai aapki or samar bhai ki baaton se sehmat hoonNope! Not at all!
Hazaro readers me se ab tak kisi ne bhi ye complain nahi jataayi hai ki Bhavna ek maa ki tarah pyaar nahi kar rahi Veer se, which means — you're totally confused.
Ab tumhe Shweta isliye pasand aa rahi hogi kyunki woh overly possessive hai. Kise pasand nahi aayega ki koi female aapki taraf possesive rahe. Tum uss way me dekh rahe ho.
Har character possesive hoke apna pyaar nahi dikhaate. Rahi baat Bhavna ne Veer ko terrace pe bheja? Toh uska poora haq tha. Veer jhooth bol bol ke ghar se gaayab ho raha tha. Woh uski maa hai aur agar thappad bhi maare toh bhi uska poora haq hai Veer pe. Toh terrace pe bhejne se kya ho gaya? Just for your information — Mumbai me thand nahi padti bhai. Woh ek coastal region hai. Waha ki thand thand ke naam pe mazak hai. Isliye, Bhavna ne upar jaane kaha tha saza ke roop me.
Ab yahi pe toh difference aa gaya. Readers se leke in-story characters bhi bhavna aur Veer ke beech ki ankahi baato ko jaan nahi paaye. Veer pehle hi samajh gaya tha ki ye saza ke roop me bas ek mazaak tha. Tej turant upar isliye aayi kyunki woh desperate thi. Bhavna Tej aur Shweta ki tarah desperate nahi hai.
Rahi baat woh 2 baje late kyu aayi? Kyunki woh nahi chaahti thi ki koi bhi use dekhe. Usne Veer ko saza di thi. Ab baad me agar woh khud hi upar chali jaati turant toh sabhi dekh lete. Fir saza ka kya matlab?
Wo wait karti rahi sabke sone ka aur baad me gayi but unfortunately sabhi jaag rahe the aur sabhi ne bhavna ko terrace par jaate dekh liya tha.
Ab woh kaam chhor Veer ke saath kyu nahi rehti? Toh kisne kaha ki woh Veer ke saath nahi hai? Woh toh har roop se Veer ki madad karne ke liye taiyaar hai. Lekin, uske liye apne passion ko chhorne ki kya zaroorat? Ye kisne keh diya ki kaam chhoregi tabhi uske pyaar ka saboot milega?
Veer khud nahi chaahega ki uski maa kaam chhore. Rahi baat wo gussa kyu karti hai? Mujhe toh nahi lagta ki usne abhi tak gussa dikhaya bhi hai. Banawti gusse aur asli gusse me zameen asmaan ka antar hota hai. Ye yaad rakhna.
Bhavna jo aksar kehti hai, unn shabdo ka arth asal me kuchh aur hi hota hai.
Baaki yaha pe bahut se behatreen tamaam readers hai. Unse khud hi poochh lo ~
Samar_Singh Silent_killer Suraj13796 dododo Damha
Inn reader ka kehna hai ki Bhavna Veer se ek maa ki tarah pyaar nahi karti. Ya uss tarah se nahi jataati jis tarah se jataana chahiye. Kripya iss par prakaash daale.
I already explained that to him.Mai aapki or samar bhai ki baaton se sehmat hoon
Listen Barewolf bro-
Haath ki Paanchon ungliyan ek barabar nhi hoti, same as sabke sochne ka or Pyaar jatane ka tareeka alag alag hota hai...
Mana ki yeh ek Fictional Story hai but you can't be agree that Werewolf bhai ne is Story me Reality ki itni Jaan fooki hai na ap agr Gaur karo har ek scenes, har ek moments,then you will know how this story is still favourite today in all of them...?
Bas isi wajah se...Kurdaaron me reality hai...jaisa ki aap Samar bhai se sun chuke ye koi Bollywood type to hai nhi...yaha Writer Sahab ne reality ko itna Thoos Thoos bhara h ki Veer agr koi Skill use karke rapid power haasil karta hai to, iske badle woh kaafi risks bhi uthata hai... L
I still remembered -when1st Legendary Beuwulf Blessings were used at Slogans hideout...pahli bar me uski haalat dekhne layak thi... approximately Veer 20-25 bhi us skill ko control nhi kar paya tha uski saans or uski heart rate itni increased thi...sooo
Jahan tak apki complain hai we will see Mom-son bonding soon just give time to Writer,wait and see....
Action will start very soon. Things will get interesting and intense.Awsome update but we are missing the action and most of all good hint of veers girlfriends to be.
Yahi toh duwidha hai. Sabko Veer chahiye. Par koi Veer se bhi toh poochhe ki use kaun chahiye?Ek baar fir se dhamaka hoga...
Sab ke man me jng chal rahi hai... Veer to jinse bhi pyar karta hai. Sabko time de raha hai. Sabhi apna apna swarth dekh rahi hai..
Sabhi ko akela chahiye.
Jb ki usko samalna ek bas ka rog nhi hai..
Ab naya missian milaa dekhte kya hota hai
Nidhi shuru se hi bholi rahi hai. Tabhi toh Rajat ke jaal me fass gayi thi. Use politics na aati.Bohat khoob.
Do jagah do alag alag chahne walo ka takrav hone wala thaa Nidhi n Ragini and Nidhi ka magar Nidhi ki bato ne kahi na kahi usay kuch had tak calm kar diya magar jatey jatey woh apni purani khaslat dikha gayi aur nidhi ko phasa gayi sawalo ke jal me
Yes. Kind of... Cold war toh nahi lekin... Haan, tej ab thoda wary zaroor rahegi Suhana se... Baaki dekhte hai.Wahi doosri aur Tej and Suhana - shayad dono ko pata lag chuka hai ki kahi n kahi koi gadbad hai aur unke beech me cold war shuru ho gaya hain ek tarah se.
Yahi plan hai.Idhar inspector sahiba bhi ab karan ke peeche lagegi lekin itne bade tycoon se takrane ki keemat bhi chukani hoti hai aur woh bhi bohat badi sath me agar kamyab hui to veer ke liye muskil badna shuru hone wali hai aur jaldi hi usay Kai sari mushkilo ka samna karne wala hai thanks to our Damian usne har taraf se veer ke ya usay related logo ke dushmano ko sakriya kar diya like evidence ka inspector ke hath lagna.
Yes. Otherwise Veer's a goner.Idhar Rebecca ne apna pawn ko aage bada diya hai is shatranj ke khel me veer charo taraf se ghir chuka hai aur bus Shah maat ki category me pohach chuka hai usay jaldi hi bohat khaas karna hoga coz woh inhi uljhano me rahega to koi us per bada war kar jayega.
Thanks a lot. Keep supporting.Intezar rahega next update ka aapki busy life ke bawjood kahani ki lalach aur ki maang karne e lagti hai
Well, that's my trademark.Outstanding Excellent bole to ekdum jhakaas....
Always happen with every update.....ek slow pace dramatic scene shuru se hoti hai aur end ek cliffhanger pe hota hai.
Do you want them in the next gathering?After a hard battle and long time, finally ek family gathering hui...sab sath the.
Sivay Brijesh, Karunesh aur Pranjal Vivek ke
Bhavna was analysing her daughter. She wanted to see whether Tej took this decision while being clear-headed or not. She wanted to see Tej's resolve. How strong it was. She wanted to see whether this decision will ever be fruitful for her daughter in the long run or not? And, in those few seconds she analysed all of that.Bhawna as always master of hiding her expression, concerned about her kids and want that their children should have a clear mind about whatever they are doing. Tej ne job chhod di jise vo bachpan se karti aa rahi thi, but she was sure that why she is doing, so bhawna gladly accepted.
Actually, she's very committed to her job. It's because it's her passion. It was this job which in a sense actually fostered Tej. This job provided her with all the sufficient needs she could attain for her daughter. So, she cannot just kick it aside. She has her feelings attached to her work. And, she knows that she'll be traveling to various places for her work. Even though woh apne bete se abhi mili hai. Nahi jaana chaahti woh uss se door, lekin fir bhi-Aur maybe bhawna bhi samjhti hai ki apne bete se jis duri ko usne 20 saalo tak saha hai, vahi Tej bhi apne bhai se alag rahi hai, and she has that chance jo shayad Bhawna ke pass nahi hai.
There will be a time skip in the future.Arohi to jane ki taiyari me hai 2 saal ke liye....matlab kya uske baad hi Veer ki bhidant Gaurav se hogi IT sector me. Vaise bhi bina gaurav ko niptaye to Suhana ka matter pura sultega nahi.
Hai toh kayi. Lekin, unme bhi tier list hoti hai.Waise ek IIM Powai me bhi hai, udhar bhi jaa sakti hai, ahemdabad jana compulsory nahi hota
Pata chalega aage ki aisa kyu ho raha hai.Now talk about bhumika,,,iske kya ho gaya ek dum se ishq ka bukhar lagne laga hai shayad.
Abhi aur bhi interesti hoga jab aage ka dekhoge.You chose a quite different approach with bhumika. Matlab jo bhi ab tak Veer aur Kavya, Tej, Arohi ke sath hua yaa hoga usme ek transformation hai pyar ka from bhai behan to lovers.
Lekin bhumika wala scene thoda weird but interesting hai
Tej aur Veer jab mile tab dono hi teen age cross kar chuke the. Bhai behan waali tadap thi obviously. But there was attraction as well. Veer was seeing his real sister after 20 years. And, Tej was seeing her brother after such a long time. Veer wondered how Tej would look like and same thing happened with Tej. And, when they finally meet... That spark was there. (When Veer held Tej when she was about to fall inside the cave. And, when Pranjal threw her off the stairs.)Arohi aur Kavya bhale shuru se Veer ke kareeb na rahi ho, but they are his sisters. Aur vahan par ye najar aata bhi hai. Tez 20 saal alag rahi lekin phir bhi kuch hadd tak shuruaat me vo bhai behan hi the, ab kuch aur ho gaye hai.
Ladies are getting attracted. We saw Purvi maasi too. Shweta too. They are getting attracted towards him. We'll come to know soon about this whole matter. Bhumika... Uske saath ye abhi ka chakkar nahi hai. As she says... Jab se Veer aaya hai China se laut ke tab se uske saath ye ho raha hai. Ye pehle bhi tha. Lekin, itna intense nahi. Par, China se aane ke baad Bhumika Veer ko kuchh zyada hi notice kar rahi hai. Look! Veer is handsome. A lot. So, we can't really blame her for liking him. As to why this is happening? We'll have to wait a little for that.Lekin bhumika kabhi uski behan nahi thi, they were strangers living under same roof, Veer bhumika ke liye uske sautele pita ka beta tha uska bhai nahi. Phir vo uska aur shweta ka saviour ban gaya aur ab? Veer ko upar vala bachaye ek aur line me lag gayi hai. Veer ke laude lagna tay hai.
Who knows she might even achieve that in the future. For now she's behind Bhavna.Shweta iska kya kahu, I had told enough things about her many times. Jis din Bhawna se aage nikalne ki icha mann se nikal degi, jab uss se inferior feel karna chhod degi tab hi uske barabar aa jayegi.
Nidhi's innocence vanquished Ragini's anger.Ragini gayi to usi irade se thi, jiska darr tha lekin hopefully vo hua nahi. Varna Veer to Veer main bhi support nahi kar pata. Nidhi ke case me koi bakchodi pasand nahi apne ko.
Yes. Ragini sach bhale hi na bataati lekin woh seeds of doubts ko zaroor bo jaati Nidhi ke andar. Jo ki aur bhi taqleef pahucha sakte the Nidhi ko.Kahi na kahi nidhi ki achai aur purity ne Ragini ko intimidate kiya, aur anjane me sahi nidhi ki kahi baato ne hi nidhi ka dil tutne se bacha liya, varna to ragini irada pakka karke aayi thi.
What she meant was... Wo dono apni jagah sahi hai. It's Veer who's not cooperating. Toh sab kuchh use sort out karne ki zaroorat hai.This sentence hold a message in itself, maybe eventually ragini will accept Nidhi lekin kab aur kaise? Aur Nidhi ke alawa jo line lagi padi hai, uska kya
Aur already Veer khud chala aaya.Ek hota hai phate me taang adana...lekin ye trisha madam to phate me letne ko taiyar hai. Mumbai me murder pe murder ho rahe hai, city high alert pe hai aur inhe slogan ke katil dhundhne ka adventure karna hai. Khair kaan aise pakdo ke vaise...rasta koi bhi ho aana Veer tak hai.
Karan chaah ke bhi nahi fass sakta.Par apne ye sidhe sadhe ashiq karan bhaiya fas gaye police vali ke chakkar me
Purani Suhana would have gone like - "you listen you clueless stupid girl. Tumhara bhai khud mere paas rengte rengte hue aaya tha madad maangne ke liye, samjhi na? Mujhe daya aa gayi. After all, they don't call me the gracious Suhana for nothing. So, I helped him a little. Jaa ke apne bhai se poochho ki woh yaha kyu aaya? Hmph!"Aakhirkar Suhana aur Tez ki mulakat ho hi gayi....tez aayi to thi bahut kuch soch ke aur kuch hadd tak use vahi mila bhi. Lekin Suhana ne bhi saste me nipta diya. Purani Suhani hoti to naa jane kya karti
That's because she can't show her weak side to anyone. Not everyone is Veer. She knows that once she show her weak side, people will start using her. Uski iss weak side ka fayda uthaya jayega. So, she prevents herself from showing her vulnerable side.Suhana is timid and weak in front of Veer but she still holds that aura and charm against others. Haa utni strong aur rude nahi hai jaisi pehle thi, lekin utni weak bhi nahi jaisi Veer ke sath hoti hai.
The moment Suhana saw Tejal's behaviour for Veer. She knew that Tej was obsessed with Veer. So, she said things which Tej needed to hear exactly.Tej aayi to thi Suhana aur Veer ko jaan ne, lekin Suhana me batein Tej aue Veer par laa di. Bhery inteligent
She's moving according to her plan.Damian ko Rebecca ne Australia bhej diya, kisi nayi husn pari ko handle karne,
aur mumbai me Divya ko mission de diya, anjane me kahi kisi din iski vajah se Veer ke sath koi kaand naa ho jaye
We'll see what's wrong with the murder cases.Why the hell this weird one came to India from US, murders to vahan bhi kar sakta tha, sirf logo ko marne to yahan tak nahi aaya hoga, yaa ho bhi sakta hai pagal hai saala, kuch bharosa nahi
Insaano ko maarne ka mission?2 batein hai yaa to ye murderer sach me pagal hai yaa ise system se koi mission mila hai, maybe some kind of task.
Everything is happening for a reason.Ek jagah par murder me dono kaan gayab the, ek jagah dono hath, prabhakar ke case me gardan ka bada hissa nahi tha, and in this murder lumber part is missing.
Murder karne ka lagbhag ek jaisa tarika and without wappen, definitely using some type of skill or card given by system.
Yes. Sab log Veer ko gher rahe hai aur agar Veer ne sahi samay par action nahi liya toh waqai kuchh bahut bura ho jayega. As I said... This arc will play with your anxiety. And, you'll come to know this very soon.Is he collecting different body parts of people for something.
To Veer ko mission mila and limit is 14 days, aur daanv par hai loved ones family, friends etc.
Ab is arc ki jyadatar ghatnayen isi 14 din ke andar hongi, sab kuch bahut escalate hone vala hai. Sare dushman trap bana chuke hai, police bhi Veer tak pahuch jayegi, Prisoner to murder kar hi raha hai, aur limit sirf 14 din
Thanks a lot man.Mujhe to Nidhi par khatra najar aa raha hai
And these small details of scene 'uske hath coffee cup par kas gaye', 'Cup ko pakadne se uski ungaliya safed ho gayi' and many more... aisi details hi pure scene ko aur jyada imaginative, living realistic bana deti hai.
Hats off to your writing skills and dedication
20k waala jeevan me na dunga.Super excited to see what coming ahead
Great story, awesome update
Ek 20k vala update do, Damha aur _ABHAY_Smarty_ to bina padhe hila hilakar marr jayenge
Dusshera ke baad. Mein hometown aaya hu apne. So, festival time to time hi nahi hai. Likhna start kar diya hai maine. But it'll take some time.Bhai next update kab aeyga mujhe teju ka reaction dekhna hai Kiara ya Ava ke sath jab veer ho please bhai do some thing and Ragini bhi dekhe
Koi baat nhi bro....Dusshera ke baad. Mein hometown aaya hu apne. So, festival time to time hi nahi hai. Likhna start kar diya hai maine. But it'll take some time.