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Woh pal door nahi.Yes bro ,the meetup of trinity along with Veer that is the scene i wanna see
how will kaera react ? And the bond between trinity as in childhood will be established or not? I think Veer will be trying to reunite this trio .
Views sirf updates par depend nahi karti hai, views sabse jayada number of pages par depend karti hai aur sath hi sath time ke proportional hota hai.
Ek reader yadi 10 pages visit karti hai to views 10 count kiya jata hai.
Isliye jisme Index nahi bana hota hai uske views mostly jayada hote hain.
For example:
Second most views story mein index nahi bana hai iska fayda writer ko hua hai views jayada Mila hai.
Lekin kabhi kabhi index nahi hone se kuchh readers story nahi padhte hain jaise ki main.
Werewolf Sir
Samar_Singh.
Ye maine experience kiya hai aur jana hai.
Divya toh Day 1 se hi apne pati ko pasand nahi karti. Ye toh sab jaante hai. Uski aur Suhana ki shaadi compromise ke chalte hui thi. Dara dhamka ke Nik aur Gaurav ne unse shaadi ki. Toh obviously Divya Nik ko pasand nahi karti.Badhiya update bhai
Ye wala to veer ke liye bahut bhari raha divya ghar pahunch gayi veer ke or veer ki watt lagwa di
1. Lekin ek bat ha divya veer ke ghar gayi to usne apna sir name dhawan bataya na ki apne husband ka kya uske man me kuchh chal raha ha ya fir lagta ha ki wo apne oati se khafa ho gayi ha kher lekin jis tarah divya veer ke raj kholti jaa rahi thi usi tarah veer ke gharwalon ki sanse atak ti jaa rahi thi ki veer ne itna sab kuchh chipa rakha ha me ye soch raha tha ki veer apne karnamo ke bare me apne gharwalon ko shayd batayega lekin wo kaam Divya ne kar diya lekin diya ka attitude sabhi ko ras nahi aya ha khaskar bhavna ko fir bhi aone bete ke liye wo chup rahi abhi to divya se sab khafa ha but who knows bad me kya ho
Penalties high hai iska matlab mission tough hai. System sadey se mission ke liye itni badi penalty nahi rakhega. Toh iska matlab ye hai ki iss mystery ka solve hona bahut zaroori hai kyuki agar ye mission fail hua toh Veer apne qareebi ki jaan gawa sakta hai.2. Tej kisi dusri ladki ko veer ke sath nahi dekh sakti uski possessiveness badhti jaa rahi ha or veer ko tej or suhana ki mulakat ka bhi pata ha jisse tej or kuchh jyada bol nahi payi lekin is bar wo khafa ho gayi ha veer se lagta ha jis tarah se wo veer ki see off karne nahi ayi ab kya kare veer bhi ek to mission mila hua ha or uper mission ki penalty bhi khatarnak ha jisse veer ko na chahte hue bhi apne gharwalon ka dil dukhana padta ha
Divya aayi hi aise intentions ke saath aur aise time par ki... Kisi ko bhi uska aagman raas nahi aaya. Par shayad hume bhavishya me koi badlaav dekhne ko mile? Who knows.3. Suman ko dekha kaise veer ke liye age aa gayi thi agar divya kuchh ut patang harkat karti jo ki wo na karti lekin fir bhi man lo wo karti to suman to udhar hi jung ched deti or ragini or veer ke bich bhi conversation hui thodi bahut hi sahi hui to jisme veer ke liye fikra thi to wahi divya ke liye warning bhi thi shayd vaise to ragini ko bhi divya kuchh khas pasand nahi ayi
Iske pehle bhi Veer ne use Shweta maa kehke pukaara hai. ab wo update dhoondh sakte ho toh dhundho.4. Bhawna ko mana liya tha veer ne or shweta kuchh kahna chhahti thi lekin veer ne moka hi na diya use or veer ne pahli bar use shweta maa kahkar bulaya sabke samne wo to udhar hi chari khane chit ho gayi kuchh bol hi na payi wo jo shabd wo sunna chahti thi veer ke muh se akhirkar uski tamanna jo puri ho gayi
Parivar jano ko dheere dheere bahut kuchh ab pata lagta jayega.5. Kher ek bat ha is sabke bad veer ke gharwale sochenge jarur ki veer jarur china me bhi kuchh jarur kiya hoga or pura sach nahi bataya to shayd in sabke bad wo veer se puri sachai ki demand bhi kar sakte han ki akhir or kitana raaj chhupa ke betha ha veer unse
Veer Ava ko ek chance de raha hai. Iss mission me use saath laane ka he ek bahaana bhi hai kyuki wo dekhna chaahta hai ki kya Ava par wo dobaara trust kar sakta hai?6. Idhar ava bhi aa gayi sath me veer ke jo divya ko ras nahi aya ava ko france wale incident ki wajah se tane sunne milte han divya se wo to shukra ha ki abhi suhana ko nahi pata ki ava udhar ha or veer ke sath ha or jab dono aamne samne hongi to pata nahi kya hoga divya se jyada suhana khafa ha ava se lekin divya ko wo nahi pata na jo veer ko pata ha ki ava ke pas system ha jo ki veer ke liye ek helping hand ki tarah hi ha kya pata ane wala dushman kitna takatwar ho
Yahi toh hum iss arc me aage jaanenge ki ye sab cheezein kya sense banayengi? Abhi toh dheere dheere bas clues saamne aa rahe hai. Baad me saare dots connect honge.7. Or murder spot per iska milna
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Ye kahin se bhi normal to nahi lagta kyonki is kahani me jo bhi milta ha bad me sense banata ha or kuchh chhoti chhoti chijen bad me aisa dhamaka karti ha ki udhar veer ke or idhar padhne walon ke tote ud jate han but wahi is blood test karne wali sui ka koi jya karega ya jo in sabke pichhe ha ya fir system holder jaisa ki pari ne bhi kaha ki iske pichhe kisi system holder ke hone ke chances bahut jyada ha to kya wo logon ka blood utha raha ha ya fir uske paas koi isse related evil skill ho
Veer ko Madhuri me koi interest nahi hai actually. Aur, dusra ye ki Veer waisa hai nahi ki sirf Pranjal ko jalaane ke liye woh Madhuri jaisi bholi bhali ladki ke saath kuchh kare. Not to mention ki woh balki guilty hai apne past ko leke.. ki kaise usne Madhuri ko uss waqt treat Kiya tha. So, Veer Madhuri ka istemal kar Pranjal ko jalaaye? Ye intentionally toh kabhi nahi hone waala.8. Last me akhir kar veer ir pranjal amne samne dono ne hi ek dusre ko pahchan liya ha ir dono hi sochenge ki wo yaha kya kar raha ha kher lekin scene to age ka majedar hoga madhuri pranjal ka pyar ha lekin veer ek bar madhuri ki madad kar chuka ha or madhuri bhi veer ko pahchan legi or madhuri ko veer ke karib dekhkar pranjal jal bhun kar rah jayega i like it agar aisa hita ha to waise bhi pranjal ne jitna kiya uske hisab se to use abhi tak bahut kam saja mili ha socho divya ya ava ko pata pad jaye veer ke past ke bare me to pranjal ka kya hoga kber wo to hone se raha magar pranjal ki jalne wali ha bahut buri tarah se
Ava toh milegi hi milegi. Aaj nahi toh kal... Yarnia ki launch ke waqt Ava kaha jayegi? Kya Veer use invite nahi karega? Definitely karega. Kya woh Kaera, Suhana, Sonia ko invite nahi karega? Definitely karega. Toh imagine kar hi sakte ho ki waha kya scene hoga.9. Kher ek bat to saf ha in sabke bad veer kisi ko bhi ghar le jane ke bare me 100 bar sochega ava ke liye to or mushkil ha kahan wo veer ke pariwar walon se milna chahti thi or kahan divya ne ye kand kar diya ab veer use ghar le jane se pehle sochega jarur or hamari ye trideviyan ava,sonia or kiara na jane kab apas me milengi inko sath me dekhna ha ek frame me kya bate hoti ha inke bich
Aisa isliye hai kyunki, Veer ab tak jitne bhi system holders se mila hai... Unke system ka level uske system ke level ke around hi Raha hai. Ek aadh level upar neeche hi hua hai.10. Ek bat or ha hamesha veer ka naya dushman chahe system holder hi kyon na ho hamesha usse powerful hi hota ha jise veer harakar or takatwar hota jata ha ab ye coincidence ha ya kuchh kyonki jyadatar veer ke dushmano se veer ko us mr.X ne hi ek prakar se samne laya ha veer ka or unko veer ke hathon hi harwaya ha ab ya to uski veer per najar ha ya fir use pata ha ki veer ke pas special system ha kyonki jo veer ki pari kar sakti ha wo koi or system nahi kar paya ha abhi tak age ka pata nahi yar fir uska maksad ho ki veer apne system ko full unlock kar de or veer ko harakar uski sari powers wo le le
Children's Day ka toffy dene wale ho bhai lagta haiWord count ke baare me abhi toh kuchh na bataunga. But the update is getting ready. That I can say...
Word count kal hi disclose karunga. Aur, kya pata kaho update kal hi aa jaaye.
Yes maine bhi unme se ek bhi nahi padha hai.Yes there are multiple reasons which decide the story will get views or not.
Pages ke mamle me to koi aur story iske aas paas bhi nahi aati.
Kahani kitni hi jabardast kyu naa ho, yaa uske millions me views ho, agar woh incomplete hai to ek time waste se jyada kuch nahi.
I started reading those old so called og stories... mostly unfinished and writers never came back. So just left in middle.
Yes bro ,earlier when i was new to forum so i don't know how to check whether story is completed or not ,and i read all these incompleted stories that time i remembered i was so eagre to read the next update but when i realise it will remain uncompleted . It totally disturbed my mind .just think you read fucking 200+updates and the story is found to be undone .i was so into the story that it costs me a week to strenghten up and move forward . But now i also do check for stories which is either completed or writer is willing to complete it .Yes there are multiple reasons which decide the story will get views or not.
Pages ke mamle me to koi aur story iske aas paas bhi nahi aati.
Kahani kitni hi jabardast kyu naa ho, yaa uske millions me views ho, agar woh incomplete hai to ek time waste se jyada kuch nahi.
I started reading those old so called og stories... mostly unfinished and writers never came back. So just left in middle.
And, this is when I consistently reported posts for not spamming and asking irrelevant stuff here.Pages ke mamle me to koi aur story iske aas paas bhi nahi aati.
Bro kya nilmani ka rahasya bhi isi arc me milega ?Woh pal door nahi.
Ye arc bahut kuchh dikhayega.
Yes jaise ki ye story views ke mamle mein jis story se pichhe hai sirf 6 lakhs and 50 thousands ke around pichhe hai magar ye story us story se 13 months baad post Kiya gaya hai.And, this is when I consistently reported posts for not spamming and asking irrelevant stuff here.
When I deleted many posts here.
Imagine me replying everyone by posting single single messages. Back in those days, writers used to do that before. One post for replying one person's comment. Who do you think generalised the concept of replying them in multiples in a single post?
Only me and zopu bhoi back in those days did it. Later on... Baakiyo ne dekha aur fir unhone bhi ye karna shuru kar diya. We'll surpass each one of them soon whether it's views or anything. So, Just chill. We already toppled over them in terms of replies, pages and votes. Only a few check boxes remain now.
Bro for general knowledge who is zopu bhoi ?Only me and zopu bhoi back in those days did it.