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Update - 190 ~ Disturbing Information ​

Ab tak...

"That deal... is mine!!!"

Apne ghar ke kamre me maujood Sonia ne apni mutthi kaste hue kaha. Uske theek peechhe Suchika darwaze par khadi hui thi. Usne halka sa mud use dekha.

Sonia : Suchika-!!!

Suchika : ???

Sonia : Tum meri help karogi na?

Suchika : Yes, Miss!

Sonia : Toh iss baar mujhe ye deal seal karne se koi nahi rok sakta. We'll move according to the plan. No one can stop us. Tum bhi nahi... Kaera!!!

Ab aage...

Casa Belle, Mumbai,
Morning - 9:05 AM ~

Aadesh Jaisinghani ka office vilasita aur shakti ka utkrisht namoona tha. Chikne chamde ke furniture, wooden paneling aur custom artwork ne vishal kamre ko bhar rakha tha. Kehne ko toh ye sirf ek office tha par yeh asaani se kisi bade hall ke barabar tha. Floor-to-ceiling waali inn badi khidkiyo se saari Mumbai nazar aati thi.




Aam taur par iss office me humesha niyantran dikhayi deta tha, lekin aaj Aadesh ki krodhit awaaz ne ise tod diya.

“Kya kaha tumne???”

Uski awaaz office me goonj gayi. Saamne khada uska project manager uski gurraati hui awaaz sunn ke hi sehem gaya. Badi himmat se usne dohraya.

Manager : N-Nexacom ne hume further investment dene se inkaar kar diya hai, Sir!!!

Aadesh (screams) : Maaadarchoooddd!!!

*Craaaaaashhhh*

Usne apni table par rakha kaanch ka paper weight itni zor se feka ki woh anek tukdo me toot kar zameen par bikhar gaya. Uske theek peechhe khadi uski secretary aur bechaara project manager, dono hi kaanp ke reh gaye.

Aadesh : Maine unhe prime partnerships ke offers diye hai, Kumar!!!

Uski teekhi nigaahein apne project manager ki orr gayi, jo aankhein neeche kiye hue dar ke maare khada tha.

Manager (swallows hard) : S-Sir, W-Woh- Unhone badhe hue marketing budget ke baare me kuchh bataya tha. Unka kehna hai ki woh additional funds invest nahi kar sakte kyunki, marketing budget me unhone extra 15% -

Aadesh : Marketing budget?? Lawde ka marketing budget!! Chutiye, tu mujhe ye bata raha hai ki Nexacom — India ki sabse badi conglomerate ke paas sheher ki top-tier hotel me invest karne ke liye achanak se paisa nahi hai? Idhar dekh!! Idhar dekh!! Mere maathe pe chutiya likha hai kya???

Manager : N-Nahi, Sir!

Aadesh : Tujhe pata hai na tu kya bol raha hai?

Manager (nods) : J-Ji sir!

Aadesh : Tujhe hosh hai na ki kya wahiyat baat boli hai tune abhi???

Managar : J-Ji!

Aadesh : India ki sabse badi company ke paas ek hotel ko investment me dene ke liye chavanni bhi nahi hai. Koi sunega toh kya kahega? Koi yakeen bhi karega? Agar, paisa nahi hai, toh company kis par chal rahi hai? Uss Kishore ke laude pe?

Manager : …

Aadesh jaanta tha ki uske manager ne use sirf wahi dohraya jo Nexacom ki taraf se use bataya gaya tha. Waise bhi uska project manager, uski secretary uske paaltu kutte samaan the. Inki kamzoriyaan uske qabze me thi. Isliye, usne apne gusse ko shaant kiya aur thoda iska aaklan kiya. Kya wajah ho sakti thi bhala? Nexacom akasmat hi apni investments se peechhe kyu hati? Kahi usne kisi prakar se unhe anjaane me niraash toh nahi kar diya?

Chintan karte hue uski aankhein sikud gayi. Aur, dimag me ek shaks ki chhavi achanak se daud gayi — Veer!!! Uske baare me sochte hi uske jabde hatasha me bhhichne par majboor ho gaye.

Aadesh (murmurs) : Veer-!

Manager : ???

Aadesh : Wahi iske peechhe hai! Uss kameene ne hi ye karwaya hoga! Behanchod, iss awara kutte ne meri naak me dum kar rakha hai. Mein uss haram-khor ko chhorunga nahi, saala maadarchooood!!!

Uske theek peechhe khadi uski secretary ki apne boss ki gussail awaaz sunte hi rooh kaanp gayi. Na hi usne hilne ki himmat ki, aur na hi kuchh bolne ki.

Aadesh : Magar, tujhe-

Manager : Huh???

Aadesh : Tujhe toh ye pata hona chahiye tha na ki Veer ki pehchaan kin-kin logo se hai??

Manager : E-Eh-!?

Aadesh : Agar, tu itne simple se connections ke baare me bhi pata nahi laga paa raha hai, toh mein bhala tujhe kis kaam ki paise de raha hu, bewakoof?

Manager : M-Maafi chaahta hu, Sir. H-Hume gumrah kiya gaya hai. M-Mein dhyan rakhunga. Lekin, hume pichhle event se popularity zaroor mili hai, Sir. I-Iska matlab hai wo apna kaam achhe se kar raha hai.

Manager ka ishaara uss spy ki orr tha jo Aadesh ne Hotel Prestige me bheja tha. Inn beetein dino me Aadesh dwara bheja gaya spy Hotel Prestige ki saari jankari ikhatta kar raha tha. Aur, abhi haal hi me usne ek jankari bheji thi ki Hotel Prestige waale pre-christmas offers kuchh couples ke liye launch karne waale hai.

Mauka dekhte hi na sirf Aadesh ne ye strategy apni hotel ke liye apnayi balki, Hotel Prestige se pehle hi usne ye offer apni hotel me rakh diya. Yaha tak ki uske advertisement ke liye aneko pamphlets bhi sheher ke mashoor cafes aur shopping marts me batwa diye. Nateeja — Hotel Prestige ki tarqeeb ka fail hona.

Lekin, isi chakkar me Casa Belle lagatar expenses ke chalte naye funds ki demand me aa gaya. Aur, yahi baat Aadesh ko khatak rahi thi. Jitna woh kama nahi rahe the, uss se zyada woh kharch kar rahe the.

Manager : S-Sir, shuru me hume kharcha karna hi hoga. Tabhi jaa ke baad me hum profit kama payenge.

Aadesh : Hmm! Theek hai. Jaisa chal raha hai, chalne do. Humare spy se aur information collect karte raho. Mere paas karodo rupaye hai abhi. Funds hum baaki companies se le sakte hai. Agar, kharcha karne se hi hum top par pahuch sakte hai toh wahi sahi. Strategies ke saath-saath hum luxury me koi kami nahi hone denge.

Manager : J-Ji, Sir!

Filhal ke liye Aadesh funds ke liye utna chintit nahi tha. Uske paas abhi itna paisa tha ki woh kayi mahino tak apni hotel ko bina kisi revenue ke chala sakta tha.

Kintu, woh ek baat nahi jaanta tha. Woh ye ki Veer ne kuchh din pehle hi Bhumika se gupt me baat-cheet ki thi.

Uss din jab Veer Tej par naraz tha kyunki woh uske mobile ko track kar ke cafe me aa dhamki thi, aur kaise sabke saamne usne Kritika aur uspe aarop lagaya tha. Theek uske agle din, Tej ne Veer se baat karne ke liye, uss se maafi maangne ke liye apni himmat jutaayi thi.

'M-Mujhe tumse...! Mujhe tumse kuch zaroori baat karni thi.'

Magar, Veer ne use nazar-andaaz kar diya tha.

'Arey haan! Bhumika di! Mujhe aapse kuch zaroori baat karni thi.'

'Hmm? Kya hua?'

'Aap hotel jaa rahi hai na?'

'Haan! Kyu?'

'Come with me! I'll drop you!'

'Ohh!'

'Wahi baat bhi kar lenge.'

'Okay!'

Bechari Tej toh bas itna hi sunn paayi thi. Lekin, asal baat toh Veer aur Bhumika ke madhya hui thi. Veer uss waqt apni gaadi me Bhumika ko baithaaye Hotel Prestige ke liye hi nikla hua tha.

Bhumika : K-Kya baat karni thi, Veer? A-Aur, tumhare aur Tejal ke beech kuchh hua hai kya? Woh bechari kuchh kehna chaah rahi thi shayad.

Veer : Hmm? Ohh! Aapko kaise pata chala?

Bhumika : Uske chehre se sab pata lag gaya mujhe. Pareshan dikh rahi thi-

Veer : Well, it’s nothing much. Aapko chinta karne ki zaroorat nahi. Mujhe aapse kisi aur vishay par baat karni thi.

Bhumika : Ohh! Kaho na!

Veer (frowns) : Hotel me abhi naye employees recruit kiye hai aapne?

Bhumika (surprised) : H-Huh!? T-Tumhe kaise pata chala? Maine toh abhi ghar pe bhi kisi ko nahi bataya.

Sunte hi Veer ki bauhe sikud gayi.

Veer : Kitne employees recruit kiye hai aapne?

Bhumika : Around 8… Kyu? Kya hua?

Veer (frowns) : Mujhe unn sab se milna hai. Mein mil sakta hu na?

Bhumika : Huh? O-Of course! P-Par, hua kya hai?

Veer : Woh mein aapko baad me bataunga.

Aur, isi ke saath Veer ne apni chaal chal di. Hotel me ghuste hi usne sabse pehle sabhi naye employees ko ikhatta kiya. Aur, use jiski talaash thi woh use mil hi gaya.

*Ding*

[Name - Ankit
Bio - Senior employee of Casa Belle. Iske pehle bhi Aadesh ke sampark me reh ke kayi bure kaam kar chuka hai. Baahar se vyavhar narm dikhata hai par andar saari kaali kartooto ko chhipaaye rakhta hai. Bachelor hai aur isliye Aadesh ke dwara Hotel Prestige me ek spy ke roop me bheja gaya hai.

Relationship - Strangers
Favorability - 0]

Veer ke hontho par ye padhte hi muskaan bikhar gayi.

‘What a sly fox... heh~’

[Kya aap bhi wahi soch rahe hai jo mein soch rahi hu, Master?]

‘Yeah! Of course! Agar, Aadesh itni mehnat kar ke humare upar spying karna chaahta hai, toh humara ye farz banta hai ki hum use spying karne de. *smiles* Hai ki nahi?’

[Master! A-Aap- *blushes* Aap bahut naughty ho!]

‘Well, well… Meri Pari bhi toh iss idea se sehmat hai. Iska matlab meri Pari bhi naughty hui? Hai na? Should I start calling you, naughty Pari!?’

[Ahn~ Th-That… Ahem! *blushes* I’ll just watch from here.]

‘Haha!’

Bagal se khadi Bhumika Veer ko chintit nazro se dekh rahi thi. Veer ne sabhi employees se haath mila ke unka parichay le liya tha par woh abhi khamosh khada hua tha.

Bhumika : Umm- V-Veer?

Veer : Hmm? Oh! Right! Zara, mere saath andar office me aaiye, di!

Bhumika (nods) : H-Hmm!

Office me aate hi Veer ne darwaza andar se band kiya aur woh Bhumika ki chair par jaa baitha jiske liye Bhumika ne koi bhi virodh nahi jataaya. Jitni ye hotel uski thi utni hi Veer ki bhi thi.

Bhumika : Kya hua?

Veer : Woh Ankit-! Uss employee ko aapne recruit kiya?

Bhumika (nods) : H-Haan! Mujhe uska behaviour pasand aaya. Uski communication skills bhi achhi thi aur etiquettes me bhi usne sabse achhi performance dikhayi. Isliye-

Veer : He’s a spy!!!

Bhumika : Huhhhh!!?

Veer : Woh Casa Belle ka senior employee hai aur Aadesh ke liye saare bure kaam karta hai. Yaha bheed ki aadh me aake usne apna recruitment karwaya aur ab woh saari andar ki jankaari Casa Belle tak pahuchayega.

Bhumika ghabra uthi. Uski naak ke neeche se koi spy bann ke uski hotel me ghus aaya aur use pata bhi nahi chala?

Bhumika : T-Tum itna yakeen se kaise keh sakte ho?

Veer : Kya aapko meri baat par vishvas nahi?

Bhumika : Aisa nahi hai, Veer! T-Tum jaante ho ki mein tum pe hi yakeen karungi bajaaye kisi baahri vyakti ke..! Mein bas- Mein bas ye jaanana chaahti hu ki kya tumhe waqai confirmed hai?

Veer ne aage badh haule se Bhumika ke haath ke upar apna haath rakha. Aur, uss halke se sparsh se Bhumika ka poora badan thitur utha. Lekin, usne apne chehre par ye bhaav na aane diye.

Veer : Bhumika di! Mein 100% sure hu. Woh Ankit ek spy hai. Agar, aapko yakeen na ho toh hum aazma ke dekh sakte hai.

Bhumika : K-Kaise?

Veer : Aaj shaam me hi aap sabhi employees ke saamne ye announce karna ki aane waale kuchh dino me kisi bhi ek din hum pre-christmas offer leke aa rahe hai, jisme couples ke liye bhaari discount rahega. Bas, aap make sure karna ki woh Ankit bhi iss meeting me rahe.

Bhumika : O-Okay?

Veer : Uske baad bas kuchh din wait kariyega. Agar, Casa Belle waalo ne same offer nikaala toh ye confirm ho jayega ki woh Ankit spy hai ya nahi?

Bhumika (nods) : Th-Theek hai!

Bhumika ne tarqeeb anusaar apni chaal chali aur kuchh din intezar kiya. Aur, theek waisa hi hua jaisa ki Veer ne parkha tha. Uske haath me Casa Belle ka woh pre-christmas offer waala pamphlet tha jo usne gusse me aake apni mutthi me bheench liya.

‘Veer sahi tha!!! Agar, usne mujhe bataya nahi hota toh-!! Lekin, use iss baare me kaise pata chala? Anyways… I must proceed according to his plan.’

Use Veer ki kahi baat yaad aa gayi.

"Ab jaisa-jaisa mein kehta jaunga, aap bilkul waisa hi kariyega, di! Na sirf ye spy yaha se apne aap bhaagega balki… Casa Belle bhi ghutne tekne par majboor ho jayega. Lekin, ye sab kuchh aapko meri gair-haziri me karna hoga. Mujhe jald hi kahi jaana padega. It all depends on you, di!"

‘Tum jaisa kahoge, mein waisa hi karungi, Veer!!’

Mann me sochte hue usne punah apni nigaahein apne haath par daali, jaha par Veer ne uss din use sparsh kiya tha aur woh lamha yaad kar uske gaal sharm se laal pad gaye.

*Ring* *Ring*

Call baja aur call Veer ka hi tha. Bhumika ne fatafat phone uthaaya. Agli chaal chalne ke liye woh taiyaar thi.

***

Somewhere in Perth, Australia,
Evening - 4:30 PM ~

Kamre me ek halki peele lamp ki raushni jal rahi thi, aur ek shaanti chhayi hui thi. Captain palang par leti, uski aankhein ceiling ki taraf tiki hui thi. Uske seene par bandages mazbooti se baandhi gayi thi, aur uske chehre par kisi bhi prakar ke dard bhare bhaav nahi the. Darwaza dheere se khula, aur Mia andar aayi, haath mein medicines aur paani ka glass liye hue.

Mia (sternly) : Captain, aapko ye medicines time par leni hongi. Daisy ne strict instructions diye hai.

Captain (flatly) : Mein thik hoon, Mia. Tumhe baar-baar pareshan hone ki zarurat nahi hai.

Mia bedside table par medicines rakh kar ruki, Captain ko dhyan se dekhi, aur paaya ki Captain kuchh zyada hi andar hi andar soch rahi thi.

Mia (softly) : Captain, aapko pata hai na, aapki chhoti si kharoch bhi hum sabke liye kitni badi baat hoti hai? Jo kal dekha tha... uske baad se hum sab kaafi hil chuke hai.

Captain (frowns) : Maine kaha na, sab control mein hai. Tum logon ko tension lene ki zarurat nahi.



Mia kuchh seconds ke liye chup rahi, phir bed ke paas kursi kheench kar baith gayi.

Mia : Captain, aap humein apni family ki tarah treat karti ho, aur hum aapko apni leader ki tarah nahi, apni guardian ki tarah dekhte hai. Par aap humein kabhi apne dukh, apne secrets share nahi karti. Jo bhi hua tha kal raat... humein sach jaanane ka poora haq hai.

Captain uski baat sunn kar ek pal ke liye wahi jamm ke reh gayi. Phir, ek lambi aah li, aur uski aankhon mein woh dridhta waapas aa gayi.

Captain (firmly) : Mia, tum log mere liye bahut important ho. Tumhare liye jitni safety chahiye, main woh ensure karungi. Par har sach tumhare saamne rakhna zaruri nahi hai.

Mia : Lekin agar ye baat humare 'Orphana' ki safety se judi hai, toh hum sabko pata hona chahiye, Captain.

Captain (murmurs) : Ye sirf meri ladaai thi, Mia. Orphana ka iss se koi lena dena nahi.



Mia kuchh pal ke liye Captain ke bhaav ko padhne ki koshish ki, phir dheere se uthi aur medicines ki taraf ishara karte hue jaane lagi.

Mia (whispers) : Captain, humein aap par poora bharosa hai. Lekin kabhi-kabhi, bharosa us waqt toot sakta hai jab koi zarurat ke waqt sach nahi bolta.

Itna bol, Mia darwaza khol kar nikal gayi. Captain ne apni aankhein band ki aur uska dimaag kal ki ladaai ke drishyo ko yaad karne me lag gaya.

Uska opponent... Woh masked system holder... Uska fighting style... Uski familiarity... Aur jo aurat uske saath thi...

Zahir hai woh dono aapas me mile hue the. Kya unka 'Orphana' ko target karne ka plan hai? Captain ke dimaag me sawaal badhte jaa rahe the. Usne apni aankhein punah kholi.

'Team work huh? Agar, tum team work karke mere paas aana chaahte ho toh theek hai-!!! Lagta hai mujhe bhi ek alliance banani hogi. Trustworthy alliance. Agar bahar kuchh badi sazish rachi jaa rahi hai... toh mein Orphana ki safety ke liye risk nahi le sakti.'

***

Yesterday...

Yaatriyo se bhari bus Pune se Mumbai maarg par tezi se aage badh rahi thi, engine ki gad-gadahat unke beech ho rahe shorgul me shaamil thi. Pranjal Madhuri ke theek bagal se baitha hua tha aur khidki ke baahar dekhne ke bahaane woh nazre churaate hue Madhuri ko nihaar raha tha.

Lalita, Madhuri ki maa unn dono ke theek aage baithi hui thi aur jhapki lene ki koshish kar rahi thi.

Veer ke nirnay ke baad, Divya ne unhe Mumbai lautne ki sehmati de di thi. Veer ne unke nivaas ke liye swayam ka ek flat niyukt kar diya tha toh rukne me unhe koi dikkat nahi hone waali thi.

Trisha se leke baaki police stations me Madhuri aur Lalita ke palayan ki jankari bhi bhijwa di gayi thi. Kul milake sab kuchh saral dhang se nipat chuka tha.

Aur, kuchh minute ki chuppi ke baad, Madhuri thoda hili, aur uski dheemi awaaz ne shaanti ko toda.

Madhuri : Pranjal... T-Tumne mujhe kaise dhundha?

Pranjal : Tum har news channel me khabar bani hui thi, Madhuri.

Madhuri (nods) : Hmm! Toh... Toh phir tum yaha mere paas kyu aaye?

Pranjal (hesitates) : Woh… Hum ek dusre ko bachpan se jaante hai, Madhuri. Tumhe jab pareshani me dekha toh... Bas... Madad karne aa gaya. Tumhari situation ke baare me suna, toh laga... ki mujhe kuchh karna chahiye.

Madhuri (glances) : Sach me? Aaj kal kaun aise bina wajah madad karta hai. Tumhare jawab me kuchh adhoora-pann hai, Pranjal.

'Mere apne rishtedar meri madad ke liye aage nahi aaye. T-Toh fir tum kyu, Pranjal? Akhir kya chhipa rahe ho tum mujhse?'

Pranjal : K-Kya adhoora-pann hoga? Bas samajh lo ki mein yahan hu... aur tumhari madad karna chahta hu. Uss se zyada kuchh nahi.

Kehte hue usne apni nazre fer li. Madhuri ne dheere se haami bhari maano uski pratikriya par vichaar kar rahi ho. Usne ek pal ke liye khidki se baahar dekha, use apna hi chehra sheeshe me halka sa nazar aaya. Pranjal ki kuchh baatein use thos nahi lagi, lekin usne zyada prashn nahi kiye.

Madhuri : Waise… Woh Veer... Kitna... Kitna handsome ho gaya hai, hai na? Mein pehle toh pehchaan hi nahi payi. Itna change kaise ho gaya?

Pranjal (frowns) : H-Haan! Badal gaya hai. Par, mein uske touch me nahi hu kaafi samay se. Uski apni alag hi duniya hai ab. Aur, meri alag.

Madhuri : Alag duniya? Tum dono toh bhai ho na? Fir? Kya tum dono ghar me ek saath nahi reh rahe ho?

Pranjal : It's complicated, Madhuri! Itne saalo me bahut si cheezein hui hai.

'Kya tum aaj bhi... Veer se jalte ho, Pranjal?' Woh mann me sochi.

Madhuri : A-Aur, Veer-! Detective hai kya?

Pranjal : Nahi!

Madhuri : H-Huh? P-Par, waha par-

Pranjal : Iska jawab tumhe wahi de payega.

Madhuri (nods) : O-Okay!

Usne haami bhari. Kintu, sawaal ab bhi mann me umad rahe the.

'Veer! Tumhari zindagi kaisi beeti ab tak? Pranjal aur tumhare beech akhir kya hua? A-Aur, uss raat tum Delhi me kya kar rahe the?'

Pranjal : M-Madhuri-!!!

Madhuri : Huh?

Pranjal : W-Woh tum kya keh rahi thi ghar par? Tumhe woh coat Veer ne diya tha? K-Kaun sa coat? Tum dono pehle mil chuke ho kya?

Madhuri (nods) : H-Haan! Mein Delhi me thi. Pita ji aur hum sab wahi par reh rahe the aur ek raat... Mein Veer se mili thi.

Pranjal (frowns) : W-Woh waha kya kar raha tha?

Madhuri : Mujhe nahi pata. Woh thand ka samay tha. Aur, usne mujhe apna... Coat diya tha. Mujhe yaad hai. Baad me fir ek... Koi ladki waha aake mujhse woh coat leke chali gayi thi. Bahut ameer lag rahi thi.

Pranjal: H-Huh???

'What the fuck?? Ye Veer Delhi kab gaya? Aur, upar se ye ladki kaun hai? Nahi!!! Woh ladki kaun thi uske saath? Mask pehne? Maine use pehle kabhi nahi dekha. Aur, woh Divya kaun thi???'

Pranjal bhi mann hi mann Veer ko leke pareshan tha. Use Veer ke iraade samajh nahi aa rahe the.

'Ye kyu madad kar raha hai? Madhuri ke liye itna sab karna… yeh Veer kyun karega? Iss se tujhe kya mil raha hai, Veer?'

Jab Madhuri ko kisi ki madad ki sabse zyada avashyakta thi, tab Veer uske liye kisi messiah ki tarah bann ke uske saamne aaya. Aur, Pranjal sirf dekhta reh gaya. Kahi na kahi, ye baat Pranjal ko andar se bahut chubh rahi thi. Ek taraf woh bheetar se shukra-guzar tha ki kaise bhi kar ke Madhuri ko madad mil gayi, toh wahi dusri orr nirash ki aham mauke par woh kuchh na kar saka.

***

Panchgani,
Morning - 9:25 AM ~

Idhar Veer ne apna phone apni jeb me rakha. Bhumika ko usne apni agli chaal bata di thi aur agle prahar ke liye woh dono taiyaar the.

Gaadi swayam Veer hi chala raha tha aur bagal se Divya toh wahi peechhe Ava baithi hui thi. Kal hi unhone Madhuri aur Lalita ko Pranjal ke sang Mumbai bhej diya tha aur aaj woh Panchgani me pahuch chuke the.

Subah ke sooraj ne Panchgani ki dhundh bhari pahadiyo par ek feeki chamak bikher rakhi thi aur kuchh der ki duri tay karne ke baad hi unki car thoda sunsan sadak ke paas aake ruk gayi.

Veer : Alright! Yaha se ab kaha?

Usne sawal kiya. Panchgani ke police station se woh hoke aa chuke the aur zaroori reports unke haath me hi thi. Lekin, pareshani ki wajah kuchh aur hi thi.

Divya : Ye waala case thoda alag hai, Veer.

Veer : Hmm?

Divya (frowns) : Bahut si cheezein mister Prabhakar ke murder jaisi hi hai.

Ava : Jaise ki?

Divya : Jaise ki... Murder ka late night me hona, aas-paas koi bhi cctv na hona, guard dogs ka murderer ki location pin-point na kar paana, brutality aur obviously... Abhi tak murderer ka pakda na jaana. Sab kuchh same hi hai. Siwae, ek cheez ke...

Veer : ???

Divya (glances) : Aur, woh hai — eye witness.

Veer : Huh???

Ava : Witness?

Divya (nods) : Haan! Report me iss aadmi ka naam mentioned hai. Ye victim ka dost hai. Aur, report me likha hai ki ye aur kuchh aur bande uss raat kisi prakar ki party kar rahe the. Uss party ke baad fir ye haadsa hua. Police ne iss se saari poochh-taachh kar li par iske khilaaf kuchh bhi nahi mila.

Veer : Oh!!?

Divya : Lekin, uss se ajeeb baat ye hai ki-

Ava : What is it?

Divya : Ye aadmi dobara koi bhi gawahi nahi de raha. Isne apne rehne ki location change kar li hai aur police ka kehna hai ki iss vyakti ne sab testify bhi kar diya hai. Lekin, jaise ye abhi bhi kuchh chhipa raha hai. Police ko bhi doubt hai.

Veer : Tumhe kya lag raha hai?

Divya (frowns) : Kuchh bhi ho sakta hai, Veer. Ya toh ye khud hi involved hai. Ya fir ise daraya-dhamkaya gaya ho? Ya toh fir ye khud hi iss jhamele me nahi padna chaahta.

Veer : Hmm! Toh?

Divya : Hum iski nayi location pe chalte hai. Jab tak mein iss se poochh-taachh nahi kar lungi, mujhe chenn nahi aayega.

Veer (nods) : Theek hai!

Veer ne report anusaar batayi gayi jagah par apni gaadi ghuma di. Aur, kuchh hi samay me woh sabhi ek aur sunsan kintu thoda gandagi se bhari hui sadak ke kinaare the.

*Thud* *Thud*




Gaadi ka darwaza band kar woh sabhi utre. Baahar nikalte hi Divya ne apni jacket theek ki, aur uske theek peechhe-peechhe Veer aur Ava bhi chal diye.

Divya : Police ke records ke mutabik, yahi woh jagah hai jaha woh eye witness ab rehta hai.

Usne paas me hi zarzar jhopdiyo ke ek chhote samooh ki orr ishaara karte hue kaha. Veer ki bauhe sikudi, uske haath uski jeb me hi the. Itni der me woh sab kuchh check kar chuka tha. Aur, yakeenan woh sab sahi jagah par khade the.

Veer : -Aur yeh witness kuchh nahi bol raha? Jabki usne sab kuchh dekha hai?

Divya : Usne kuchh dekha hai ya nahi ye toh wahi bata sakta hai.

Veer : Victim ka kya naam tha?

Divya : Mukesh!

Veer : Aur, iss witness ka?

Divya : Deepu!

Veer : Hmm! Tumne kaha ki uss raat Mukesh ke saath aur bhi dost the. Toh, fir police ki shaq ki sui sirf iss Deepu par kyu tiki hai?

Divya : Good question! Aisa isliye kyunki, report me ye bhi likha hai ki uska behavior kuchh theek nahi. Uske bartav par police ko shaq hai. Kuchh toh chhipa raha hai. Shayad dara hua hai, ya shayad involved ho. Humein yeh pata lagana hoga.

Ava : Koi CCTV nahi, koi guard dog kuchh locate nahi kar paaye, aur ye witness apni location badal liya. Kaafi odd lag raha hai, hai na?

Veer : Odd nahi… Kuchh zyada hi sahi lag raha hai. Chalo, pehle iss witness se nipatate hai.

Teeno keechad bhare raaste se guzre, unke joote bajri par charmara rahe the. Kuchh aas-paas ke logo se poochh-taachh ke baad, woh ek tooti hui lakdi ke darwaze waali jhopdi ke paas pahuche. Divya ne darwaza khat-khataya, uski awaaz me dridhta thi.

*Knock* *Knock*

Divya : Darwaza kholo! Humein kuchh sawaal karne hai.

Uske bolte hi andar se ek kaanpti hui awaaz kuchh der baad sunayi padi.

"K-Kya hai? M-Mein vyast hu! J-Jao yaha se!"

Darwaze ko dobaara peetne se pehle Veer ne Divya ko dekha aur iss baar khud awaaz lagayi.

Veer : Iske pehle ki mein darwaza todu, chup-chaap darwaza khol do.

Andar jo koi bhi tha, woh Veer ki dhamki sunn behad ghabra gaya. Haafte hue usne apne agal bagal dekha aur jo bhi bhaari samaan use nazar aaya, usne woh utha ke darwaze ke saamne lagana shuru kar diya.

*Knock* *Knock*

Divya : Dekho! Hum yaha tumhe nuksan pahuchane ke liye nahi hai. Darwaza khol do. Humein bas sawaal karne hai.

*Silence*

Ava : Aur, ab mera shaq ispe aur badhta jaa raha hai.

Veer : Yeah-!!!

Divya : Darwaza kholo. Hum tumhe chot nahi pahuchaenge. Hum yaha tumhare liye hi hai.

*Silence*

Jab itni baar poochhne ke baad bhi andar se koi jawab na aaya toh Veer ne aur raah na taaki.

Veer : Step aside!!

Usne Divya ko ahaat kiya. Apni taang hawa me uthayi, abhi bhi uske haath uski jeb me hi the. Aur, agle hi shan-

*Baaaaaaammmmmmmmmm*

Ek zordar laat seedhe darwaze par padi, aur sab kuchh titar-bitar ho gaya. Darwaza ukhadte hue andar itni dur jaa ke gira, aur saath hi uss vyakti ne jo-jo bhaari samaan darwaze ke peechhe rakha hua tha woh bhi bikhar ke ast-vyast ho gaya.

Woh aadmi swayam uss impact se ladkhada ke neeche gir gulati kha gaya. Divya ne pehle toh Veer ko dekha. Uski aankhein phati hui thi. Ye kis prakar ki kick thi? Itni zordar kick? Aur, woh bhi itne nonchalant tareeke se?

Toh wahi mask ke peechhe Ava ke hontho par muskan thi. Jaise kehna chaah rahi ho — that's my man!

Uske baad sabhi ki nazre uss aadmi par tiki. Dikhne me toh apne late-thirties me prateet ho raha tha. Veer aur Ava dono ne hi use ek saath check kiya. Aur, waqai yahi tha woh eye witness — Deepu.

Deepu (ghabrate hue) : K-Kya chahiye tum logon ko? Maine police ko pehle hi bola na, m-mujhe kuchh nahi pata. Chale jao!! Ch-Chale jao yahan se!!!

Divya (steps forward) : Hum police nahi hai. Tumhare liye hi aaye hai. Tumne kuchh dekha tha jiske baare me tum kisi ko nahi bata rahe, hai na?

Deepu (haklaate hue) : M-Maine bola na, m-mujhe kuchh nahi pata. Tum log kyun mere peechhe pade ho? Maine sab kuchh bata diya hai jo batana tha.

Ava : Kya waqai? Ek baar zara dimag se socho. Kya lagta hai? Kya tumhe lagta hai ye sab tumhare liye safe hai? Murderer abhi tak azad ghoom raha hai. Kya tumhare paas guarantee hai ki woh murderer dobara tumhare paas nahi aayega?

Deepu : B-Bas karo ye drama. T-Tum log bhi wahi ho, sab kuchh samajhte ho lekin karte kuchh nahi. Mera jigri dost mar gaya aur tum sab bas- *hic*

Veer : Mukesh tumhara dost tha. Hai na?

Deepu (nods) : H-Haan!

Divya : Aur, tum sab uss raat sharab ki party kar rahe the. Hmm?

Deepu : H-Haan! T-Toh? H-Hum har sunday party karne adde jaate the. M-Mere alawa aur bhi dost the uske. T-Toh sirf mujhpe kyun shaq kar rahe ho? Unse bhi sawaal karo. Yakeen na ho toh unse hi poochh lo.

Divya : Shaq tumpe isliye ho raha hai kyunki woh sabhi apni gawahi dete waqt darr me nazar nahi aaye. Jabki tum... Tum hakla rahe ho, ghabra rahe ho, aur toh aur iss case se door bhi bhaag rahe ho.

Deepu : H-Haan! K-Kyunki, mein iss jhamele me nahi padna chaahta. M-Mujhe bas chenn se jeene do. M-Maine kuchh nahi kiya. J-Jao!

Ava : Dekho! Mukesh tumhara dost tha na? Agar, tum sab kuchh sach nahi bataoge toh- toh tumhare dost ke saath nyaay kaise hoga?

Deepu : Lauda nyaay karoge tum log *hic* Poochh-taachh ke baad sab apni maa chudwane chale jayenge. Y-Yahi toh aata hai tum logo se. *hic* B-Bas dusro ke phate me taang adaoge aur karna dharna kuchh nahi aur fir-

*Chataaaakkk*

Agle hi shan ek zordaar jhaapad aake Deepu ke gaal par pada aur 40-50 seconds tak uske kaan me suuu ki awaaz goonj gayi.

Divya (in awe) : V-Veer-!?

Ava : ...

Veer : Ye jhaapad tameez me rehne ke liye. Ab iske pehle ki dusra pade, seedhe-seedhe sach batao. Warna jhapad ke alawa mere paas aur bhi tareeke hai. Dhyan rahe! Hum police nahi hai. Hum FBCC se hai. Police se bhi zyada authority humare paas hai iss case me. Tumhare agle shabd tumhara fate decide karenge.

Deepu ne apna haath le jaate hue apne gaal par rakha aur bhauchakka hote hue Veer ko ghoora. Uska kaan abhi bhi suuu ki awaaz se goonj raha tha. Aur, fir woh ghabrate hue rone laga. Peechhe deewar se tik woh bheek maangte hue chillaaya.

Deepu : M-Mein bata dunga!!! *sniff* M-Mein bata dunga! *hic* Theek hai! M-Mujhe maarna mat-!!! *sniff* P-Par ek shart par-!!

Divya : Kaho!

Deepu : T-Tum sab vaada karo-!! V-Vaada karo ki uss haram-zaade hatyaare ko pakdoge. J-Jo kaam police nahi kar paayi wo tum log karoge. *sniff*

Veer : Hum vaada karte hai!

Deepu : Th-Theek hai! T-Toh suno-

Woh apne maathe se paseena pochh, ek dagmagati hui kursi par baitha.

Deepu : Woh raat… kuchh ajeeb thi. Mein aur Mukesh har sunday ki tarah daaru party ke baad ghar laut rahe the.

Divya : Matlab tum dono saath me the, hai na?

Deepu (sharmindagi se) : H-Haan!




Veer ne isi beech Ava ko dekha jo aisa lag raha tha maano muskura rahi thi. Woh dono hi peechhe ki deewar se tik ke khade hue the. Jabki, Divya dusri kursi lagaaye Deepu ke theek saamne baithi hui thi.

Veer : Something on your mind?

Ava (glances) : Hmm? Ohh! *smiles* Bas kuchh soch rahi thi.

Veer : Kya?

Ava : I was wondering why didn't a slap from the police officer work but yours?

Veer (smiles) : There's a difference between a police officer's slap and mine.

Ava (playfully) : Ohh!? Really? And? What's the difference?

Veer (smiles) : You'll have to taste it yourself.

Ava (glances) : Huhhh???

Veer : Not on the upper cheeks but- *glances downward*

Ava (in shock) : Veeeeeeeerrrr-!!!??

Veer : Ahem-!!

Ava : *blushes*

Woh hairat me thi. Uske gaal sharm se laal pad gaye. Apne baal ki latt ko kaan ke peechhe le jaate hue usne apni nazre fer li. Ek taraf jaha use khushi thi ki uske aur Veer ke madhya playful flirting ho rahi thi toh wahi dusri taraf woh Veer ke bebaak andaz se hairan bhi thi.

Toh wahi Divya Deepu se sawaal jawaab ka silsila jaari rakhi hui thi.

Divya : Uske baad kya hua?

Deepu : U-Uske baad-! Jab mein sunsaan sadak par chalte hue jaa raha tha. T-Tabhi, ek aadmi-

Divya (frowns) : Kaisa aadmi?

Usne apni ek chhoti si diary par sab kuchh likhte hue poochha.

Deepu (shivers) : P-Pagal sa tha. Huuuuuu-!!! *hic* U-Uski aankhein-! Uski aankhon ki putliyaan itni chaudi thi. L-Lag raha tha jaise baahar gir jayengi. U-Uske hontho par bikhri woh muskan... I-Itni bhayanak aur daravni thi... A-Aisa lag raha tha j-jaise jokaro waali muskan ho...! Huuuuu-!! *sniff* *hic*

Kehte hue Deepu kaanp ke rone laga. Veer aur Ava maathe par lakeerein liye do qadam aage ko aaye.

Divya (frowns) : Kitne saal ka hoga tumhare andaze se?

Deepu : Sh-Shayad 50-60 ke beech. U-Uske baal safed the poore... A-Aur lambe the... Hawa me lehra rahe the... Ekdum safed... *sniff*

Divya : Height?

Deepu : H-Height me chhota tha. *hic* Par, bahut chhota bhi nahi. Mere jitna...! Aur, patla tha. P-Par bahut patla nahi.

Divya : Kya pehna tha woh?

*Scribble* *Scribble*

Deepu : Koi safed rang ka lamba sa coat tha. Andar kya pehna tha... M-Mujhe yaad nahi. *hic* W-Woh jab bol ke chup hua t-toh uski jeebh uske khule muh se baahar ko latak rahi thi! Aur, laar uske muh se tapak rahi thi.

Divya (desperately) : Kya bola tha usne?

Deepu : M-Mujhe yaad hai. W-Woh jhaadi me se achanak se nikal ke aaya tha. *sniff* M-Mein halke nashe me tha.

Veer (impatiently) : Bola kya???

Deepu : U-Usne sabse pehle mujhe ghoora. F-Fir, chal ke mere paas aaya. Usne mera haath thaama aur dh-dheere se mera haath malne laga.

Veer : ???

Deepu : A-Ahista ahista-!! Aur, fir bola — "Oh! Tum chinta mat karo. Mein sab kuchh bahut jaldi khatam kar dunga. Tumhe zara bhi pata nahi lagega. Tumhe toh khush hona chahiye. Tum jald hi mere sabse bade nirmaan ka hissa banane waale ho. Hehe hee hehe hee~ Mein tumhara balidan yaad rakhunga. Saari duniya ko tumhare balidan ke baare me bataunga. Hehe hehe~" U-Uski hasi... Itni bhayanak thi. Huuuuuuu-!!!

Kehte hue Deepu bhay ke maare rone laga aur idhar sabhi ke chehre ke bhaav badal gaye.

Veer (frowns) : Aur, kya kaha usne?

Deepu : F-Fir, mein dar gaya tha. Aur, mera dar jaise woh bhaanp gaya. W-Woh kisi shaitan ki tarah hasa a-aur fir bola — "Maanav shareer!!! Kitni dilchasp cheez hai, hai na? Tumhe nahi lagta? Ye kitni dilchasp paheli hai. Aur, tumhe pata hai mujhe kya pasand hai? Iss paheli ke tukde-tukde kar ke dekhna ki isme kya khaas hai hehe hehe heeeee~"

Divya : Uske baad???

Deepu : Uske baad Mukesh ne mujhe mushqil me fasa dekha toh woh daud ke mere paas aaya. M-Maine mauka dekh uss aadmi ko dhakela aur bhaaga. P-Par, Mukesh uss se bhidne pahuch chuka tha.

Divya : !!??

Deepu (shivers) : A-Aur, uske baad woh sab hua. *sniff* U-Usne mere dost ko wahi maaaaaaar daaaaaala. Hghuuuu-!!

Divya : Kaun sa hathyar tha uske paas?

Deepu : P-Pata nahi. *sniff* Par, chaaku jaisa kuchh tha uske paas chhota sa...! *sniff* M-Mukesh ko girta dekh mein dar ke maare bhaaga. *hic* M-Mein bhaagta raha. Bhaagta raha. *hic* Mujhe nahi bhaagna tha. M-Mujhe ladna chahiye tha. P-Par, mein darpok *sniff* Mein gali ka kutta *sniff* Ehsan-faramosh bhaag aaya. Mein kameena hu!!! Kutta hu!!! Harami huuu!!! Suar huuuu-!!!

Kehte hue woh apne aap ko hi jhapad par jhapad maarte hue rone laga. Veer ne use jaise taise roka par uss aadmi ka rona band nahi ho raha tha. Kuchh der baad woh zameen par neeche baith dheere-dheere bilakhne laga.

Magar, iss jankari ke baad, unn sabhi ke hosh udd chuke the. Unke chehre par aashcharya saaf tha.

Deepu : A-Aur, fir mujhe uski peechhe se awaaz sunayi di thi.

Veer : ??

Deepu : Usne bola tha — "Tum kismat waale ho. Mein tumhe aaj jaane de raha hu kyunki aaj mein khush hu. Par, agar tumne kisi ko kuchh bola. Toh mein tumhe bhi aise hi cheerunga. Hehehehehe! Aur, tumhari cheenkhein sununga. Hehehehe-!!!"

Deepu itna bol dar ke maare kaanpne laga. Divya ne sab kuchh apni diary me likha aur woh uth khadi hui.

Divya : Details ke liye thank you. Veer!!! We're leaving!

Kehte hue woh baahar nikal gayi. Kintu, use jaata dekh Deepu ghabra utha. Use laga ki ab woh murderer use maarne aayega. Magar, Veer ne use saantvna dete hue shaant kiya aur woh Ava ke sang baahar aa gaya. Woh sabhi apni gaadi ke nazdeek badhe.

Divya : Well! I didn't expect this. Ye kaafi disturbing tha.

Ava : Ye normal murderer nahi lagta.

Divya : Exactly! Kyunki, woh hai hi nahi. Agar, Deepu ki baat sach hai toh ye case aur bhi khatarnak ho chuka hai.

Veer : Kaise?

Divya : Kyunki, killer ek psycho hai. There's no way a normal person in his sane mind would talk like that.

Veer (nods) : Makes sense.

Divya : Maine apni life me kayi murder cases par kaam kiya hai, Veer. Ek case aisa bhi tha jisme killer ek psycho tha. And, trust me - give me a normal killer anyday, I'd love to solve the case over any psycho killer's case.

Usne agle hi shan apni diary me likhi gayi saari details ki photos leke use tamaam police stations me forward kar diya.

Divya : Let's go!

Kehte hue woh aage badh gayi. Aur, uske theek peechhe Ava aur Veer chal diye.

Ava : Kya tumhe bhi wahi lag raha hai jo mujhe lag raha hai, Veer?

Veer (nods) : System holder!!!

Ava : Yes!!! Hume careful rehna hoga, Veer.

Veer : Hmm!

Kuchh hi der baad woh sabhi car me hi ek petrol pump par ruke hue the.

Divya : Meri ek baat samajh nahi aa rahi.

Uska detective dimag paheli ko suljhane me lag gaya.

Veer : Kya?

Divya : Deepu ne bataya ki uss killer ne uss se kaha tha — "Maanav shareer!!!" Aisa kaun kehta hai bhala? I mean, aise shabd wahi kahega na jo human body se familiar na ho? What the hell!!! Koi alien-valien aa gaya hai kya???

Uski baat par Veer ne rear mirror se peechhe baithi Ava ko dekha. Dono ki nazre mili, aur dono samajh gaye ki dono kya soch rahe the. Lekin, woh khamosh hi rahe.

Raat bahut ho chuki thi aur teeno ne petrol pump par hi raat bitaane ka faisla liya. Kshetra me halki raushni thi, guzarte vahano ki gatividhiyo ki halki si gad-gadahat bhi aur kuchh truck waale bhi wahi aas-paas apne truck laga ke so rahe the jiske chalte ye jagah sone ke liye surakshit prateet ho rahi thi.

Divya apni seat par peechhe thoda jhuki, haath fela ke thodi angdayi lete hue usne Ava ko dekha aur thoda vyang me boli.

Divya : Well, well! Miss celebrity! Miss Ava Martin! Mujhe yakeen hai ki aaj ka din tumhare liye thakan bhara raha hoga. Hume baari-baari watch toh rakhni padegi toh, kyu na tum pehle so jao? Waise bhi, daily chores aur itni hectic investigation toh bahut mushqil rahi hogi tumhare liye, hai na?

Ava ne uss par chidhte hue ek nazar daali, magar turant hi apni ubaasi ko usne andar hi daba liya. Sach baat toh ye thi ki jab se woh Mumbai me reh rahi thi use theek se neend hi nahi aa rahi thi, jiske chalte uski sleep cycle bigad chuki thi. Isme koi shaq nahi tha ki iss waqt wo waqai sona chaahti thi.

Ava : Fine!

Woh budbudate hue mudi aur apni aankhein band kar li. Lekin, Veer ko ek akhiri baar dekhna na bhooli.

Divya dheere se muskurayi aur fir Veer ki orr mudi. Usne chidhaate hue kaha.

Divya : Kyun na hum ek walk pe chale? Kuchh case se related baatein karni thi tumse. Aur, miss celebrity disturb bhi nahi hongi.

Ava ne apni ek aankh khol use dekha. Divya punah muskurayi. Veer ne haami bhari aur dono hi car ke baahar raat ki sheet leher me utar gaye.

Jaise hi woh car se thoda door aaye, Divya ne apni baahein mod li aur Veer ki orr dekhi.

Divya : Toh, iss case ke baare me kya socha hai? Kya lag raha hai tumhe?

Veer : Abhi tak kuchh conclusive nahi hai. Lekin, ek cheez clear hai — ye killer bahut zyada strategic hai. Har murder carefully plan kar ke kiya gaya hai.

Divya (frowns) : Carefully planned? Kaise? Jaha tak mein dekh paa rahi hu toh mujhe 90% vishvas hai ki ye koi psycho hai. Aise me ek psycho ka strategy ke saath chalna? Sounds unbelievable to be honest.

Veer : Har murder raat ke waqt hua, koi CCTV aas-paas nahi, koi saboot nahi, guard dogs fail ho gaye. Killer ne ek bhi galti nahi ki. Ye koi aam aadmi nahi kar sakta.

Divya (nods) : Now that you've mentioned it. Yeah! You are right! Aur, woh Deepu kya bata raha tha? Murderer kya keh raha tha uss se? "Mein tumhara balidan poori duniya ko bataunga? Tum mere sabse bade nirmaan ka hissa banoge blah blah blah-!!" What the fuck was that???

Veer (frowns) : Yahi toh paheli hai, Divya!!!

Divya : Tumhara intuition kya kehta hai?

Veer ek pal ke liye jhijhka, uske mann me apni ek thesis thi lekin ye keval Ava ke saath hi saajha ki jaa sakti thi.

Veer : Filhal kuchh bhi nahi. Jab tak aur clues nahi mil jaate tab tak kuchh bhi claim karna sahi nahi hoga.

Divya (nods) : Hmm!

Divya ne aage dabaav nahi daala. Shan bhar ki chuppi ke baad, usne Veer ko tirchhi nazro se dekha. Halki chaandni ne uske teekhe nain-naksh aur sudol jism ko ujjval kar rakha tha jise dekh Divya ke andar ek halchal mach gayi.

Divya : Ek paheli aur hai jise mein suljha nahi paa rahi hu, Veer.

Veer : Hmm? Kaun si?

Divya (turns) : Tum!!!

Agle hi shan woh uske samaksh aayi aur usne ahista se Veer ke seene par apna haath rakha. Director ne uss se keh ke rakha tha ki woh Veer ke baare me bhi khoje. Magar, iss case me woh itna doob gayi ki uske mann se ye aham baat hi nikal gayi ki use Veer ke baare me bhi bahut si jasoosi karni thi.

Veer : Wha-

Divya : Shhhh!!!

Usne Veer ke honth par ungli rakh use shaant kiya aur use neeche kheench uske kaan me badi hi lalchaane waali awaaz me boli.

Divya (whispers) : Maine tumse kya kaha tha? Be careful! Tum ek shadi shuda aurat ko woh ideas mat dena jo uske mann me nahi aane chaahiye. Right?

Veer : Maine kab-!?

Divya : Your mere presence is enough for me to devour you, sweetheart!!

Veer : H-Huh-

*Pulls*

Palak jhapakte hi Divya ka chehra uske saamne tha aur uske honth — Divya ke hontho ki giraft me.

Veer : Mmphhh-!!!??

Divya : *kiss* I-It was bothering me- *slurp* Mmmm~ S-So much- *kiss* ummphhh~ T-That I had to- *slurp* d-do this!!! *slurp* Nnn~ puahhh~

Jab dono alag hue toh dono ke mukh se thook ki ek rekha judi hui fel gayi. Divya turant hi neeche ko baithi aur uska haath seedhe Veer ke hathyar par uski jeans ke upar tham gaya.

Veer : *huff* Fuckin' hell, Divya!!! *huff* N-Now!!?

Divya (seductively) : Oh, yes my darling!!! NOW!!!

Veer : Sh-Shit!!! Koi dekh lega, Divya. N-No!! Not now!!! Ava car me hai.

Divya : Hum car se door hai, sweetheart!! *huff* It's a fucking highway. 100 ke neeche gaadi chalti hi nahi yaha. No one will see. *huff* I know tum bhi frustrated ho iss poori investigation se. Let me-!!! Mmmm~ Release your pent up frustration in my mouth darling-!!!

Veer : G-Goddamn it!!!

Ye achanak se Divya ko kya ho gaya tha Veer ko samajh na aaya. Lekin, usne apne haath ki pakad Divya ke haath par dheeli chhor di aur mauka milte hi Divya ne Veer ke jeans ki button kholi, zip neeche ki aur jhatse jeans neeche kar di. Usne ek jhatke me underwear ko neeche sarkaaya aur Veer ka ufanta naag uske theek saamne tha. Apne poore shabaab me!!

Divya ke honth thar-thara rahe the. Woh ek jawan naari thi. Pati toh bolne bas ka tha. Na hi usne kabhi Nik se prem kiya tha aur na hi use jeevan me kabhi kisi se prem hua. Veer ek maatra woh ladka tha jo use ye ehsaas dilaata tha ki kaash usne apne liye apni sahi umr me ek behtar ladka khoja hota. Toh shayad aaj woh yaha iss haalat me nahi hoti.

Woh Veer ke lund ke paas apna chehra laayi aur usne zor se apni saans andar kheechte hue use soongha. Woh jaanti thi ki ye mehek din bhar ke paseene aur peshab ki kuchh sookhi hui boondo ke mishran ki thi.

Lekin, uske bawajood use iss se ghin mehsoos nahi hui. Ulta, ye use aur bhi zyada uksa rahi thi.

'This is it!!! Oh god, this smell! I wanted this...! Oh, Veer!!! I wanted this for so long!!! Oh my god, ye mein kya kar rahi hu??? China me bhi maine aisi harqat nahi ki thi. I'm taking the initiative?? J-Just what's wrong with me??'

Woh zor-zor se Veer ke lund, uske halke jhaat ke baalo me apne chehra fer uske ling ko soonghti jaa rahi thi. Agar, ye drishya kahi Nik dekh leta toh aaj woh khoon ki ultiyaan kar deta.

'B-But I want it!!! I want it!!! I can't stop myself!!! V-Veer-!! Dedo mujhe!!!'

Nik ki patni, ek shadi shuda aurat Veer ke lund ke neeche baith use zoro se soongh rahi thi aur mann me hi cheekhte hue usne akasmat hi Veer ka lund apne muh me bhar liya.

Muh ke andar ka garma-garam, geela ehsaas paate hi Veer ki aankhein band ho gayi aur usne apne dono haath se Divya ke baal jakad liye.

Veer : F-Fuccccckkkkkk-!!!

Divya bina kisi ki chinta kiye, aage-peechhe apna sarr hilaane lagi. Woh Veer ke laude ko aise choos rahi thi jaise maano usne barso se kuchh khaaya na ho. Itni bhook thi usme.

*Gwak* *Gwak* *Slurp*

'Yes yes yessss!!! Give it to me, Veeerrr!!! Give it to me!! My god, it's soooo biggg!!! Ahh!! It's soooo biggg!!! Push that cock deep in my throat, Veeeeerr!!! Yessss!! Like that-!!! Use me!!!'

*Gwak* *Gwak*

'Use me like your whore-!!! Nnn~ Push that big fat cock inside my oesophagus-!!! Ohhhh veeeeeeeerrr!! I love you soooo muchh!!! Fuckkkk myy throooaaatttt-!!! Aaaaaahhhh!!!'

Uski choot neeche se kulbula rahi thi. Usne jhatse apna ek haath le jaate hue apne jeans ki button kholi magar jeans iss tarah se nahi utaari jaa sakti thi.

Veer : Fucccckkkk-!!! Divyaaaaaa-!!!

Divya kisi aur ki biwi thi, ye baat Veer ko aur bhi zyada uttejit kar rahi thi. Aur, ye ki sirf wahi ek tha jo Divya ke saath ye sab kar sakta tha. Jaise maano woh uska exclusive owner ho.

Zyada samay nahi laga jab Veer ne Divya ke baalo ko jakda, apne lund ko jad tak Divya ke gale me thoos ke rakha aur thiturte hue ek ke baad ek usne apne veerya ki dhaar uske gale ke neeche utaarni shuru kar di jise Divya saara nigalti chali gayi.

Jaise hi Veer ne haafte hue apna lund uske muh se nikaala, Divya uthi aur apni jeans aur panty neeche kar woh zor-zor se apni choot me ungli karne lagi. Veer khudgarz vyakti nahi tha.

Divya ko turant ghumaate hue usne apna haath le jaate hue uski choot par peechhe se rakha aur dana-dan woh ungli andar baahar karte hue use chodne laga. Divya kaapte hue apni choot se paani ke dher saare chheethe zameen par bikher rahi thi.

'Ohhh gooooddd, veeeeerrr!!! Don't stop! Don't stop! Sweetheart!! Don't stoooppppp!!! Nnnnn~ I love youuuu-!!! Fuckkkk my cuntttt-!!!! Aaaahhhh!! Zor seeeee!! Aur... Zorrrr seee... Chodoo mujheeee-!!! Ahhhnnnnn-!!!'

Mann hi mann woh chillaayi. Aahein leti rahi aur siskiya bharti rahi aur kuchh hi der baad dher saara sailab zameen par tha.

Saansein durust karne ke baad usne punah Veer ke lund ko muh me bhar uske mutth ko saaf kiya aur fir dono wapas se car me aake baith gaye. Veer peechhe Ava ke sang lait gaya toh wahi driver aur sub-driver seat par Divya. Woh seat par girte hi neend ki vaadiyo me chali gayi toh wahi Veer nigrani rakhne ke liye jaagta raha.

Kahi na kahi glaani bhi thi. Ava yahi thi. Usne Ava ko nihara. Sote waqt kitni pyaari lag rahi thi. Uske baal ki latt ko kaan ke peechhe le jaate hue usne uske gaal ko sehlaya.

'It should be a crime to be this beautiful.'

Use yaad aaya ki isi khubsoorti ke chalte use lene ke dene pad gaye the. Bhale hi Ava so chuki thi. Kintu, Veer ye nahi jaanta tha ki Ava ke andar maujood Lily jaagi hui thi. Aur, uska yu Ava ke gaal ko sparsh karna — Lily sab kuchh mehsoos kar paa rahi thi.

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At the same time,
Mumbai Airport,
Morning - 12:25 AM ~

Ek viman apne niyamit samay ka paalan karte hue airstrip par utra. Baari-baari usme se attendants baahar nikalte gaye aur ek shaks apna ek suitcase leke baahar ko aaya.

Baahar aate hi usne sabse pehle formalities kar apna phone chaalu karwaya aur fir ek call lagaya.

Aur, call pe usne bas itna hi kaha-

"I'm in Mumbai, my friend. Yes! Yes!! Send me the address to your villa. That would be good. Why so suddenly?? Hahaha! No! No!!! It's because my bitch ass wife is roaming here-!!! I need to settle some scores with her!!"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
This update consists of 8.2k words. Aur, pretty much sabhi ne guess kar hi liya hoga ki mystery ke peechhe kaun hai. But- but- but... There's more to it. A lot actually. Jo abhi tak hidden hai aur woh arc ke end me hi ekdum se saamne aayega. Iss arc ke khatam hone ke baad ek post disembowler arc bhi rahega. Basically yahi arc hai jo kuchh aur updates ke liye extend hoga after the end of the mystery. Woh arc bahut se factors pe focus karega aur naye arc ki neev bhi rakh dega. Toh, tab tak ke liye apne guessings on rakhne ka. As, I said- There's a lot going on behind the scenes. A LOT!!! Target apna wahi hai. 200! Likes thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka.
Dhanyavad.

Mast mazedaar ek no update brother.

 

[Werewolf]

So finally the update we are waiting for is here.

Veer is not only focussing on this murder case but he is also over seeing all his business . Casa belle ka owner ke la*de lagane ka zimma utha liya hai veer ne . Spy ke bare mein pata hi hai to aise aise ideas bhejega jisse uska reserve khali hoga then the hotel prestige will touch the sky.

That's the plan

Veer bahuto ke liye mystery bana hua hai abhi ke time par madhuri pranjal veer ki family divya ,in total non system holders ke liye veer aur uski life ko samajhna thoda mushkil hai . 3 updates ho chuke hai veer aur uski family ke bich bina convo hue last time ka tejal se narazgi dur nahi hui hai kya ,lagta hai revision karna padega.

Just because mein conversation nahi dikha raha hu, iska matlab ye nahi hai bhai ki Veer ne ghar par baat nahi ki.

Aisa kaise ho sakta hai? Zaahir hai usne calls par kaafi baatein ki hongi. Par, zaroori nahi ki har convo ko update me dikhaya jaaye. Jidhar zaroorat hogi, udhar conversation dikha di jayegi.

Kehne ka matlab ye hai ki jo cheezein mein nahi likh raha hu iska matlab ye nahi hai ki woh kahani me ghatit nahi ho rahi hai.

Agar mein kahani me ye nahi dikha raha hu ki Veer ne kab nahaya, kab susu ki, kab usne apne kapde badle, toh iska matlab ye nahi hai ki woh ye sab cheezein kar hi nahi raha. Zaahir si baat hai wo ye sab kar raha hoga. Par, kya inhe bhi include karna zaroori hai??? I don't think so.

Similarly, Veer ghar se 3 din se adhik baahar rahe aur ghar se call na aaye? Aisa ho sakta hai? Iss baar toh wo vaada kar ke gaya tha ki sab kuchh share karega. Toh ye swabhavik hai ki uski ghar par baatein hui hi hongi. Bas, maine dikhayi nahi hai kyunki baaton me wahi haal chaal hi poochha gaya hoga, zaahir si baat hai.

Kya ye kahani ke liye important hai? Mujhe nahi lagta. Mein chaahu to update inn faaltu side cheezo se bhar sakta hu. Lekin, mein wahi show karta hu jo mujhe zaroori lagta hai.

Aane waale updates me agar koi alag sa convo hoga, toh beshaq wo dikhaya jaayega. Hope that explains it all.

Next crime location panchagani ,deepu ke bayano ke baad to ye surity sabhi ko ho gyi hai ki system holders ka hath hai par wo 1 hai ya 2 ye bhi unknown hai ab tak .deepu ke last statement mein jab teeno ne jaan liya ki uski life stake par ho skti hai agar usne kuch bataya fir bhi veer ya divya ne uske liye koyi arrangement nahi kiya that's weird. Divya to aisi galti nahi karegi ,let's see kya hota hai agle morning abhi to 1 hi din beeta hai panchagani mein .

It's understandable ki Deepu nigrani me rahega bhai. It's also understandable ki agar Veer aur Ava ne ye maan liya hai ki koi system holder iske peechhe hai toh woh dobara Mumbai se panchgani sirf ek Deepu ko maarne toh aayega nahi???

Last murder Mumbai, thaane me hua hai. Iska matlab killer panchgani me nahi hai. Deepu is already safe.

Veer aur ava ke healthy flirting kya hi kehna. Ava bhi ab veer ke close ho rahi hai means general interactions. Deepu ke ghar par ava aur veer ka scene alag hi mahaul create kar diya tha ekdum se .

Heat badh rahi hai. Aur, ye achhi baat hai Ava ke liye.

Ava ka sochna "That's my man".ye kuch alag tha wo bhi itni jaldi agar gaur kiya jaye .

Ava ne ye nahi socha man.

Please read it again. Mein bahut soch samajh ke likhta hu cheezon ko.

Ye hai wo narration —Toh wahi mask ke peechhe Ava ke hontho par muskan thi. Jaise kehna chaah rahi ho — that's my man!

Ye narration ka hissa hai. Author third person perspective se ye bata raha hai ki Ava ki muskan aisi thi jaise batana chaah rahi ho ki — that's my man.

Ava ne apne mann me ye kahi nahi socha hai. Ye mein as a author narrate kar raha hu. Mann me kahi gayi baaton ke liye mein humesha single quotes ('') ka istemal karta hu.

Veer jab bhi Pari se baat karta hai mann me toh woh humesha '' ke beech hi likhi hoti hai. Please, read everything very carefully. Warna bahut doubts aayenge.

Veer bhi ava par vishwas banane laga hai aur uske taraf jhukav bhi badha hai ,waise dono training karna chhod diye kya ya writer sir ne is scene ko chhod diya .

Again, fir wahi baat.

Woh dono hi investigation ke liye aaye hue hai. Divya unke saath hai. All three of them are sticking together. Kya aise me practise ho sakti hai???

Thoda toh dimag lagana padega yaar. Hum 190 updates tak aa chuke hai.

Divya ab bhi ava se khafa hi hai france wale incident ke karan . Phir bhi undono ke bich khatti baatein man ko bhati hai . Petrol pump ke paas open mein divya ka veer ko blowjob dena achanak se wo bhi uske director ke baaton ko yaad karne ke baad ,what's cooking inside her

Khulle me blowjob nahi di thi Divya ne. It's obvious. She might have yanked Veer somewhere in the dark, in the corner, where they couldn't be seen easily. It's explained in the update. Andhere waale hisse me thi woh.

agle updates mein hi pata chalega .waise last scene thoda interesting tha but winter arc ke kaaran jaane diya . Has Ava see both of them in that condition?.

We'll come to know later whether she has seen them or not.

Veer ke baki ke close contacts ka scene abhi tak nahi aaya lag raha ha ki jab kuch life stakes par aayenge tab dikhne ko milega . Veer ka business side jaise chef on wheels yarnia farms hotels ye bhi abhi normal chal raha hai .

Agle update me Divya aur team ke alawa bhi hume kuchh scenes dekhne ko milenge. Veer ke ghar ke, Trisha and team aur bhi bahut kuchh.

Vaise chinatown arc ke end mein veer ne jo lithium ka supply renshu se manga tha wo uske cosmetics and beuty products ke liye hi tha na

Lithium kab se cosmetics aur beauty ke liye kaam aane laga man?

Uske liye toh usne Garofano products se Collab karne ka plan Kiya hai na.

Orpahana ki captain ka to bhool hi gya vo bhi alliance banane wali hai par kiske sath ye clear nahi hua system holders (veer renshu ava garafano )aur others but lag to yahi raha hai ki veer se uski mulakat is arc ke end ke baad hi hogi .kyonki ye arc end hote hote murder mystery solve hogi ,yarnia launch hogi, aur bhi ek to part hai jo end hogi ya naye arc ke start ko likhegi.

Yes. That's the plan. Captain se related ab jo kuchh bhi hai woh next arc me hi ghatit hoga.

Waise last mein nik hi utra tha na airport par ? Baaton se to yahi laga phir bhi dekhte hai kaun sa naya tufaan aane wala hai veer ki jindagi mein .

You should be able to guess already who it was.

Update was too good as in size and in quality as always. Ab to next month hi kuch naya pata chalega aur sath hi 31 december (real) ko yarnia ka launch

Thanks a lot man.
Chaahta toh mein hu ek aur update dena isi month. Par, pehle target toh poora ho.
Uske pehle toh mein na likhne waala kuchh.

Keep supporting.

 

[bantoo]

Bahut hi shandar update

 

[Werewolf]

Renshu aur unknown system holder ki fight blockbuster rahi dono ne ek dusre ko jabardast takkar diya.

Unknown system holder ki wo explosive arrows kaphi dangerous the par Renshu ki *rapid speed* aur *Instinct enlightenment* ne Renshu ko bacha liya.

Skill ka naam Rapid reaction hai. Rapid speed nahi bhai.

Aur, instinct ka naam Enlightened path hai.

Instinct enlightenment: ye hamare andar ki knowledge hoti hai jo hume batati hai ki hume kis moment par kya karna chahiye.

You are somewhat right.

Saral shabdo me use wisdom kahenge. Aur, sahi samay par sahi cheez karne waali baat ju ki sahi hai.

Rapid reaction: Ye Renshu ko enemy ke vaar se bachne ke kaam aa gayi, jaise (Veer ka probability manipulation) work karta hai, jo Veer ko sayad Crimson se mila hai.

Probability manipulation aur Rapid reaction dono alag cheez hai.

Probability manipulation, aapke saath koi ghaatak cheez hone ki probability ko badal deta hai.

Rapid reaction bas fast reflexes hai. Ek aam system holder se zyada tez react karne ki speed pradan karta hai. That's it.

Renshu ko sabhi languages ka knowledge hone ke karan wo tribe ke logo ko easily apni baat ko samjha paya aur ye Renshu aur uski team ne bahut achha kiya ki tribes ke logo ki jaan nahi li.

Sabhi system holders ko saari bhashaayein aati hai. Sirf Renshu nahi hai usme.

Mayhem skill aur virtual bar Renshu ko 2 times lethal banati hai.

That is true... Indeed.

So this is my first review for this story and this is only the half review, I didn't read all the updates.

Mein suggest karunga ki ek baar poori story latest updates tak read kar lo. And, then uske baad revo do. Iss se time bachega. Ju ka bhi aur mera bhi.

So basically the battle is being fought for the radioactive elament which is extracted from the mine over which *Legion group* took its control and they understand that they belong to only for few while *Order group* admit that the mineral is the property of govt. and should be handed over to the Chinese govt.

Rest of the story's review will come soon.

Werewolf sir.
Gaurav1969.
This is my first review on this story.

Yes. That's the crux of the Chinatown arc.

Thanks a lot and keep supporting.

 

[Werewolf]

Oh fuck!! this guy Jaw Long is fucking so dangerous he used all his skills together to kill that enemy *Veer* a) Shayana's Blood Rituals
b) Jemisha's Blood ring and c) Animal Kingdom even Aura vision and for all this he lost his both eyes to perform the act.

Even he mixed the deadliest poison in the fall to kill but thanks to *Pari* who instructed Veer to check the water first.

Yeah.

Veers's every skills went in vain. One after another first *probability manipulation then followed by Limbo even his bone riper couldn't save from the lethal damage and at the end almost he was about to die but at the end the attack of Ava saved Veer.

25 minutes was enough to kill any enemy for any system holder but hats of to Veer's courage who saved him but in the process he lost very much his strength and been a little bit slow and that was enough for Jaw Long to give him lethal attack and kill.

Bone Reaper

As earlier Erica said if she would be there she could have died.

The tiredness which Veer faced perhaps slowed his attacks and Jaw Long been uperhand in the battle.

Yup! The animals tired him out. And, that was the motive of Jaw Long from the very beginning.

Mind blowing update which gives you goosebumps throughout the entire update either that was the battle of ((Renshu vs unknown system holder)) or [Veer vs Jaw Long)).

Werewolf sir.

Gaurav1969.

You can read this as well.

Pahle main 175 update tak ek hi baar mein padh liya par maine is update ko dusri baar mein complete kiya.

There's no need to reread it again if you remember what happened.

Again, I would suggest you to read all the updates whenever you get time first and then give a review. That would be much better. Thanks!

 

[dhalchandarun]

There's no need to reread it again if you remember what happened.

Again, I would suggest you to read all the updates whenever you get time first and then give a review. That would be much better. Thanks!

Remaining updates ke reviews phir ek sath hi de deta hoon Chhota Chhota karke.

Rapid reaction(speed)
Bone reaper(riper).

 

[Sushilnkt]

वेटिंग

 

[Werewolf]

Woooahhh brooki kya hi jordaar updiya hai aapne sach main aap ke liye kya hi kahu main bro aap her baar hi ye saabit kardete ho ki apka time Lena worthit hai broo respect you bro

Tabhi toh time leta hu.

First adesh hota hota hai jab sone ka biscut muh Tak aaye or muh main na aaye to jaate to jalti hi hai or kya hi tevar hai iske ise koi samjhao ki NEXACOMM ke samne iski koi aukat hnahi hai

Kutte ki dum bhala kabhi seedhi hui hai?

Or adesh apne manager ko galiya to aise de raha tha jese uska manager hi nexacom ka malik ho are yaar tumhe deal nahi mili usme wo bechara kya kare tum Bina wajah uski lene PE tule huye ho

Ab wo aadesh hai. Woh kuchh bhi kar sakta hai.

Or adesh ko kyu nexacom ka lene ka shouk hai or bhi company hai unse hi le lete fund lekin nahi apni fati huyi gaand uthake kishor se hi marwani hai ise lekin nexa com ne lagta hai muh pe mana kardiya isiliye iski itni jali huyi hai

Bhai, baat sirf paise ki thodi hoti hai. Business me paisa toh koi bhi de sakta hai jiske paas hai.

Baat hoti hai brand partnership ki.

Agar ju ko hi kisi ke saath agar partnership karni ho toh kis ke saath karoge?

A) Desh ki sabse badi company ke saath.

B) Desh ki kisi aur company ke saath.

Dono me paisa utna hi milna hai.

I think answer samajh aa gaya hoga. Aadesh ko paisa toh kahi se bhi mil jayega. Casa Belle par Paisa invest karne ke liye use hazaro log mil jayenge. Par, use Nexacom ka support chahiye. Ek image ki desh ke sabse bade conglomerate unke saath partnership rakhti hai.

Ju khud business se ho toh ye toh samajhna hi chahiye.

Jarur ye manager ruchika ke pass hi Gaya hoga kyu ki kishor ke pass jata to main batau kya reaction hota kishor ka hehe
Kishor be like " hum kutto se baat nahi karte "

Jaane ki zaroorat nahi bhai.

Kaera waala scene isliye toh dikhaya gaya tha. Ruchika notification read karti hai aur batati hai Kaera ko ki Casa Belle waala investment maang rahe hai.

Kaera ne fir investment Hotel Prestige me kar di.

Next captain lagta hai ab wo bhi ek alliance ke mud main hai aakhir use bhi pata to chal hi Gaya hoga ki sirf uske ek ke power system holder honese kuch nahi hoga use bhi apne jeso ki jarurat hai aakhir Damian se ladkar use ye to pata chal hi Gaya hoga ki samne wali party kitne main hai or wo kitne main

Yes. Usne alliance ka soch liya hai.

Ab ye dekhna dilchasp hoga ki captain renshu wali alliance main kese introduce hoti hai kyu ki captain ka carecter uske nek vyaktitvako justify kar raha hai because wo sirf unhi logo se bhidti hai jo orphana ko target karte hai ya unke members ko pareshan karte hai well dekhte hai ye lady kese veer ke samperk main aati hai

Ye sab agle arc ka hissa hai. Usme hi sab ujaagar hoga.

Next pranjal or madhuri dono wapas mubai ja rahe hai or veer inhe flat main bheja mujhe to laga tha ki Amrit nivas bhejega unhe khair chalo koi na kamse kam safe to hai or lagta hai madhuri ki pranjal ki jalan bohot pehle se pata hai khair choro in dono ko ye to premi panchi hai

Veer ne unhe apne ek flat me bheja hai jo manorath ki sampatti se use praapt hua tha. Kaafi property hai Veer ke paas.

Ab aate hai main scene per yani ki killer wala scene is scene ko padhte waqt sach baat bolu wolfi mere roungte khade hogye the pehle to veer or Ava ka flirt dekhte huye Mera khada hone laga tha jper uske baad jese jese killer ka discreption padha mere baal khade hogaye sarir ke kya hi pyscho killer hai per kya ye sirf ye ek inshan hai

Raungte khade karwana hi toh uddeshya tha

Par neeche ka maal khada karwane ka uddeshya nahi tha

Ab meri theory sher kar raha hu mujhe to ye wahi pagal doctor lag raha hai jise crimson ne jailse churrtatha uski aakhon ki putliya badi jokero wali bhayanak hasi lambe safed Baal or sabse bada reason is guess ka wo lamba fafed coat joki doctor use karte hai shayad

Abhi bhi koi shaq hai kya?

Or uska ye bolna ki manav sarir ek bahut badi paheli hai aisa lagta hai jese veer ki suger mommy wali pari ki tarah is doctor ke system ne iska sarir highjack karliya hai

Jo ki possible nahi. Kyunki, pari ki ek wahi personality hai jo ye sab karne ke qaabil hai.

baki ye wala scenbahot hi badhiya tha or Deepu bechare ke ander us killer ka khouf bahut jyada bhara huva hai or ye Laxmi bhi hai jab koi aisa pyscho killer apni artka pradarshan aapke samne hi aapke kisi apne per kare or aap kuch na karpao tab acchese aacha aadmi khud kha jata hai

Yup!!!

But sabse intresting to veer or Divya ka scene laga wolfi mujhe bhi aisa khushbudar sex scene padhna or apni gf ke sath karna pasand hai per sach main veer bhi kuch der Divya ki khushbu le leta to thoda or maza aata khair ab to jo hona tha vo hogya bechari Ava ko batao Jo sota hai wo khota hai or jagta hai wahi pata hai

Har jagah chudayi possible nahi.

Well sabse last per lagta hai apne bhosdiwale chaccha Nikoles sahab India aaye hai apni pyari biwi ka sex dekhne uska aana mayne bhi rakhta hai aakhir aisi khubsurat biwi Bina kisi contact ke bahar ghume to kisi ko bhi kahi bhi jana padta hai or lagta hai ye gaurav se hi baat kar raha tha khair ab kya hi kar sakta hai ye iski biwi ko veer ki khushbu bha chuki hai


Baki fabulous update buddy

Yup! Nik is here. Thanks a lot btw for this big revo. Keep supporting as usual.

 

[Samar_Singh]

{I know Captain ka system ek male hai Per us system ka naam captain ne zero rakha which show Captain khudko men se superior samjhti hai ya nafarat krti h }

May be bcos in past incidents??
Kyuki agar wo nafarat nhi krti mens se to baki System holders ki tarah normal naam rakh skti thi after all system ke baad hi uski life itni easy hui, itni powers mili, or system uske bare me baki orphans se jada janta h or uski help krta hai to koi normal insaan ese system ka naam zero kyu rakhega?

Nahi man. Zero naam dene se ye kaise siddh ho gaya ki Captain males se nafrat karti hai?

Usne zero naam rakha toh uske peechhe bahut se kaaran ho sakte hai. Captain men ko hate karti hai ye kahani me kahi bhi nahi bataya gaya hai. So, it won't be wise to think that....

Well abhi captain ke bare me hum bahut kam jante hai, uski personality aur behaviour ko lekar....naa hi abhi tak uska koi aisa interaction kisi se dikha hai jo uski misandry yaa superiority complex ko show kare. Encounter with Damina was completed different.
Jahan tak baat hai systems ke naam rakhne ki to I think woh har system holder ne apni kisi khaas vajah yaa preference ke according rakhe hai. Jaise Veer jo ek underdog tha, uski life Pari ke aane se 180° badal gayi, that's why he named her pari (angel). Baki ke naam main bhul rahu hu, but I think unka bhi naam koi reason yaa character ki personal choice ko show karti hai jinka ab tak naam pata hai.

Captain ke mamle me bhi situation kuch hadd tak Veer jaisi thi, nearly to death. Lekin Captain ki life aur Veer ki life me jameen asman ka antar tha. Captain shuru se powerful thi system milne ke baad woh aur powerful ban gayi.

To jaise kisi bhi numeral ke baad zero add kar dene se uski value ten times badh jati hai, vaise hi captain bhi ke sath hua. Captain ki powers system ke baad aur badhi, she came stronger. Ten times yaa usse jyada that's different. . Maybe that kind of logic captain put while naming her system.

Aur jo fight ke dauran captain aur zero ka interaction tha usse laga nahi ki unke bich kisi tarah ka superior yaa inferior wala relation hai.

Baki to writer knows best....

 

[kris123h]

Can we see more of Ragini and nidhi in next update