Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

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Latest Update ➢ Update 192 ​

 

[dododo]

Great update. Will reply later, had eye operation 3 days back.

 

[Werewolf]

Nice update
Veer Or Ava ko serail killer ka clue mil gaya or hum readers ki bhi Kuch kuch samjh aa gaya k woh bhi 1 system holder hai

Udhar captain bhi kisi allies ki soch rahi hai dekhte hai wo kahan jati hai


Casa bella hotel ki kuch baatein clear ho gayi spy pe spy ho raha Aadesh k sath bhi dheere dheere game ho raha hai jo usko abhi pata nhi chal raha

Veer Or Ava phir se close hona shuru ho gaye hai or Divya ki tho aag bahut badh gayi ekdum se

Last mein yeh Nik entry kuch alag hone wala hai kya Veer k sath

Thanks a lot

 

[Werewolf]

Obviously kaira करेगी, वीर के पिछवाड़े में इतना गुदा ही नहीं है कि वो kaira को propose कर सके।
और वैसे भी वीर और kaira का रिश्ता एकदम पवित्र है,
नौकर और मालकिन के जैसा...

जब लड़की कायरा जैसी हो, तो वीर जैसा लड़का भी आगे बढ़ने से पहले 10 बार सोचने पर मजबूर हो जाता हैं भाई।

हो ही नहीं सकता कि इस कहानी में मुझे kaira से ज्यादा कोई पसंद आ जाए।
Kaira was, kaira is and kaira will always be my favourite, it doesn't matter की इस कहानी में कितने अच्छे और खूबसूरत character आ चुके हैं या आयेंगे
निधि, सुहाना,आरोही,ava सब अपने जगह ठीक है, लेकिन kaira is kaira

एक लाइन में ....
kaira is lob

देखते जाओ बस भाई। कैसे सोनिया रीडर्स के दिल में अपनी जगह बनाती हैं।

भाई अगर possible हो तो एक अपडेट तेज के past के बारे में जरूर देना थोड़ा अच्छा elaborate करके, जिसमें हम ये जान पाए कि तेज का बचपन किन difficulties से गुजरा, and कैसे उसने और भावना ने बिना किसी family support के survive किया।
I mean जबरदस्ती मत घुसाना,लेकिन अगर हो जाए तो ठीक ही होगा तेज के possessiveness को समझने के लिए

ये तो पहले से ही तय हैं कि तेज का अतीत आयेगा। मैने सोच के रखा हैं उस बारे में। बस कुछ अपडेट और, और फिर हम तेज के अतीत में भी डुबकी लगाएंगे।

अब पता चलेगा ना, nik मुंबई जो आ गया है, और गौरव के पास ही तो रुकने जा रहा है
एक बार फिर हाथ जोड़ कर गुजारिश है कि इसी arc में गौरव की ऐसी पेलाई हो की बस यही निकले
दिल विच ठंड पै गई।
इस कहानी के सबसे irritating character में से एक है nik और गौरव

जो होगा बढ़िया होगा। धैर्य बनाए रखने का।

 

[mistyvixen]

Werewolf sir aapke pehle story...bhi aise hi hai kya? Aur agar real world pe hai toh baad mein iske kaise link karege...kyuki this is somewhat fanatsy

And hope your family member is fine now and you're in right state of mind

 

[Werewolf]

Werewolf sir aapke pehle story...bhi aise hi hai kya? Aur agar real world pe hai toh baad mein iske kaise link karege...kyuki this is somewhat fanatsy

And hope your family member is fine now and you're in right state of mind

First story me koi magic nahi hai. It's family drama basically but with incest and suspense. The theme is that the younger sister hates her elder brother. Why she hates him? What did he do? Why everyone else likes him? It gets revealed later in the story.

About the linking part... I know how it must be done.

 

[Werewolf]

Let's start again!

Starting is like any other college revenge drama but I know the how enjoyable the story ahead is!

So, Kavya is on Veer's good side... It's such a big family that sometimes I forget who is on whose side. But why is Veer's dad so harsh to him?

Brijesh not liking his son isn't just a sudden thing. It started way back when Veer was in his childhood days.

Veer used to remind him of Bhavna. You need to read the village arc to know the inner story of Bhavna, Brijesh and how they got tangled.

I know Veer's real mom will make an appearance in later updates. Dadaji seems kind... and there’s gonna be a lot of action in the upcoming updates. Thankss Werewolf Sir, for not turning this into just another family and college drama!

It's family drama + system.

When it rains, it pours! This was enough humiliation to make anyone snap from anger... and then that accident later...it doesn't stop getting worse...does they?

that emotional hospital scene and the line, "If his family were here, would they have even cared about him?"

It's the contradiction theme. We started in a bad phase. The worst situation. And, we know now far Veer has come.

There’s Veer, literally fighting for his life in a hospital bed, and meanwhile, Pranjal and the others are enjoying pizzas—talk about irony!

They reap what they sow. What goes around, comes around. And, you'll see what will happen with Pranjal and co later.

Manorath was the best character at the start. And haha, it was hilarious seeing their faces turn white when he denied them the family property.

And now, finally, Pari has entered the scene! Yesss!

The wise man. But he has his faults too. For that - village arc

Jajaja... it was nice when Nidhi directly confronted Veer's family and showed them mirror but it would have been even better if it had been Brijesh instead of Manorath.

No clue if Pari's gender is gonna matter later, but she definitely acts kinda off

Nidhi is an angel from the start.

That scene on the scooty was straight fire... and Nidhi definitely felt the touch too!
Can’t even imagine how heated it would’ve gotten if Veer and Nidhi were living together in that flat, but anyway, Shreya’s my second fav, so I’ll still take it.

That's the craze for Nidhi.
Just by her simplicity, she has made quite an impact among the readers' hearts.

You really know how to nail those emotional scenes, hats off! I loved it when Nidhi said, "I'll cook whatever you want, just wait a little," and then the ending? Veer was totally busted when Shreya had her sister’s finger in his mouth . That was wild!

It was 3 years ago. Haha! Yes! I remember that scene. The egoistic, rude and a bit funny side of Pari. That Pari was something else.

Shreya is funny asf...Juhi calling Veer mama is too cute.

Juhi is innocent. You tell her to call Veer 'daddy' and she won't even hesitate.

And first mission to lose virginity? Lol. I don't remember any system story to start like that.

Veer was a timid soul. It was essential to turn him into a man first. A man sees things differently after losing his virginity. Same goes for the women. Once you experience sex, mang things get normalised.

Lust stays in control. More eye contact. More confidence. You feel more focused instead of thinking about random girl and jerking off.

So, that first mission was to drag Veer out of this.

Another reason was to get him some points in reward. Kaera made that possible.

That deep talk about Life in the bar was deep. Also, why Kendal Jenner for role for Kaera (honestly I feel there are hundreds of better option than her!...and that scene with Kaera...would say I didn't like it much (she was half drunk)

Kendall suits the personality of Kaera. The way I imagine Kaera, Kendall is the only celebrity who's closest to her.

About the sex part... It was 3 years ago. I was rusty in writing sex scenes after taking the break from Akhir kyu? So, that might not be as exciting as it could have. However, the later sex scenes do gets better.

As far as I remember there are some goons below downstairs to kill her..

Finally, Veer saved the damsel in distress... and that time he had with her before was just perfect for someone to lose their virginity. The whole thing about the hitmen after Kaera has always been such a mystery to me. Hopefully, this time, when I read with my full focus, I’ll finally figure it out!

You're in the Aatish's arc right now. After this, it's - Slogan's arc. Then, we get to see famiglia arc I think. The HOK arc, Village arc (You'll learn everything about Bhavna, her past, Veer's birth, Brijesh's hatred, Karunesh's role, everything) Then we have Crimson arc, followed by the continuation of famiglia arc, then it's Chinatown arc and then the current arc - Disembowler. We have already seen 11 updates so far for Disembowler arc. Just a few more to go and then we'll step into the — Summit arc.

And now, I’ll read the rest later... but this is definitely one of my favorite arcs in the story so far, at least till when Veer stays with Nidhi and as you said the current arc is vital for Nidhi that's why I decided to binge again after a long time

Current arc is the best arc for Nidhi. Period. Nothing can be as good as this arc for her. Story will throw what you wanted to see the most right at your face.

Thanks a lot btw for this big revo. And, keep supporting as usual.

 

[raghav_143]

Sir ji meri bhagwan se prathana ki apki family ki 'health problem' jald se jald thik ho jaye.



Waise sir ji aap likhna kab se start kroge ?

 

[Rihanna]

Note : I'm here to inform you guys about something.

Ab mein personal details share karunga nahi but ek medical emergency thi. Fortunately, my family member is out of danger now. But that only means ki mujhe saari dekh rekh karna hogi.

So, next update will be delayed. Mujhe nahi pata kab aayega kyunki, abhi toh pehle mujhe situation ke hisaab se dekhna padega.

Lekin, itna keh sakta hu ki 31st December ko jo update humne plan kiya tha woh usi date ko aa jayega. Iska matlab ye hai ki uske pehle bas ye 191 update aayega aur fir Yarnia ki launch wala update 192 rahega.

Updates will take time toh baar baar mat poochhna kab aayega update. Maine already ye explain kar diya hai abhi.

Aur, KEKIUS MAXIMUS kya dikkat hai bhai???

Damha ne jab message daala iss baat ko lekar toh angry reaction kis baat pe diye ho?

dhalchandarjun even you reacted haha on that!?

Dikkat kya hai? Maine hi Damha ko message kiya tha comment pin karne ka. Toh ye haha aur angry reaction kis baat ke liye the?

What happened sir??? Is everything okay???

Main to busy thi last few days... Mujhe pta hi ni ki kya kya ho gya yha... Hope everything is fine... You take ur time... Story bhi yhi h... Hum bhi yhi h... Aap apne comfort k hisab se chaliye... Waiting for the next update... Jab bhi aaye...

 

[Rihanna]

I'm ur 200th like...
Aapka target achieve ho gya h ...

 

[Rihanna]

And here's my review...

Last 2 updates se mne review ni dia ... Sorry... I was just a bit busy...

Let's start with Divya nd Veer's scene... What was that?? Right at the petrol pump? Divya horny ho gyi Veer ko dhyan se dekhte hi... I mean ... Koi bhi ho jaegi .. Veer is that handsome...

But Ava ki presence me ye sab Veer ne hone dia?? Don't u want Ava... Veer u mofo...

Agar lily ne sunn lia hoga na sab to wo Ava ko pok degi... Aur fir Veer tum to gaye .. have some shame... You want Divya? Take her to a motel or something... Don't fucking do it in front of ur future wife...

Anyways... Coming to the next part... It's evident ki wo serial killer kon h ... That fucking mad man... Wo hi khulla ghum rha h har jagah... Nd his description... I got chills all over my body...

What was that description? Straight out of horror movie... Khule lambe safed Baal... Aankhon ki putlia baahar ko aati hui... Sadistic nd heinous smile... White coat... His weird sentences...

Pure Goosebumps... Deepu ki to halat kharab ho gyi hogi use dekh k ... Even crimson was afraid to make a move on him...

Deepu ne to pant me hi chor di hogi apni ...
So Pranjal nd Madhuri nd her mother went back to Mumbai... Veer ne unhe apne flat me bheja h ... I wonder ki Pranjal ko kesa mehsoos ho rha hoga... Pretty sure wo jealous feel kr rha hoga... Wo soch rha hoga ki kaash main Madhuri ko rukne ki jagah de paata... Like apne khud ke ghar me .. lekin wo ye kar ni sakta kyuki karunesh bhi ghar me h... Aur uske paas uss flat ke alawa aur kuch h nhi abhi ... Truly poor...

Aise me Veer ne sab intezam kar dia... Jali to hogi... Upar se Madhuri Veer ki taraf zyada focused lag rhi h... Jabki bagal me hi Pranjal baitha h ... The bus scene... Let's see how Madhuri will play her role in the story... Sirf itne se scene k liye to aap use laoge nhi story me... Am I right???

Aadesh is the real dog in this world... Use samajh hi nhi aa rha ki wo kis se panga le rha h... I mean... Yaar jab tumne apni aakho se dekh lia ki Mumbai ka don balhar Veer ke aage peeche ghoomta h ... Uske saath uske connections h ... Uske baad bhi tumhare andar itni himmat kaise aa gyi ki tum jaa ke Veer se firse bhido???

He's either too smart or just too dumb. And, I'm assuming it's the latter. Khud ka spy bheja... Ek second me pakda gya... Aur ab Veer use galat info feed karta rahega jo wo casa Belle me send karta rahega...

I'm pretty sure Veer's aim is to make casa Belle empty their pockets ... Uske baad Veer kuch dhamal karega... Pretty sure... Wait... Yarnia is about to launch... Yessss... Veer might be planning to empty their pockets before the grand launch of the Yarnia...

But Yarnia to showroom h... Not a hotel... Shayad kuch zyada soch lia maine ... But I'm sure Veer kuch to karega... Something grand... Nd then wo suddenly reveal bhi karega aadesh ko ki uska spy pehle hi pakad me aa chuka tha...

As usual... Your narration was just something else... No other writer have this ability to paint the picture this vividly for me here other than u...

I have seen many writers... Some of them are really very good... But they have never written a story this long while maintaining their writing skills till the last moment. They usually write a shorter story rather than sticking to a longer one.

U on the other hand are the exact opposite. Initially I thought you might have screwed up when I first saw how long this story was going to be... But no... It just keeps getting better and better ....

Your writing skills have evolved substantially... It feels like reading a high quality novel. There are many other system based stories here... For the curiosity... I ventured into some of those... Just to take a look... But no one comes close to this mastery ... Nothing...

Other stories on other side... Nd this one stays in its own league. There's no comparison at all. Only an avid reader who pays attention to the minute details like me would be able to understand why I'm saying this ... This one just slaps...

Thank u for ur continuous efforts nd entertaining us with ur masterful skills... Just one update of this story makes my entire week lovely... Nd plz take care of yourself nd ur family member as well... Health is wealth... Stories can be completed later too... Take care nd keep updating us with ur health too... Come online time to time so that we'll know that u are here nd fine...

Thnx... Keep writing sir... 🩷