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Thanks a lotNice update
Veer Or Ava ko serail killer ka clue mil gaya or hum readers ki bhi Kuch kuch samjh aa gaya k woh bhi 1 system holder hai
Udhar captain bhi kisi allies ki soch rahi hai dekhte hai wo kahan jati hai
Casa bella hotel ki kuch baatein clear ho gayi spy pe spy ho raha Aadesh k sath bhi dheere dheere game ho raha hai jo usko abhi pata nhi chal raha
Veer Or Ava phir se close hona shuru ho gaye hai or Divya ki tho aag bahut badh gayi ekdum se
Last mein yeh Nik entry kuch alag hone wala hai kya Veer k sath
जब लड़की कायरा जैसी हो, तो वीर जैसा लड़का भी आगे बढ़ने से पहले 10 बार सोचने पर मजबूर हो जाता हैं भाई।Obviously kaira करेगी, वीर के पिछवाड़े में इतना गुदा ही नहीं है कि वो kaira को propose कर सके।
और वैसे भी वीर और kaira का रिश्ता एकदम पवित्र है,
नौकर और मालकिन के जैसा...
देखते जाओ बस भाई। कैसे सोनिया रीडर्स के दिल में अपनी जगह बनाती हैं।हो ही नहीं सकता कि इस कहानी में मुझे kaira से ज्यादा कोई पसंद आ जाए।
Kaira was, kaira is and kaira will always be my favourite, it doesn't matter की इस कहानी में कितने अच्छे और खूबसूरत character आ चुके हैं या आयेंगे
निधि, सुहाना,आरोही,ava सब अपने जगह ठीक है, लेकिन kaira is kaira
एक लाइन में ....
kaira is lob
ये तो पहले से ही तय हैं कि तेज का अतीत आयेगा। मैने सोच के रखा हैं उस बारे में। बस कुछ अपडेट और, और फिर हम तेज के अतीत में भी डुबकी लगाएंगे।भाई अगर possible हो तो एक अपडेट तेज के past के बारे में जरूर देना थोड़ा अच्छा elaborate करके, जिसमें हम ये जान पाए कि तेज का बचपन किन difficulties से गुजरा, and कैसे उसने और भावना ने बिना किसी family support के survive किया।
I mean जबरदस्ती मत घुसाना,लेकिन अगर हो जाए तो ठीक ही होगा तेज के possessiveness को समझने के लिए
जो होगा बढ़िया होगा। धैर्य बनाए रखने का।अब पता चलेगा ना, nik मुंबई जो आ गया है, और गौरव के पास ही तो रुकने जा रहा है
एक बार फिर हाथ जोड़ कर गुजारिश है कि इसी arc में गौरव की ऐसी पेलाई हो की बस यही निकले
दिल विच ठंड पै गई।
इस कहानी के सबसे irritating character में से एक है nik और गौरव
First story me koi magic nahi hai. It's family drama basically but with incest and suspense. The theme is that the younger sister hates her elder brother. Why she hates him? What did he do? Why everyone else likes him? It gets revealed later in the story.Werewolf sir aapke pehle story...bhi aise hi hai kya? Aur agar real world pe hai toh baad mein iske kaise link karege...kyuki this is somewhat fanatsy
And hope your family member is fine now and you're in right state of mind
Brijesh not liking his son isn't just a sudden thing. It started way back when Veer was in his childhood days.Let's start again!
Starting is like any other college revenge drama but I know the how enjoyable the story ahead is!
So, Kavya is on Veer's good side... It's such a big family that sometimes I forget who is on whose side. But why is Veer's dad so harsh to him?
It's family drama + system.I know Veer's real mom will make an appearance in later updates. Dadaji seems kind... and there’s gonna be a lot of action in the upcoming updates. Thankss Werewolf Sir, for not turning this into just another family and college drama!
It's the contradiction theme. We started in a bad phase. The worst situation. And, we know now far Veer has come.When it rains, it pours! This was enough humiliation to make anyone snap from anger... and then that accident later...it doesn't stop getting worse...does they?
that emotional hospital scene and the line, "If his family were here, would they have even cared about him?"
They reap what they sow. What goes around, comes around. And, you'll see what will happen with Pranjal and co later.There’s Veer, literally fighting for his life in a hospital bed, and meanwhile, Pranjal and the others are enjoying pizzas—talk about irony!
The wise man. But he has his faults too. For that - village arcManorath was the best character at the start. And haha, it was hilarious seeing their faces turn white when he denied them the family property.
And now, finally, Pari has entered the scene! Yesss!
That's the craze for Nidhi.Jajaja... it was nice when Nidhi directly confronted Veer's family and showed them mirror but it would have been even better if it had been Brijesh instead of Manorath.
No clue if Pari's gender is gonna matter later, but she definitely acts kinda off
Nidhi is an angel from the start.
That scene on the scooty was straight fire... and Nidhi definitely felt the touch too!
Can’t even imagine how heated it would’ve gotten if Veer and Nidhi were living together in that flat, but anyway, Shreya’s my second fav, so I’ll still take it.
It was 3 years ago. Haha! Yes! I remember that scene. The egoistic, rude and a bit funny side of Pari. That Pari was something else.You really know how to nail those emotional scenes, hats off! I loved it when Nidhi said, "I'll cook whatever you want, just wait a little," and then the ending? Veer was totally busted when Shreya had her sister’s finger in his mouth . That was wild!
Juhi is innocent. You tell her to call Veer 'daddy' and she won't even hesitate.Shreya is funny asf...Juhi calling Veer mama is too cute.
Veer was a timid soul. It was essential to turn him into a man first. A man sees things differently after losing his virginity. Same goes for the women. Once you experience sex, mang things get normalised.And first mission to lose virginity? Lol. I don't remember any system story to start like that.
Kendall suits the personality of Kaera. The way I imagine Kaera, Kendall is the only celebrity who's closest to her.That deep talk about Life in the bar was deep. Also, why Kendal Jenner for role for Kaera (honestly I feel there are hundreds of better option than her!...and that scene with Kaera...would say I didn't like it much (she was half drunk)
You're in the Aatish's arc right now. After this, it's - Slogan's arc. Then, we get to see famiglia arc I think. The HOK arc, Village arc (You'll learn everything about Bhavna, her past, Veer's birth, Brijesh's hatred, Karunesh's role, everything) Then we have Crimson arc, followed by the continuation of famiglia arc, then it's Chinatown arc and then the current arc - Disembowler. We have already seen 11 updates so far for Disembowler arc. Just a few more to go and then we'll step into the — Summit arc.As far as I remember there are some goons below downstairs to kill her..
Finally, Veer saved the damsel in distress... and that time he had with her before was just perfect for someone to lose their virginity. The whole thing about the hitmen after Kaera has always been such a mystery to me. Hopefully, this time, when I read with my full focus, I’ll finally figure it out!
Current arc is the best arc for Nidhi. Period. Nothing can be as good as this arc for her. Story will throw what you wanted to see the most right at your face.And now, I’ll read the rest later... but this is definitely one of my favorite arcs in the story so far, at least till when Veer stays with Nidhi and as you said the current arc is vital for Nidhi that's why I decided to binge again after a long time