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Yes! Tonight!!Bhai ajj updete doge kya
Ok bhaiYes! Tonight!!
Bro! Kahani ki lead female aane me abhi time h... Thoda sa...Osm update brother......is update se story ek dum changege ho gyi hai.....Brijesh or baki sab ka behaviour pehle change nhi hua to ab kyo change hoga ......sach me yr bura lgta hai jb apne hi maa aisa kre pr ma to sauteli hai smj me ata hai pr baap to real father na fir bhi aisa behaviour.....system I like that.....ki system ne use chuna ab to uski chandi hone wali hai......mission kro apni skills improve kro...mission time se nhi kroge to usse or apni kismat dono ko kho doge ..is update me hume nidni ke bare me bhi bahut kuch chala ki wo kisi ladki hai uske halat kaise hai pati se divorce ho gya....beta usne rakh liya beti usse deti ....maa ki tabiyat kharab hai...khair sab ki life me problem to hoti hi hai....kuch choti to kuch badi ....dekhte hai system ne jo usse mission diya wo usse complete kr payega ya nhi .......means yha story fantasy base hone wali hai .... something-2 ......
Brother tumne ab tak hero ka jikr to ho gya pr story ki lead female character kon hai ye pta nhi chala jra uske bare me bhi kuch btao....
Anyway bdiya likh rahe hai aap..... previous story se is story me apki writing skills...bahut jyada improve hui hai brother....I like that....dekhte hai aage kya hone wala hai veer ki life me.....
Game download nahi hua bro. System aaya hai. System ke baare me dheere dheere kayi baatein pata chalengi.Superb update bro.Aisa lagta hai Veer ke ander koi game download ho gaya hai.Dekhte hai apna pehla mission poora kar paega ya nahi
Update size theek hai yaar. Mere hisaab se.Itni achhi kahani aur itne chhote update.....
Maza nahi aaya.......
Bade update do......
Aap badal gaye ho lag raha......
Purani wali kahani kya mast thi.....
Waise hi ise bhi likhna bhai......
Aur update Engima bhai ki tarah do....
Padhne me maza aaye ye lamba lamba update.....
Waise nice update waiting for your next update.....
Thanks a lot brother!! (づ。◕‿‿◕。)づGreat update Werewolf bhai.
Veer ko bhi ab hosh aa gaya he. Brijesh ka laga tha ki Shayad wo kuch kare apne bete ke liye ya phir usse wapis ghar bula le par nafrat jyada he uske dil me. Nidhi ko bhi veer ke liye bura lag raha he ki kese logo ke bich itne saal raha he. Wahi veer jag chuka he aur uski mulakaat system se ho gayi he. Vese manna padega bhai kafi unique way he aapka iss story me. System ne bhi sab samjha diya he veer ko ab dekhte he veer kese badshah banta he. Nidhi ki bhi apni life me problem chal rahi he. Ab dekhte he veer kese solve karta he Nidhi ki problems.
Waiting for next update .
Koi baat nhi writer sahab hm aapke sath h..Update size theek hai yaar. Mere hisaab se.
Sabhi writers apni apni length ka update likhte hai bro. Enigma bhai ki story mene abhi padhi nahi hai. Boht lambi stories mujhe pasand nahi aati hai bro. Aur boht lambe updates mujhse padhe bhi nahi jaate. Mein boht hi picky reader hu. Keval 2 3 stories hi mene completely padhi hongi yaha par. Boht sii stories aadhi hi padh chorr chuka hu.
Isliye mein khud paryaapt length ka hi update likhta hu. Par enigma bhai ki padhunga jab kabhi time milta jaega.