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Tussi jaa rahe ho???Actually abhi situation kuch aisi hai k main thore time tak active nhi reh pau ga abhi ye b sure nhi hu k wapsi kab tak ho gi story read karne ka time mile ga b ya nh isliye I'm sorry
phir mile ge jald hi tab tak k liye gd bye
and take care
Wtf? Haha~Hey Werewolf ....
kyun na raagini vivek ko dekh gusse mein pagal si ho jaaye ... phir ek kulhadi leke aake us karunesh ka gala hi uda de
Aaj raat...Jis maa ko vo hamesha yaad karta tha...jis lamhe ka intezaar usee itna years sa tha per fir bhi aaj samne hokar bhi hug nahi kar paya, baat nahi kar paya..bahut bura feel ho raha hai veer ka liya...vivek bhi aa gaye ghar per pata ni veer ko dekh kar kaise react karega....bhai jaldi sa next update bhi dedo
Thanks a lot!!!Veer has been deprived of love from the beginning and there are many reasons for this, Well after many years he met his mother today even if the situation is not right but now there is a hope, happiness, enthusiasm, that feeling of mother's love which he was longing for. I am very happy and soon Veer's life will also be filled with happiness.
The scene between Suman and Veer was very sensual and nice but as I said I only like romance so I left without paying much attention, I want to see the romantic moments between mam and Veer.
The version of Veer has been upgraded, tell us a little more about it. Ragini's parents have come, bound to be a ruckus.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
Thanks a lot brother! Keep supporting!!Awesome updates veere
Abto points pe points mil rhe hain.
Mazze hi mazze. Pari to din ba din natkhat hoti jari hai.
Wtffff ye mummy kaise tapak padi wo bhi itni coincidently. Bhot hi ajeeb baat hai. Duniya to waqai choti hogyi hai. Suman ke sth sahi kinky scene hogya.
Sonali sahi bhadki hui hai or itni kam favor ability. Zarur gusse ki waja se kam hogyi hogi.
Ghar me to in ki entry hogyi let's adjustment kaise hoti hai or kab tak or kaise.
Suhana ki bhi sahi band baji hui hai. Or le hmare hero se panga.
Nidhi to too crazy hochuki hai apne hero keliye
Thanks a lot brother!Superb story brother is story ka concept hatke hai aapki pahle wali story v main padha hu wo v bahot jabardast thi ummid karta hu ke ye v utni hi dlchasp hogi and nice update
Poor boy VEER maa saamne hote huwe kuch ker nahi paya lekin dil ko ek tasalli tow h ki Maa zinda h
Tow poori raat Veer or Suman ki masti m nikal gayi zaberdast Erotica
Achanak se Dad or soteli Maa or chahcha kaise tapak pade shayad vivek leker aaya hoga apni biwi ko le jaane k lie
Dekhte h aage kia hota h
Zaberdast garma garam shaandaar
Update bhai lajawab
Dhanyavaad Naik bro.भाई , आपने तो इस अपडेट के माध्यम से निःशब्द कर दिया यार....
Kyunki who gussa se paagal ho gayi hey, pata hey na paagal kuch bhi kar sakta heyWtf? Haha~
Vivek ko dekh gussa aaega toh Karunesh ka gala kaahe udaegi?
Thank you dude!!Well update 31 bahut hi majedar tha pahele drishya mein jahan thoda sa dukh aur nirasha dikhi veer apne maa ko dekh ke bhi unhe bata nahi paya ki woh inka beta hai wagera wagera(emotional baatein) wahin last wala scene shocking tha jahan veer ka bada bhai vivek apni biwi Raagni ko manane ke liye apne maa baap ko lekar aaya hai aur wahin usko veer mil jaata hai toh family drama hona next update ke shuruat mein lajmi hai (mujhe lagta hai kahin vivek veer aur Raagini ke baarr mein kuch anaap sanap na bak de) aur update ke bich mein hamko joh veer aur suman ka sex scene ka tadka dekhne ko mila woh wakayi jabardast tha...aur jin logon ne veer ko iss update mein rote gid gidaate hue dekhna chahate the unhe thoda baat batata hun bhai scene shifting bhi koi cheeze hoti hai thoda sabar rakho immotional momment bhi aayenge jahan aap ji bhar ke(balti bhar ke) rona (note: mere comments koi seriously nahi lena its just for fun and i hope is baar bhi shayad mein sahi naam liya ho Werewolf bhaiya )