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Wdym?Are you sure about that Juhi and Pihu are safe?
Wo RIP... Rest in peace waala RIP nahi hai bhai. Kisi cheez ke fattne ke sound ko bhi RIP likh ke dikhaya jaata hai. Yaha Veer ki shirt blazer ke andar fati thi toh ye uske liye onomatopoeia waala sound tha.Werewolf bhai I have one Question why you used RIP in between?
Aura vision ne andhere me bhi Disembowler ko dekh liya. Humle se bachne ke liye Veer ne ek jhatke me neeche zameen par ek zung lage pipe ko perr se tatolte hue uchkaya aur sahi samay par-
I wonder if Pari was not with Veer ,what were the scenes there . Renshu Ava Erica in sab ke system ne Ye baat ko maana hai ki Veer has a great system.[On time...! Phew!]
I feel thatAur, Disembowler ko ek haath se uska perr pakad ke thaame woh zorr se apni jagah par ghooma.
*BAM* BAM* BAM*
It was the moment when i feel it will be very tough for Veer afterwards but all thanks to PariVeer deewar se bhida, magar use samay na mila aur staff ki blade jaa ke seedhe uske dil ko cheer gayi.
Juhi ki ye masoom maang ufffff....Juhi : M-Maamu... *sniff* Gh-Ghal jaana hai. *sniff*
I wonder what system Disembowler was having there that he has planned through every moment how he will handle Veer.Agar, Veer ki strength 160 ke zara si bhi neeche hoti, toh sirf khichaav se uski baahein uske shareer se alag ho jaati. Kintu, aisa nahi hua.
Iska matlab sirf ek hi tha.
Veer ki strength — 160 ke upar thi.
My heart melts down here, literally i skipped a beatJuhi : P-Papa!?
-Par... Aap karte ho na? Mumma bhi aapko karti hai... To... To ye ring aapke
Sukoon ka naam suna hai !...... ye mila dil ko asli sukoon its like putting a soaked cloth on the forehead during 102° fever.Juhi : Ahn!! P-Papa?? *sniff* Papa?
In the end ,jaisa in writer mahashay ki purani aadat hai ek cliffhanger deke jaana taaki hum bhole bhale readers new update ki yaad mein tadapte rahe...Mission Failed.]
[Due to the host's partial completion of the mission, all the three penalties of the mission won't be applied.]
[Due to the failure of not killing the Disembowler, one penalty will be applied to the host.]
[Mission penalty : Loss of loved ones.]
Yeah High chances.....you are right.Wdym?They r safe... Veer saved them... Didn't he? Loss of loved ones me zaroor hospital me koi family ka guzra h...
Noooo... Are pehle mission Disembowler ki mystery saamne laane ka tha na...Yeah High chances.....you are right.
But Werewolf bharose ke layak nahi hai. Gaali khane ka mann hua uska to kya pata Juhi yaa Pihu ko nipta de.
Why would System connecting Disembowler mission with Yarnia scene. System ne Yarnia ko lekar koi alert jabki Veer ko diya nahi hai. System ko koi mission kuch Yarnia ko lekar bhi dena chahiye tha.![]()
I noticed that while reading and i appreciate your skillset of such detailing . In my mind Juhi's scream frequency rises up and down as your words.Author's Note:
If you have already read the update. I would like to share just a minor detail. Although, aisi bahut si minor details hoti hai updates me jo unnoticed chali jaati hai. Readers utna deep jaate nahi hai, unka major focus plotline aur action par hota hai.
Toh bahut si subtle details miss ho jaati hai. Pay attention to the Juhi's screams everytime she cried for her 'mumma'
You'll notice that each 'mumma' has different number of 'A's in it. This shows the frequency or the intensity of her cries. Each time she screamed with a different intensity and that's how her voice travelled through the network of pipes, ultimately which came out of different gaps each time.
Just wanted to share with you. I knew it would go unnoticed.![]()