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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

    Votes: 1,369 83.2%
  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 27 1.6%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 214 13.0%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 36 2.2%

  • Total voters
    1,646

Werewolf

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Grandmaster1

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Werewolf bhai I have one Question why you used RIP in between?
 
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Werewolf

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Werewolf bhai I have one Question why you used RIP in between?
Wo RIP... Rest in peace waala RIP nahi hai bhai. Kisi cheez ke fattne ke sound ko bhi RIP likh ke dikhaya jaata hai. Yaha Veer ki shirt blazer ke andar fati thi toh ye uske liye onomatopoeia waala sound tha.

Onomatopoeia me hum sounds ko shabdo ki tarah dikhaate hai. Jaise Thud, crack, whoosh...

Waise hi *Rip*

Maane ki kisi cheez ka fatna. :declare:

Jab bhi * ke beech me shabd rahe samajh jaana woh kisi sound effect ke liye istemal kiya gaya hai.
 

Gaurav1969

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Aura vision ne andhere me bhi Disembowler ko dekh liya. Humle se bachne ke liye Veer ne ek jhatke me neeche zameen par ek zung lage pipe ko perr se tatolte hue uchkaya aur sahi samay par-
[On time...! Phew!]
I wonder if Pari was not with Veer ,what were the scenes there . Renshu Ava Erica in sab ke system ne Ye baat ko maana hai ki Veer has a great system.
Aur, Disembowler ko ek haath se uska perr pakad ke thaame woh zorr se apni jagah par ghooma.

*BAM* BAM* BAM*
I feel that🤣 ,when i was kid played the same in pair with friends and intentionally leaves the hand when we were rotating at peak torques.:lol1:
Veer deewar se bhida, magar use samay na mila aur staff ki blade jaa ke seedhe uske dil ko cheer gayi.
It was the moment when i feel it will be very tough for Veer afterwards but all thanks to Pari :thanx:.
Juhi : M-Maamu... *sniff* Gh-Ghal jaana hai. *sniff*
Juhi ki ye masoom maang ufffff....
Agar, Veer ki strength 160 ke zara si bhi neeche hoti, toh sirf khichaav se uski baahein uske shareer se alag ho jaati. Kintu, aisa nahi hua.

Iska matlab sirf ek hi tha.

Veer ki strength — 160 ke upar thi.
I wonder what system Disembowler was having there that he has planned through every moment how he will handle Veer.
Veer chain se aazad hone ki sukoon mana raha tha par disembowler uske strength ko calculate kar raha tha😨.

Juhi : P-Papa!?
My heart melts down here, literally i skipped a beat 💓 🤧. Juhi calling Veer "Papa" 🥹.
I loved this update more than any others .
Just like Veer i can't express my feelings about it.

-Par... Aap karte ho na? Mumma bhi aapko karti hai... To... To ye ring aapke
Juhi : Ahn!! P-Papa?? *sniff* Papa?
Sukoon ka naam suna hai !...... ye mila dil ko asli sukoon its like putting a soaked cloth on the forehead during 102° fever.
Juhi is expanding her area in my heart day by day. 🥰☺️

Mission Failed.]

[Due to the host's partial completion of the mission, all the three penalties of the mission won't be applied.]

[Due to the failure of not killing the Disembowler, one penalty will be applied to the host.]

[Mission penalty : Loss of loved ones.]
In the end ,jaisa in writer mahashay ki purani aadat hai ek cliffhanger deke jaana taaki hum bhole bhale readers new update ki yaad mein tadapte rahe...
Mission partially complete hua, Veer lair se bahar aa gya kya Juhi aur Pihu dono uske sath hai ya koi andar reh gyi🥶. I will not be thinking about anything . But
Werewolf DO NOT TOUCH JUHI 👿
Itne tagde cliffhanger ke bavjood mera dil abhi tak usi moment ko feel kar raha hai jab Veer ko usne Papa bola tha . Bas ab koi naya chutiyapa mat kar dena .


Update was too good and yumm bro ,a bow down to your brainstorming and plotting ♥️. Enjoyed every bit Fights ,Experiment ideas, Emotional scenes, Breathtaking moments, Better use of calmness and things around, BP rising moments and Last but mine heartmelting moments🥰❤️.
Waiting to see the next
 

Samar_Singh

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Wdym? 🙄🙄🙄 They r safe... Veer saved them... Didn't he? Loss of loved ones me zaroor hospital me koi family ka guzra h...
Yeah High chances.....you are right.
But Werewolf bharose ke layak nahi hai. Gaali khane ka mann hua uska to kya pata Juhi yaa Pihu ko nipta de.

Why would System connecting Disembowler mission with Yarnia scene. System ne Yarnia ko lekar koi alert jabki Veer ko diya nahi hai. System ko koi mission kuch Yarnia ko lekar bhi dena chahiye tha.🙄🙄
 

dev61901

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Werewolf sir ji goosebumps la diye me to sone ja raha tha ab nind nahi aa rahi kitna khush ho gaya tha me last tak ate ate ki jo long ki tarah hi Disembowler ko uda diya lekin last me jab padha mission failed and penalty sari khushi tension me badal gayi ki pata nahi ab kya hoga
 

Grandmaster1

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Werewolf bhai is bar update thoda jaldi dena q ki family drame me our jada maza ayenga please es bar update kam se kam samayme dena
 
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Rihanna

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Yeah High chances.....you are right.
But Werewolf bharose ke layak nahi hai. Gaali khane ka mann hua uska to kya pata Juhi yaa Pihu ko nipta de.

Why would System connecting Disembowler mission with Yarnia scene. System ne Yarnia ko lekar koi alert jabki Veer ko diya nahi hai. System ko koi mission kuch Yarnia ko lekar bhi dena chahiye tha.🙄🙄
Noooo... Are pehle mission Disembowler ki mystery saamne laane ka tha na...

Disembowler ne wo lure path use kia tha... Tbhi to veer ko mission mila... Nd mission then update hua... Usko kill krne ka mila...

Aur Yarnia ka mission kyu milta? 🤔 I mean... Yhi to Yarnia ka mission tha na? If Veer would hv completed this Mission properly... No one would hv died... Nd if he would hv gotten a mission for Yarnia... Then how can he remain at both the places at the same time?

Ya to juhi nd pihu ki bali chadhti fir... Ya fir family members ki... 🤔 Everything was tied na... Again... The genuis behind the pen Werewolf
 

Gaurav1969

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Author's Note :writing: :

If you have already read the update. I would like to share just a minor detail. Although, aisi bahut si minor details hoti hai updates me jo unnoticed chali jaati hai. Readers utna deep jaate nahi hai, unka major focus plotline aur action par hota hai.

Toh bahut si subtle details miss ho jaati hai. Pay attention to the Juhi's screams everytime she cried for her 'mumma'

You'll notice that each 'mumma' has different number of 'A's in it. This shows the frequency or the intensity of her cries. Each time she screamed with a different intensity and that's how her voice travelled through the network of pipes, ultimately which came out of different gaps each time.

Just wanted to share with you. I knew it would go unnoticed. :smile2:
I noticed that while reading and i appreciate your skillset of such detailing . In my mind Juhi's scream frequency rises up and down as your words.
Thanks Werewolf for this amazing movie tonight. 💛
 
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