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Late night?Office se fursat hoke ghar jaunga tabhi to likh paunga na. Yaha to possible nahi hai. Night me hi aayega probably.
Update par hi kaam chal raha hai. Ready hote hi post kar dunga.Late night?
12 baje ?Update par hi kaam chal raha hai. Ready hote hi post kar dunga.
Ajay : Accha jii! Jesa aap kahogi bilkul wesa hi hoga.
Pyaar mein andha hone ka nuksaan jhelna pad gya bechare koAur usne ped ke bagal se apna sar aage badhaate hue ped ke peeche dekhne ka prayaas kiya...
Ki tabhi...
"Surprise motherfucka..."
*POW*
Bas kuchh hi derr me. Almost completed.12 baje ?
Thanks for your kind perusal and reply, dear broUpdate par hi kaam chal raha hai. Ready hote hi post kar dunga.
eagerly waiting.Bas kuchh hi derr me. Almost completed.
The thing i like in your writing style is "keeping the readers in suspense" 4 baar jikra hua hoga Aatish ka isse pehle par reveal nahi hone diya ki kaun hai ye aadmi...Aadmi : Yadi fir bhi na maane, toh do chaar dose aur dena usko... Tab samajh aa jaega usse ki Aatish Bhau kon hai.
Ranga : Jii Bhau!
Aur Aatish Ranga ko itna bol kamre se baahar neeche ki orr chala gaya
In scenes ko dekh kar man mein yahi aata hai ki Veer ne yuhi maafi dedi parivar ke logo ko unhe is maafi ki keemat aur chukani chahiye....Shweta : Tu bhul jaa beti inn sab baato ko. Wo toh jaa chuka hai ab. Ab jaha bhi wo ho, apna jeevan jese usse jeena hai jee lega. Par hume hamaare baare me sochna hoga. Kyuki tum aur mein, bas hum dono hi hai ek dusre ke liye.
Tab Shweta ke andar Veer ke liye utna prem nahi tha. She used to see him like a nobody. Uski utni galti nahi hai. Sabka apna apna perspective hota hai. Hum khud apne jeevan me raah chalte logo ko dekh judge kahi na kahi judge karte hi hai. To ye toh Veer tha... Ghar ka sadasya. Jise kuchh nahi aata tha. Ponga ekdum. Uss case me Shweta ne fir bhi uske saath itna kroor vyavhaar nahi rakha. She just sidelined him. She didn't try to harm him. Never.In scenes ko dekh kar man mein yahi aata hai ki Veer ne yuhi maafi dedi parivar ke logo ko unhe is maafi ki keemat aur chukani chahiye....
Dhanyavad.The thing i like in your writing style is "keeping the readers in suspense" 4 baar jikra hua hoga Aatish ka isse pehle par reveal nahi hone diya ki kaun hai ye aadmi...
Same things to common people and family members..... late revealing or say revealing at the scenes they are for are your plus points....