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Reading the story again feels awesome... kaha Veer ka koi apna nahi tha siwaye uske Dadaji ke is update mein aur ab current update mein Veer ke dadaji to chale gye par Veer ne bahut se rishton ko kama liya... wese current updates mein 300+ likes jaa rahe hai aur starting mein 150 bhi mushkil se dikh raha hai readers padh ke nikal gye par like karna bhool gyeUpdate - 2 ~ The Family
Ab tak...
Kuch derr pehle hui ghatna uske imaan, uske gaurav, uski izzat ko chhalli kar ke uske dimaag me ghum rahi thi.
Par wo ruka nahi. Yu aasu bahaate hue wo apne ghar ki orr gaadi badhaata raha jo ab bas kuch hi dur tha.
'Badla toh mein lunga. I'll make them pay. Chun chun ke... Ek ek se chun chun ke badla lunga.'
Ab aage...
Mumbai, jisse Mayanagri ke naam se bhi jaana jaata hai, uss sheher me ek boht hi aalishaan bangle me kuch log badi hi serious hoke ek kamre me dheemi awaaz me baatein kar rahe the.
"Aaj kese bhi karke uska patta saaf kar do. Samjhe?" Ek ladke ne bhaari awaaz me kaha.
Uske peeche khade ek naujavaan ladke ne uski orr dekha aur haa me gardan hilaayi, "Tension mat lo Bhaiya. Aaj uska patta saaf ho jaega. Mene bada hi tagda plan banaya hai hahaha!"
"Kesa plan?"
"Bhaiya! Aap bas dekhte jao. Aaj Dada jii ke decision lete samay hi sab kuch hoega. Mein show grand rakhna chaahta hu hahaha!"
"Shabaash chote! Bas dhyaan rahe koi gadbad na ho. Aur yadi hoye bhi toh tumhara naam bilkul bhi saamne na aaye. Samjhe?"
"Haa Vivek Bhaiya! Don't worry! Ye Pranjal jo bhi karta hai ekdum solid karta hai." Pranjal ne apni chhaati thap thapaate hue kaha.
Vivek : Good!
Muskuraate hue Vivek, Pranjal ka bada bhai uske kamre se nikal gaya.
Abhi wo nikla hi tha ki darwaaze ke baahar hi uski nayi naveli patni, Ragini usse dekhte hi bol padi. "Arre! Tum yaha ho? Chalo jaldi! Kuch derr me Dada jii apna decision dene waale hai. Sabhi hall me ikkhatta ho rahe hai."
Ragini ek boht hi gazab ki stree thi. Uska jism itna perfect tha maano bhagwaan ne badi hi fursat se usse banaaya tha. 27 saal ki Ragini ke stan kasse hue the aur saree me toh wo qayamat hi dhaa deti thi.
Uska gora rang, patle hontho me halki gulaabi lipstick, kamar tak latakte khule kaale baal jo neeche se curled the, uske husn par chaar chaand laga dete the. Ragini ka baap TVS ke 2 showrooms ka maalik tha. Paiso ki toh koi kami hi nahi thi uske paas. Aur Vivek ko aisi patni mili thi, uski kismat ke akhir kya kehne the.
Par Vivek bhi koi aera gerra nahi tha. Jab aisi patni usse mili ho toh andaaza lagaana mushqil nahi tha ki Vivek ka khud ka parivaar kitna ameer tha.
Ragini ki baat sunn Vivek ne kamre me jhaanka.
Vivek (chillaate hue) : Chote! Chal baahar jaldi.
Pranjal : Bhaiya! Aap jao mujhe toh important kaam hai. Haha!
Ragini prashn bhari nazro se Vivek ko dekhi, "Pranjal ko kya kaam bhala iss waqt!?"
Vivek : Tum chalo! Aaj toh behatreen show hone waala hai. Hahaha!
Aur hasste hue Vivek Ragini ko leke waha se chala gaya.
Par Ragini ki toh samajh me hi naa aaya ki akhir chal kya raha tha. Ab jab uske pati ne kaha tha kuch badhiya hone waala hai toh Ragini keval intezaar hi kar sakti thi.
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Veer ne apne ghar pohuch kar apni scooty se chaavi ghumaate hue gaadi band kari aur usse jeb me rakhte hue wo gaadi se utra.
Wo apne ghar pohuch chuka tha. Keval naam ke liye ghar tha. Ek ghar me ek aadmi khushiya paata hai, apno ka pyaar paata hai, ghar me ekta rehti hai par uske ghar ka ekdum alag hi scene tha.
Jaha aadmi apne ghar pohuch kar sukoon paata hai aur khush hota hai, Veer iss waqt andar jaane se hi katra raha tha aur darr bhi raha tha.
Shaam ke 7:30 baj chuke the. Aur wo paani se bheega, halke khoon se sana hua yaha khada hua tha. Usne apni scooty ke mirror me apni shaqal dekhi toh paaya uski ek aankh poori neel pad chuki thi. Itni buri tarah dhoya tha usse Ajay aur uske saathiyo ne.
"Aaarghhhh!" Karaahte hue usne apna ek haath apni pasli par ferra.
Wo apne qadam aage badhaate hue darwaaze ki orr badha. Uska ghar jo ki nark se kam nahi tha. Wo itna aalishaan tha ki jisse log dekhne ke baad tareefo ke pul baandhne lagte the.
Par unhe kya pata tha ki uss bunglow me andar rehne waale log kese the.
Veer abhi badh ke darwaaze par aaya hi tha ki itne me uske kaano me kisi ki awaaz padi.
"Arre!? Ye mein kya dekh raha hu? Tau jii ka eklauta beta iss haal me? Aur wo bhi aaj apne college ke second year ke pehle din?"
Awaaz sunte hi Veer ke perr wahi tham gaye. Saamne nazar daudaayi toh dekha ki uske chacha ka chota beta, Pranjal saamne khada hua tha.
Jii haa! Wo bungalow Veer ka hi tha.
Pranjal forun aage badh usse sahaara dene ke liye hua toh Veer ne uska haath gusse me jhatak diya aur apne perro par hi khada raha.
Pranjal : Arre!? Arre!? Mein toh bas tumhari madad kar raha tha chote bhai! Tumhari ye haalat kisne kii? Naam batao tum khaali, dekhna tumhara Bhai kya haal karega uss shaks ka.
Par Veer jaanta tha. Jo kuch bhi iss waqt Pranjal ke muh se nikal raha tha, jhooth ke alaawa wo aur kuch nahi ho sakta tha.
Uske jaisa kapti aur sayaana insaan shayad hi Veer ne apni poori life me kabhi dekha hoga.
Pranjal : Chote bhai! Dada jii ka janmdin hai aaj. Gussa thook do bhai. Chalo accha meri madad karwa do.
Par Veer toh jese kuch sunn'na hi nahi chaahta tha. Wo andar jaane laga ki ek baar fir Pranjal ne uska kandha thaam liya.
Pranjal : Bhai! Aaj Dada jii apna decision sunaane waale hai. Unhe kitna accha lagega yadi tum unhe apne haatho se unke janmdin par gift doge. Hai na? Apna gussa apne upar haavi hone mat do chote bhai! Chalo! Andar tumhara sab intezaar kar rahe hai.
Veer bhale hi gusse me tha, par wo apne Dada jii ki badi hi izzat karta tha. Aur unhe maanta bhi tha. Aaj uske Dada jii ka janmdin tha aur usne pehle se hi apne Dada jii ke liye ek gift taiyaar kar ke apne kamre me rakha hua tha. Jese tese Veer ne apna gussa nigla.
Veer : Aap chalo! Mein apne kamre se Dada jii ke liye gift leke aata hu.
Pranjal : Arre kya keh rahe ho Bhai? Dada jii aur baaki sab pehle se hi tumhara intezaar kar rahe hai aur aise me tum unhe aur intezaar karwaoge? Tum apni haalat ke baare me mat socho. Hum sab toh tumhaare apne hi hai hai na? Fir humaare saamne kesi jhijhak? Aao...
Aur Pranjal usse kheechte hue bangle ke andar le gaya. Chaahte hue bhi Veer uska virodh na kar paaya.
Andar ghuste hi ek mini hall tha jaha baahari vyaktiyo ko baithaaya jaata tha. Aur khaas logo ko hi uske andar waale Bade hall me entry allowed thi.
Abhi Pranjal aur Veer dono hi mini hall me the jaha ek khubsoorat sa flower vase maujood tha. Uske ird gird ek laal ribbon lipta hua tha aur Happy Birthday ka ek tag bhi laga hua tha.
Jab Veer ki nazar uspe padi toh woh usse dekhte hi chaunk gaya. Jo ki laazmi tha. Wo flower vase itna mehnga aur itna sundar prateet ho raha tha ki koi bhi usse ek baar dekhne ke baad dubaara zaroor dekhta.
Pranjal (khush hote hue) : Yahi hai wo gift chote bhai. Tau jii yaani ki tumhaare Dad ne khud isse mangwaaya hai. Aur yadi tum Dada jii ko apne haatho se ye gift doge toh woh kitna khush ho jaenge nahi!?
Par Veer jaanta tha ki ye Pranjal jo iss waqt bhed jesa maasoom prateet ho raha tha wo asal me bhed nahi balki bhed ke vesh me ek bhediya tha.
Veer ne naa chaahte hue bhi haa me sar hilaaya aur vase uthaake wo dono hi andar bade hall me pravesh kiye.
Bada hall itna bada tha aur lights se itna jagmaga raha tha ki dekhne waale dekhte hi reh jae. Upar na jaane kitna mehnga ek jhumar latka hua tha jisse dekh ke bas muh se tareef nikalti.
Andar ek single seat luxury waale sofe par Veer ke Dada jii baithe hue the. Aaj unka 80th Birthday tha. Aur unke agal bagal waale sofe par unke do bete baithe hue tha. Bada beta jiska naam tha Brijesh. Aur chota beta jiska naam tha Karunesh.
Karunesh : Papa jii aapko party rakh leni chahiye thi.
Manorath : Hmph! Kabhi bhi ye galti mat karna. Ye sab party jo tum log karte ho na issi ke kaaran tumhaare dushman badhte hai. Jitni raeesi logo ko dikhaoge, utne hi galat iraade logo ke mann me umadte hai.
Veer ke Dada jii ne hidaayat dete hue kaha.
Idhar andar jese hi Veer aur Pranjal aae, sabhi ki nazre un dono par jaa tiki.
Veer ke pita, Brijesh ne jese hi apne ladke ki haalat dekhi toh uski aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi. Usne sofe ke hatte ko itni zorr se bheencha maano usse ukhaad ke hi fek dega.
Kya Brijesh ka ye gussa apne bete ko iss haalat me dekh ke uska ye haal karne waale ke upar tha?
Bilkul bhi nahi!
Balki Brijesh iss waqt apne bete par gussa tha. Yadi abhi koi aur maujood na hota toh usne khade hoke pehle hi 2-4 jhaapad Veer ko raseed diye hote.
Uska beta wo bhi aise haal me? Veer ka ye roop maano Brijesh ki image par ek chaata tha. Na jaane uske baaki ghar waale kya soch rahe honge ab aise me.
Yahi sochke usse itna gussa aa raha tha par uske pita ka aaj janmdin tha aur wo kuch bhi bakheda khada karna nahi chaahta tha.
Nakli smile dete hue usne apne bete Veer ko dekha.
Brijesh : Aa gaye!? Kaha reh gaye the itni derr tak? Aur ye kya haalat bana rakhi hai apni? Kis se maar kha ke aa rahe ho?
Veer ki maano ye sawaal sunte hi sitti pitti gul ho gayi. Apne Dad ki bhaari bharkam awaaz sunte hi uske andar ka darr jaag utha. Uske haanth kaanpne lage the.
Iske pehle wo kuch jawaab de paata, bagal me khade Pranjal ne tapaak se bola.
Pranjal : Tau jii! Yahi baat mene Veer se baahar abhi puchi thi. Toh Veer kehne laga ki aaj usse ek senior ladki pasand aa gayi thi. Aur Veer uss ladki ko kahi le jaana chaahta tha par ladki ke premi ne virodh kia aur Veer ko ye bilkul bhi pasand na aaya aur wo dono ek dusre se jaa lade. Ye ussi ka parinaam hai Tau jii.
Pranjal ki baat sunte hi Veer ko ek zorrdaar jhatka laga. Usne apni phati aankho se palat ke Pranjal ko ghura toh paaya ki Pranjal bada hi masoom sa chehra banae waha khada hua tha, jese kuch hua hi na ho.
Pranjal : Mene Veer ko samjhaya bhi ki aise maar peet karna bilkul bhi acchi baat nahi hai. Veer ko toh fir bhi kam chot aayi hai. Na jaane Veer ne uss ladke ko kitni buri tarah peeta hoga.
Aisi vaani boliye, mann ka aapa khoye...
Auran ko sheetal kare, aaphu sheetal hoye...
Par Kabir ki ye panktiya iss waqt vyarth thi.
Pranjal ne jo madhur vaani boli thi wo Veer ko sheetal karna toh dur usse itna aag babula kar rahi thi ki yadi uski bas chalti toh wo issi samay Pranjal par toot padta.
Pranjal ki image ghar me ek boht hi sanskaari ladke ki thi, par wo asal me kesa tha ye baat sabhi nahi jaante the.
Brijesh (gusse me) : Tumhari itni himmat Veer!
Manorath : Shaant ho jao! Halla nahi!
Brijesh : Par Papa jii...
Manorath : Ssssshhhhhh!!!
Brijesh : Hmph!
Manorath : Veer! Tumhe pata hai kya kiya hai tumne?
Veer : Nahi! Dada jii... Wo mein...
Manorath : Jo hua so hua. Ab iski charcha koi nahi karega.
Aur sab shaant ho gaye.
Veer ne jab Hall me maujood sabhi logo par nazre firaayi.
Toh uski nazar apne Dada jii ke daayi orr rakhe sofe par gayi jaha uske Dad, Brijesh ke bagal se baithi hui uski sauteli Maa (Step-mom), Shweta usse bauhe sikode hue dekh rahi thi.
Fir uski nazar Shweta ke bagal se baithi hui Shweta ki ekmaatr eklauti beti, Bhumika par gayi. Jo usse dekhte hi apna muh ferr lii.
Jab Veer ne Dada jii ke baayi orr rakhe sofe par nazar daudaayi toh dekha ki uske chacha Karunesh aur unki patni Sumitra yaani ki uski chachi dono hi nazre gadaaye usse hi ghur rahe the.
Sumitra usse bauhe sikode uske chehre ko hi dekh rahi thi.
Unki hi bagal se uske chacha ke bade bete Vivek aur uski patni Ragini bhi baithe hue the. Wo dono bhi usse hi ghur rahe the.
Aur jab Veer ne stairs par nazre daudayi toh dekha ki uske chacha Karunesh ki badi beti Arohi aur choti beti Kavya dono hi saath me cake lete hue neeche aa rahi thi.
Wo dono hi neeche aayi aur cake ko saamne rakhi kaanch ki ek table par rakha aur side wahi sofe par baith gayi.
Jaha Arohi ne usse ek baar dekh ke apni nazre ferr lii, wahi dusri orr Kavya usse aisi haalat me dekh apni bauhe sikode usse badi hi hamdardi se dekh rahi thi par boli kuch nahi.
Kaha ek taraf uske parivaar waale jo naye kapde pehne, sajke baithe hue tha aur kaha wo jo pitne ke baad ekdum geela aur khoon ke nishaan aur ghaavo se bharpoor.
Manorath : Doctor ko dikhwa ke apni dawa karwana mat bhulna.
Veer : J... Jiii
Brijesh (zorr se) : Ab khade khade intezaar kya kar rahe ho? Aage badho aur apne Dada jii ko tohfa do.
Manorath : Aao Veer!
Aur apne Dada jii ki sahuliyat se Veer aage badhte hue apne Dada jii ko gift dene jaane laga.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi dosto!
Dhanyavaad!
Har story me shuru me likes kam hi hote hai. Likes ka concept kisne shuru kiya? Maine.Reading the story again feels awesome... kaha Veer ka koi apna nahi tha siwaye uske Dadaji ke is update mein aur ab current update mein Veer ke dadaji to chale gye par Veer ne bahut se rishton ko kama liya... wese current updates mein 300+ likes jaa rahe hai aur starting mein 150 bhi mushkil se dikh raha hai readers padh ke nikal gye par like karna bhool gye![]()
Ab To restart kiya hai .....updates ki kami mujhe na khalne wali aisa karo aap update kal dedenaHar story me shuru me likes kam hi hote hai. Likes ka concept kisne shuru kiya? Maine.Warna pehle mein khud likes nahi maangta tha. Uske bawajood utne hai.
Love at first sight pe believe rakhne wali Shreya kaha aaj usi Veer ko chahne lagi hai.... Samay prabal hai sabkuch badal kar rakh deta hai... wese Pari ki wo audacity to say "Nahi Degi"Update - 6 ~ A New Home
Ab tak...
[Ab tumhara safar shuru ho chuka hai. Ya toh tum yahi ke yahi reh jaoge ya meri madad paa ke ek Badshaah banoge. Toh bolo? Kesa jeevan chahiye? Ek aam aadmi ki tarah jesa ki tum abhi jee rahe the ya fir ek Badshaah ka?]
Sawaal sunn ke Veer ne socha hi nahi. Usse pata tha usse kya jawaab dena hai.
Veer (smiles) : Ek Baadshah!!!!
Ab aage...
Kaafi din yu guzar chuke the. Aur aaj Veer ko hospital se leave milne waali thi. Aisa ek bhi din nahi tha jis din Nidhi usse dekhne na aayi ho. Aur aisa ek bhi din nahi tha jis din galti se bhi uske gharwalo me se koi usse dekhne aaya ho.
Kitni ajeeb baat thi.
Par thi toh sacchi baat.
Ghar me asal me Brijesh ne kuch nahi bataya tha. Veer ke accident ki baat keval Brijesh aur uski sauteli maa Shweta ko hi pata thi.
Jab Manorath ne Veer ke baare me dubaara pucha toh Brijesh ne jhuth bol ye keh diya ki Veer apne dost ke ghar me thehra hua hai.
Par aisa toh bilkul bhi nahi tha. Kyuki uska koi dost hi nahi tha.
Yaha inn kuch dino me Veer ne System ke baare me badi hi bareeki se jaana.
Usse pata chala ki jese jese wo missions complete karega ya uplabdhiya haasil karega ya izzat kamaega, apna fame badhaega wese wese usse Experience milega.
Aur yahi Experience jab ikhatta hota jaega wese wese hi uske System ka level badhta jaega.
System se usse free me 10 points bhi mile the jo System ne usse uske owner bann'ne ke liye gift ke roop me diye the. Aur Veer ab issi soch me tha ki kis stat me wo points add kare.
'Mein strength me add karta hu. Sahi rahega na?'
[Mein tumhe suggest karungi ki pehle tum apna ye bheja sahi karo. Ahem! Yaani ki apna intelligence badhao.]
'Hmph! Toh fir abhi mein add nahi karna chaahta.'
[Are you sure? Dhyaan rahe! Tum jo bhi changes karoge apne stats me wo raat bhar lenge change hone me. Matlab yadi tum apni strength abhi badhaate ho toh wo abhi nahi badhegi. Tumhe uska result agle din dekhne ko milega.]
'I see!! Hmm! Toh ek kaam karo. 7 points meri strength me daalo. 2 mere intelligence me aur 1 mere appearance me.'
[Are you sure!?]
'Haan!'
[Well okay!]
Aur tabhi ek ghanti baji...
*Ding*
[7 points have been added to strength.
2 points have been added to intelligence.
1 point has been added to appearance.]
Aur uske baad hi Veer ke stats badal chuke the. Par uska effect agli subah se usse dekhne ko milne wala tha.
Stats :
Strength - 10/100
Intelligence - 6/100
Agility - 3/100
Endurance - 7/100
Appearance - 7/100
'Good!! Wese... System!?'
[Hmm!??]
'Tumne kaha tha ki tumne meri jaan bachaayi? Kya tum ek marre hue vyakti ko bhi zinda kar sakti ho?!'
[Nahi! Mene sirf apni urja ka istemaal kiya tha. Yahi kaaran hai ki mein ek din tak shut down thi. Aur tum khud bhi behosh the isliye tumhe pata nahi chala.]
'Wow! Toh aise me toh tum mujhe harr waqt khatro se bacha sakti ho hai na?'
[Bilkul bhi nahi! Aisa sochna bhi mat. Wo urja keval ek baar hi istemaal karne ke liye praapt thi mujhe.]
'Ohh mujhe aur batao na iss baare me.'
[Pehle mera level badhao. Abhi tumhe inn baato ko jaan'ne ka haq nahi hai.]
'Okay!'
[Aur haa! Mujhse zyaada baatein mat kiya karo. Jab zaroori ho keval tabhi...]
'Kyu?'
[Kyuki bolte waqt mujhe energy chaahiye. Aur ye energy mein tumhaare hi shareer se leti hu.]
'Fuck!!! Aur tum mujhe ye ab bata rahi ho!? Tabhi mein sochu mujhe itni thakaan kyu mehsoos hoti thi.'
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Ab shaam ka time ho chuka tha aur Veer ko hospital se discharge kar diya gaya tha.
Abhi wo wahi ek bench par baitha hua tha ki Nidhi saare kaagzi kaam karte hue uske paas aayi aur bagal se baith gayi.
Nidhi
Nidhi : Veer!? Saari formalities ho chuki hai. Ab tumhe hospital se chhutkaara mila.
Nidhi ne muskuraate hue kaha.
Veer : Thank you Ma'am! Mein zindagi bhar aapka abhaari rahunga.
Nidhi : Ye tum kesi baatein kar rahe ho Veer? Ek teacher hone ke naate ye toh meri duty hai ki mein apne student ki help karu.
Veer : Fir bhi Ma'am! Aaj kal toh ghar ke apne saath nahi dete aur aapne sirf meri teacher hone ke naate itna kiya. Uske liye thanks toh banta hi hai na?
Iss baar Veer ne smile karte hue kaha. Par uski smile dekh ek baar fir Nidhi ki bauhe sikudi aur usse andar hi andar ek ajeeb sa dard hua.
Nidhi : Ab... Ab tum kaha jaoge Veer? Tumhare gharwale toh...
Veer : Hmm? Mujhe nahi pata Ma'am. Dekhta hu. Kuch na kuch kar hi lunga.
Nidhi : Nahi! Par aise kaha jaoge tum? Tumhe abhi bhi rest ki zaroorat hai. Kaha rahoge? Kya khaoge? Aur college ka kya?
Veer : College? Mujhe kuch nahi pata Ma'am. Jo bhi hoega, dekha jaega.
Wo itna keh ke waha se utha hi tha ki Nidhi ne uska haath thaam liya.
Nidhi : Nahi! Mein tumhe aise jaane nahi de sakti. Bilkul bhi nahi! Kaha jaoge aur tum? Kaha bhatkoge aisi haalat me? Tum... Tum mere saath chalo.
Veer (shocked) : Huh?
Nidhi : Haa! Aaj se... Aaj se tum mere saath rahoge.
Kitni hi asaani se keh dii Nidhi ne ye baat.
Aur kitni hi asaani se Brijesh ne wo baat kahi thi ~ "Nikal jao iss ghar se."
Dono me kitna antar tha.
Aur kismat ka khel toh dekho. Ki uske ghar se usse yu nikaal diya gaya tha aur aaj Nidhi jo ki sirf uski teacher thi wo yu usse apne ghar le jaane taiyaar thi.
Aur yahi dekh ke Veer ki aankho me aasu aa gaye. Usne Nidhi ka status dekha tha. Wo jaanta tha ki Nidhi khud kitna kasht bhara jeevan vyateet kar rahi thi.
Par iske bawajood usne Veer ko apne ghar par rehne ke liye keh diya.
Veer (namm aankho se) : Nahi! Ma'am! Ye aap... Ye aap kya keh rahi ho? Mein aapko pehle hi boht kasht de chuka hu, ab aur mujhe mushqil me mat daaliye ma'am.
Nidhi : Chup raho ekdum! Aur chalo mere saath.
Veer : Ma'am...
Nidhi : Mene kaha na chup raho. Aaj se tum mere saath hi rahoge. Aur aage ek shabd nahi kahoge tum.
Usne apna haath Veer ke hontho par rakh diya. Nidhi ke komal haatho ka sparsh apne hontho pe paate hi Veer wahi khada ka khada reh gaya. Jab Nidhi ko bhi dhyaan aaya ki usne ekdum se kya kiya usne forun hi apna haath peeche le liya aur uska haath pakad ke usse le jaane lagi.
Veer ke laakho manaane ke baad bhi Nidhi ne uski ek na suni aur usse laake apni scooty par peeche baitha diya.
Nidhi : Acche se pakad ke baithna okay?
Uske bolte hi Veer ke haath Nidhi ki patli kamar pe lipat gaye. Ek pal ke liye toh Nidhi ko bhi ek jhatka sa laga jese hi Veer ke haath uski kamar par bandhe.
Wo iss waqt navy blue saree aur kaala blouse pehni hui thi. Aur peeche se uske aadhe nagn kandhe saaf nazar aa rahe the jo harr pal Veer ko madhosh kar rahe the. Wo khule baal aur wo nasheeli aankhein jo kisi bhi waqt aadmi ko apna deewana bana de.
Thandi hawao se dono ka shareer thanda zaroor ho raha tha par saath hi saath ek ajeeb sii garmi bhi thi jo dono ke hi shareer me iss waqt kahi dabi hui thi.
'Check' Veer ne mann me Nidhi ko peeche se hi dekhte hue kaha toh forun hi Nidhi ke sar ke upar wahi window firse khul gayi.
Sab kuch same hi tha pehle ki tarah siwae ek cheez ke. Aur wo thi...
[Favourability - 30]
Nidhi ki favourability Veer ke prati 10 points se badh gayi thi. Aur kyu na badhti? Wo roz Veer se milne shaam ke waqt aaya karti thi. Roz roz yadi aap kisi se bhi baat karo, aapko thoda boht interest unme aa hi jaata hai. Aisa hi haal kuch Nidhi ka bhi tha.
Veer uska student tha aur iss se pehle kabhi bhi Nidhi ne aise apne kisi bhi student se mulaqaat nahi ki thi. Na hi itni baatein kari thi. Aur toh aur wo ab Veer ko apne ghar le jaa rahi thi. Toh bhala dono ke beech friendship gehri kese nahi hoti?
Veer ke mann me Nidhi ke prati jo respect thi wo ab kayi guna badh chuki thi.
Kitni hi asaani se usne Veer ko apne ghar rehne ko keh diya. Veer jaanta tha ki wo akeli apni beti ke saath rent se rehti hai uske bawajood Nidhi ne uspar iss hadd tak bharosa kar liya ki wo uske saath reh le. Usne ek baar bhi nahi socha ki Veer ko apne ghar par rakhna theek hai ya nahi? Usne ye nahi socha ki uske ghar ki owner kese react karegi ye dekh ke?
Aur isliye Veer ki nazro me Nidhi kisi devi se kam nahi thi.
Veer kass ke uski patli kamar ko apne dono haatho se thaame hue tha. Aur Nidhi bhi Veer ke haatho ko bhali bhaati feel kar paa rahi thi. Na chaahte hue bhi uski dhadkan normal se thodi tezz ho chuki thi.
Iss se pehle keval uske husband ne hi usse aise touch kiya tha. Aur usse hue bhi 2 saal ho chuke the. Aur aaj wahi feeling wo mehsoos kar rahi thi.
Par farq ye tha ki uski kamar ko thaamne waala iss waqt uska husband nahi balki uska student Veer tha. Jo ki uss se 10 saal chota tha.
Aur yahi baat Nidhi ko sata rahi thi. Wo nahi chaahti thi ki Veer jo ki uske chote bhai jesa hai uske touch se wo aisa mehsoos kare. Par inn sab ke bawajood uski dhadkane slow hone ka naam hi nahi le rahi thi.
2 saalo se ye pehli baar tha jab usne kisi mard ko itni paas se mehsoos kiya tha. Aur usse nahi pata tha ki ek ajeeb sii anubhooti ne uske andar janm le liya hai.
Kuch hi derr me jab ghar aaya, Nidhi ne usse dhyaan se utarwaaya aur gaadi park kii.
Wo ek flat me rent se rehti thi. Uska flat 2nd floor par tha. Veer ko lift me le jaate hue wo 2nd floor par pohuchi aur jese hi apne flat ke paas aayi toh chaunk gayi.
Flat ka taala khula hua tha. Usne forun hi bell bajaayi toh kuch seconds me hi darwaaza khul gaya.
Aur andar se uski beti jo ki abhi abhi school jaana shuru kii thi wo daudte hue aayi aur uske perro se lipat gayi, "Mummmmmyyyyy... Mummy aa gayi!"
Hairaan hote hue Nidhi soch me pad gayi. Wo toh flat me taala laga ke apni beti Juhi ko bagal waale flat yaani ki pados me chorr ke gayi thi. Fir ye sab kya tha?
Ki tabhi andar se ek aur shaks baahar aaya. Aur usse dekh Nidhi ke chehre pe hairaani, fir confusion, aur fir khushi jhalakne lagi.
Ek sundar sii ladki aage badhte hue uske gale se lag gayi, "Diiii!!"
Nidhi (gale lagte hue) : Shreya tu? Yaha?
Shreya
Shreya : Kyu?! Nahi aa sakti?
Nidhi : Mera matlab wo nahi tha tu jaanti hai.
Shreya : I know! And yes! Mein yaha. Hehe~ Aur ab se mein yahi rahungi aapke saath.
Nidhi (hairaani me) : Kyaaaa?
Shreya : Haa! Itna shocked kyu ho? Aap nahi chaahti kya ki mein yaha rahu?
Nidhi : Nahi! Mein bas ye soch rahi hu ki achanak se tum yaha.
Shreya : Hmm! Kyuki Maa papa ne khud kaha hai.
Veer khade khade itna toh jaan gaya tha ki saamne khadi ladki Nidhi Ma'am ki choti behan thi. Fir bhi usne check karna hi sahi samjha.
Veer (mann me) : Check!
Aur Shreya ke sar ke upar tabhi wahi window khul gayi aur uspe likhe shabd Veer ko nazar aane lage.
[ Name - Shreya
Age - 24
Status - Maiden in search for true love.
Bio - Shreya Nidhi ki sagi choti behan hai. Uska mann padhayi me shuru se hi nahi lagta tha aur isliye aaj wo ek youtuber hai. YouTube pe stream karte hue games khelna aur vlogs banaana usse pasand hai. Abhi zyaada subscribers na hone ke kaaran wo zyaada busy nahi rehti. Apni behan Nidhi se boht zyaada pyaar karti hai. Uska sapna hai ek boht badi youtuber bann'na. Sacche pyaar ki talaash me hai. Par koi mila nahi hai abhi. Shreya love at first sight par believe karti hai.
Favourability - 0
Relationship - Strangers.]
Shreya ke baare me jaante hi Veer thoda hairaan tha. Usse dekh ke koi nahi keh sakta tha ki wo ek youtuber thi.
'Hmm! Interesting... Interesting!'
[Sapne dekhna chorr do master!]
'Huh? Kyu??'
[Nahi degi!]
'What the..!?'
[Master aapne dekha na? Wo love at first sight par believe rakhti hai. Pehli nazar me pyaar. Aur aapko abhi dekh ke koi bhi ladki aapke pyaar me nahi padne waali.]
Iske pehle ki Veer System ko jawaab de paata. Shreya ki awaaz uske kaano me padi.
Shreya : Ye kaun hai?!
Nidhi : Ye hai Veer! Mera student.
Shreya : Ohh! Toh? Tuition shuru kar dii kya aapne?
Nidhi : Nahi! Aaj se ye mere saath hi rahega.
Pal bhar ke liye maano sannaata sa chha gaya aur tabhi Shreya ekdum se chillaayi,
Shreya : Whaaaaaaaatttt??
Nidhi : Haaa!
Shreya : Kya kaha aapne? Ye... Ye aapke saath rahega?
Nidhi : Hmm! Lambi kahani hai.
Shreya : Wait! What? But kyu? Aap aise kese kisi ko bhi apne ghar me...!?
Nidhi : Sshhh! Andar chalo pehle.
Andar le jaate hue Nidhi ne Shreya ko Veer ke baare me sab kuch bata diya, jisse sunn Shreya ka dil bhi thoda paseej gaya aur wo Veer ko rakhne ke liye taiyaar ho gayi. Abhi Nidhi washroom gayi hui thi ki tabhi Shreya uske paas aayi...
Shreya : Dekho! Hum tumhe yaha rakh rahe hai kyuki meri dii badi hi bholi hai aur sabki madad karti hai. Aur hum tumhe yaha rakhne ke liye taiyaar hai. Par meri dii ke baare me koi bhi galat khayaal mat laana samjhe? Hmph! I'm watching you...
Aur wo do ungli Veer ki aankho ki taraf karte hue mud ke apni gaand matkaate hue andar chali gayi.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!
Like zaroor kijiyega yadi pasand aaye. Next update se story me action aur masala aana shuru hoega.
This scene still makes me laugh...Tururu tururu tururu ruru ruru... Aaah! Ye shaam ko late nahaane me maza hi aa jaata hai."
Shreya fridge me se orange juice ki bottle se juice peete peete kitchen me aa gayi... Aur usne jo saamne dekha...
*Phhhhhhuuuuuuuuuuuu*
Saara ka saara juice uske muh se nikal ke neeche zameen par jaa gira. Uski aankhein aisi phaili hui thi maano jese bechaari ne bhoot dekh liya ho. Muh khula ka khula...
From first time calling MAMA to Veer ....to calling PAPA inside lairs....Tabhi Juhi Shreya ki goad se utar Veer ko dekhne lagi aur boli,
"Mama! Ab se aap yahi rahoge?"
Shaam ke 7:30 baj rahe the. Aur Veer Nidhi ke ghar se 5 baje ka nikla hua tha. Ladki chodne ke liye.
Premise serious tha. Disembowler arc was full of thrill, suspense, crime and mystery. Isliye, humor was less.From first time calling MAMA to Veer ....to calling PAPA inside lairs....
werewolf bro it was hilarious .....
Btw this is missing in the recent updates...ye comedy Pari ke sath ya phir situational thoda missing hai jaw long ke fight ke baad se jaha tak mujhe yaad hai...
That's what the quality of a writer hatsoff to your writings and a big thanks for this amazing storyPremise serious tha. Disembowler arc was full of thrill, suspense, crime and mystery. Isliye, humor was less.
Still... You guys did see the scenes of Renshu, Erica and Garofano with some humor. But thanks for reminding. I'll see where I can put in more humor when necessary.![]()
Tum tension mat lo. Mere hote hue Miss ko kuch nahi hoga. Infact, mein unpe ek kharoch tak nahi aane dunga. Kisi ki himmat hai jo Miss ko chhu ke dikha sake?"
Jassi ne apni chhaathi thap thapaate hue kaha.
Par usse kya pata tha ki jis Miss ki wo baat kar raha tha ki koi unhe chhu tak nahi sakta, ussi waqt upar Veer unki Miss ki choot me lund daale dhakke pel raha tha.
Vidambna dekho!
Late night?Office se fursat hoke ghar jaunga tabhi to likh paunga na. Yaha to possible nahi hai. Night me hi aayega probably.