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Yahi to woh chaahti hai honestly. She wants to become an elder sister where her brother can depend on her.Tejal ka veer ko protect karna,that was also a very good scene which shows how much she cares for veer and what she can do for him.
Thanks a lot.Ragini aur veer ka scene bhi bohot hi heartwarming tha,aur finally veer ne accept kar liya hai Ragini ke pyaar ko and the way you described it made the scene way more emotional.
Ava is proving her worth now. Wo din door nahi jab Ava Veer ke dil me completely apni jagah bana legi.Ab jaise lagta hai ki Brijesh aur veer ke bich jo khataas hai voh thodi toh Kam hoti najar aayegi.
Veer and Ava.Kya hi kehne Ava is one of my favourites in the story aur jab bhi vo limelight mai rahegi mujhe toh accha hi lagega.Veer ke ava ko gale lagana se garofano aur Erica jal gayi.
Peeth peechhe mystery abhi bhi chal rahi hai. Reveal hogi dheere-dheere woh bhi.Veer ka renshu ko puchna uski skills ke baare mai aur fir attack karna renshu ke prati ek Shak toh jagata hi hai,par mere hisaab se toh renshu hai toh veer ke hi side but kuch baate X se relateaisi hai joh voh abhi tak chipaye huye hai.
Ab socho mujhe kaise samay milta hoga updates likhne ke liye.Itne deri se review dene ke liye maafi chahta hu par kya karu Samy hi nahi mil raha tha.Eagerly waiting for the next update jo aaj hi aane wala hai![]()
Thanks a lot.Maine aaj tak review likha nahi hai par aaj mai likh raha hu vo bhi aapki is amazing story par .your writing skills are truly exceptional,choti se choti details ka bhi ju dhyan rakhte ho![]()
Thanks man. Keep supporting as usual.Ab aate hai update pe,an excellent one which included some really heartwarming scenes.
Manorath ji ka antim sanskar no doubt is update ka most emotional part tha,It must be really hard for veer kyoki veer bachpan se hi apne dadaji ke saath kaafi close raha hai,is scene mai apne laghbhag har character ke reaction ke baare mai bataya and I appreceiate that
Pata to Nidhi ko bhi chalna hai. Use to Parijaat ghar ki aurton ke baare me kuchh pata hi nahi hai.Nice! Nice!! Very nice!!!
Interesting Ragini aur Nidhi mam ab hamesha Veer ke paas rehne wale hain ye confirm ho gaya hai. Ragini ko toh abhi aur bhi bahut kuchh pata chalna hai.
Arjun se chipka chipki? Kaun Arjun???Kavya aur Tejal ye dono bhi toh Arjun se chipka chipki kar rahe hain. Yadi wo bahar Wale ko accept nahi kar pa rahi hai phir apni Veer ka khud ke sisters ke sath relations ko kaise accept karega, halanki wo khud bhi ghar ki hai.
Of course ye wahi hai. Aur, isme lagna nahi chahiye. Surety honi chahiye ki ye wahi hai.Mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai jaise ye Damian wahi hai jisse Renshu ki fight hui thi.
Aage aao then read karo.Damian ne yadi Rajat se kuchh kaha hai toh definitely kuchh Nidhi aur Veer ke bare mein plan chal raha hoga.
Thanks a lot. Keep supporting.Ava ka mind clear hai wo Veer ke liye kuchh bhi k
ar jayegi.
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Aage ke parts pehle se mat padho bhai.Huh! Ragini jhuth bol kar Nidhi se milne chali gayi, unfortunately I skipped this part because maine ye part pahle padh liya tha jis din update ko like kiya tha.
Yup!Jaise abhi Ragini, Nidhi ko lekar pareshan hai waise hi Tej abhi Suhana ko lekar pareshan hai phir abhi use aur bhi bahut kuchh pata chalna hai Soniya aur Kaera ke bare mein.
Latest update tak aao, Ragini aur favourite ho jaayegi.Previous episode mein Nidhi mam ki tarah Ragini ne mere dil mein apne liye ek new place bana liya,
So ab mere paas Nidhi, Ragini aur Suhana teen favourite characters hain aur future mein badh sakte hain.
You'll see.Interesting, let's see Trisha ko Veer ke bare mein pata chalta hai ya nahi yadi wo Karan ke bare mein jaan chuki ha
i toh???
Thodi gadbad ho gayi lagta hai dhalchandarun bhai se,Arjun unki story ke hero ka naam haiArjun se chipka chipki? Kaun Arjun???![]()
Yahi to mera mission tha.Iss update ke baad to Ragini sabhi readers ke dil mai alag se jagah banayegi ye to confirm haibaki update to kafi touch hua dil ko kyuki mere sath aisa hi similar incident ho chuka hai
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ThanksNice update and her pov was perfect
Exactly. Lekin, ye sirf character ke liye hi nahi story ke foundation aur relationship ko mazboot banaane ke liye bhi zaroori hota hai. Aage chal ke hum aur bhi alag alag characters ke POV dekhenge. Jab samay aayega tab.Awesomeupdate.
Ragini ka pov bhi Janna bahut jaruri tha. Because wo bhi Veer se judi huyi hai aur usne har sambhav madad ki hai veer ki .
Isse Character ko samajhne me madad milti hai .
Nahi! Abhi Post Disembowler arc hi chal raha hai. Ek hafte ka time skip dikhaaya maine ki Veer me achanak se kya badlaav aaye.To Wolfy Brother hum ye maan le ki agle update se Summit Arc Shuru ho raha hai ya uske shuru hone me abhi time hai .
Thanks a lot man.well done again wolfy bhai for ur magical words which makes everyone memorize, feel , emotional.... u know very well how to make people bound ...
Past ko likha uss tarah se gaya ki wo boriyat waala feel nahi hua. Aur, yahi mein chaahta tha. Isliye, first person perspective ko chuna yaha par past ke liye. I'm glad people liked it. Aage chal ke various other characters ke bhi POVs aayenge.any ways u said before posting that there is some past sequence which can make u bore ... but i can tell u that was indeed i think ... i love that past sequence... whole episode based on ragini n justified....
Thanks a lot. And, keep supporting.no question in this episode... amazing writing skills
keep it up bro ... god bless you
Abhi nahi. Abhi samay hai Summit arc me.Sumit arc. Ka aagman ho chuka hai lagta hai ab aage yudh bahut hi jyada bhayanak hone wala hai![]()
Dekhte jao bas. Kya kuchh hota hai.Abki baar veer ko talwar aur sniper ya pistol ka bhi use karna chahiye taaki aur jyada bhayanak ho sake ladai bilkul koi daya nahi kisi bhi system holder ke sath .
Bus ek suggestion hai mera
Bhai
Ek update likhne me hi bahut samay lagta hai bhai. Khaas kar agar iss tarah se likha jaaye toh. Aaltu faaltu update to mein bhi likh sakta hu, quality ghata dunga length ghata dunga aur tumhe hafte me kaho 2 updates mil jaaye. Par, baad me khud ju log hi bologe ki wahi pehle waala style theek hai.Bahut he acha update..
Ragini khud se he lad rahi h veer ke liye....
Aur nidhi ka bhi kuch had tk yahi haal h ...
Bhai ek update padhne ke baad next update padhne ke iccha badh jati h esliye kosish krna thoda jaldi .........
Yahi hota hai jab aap multiple stories ek saath padho toh.Thodi gadbad ho gayi lagta hai dhalchandarun bhai se,Arjun unki story ke hero ka naam hai![]()
Situations logo ko achha ya bura bana deti hai.From my pov koi insan glt hai ya nhi ye situation pr depend krta h na ki us insan pr, jese jo ragini or veer ka rishta tha use ragini ke pov se dekhne pr lgta h ki uski koi glti hi nhi thi situation hi uske pas ese the.
Ragini apni jagah sahi hai.Jha ragini ka veer pr gussa hona kyuki veer ne uske sath physical relation rkhe pr use shadi ke liye ha nhi kha yha ye bat shi nhi lgti kyuki veer ko ragini se phle nidhi mam se pyar ho gya tha vo nidhi mam ki jgh kisi or ko nhi de payega or physical relation ko badhava ragini ne hi Diya h ye he ki yha pr veer ko aage nhi badhne dena chahiye tha pr vo ragini ko rok nhi paya .
Koi bhi insaan ek baar me apni galti nahi maanta. Wo humesha justify karega.Or jha ab ragini ko veer pr gussa thi kyuki use lg rha h ki veer ab use sirf sympathy dikha rha h ya guilt ke karan hi sb kr rha h vha pr agr past me veer ke pov se dekhe toh usne bhi vo hi toh kiya tha veer ka usko kidnapper se bachne pr hi toh veer ke krib aayi thi use phle toh usne bhi veer ke prti neutral side rkhi thi.
Yes. Kaafi hadd tak. Thanks a lot btw.Combining both of pov yhi lgta h ki situation insan ko glt or shi bnaane me important role rkhti h na ki uske kiya gaya kam.
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Ho bhi sakti hai, nahi bhi.what an excuse.....mujhe to us pal ka intezar hai jab Captain aur Veer ka aamna saamna ho ...that will be thrilling right...
Yes. Kyunki, Probability Manipulation Veer ka card hai. To Pihu ke upar kaise activate hua? Uska poora explanation diya gaya hai.Is chiz ke upar to dhyan hi nahi gya sach mein mujhe laga ki probability manipulation Veer pe kaam kiya tha ....but there was a hack behind it..
Kar di gayi hai.Werewolf thoda editing ki jaroorat hai is scene ke baad re-edit kar diyo halke fulke mistakes notice kiye maine ....
Yes. Kyunki, wo blood donate kar rahi thi uss waqt.That's why jab sabhi koi Veer se milne hospital ke room mein present the us time Suman nahi dikhi ....ek ek sawal ka jawab de hi diya bro....
Past ke scenes aise hi beech beech me aate jayenge. Yahi link ko mazboot karte hai.update was totally for Ragini ,uski POV mein ye best tha....uska frustration aur anger puri tarah se nikalna jaroori tha ek nayi shuruat ke liye....ye past illustrations bich bich mein daalna bahut hi gazab hai bro ...jab Veer ko ghar se nikala gya tha Guilt har ek ke man mein tha ,,mens mein kisi ko nahi siwaye dadaji ko chhod....
Exactly.Ragini ka Veer ke prati shuruat se nazariya soft hi raha tha....paternity hone ke karan family mein wo iska virodh na kar payi ya aisa kaho koi female nahi oppose kar payi....Things are finally getting sorted between the two....
Sab pata chalega. Garofano ne kya dekha wo bhi pata chalega. Veer kiski limousine me aaya, kaun aaya uske saath sab pata lagega.So we got an alliance"V" ...sabhi ne apne system ko disclose to kar diya par agar kisi ek ne bhi is transparency ko toda to.....wese Garofano ne Dexter ke past mein Damian ko hi dekha tha kya?...lastly Veer in the Limousine vese Balhaar gang ke sath tha kya ya aur koi naya ....aur ye Summit kya hai bhai Revenge kab aayega un sabhi ke liye jo is hadse ke piche the....
Thanks a lot. And, keep supporting.Update was soft and soothing as because of Ragini....Enjoyed every bit of it...
Waiting for next big thing happening in Veer's life....
Nahi main multiple stories padh nahi raha tha wo meri hi story ki hero ka name hai, wo jaldi jaldi type karne ke chakkar mein Veer ki jagah Arjun aa gaya kyunki abhi tak maine apni story par Arjun 50,000 times likh diya hai isliye sub conscious mind ke karan ye mistake ho gaya.Yahi hota hai jab aap multiple stories ek saath padho toh.![]()
Yes. Thanks.lovely update ..ragini ka pov achcha dikhaya ,kaise wo bahu banke aayi ,veer ki parwah karti thi par vivek ki meethi baato me aakar kuch kar nahi paati thi .
Exactly. Nidhi jaisa hi haal hai kahi na kahi. Pyaar to karti hi hai par Veer ko wahi feel karwana chaahti hai jo usne feel kiya hai.hospital me uske liye veer ne jitni mehnat ki wo scene mast tha .pyar karti hai par dikhana nahi chahti ,tadpana chahti hai veer ko jaise wo tadapti thi .
Aage pata chalega.ab ye V allience ban gaya 5 members ka aur veer ne pehla mission bhi bata diya jiska naam summit hai ..
dekhte hai ye summit kya hai ..
Jaan ke accha laga.Bhai ise baar romance Or drama mai aakhe bahar aai
Thanks.Quite brilliant more of emotionsRagini khud ko pyar karne se rokh rhi hai
Keep in mind ki Pari ki ye waali personality ki ability uska intelligence hai. Mommy Pari ki ability Veer par control lena thi.These scenes justifies current update where Pari said she has intelligence as a skill....critical situations mein Pari ki decision making and sharp turns kamal ke hote hai Jaw Long aur Crimson wale fight mein bhi ye dikha tha...
Abhi nahi hoga. Abhi post Disembowler arc hi chalega.Summit arc start honga abhi. Jabardas update . Aarohi ne bhi apne papa se ladi thi veer keliye intresting
Thanks a lot. Keep supporting.Intresting honga veer ava ko apne sath ghr le jane vala hai uski family ka kya reaction hota hai dekhne vali bat hai By the way Intresting update Ragini ke emotions se bharpur
Degi hi....BrilliantRagini full to attitude derhi hai veer ko
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Well... Baakiyo ke paas alag alag Pari nahi hai. Unke paas ek hi system assistant hai. Jaise Ava ke paas Lily, Renshu ke paas Lloyd, Garofano ke paas Freya, Erica ke paas Genie... Sab ek hi hai. Veer ke hi paas Pari ek aisi hai jo har baar system upgrade hone par alag alag roop me aati hai. Basically, all of them are different. Current waali Pari hi aisi hai jo sab kuchh share karti hai aur intelligence me maahir hai.System ka khudka ek ability bhi hai ye ek naya bat hai veer ki System hi use ye details nhi batati baki System holders ki System sab details share krti hai. Veer ke liye ye bhi ek alag matter hai
Yup. Honestly, Suhana ka itna character development originally maine plot me nahi rakha tha. But jaise jaise HoK arc hua, aur fir Crimson arc aaya... I went along with their developing chemistry and somehow I ended with this current Suhana.Charcter development of Suhana is so mesmerizing that i can't even compare her latest self to past...kaha wo pehle attitude aur self obsessed type thi aur Sonia milansaar aur kind hearted type wahi current mein dekha jaye to Kaera se compete karne ke chakkar mein Sonia puri past wali Suhana banti jaa rahi hai aur Suhana ,. .....she has fell for Veer too badly that she can't step back from here...
Yes. Thanks a lot.Bhut hi badhiya update Bhai
Ye pura update ragini ke pov par based tha
Uska vivek se shadi karke ghar me aane se lekar Veer ka yu hospital me uska khayal rakne tak har jagah hame ragini ki situation aur uske emotions dikhaye gaye
Vah Veer ko bhi vesa hi feel karna chahti thi jese yu baar baar Veer ke usse dur chale Jane se use feel hota tha lekin vo aesa jyada din tak kar na saki kyonki kahi na kahi uske dil ke ek kone se vah ab bhi Veer ko pyar karti hai aur chahti hai ki Veer usse shadi kar le
Vahi Veer ki side ke system holder ne apni ek aliance bana li hai jiska naam v rakha gaya hai
Aur is update me ek baat or pata chali ki system ki bhi apni kuch ek special ability hoti hai
Overall bhut hi badhiya update Bhai
Exactly.Bhai top notch update hy. Kahani ko aik alag angle sy dekh kr maza aagya. Veer k point of view sy hi update hoti tu pari k comments dekhny ko milty aur us sy ragni k emotions itni achi tarha feel nhi hoty. Ap ny ragni k point of view sy cheezain btai tu iska faisa ye hua k usky emotions aur uski feelings khul k samny aai aur hamain bhi ye feel hua deep to heart. Bohat bohat zabardast update thi. Umeed krta hoon k agli update thora jaldi aaye gi taky hamain aur janany ko mily. Thanks for such a beautiful update.
Dekhte jao bas. Disembowler zinda hai. Wo waha se bhaag nikla.Bahtrin lajawab marvelous update bhai system holder girl ke sath Veer ka sex karbayo feer Veer ko us system holder girl ke card bi mile award ke roop main
Us villian system holder ka kya bana jo kabristan main tha
Ab Suhana ko kon bataye System ke aage koi bol skta hai kya...Suhana ye bhi jaan gayi thi ab ki kyu itni zyaada bheed thi Natalia ke liye. She was too good! Live stage par aise live gaana. Koi notes miss nahi ho rahe the. Harr ek high note ekdum sahi laga tha uska. Aur awaaz zara bhi nhi ladkhadaayi unn high notes ko lagaane me.
Kitni practice chaahiye hoti thi iske liye ye baat Suhana bhali bhaati jaanti thi. Akhir uski contact me bhi kayi bade singers the. Par Natalia ki aaj iss awaaz live sunn'ne ke baad jese woh saare singers ab pheeke maalum pad rahe the.
Natalia knew about Veer from earlier so she had camouflaged her status .....but as someone checks system alerts her thats the reason for sudden stare.....also she mark a death flag on Veer here too...'Check!'
Veer ne Natalia ko check kiya. Lekin jese hi usne check kiya, Natalia ki aankhein turant hi Veer par tikk gayi. Woh stage se seedha usse ghoor rahi thi.
'Hhuhhh??? Whattt??'