Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

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[Punnu]

First of all... congrats for New story .....tum bahut late ho yr....maine to hope hi chhod di thi aaoge ya nhi.....fir se welcome yr....
Intro to bahut acha lga ....dada ji purani soch wale insan hai ...jinhone pehle hi btawara kr diya ....jisse kalah na ho ye Shi hua ....Brijesh Intro me to bilkul sidha insan lg rha hai ...pr shayad aisa hai nhi...I think ye to padh kar hi pta chalega..hero ki step mom ka character mast lag rha hai...Jha tak mujhe lgta hai iske or Veer(hero) ke relation thik nhi honge ....kyuki ye uska apna beta nhi....and behan (bhumika) stepsis iske bare me kuch keh nhi skta iska character kaisa hai....and chacha ki family ka intro bhi acha lga ....khas kar chachi or unki beto or bahu ka ....ab ye to aage pta chalega dono ka relations kaisa hai ....and inme bhi sabhi ke jaise lalchi log hai ya nhi...
Bhai mere kuch doubts hai Jaise hero sabhi me sabse chota age chota kaise hai... and uski maa ka intro nhi aaya.....shayad tum usse suspence rkhna chahte honge...na hi hero ka koi real sister hai agr hoti to or jyada mza aata ....

 

[Werewolf]

First of all... congrats for New story .....tum bahut late ho yr....maine to hope hi chhod di thi aaoge ya nhi.....fir se welcome yr....
Intro to bahut acha lga ....dada ji purani soch wale insan hai ...jinhone pehle hi btawara kr diya ....jisse kalah na ho ye Shi hua ....Brijesh Intro me to bilkul sidha insan lg rha hai ...pr shayad aisa hai nhi...I think ye to padh kar hi pta chalega..hero ki step mom ka character mast lag rha hai...Jha tak mujhe lgta hai iske or Veer(hero) ke relation thik nhi honge ....kyuki ye uska apna beta nhi....and behan (bhumika) stepsis iske bare me kuch keh nhi skta iska character kaisa hai....and chacha ki family ka intro bhi acha lga ....khas kar chachi or unki beto or bahu ka ....ab ye to aage pta chalega dono ka relations kaisa hai ....and inme bhi sabhi ke jaise lalchi log hai ya nhi...
Bhai mere kuch doubts hai Jaise hero sabhi me sabse chota age chota kaise hai... and uski maa ka intro nhi aaya.....shayad tum usse suspence rkhna chahte honge...na hi hero ka koi real sister hai agr hoti to or jyada mza aata ....

Thanks a lot bro.
Swagat hai aapka thread me.
Arre bhai abhi toh jhatka lagega shuru ke updates padh ke
Female lead abhi disclose nahi kii gayi hai.
Hero ki Maa aur baaki sab ko lekar mystery hai. Wo aage suljhegi.
Uske liye kahani ke saath bane rehna hoga.

 

[Naik]

Introduction : ​

Characters ke baare me zyaada kuch nahi bataunga. Aap khud unke baare me padh ke unhe jaaniyega. Ek chota sa intro de raha hu taaki relationship samajh aa sake aapko.

1. Veer (age - 20 yrs) : Kahani ka Main character.

2. Manorath (age - 80 yrs) : Veer ke Dada jii. Paramparao aur anusaashan ko boht maante hai. Ghar me jo sabse anusaashit hai aur buddhimatta se bharpoor hai ussi ko ye mehatv dete hai. Inke 2 petrol pump the jo inhone apne baccho me baant diye.

3. Brijesh (age -56 yrs) : Veer ke Dad, Manorath ka bada ladka. Ek petrol pump ka maalik hai. Uske alaawa ek luxury hotel hai jisse uski patni sambhaalti hai.

4. Shweta (age - 47 yrs) : Veer ki sauteli Maa (Step-mom), Brijesh ki dusri patni. Shweta kahi se bhi 47 ki prateet nahi hoti. Ye Brijesh dwara banwai gayi hotel ki maalkin hai aur usse apni beti ke saath sambhaalti hai.



5. Bhumika (age - 25 yrs) : Shweta aur uske pehle pati ki eklauti beti, Veer ki Step-sister. B.com aur hotel management ka course karne ke baad ab apni Maa ke saath hotel sambhaalti hai.



6. Karunesh (age - 55 yrs) : Manorath ka dusra beta, Veer ke chacha. Brijesh ka chota bhai hai aur saath hi uss dusre petrol pump ka maalik.

7. Sumitra (age - 49 yrs) : Karunesh ki patni, Veer ki chachi. Gadrayi hui hai par moti kahi se bhi nahi. Badi badi chhuchiya, gori makhmali twacha, nain naksh jo madhosh kar de.



8. Vivek (age - 28 yrs) : Karunesh aur Sumitra ka bada beta. Karunesh ne Vivek pe kaafi paisa kharch kiya hai jiske chalte aaj Vivek ki khud ki ek automobiles ki company hai.

9. Ragini (age - 27 yrs) : Vivek ki patni, Veer ki Bhabhi. Qayaamat hai ekdum Ragini. Ek aisi ladki jisse harr koi apni banaana chaahe. Jisse dekh ke muh se bas yahi nikaalta hai ki kaash ye meri hoti.



10. Arohi (age - 22 yrs) : Karunesh aur Sumitra ki badi beti. Veer ke hi same college me uski senior hai. Kam bolti hai. Dikhne me khubsoorat aur alag kism ki beauty hai ye. Isse dekh ke nasha sa chadh jae kisi ko bhi.



11. Pranjal (age - 21 yrs) : Karunesh aur Sumitra ka chota beta. Abhi B.com kar raha hai same college se.

12. Kavya (age - 18 yrs) : Karunesh aur Sumitra ki choti beti. Chanchal, sharmeeli aur thodi savendansheel. Abhi abhi college me aayi hai toh abhi duniya daari ke baare utna sab nahi pata. Dikhne me ekdum Cute hai aur pyaari.



Ye tha intro, baaki characters samay aane par introduce hote jaenge.

Dhanyavaad!

Bahot shaandaar INTRO bhai

 

[odin chacha]

Intro shandaar tha kuch lead characters ke name, age aur occupation ke baare mein pata chali aur is ghar ke head aaj bhi Manorath ji hain jo 80 ke paar ho chale hein (halanki ek pair kabar pe aur ek pair kele ke chilke pe hai magar ye apne parmpara aur anushasan ko ganth bandh ke rakhte hein) fir aate hein Brijesh ki taraf jiske bhagya mein bahut hi dukh likhe hue mile biwi mar gayi aur dusri mili toh usko bhi shayad achhe se nichod nahi paya kyun ki pahle patni se ek bete Veer hone?(pata nahi lagta hai ye uska nahi hai) Ke baad koi aur santan sukh unko nahi mila fir Chacha Karunesh toh buddhe ho gaye hein magar Chachi Sumitra abhi bhi jawani se bhar pur... chachi ka Bada beta Vivek ka khudka business hai aur biwi Ragini bhi pura tanch maal hai( ) fir dono beti Aarohi,Kavya bhi kadak maal hain i mean cute fir aate hein chote bete Pranjal wo bhi Veer ke saath same college mein padhta hai ab dekhna hai ki iska hero ke saath yarana hai ya phir takrar hai...fir chalte hai veer ke step mother Shweta ke taraf wakayi kafi shasakt kirdaar inka aur waise hi inki beti Bhumika ka hai jo dono akele khudka business empire bana baithi hain... Fir aapne Veer ke mother aur ghar mein bade bete ke bete hone ke baad bhi usko ghar ke second most young character dikhaya hai jisse kuch sawal uthte hein ab iska jawab humein kahani mein aage pata chal hi jani hai...

 

[Werewolf]

Intro shandaar tha kuch lead characters ke name, age aur occupation ke baare mein pata chali aur is ghar ke head aaj bhi Manorath ji hain jo 80 ke paar ho chale hein (halanki ek pair kabar pe aur ek pair kele ke chilke pe hai magar ye apne parmpara aur anushasan ko ganth bandh ke rakhte hein) fir aate hein Brijesh ki taraf jiske bhagya mein bahut hi dukh likhe hue mile biwi mar gayi aur dusri mili toh usko bhi shayad achhe se nichod nahi paya kyun ki pahle patni se ek bete Veer hone?(pata nahi lagta hai ye uska nahi hai) Ke baad koi aur santan sukh unko nahi mila fir Chacha Karunesh toh buddhe ho gaye hein magar Chachi Sumitra abhi bhi jawani se bhar pur... chachi ka Bada beta Vivek ka khudka business hai aur biwi Ragini bhi pura tanch maal hai( ) fir dono beti Aarohi,Kavya bhi kadak maal hain i mean cute fir aate hein chote bete Pranjal wo bhi Veer ke saath same college mein padhta hai ab dekhna hai ki iska hero ke saath yarana hai ya phir takrar hai...fir chalte hai veer ke step mother Shweta ke taraf wakayi kafi shasakt kirdaar inka aur waise hi inki beti Bhumika ka hai jo dono akele khudka business empire bana baithi hain... Fir aapne Veer ke mother aur ghar mein bade bete ke bete hone ke baad bhi usko ghar ke second most young character dikhaya hai jisse kuch sawal uthte hein ab iska jawab humein kahani mein aage pata chal hi jani hai...

Arre bhai thanks a lot for a detailed comment.
Abhi shuru ke updates sabhi ki soch ko hila ke rakh denge

 

[Alok]

Waiting for first update to come......

 

[parkas]

waiting for the first update of the story...

 

[Raj]

Sabhi ko sabse pehle Hello! ​

Ye meri iss forum par dusri kahani hogi. Pehli kahaani [Akhir kyu?From hatred to love] ko aap sabhi ne itna saraaha aur pyaar diya ki mujhe dusri kahaani likhne par majboor kar diya.

By the way meri pehli kahani padhi ya nahi? Nahi padhi toh jao yaar pehle usko padho. Fir ye nayi kahani me dubki lagaana.

Wese ek writer ki taaqat uski likhaawat hoti hai par saath hi saath wahi uski kamzori bhi hoti hai. Ek writer bina likhe reh hi nahi sakta. Wo kuch na kuch likhta hi rehta hai aur apni kalpanao se nayi nayi kahaniyo ko utpadit karta hai. Aisa hi haal kuch mera bhi hai. Isliye aapke saamne prastut hu apni ek aur nayi kahani lekar,

"Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery"​

Ye kahani ekdum hi hatt ke hone waali hai. Aisi kahani aapne nahi padhi hogi. Kahani ki plot setting 'System' par adhaarit hai. Jinhone chinese aur japanese novels padhi hai iss setting ki unhe pata hoga. Par jinhone nahi padhi hai unke liye ye ekdum new hone waali hai. Isliye, mene socha kyu na iss plot setting ko yaha forum par introduce kiya jae.

Ab kuch key points dhyaan me zaroor rakhiyega kahani ko padhne se pehle kyuki baad me comment section me apun ko koi bakchodi nahi chahiye.

1. Story ka prefix wese toh mein fantasy rakhne wala tha par kyuki isme incest bhi hai kaafi maatra me toh mene incest rakh diya.

2. Story harem par based hai.

3. Story based toh real world me hi hai par kuch logics apply nahi honge.

4. Ye kahani kaalpanik hai. Isme charchit sabhi paatr keval meri kalpanao ka hissa hai. Yadi koi naam, vyavsaay, ya kuch aur asal zindagi me kisi se mel khaata hai toh ye keval ek sanyog hoga. Isse kisi galat nazariye sa na liye jae.

Bas ye 4 points ko dhyaan me rakhiyega.
Intro chota sa hi dunga, mein chaahta hu readers khud hi kahani padh ke characters ke baare me jaane taaki aap paatro se aur acche se familiar ho sake. Isliye, zyada bada intro nahi dunga.

Dhanyavaad!

WELCOME BACK BHAI
AAP KO WAPAS SE YAHA DEKH KAR BAHUT KHUSHI HUYI.
AUR AAPNE DUSRI STORY START KI IS BAAT SE AUR JYADA KHUSHI HUYI.
AASHA KARTE HAIN KI YE KAHANI
AKHIR KYU ?
SE BHI LAJAWAAB HOGI.


KEEP WRITING
KEEP POSTING
KEEP ROCKING

 

[Werewolf]

Update -1 ~ An Unforgettable Incident.​

*Thud*

Ek zorrdaar dhakka Veer ki peeth par pada aur wo saamne ki orr girte girte bacha.

"Hahahahaha!!!"

Aur tabhi peeche se kayi logo ki hassne ki awaazein sunayi dii.

Veer ke haath kaanp rahe the. Dhakke ke kaaran uska mobile phone girte girte bacha tha, usne forun hi usse apne kaapte hue haatho me kass ke thaama aur phone ki screen on karke wo contact list me se kisi ka naam dhund ke usne apna phone kaano ki orr badhaaya hi tha ki tabhi...

*Thud*

Ek aur dhakka zorr se uski peeth par pada, par iss baar wo khud ko sambhaal na saka aur saamne ki orr dhadaam se gir pada. Uska phone haatho se chhutak kar kayi tappa khaate hue zameen par jaa gira. Pata nahi sahi salaamat bacha bhi tha uska phone ya nahi.

Veer ne karaahte hue apni nazre upar kari aur dekha. Kareeb 5 se 6 ladke uske saamne khade hue the. Aur unka leader jiska naam Ajay tha wo apni Duke bike par adab ke saath baithe hue uski iss haalat par mazze le raha tha.

Ajay : Hahaha! Kyu be chuze! Bol!? Karega aisi harqat dubaara?

Apne kaapte hue perro ko Veer ne badi hi mushqil se control kiya aur utha.

Akhir uski galti kya thi? Aaj uske apne college me 2nd year ka pehla din tha aur pehle din hi uske saath ye sab ho raha tha?

Shaam ke 7 baj chuke the aur Veer jisse 2 ghante pehle hi apne ghar pohuch jaana chaahiye tha wo yaha 6 se 7 ladko dwaara bully kiya jaa raha tha.

Veer shuru se hi ek kamzor yuvak tha. Usse dekh ke aisa lagta tha maano uski rachna bhagwaan ne badi hi kathorta se kari ho.

Na wo padhayi me hoshiyaar tha, na dikhne me koi boht handsome tha, shareer se bhi kamzor tha, bol chaal me bhi ekdum peeche aur usme koi bhi talent nahi tha. Kul milaake ek bhondu sa insaan.

Apne naam ka ulta hi tha Veer. Veerta naam ki toh koi cheez hi nahi thi usme. Par bechaare usme uski kya galti thi? Wo toh jesa tha, wesa tha. Kya uski iss baat ka fayda uthaana zaroori tha?

Aaj wo yaha college ke peeche ki sunsaan sadko me maujood tha. Wo aana nahi chaahta tha par usse yaha laaya gaya tha.



Saamne khade uske college ke seniors uspe atyachaar karne ke liye usse yaha sunsaan jagah par lae hue the.

Par isme Veer ki galti kya thi?

Uski galti ye thi ki aaj college ke departure ke waqt wo ek khubsoorat senior ladki ko dekh raha tha jo ki laazmi tha. Wo thi hi itni khubsoorat ki koi bhi usse dekh ke apni nazre na hata paata. Wo patli kamar, teekhe nain, bhaari stan, perfect figure aur wo qaatilaana chehra. Kisi ko bhi madhosh kar de.

Par badqismati se Veer jab uss sundar ladki ko taad raha tha, Ajay ne usse aisa karte dekh pakad liya tha.

Aur bas, yahi Veer ki galti thi.

Wo ladki Ajay ki kaafi acchi dost thi jiske peeche Ajay haath dhoke kaafi samay se pada hua tha. Uss ladki ka naam tha Pragya, jo ki Ajay ki classmate thi.

Veer ki nazar ne hi Ajay ko itna gussa dila diya tha ki uska mann kar raha tha ki wo ussi waqt Veer ki aankhein noch le. Akhir himmat kese hui kisi ladke ki uski hone waali gf ko taktaki laga ke dekhne ki.

College me kisi ne bhi aaj tak uske khilaaf jaane ki himmat nahi kii thi. Toh fir akhir iss Veer ki kese himmat ho gayi?

Yahi baat Ajay ko bilkul na khali.

Veer ko yaha laake aaj wo usse accha sabak sikhaane waala tha. Taaki, bhavishya me koi bhi uski Pragya ko ghurne se pehle 100 baar soche.

Ajay (gurraate hue) : Mene kuch pucha tere se chuze. Bol? Karega aisi harqat firse?

Veer bhale hi kamzor tha par wo apne khud ke prati imaandaar zaroor tha. Usse pata tha usne koi galti nahi kii hai. Akhir ek sundar ladki ko yadi aapne kuch seconds dekh liya toh kya wo aapki galti hai? Bilkul bhi nahi! Veer toh keval Pragya ki sundarta ki prashansha kar raha tha mann hi mann.
Isme pitaayi ki baat kaha se aa gayi?

Aur yahi dhyaan me rakhte hue usne Ajay ke sawaal ka koi uttar nahi diya. Wo bas chup chaap apna nichla honth daanto se dabaaye hue sar jhukae khada raha. Uski mutthi zorr se kassi hui thi.

Ajay : Ye aise nahi maanega. Dose do saale ko.

Uski baat sunn uske saare saathi Veer ki taraf badhne lage. Jese jese Veer peeche jaata, wese wese wo aur kareeb aate.

Aur kuch pal ke andar hi Veer ab 6 logo se ghira hua tha. Iske pehle ki wo kuch keh paata, unn 6 ke 6 laundo ne Veer pe mukke aur laate barsaana shuru kar dii.

"Aaarghhhhhhh"

Veer ki karaahne ki awaaz sunsaan road me gunj rahi thi par na toh koi sunn'ne wala tha aur na hi koi madad karne waala. Wo ladke rukne ka naam nahi le rahe the.

Koi uske pait me maarta toh koi uske gaal pe, koi peeth pe vaar karta toh koi uski pasli pe. Aur harr ek hamle par Veer ke muh se ek dard bhari cheenkh nikal jaati jo uss sunsaan sadak ki shaanti ko jhanjhor kar rakh deti. Dekhte hi dekhte kuch hi palo me wo ab neeche gir chuka tha.

Usne apne haatho se apna sar bachaaya aur perr sikode par ladko ko toh jese farq hi nahi padna tha.
Apni laate uthaate hue unn sabhi ne uspe itne vaar kiye ki uske maathe aur hontho se khoon behne laga.

Jab Ajay ne qareeb aake wo laal khoon dekha toh usse andar hi andar ek sukoon sa mila. Jese uska gussa kuch hadd tak shaant ho gaya tha. Usne forun hi apne pantaro ko rok diya.

Apni laat uthaate hue usne apna joota Veer ke sar par rakh diya.

Ajay : Samajh aaya chuze? Yadi tune itna keh diya hota ki ahinda se tu aisi harqat nahi karega toh tere saath ye sab nahi hota.

Veer ne koi jawaab nahi diya. Wo bas apni jese tese adhkhuli aankho se Ajay ko ghur raha tha.

Ajay : Par tujhe bann'na tha hero. Hai na? Toh lo fir! Ab banke dikha hero. Kaan khol ke sunn le chuze, ahinda se tu yadi mujhe galti se bhi Pragya ke aas paas bhi dikha na toh teri gaand tod ke rakh dunga. Samjha behanchod?

Kehte hue Ajay ne apne perr ka bhaar badhaate hue Veer ka chehra masal diya jiske chalte uski ek aur cheenkh nikal gayi.

Ajay : Aulelelele bacche ko dard ho raha hai? Ruko abhi dard dur kar deta hu. Zara wo lollipop toh laana. Dekho idhar ek baccha ro raha hai.

Aur uski baat sunn sabhi ladke zorr zorr se thahaake lagaane lage.

Unn ladko me se ek ne apna bag khola aur ek lollipop nikaalte hue Ajay ko thama dii.

Ajay ne forun hi lollipop ka wrapper khola aur Veer ki taraf neeche jhuk gaya.

Ajay : Tujhe pata hai mein ye lollipop leke kyu ghumta hu hamesha? Taaki tujh jese bacche jab udham karne lagte hai na toh unki aqal thikaane laga saku.

Itna bol wo lollipop zorr se Veer ke muh me ghusa dii jiske chalte ek aur karaah Veer ke muh se nikli.

Ajay : Par fir bacche rone lag jaate hai toh akhir bade hone ke naate mera farz bhi toh banta hai na? Ki mein unhe chup karwau? Isliye uske liye ye lollipop. Ab acche bacche ki tarah ye lollipop chuso aur apne ghar ki orr nikal lena. Samjha?

Usne Veer ka gaal thap thapaaya aur jaane ke liye uth khada hua par jaane se pehle wo ek baar aur peeche muda aur Veer ko dekha.

Ajay : Police ya ghar me kuch bhi bataane ki koshish karna bhi mat chuze. Baad me tu hi pachtaega nahi toh. Infact, kisi ke saamne bhi muh mat kholna.

Ladka 1 : Ajay bhai halki bunda baandi shuru ho gayi hai, hume nikalna chahiye.

Uske ek dost ne jataaya toh Ajay ne bhi haa me gardan hilaayi.

Aur Ajay samet sabhi ladke apni apni bike par sawaar hue par tabhi Ajay ko kuch sujha aur wo apni bike neeche pade Veer ke ird gird ghumaane laga aur uske dost bhi yahi karne lage.

*Crack*

Veer ne zorr se uss lollipop ka apne daanto se katra. Uski aankhein gusse se laal thi par wo kuch bhi nahi kar sakta tha. Ladke uske ird gird bike ko ghuma rahe the aur agle hi pal Ajay ne uski orr thuka jiske chalte wo thook seedha jaate hue Veer ki shirt par gira.

"Hahahahaha"

*Vroom* *Vroom*

Hasste hue Ajay apni toli ke saath, bike par sawaar waha se nikal gaya. Aur uss sunsaan jagah pe ab keval Veer hi akela pada hua tha.

Bijli kadki aur tezz baarish shuru ho gayi. Yahi Veer ki kismat thi. Ab toh uske kapde bhi bheeg jaane the. Par baarish se ek baat acchi hui. Wo ye ki Veer ki shirt me gira Ajay ka thook dhul gaya.

*Thuu*

Lollipop ko zorr se thukte hue Veer khada hua toh wo ladkhada gaya aur girte girte bacha. Harr jagah itna dard tha ki pucho mat. Baarish tezz ho chuki thi aur wo langdaate hue apni scooty ke paas jese tese pohucha aur seat par tik ke baith gaya.

Baarish ke pani se uske maathe se nikal raha khoon bhi saaf hone laga tha. Usne apna phone uthaate hue apne jeb me daal liya. Pata nahi zinda bhi tha uska phone ya nahi, kyuki screen ki light abhi tak jal rahi thi.

Par Veer ko toh jese kuch farq hi nahi padna tha. Wo haafte hue bas baitha sadak ko ghur raha tha jaha abhi wo kuch derr pehle buri tarah laato aur ghuso ka shikaar hua tha.

Ab toh usme apni muthhi kassne tak ke liye dum nahi bacha tha. Kya kismat dii thi bhagwaan ne usse.

Aaj pehla din aur uske saath ye vyavhaar hua. Upar se tab, jab uski koi galti bhi nahi thi. Kya ek khubsoorat ladki ko dekhna gunaah tha? Jab uss ladki ne usse kuch nahi kaha toh bhala ye Ajay kon hota tha uske saath aisa suluk karne waala?

Na chaahte hue bhi Veer ki rulaayi chhuuth padi. Aur wo bina koi awaaz kiye zorr zorr se rone laga. Shareer poora bheeg chuka tha uska. Aur baarish ki boonde jese hi uske ghaavo par padti usse aur zyada dard deti.

Rote rote Veer ne apni scooty uthayi aur ghar ki taraf chal diya. Usse hi pata tha ki wo kitni mushqil se iss waqt scooty ko chala raha tha. Uske jeb me uska phone abhi bhi contact list show kar raha tha.

Shayad girne ke kaaran phone ki screen ek jagah jaa ke atak chuki thi. Uss contact list me uska koi bhi dost nahi tha. School me bhi uske dost nahi the aur aaj bhi college me wo akela hi baitha hua tha. Contact list me keval 3 hi naam the. Ek uske pita Brijesh ka, ek uski chachi Sumitra ka aur ek uski choti behan Kavya ka.

Jinhe call karne ki Veer uss waqt acting kar raha tha. Jii haa! Acting kar raha tha. Kyuki Veer jaanta tha, Brijesh ko pata chalega toh wo ulta aur maarega hi usse. Sumitra aur Kavya isme kuch nahi kar sakti thi. Rahi baat baaki family members ki toh unke numbers the hi nahi uske phone me.

Uske gharwaale uski madad bilkul na karte.

Akhir kyu?

Kyuki yahi toh uska parivaar tha. Keval naam ka parivaar tha baaki uski ghar me kya hi izzat thi wo bhali bhaati jaanta tha.

Ab tak usse ghar se nikaala nahi gaya tha yahi baat kaafi thi.

Usse itna prataadit kiya jaata tha ki pucho mat. Pata nahi kese wo unn sab ke beech itne saal tak jee liya.

Yadi koi aur hota toh gusse me khud hi bhaag gaya hota ya ab tak trast aa chuka hota aur na jaane kya kar liya hota. Par Veer chup chaap sab kuch sehta tha.

Kyuki usse pata tha ki virodh karne ka koi fayda nahi tha. Aur yadi wo jaata bhi toh kaha jaata? Wo 20 saal ka hi tha aur abhi toh usne college ki duniya bhi thik se nahi dekhi thi.

Par aaj jo hua uss se Veer ko itna toh samajh aa gaya tha ki college ki life ke bache hue baaki 3 saal uski school life se kayi guna battar hone waale the.

Veer tezz raftaar me gaadi chalaaye jaa raha tha. Baarish aur aasuo ke kaaran uski aankein dhundhli ho chali thi. Gaadiyo ki headlights ki roshni kisi jugnu ke prakaar uski aankho me aati aur jaati.

Kuch derr pehle hui ghatna uske imaan, uske gaurav, uski izzat ko chhalli kar ke uske dimaag me ghum rahi thi.

Par wo ruka nahi. Yu aasu bahaate hue wo apne ghar ki orr gaadi badhaata raha jo ab bas kuch hi dur tha.

'Badla toh mein lunga. I'll make them pay. Chun chun ke... Ek ek se chun chun ke badla lunga.'
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Kahani shuru ho chuki hai.
Ab se mein aur aap iss kahani ka safar saath me tay karenge aur isse ant tak pohuchaenge.
Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!

 

[Werewolf]

Congratulations bhai for new story.......
aapko dubara story likhte dekh kr bahut khusi hui..........
keep posting bhai.............

Congratulations for new thread. .....

Mai manga comics padhta hun , mai shayad story ko acchhe se connect kar paunga,

All the best for future updates
waise title me baadshah ki jagah samraath hota toh tagda lagta.... hai na?

Congratulations for new thread bhai

New kahani ke liye dher sari badhaiya dost

for the new story

for new story.....

Welcome to new post

Co

For starting new story thread...

Aakhir Kar..................
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for starting a new thread brother
hope this story will touch our heart

Congrations for new thread bhai

Nice intro

Nice and superb introduction...

Awesome Intro thaa bhaiii

Par Veer ki maa ke baare mein kuch nhi bataya. Uska kyaa hua kaha gayi naam kyaa tha kuch bhi nhi bataya

शानदार intro bhai

Kahani ka intro padhke lagata hey yeh kahani bahut unchai tak pahunchega.....

A great story has indeed started.

Nice intro

Are bhai superb start maja aane wala fir se aapki story kaa

Nice intro bhai.

Bhai sex me veer ke alawa kisi aur mard ko uski family me se kisi ko involve nhi karna incest me. Aur na bahar se. I love one man army type.

Bahut hi Badiya intro he Bhai. Relations Samaj ke Bahut Maja Aya. Ab muje dekna he kavya ko kaise karunesh aur brijesh uski komal chuth kaise Chat dalthe he. Aur apna hero kaise uss maa Saman sumitra ki gaand Sung daltha he

veer ka pariwar ek sanyukt pariwar hain.. aaj bhi dadajee ka dabdaba hain pariwar mein... nahin toh budhho ko kaun puchhta hain... parichay se kadak swabhaw ke maloom hote hain... do bete hain inke....

veer kahani ka nayak... maa mar chuki hain... baap ne doosri shaadi kee usse ek sauteli behen bhi hain. jo iske baap se bhi nahin hain.... lekin uske baad uski baap ko unse koi santan prapt nahin hui... aur shayad aage bhi aasar nahin lagte... ab veer ka uski sauteli mata se kaise sambandh hain yeh toh aage kahani mein pata chalega...

pariwar mein abhi se shabkuchh batwara ho chuka hain dadajee ke jeete jee,, behtar hain isse aapsi matbhed kam honge... waise ek achambhit kar dene waali baat hain veer ke alawa uski koi aur sagi bhai ya behen nahin hain lekin phir bhi veer unke chhote chacha ke beto se umra mein kaafi chhota hain... jab kee unske papa bare hain toh shaadi jahir hain pehle hui hogi...

veer ke baare mein naam ke alawa aur kuchh nahin maloom dekhte hain aage kahani mein...

kuchh confusion hain jiske aage jawab kee ummeed...

First of all... congrats for New story .....tum bahut late ho yr....maine to hope hi chhod di thi aaoge ya nhi.....fir se welcome yr....
Intro to bahut acha lga ....dada ji purani soch wale insan hai ...jinhone pehle hi btawara kr diya ....jisse kalah na ho ye Shi hua ....Brijesh Intro me to bilkul sidha insan lg rha hai ...pr shayad aisa hai nhi...I think ye to padh kar hi pta chalega..hero ki step mom ka character mast lag rha hai...Jha tak mujhe lgta hai iske or Veer(hero) ke relation thik nhi honge ....kyuki ye uska apna beta nhi....and behan (bhumika) stepsis iske bare me kuch keh nhi skta iska character kaisa hai....and chacha ki family ka intro bhi acha lga ....khas kar chachi or unki beto or bahu ka ....ab ye to aage pta chalega dono ka relations kaisa hai ....and inme bhi sabhi ke jaise lalchi log hai ya nhi...
Bhai mere kuch doubts hai Jaise hero sabhi me sabse chota age chota kaise hai... and uski maa ka intro nhi aaya.....shayad tum usse suspence rkhna chahte honge...na hi hero ka koi real sister hai agr hoti to or jyada mza aata ....

Bahot shaandaar INTRO bhai

Intro shandaar tha kuch lead characters ke name, age aur occupation ke baare mein pata chali aur is ghar ke head aaj bhi Manorath ji hain jo 80 ke paar ho chale hein (halanki ek pair kabar pe aur ek pair kele ke chilke pe hai magar ye apne parmpara aur anushasan ko ganth bandh ke rakhte hein) fir aate hein Brijesh ki taraf jiske bhagya mein bahut hi dukh likhe hue mile biwi mar gayi aur dusri mili toh usko bhi shayad achhe se nichod nahi paya kyun ki pahle patni se ek bete Veer hone?(pata nahi lagta hai ye uska nahi hai) Ke baad koi aur santan sukh unko nahi mila fir Chacha Karunesh toh buddhe ho gaye hein magar Chachi Sumitra abhi bhi jawani se bhar pur... chachi ka Bada beta Vivek ka khudka business hai aur biwi Ragini bhi pura tanch maal hai( ) fir dono beti Aarohi,Kavya bhi kadak maal hain i mean cute fir aate hein chote bete Pranjal wo bhi Veer ke saath same college mein padhta hai ab dekhna hai ki iska hero ke saath yarana hai ya phir takrar hai...fir chalte hai veer ke step mother Shweta ke taraf wakayi kafi shasakt kirdaar inka aur waise hi inki beti Bhumika ka hai jo dono akele khudka business empire bana baithi hain... Fir aapne Veer ke mother aur ghar mein bade bete ke bete hone ke baad bhi usko ghar ke second most young character dikhaya hai jisse kuch sawal uthte hein ab iska jawab humein kahani mein aage pata chal hi jani hai...

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