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BrilieNT UPDAtE BRO
Super update bhai
Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai bhai...
Nice and awesome update...
Very nice update bhai
FANTASTIC UPDATE BRO
Thanks a lot guys!!Ek aur Awesome update!!
Waiting for next one.
Martial arts ladaayi toh ab shuru hui hai bhai.Katayi khatarnaak update tha Bhai veer ke martial arts ab ubhar kr bahar aa rhe hai so ab dekhna hoga mission pass or fail ho jayega ya nhi kaise roka gaddi ko maza aa gya wo clap krne wala slogan dada to nhi
And it will get more and more intense.Lovely update.
This update really action na next level tha. Superb Superb Superb description of martial arts skills.
Thanks a lot bro!Jo maza tarif krny ka apni zuban main ata hai wo English main nai ata iss liye "bhtreen update lajawab maza a gya prh kr cha gaye bhai ab veer ko apni kabliyat k bary pata chalta jaye ga axha hai lagy raha werewolf bhai
Superb fantastic bhai.....
Superb update
Mast Fight Sean
Clap clap .... Suspence.. May be kiera... May be..... And may be......!!! Keep reading
Nice update
Nice updates
Awesome update bhai waiting for next update
Mast update.. limousine mein kisi ko kidnap Kiya hua hai...ja fir wohi floral shirt wala admi hai......Bhau?
ZABARDAST update
Very nice fantastic update waiting for next
Bemishaal update dost
Superb Update Bro...
Waiting for Next
Nice
Amazing blend of romance and thrill…
BrilieNT UPDAtE BRO
Thanks a lot guys!Nice update
Thnx buddy... But maine last paragraph mein Nidhi ko mention Kiya hai bhai... Mat poochiye kyon kiya... NidhiGreat Review. Review started with Nidhi madam. It would have been better if the review ended with Nidhi Madam also. Mat puchna kyun please.
This story deserves this kind of review. My friend Werewolf will be surely feeling proud of himself after reading your review.
Title ka planning sayad New year planning yoga. But title ka Mystery likes to be many in number starting with Slogan, continuing with Priya (another girl for Veer) , last mission in itself and so on....
Main yeh kya kiya? Review ke upar hi review likh dala. Shame on myself
बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद भाई! अगला अपडेट भी ऑलरेडी पोस्टेड है! ऐसे ही साथ में बने रहिएगा और अपनी समीक्षा देते रहिएगा!इंसानी भावनाओं को समेट कर कहानी में रोमांच को भी प्रस्तुत करना वाकई बहुत मुश्किल भरा काम है
पर इस शैली में आप अद्भुत हो या यूँ कहें के आप जादूगर हो
वीर खुश है निधि के भावनाओं को जान कर और अब जो मिशन मिला है उसकी इंपोर्टेंस ज़रूर कुछ खास ही होगी वरना पेनल्टी इतनी भारी न होती
इसलिए प्रतिक्षा रहेगी अगली अपडेट के लिए
Thanks bhai! Keep supporting!Wawoooo Yar really aj to Maza hi a gia fi8 wo bhi itni zabardast dekh kr
Kia dhoya h veer ne un sabhi ko
Wese ye claping kerne Wala,ya wali, kon h
Let's see what happend
Nice Update Bhai....
Jab ek normal sa ladaka powerful banne lagata hai toh bahot maja ata hai.. Jaise abhi aa raha hai....
Waiting for next update bro
Thanks a lot guys!Superb story waiting for next update
Updates ka schedule do din ka hai bhai.Koi btay ga update ka time table kia hai?
Protagonist ko gaand marti hai toh ju ko maza aata hai!? But you are lucky Samay samay par boht sii hardships aane waali hai Veer ke liye.Ek naya mission aur ek nayi pariksha Veer ki... Aur iss baar ye mission aesa waisa nahi hone waala... Mission kitna important hai ye issi se pata chalta hai ke penalty for failure 2500 points ki hai... I am thinking ke agar Veer fail ho jaata hai to 2500 points ka udhaar utaarne mein usse kitne saal lagenge... This is a new challenge... Aur agar penalty itni zyada hai to definitely reward bhi tagda hi hoga mission completion ka
Time limit dekh kar lagta hai ke shayad gaadi ko 1 ghante tak roke rakhna hai?? Agar aesa hai to filhaal maybe sirf 20–25 minute hi huye honge iss fight mein.... Baaki dekho....
Most probably ye mission success hona hi chahiye par agar fail ho jaata hai to apan bahut khush hoga... Afterall Veer ki achhe se lagegi iss kaaran .
Apt speculation.Clapping karne waala shakhs Slogan Dada hi hona chahiye...aur lagta hai ab inka panga shuru ho hi jaayega...
Kavya ziddi hai. Rahi baat being possessive hone kii...Idhar Kavya ka reaction dekhne ko mila Veer ki photo Kaera ke saath dekh kar... Ab uska hairaan hona laazmi tha par uska reaction kaafi ajeeb sa tha... She seemed to be very possessive about Veer... Khair, ye kya tha.
Kavya ka ye kehna ki why she's so hot koi surprisin baat nahi. After all, Kaera is hot. And, Kavya ne Veer ko kabhi aise kisi badi hasti ke saath nahi dekha. So she asked ki Veer itni hot ladki ke bagal me kya kar raha tha!?
Kavya aur Arohi dono ki hi favourability jald hi dekhne ko milegi. Yes! Shreya wants Veer to stay at Nidhi's house. Veer aur Nidhi ke beech complex relationship hai. Dekhte hai ye kab tak kaayam rahega.Idhar Shreya ke saath ek date par gaya Veer... Pari ne sahi kaha abhi bechara kaafi naadan hai... Ab jaldi hi wo ladkiyon se ghirney hi waala hai to experience milta jaayega in baaton ka... Shreya bhi kaafi emotional ho gayi Veer ke saath... Wo Veer ko apne ghar hi bulaana chahti hai... Par Veer ki baat bhi sahi hai... Khair, Nidhi ke saath huyi uss ghatna ke chalte uski favourability 50 ho gayi hai... Uski favourability kaafi baar oopar neeche huyi hai... Dekhna hoga ke iss distance ko kaise door karenge ye dono... Wahin Shreya ki favourability 64 par pahunch chuki hai joki ek bada increase darshaati hai... Kavya ki favourability kitni hogi ye dekhna bhi interesting rahega...
Fights ki shuruaat hui hai ek prakaar se iss update me. Aur ye aur bhi skilled aur intense hoti jaegi.One inch punch aur martial arts ka bhi upyog dekhne ko mila iss update mein... Fights ke dauraan Pari ki excitement alag hi level par hoti hai... Aur yahaan bhi yahi dekhne ko mila... Bas ab dekhna ye hai ke wo clapping karne waala shakhs kaun hai aur aage kya hoga jab Veer aur Slogan ki pehli mulaakat hogi... Aur hana Veer ki student Kaera kidhar hai??
Boht boht dhanyavaad bro! Aap unn chand logo me se ek ho jo kahani ko ekdum deeply ghus ke padhte hai. Keep supporting bro!Kaafi saari gatividhiyon se bhara update... Kavya ka phone call kaafi badhiya tha... Apne aap hi muskaan laa dene waala scene... Wahin Shreya ke saath kuchh emotional scenes dekhne ko mile to ant mein ek badhiya fight scene... Bole to ek hi thaali mein saare vyanjan... bahut hi badhiya update ek baar firse...
Outstanding Update Bhai & Waiting For Next...
Bhai next update kb milegaThanks a lot guys!
Keep supporting!
Yes! But for basic Martial art skill keval ek yahi major attack hai Veer ke paas. Rest are just normal punches and slams, kicks combined with some basic somersaults and flips.Great update Werewolf bhai.
Update ka title dekh ke hi laga ki jabardast action hoga. One inch punch . Ye one Inch punch to Bruce Lee karta tha. Aur Dragon ball super ki movie me bhi goku Frieza ko marta he. Veer ne bhi ye master kar liya. Waah ab majha aayega. Close combat me useful rahega.
Yadi Ragini ko waapas le jaana hai toh boht hi paapad belne honge Veer ki family ko. Especially Vivek ko. Dekhna hoga ki wo kuch karte hai ya nahi.Well, yaha dinesh aur Rohini bethe he aur samne unke samdhi aur samdhan ji. Karunesh aur sumitra to yahi soch ke aaye honge ki ragini unki baat to sunn nahi rahi. Aur waha pe suman alag se unko aaina dikha deti he. To ab yaha aaye he taki ragini ko wapis ghar le ja sake. Yaha dinesh ji ne ye achha kiya apni taraf se baat clear kar di. Na koi juthe wade na koi aur baat. Sidhi baat bas. Ab faisla ragini ke hath me he to dekhte he kya hota he aage. Lagta nahi ki ragini ab uss ghar me wapis kadam rakhegi.
Ye samay bhi aaega. Jab kavya aur juhi saath me honge. Full cuteness!Kavya yaha explanation maang rahi he veer se. Sach me bachhi hi he wo. Lekin bahut cute character he. Juhi aur kavya jab mil ke apni cuteness dikhayegi to veer to gaya hi.
Arohi ne Kavya ko suggest nahi kiya tha call lagaane ke liye. She just showed her the newspaper. Baaki Kavya ne khud se Veer ko call lagaya. Aur rahi baat sabak sikhaane ki... Toh Arohi ko bhi guilt mehsoos hone waali hai jald hi. Saath hi saath Bhumika ko bhi. She will realize it later. Veer won't easily forgive Shweta and Bhumika.Yaha dhyaan dene wali baat he aarohi. Usse pata laga news paper ke bare me. Aur usi ne call karvaya hoga. Ab uska bhi behaviour change ho raha he dhire dhire. Par saja to thodi milni chahiye na usko bhi. Veer ke sath itne saal galat hota raha tab kuch na kiya par ab news paper me khabar chhapne ke baad chinta dikhaye to kya fayda?? Mere liye to bhai sab doshi he uss ghar me. Kavya jyada kuch kar nahi sakti thi. Kyuki wo khud veer se choti he. Sab ko ese hi na maaf kar dena at least ek sabak to sikhana banta he jo unko dil pe lage.
Well, Veer aur Nidhi ka rishta... It's complicated!!!Kavya ne yaha apni date bhi set kar li.
Shreya ko veer wapis uss ghar me chahiye. Usne uske perspective se sach hi bola he ki Nidhi akele to 50 lakh jama na kar payegi. Aur na hi veer ke waha rahete kuch fark bhi padega usme. Aur isme uski bhi ek ichha he ki wo veer ko roj dekh sake. Nidhi aur juhi khush rahe. Ab Nidhi to naraj he yaha. Ab kuch special Karna padega veer ko. 60 favourability rahegi to achha he. Fir dhire dhire 90 fir 100
Filhaal toh ye sab chupke se ho gaya.Veer ne samjha to diya shreya ko. Aur ek kiss bhi mil gayi. Kahi ye sab Nidhi ne dekh liya hota to majha aata.
Slogan sarcasm me hi clap kiya haha~Khair ab baat kare slogan ki.
Veer ne gadi to rok li. Par ek warning bhi thi sath me. Kya wo slogan ke liye thi ya koi aur bhi tha car me ?? Kahi suhana hi to nahi uss car me ?? Yaha achhe se action scene likha he aapne. Bahut badhiya . Ab lagta he slogan sab dekh ke Shayad impress ho gaya he ya ye sarcasm me clap kar raha he. Slogan bhi vese kamm nahi dekhte he aage.
Bas agar veer ko kuch hua to pari ko bas itna hi bolna he veer ko motivate karne ke liye.
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Ye Aap meri tarif kr rhe the ya beijjatiYe dekho ...
Kitni baareeki sii padhi jaa rahi hai story
Wese baat ekdum sahi hai.
You got me...Protagonist ko gaand marti hai toh ju ko maza aata hai!?
Mods ZindabadAccha hua Ju ne wo pic badal dii aur ye waali kar dii. Mein bolne waala tha.
You meant to say berojgaarAap unn chand logo me se ek ho jo kahani ko ekdum deeply ghus ke padhte hai.