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Bahot khoob aj veer ka panga lagta hai sire wale admi c pada hai oske admi to veer ke samne fusss nikle lagta hai mission complet ho gia veer ka
Behad hi shanadar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.
Kabhi to thik se khatma karo aap update ka....
Humesha bich manjhdhar me chhod dete ho....
Thank you guys!Maza a gya bro
Wo abhi bhi bann'na chaahti hai. She will do something about it for sure.Starting me Shreya youtuber thi na aur bahut bari youtuber Banna chahti thi....
Bhai sudden change ka reason bhi bata do....
Amazing very nice
Thanks a lot guys!Shaandaar update
Kyaa hi seen hai takraar ,
Pyaar air fir ant mai thrill combo
Waiting for next update
Ye aadmi Aatish ka boss to nahi hai kahin. Kahin peeche se Veer ki le nahi lega.
Clap Karne Wala Shakhs Wo Hi Insan H Jis Ne Atish Ko Train kiya tha
You guys guessed it right! Wo Slogan hi tha. Aatish ka boss!Clap Karne Wala slogan lagta hai &
Waiting for update
Jabardast update
Awesome lazwaab
Thank you!Great update bro maza a gya
Sochte rahiye! Kya pata kisi ki guessing sahi nikal jaaye...!?Nice update slogan to Bada suspicious admi nikla I think system is related to another person or department it's my view bcz slogan k admi usay bta rahy jaisa ap ko Kahan gya waisa hua and end mein Nidhi aur veer ka interaction beautiful tha
Thanks a lot bhai!Amazing update…vo ldki kahi veer ki sis to nhi ja veer ki mom sai jude logo mai sai …stry din b din intresing hoti ja rahi hai or new year m lgta hai dada ji musibat m padne vale hai or nidhi or veer k beech m fir kui gadbad hogi
Wahhhhh jabrdast mindblowing superbbb speechless update.......Update-48~ Mystery and PlanAb tak...
'Y-Ye!?? Damnnnnnnn....!'
Bas baaki tha... toh Veer jo achraj me waha khada hua tha abhi bhi apni fist hold kiye aur baaki aadmi... Jo karaahte hue sadak par dale hue the.
Veer ne khush hote hue ek raahat ki saas lii...
Par ...
*Clap* *Clap* *Clap*
Apne just peeche se ye awaaz sunn uska shareer kaanp utha.'
Ab aage...
Achanak aayi unn taaliyo ki awaaz jese uss sunsaan sadak me goonjne lagi aur Veer ke raungte khade ho gaye. Kuch shan ke baad hi taaliyo ki goonj tham gayi aur sab kuch shaant pad gaya.
Ekdum ekaant sa...
Aur fir Veer dheere dheere palta...
Usne saamne dekha aur jese hi uski nazre saamne hui....
Uski ankhein phati ki phati reh gayi.
Uss limousine se ek vyakti nikal ke baahar aaya tha. Floral shirt, blazer, trouser, black formal shoes aur bas. Uske haatho me kuch nahi tha. Veer iss vyakti se kabhi nahi mila tha. Na hi usse jaanta tha. Par uske saamne khada ye vyakti, pata nahi kyu par Veer ko usse dekh ke hi khatre ki ghanti sunaayi de rahi thi.
Kuch gadbad thi.
Veer ko aisa mehsoos hua jese iss waqt usko yaha nahi hona chaahiye tha.
Ye wahi vyakti tha. Wahi vyakti...
Jisse Veer ne uss din Suhana ke saath hotel me dekha tha. Uss lift me. Bilkul!!!!
Veer ki memory sharp thi. Usse bakhubi yaad tha ki ye wahi insaan tha jo uss din lift me tha. Akhir kese Veer usse bhul sakta tha!?
Wo floral shirt... Uss aadmi ke dress up ki sabse eye-catching cheez thi. Jisse aadmi ek nazar me asaani se bhul hi na paaye.
Par sabse bada sawaal tha. Wo akhir yaha kar kya raha tha!? Inn aadmiyo se uska kya lena dena tha?
Dono ki nigaahe ek dusre ko aise scan kar rahi thi jese maano ek dusre ko ladne se pehle parakh rahe ho.
Veer : T-Tum...!!
Aadmi : *smiles*
Veer ke response par wo aadmi kuch nahi bola bas muskuraaya. Par kisi kaaran vash Veer ko uss aadmi ki muskuraahat aur bhi zyaada khatre ke sanket de rahi thi.
Uski bauhe apne aap sikudi... Aur usne firse pucha.
Veer (frowns) : Tum sab kaun!? And you... You were there in the elevator that night.
Aadmi (smiles) : Ohh! Beshaq! Toh mein yaad hu tumhe!? Good! Good! Toh mein bhi apna intro de du. Right!? So... Well! I go by the name of...
Veer (gulps) : ...
Aadmi (smiles) : SLOGAN!!!
Veer (frowns) : Slogan!?
Veer ne usse dekh ek shan bhi waste nahi kiya aur seedhe...
'Check!'
Par...
[You are not eligible to view this person's status.]
Ek aur bada jhatka laga usse.
Saamne khada vyakti jo kareeb 55-60 saal ki umr ka tha par utne ka prateet nahi ho raha tha. Wo muskuraate hue Veer ko aise dekh raha tha jese uski saari chaale jaanta ho.
Veer (frowns) : Ye sab tumhaare aadmi hai!?
Slogan : Bilkul bilkul! Par yaha pe sawaal toh mera hona chaahiye na!? Tum meri gaadi ke saamne aaye aur gaadi roki... Toh zaahir hai ki mere aadmi tumhe dushman hi samjhenge na?
Veer : T-That...
Slogan : Toh kya mein jaan sakta hu? Ek anjaan ladka meri gaadi ko itni raat gaye follow kiya aur fir saamne apni bike rok mere aadmiyo se lada. Ab iss par apne vichaar rakhna chaahoge tum?
'There's something wrong...!!! I can feel it. I cannot say ki mujhe mission mila tha.'
[Ye aadmi mujhe creepy vibes de raha hai Master! Ugh!]
Veer (frowns) : I think... Tum aur tumhaare aadmi kuch illegal kaam kar rahe hai. Gaadi ki window tints itni black kyu hai!? Transparent kyu nahi!? This is illegal.
Veer ne kuch soch ke ye jawaab diya. Kyuki zaahir sii baat thi. Mission tha ki gaadi me andar thehre vyakti ko chot na aaye. Matlab saaf tha, ki gaadi me koi aisa shaks tha jisse harm na pohuch paaye.
Aur ye log gaadi ki window tints ekdum kaali rakhe hue the. Veer inn sab baato ko parakhne ke baad, uska anumaan ek hi jagah par jaa raha tha.
That...
This was a Kidnapping!!!!
And someone was inside....
Zaroor! Zaroor kuch gadbad thi. Warna aisa mission me likh ke nahi aata. Wo bhi warning me likh ke aaya tha.
Pakke se iss aadmi ne kisi ko agvaah kiya hai aur Windows ka yu kaala hona koi ittefaaq nahi tha balki jaan boojh ke unke sheeshe kaale the taaki andar kya ho raha kisi ko bhi kuch pata na chale.
Aur itne aadmi same dress pehne hue!? Zaahir sii baat thi. There was something definitely wrong.
But what was it!???
Aisa kya tha jo sense nahi bana raha tha? Iska jawaab jaan'ne ke liye Veer ko keval uss limousine ke andar dekhna tha aur bas... Saara ka saara sach ek baar me saamne aa jaata.
Slogan : Mein illegal kaam kar raha hu? Ye windows safety purpose ke liye hai. Aur transport department se permission bhi hai mere paas... Toh bhala kyu nahi!?
Veer ki kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha. Kya ye vyakti waqai begunaah tha!? Kya uska hi system behak raha hai!?
Veer : Mujhe andar dekhna hai... Surely! Yadi kuch illegal nahi hai andar toh... You won't mind right!?
Slogan : Ahem!!! Par kyu!? Kyu dekhne du bhala mein? Mein chaahu toh abhi tumhaare khilaaf complaint kar sakta hu... Akhir dekho! Tumne kitne aadmiyo ko maara hai yaha mere...
'This doesn't makes sense at all... Damn ittt!!!!'
[This guy... Master!!!! Iski baato me mat ulajhiye... I can feel it. Ye baato me uljha raha hai.]
'I know it Pari!!'
Veer : Mujhe bas andar dekhna hai. Akhir mein concerned tha aur isliye follow kiya... So yadi koi illegal kaam nahi hai toh... You shouldn't mind right!?
Slogan : Well!!! Thik hai... Have a look...
Aur wo limousine ke darwaze se side hatt gaya aur Veer ko andar dekhne ke liye permission de diya.
Ahista ahista aur satarkta se bhare kadam badhaate hue Veer unn aadmiyo aur uss Slogan ke paas se guzra aur usne jese hi andar jhaak ke dekha...
Toh usse nazar aaya, ek ladki acchi si dress pehne hue baithi hui thi. Kahi se bhi wo aisi nahi lag rahi thi jo kidnapped kii gayi ho.
Veer : ???
Ladki : Hmm!?
Veer : Aapka naam!?
Ladki : Huh!? Why should I tell you? Aur tumhaare hi kaaran car ruki hai na? Tumne hi uncle ke aadmi ko maara na abhi? Get lost okay!? I'm in my way to home...
Par uss ladki ka jawaab sunn Veer toh ekdum hakka bakka reh gaya tha. Ye sab chal kya raha tha!? Akhir system ne usse ye car rokne ke liye kyu kaha!?
Veer : Ma'am! Aap safe hai na!? Aisa toh nahi ki... Ye sabhi aadmi aapko majboor kar kahi le jaa rahe hai!?
Ladki : What the hell? Are you mad or what? Ab iss se pehle ki mein police ko phone karu tum nikal lo yaha se samjhe!? Uncle chaliye na...! Kaafi neend aa rahi hai mujhe.
Veer ko laga tha ki shayad unn aadmiyo ke darr se ye ladki sach chhupa rahi hogi par aisa toh kuch bhi nahi tha. Wo toh poori tarah se normal lag rahi thi. Akhir kya chal raha tha yaha pe!?
Aur isliye ek baar aur confirm karne ke liye, Veer ne wahi kiya...
'Check!'
[Name : Priya
Age : 24
Bio : Priya! Ek xxxxxxx college ki student hai. She loves to go into the parties and dancing. Thodi selfish hai. Paiso ka guroor bhi hai. Priya ke Dad ek rich business man hai.
Favourability : 2
Relationship : Strangers]
Par status padhte hi Veer ko ek aur bada jhatka laga. Ye ladki kisi bhi danger me nahi thi. Everything was completely normal.
Then why this mission!?
Akhir system uss se karwana kya chaah raha tha!? Yu itni raat gaye kisi ki gaadi rokna? What the hell was wrong with this system!?
Veer awkwardly darwaaze se peeche hata.
Slogan (smiles) : Ab yakeen ho gaya!?
Veer : Y-Yeah... Sorry for that...
Slogan : Yadi tumhare intentions galat hote na ladke toh tum bhaari musibat me pad sakte the.
Veer : Y-Yeah!!
Aur Veer waha se bina kuch kahe hi jaane laga. Usse samajhne ke liye ab ekaant mahaul chahiye tha taaki wo samajh sake ki ye sab behanchod hua kya uske saath.
'Pari! Ghar pohuch ke... I need an explanation.'
[Even... I... I don't know master. System ne aisa Mission bhala kyu generate kiya hoga!? Jiska koi matlab hi nahi tha!?]
Par ye baat hamari bechari Pari bhi nahi jaanti thi. Kya waqai system ne ek sahi mission generate kiya tha? Ya ye koi internal malfunction tha system me!?
Jo kuch bhi ho, iska answer jaan'na Veer ke liye boht zaroori tha.
Abhi wo apni bike utha ke key ghuma hi raha tha jab peeche khade unn logo ki kuch awaaz uske kaano me padi.
Ek aadmi Slogan ki taraf muda aur bola,
"Usne sahi kaha tha Dada... Bilkul wesa hi hua. Ye toh jaadu ki tarah hai. Usko kese...!?"
Par iske pehle ki wo kuch keh paata. Slogan ka haath tezzi se ghuma aur ek tamaacha uss aadmi ke gaal par pada. Bechaare ke kaan me seeti bajne lagi itni zorr se wo jhaapad pada tha usse aur agle hi pal wo shaant pad gaya.
Veer ne ek baar fir shanka me unhe peeche mud dekha par fir gaadi chaalu kar wo nikal gaya.
Uske jaane ke baad ab keval Slogan aur uske aadmi hi bache hue the.
Steve, Slogan ka right hand aadmi jo kaafi derr se chup tha aur uske peeche khada hua tha wo aage aaya apne Dada se kuch kehne ke liye par jese hi usne apne Dada ki aag baboola aankhein dekhi toh uske shabd muh me hi reh gaye.
Slogan : Steve!!!
Steve : J-Jii Dada!
Slogan : Taiyaariya kesi chal rahi hai!?
Steve : Sab taiyaar hai Dada!
Slogan : Good!
Slogan andar limousine me baithne jaa hi raha tha jab Steve ne himmat kar puch hi liya.
Steve : D-Dada!!
Slogan : !??
Steve : U-Uss... Uski baat sahi nikli... Bilkul wesa hi hua... Ye sab...!?
Slogan : Aaj tak... Aaj tak iss Slogan ko kabhi koi darra nahi paaya hai Steve. Wo koi chhal kiya hai. Dekh lenge usse bhi.
Aur itna bol wo ghus gaya car me.
Ye sab kya baatein thi jo ye kar rahe the!? Kiske baare me baatein thi ye? Ye keval wahi jaante the.
***
Few Days later...
Uss raat uss ajeeb se mission ke baad, Veer ki life kuch shaant sii thi. Sabse strange baat par uss mission ki hi thi.
Uss raat jab Veer waha se lauta toh ghar pohuchte hi usse notification mil gaya tha.
*Ding*
['Mission : Follow the black limousine and stop it at all costs' has been completed.]
*Ding*
[200 points have been rewarded.]
Ye jese aur bhi bada surprise tha uske liye. Usse uss mission ke baare me toh kuch jaankaari nahi mil paayi par zaroori baat ye thi ki mision complete ho chuka tha aur toh aur...
200 points eksaath.
'Uss raat... Kuch aisi cheez hai Pari... Jisse hum dekh nahi paa rahe hai. I don't think ye system ka koi malfunction hai. Kyuki iss se pehle kabhi system ne aise behave nahi kiya hai.'
[I agree master! Wait I can do something.]
'Kya!?'
[Mein ek diagnostic run maar sakti hu. Uss se pata chal jaega ki system me kahi kuch kharaabi hai ya nahi!]
'Do it right now then!'
Veer ke nirdesh anusaar Pari lag chuki thi apne kaam me. System ko check kar rahi thi. Taaki yadi koi bhi error ho toh saamne aa jaaye.
Par...
[Everything is fine Master. There's nothing wrong!]
'Damn it!!! It doesn't makes any sense. System wanted me to not harm that girl. Iska matlab kahi mujhe keval uss se milwana toh nahi tha!? But she's just a rich girl. Usme koi aisi khaasiyat nahi hai. I don't think that's the case. Wait! Kahi... Wo kisi aise ko jaanti ho? Jis se future me mujhe milwaye wo!? Aur hamari mulaqaat ho? Isliye shayad system ne mujhe usse harm na pohuchaane ke liye kaha!? But no... Akhir milwaane ka matlab kya? Upar se mera pehla impression hi bekaar tha uske liye...'
[Kuch bhi ho master. Aapko ab pehle se zyaada alert rehna padega.]
'Yeahhh! Aur tum level 5 se kitni dur ho?'
[I'm almost there. One more Mission aur mein level 5 pe hehe~]
'Hmm!'
[And you will get surprises then... Hehe~]
'Hmm? Of course! Harr level up pe kuch na kuch internal feature unlock hota hai. Right!?'
[Yeah! Par iss baar aur bhi boht kuch hai. It will be a great surprise!]
'Meri umeede na jagao.'
[I promise Master! You know how much I love you right? Jhooth thodi bolungi.]
'Hmm... Alright! Let's go! Suhana ne business ke baare me discuss karne bulaaya hai. I need to earn money fast. Miss Kaera se milna padega. She's damn good in business.'
[Yesssssss!]
***
Same day...
At Veer's old house...
Raat ka waqt tha. Hall me hi ghar ke mukhiya Manorath viraajmaan the aur ek naukar unke perro me tel laga ke unki maalish kar raha tha.
Ussi hall me maujood couch par dono bhai, Vivek aur Pranjal baithe hue the jo ishaaro hi ishaaro me na jaane kya baatein kiye jaa rahe the.
Brijesh abhi tak ghar nahi lauta tha aur Karunesh bhi. Ghar me Sumitra, Arohi aur Kavya hi maujood thi aurato me.
Bhumika aur Shweta, bole toh Veer ki Sauteli behan aur Maa dono hi apni hotel me thi aur wo aksar raat me saara kaam kaaj waha ka nipta ke hi ghar lautati thi.
Kavya aur Arohi ek hi room me apni baato me lagi thi aur Sumitra ghar ki maid ke saath khaane ki taiyaari kar rahi thi.
Jab Pranjal ko mauka sahi laga toh usne apni baatein rakhna chalu kiya.
Pranjal : Dada jii!
Manorath : Hmm?
Pranjal : Dada jii! Aap akhiri baar hamaari kul devi ke mandir kab gaye the?
Manorath : Hmm? Accha... Beta kayi saal ho gaye.
Pranjal : Ye kya Dada jii!? Naya saal aa raha hai. Aur naye saal ki shuruaat me mere khayaal se aapko udhar jaana chahiye. Mein toh bachpan me gaya tha. Mujhe toh yaad bhi nahi waha ka kuch bhi. Kyu na hum log waha hoke aaye!?
Vivek : Chota sahi keh raha hai Dada jii! Akhir... Itne saal ho haye aapko khud ko gaye. Aur mein toh last time gaya bhi nahi tha. Naye saal ki shuruaat yadi devi jii ke ashirvaad se ho toh kitna badhiya rahega.
Dono ne jab ye baat kahi toh Manorath ko bhi waqai laga ki baat ekdum sahi thi. Jab naye saal me aadmi acche dhan, sukh, samridhhi prapti ki iccha karta hai toh sabse pehle Bhagwaan ko hi yaad karta hai. Aaj Manorath ke paas bhagwan ka diya sab kuch hai. Toh aise me usse apni kul ki devi ka ashirwaad lene waha jaana hi chaahiye aur waha pe bhi kuch karwaana chaahiye.
Manorath : Tum dono ki baat bilkul sahi hai. Waqai! Hume jaana chaahiye...
Pranjal (smiles) : Waqai!?
Manorath (smiles) : Kyu nahi beta!? Bilkul! Hum saparivaar jaenge... Hamaari taraf se mandir me jo kuch bhi ban padega hum karenge aur udhar bhandaare ka aayojan bhi karenge. Naye saal ki ye shuruaat devi jii ke ashirvaad se hi honi chaahiye. Bilkul! Mujhe ye jaan ke behad khushi hui ki aaj ke iss samay me bhi mere pote... Pooja paath se kitna jude hue hai. Wahi tumhaare pita ko dekho... Unn dono bhaiyo ko... Hmph! Subah shaam paisa paisa paisa... Aaj bhojan ke liye late hue toh dekhna kya haal karta hu unka.
Pranjal : Ye hui na baat Dada jii! Bas toh fir tay raha. Hum sabhi 31st ko jaenge aur ek raat wahi theher ke new year mana ke waha se lautenge.
Manorath : Par mujhe ab bhi vishwash nahi hota. Tum dono naya saal manaane ke liye udhar gaav jaane ke liye ready ho gaye!?
Pranjal : Harr saal toh hum hotel ya kahi aur party kar naya saal manaate hi hai na Dada jii? Fir ek saal gaav me jaane se aisa thodi hai ki koi nuksaan ho jaega hamaara? Aur hum toh devi jii ke liye jaa rahe hai. Wo toh jaha bhi viraajmaan ho wo harr bhumi shubh hai.
Pranjal ki baat sunn Manorath ki aankhein namm ho gayi aur wo apna chashma nikaal apni aankhein malne lage.
Manorath : Mere pote kitne samajhdaar hai. Devi jii ki kripa hai sab.
Pranjal : Aur Dada jii...
Manorath : ??
Pranjal : Darasal mene ye request isliye saamne rakhi kyuki... Mein devi jii se ek khwaaish maangna chaahta hu...
Manorath : ??
Pranjal : ki jald se jald Veer aur Tau jii ke beech jo bhi jhagda hai wo khatam ho jaaye aur mera pyaara bhai ghar laut aaye. Mein uska poora khayaal rakhunga. Uske bina ye ghar adhoora hai Dada jii. Mujhe yakeen hai ki devi jii meri baat zaroor sunengi aur Veer aur Tau ji ko dekhna aap ek karwa dengi...
Veer ka zikr hote hi Manorath ekdum shaant pad gaye. Unhe Veer ka hi chehra apne mann me nazar aane laga.
Manorath (mann me) : Mera Veer...
Manorath : Veer ko bhi hum..
Vivek : Wo... Veer Ragini ke saath ruka hua hai Dada jii. Chinta ki koi baat hi nahi hai. Ragini ki saheli bhi uske ghar me hai. Toh aisi koi chinta ki baat hi nahi. Meri bhi yahi khwaish rahegi devi jii se... Ki jald se jald Ragini ghar laut aaye.
Manorath : Isme galti saari tumhaari thi. Hmph! Fir bhi... Devi jii ka naam leke sacche mann se iccha maangna aur Ragini bitiya ke paas jaa kar maafi bhi. Dekhna wo zaroor laut aaegi.
Vivek : J-Jii Dada jii!
Aur Manorath itna bol apni aankhein band kar apne chintan me doob gaye toh wahi Pranjal aur Vivek ek dusre ko dekh rahe the. Na jaane kya vichaar chal rahe the unke mann me.
Kuch boht bada hone waala tha shayad...
***
30th December...
At Night...
Nidhi's House...
Nidhi as usual apne khaana banaane me vyast thi andar kitchen me toh wahi Shreya aur Juhi hall me baithe hue the.
Juhi toh apne T.V me lagi hui thi par Shreya apne hi vichaaro me leen thi.
'Meri job already lag chuki hai. Aur earning bhi theek thaak hai. But still... Hamesha mera dhyaan youtuber bann'ne ke liye jaata hai. I want to do it. But uske liye mere PC ko accha khaasa banaana padega pehle... Uske baad ek accha internet connection. Uske baad hi kuch ho paega. Maybe part time me mein stream kar sakti hu. Yeah! Right! And I can even invite Veer to join my stream... Dheere dheere meri popularity badhti jaegi. People will knowa about me. About Veer too... Ohh it's so romantic. Veer aur mein saath me stream karenge! People will comment about us ki are you both in relationship!? Haha~ We will react to videos together... Play games together. It'll be so...'
"Shreyaaaaaaaaaaa!!!"
Par iske pehle ki Shreya apne mann me bann rahe laddu khaa paati, andar se Nidhi ki awaaz jese usse hosh me laayi.
Shreya : H-Huh!? K-Kya!?
Nidhi : Andar aao thode ye aalu rakhe hai mene cooker me... Inhe peel kar do.
Shreya : Alright!!!
Aaj ghar me aalu ke paraathe bann rahe the jo Shreya ke favourite the. Wo bhi Nidhi ke haatho ke. Toh wo madad karne se peeche kese hatt sakti thi? Akhir Nidhi itne pyaar se uske liye jo bana rahi thi.
Shreya : Dii!
Nidhi : Hmm!?
Shreya : Kal ka kya plan hai!?
Nidhi : Kya!?
Shreya : For god's sake... Dii! Kal saal ka akhiri din hai. Naya saal aane waala hai... Aur aapka koi plan nahi hai?
Nidhi : I-I don't have any... Aur kya naya saal? Harr saal ek jese hi guzarte hai mere... Mere liye koi naya saal nahi hai...
Uski awaaz sunn Shreya ka mann maayus ho gaya. Isme bechari Nidhi ki koi galti nahi thi. Galti thi toh bas uski kismat kii. Par Shreya nahi chaahti thi ki uski behan ka ye saal ka akhiri din itna sadhaaran tareeke se beete...
Usne fatafat aalu peel kiye aur Nidhi ko diye aur wo jhatpat apne phone leke hi kitchen me ghusi aur kisi ko call karne lagi.
Aur jese hi udhar side se kisi ne phone uthaaya toh Shreya ne baat karna shuru kii...
Shreya : Haan hello Veer!??
Aur bas...
Veer ka naam sunte hi Nidhi ek jhatke me palti aur usne Shreya ko dekha. Jese maano puchna chaah rahi ho ki bhala Veer ko kyu call kari thi woh.
Par Shreya ne Nidhi ko dekhne ke bawajood usse ignore kar diya aur apni baatein jaari rakhi.
Shreya : Wo... Kal saal ka akhiri din hai. Toh tumhara kya plan hai!?
Veer : Filhaal toh koi plan...
Shreya : Ohh that's so great toh tumhara koi plan nahi hai!? Wonderful!
Veer : H-Huh!?
Shreya apne baalo ke sath khelte hue Veer se baatein karti jaa rahi thi aur Nidhi ko bhi dekhti jaa rahi thi jo palat palat ke beech me usse dekh rahi thi.
Shreya : Toh tay raha... Tum mein Juhi aur Dii... Hum sabhi raat me celebrate karne chalenge. Okay!?
Veer : ???
Veer toh surprised tha hi par sabse zyaada surprised thi Nidhi kyuki wo ek jhatke me palat gayi.
Veer : Umm... Well... Kya Ma'am ready hoengi? I don't think unke paas time ho...
Shreya : Of course! Dii ready hai! She's all prepared...
Nidhi (shocked) : Shreya tum...
Shreya : Ohh! Lagta hai Dii ko tumse baat karni hai... Ye lo Dii...
Nidhi : W-Wait...!
Aur agle hi pal Shreya ne apne haatho se phone seedha Nidhi ke kaano me laga ke usse thama diya...
Nidhi : ....
Veer : ....
Shreya nahi jaanti thi ki Veer akhiri time Nidhi se jab mila tha toh thappad kha ke gaya tha. Toh aise me iss waqt Nidhi se baat karna kitna awkward tha uske liye ye baat wo nahi jaanti thi.
Aur na keval Veer ke liye balki Nidhi ke liye bhi ye utna hi awkward tha.
Nidhi : ...
Veer : Umm... Hello!?
Veer ki awaaz sunn Nidhi ke honth khule par fir achanak hi band ho gaye. Na jaane kyu wo itna katra rahi thi.
Usne bebas nigaaho se Shreya ko dekha par Shreya toh jese aur encourage kare jaa rahi thi.
Shreya : Kya hua? Aree baat kariye...!
Aur majbooran Nidhi ko muh kholna hi pada.
Nidhi : H-Hello!?
Veer : Hello... Ma'am!! Wo... Shreya jii ne kaha... ki kal ka plan hai... Kuch...
Nidhi : Umm...
Veer : ???
Nidhi : Wo...
Par Nidhi kuch keh paati tabhi baahar washroom se Juhi ki awaaz aayi...
"Maaaasiiiiii.... Sabun khatam ho gaya hai..."
Shreya : Aayi Juhiii....
Aur Shreya agle hi pal baahar nikal gayi.
Ab bache the toh keval Nidhi aur Veer phone pe. Ye atmosphere aur bhi awkward ho chuka tha unn dono ke liye.
Veer : Wo... I'm sorry ma'am. Y-Yadi... Aap mujhse baat nahi karna chaahti then it's okay. Don't worry! Mein yaha se call cut kar deta hu... Shreya jii ko bol dunga network problem thi. It's.. it's totally fine. So...
Nidhi : N...Noooooo!!
Par agle hi pal ek desperation se bhari awaaz Nidhi ke muh se nikli...
Nidhi : A-Aisi koi... koi bhi baat nahi hai.
Veer : I... I see!
Nidhi : ....
Veer : So!? Umm... Aapne mujhe maaf kar diya!?
Nidhi : I... Hmm!
Veer : O-Okay!!! You know... Mere wese koi bhi intentions nahi the ma'am. I... I don't know... I just wanted to hold you.
Nidhi bechaari ye sunte hi... Uski aankhein hairaani ke maare felti chali gayi aur uski saasein bhi lambi hone lagi...
Veer : I mean... Just to give you... Emotional support you know. M-Mera koi bhi galat iraada nahi tha. S-So... I just wanted you to know ki... Mein aapki maayusi sehan nahi kar paata... And I always miss you. Aisa nahi hai ki mein apni Bhabhi ke ghar me hu toh ab mujhe aapke ghar ki yaad nahi aati. I always think of you... I mean... All of you...
Shreya : Ho gayi baat!? Lao do mujhe...
Shreya washroom se aayi aur Nidhi ke haatho se usne phone le liya aur baahar chali gayi.
Bechaara Veer jawaab ke taur par kuch bhi nahi sunn paaya.
Par...
Nidhi na jaane kya soch rahi thi. Par uski nazre ek jagah hi tiki hui thi. Saasein pehle se thodi tezz. Aur unn aankho ke saamne uske baal the jo uske expression ko chhupaaye hue the.
Kya hone waala tha kal!? Inke iss plan me!? Toh wahi Pranjal aur Vivek ke plan me!? Aur saath hi saath... Slogan!!!! Jiski activities Veer ke palle nahi pad rahi thi.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Like maarne ka aur apne thoughts rakhne ka.
Dhanyavaad!
Slogan wahi... Bole toh Dada. Jisne Aatish ko banaaya. Usse sab kuch sikhaaya tha. Wahi hai Slogan. Aur usse hi Kaera chaahiye.Nice update bhai..
Ab yeh slogan kaun hai jiske pichhe veer ka system usko laga raha hai....
Question bahut saare hai...
baat hi uljhaane waali hai bro. Veer ko abhi yahi nahi pata ki Slogan uska Dushman hai. Aur upar se wo usse check bhi nahi kar paa raha. Plus uske against Veer ke paas koi saboot nahi. Toh bhala Veer kese ye maan le ki Slogan ek bura vyakti hai!? Veer Filhaal mission ko leke confused hai. But don't worry... He will find something about it.Amazing Bhai maza aa gya system ne mission diya taki veer apne next target Or dushman ko pehchaan sake par veer yahi ulaz gaya 70 mental power hone ke baad bhi pr dekhna to ye hoga ki kya veer apne dada ji ko pranjal Or vivek ke khatarnaak planning se bachha bhi payega ya nhi or veer or nidhi ma'am ka bhi dekhna hoga age chal kr sab sahi hoga ya baat or bigad jayegi waiting for your next update bro
Nice update...
Superb update
Awesome brother nice update
Nice updates
Nice update bhai ab kiski kismat me kiya likha hai wo to hoke hii rahegi dekhte hai aage kya hota hai
Thank you guys!Superb Update...
Pari ne diagnostic run maara hai system me. Bole toh poora scan kia hai. There's nothing wrong with the system.Kisi ne pari ko hack to nahi kar liya. Hain to pari ek system hi.
Reply WerewolfYe us slogan ko kaise pata chala ki veer ko pata chal jayega. I think ki slogan, veer ke system aur pari ke baare me janta hain. Aur jahir si baat hain veer ek din badhsah banega to kahi ye slogan hi to kahani ka main dushman nahi hain. Ya uska wajir ho.
अब सिस्टम ने ऐसा मिशन क्यों दिया ये तो कोई नही जानता पर इतना जरूर है कि कुछ ना कुछ वीर जल्द ही पता लगाएगा इस बारे में। जी हां स्लोगन कोई छोटा मोटा व्यक्ति नहीं, आखिर यही वो शक्स है जिसने आतिश को बनाया था। निधी और वीर के बीच ये दूरियां तब तक नहीं मिटेंगी जब तक वो दोनो खुद की फीलिंग्स को पूर्ण रूप से एक्सेप्ट नही कर लेते। धन्यवाद मित्र!तो सिस्टम ने मिशन दिया था स्लोगन से मुलाकात के लिए उसके आदमियों से मुक्का लात के जरिए
यह स्लोगन हाई लेवल का विलेन है जिसे वीर स्कैन नहीं कर पाया
प्रंजल और विवेक की अलग खिचड़ी पक रही है
अभी भी निधि और वीर के बीच झिझक की दूरियां है
चलो देखते हैं आगे क्या होता है
बढ़िया अपडेट था बहुत ही जबर्दस्त हमेशा की तरह
Kisi anya ki baat ho rahi hai zaroor.romanchak update ..wo ladki slogan ko uncle keh rahi thi ,aur ye kiski baat kar raha tha steve aur wo aadmi jisko thappad maar diya slogan ne
Hmm! Filhaal Veer ne toh yahi deduce kiya hai.slogan ka data pata nahi kar paayi pari par wahi us ladki priya ka data aasani se mil gaya matlab wo koi khas nahi hai ..
Dono hi kuch na kuch toh zaroor soch ke rakhe hai.pranjal aur vivek kya plan kar rahe hai ye dono hi jaante hai ,kahi veer ko ghar laane kw bahane ragini ko ghar bulana to nahi chahte ya kahi kuch aur plan ho unka .
Kahi na kahi usme bhi bachpana hai jo jhalak jaata hai kabhi kabhi...shreya to apne hi khwabo me doobi huyi thi youtuber banne ke aur veer ke saath stream karne ke ..
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*Thud*
Ek zorrdaar dhakka Veer ki peeth par pada aur wo saamne ki orr girte girte bacha.
"Hahahahaha!!!"
Aur tabhi peeche se kayi logo ki hassne ki awaazein sunayi dii.
Veer ke haath kaanp rahe the. Dhakke ke kaaran uska mobile phone girte girte bacha tha, usne forun hi usse apne kaapte hue haatho me kass ke thaama aur phone ki screen on karke wo contact list me se kisi ka naam dhund ke usne apna phone kaano ki orr badhaaya hi tha ki tabhi...
*Thud*
Ek aur dhakka zorr se uski peeth par pada, par iss baar wo khud ko sambhaal na saka aur saamne ki orr dhadaam se gir pada. Uska phone haatho se chhutak kar kayi tappa khaate hue zameen par jaa gira. Pata nahi sahi salaamat bacha bhi tha uska phone ya nahi.
Veer ne karaahte hue apni nazre upar kari aur dekha. Kareeb 5 se 6 ladke uske saamne khade hue the. Aur unka leader jiska naam Ajay tha wo apni Duke bike par adab ke saath baithe hue uski iss haalat par mazze le raha tha.
Ajay : Hahaha! Kyu be chuze! Bol!? Karega aisi harqat dubaara?
Apne kaapte hue perro ko Veer ne badi hi mushqil se control kiya aur utha.
Akhir uski galti kya thi? Aaj uske apne college me 2nd year ka pehla din tha aur pehle din hi uske saath ye sab ho raha tha?
Shaam ke 7 baj chuke the aur Veer jisse 2 ghante pehle hi apne ghar pohuch jaana chaahiye tha wo yaha 6 se 7 ladko dwaara bully kiya jaa raha tha.
Veer shuru se hi ek kamzor yuvak tha. Usse dekh ke aisa lagta tha maano uski rachna bhagwaan ne badi hi kathorta se kari ho.
Na wo padhayi me hoshiyaar tha, na dikhne me koi boht handsome tha, shareer se bhi kamzor tha, bol chaal me bhi ekdum peeche aur usme koi bhi talent nahi tha. Kul milaake ek bhondu sa insaan.
Apne naam ka ulta hi tha Veer. Veerta naam ki toh koi cheez hi nahi thi usme. Par bechaare usme uski kya galti thi? Wo toh jesa tha, wesa tha. Kya uski iss baat ka fayda uthaana zaroori tha?
Aaj wo yaha college ke peeche ki sunsaan sadko me maujood tha. Wo aana nahi chaahta tha par usse yaha laaya gaya tha.
Saamne khade uske college ke seniors uspe atyachaar karne ke liye usse yaha sunsaan jagah par lae hue the.
Par isme Veer ki galti kya thi?
Uski galti ye thi ki aaj college ke departure ke waqt wo ek khubsoorat senior ladki ko dekh raha tha jo ki laazmi tha. Wo thi hi itni khubsoorat ki koi bhi usse dekh ke apni nazre na hata paata. Wo patli kamar, teekhe nain, bhaari stan, perfect figure aur wo qaatilaana chehra. Kisi ko bhi madhosh kar de.
Par badqismati se Veer jab uss sundar ladki ko taad raha tha, Ajay ne usse aisa karte dekh pakad liya tha.
Aur bas, yahi Veer ki galti thi.
Wo ladki Ajay ki kaafi acchi dost thi jiske peeche Ajay haath dhoke kaafi samay se pada hua tha. Uss ladki ka naam tha Pragya, jo ki Ajay ki classmate thi.
Veer ki nazar ne hi Ajay ko itna gussa dila diya tha ki uska mann kar raha tha ki wo ussi waqt Veer ki aankhein noch le. Akhir himmat kese hui kisi ladke ki uski hone waali gf ko taktaki laga ke dekhne ki.
College me kisi ne bhi aaj tak uske khilaaf jaane ki himmat nahi kii thi. Toh fir akhir iss Veer ki kese himmat ho gayi?
Yahi baat Ajay ko bilkul na khali.
Veer ko yaha laake aaj wo usse accha sabak sikhaane waala tha. Taaki, bhavishya me koi bhi uski Pragya ko ghurne se pehle 100 baar soche.
Ajay (gurraate hue) : Mene kuch pucha tere se chuze. Bol? Karega aisi harqat firse?
Veer bhale hi kamzor tha par wo apne khud ke prati imaandaar zaroor tha. Usse pata tha usne koi galti nahi kii hai. Akhir ek sundar ladki ko yadi aapne kuch seconds dekh liya toh kya wo aapki galti hai? Bilkul bhi nahi! Veer toh keval Pragya ki sundarta ki prashansha kar raha tha mann hi mann.
Isme pitaayi ki baat kaha se aa gayi?
Aur yahi dhyaan me rakhte hue usne Ajay ke sawaal ka koi uttar nahi diya. Wo bas chup chaap apna nichla honth daanto se dabaaye hue sar jhukae khada raha. Uski mutthi zorr se kassi hui thi.
Ajay : Ye aise nahi maanega. Dose do saale ko.
Uski baat sunn uske saare saathi Veer ki taraf badhne lage. Jese jese Veer peeche jaata, wese wese wo aur kareeb aate.
Aur kuch pal ke andar hi Veer ab 6 logo se ghira hua tha. Iske pehle ki wo kuch keh paata, unn 6 ke 6 laundo ne Veer pe mukke aur laate barsaana shuru kar dii.
"Aaarghhhhhhh"
Veer ki karaahne ki awaaz sunsaan road me gunj rahi thi par na toh koi sunn'ne wala tha aur na hi koi madad karne waala. Wo ladke rukne ka naam nahi le rahe the.
Koi uske pait me maarta toh koi uske gaal pe, koi peeth pe vaar karta toh koi uski pasli pe. Aur harr ek hamle par Veer ke muh se ek dard bhari cheenkh nikal jaati jo uss sunsaan sadak ki shaanti ko jhanjhor kar rakh deti. Dekhte hi dekhte kuch hi palo me wo ab neeche gir chuka tha.
Usne apne haatho se apna sar bachaaya aur perr sikode par ladko ko toh jese farq hi nahi padna tha.
Apni laate uthaate hue unn sabhi ne uspe itne vaar kiye ki uske maathe aur hontho se khoon behne laga.
Jab Ajay ne qareeb aake wo laal khoon dekha toh usse andar hi andar ek sukoon sa mila. Jese uska gussa kuch hadd tak shaant ho gaya tha. Usne forun hi apne pantaro ko rok diya.
Apni laat uthaate hue usne apna joota Veer ke sar par rakh diya.
Ajay : Samajh aaya chuze? Yadi tune itna keh diya hota ki ahinda se tu aisi harqat nahi karega toh tere saath ye sab nahi hota.
Veer ne koi jawaab nahi diya. Wo bas apni jese tese adhkhuli aankho se Ajay ko ghur raha tha.
Ajay : Par tujhe bann'na tha hero. Hai na? Toh lo fir! Ab banke dikha hero. Kaan khol ke sunn le chuze, ahinda se tu yadi mujhe galti se bhi Pragya ke aas paas bhi dikha na toh teri gaand tod ke rakh dunga. Samjha behanchod?
Kehte hue Ajay ne apne perr ka bhaar badhaate hue Veer ka chehra masal diya jiske chalte uski ek aur cheenkh nikal gayi.
Ajay : Aulelelele bacche ko dard ho raha hai? Ruko abhi dard dur kar deta hu. Zara wo lollipop toh laana. Dekho idhar ek baccha ro raha hai.
Aur uski baat sunn sabhi ladke zorr zorr se thahaake lagaane lage.
Unn ladko me se ek ne apna bag khola aur ek lollipop nikaalte hue Ajay ko thama dii.
Ajay ne forun hi lollipop ka wrapper khola aur Veer ki taraf neeche jhuk gaya.
Ajay : Tujhe pata hai mein ye lollipop leke kyu ghumta hu hamesha? Taaki tujh jese bacche jab udham karne lagte hai na toh unki aqal thikaane laga saku.
Itna bol wo lollipop zorr se Veer ke muh me ghusa dii jiske chalte ek aur karaah Veer ke muh se nikli.
Ajay : Par fir bacche rone lag jaate hai toh akhir bade hone ke naate mera farz bhi toh banta hai na? Ki mein unhe chup karwau? Isliye uske liye ye lollipop. Ab acche bacche ki tarah ye lollipop chuso aur apne ghar ki orr nikal lena. Samjha?
Usne Veer ka gaal thap thapaaya aur jaane ke liye uth khada hua par jaane se pehle wo ek baar aur peeche muda aur Veer ko dekha.
Ajay : Police ya ghar me kuch bhi bataane ki koshish karna bhi mat chuze. Baad me tu hi pachtaega nahi toh. Infact, kisi ke saamne bhi muh mat kholna.
Ladka 1 : Ajay bhai halki bunda baandi shuru ho gayi hai, hume nikalna chahiye.
Uske ek dost ne jataaya toh Ajay ne bhi haa me gardan hilaayi.
Aur Ajay samet sabhi ladke apni apni bike par sawaar hue par tabhi Ajay ko kuch sujha aur wo apni bike neeche pade Veer ke ird gird ghumaane laga aur uske dost bhi yahi karne lage.
*Crack*
Veer ne zorr se uss lollipop ka apne daanto se katra. Uski aankhein gusse se laal thi par wo kuch bhi nahi kar sakta tha. Ladke uske ird gird bike ko ghuma rahe the aur agle hi pal Ajay ne uski orr thuka jiske chalte wo thook seedha jaate hue Veer ki shirt par gira.
"Hahahahaha"
*Vroom* *Vroom*
Hasste hue Ajay apni toli ke saath, bike par sawaar waha se nikal gaya. Aur uss sunsaan jagah pe ab keval Veer hi akela pada hua tha.
Bijli kadki aur tezz baarish shuru ho gayi. Yahi Veer ki kismat thi. Ab toh uske kapde bhi bheeg jaane the. Par baarish se ek baat acchi hui. Wo ye ki Veer ki shirt me gira Ajay ka thook dhul gaya.
*Thuu*
Lollipop ko zorr se thukte hue Veer khada hua toh wo ladkhada gaya aur girte girte bacha. Harr jagah itna dard tha ki pucho mat. Baarish tezz ho chuki thi aur wo langdaate hue apni scooty ke paas jese tese pohucha aur seat par tik ke baith gaya.
Baarish ke pani se uske maathe se nikal raha khoon bhi saaf hone laga tha. Usne apna phone uthaate hue apne jeb me daal liya. Pata nahi zinda bhi tha uska phone ya nahi, kyuki screen ki light abhi tak jal rahi thi.
Par Veer ko toh jese kuch farq hi nahi padna tha. Wo haafte hue bas baitha sadak ko ghur raha tha jaha abhi wo kuch derr pehle buri tarah laato aur ghuso ka shikaar hua tha.
Ab toh usme apni muthhi kassne tak ke liye dum nahi bacha tha. Kya kismat dii thi bhagwaan ne usse.
Aaj pehla din aur uske saath ye vyavhaar hua. Upar se tab, jab uski koi galti bhi nahi thi. Kya ek khubsoorat ladki ko dekhna gunaah tha? Jab uss ladki ne usse kuch nahi kaha toh bhala ye Ajay kon hota tha uske saath aisa suluk karne waala?
Na chaahte hue bhi Veer ki rulaayi chhuuth padi. Aur wo bina koi awaaz kiye zorr zorr se rone laga. Shareer poora bheeg chuka tha uska. Aur baarish ki boonde jese hi uske ghaavo par padti usse aur zyada dard deti.
Rote rote Veer ne apni scooty uthayi aur ghar ki taraf chal diya. Usse hi pata tha ki wo kitni mushqil se iss waqt scooty ko chala raha tha. Uske jeb me uska phone abhi bhi contact list show kar raha tha.
Shayad girne ke kaaran phone ki screen ek jagah jaa ke atak chuki thi. Uss contact list me uska koi bhi dost nahi tha. School me bhi uske dost nahi the aur aaj bhi college me wo akela hi baitha hua tha. Contact list me keval 3 hi naam the. Ek uske pita Brijesh ka, ek uski chachi Sumitra ka aur ek uski choti behan Kavya ka.
Jinhe call karne ki Veer uss waqt acting kar raha tha. Jii haa! Acting kar raha tha. Kyuki Veer jaanta tha, Brijesh ko pata chalega toh wo ulta aur maarega hi usse. Sumitra aur Kavya isme kuch nahi kar sakti thi. Rahi baat baaki family members ki toh unke numbers the hi nahi uske phone me.
Uske gharwaale uski madad bilkul na karte.
Akhir kyu?
Kyuki yahi toh uska parivaar tha. Keval naam ka parivaar tha baaki uski ghar me kya hi izzat thi wo bhali bhaati jaanta tha.
Ab tak usse ghar se nikaala nahi gaya tha yahi baat kaafi thi.
Usse itna prataadit kiya jaata tha ki pucho mat. Pata nahi kese wo unn sab ke beech itne saal tak jee liya.
Yadi koi aur hota toh gusse me khud hi bhaag gaya hota ya ab tak trast aa chuka hota aur na jaane kya kar liya hota. Par Veer chup chaap sab kuch sehta tha.
Kyuki usse pata tha ki virodh karne ka koi fayda nahi tha. Aur yadi wo jaata bhi toh kaha jaata? Wo 20 saal ka hi tha aur abhi toh usne college ki duniya bhi thik se nahi dekhi thi.
Par aaj jo hua uss se Veer ko itna toh samajh aa gaya tha ki college ki life ke bache hue baaki 3 saal uski school life se kayi guna battar hone waale the.
Veer tezz raftaar me gaadi chalaaye jaa raha tha. Baarish aur aasuo ke kaaran uski aankein dhundhli ho chali thi. Gaadiyo ki headlights ki roshni kisi jugnu ke prakaar uski aankho me aati aur jaati.
Kuch derr pehle hui ghatna uske imaan, uske gaurav, uski izzat ko chhalli kar ke uske dimaag me ghum rahi thi.
Par wo ruka nahi. Yu aasu bahaate hue wo apne ghar ki orr gaadi badhaata raha jo ab bas kuch hi dur tha.
'Badla toh mein lunga. I'll make them pay. Chun chun ke... Ek ek se chun chun ke badla lunga.'
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Kahani shuru ho chuki hai.
Ab se mein aur aap iss kahani ka safar saath me tay karenge aur isse ant tak pohuchaenge.
Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!
Very nice fantastic update waiting for next
Awesome as always. Lagta hai maa se milne ka waqt aur avsar dono aa gaya hai.
Shandar update bhai
Awesome superb and mindblowing update Bhai..
Awesome Update
Awesome Update bhai Waiting for Next Update Eagerly...
Dhanyavaad guys!Nice.... Update bhai update jaldi diya karo
Ye update boht important update tha. Isse bhulna matउम्मीद के मुताबिक बेहतरीन अपडेट
संभव है कि भविष्य में वीर को स्लोगन से बचाने मे प्रिया का अहम रोल हो सकता है।
विवेक और प्रांजल दादाजी की नजर मे अच्छे और लायक बनने की पूरी कोशिश करेंगे,
वीर का निधि श्रेया और जूही के साथ का हर अपडेट बहुत प्यार भरा होता है,
उम्मीद है अगला अपडेट और भी मजेदार होगा।