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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

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  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 27 1.7%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 207 13.0%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 35 2.2%

  • Total voters
    1,589

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Update will come tomorrow brother! (◔‿◔)
The schedule is of alternate days.
Yesterday I posted update 10. So, today there won't be any update.
Tomorrow!! ( ꈍᴗꈍ)
 

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Update -10 ~ Almost Died

Ab tak...

Mujhe ek phone jald hi lena padega.'

Sochte hue usne uss ladki ko apni peeth par utha liya.

Par wo ye nahi jaanta tha ki neeche kya ghatna ghatit hui hai.

Ab aage...


Jab Veer uss ladki ke saath uss room me pravesh kiya tha tab usse nahi pata tha ki neeche kya chal raha tha. Wo unn sabhi baato se anbhigya tha.

Uss waqt Raghu aur Jassi, uss ladki ke dono bodyguard club ke baahar hi neeche khade hue the.

Dono waqai boht wafadaar the. Aur apni duty ke prati poori tarah se samarpit the. Yahi kaaran hai ki wo apni Miss ko yu akela uss Club me chorr baahar nahi aana chaahte the.

"Jassi! Miss theek toh hongi na? Sirf tere kehne pe hi baahar aaya hu mein. Warna Miss ko aise akela nahi chorrta mein. Yadi unhe kuch hua na toh bade maalik ko mein jawaab nahi dene waala."

Raghu ne thoda bechain hote hue kaha. Usse ye darr sataa raha tha ki kahi unki Miss ko kuch ho na jaaye. Warna kya muh dikhaenge wo apne bade maalik ko?

"Tum tension mat lo. Mere hote hue Miss ko kuch nahi hoga. Infact, mein unpe ek kharoch tak nahi aane dunga. Kisi ki himmat hai jo Miss ko chhu ke dikha sake?"

Jassi ne apni chhaathi thap thapaate hue kaha.

Par usse kya pata tha ki jis Miss ki wo baat kar raha tha ki koi unhe chhu tak nahi sakta, ussi waqt upar Veer unki Miss ki choot me lund daale dhakke pel raha tha.

Vidambna dekho!

Raghu aur Jassi dono hi ekdum hatte katte bodybuilder the aur fight lene me ekdum aage. Jaha Raghu judo seekha hua tha toh wahi Jassi karate me black belt tha.

Kisi ki himmat hai jo unn dono ke hote hue unki Miss ko koi haath bhi laga sake?

Siwae Veer ke...

Abhi wo dono aapas me yu hi baat kar rahe the ki kuch derr baad hi unhe ek teevr awaaz sunaayi padi...

*Bang*

Aur awaaz sunte hi dono ke hi aankhein phail gayi.
Awaaz andar se aayi thi, aur andar hi unki Miss thi.

Aur iss awaaz ko dono hi badi acchi tareeke se pehchaante the. Ek gun shot ki awaaz.

Dono ne ek dusre ki taraf dekha aur agle hi pal dono apni poori gati ke saath bhaagte hue andar pohuche...

Andar pohuchte hi unhone jo dekha toh unke hosh hi udd gaye.

Jis baat ka darr tha, wahi hua.

Andar chaaro taraf afra tafri machi hui thi. Shor aur cheekho se club me uthal puthal fel gayi

Log darr ke maare ghabraaye hue dubak ke baithe hue the toh kuch sofe ke neeche chhupe hue the.

Aur saamne do aadmi revolver liye khade hue the. Unhi me se kisi ek ne goli chalaayi thi lagta.

Raghu aur Jassi ke andar aate hi unn do aadmiyo ki nazre unn par gayi.

Aur unhe dekhte hi woh aadmi chaukanne ho gaye.

Forun hi unpe revolver taan wo unn dono ko surrender karne kehne lage. Aur yahi hua bhi.

Raghu aur Jassi dono ko hi apne haath khade karne pade. Tanaav unke chehre par saaf nazar aa raha tha. Kyuki na toh unhe unki Miss kahi dikhaayi de rahi thi aur na hi aisi sthiti me wo unhe dhundne jaa sakte the.

Paseene ki boonde dono ke chehro par saji hui thi. Aur andar se dono ghabraaye bhi hue the.

Kya unki Miss sahi salaamat hongi ya nahi? Kahi unhe kuch hua toh nahi hoga na?

Aise aneko sawaal se unke mann me uthal puthal machi hui thi.

Raghu (dheemi awaaz me) : Jassi! Ye uske hi aadmi lag rahe hai.

Jassi : Hmmm!

Raghu : Hume jald hi kuch karna hoga. Dekho! Miss waha baithi hui thi par wo nahi hai ab waha. Na jaane kidhar gayi hai.

Jassi : Shayad wo upar hongi...

Raghu : Upar? Aise me toh... Yadi uske aadmi upar pohuch gaye toh dikkat ho jaegi Jassi! Jaldi, kuch karna hoga...

Raghu ki awaaz me chinta aur ghabraahat thi.

Wo jaanta tha ki yadi galti se bhi Miss ko kuch hua, toh bade maalik na jaane kya kar denge.

Raghu : Kya kehte ho Jassi? Mein... Shoot karu?

Jassi : Nahi!!!

Unn dono ke paas bhi revolvers the. Par ye baat wo do aadmi abhi nahi jaante the. Unhe laga tha ye do club ke bodyguards honge aur ye soch wo dono bas unhe surrender karne ke liye kehne lage.

Raghu : Shayad ye dono hume nahi pehchaante Jassi. Toh kya ye dono uske aadmi nahi hai?

Jassi : Ya toh ye dono naye hai ya fir jesa ki tumne kaha, ki ye dono uske aadmi nahi hai.

Raghu aur Jassi kis aadmi ki baat kar rahe the, ye toh wahi dono jaante the. Par inki khuspusaahat unn do aadmiyo ko kuch raas na aayi.

Aadmi : Ayyyee! Tum dono... Yadi ek bhi awaaz aayi na ab, toh seedha udaa dunga.

Dono ko baat karte dekh unn do aadmiyo me se ek bola.

Bhale hi Raghu aur Jassi ko uski baat se asar na hua ho par aam janta ko zaroor hua tha. Kaapte hue wo sabhi neeche dubke pade the.

Disco lights jal zaroor rahi thi club me par disco jesa koi mahaul nahi tha waha.

Jaha thodi derr pehle maze kiye jaa rahe the, khaan paan ho raha tha, naach gaana chal raha tha wahi jagah ab ekdum se shaant sii pad gayi thi.

Ye darr tha logo ka apni jaan khone ke prati. Bhala kise apni jaan pyaari nahi rehti?

Raghu : Iski toh...

Jassi : Shhh! Shaant!

Abhi Jassi Raghu ko shaant rehne ke liye hidaayat de hi raha tha ki tabhi...

*Bang*

Ek aur gunshot ki awaaz aayi...
Iss baar ye awaaz upar se aayi thi.
Aur ye awaaz sunte hi dono ka hi shareer sihar utha.

Upar unki Miss ho sakti thi. Kahi ye gunshot!?

Sochte hi dono ekdum ghabra gaye...

Raghu : Tumne suna na Jassi? Wo upar pohuch gaye hai. Ab toh mein daawe ke saath keh sakta hu ye uske hi aadmi hai.

Jassi ne bina kuch bole hi dheere se sar apna haa me hilaaya. Iss waqt wo khud kaafi ghabraaya hua tha. Usse apni jaan ki parvaah nahi thi. Parvaah thi ki kahi unki Miss ko kuch ho na jaaye.

Raghu : Isliye!! Isliye mein keh raha tha ki Miss ko akela nahi chorrna chaahiye... Ab dekha na...

Jassi : Ye samay unn sab baato ka nahi hai Raghu...

Raghu : Fine....!! Ab bas aur nahi! Jassi! Mein shoot kar raha hu. Tum dusre waale ko shoot karna... Perr thik?

Jassi : Thik!

Haami bharte hue iss baar Jassi bhi Raghu ki baat se sehmat ho gaya. Dono hi ek dusre ka ishaara samajh gaye the.

Aur agle hi pal...

Palak jhapakte hi dono ne apni pant ke peeche khuse revolver ek jhatke me nikaale aur...

*Bang*

*Bang*

Dono ne revolver ka trigger dabaate hue seedha prahaar unn do aadmiyo ke perro par kiya.

Achaanak se huye iss hamle ki unn aadmiyo ko na hi umeed thi aur na hi wo iske liye taiyaar the. Aur nateeja wahi...

Bullets unki chamdi ko phaadte hue unke perro ke andar sama gayi aur tezz cheenkh ke saath dono wahi gir pade...

Keval wahi nahi, waha maujood baaki sabhi janta bhi cheenkhne lagi. Shor machaate hue wo apni jaan ki guhaar lagaane lage.

Darr ke maare unke shareer kaanp rahe the. Par agle hi pal jese unki muraad puri ho gayi,

Raghu : Jao! Niklo fatafat... Baithe kya ho... Bhaago!!

Ye baat sunn jese logo ki jaan me jaan aa gayi. Aur kisi ne bhi ek shan nahi gawaaya waha se bhaagne me.

Girte padte wo hadbadi me forun hi baahar ki orr bhaage. Na hi unn ne palat ke peeche dekha aur na hi iss baat ki chinta kari ki kahi woh koi samaan bhul toh nahi rahe andar?

Iss waqt logo ke mann me jo tha, wo tha apni jaan bachaana. Jo ki sahi bhi tha.

Aur pal bhar me saari janta waha se bhaag gayi.

"Phew!!"

Saas lete hue Raghu aage badha jaha Jassi tha. Jassi ne unn do aadmiyo ke girte hi unke revolvers hathiya liye the.

Ab keval wo do aadmi, Raghu, Jassi, aur club ka manager hi neeche bache hue the.

Jassi : Tum!! Idhar aao!!

Jassi ne forun hi manager ko bulaaya. Wo bechaara darrte hue dheere dheere aage aaya.

Jaasi : Dekho! Ambulance bulao aur inko bhijwao par dhyaan rahe... Yadi koi bhi tumse jaankaari le toh tum yahi kahoge ki tumne kuch nahi dekha. Kehna ki tum darr ke maare chhupe hue the. Aur iss kaaran tum kuch bhi nahi dekh paaye. Theek?

Manager ne sehme hue haa me gardan hilaayi aur dono , Raghu Jassi upar ki orr jaane lage.

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Jab Raghu aur Jassi neeche unn halaato me phasse hue the tab Veer ke saath upar kuch aur hi kathin paristhiti bani hui thi.

Jab wo ladki ko kapde pehna kar usse apni peeth par taange baahar nikal raha tha.

Darwaaza kholte hi usse ek zorr ka jhatka laga...

Jese hi usne darwaaza khol ke mundi apni daayi taraf corridor me daali toh usne dekha...

Kareeb 4 se 6 aadmi teezi se seedhiyo se upar aaye aur harr ek ke haath me ek revolver tha.

Sab ke sab upar tezz kadmo ke saath aaye aur unke haatho me gun dekhte hi waha baithe counter pe aadmi ki hawa tight ho gayi.

Ye wahi aadmi tha jo rooms deta tha.

Veer ne dekha ki wo sabhi aadmi aaye aur ek ne uss counter waale aadmi ki collor pakad ke usse hilaane laga aur kuch puchne laga.

Veer ka room stairs se dur tha jis kaaran usse kuch bhi sunaayi na diya. Aur fir wo hua jisse dekh uske perr ladkhadaane lage.

*Bang*

Ek aadmi ne counter ke upar lage cctv camera ko ek jhatke me uda diya.

Ye wahi awaaz thi jo Raghu aur Jassi ko neeche sunaayi padi thi.

Aur uske baad toh jese afra tafri mach gayi...

Unn aadmiyo ne aage badh rooms ke darwaaze todte hue thok peet ke khole aur andar se couples ghabraate hue baahar aake hahakaar machaane lage. Cheenkhne lage, chillaane lage...

Kuch toh adhnangi awastha me the...

Veer ko pehle laga tha ki ye koi police ki raid thi shayad par uska wo vichaar saamne iss drashya ko dekh udd chuka tha.

Aur keval yahi bas nahi tha. Abhi jese usse jhatke pe jhatke lagna baaki the.

Apne perr aadhe khule darwaaze ke peeche jamaaye usne apna sar nikaal daayi orr nazar maarte hue dekha ki koi upar aa raha hai wahi seedhiyo se.

Aur tabhi Veer ko ek mouth organ ki dhwani sunaayi dii.

Seedhiyo se upar ahista ahista aate hue ek insaan dikhaayi diya.

Safed hat, safed pant, safed coat, andar ek laal shirt aur coat ki breast pocket me ek gulaab ka phool.

Kuch iss prakaar ki dress pehne woh aadmi apne ek haath se mouth organ baja raha tha aur dusre haath me wo ek hockey ki stick liya hua tha.

Jaha budhe buzurg laathi ka istemaal karte the chalne ke liye wahi ye aadmi laathi ki jagah hockey stick ka istemaal kar raha tha.

Aur usse dekhte hi Veer ke badan me ek siharan se mach gayi. Uska shareer kaap utha.

Usse dekh ke utna darr nahi lag raha tha, jitna uske mouth organ ki wo dhwani sunn kar lag raha tha.

Upar se wo hockey ke sahaare chalne ka dhang.

Apna thook nigalte hue Veer kuch soch hi raha tha ki tabhi uske saamne wo hua jiske chalte uska dimaag kaam karna hi band kar diya.

Uss safed coat waale aadmi ne apni dhwani bajaana band kari aur, counter pe baithe aadmi ko dekh wo uss se pucha.

Aadmi : Kesa tha? Pasand nahi aaya na?

Aur wo counter waale aadmi ne darr ke maare na me sarr hila diya.

Ye sawaal hi aisa tha. Yadi wo puchta ki kesa laga? Toh beshaq wo counter waala banda haa me hi sar hilaata. Ye sawaal usse phassaane ke liye hi pucha gaya tha.

Aur jese hi usne apna sar naa me hilaaya. Uske agle second hi usse apne jeevan ka sabse bada pachtaava hua.

Kyuki agle hi pal uss safed coat pehne aadmi ne badi hi shaitaani si muskuraahat dii aur dheere se apna mouth organ apne jeb me rakha.

Fir peeche se ek pistol nikaali aur bina koi samay gavaaye hi seedhe uss counter waale ki khopdi udaa dii...

*Bang*

Bullet khopdi me ghusi, aur kaam tamaam...
Khoon ke chheete yu nikalte hue zameen par bikhar gaye...

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa...."

Aur corridor me firse kohraam mach gaya. Cheenkhe goonjne lagi...

Aadmi : Mujhe bilkul bhi pasand nahi hai jab koi meri bajaayi gayi dhunn ka mazaak udaaye...

Ye nazaara dekh log toh bhaybheet the hi par jo sabse zyaada bhaybheet tha wo tha Veer.

Uske perr kaanp rahe the. Wo na hi aage badh paa raha tha na hi peeche jaa paa raha tha. Darwaaze ke kaaran uska shareer chhupa hua tha. Keval mundi hi baahar thi.

Aur uski samajh me kuch bhi nahi aa raha tha.

Kuch aaye samajh me ya na aaye par ek baat wo bhali bhaati jaanta tha...

Aur wo ye ki wo ye drashya kabhi nahi bhul paega...
Na hi uss safed coat waale aadmi ko...
Aur na hi uss dhwani ko...

Uski pakad paseene ke maare ladki par se chhuth rahi thi. Par uske bawajood wo apne mann me ek sankalp liye usse apni peeth par laada raha.

Yadi wo chaahta, toh issi shan ladki ko room me chorr apni jaan bacha ke bhaag sakta tha par usne aisa nahi kiya.

Kaaran?

Kaaran tha wo ladki... Uss ladki ke kaaran hi wo Pari ko khote khote bacha tha.

Ussi ladki ke kaaran aaj wo ek ladke se mard ban chuka tha.

Aur sabse badi baat...

Usne uss ladki ke saath ye sab uske nashe me kiya tha. Glaani ke bhaav toh zaroor the Veer ke mann me. Toh bhala kese wo aise me usse yu chorr bhaag sakta tha?

Club me upar jaane ke liye do raaste the. Ek tha daayi taraf jaha se Veer khud aaya tha aur jaha se abhi ye aadmi log aa rahe the.

Aur ek tha uski baayi taraf.

Zaahir sii baat thi, ki Veer baayi taraf ka raasta hi chunn ne waala tha.

Kyuki daayi taraf jaana toh khud ki maut ko aamantran dena tha.

Ye decide karte hi wo kisi bhi waqt bas mauka dekh ke bhaagne ka wait karne laga.

Tabhi uss aadmi ne apne chelo se bola,
"Yahi kahi hogi! Kisi room me! Saare check karo!"

Aur bas...

Sabhi shuru ho gaye...

Ek baar firse afra tafri mach gayi...

Aur corridor me logo ke idhar udhar hone se bheed sii mach gayi. Jab Veer ne dekha ki uske saamne aur agal bagal ke rooms se log nikal rahe hai aur bhaag rahe hai, toh yahi mauka dekh wo forun hi tezz kadmo ke saath baayi orr bhaaga jaha neeche jaane ke liye seedhiya thi.

Ab ya toh isse kismat kahe, ya ittefaaq par Veer unn admiyo ki nazro se bachne me safal tha.

Par ek musibaat tali nahi, dusri uske saamne thi.

Neeche jaati seedhiyo par pehle se hi ek aadmi revolver liye khada hua tha.

Aur jese hi usne Veer ko neeche aate dekha, usne forun hi apni gun Veer par taan dii...

Aadmi : Ayyeee...?! Neeche... Neeche rakh ladki ko...

Veer : K... Kyu??

Aadmi : Sawaal jawaab karta hai saale? Neeche rakh! Aur chup chaap yaha se nikal le warna bheja udaa dunga samjha?

Iss se pehle Veer kuch keh paata, uski nazar neeche se aate Raghu aur Jassi par gayi...

Uss aadmi ka chehra Veer ki taraf tha toh usse nahi pata tha ki uske peeche se kaun aa raha hai.

Aur idhar apni Miss ko Veer ki peeth par dekh Raghu ekdum bhadak utha. Wo ye soch raha tha ki Veer ne uski Miss ko kidnap kiya hai.

Par Jassi ke mann me kuch aur hi tha.

Ek jhalak me hi usne bhaanp liya tha ki maajra kya hai.

Aur iss se pehle ki Raghu koi galat kadam uthaata, Jassi ne uska haath thaam liya.

Jassi ke aisa karte hi Raghu ki bhi fir samajh aa gaya ki baat kya thi.

Aur ishaaro hi ishaaro me baat karte hue Raghu aur Jassi peeche se uss aadmi par toot pade...

Par hamla hote hi uske haatho me gun ka trigger dab gaya...

Aur bullet nikal ke theek Veer ke kaano se thodi dur se guzarte hue peeche diwaar me sama gayi.

Tackle karte hue Raghu ne uss aadmi ko daboch liya aur gardan pe waar kar usse behosh kar diya.

Jassi ne forun aage badh Veer ki peeth se apni Miss ko thaama...

Veer : Wo... Wo... Ek safed coat aur safed pant me ek aadmi... Shayad inhe hi dhund raha hai...

Usne kaapte hue kaha toh Jassi ne agle hi pal Raghu ko dekha...

Raghu ko pata tha usse kya karna hai...

Usse gaadi nikaalne ko keh raha tha Jassi...

'Ye wahi hai... Damn it!!!'

Mann me soch Jassi ne ek aakhiri nazar Veer par daali aur bola,
"Thanks! I'll remember this... I hope tum yaha se safely nikal jaoge."

Aur bina fir peeche mude wo tezz kadmo ke saath neeche bhaag gaya.

Veer waha khade khade sab kuch dekhta raha.

Usne dekha saamne wo aadmi jisne gun chalaayi thi wo behosh dala hua tha.

Usne palat ke dekha jaha deewaar par bullet se hole ho chuka tha.

Aur ye dekh uske shareer ke ruye khade ho gaye...

'I... I almost died!!'
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!

Dhanyavaad!!
shandaar superbb jabardast update bro
 
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Great update Werewolf bhai.
Ab story pace pakad rahi he achha he. Udhar Nidhi bhi pareshan he veer ke liye aur shreya gussa. Idhar to scene hi alag hi chal raha he. Uss ladki ko marne ya kidnap karne wo log aaye honge.
Ajib baat ye he veer ka uss mouth organ ki tunes ko pahechanna.
Veer ki past life se jarur kuch na kuch juda hua he.🤔
Achha suspense banaya he bhai aapne.
Veer ne ye achha kiya ladki ko sahi salamat bacha liya. Ab jab phir se mulakaat hongi tab majha aayega.
Vese ye pari( system) to sleep mode me he to abhi jo veer ne uss ladki ki jaan bachai uske kuch points milenge kya ?🤔
Waiting for next update 🙏🏻.
 

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Thanks Werewolf bro. for new story and after reading all the given updates I can say that it is one of the interesting and unique story of this forum. Werewolf bro. I know the Japanese manga culture and stories, you have created similar concept here and I am loving it
Thanks a lot brother!
Welcome to the thread.
Yes! Kisi na yaha ye plot setting introduce nahi kii thi, toh socha kyu na iski shuruaat kii jaaye.
Ab jab aage koi system se related kahani likhega...toh hamaara tag use karega... Naye tag ki shuruaat kar dii h hmne ( ꈍᴗꈍ)
 

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Introduction :


Characters ke baare me zyaada kuch nahi bataunga. Aap khud unke baare me padh ke unhe jaaniyega. Ek chota sa intro de raha hu taaki relationship samajh aa sake aapko.

1. Veer (age - 20 yrs) : Kahani ka Main character.

2. Manorath (age - 80 yrs) : Veer ke Dada jii. Paramparao aur anusaashan ko boht maante hai. Ghar me jo sabse anusaashit hai aur buddhimatta se bharpoor hai ussi ko ye mehatv dete hai. Inke 2 petrol pump the jo inhone apne baccho me baant diye.

3. Brijesh (age -56 yrs) : Veer ke Dad, Manorath ka bada ladka. Ek petrol pump ka maalik hai. Uske alaawa ek luxury hotel hai jisse uski patni sambhaalti hai.

4. Shweta (age - 47 yrs) : Veer ki sauteli Maa (Step-mom), Brijesh ki dusri patni. Shweta kahi se bhi 47 ki prateet nahi hoti. Ye Brijesh dwara banwai gayi hotel ki maalkin hai aur usse apni beti ke saath sambhaalti hai.



5. Bhumika (age - 25 yrs) : Shweta aur uske pehle pati ki eklauti beti, Veer ki Step-sister. B.com aur hotel management ka course karne ke baad ab apni Maa ke saath hotel sambhaalti hai.




6. Karunesh (age - 55 yrs) : Manorath ka dusra beta, Veer ke chacha. Brijesh ka chota bhai hai aur saath hi uss dusre petrol pump ka maalik.

7. Sumitra (age - 49 yrs) : Karunesh ki patni, Veer ki chachi. Gadrayi hui hai par moti kahi se bhi nahi. Badi badi chhuchiya, gori makhmali twacha, nain naksh jo madhosh kar de.



8. Vivek (age - 28 yrs) : Karunesh aur Sumitra ka bada beta. Karunesh ne Vivek pe kaafi paisa kharch kiya hai jiske chalte aaj Vivek ki khud ki ek automobiles ki company hai.

9. Ragini (age - 27 yrs) : Vivek ki patni, Veer ki Bhabhi. Qayaamat hai ekdum Ragini. Ek aisi ladki jisse harr koi apni banaana chaahe. Jisse dekh ke muh se bas yahi nikaalta hai ki kaash ye meri hoti.



10. Arohi (age - 22 yrs) : Karunesh aur Sumitra ki badi beti. Veer ke hi same college me uski senior hai. Kam bolti hai. Dikhne me khubsoorat aur alag kism ki beauty hai ye. Isse dekh ke nasha sa chadh jae kisi ko bhi.



11. Pranjal (age - 21 yrs) : Karunesh aur Sumitra ka chota beta. Abhi B.com kar raha hai same college se.

12. Kavya (age - 18 yrs) : Karunesh aur Sumitra ki choti beti. Chanchal, sharmeeli aur thodi savendansheel. Abhi abhi college me aayi hai toh abhi duniya daari ke baare utna sab nahi pata. Dikhne me ekdum Cute hai aur pyaari.



Ye tha intro, baaki characters samay aane par introduce hote jaenge.


Dhanyavaad!
introductin mast hai bhai
 

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Update -1 ~ Unforgetful Incident.

*Thud*

Ek zorrdaar dhakka Veer ki peeth par pada aur wo saamne ki orr girte girte bacha.

"Hahahahaha!!!"

Aur tabhi peeche se kayi logo ki hassne ki awaazein sunayi dii.

Veer ke haath kaanp rahe the. Dhakke ke kaaran uska mobile phone girte girte bacha tha, usne forun hi usse apne kaapte hue haatho me kass ke thaama aur phone ki screen on karke wo contact list me se kisi ka naam dhund ke usne apna phone kaano ki orr badhaaya hi tha ki tabhi...

*Thud*

Ek aur dhakka zorr se uski peeth par pada, par iss baar wo khud ko sambhaal na saka aur saamne ki orr dhadaam se gir pada. Uska phone haatho se chhutak kar kayi tappa khaate hue zameen par jaa gira. Pata nahi sahi salaamat bacha bhi tha uska phone ya nahi.

Veer ne karaahte hue apni nazre upar kari aur dekha. Kareeb 5 se 6 ladke uske saamne khade hue the. Aur unka leader jiska naam Ajay tha wo apni Duke bike par adab ke saath baithe hue uski iss haalat par mazze le raha tha.

Ajay : Hahaha! Kyu be chuze! Bol!? Karega aisi harqat dubaara?

Apne kaapte hue perro ko Veer ne badi hi mushqil se control kiya aur utha.

Akhir uski galti kya thi? Aaj uske apne college me 2nd year ka pehla din tha aur pehle din hi uske saath ye sab ho raha tha?

Shaam ke 7 baj chuke the aur Veer jisse 2 ghante pehle hi apne ghar pohuch jaana chaahiye tha wo yaha 6 se 7 ladko dwaara bully kiya jaa raha tha.

Veer shuru se hi ek kamzor yuvak tha. Usse dekh ke aisa lagta tha maano uski rachna bhagwaan ne badi hi kathorta se kari ho.

Na wo padhayi me hoshiyaar tha, na dikhne me koi boht handsome tha, shareer se bhi kamzor tha, bol chaal me bhi ekdum peeche aur usme koi bhi talent nahi tha. Kul milaake ek bhondu sa insaan.

Apne naam ka ulta hi tha Veer. Veerta naam ki toh koi cheez hi nahi thi usme. Par bechaare usme uski kya galti thi? Wo toh jesa tha, wesa tha. Kya uski iss baat ka fayda uthaana zaroori tha?

Aaj wo yaha college ke peeche ki sunsaan sadko me maujood tha. Wo aana nahi chaahta tha par usse yaha laaya gaya tha.



Saamne khade uske college ke seniors uspe atyachaar karne ke liye usse yaha sunsaan jagah par lae hue the.

Par isme Veer ki galti kya thi?

Uski galti ye thi ki aaj college ke departure ke waqt wo ek khubsoorat senior ladki ko dekh raha tha jo ki laazmi tha. Wo thi hi itni khubsoorat ki koi bhi usse dekh ke apni nazre na hata paata. Wo patli kamar, teekhe nain, bhaari stan, perfect figure aur wo qaatilaana chehra. Kisi ko bhi madhosh kar de.

Par badqismati se Veer jab uss sundar ladki ko taad raha tha, Ajay ne usse aisa karte dekh pakad liya tha.

Aur bas, yahi Veer ki galti thi.

Wo ladki Ajay ki kaafi acchi dost thi jiske peeche Ajay haath dhoke kaafi samay se pada hua tha. Uss ladki ka naam tha Pragya, jo ki Ajay ki classmate thi.

Veer ki nazar ne hi Ajay ko itna gussa dila diya tha ki uska mann kar raha tha ki wo ussi waqt Veer ki aankhein noch le. Akhir himmat kese hui kisi ladke ki uski hone waali gf ko taktaki laga ke dekhne ki.

College me kisi ne bhi aaj tak uske khilaaf jaane ki himmat nahi kii thi. Toh fir akhir iss Veer ki kese himmat ho gayi?

Yahi baat Ajay ko bilkul na khali.

Veer ko yaha laake aaj wo usse accha sabak sikhaane waala tha. Taaki, bhavishya me koi bhi uski Pragya ko ghurne se pehle 100 baar soche.

Ajay (gurraate hue) : Mene kuch pucha tere se chuze. Bol? Karega aisi harqat firse?

Veer bhale hi kamzor tha par wo apne khud ke prati imaandaar zaroor tha. Usse pata tha usne koi galti nahi kii hai. Akhir ek sundar ladki ko yadi aapne kuch seconds dekh liya toh kya wo aapki galti hai? Bilkul bhi nahi! Veer toh keval Pragya ki sundarta ki prashansha kar raha tha mann hi mann.
Isme pitaayi ki baat kaha se aa gayi?

Aur yahi dhyaan me rakhte hue usne Ajay ke sawaal ka koi uttar nahi diya. Wo bas chup chaap apna nichla honth daanto se dabaaye hue sar jhukae khada raha. Uski mutthi zorr se kassi hui thi.

Ajay : Ye aise nahi maanega. Dose do saale ko.

Uski baat sunn uske saare saathi Veer ki taraf badhne lage. Jese jese Veer peeche jaata, wese wese wo aur kareeb aate.

Aur kuch pal ke andar hi Veer ab 6 logo se ghira hua tha. Iske pehle ki wo kuch keh paata, unn 6 ke 6 laundo ne Veer pe mukke aur laate barsaana shuru kar dii.

"Aaarghhhhhhh"

Veer ki karaahne ki awaaz sunsaan road me gunj rahi thi par na toh koi sunn'ne wala tha aur na hi koi madad karne waala. Wo ladke rukne ka naam nahi le rahe the.

Koi uske pait me maarta toh koi uske gaal pe, koi peeth pe vaar karta toh koi uski pasli pe. Aur harr ek hamle par Veer ke muh se ek dard bhari cheenkh nikal jaati jo uss sunsaan sadak ki shaanti ko jhanjhor kar rakh deti. Dekhte hi dekhte kuch hi palo me wo ab neeche gir chuka tha.

Usne apne haatho se apna sar bachaaya aur perr sikode par ladko ko toh jese farq hi nahi padna tha.
Apni laate uthaate hue unn sabhi ne uspe itne vaar kiye ki uske maathe aur hontho se khoon behne laga.

Jab Ajay ne qareeb aake wo laal khoon dekha toh usse andar hi andar ek sukoon sa mila. Jese uska gussa kuch hadd tak shaant ho gaya tha. Usne forun hi apne pantaro ko rok diya.

Apni laat uthaate hue usne apna joota Veer ke sar par rakh diya.

Ajay : Samajh aaya chuze? Yadi tune itna keh diya hota ki ahinda se tu aisi harqat nahi karega toh tere saath ye sab nahi hota.

Veer ne koi jawaab nahi diya. Wo bas apni jese tese adhkhuli aankho se Ajay ko ghur raha tha.

Ajay : Par tujhe bann'na tha hero. Hai na? Toh lo fir! Ab banke dikha hero. Kaan khol ke sunn le chuze, ahinda se tu yadi mujhe galti se bhi Pragya ke aas paas bhi dikha na toh teri gaand tod ke rakh dunga. Samjha behanchod?

Kehte hue Ajay ne apne perr ka bhaar badhaate hue Veer ka chehra masal diya jiske chalte uski ek aur cheenkh nikal gayi.

Ajay : Aulelelele bacche ko dard ho raha hai? Ruko abhi dard dur kar deta hu. Zara wo lollipop toh laana. Dekho idhar ek baccha ro raha hai.

Aur uski baat sunn sabhi ladke zorr zorr se thahaake lagaane lage.

Unn ladko me se ek ne apna bag khola aur ek lollipop nikaalte hue Ajay ko thama dii.

Ajay ne forun hi lollipop ka wrapper khola aur Veer ki taraf neeche jhuk gaya.

Ajay : Tujhe pata hai mein ye lollipop leke kyu ghumta hu hamesha? Taaki tujh jese bacche jab udham karne lagte hai na toh unki aqal thikaane laga saku.

Itna bol wo lollipop zorr se Veer ke muh me ghusa dii jiske chalte ek aur karaah Veer ke muh se nikli.

Ajay : Par fir bacche rone lag jaate hai toh akhir bade hone ke naate mera farz bhi toh banta hai na? Ki mein unhe chup karwau? Isliye uske liye ye lollipop. Ab acche bacche ki tarah ye lollipop chuso aur apne ghar ki orr nikal lena. Samjha?

Usne Veer ka gaal thap thapaaya aur jaane ke liye uth khada hua par jaane se pehle wo ek baar aur peeche muda aur Veer ko dekha.

Ajay : Police ya ghar me kuch bhi bataane ki koshish karna bhi mat chuze. Baad me tu hi pachtaega nahi toh. Infact, kisi ke saamne bhi muh mat kholna.

Ladka 1 : Ajay bhai halki bunda baandi shuru ho gayi hai, hume nikalna chahiye.

Uske ek dost ne jataaya toh Ajay ne bhi haa me gardan hilaayi.

Aur Ajay samet sabhi ladke apni apni bike par sawaar hue par tabhi Ajay ko kuch sujha aur wo apni bike neeche pade Veer ke ird gird ghumaane laga aur uske dost bhi yahi karne lage.

*Crack*

Veer ne zorr se uss lollipop ka apne daanto se katra. Uski aankhein gusse se laal thi par wo kuch bhi nahi kar sakta tha. Ladke uske ird gird bike ko ghuma rahe the aur agle hi pal Ajay ne uski orr thuka jiske chalte wo thook seedha jaate hue Veer ki shirt par gira.

"Hahahahaha"

*Vroom* *Vroom*

Hasste hue Ajay apni toli ke saath, bike par sawaar waha se nikal gaya. Aur uss sunsaan jagah pe ab keval Veer hi akela pada hua tha.

Bijli kadki aur tezz baarish shuru ho gayi. Yahi Veer ki kismat thi. Ab toh uske kapde bhi bheeg jaane the. Par baarish se ek baat acchi hui. Wo ye ki Veer ki shirt me gira Ajay ka thook dhul gaya.

*Thuu*

Lollipop ko zorr se thukte hue Veer khada hua toh wo ladkhada gaya aur girte girte bacha. Harr jagah itna dard tha ki pucho mat. Baarish tezz ho chuki thi aur wo langdaate hue apni scooty ke paas jese tese pohucha aur seat par tik ke baith gaya.

Baarish ke pani se uske maathe se nikal raha khoon bhi saaf hone laga tha. Usne apna phone uthaate hue apne jeb me daal liya. Pata nahi zinda bhi tha uska phone ya nahi, kyuki screen ki light abhi tak jal rahi thi.

Par Veer ko toh jese kuch farq hi nahi padna tha. Wo haafte hue bas baitha sadak ko ghur raha tha jaha abhi wo kuch derr pehle buri tarah laato aur ghuso ka shikaar hua tha.

Ab toh usme apni muthhi kassne tak ke liye dum nahi bacha tha. Kya kismat dii thi bhagwaan ne usse.

Aaj pehla din aur uske saath ye vyavhaar hua. Upar se tab, jab uski koi galti bhi nahi thi. Kya ek khubsoorat ladki ko dekhna gunaah tha? Jab uss ladki ne usse kuch nahi kaha toh bhala ye Ajay kon hota tha uske saath aisa suluk karne waala?

Na chaahte hue bhi Veer ki rulaayi chhuuth padi. Aur wo bina koi awaaz kiye zorr zorr se rone laga. Shareer poora bheeg chuka tha uska. Aur baarish ki boonde jese hi uske ghaavo par padti usse aur zyada dard deti.

Rote rote Veer ne apni scooty uthayi aur ghar ki taraf chal diya. Usse hi pata tha ki wo kitni mushqil se iss waqt scooty ko chala raha tha. Uske jeb me uska phone abhi bhi contact list show kar raha tha.

Shayad girne ke kaaran phone ki screen ek jagah jaa ke atak chuki thi. Uss contact list me uska koi bhi dost nahi tha. School me bhi uske dost nahi the aur aaj bhi college me wo akela hi baitha hua tha. Contact list me keval 3 hi naam the. Ek uske pita Brijesh ka, ek uski chachi Sumitra ka aur ek uski choti behan Kavya ka.

Jinhe call karne ki Veer uss waqt acting kar raha tha. Jii haa! Acting kar raha tha. Kyuki Veer jaanta tha, Brijesh ko pata chalega toh wo ulta aur maarega hi usse. Sumitra aur Kavya isme kuch nahi kar sakti thi. Rahi baat baaki family members ki toh unke numbers the hi nahi uske phone me.

Uske gharwaale uski madad bilkul na karte.

Akhir kyu?

Kyuki yahi toh uska parivaar tha. Keval naam ka parivaar tha baaki uski ghar me kya hi izzat thi wo bhali bhaati jaanta tha.

Ab tak usse ghar se nikaala nahi gaya tha yahi baat kaafi thi.

Usse itna prataadit kiya jaata tha ki pucho mat. Pata nahi kese wo unn sab ke beech itne saal tak jee liya.

Yadi koi aur hota toh gusse me khud hi bhaag gaya hota ya ab tak trast aa chuka hota aur na jaane kya kar liya hota. Par Veer chup chaap sab kuch sehta tha.

Kyuki usse pata tha ki virodh karne ka koi fayda nahi tha. Aur yadi wo jaata bhi toh kaha jaata? Wo 20 saal ka hi tha aur abhi toh usne college ki duniya bhi thik se nahi dekhi thi.

Par aaj jo hua uss se Veer ko itna toh samajh aa gaya tha ki college ki life ke bache hue baaki 3 saal uski school life se kayi guna battar hone waale the.

Veer tezz raftaar me gaadi chalaaye jaa raha tha. Baarish aur aasuo ke kaaran uski aankein dhundhli ho chali thi. Gaadiyo ki headlights ki roshni kisi jugnu ke prakaar uski aankho me aati aur jaati.

Kuch derr pehle hui ghatna uske imaan, uske gaurav, uski izzat ko chhalli kar ke uske dimaag me ghum rahi thi.

Par wo ruka nahi. Yu aasu bahaate hue wo apne ghar ki orr gaadi badhaata raha jo ab bas kuch hi dur tha.

'Badla toh mein lunga. I'll make them pay. Chun chun ke... Ek ek se chun chun ke badla lunga.'
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Kahani shuru ho chuki hai.
Ab se mein aur aap iss kahani ka safar saath me tay karenge aur isse ant tak pohuchaenge.
Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!

Dhanyavaad!
mast updete bhai

na to apna baap sath hai our naa hi sauteli maa bahan uske sath hai Ek chachi our bahan sath hai magar wah bhi kuch kar nahi sakti hai akhir aisa kya huwa hai jo sabhi isse nafrat karte hai mana ki maa bahan sauteli hai magar baap to uska apna hai phir q wah apne bete ka sath nahi hai
 

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Phle to bhai sorry for too late and congrtulation for new story
ye story peechli story se bhot diff lgi abhi tk gud bhai nyi story bilkul fresh content

Veer ko yha pe bilkul normally dikhaya start m jese like real age dekhte h kese kese mison deti h pari
pariwar ki nafrat aur bhot sara suspense h iss bar nice bhai👍

veer ka bap uski ma se ku nafrat krta h apki pechli story m jo ek kami khi agr lagi thi jo neha ki nafrat ka karn dikhaya usme mtlb no thrill lga to bhai ap ise ho ske to thoda sochna
Apki story ko hmara dher sara pyar👍❤️
 

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introductin mast hai bhai
mast updete bhai

na to apna baap sath hai our naa hi sauteli maa bahan uske sath hai Ek chachi our bahan sath hai magar wah bhi kuch kar nahi sakti hai akhir aisa kya huwa hai jo sabhi isse nafrat karte hai mana ki maa bahan sauteli hai magar baap to uska apna hai phir q wah apne bete ka sath nahi hai
Thanks a lot bro!
Thread me swaagat hai aapka!! :hug:
 
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