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Of course! There's a reason why he's getting fame points.Firstly, Jim The Slippery & now The Nightwalker aka Noah White... Veer has been the driving force behind tackling both the criminals... GIU ho ya fir Divya/Nik ki personal agency, dono vibhag jo karya karne mein asafal rahe, Veer ne apne bal par wo kar dikhaya... Jim, Divya ne kaha hi tha ki wo pehle bhi kayi baar unke changul se nikal chuka hai to wahin Nightwalker ne seedhe taur par Connor ko maar kar, agency ko hi challenge kar diya tha... But now, as Veer has done the unprecedented, his stakes are going to rise by leaps & bounds... Divya, Nik, Nolan & Suhana of course, sab par in donon ghatnao ka impact padne waala hai ya kahun ki pad chuka hai...
Jim pyaada tha bas. Nightwalker was like a bishop. Many more are there.Nightwalker ek psycho ya kahun ki ek maniac tha, uske description se hi ye baat saaf ho jaati hai... He killed a total of 93 people, including his own family members... I guess, aage chalkar pata chale ki kya khaas wajah thi ki “House Of Killers” ke owner/boss ne Jim aur Nightwalker ko chuna... What's the particular criteria that's followed in the selection of criminals to participate in the mass butchering..? I think ki Nightwalker ka ruthless hona ek kaaran ho sakta hai is cheez ka, and about Jim, maybe his escaping skills (taking into note, Jim ki aukaat is sangathan mein ek choohe jitni hi thi)...
Third is on the way...There were two major twists in the Mansion's turmoil... Firstly, the room numbers, they were quite suspicious and now Veer has revealed what they actually meant... Them being atomic numbers actually was a good twist, Nightwalker ke dimaag ki kabiliyat darshane ke liye ek achha tareeka saabit hua ye... Secondly, the treasure, Veer found that too... Nightwalker ke description se pata chal gaya tha ki wo pehle ek technician/welder tha... Aise mein uska gold bars ko pighla kar ek vase mein chhupa dena, ek aur taraf ishara karta hai... Agar is gang ka doosra hi criminal itna chaalak/brainy hai, then what's in the way of Veer in coming updates...
Yeah! He was unconscious. Imagine dying while being unconscious. You won't even know that someone killed you already... Uhhhh!!! I got chills.The secret of Chester's death was revealed simultaneously too... Firstly, room mein jaate waqt Chester ne koyi gas inhale ki thi, I guess it was something that cause unconsciousness... Kyonki jo kuchh Veer ne bataya, how NW got into Chester's room, itna time laga tha agar use andar jaane mein, utne waqt mein kuchh na kuchh to Chester bhi karta hi khud ko bachane ke liye... Secondly, room mein haatha paayi ya fir kisi bhi prakar ki struggle ke koyi marks the nahin, simply it points towards the fact that Chester was unconscious when he got killed...
No! There were none. NW is the only one doing all that stuff alone. He wasn't doing it for the first time, right? He has done so many time in the past that now he's gotten habitual.Khair, Paintings ka koyi role tha nahi in murders mein, it was a simple deception & nothing else... Beharhal, is poore ghatnakram se ek sawaal paida hota hai, wasn't there ay support for Nightwalker on the Island? Jo boats wahaan se gaayab huyi, obviously ek aadmi ka to kaam hoga nahi ye, means wahaan aur bhi logon ko maujoodgi thi...
Keep guessing...Ab sawaal ye hai ki kya wo log boats lekar wahaan se nikal gaye the? Agar haan, tab to theek hai, par agar kuchh log wahin Island par hi maujood the aur CCTV Cameras se Nightwalker ki thukayi wo dekh chuke the.. then what was the reason that they didn't come to finish off Veer & others..? What I can think of is that NW's senior (considering ki NW second in command to nahi hoga main boss ke baad), wo vyakti shayad Veer se khud deal karna chahta ho, saari footage dekhne ke baad...
Indeed! Veer ke liye khatra badh gaya. Because ultimately, people who were watching Veer and the others via cameras know what happened at the mansion. So they have already been alerted. They might try to kill Veer straightforwardly now.Btw. Nightwalker & Jim too, ab “House Of Killers” waale is maamle ko seriously lena shuru kar denge... Daniel, Connor & others (those who died before Veer's arrival in Vegas), ye sabhi log un criminals ka ek aasan shikaar ban gaye the, these people were not a big problem for the criminals but now Veer has risen as a massive threat to their plans... After watching all the stuff via CCTVs, they're going to take Veer very seriously... GIU aur Nik ki agency ki jagah ab shayad unka prime target Veer hi hoga... I think wo log Veer ko bhi Nik & Party ka hi saathi assume karenge...
For now we can assume that they are in good terms. (Except Nik)Veer ke in heroics ka alag - alag prabhav pada hai sab par... Firstly, Nolan is highly impressed by all this, aur isiliye usne Veer ka naam prize ke liye recommend karne ki baat bhi uthayi... All these people, might be beneficial for Veer in his journey of becoming a “Baadshah"... Maybe abhi ke liye Nolan & others like him, don't seem to be relevant after this arc, but maybe in future they can come good, when Veer might need someone like them...
I won't give spoilers about Mike here.Coming to Mike, I'm assuming that he's going to India alongside Veer... All the things between the two, firstly Mike's gesture to come with Veer & then Veer passing forward Mike's name in front of Nolan... Mike is trustworthy too, and his abilities are not hidden, being a member of the detective agency for a considerable amount of time renders him with a good amount of courage & experience to handle himself & even other's in a vulnerable situation... So, he might be the right hand man that the future King - Veer might require...
Veer has never mentioned who he loves. So... But y'all are allowed to make assumptions.Coming to Suhana, she has been connected to Veer for a good amount of time now... Elimination of Aatish, has already been a huge favour on her from Veer's side... On top of that, Veer never retaliated on Suhana burdening him with favours, which actually had no existence... Divya ke saath pichhle update mein jo baatein huyi thi Suhana ki, Veer ke baare mein, aur fir jab Veer waapis lauta, tab Suhana ka uske nazdeek aakar uski khairiyat puchhna... Just a couple of more things, and Suhana will fall for him... I guess, I know those two things too ... Gaurav & the guy Suhana murdered in the past, those two problems of her, if Veer finds a solution, he'll never be able to get over the reward he'll get!
That might be the case... Divya is feeling guilty for sure. But it's not that much where she'll openly say sorry by kneeling down to Veer. However, a little bit of it... remains inside. Considering the fact that Veer saved her that night.Divya par bhi Veer ke is bahaduri bhare kaarya ka asar to hua hi hoga... Veer ke baare mein jo kuchh usne Suhana se suna tha, uske baad Jim ke samay jaise Veer ne use bachaya, especially his gesture of providing first - aid to her... All of that, got Divya's favourability to a position from where it'll never drop... Par uske baad, Divya ke hi Pati ne Veer ko maut ke munh mein dhakel diya but to her surprise, Veer not only came back alive but also brought the criminal on his knees... Guilt + Surprise, another rise in favourability? And a drop in favourability of her's towards her own husband...
Sabko bator lo ju toh... Emma Zoey, sabri aa jaaye haan?Rahi baat us Nik naamak praani ki, to mujhe ab bhi lagta hai ki kisi na kisi tareeke se he's associated with the “House Of Killers”... On top of that, there's a possibility that Divya, in future, might be a member of Veer's Harem... So, let's not talk about Nik now, kyonki aage chalkar uske liye shayad zyada kuchh achha hone nahi waala hai...
Zoey won't be Veer's secretary. Why would she? Her goal is to become a fashion model.Emma is suspicious too! Island par wo kaise pahunchi ye to pata chal gaya hai but still she's hiding something... Not only Emma but also Tommy, the way this puppy was behaving while Veer was unfolding all the secrets, clearly points towards the fact that this guy is also hiding something... Zoey ke baare mein abhi kuchh kehna sahi nahi hoga, but I think she can be the “professional secretary ” Veer was thinking about!
Suhana agreed because she promised a favour to divya. Also, Divya mentioned a client called her out. But she didn't tell who it was exactly. And guess who was that client?In the end, Suhana's reaction on something which Divya put in front of her... The next update might bring another revelation alongside it... Beharhal, I think ki jo agla criminal hoga, maybe Suhana knows him/her? Aur usi ke kaaran, Suhana yahaan aane ko raazi ho gayi thi? Let's see Veer iske baare mein kya pata laga paata hai...
Thanks a lot bro!Both the updates were quite enthralling... The way you carried along the suspense throughout the Mansion Part was really good! The rooms & their numbers, the doors, the treasure, Veer & Nightwalker's face-off & then Veer revealing everything in front of everyone... All the parts were presented in the best way possible, and both the updates were really fun to read...
Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
Third person me hi chal rahi hai bhai update 1 se. Kaha khoye ho? It's just that this is the first time where the third person has addressed the audience.Dude Third person naration??
Werewolf Bro...Please give next update...Dhanyavaad bhai!
Card invitation tha. Natalia ka.
Tej aur Bhavna ka scene bhi de hi diya. Arohi aur Kavya ka bhi. Bane rehna bhai!
Thanks man! Keep supporting!
Thanks bhai!
House of killers last? Nahi bhai!
Iske baad kayi arcs hai. Keep supporting!
Thanks man!
Story me thodi raksha bandhan aaya hai bhai. Waha abhi 2 August hai date.
Haa yr third person me hi hai noticeable abi hua because usually ese third person movies wagera me dekhne ko milta hai that's why or stupid to me hu hi sorryThird person me hi chal rahi hai bhai update 1 se. Kaha khoye ho? It's just that this is the first time where the third person has addressed the audience.
Wow super mind-blowing. Veer ko 300 point mile suman ke absolute favourability increase hone se nd sath me abha ke favourability bhi rocket ke speed se badh kr 94 Ho gai hai. Veer ne sahi talmel bnate hue balhaar ke support se slogan ko dabochne Ka acha chakraview racha jisme slogan phans gya Or Steve Mara gya. Kya slogan apne jagah tak pahunch payega agr pahunch Gya toh action bharpur dekhne ko milega upr se full moon ki raat or beowolf IN dono ki deadly combination dekhna gazab hi dekhne ko milega.Update - 74 ~ Let the Hunt begin
[Contains gore related scenes.]
Ab tak...
Veer : Apni location bhej raha hu. Yaha do kachre ke dherr hai. Unhe alag karwana hai. Unse mein nipat chuka hu toh aur kuch mat karna.
Balhaar : Theek hai. Kaam ho jaega. Aur tumhaara kaam bhi ho gaya hai. Ek aham recording hai mere paas. Isse milkar hi dunga mein. Phone me nahi bhejunga.
Veer : Theek hai! Kya baat hai?
Aur fir Balhaar ne bas itna hi bataaya ki Slogan kya karne waala tha.
He was going for a..
FULL SCALE ATTACK!!!
Ab aage...
*Vrrrrrrrooooooooommmm*
Karan ki blue mulsanne road par sannaate hue bhaag rahi thi.
Blue mulsanne~
Lane me divider me lagi chamakti hui lights se car ki rims aise chamak rahi thi ki harr nikalta hua vyakti ek baar zaroor dekhne pe majboor ho jaata. Car thi hi aisi.
Karan drive kar raha tha aur uske bagal se Veer baitha hua tha. Wese uski blue mulsanne koi racing car nahi thi, par fir bhi abhi ke liye sahi thi. Kyuki, ye secured car khaas uski safety ke liye design kii gayi thi. Samay raat ka tha toh kismat thi unki jo traffic din ke muqaable kam tha. Warna traffic me hi laude lag jaate unn dono ke. Kyuki, Mumbai ke traffic se toh harr koi waaqif tha.
Veer khamosh baitha tha. Uss din Suman aur Aabha ko bachaane ke baad kayi nayi cheezein usse dekhne ko mili thi.
Sabse pehli baat toh wahi thi. Suman ki 126 ki favourability. Na keval Veer ko 300 points mile the balki usne ek chalta firta bomb taiyaar kar diya tha. Aisa kyu?
Kyuki Suman uske liye ab kuch bhi kar sakti thi. Aur jab kuch bhi kaha jaaye. Toh waqai, uska matlab kuch bhi hi tha.
SHE COULD EVEN KILL FOR VEER.
AND COULD EVEN DIE FOR HIM.
ABSOLUTE SERVITUDE!!!
Aur isliye, wo ek chalta firta bomb thi. Wahi dusri taraf Aabha ki favourability bhi skyrocket hoke 94 par pohuch chuki thi.
Veer unn 300 points ka upyog kar ke jald se jald apne stats full karna chaahta tha. Par usne aisa nahi kiya. Kyu?
Kyuki points ko bacha ke rakhna boht aham tha. Veer ko kayi baar aisa mehsoos hua tha ki yadi uske paas points hote toh woh kayi musibato se bach ke nikal sakta tha. Par uske 0 points ke chalte wo maat khaa jaata tha.
Isliye usne decide kar liya tha ki wo kuch points hamesha reserve me rakh ke chalega. Kya pata, kab kaha points ki zaroorat pad jaaye?
In case, yadi wo kisi situation me phassta hai toh yadi uske paas Points rahe toh shop se skill khareed ke wo uss situation se baahar aa sakta hai. Points ka reserve me rehna isliye important tha.
Bagal se Karan usse baar baar look de raha tha. Shayad kuch kehna chaah raha tha. Par Veer ko khamosh dekh wo chup hoke reh gaya.
Idhar Veer time pass nahi kar raha tha. Uske mann me already Enemy tracker skill active thi.
Aur target kaun tha??
STEVE!!!!!
*Beep* *Beep* *Beep*
Uske mann me wo laal bindu, jo Steve ki location ko darsha rahi thi, kaafi speed me ek location ki taraf badh rahi thi. Yaani ki Steve ne plan shuru kar diya tha. Wahi plan, jo Balhaar ne record kar ke Veer ko saup diya tha.
Veer ab bas Slogan ko ye dikhaana chaahta tha, ki wo uske jaal me fassi hui ek macchli hai. Par aisa tha nahi. Asal me toh wo khud hunter tha iss baar.
'This time... I will lay down the net for you!!!!'
Steve boss enemy nahi tha, toh obviously Basic Enemy Tracker skill kaam kar gayi. Bas, Veer yahi umeed kar raha tha ki...
Kaash...
Kaash, Slogan Steve ke saath hi baitha ho. Yadi aisa hua, toh Veer ek baar me hi uska kaam tamaam kar paega.
Kyuki ab chaahe usse mission mile ya na mile, Veer Slogan ko aur samay nahi dena chaahta tha. Warna ye uske aur uske qareebi ke liye aur bhi ghaatak ho sakta tha.
Par jaise system ne uske mann ki baat sunn lii thi aur tabhi,
*Ding*
[Mission : Kill Slogan at all cost.
Rewards : 1) ???? Points
2) One Random Skill
Time limit : 4 hours.
Mission Failure Penalty : 2000 Points Deduction.]
Aur mission padhte hi, Veer ke hontho par ek muskaan thi.
[You are surprisingly calm!]
Tabhi, Pari ki awaaz achanak hi uske mann me aayi.
'Kya matlab?'
[Matlab ye ki jab Aatish ko tumne maara tha. Tum sadme me the. Because, tumne pehi baar kisi ki jaan lii thi. So abhi ye mission milne ke baad tum kaafi shaant ho. No! Balki tum excited ho.]
'Hoo~ Kya meri Pari ko meri chinta ho rahi hai? Haan?'
[W-Wh-Who? Who cares for you? Hmph!]
'Toh fir achanak ye sawaal kyu?'
[Wo toh... Wo... Wo bas... Tumhaare andar pehle jaisi koi feelings nahi aayi iss waqt. Tum pehle sadme me the. Aatish ko maarne ke baad. But abhi tum ye jaante bhi ho ki tumhe kisi ki jaan lena hai. Still, you are calm. Isliye, mene pucha. Warna... Who cares for you? Hmph~ Stupid!]
Pari ki baat sunn Veer sarr jhukaate hue apni unn hatheliyo ko dekhne laga. Inhi haatho se usne Aatish ki jaan lii thi. Aur inhi ki wajah se wo Golu ko kho diya tha. Yadi inme tab aur taaqat hoti, toh aaj Karan ke hi jaise, uska ek aur dost uske bagal se baitha hota.
'Ye... Mere haath... Inme pehle hi khoon lag chuka hai Pari!!!'
[...]
'Ab inpe... Mera bas nahi chalta.'
[But...]
'Jo koi bhi mere parivaar ko nuksaan pohuchaane ke baare me sochega. Unhe mein apne raaste se hata dunga. Chaahe jaan hi kyu na leni pade mujhe.'
Pari kuch derr shaant rahi. Uske baad boli,
[Well, yes! That is the correct way. World unfair hai. Yadi koi ye sochta hai ki muskuraane se agla aadmi usse kuch nahi karega. Toh ye Bewakoofi hogi uski. Strong trample on weak. That is how world works. Yadi tum powerful ho, toh tumhari kahi gayi harr baat sahi hai.]
'I think so too! I have to get more powerful.'
[Yeah!!]
Pari aur Veer ki aapas me ho rahi baato se anibhigya, akhir kaar Karan ne kuch bolne ka socha.
Unke beech ki kaafi derr se maujood khamoshi ko usne toda,
Karan : You know what!? Mujhe nahi lagta tumhari info sahi hogi. Dad ne security boht high kar dii hai. So, I don't think aisa kuch hone waala hai.
Veer shaant tha. Usse pata tha ki Balhaar ki info pakki thi. Akhir usne khud wo video dekha tha jo Balhaar ne usse baad me diya tha. Wahi yaha Karan mood ko light karne ki koshish kar raha tha. Uske hisaab se security tight thi aur uski behan ko kuch nahi hone wala tha.
Aisa nahi tha ki wo apni behan ki chinta nahi karta tha. Veer se bhi zyaada fiqr usse Kaera ki thi. Par usse apni security par bhi bharosa tha. Isliye Karan ko laga ki shayad Veer bewajah hi zyaada fiqr kar raha hai.
Karan : Hey! Wese, tumne apne liye koi partner dhundi ya nahi?
Usne mood ko light karte hue kaha.
Veer : Tumhe abhi ye baat sujh rahi hai? Seriously?
Karan : What? Heyyy! Just answer me!
Veer (sighs) : Filhaal nahi!
Karan : You know what? I can introduce you to some fine ladies. Aur sab badi family se hi hai. Mere kehne par wo pakke se tumhaare sang... Hehehe~
Veer : You should think about yourself. Aur tezz drive karo. Hum late nahi ho sakte.
Karan : Driving me tumhe mujhse behtar driver nahi milega Veer. Foreign me mein harr weekends ki raat ko friends ke saath milkar hum track racing karte the. I'm one hell of a driver hahaha~
Kehte hue usne forun hi gaadi, 3rd se 4th gear me daal dii aur acceleration diya,
*Vrrrrooooooooooooooommmmm*
Gaadi sarpat bhaagte hue road par daudne lagi.
Veer ka haath uske seene me tange locket par tha. Usse kass ke thaame hue tha. Uski asal Maa ki dii hui ek maatr nishaani. Aaj wo kaise bhi kar ke, apne iss mission me fail nahi ho sakta tha.
Kyuki ye Final Fight thi. Ya toh aaj wo ghar lautne waala tha, ya fir Slogan.
There was no other way.
One has to kill the other!
***
Delhi Airport...
Time : 10 : 15 PM
Meanwhile, Delhi ke airport me iss waqt ek flight just arrive hui aur air strip par plane ki gati dheere dheere kam hoti jaa rahi thi.
Aur dekhte hi dekhte kuch hi palo me wo plane poori tarah se ruk gaya.
Andar passengers waali seat par se saare yaatri dheere dheere uth ke baahar ki orr nikalne lage. Air hostesses, unhe smile dete hue vida kar rahi thi.
Inhi seats me se do seats par ek naujavaan ladki aur ek khubsoorat mahila baithi hui thi.
"Mom!! Pohuch gaye. Uthiye!"
Uss ladki ne kehte hue apni Maa ko hilaaya toh wo mahila forun hi uth gayi. Wo toh bas thakaan ke chalte aankhein band kii hui araam kar rahi thi. Soyi nahi thi.
Apni beti ki baat sunn, haa me sarr hilaate hue wo dono maa beti, airport se nikle aur cab kar apne ghar ki orr nikal gaye.
Ghar pohuchte hi andar maujood ek kaam karne waali maid ne gate khola aur unn dono ka swaagat kiya.
Ye maid poori loyal thi unki. Isliye jab bhi wo kahi bhi jaate the, wo aksar hafto hafto tak akeli ghar me raha karti thi. Aur ghar ki poori dekh bhaal karti thi.
Andar aate hi, Dono Maa beti ek saath bed par girte hue pasar gayi. Dono ne ek dusre ko dekha. Aur fir dono hi zorr se hassne lagi.
"Sach me, boht thakaan ho gayi. Haaasshh! Finally, apne ghar ke sukoon ki kuch baat hi alag hoti hai. Hai na Mom?" Wo ladki boli.
Toh uski maa bhi muskuraayi, "Bilkul! Apne ghar ki baat toh kuch..." Bolte bolte wo achanak hi rukk gayi.
"Kya hua Mom?"
"K-Kuch nahi... Mein washroom se aati hu." Aur wo uth ke seedha washroom me chali gayi.
Uski beti keval usse jaata hua dekhti rahi. Wo asahaay, ekaaki, aur akeli aurat.
'Kab tak? Kab tak aur mujhse chhipaogi Mom? I already know what you are hiding.' Usne socha aur maayusi uske chehre par chha gayi.
Ye koi aur nahi, wahi thi. Bhavna ki ekmaatr ladki.
Aur wo aurat Veer ki asli maa thi ~ Bhavna.
Jo filhaal, yaha Bhavna nahi, balki Geeta ke naam se jaani jaati thi.
***
Mumbai...
xxxxxxx resort.
10:35 PM
Resort ki entrance par achaanak hi ek car aayi. Toh guard uth ke uss car ke nazdeek aaya. Aur...
*Thud* *Thud*
Usne haath se sheeshe par do baar thoka toh...
*Swwiiissshhhhh*
Sheesha neeche hua.
Guard : Peeche ki Dickey kholo.
Toh uss car ke driver ne haa me sarr hilaaya aur dickey khol dii. Guard ne poori Dickey check kii aur band kar andar jaane ka ishaara de diya.
*Vrrroooommm*
Car aage badhi aur andar jaati jaa rahi thi. Resort itna bada tha ki aisa lag raha tha kisi highway me gaadi chal rahi ho.
Ek jagah aake gaadi ruki aur driver ne gaadi ki headlights band kar dii. Par gaadi abhi bhi chaalu thi.
*CLICK*
Driver ki bagal waali seat par baithe aadmi ne lighter jalaaya aur cigerette ko muh me daal usse jala ke ek kash lagaaya.
Aur badi gambheerta se bola, "Aaj sab doodh ka doodh aur paani ka paani ho jaega."
Ye buland awaaz jo acche accho ki hawa tight kar de, kisi aur ki nahi, SLOGAN ki thi.
Aur Driving seat par baitha koi aur nahi, Slogan ka hi right hand aadmi, STEVE tha.
Steve : Yadi aapka anumaan sahi hai Dada. Toh woh yaha nahi aaega. Par...
Slogan : Hmm! Information usne sahi bheji. Par abhi uska aana baaki hai.
Yaha baat ho rahi thi ekmaatr shaks kii. Aur wo tha...
BALHAAR!!!
Aaj Balhaar ka test tha. Slogan jis din apna plan samjha raha tha Steve ko. Usse ek anubhuti hui thi ki kuch gadbad tha. Aur uska shaq, Balhaar par tha.
Isliye, aaj Balhaar ki pareeskha thi. Slogan ne Steve ko keh ke Balhaar ki saari chhaan been karwaayi thi. Par unhe kuch haasil na hua. Steve ka kehna tha ki Balhaar loyal hai. Par Slogan abhi bhi apni baat par ada hua tha. Kuch gadbad zaroor thi. Itna experience usne aise hi nahi haasil kar ke rakha tha.
Ye resort kisi aur ka nahi, balki Kaera ka tha. Jo usne haal hi me apne naam karwaaya tha. Aaj wo yaha bas bachi hui payment karne aayi thi. Slogan ko ye baat pehle hi apne aadmiyo se pata lag chuki thi. Par...
Par wo Balhaar ko test karna chaahta tha. Yadi Balhaar bekasoor tha, yadi usne gaddaari nahi kii hogi, toh woh behsaq sab kuch sahi details dene waala tha. Isliye Slogan ne resort ki saari details laane ka kaam Balhaar ko saup diya.
Yadi, Balhaar galat info deta, toh Slogan ko pata lag jaata aur wo Balhaar ko dhad dabochta. Par aisa na hua. Balhaar ne usse ekdum sahi info dii.
Ki ye resort Kaera ka hai, aur wo iss tareekh ko iss samay par iss gaadi se yaha payment dene aaegi. Information itni sahi thi ki Slogan ka Balhaar ke upar se shaq samaapt ho jaana chahiye tha. Lekin fir bhi... Aisa na hua.
Kuch tha, jo Slogan ko andar se kachot raha tha. Jese abhaas dila raha tha ki kuch gadbad hai.
Aur tabhi,
Resort ki main building ka bada sa automatic glass door khula aur ek behad khubsoorat ladki ek sundar sii dress me baahar aayi.
KAERA!!!!
Aur usse dekhte hi, Slogan ki aankh me ek chamak aa gayi. Wesi chamak jesi ek saanp ko ande dekhte waqt aati hai.
Aur tabhi usse side se aata hua Balhaar nazar aaya.
Usne unki car ki taraf dekha par kiya kuch nahi.
Slogan ne ek kaam usse aur saupa tha. Uska kaam ye tha ki... Kaera ko jaake bas itna kehna ki uss car me Veer uska intezaar kar raha hai.
Kaera nazdeek aaegi, car me peeche baithe aur do log Kaera ke bodyguards ko restrict karenge, Steve issi beech Kaera ko car me daalega aur wo khud tab tak driver seat par aake car aage badha chuka hoga.
Yahi Slogan ka plan tha. In fact peeche baithe do logo ko ye bhi nahi pata tha ki Slogan unhe yaha maarne laaya hai. Bali ka bakra bana ke.
Wo bas, wait kar raha tha. Balhaar ke call ki. Yadi usne call kiya, aur jesa bataaya gaya tha wesa kiya iska matlab tha ki Balhaar dhokebaaz nahi tha. He was loyal. Wo apni pareeskha me pass ho jaega.
Tabhi Slogan aur Steve dono ne hi dekha ki Balhaar ne apna phone nikaala aur call lagaaya.
Unn dono ne apne apne phone baahar nikaale par...
Call nahi aaya.
Slogan : Huh??
Steve (frowns) : Ye call kyu nahi aaya.
Aur tabhi, Slogan ne dekha ki...
Balhaar wahi shaant khada hua tha. Uske chehre par agle hi pal... Dheere dheere... Shaitano waali muskaan bikharti jaa rahi thi.
Uss andhere me keval halki roshni me, Balhaar ke chehre ki wo daraavni muskaan dekh, aaj pehli baar itne saalo me...
SLOGAN ke raungte khade ho gaye.
Steve ko jese hi samajh aaya wo chillaaya,
Steve : BALHAAAARRRRRR!!!!
SLOGAN sahi tha. Wo sahi tha. Balhaar was a fucking traiter.
Aur Steve ne abhi chillaya hi tha ki...
*BAAAAAANGGGGGGGGGGGG*
*SPLUUUUURRRTTTTTT*
Achanak hi Slogan ke chehre par khoon ke cheethe bikhar gaye.
STEVE WAS DEAD!!!!
Car ke window glass ko cheerti hui, bullet aayi aur uski khopdi ko phaadte hue ghus gayi. Sarr ka maas aadha latak gaya aur car ke andar khoon ke cheethe bikhar gaye. Slogan ke chehre par jo khoon laga tha, wo Steve ka hi tha. Maano uske toh dil ki dhadkan hi band ho gayi thi achanak se ye sab dekh.
"Aaaaahhhhhh!!!!" Kaera jisne sab kuch dur se dekha wo chillaayi. Aur uske bodyguards forun hi aakar usse gher ke andar le jaane lage.
Idhar Slogan ne tabhi, door khola aur...
*Thud*
Steve ke shareer ko laat se maar ke baahar giraaya. Palak jhapakte hi wo Driving seat par aaya, uska perr accelerator par aur...
*Vrrrrrrrrrrroooooooommm*
Zorr se race dete hue gaadi aage badhi...
*BAAAAAAAANNNGGGGGG*
Ek aur goli chalne ki awaaz aayi par Slogan bach ke nikal chuka tha.
Akhir kya hua palak jhapakte hi? Boht kuch hua tha.
Resort ke upari bhaag par hi...
There was a SNIPER!!!
Jo kisi aur ne nahi Veer ne hi Karan ko keh ke rakhwaaye the. Aur sniper ne apna kaam bakhubi kiya. Ek sarr dard jaa chuka tha. Steve!
*Badump* *Badump*
Slogan ki dhadkane yaha train ke jese tezz ho chuki thi. Seconds me hi kya se kya ho gaya tha.
Par uske chehre par bhayankar gussa bhara hua tha.
"Veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrr!!!"
Wo chillaya. Kyuki, of course...
Uske siwa aur kaun kar sakta tha ye? Aaj usse ek baat ka pata lag gaya tha ki,
He underestimated Veer!!!
Slogan ko ye nahi pata tha ki jab wo Balhaar ka test lene ke liye usse Resort ki info laane ko saup raha tha, toh woh apni hi qabar khod raha tha.
Balhaar ne jaan bujh ke Kaera ki ekdum sahi info dii thi. Taaki, Slogan yaha aaye Kaera ko pakadne ke liye.
Balhaar ne shuru se ant tak aasvaashan jataate hue aur bharosa dilaate hue unhe yakeen dilaaya tha ki kaam ho jaega. Wo ant tak Slogan aur Steve ko shaq me rakha raha. Keval iss moment ke liye.
Steve ke jaane se, ek jhatka toh lag hi gaya tha Slogan ko.
Aur ye sab kiske kehne par kiya tha Balhaar ne?
Veer!!!!
Jaha Slogan ye samajh raha tha ki wo Balhaar ka test lega aur Kaera ko pakad bhi lega toh wahi Veer ne jaan boojh ke Balhaar ka test lene diya. Usne jaan boojh ke Kaera ki ekdum sahi location dilwaayi Balhaar se.
Yahi kaaran tha ki Veer ne Karan ko apne sang rakha. Karan ne security badhwa dii thi aur upar Snipers rakhwa diye the, Veer ke kehne par.
Aur Veer ne jaan boojh ke ye jagah chuni. Ye Kaera ka hi resort tha. In other words, yadi Steve marra bhi, toh Police ka koi lafda hone hi nahi waala tha. Veer was totally safe.
It was a plan to lure out a snake out of its cave. Saanp ko maarne ke liye usse uske bil se nikaalna zaroori tha. Wahi kiya tha Veer ne.
*Craaaaasssssssshhhhhhh*
Slogan ki car entrance ke barrier ko todte hue nikli, Guard bas daudta hi reh gaya uske peeche.
Aur Balhaar jo phone pe call laga raha tha usne phone me bola,
Balhaar : Wo nikal gaya.
"Good!!!" Dusri taraf se awaaz aayi, jo kisi aur ki nahi, Veer ki hi thi.
Entrance se baahar nikalte hi jese hi Slogan ki car sadak par aayi. Uske theek peeche se hi kuch hi duri par...
Ek aur car aa rahi thi.
Karan : Wo rahi car... Damn it!!!! Tum sahi the!!!
Veer (smiles) : I told you!!!
Karan kuch na bola. Kyuki, yadi car dikhi toh ab plan ke next move ko anjaam dene ka tha.
Usne seedha call Jassi ko lagaaya.
Karan : Jasssssiiiiii!!!
Jassi : Got it!!!
*Call ends*
Jassi jo ek mod par car ke andar baitha hua tha usne sheesha khol apne haath se bas ek baar aage badhne ka ishaara kiya aur...
Kareeb 15 se 20 gaadiya ikhatte mod se nikal ke main road par aa gayi.
*Vrrrrroooooommmmm*
SLOGAN jo gaadi chala ke bhaag raha tha usne jese hi apne daayi taraf dekha toh uske hosh hi udd gaye.
Daayi taraf se na jaane kitni saari kaali gaadiya bas nikalte hi jaa rahi thi. Uske toh maano chehre se rang hi udd chuka tha.
"Fuuuucckkkkkk!!!!" Wo kheejte hue chillaaya.
"D-Dadaaaa!!! Ab kya karna hai???" Peeche baitha ek chillaaya.
Slogan ke daant aapas me gusse se kitkita rahe the. Uska poora dhyaan filhaal gaaadiyo ko chakma deke bhaagne me tha.
"VEEEEERRRRR!!! DAMNNN YOUUU!!"
Just what really happened? Uska plan backfire kese kar gaya? Wo jaanta tha ki yadi Balhaar dhoka bhi dega toh zyaada se zyaada kya hoga?
Usse pata chalega aur wo waha se turant hi Kaera ko chorr ke bhaag niklega. Akhir isliye toh usne Steve se keh ke car ko on hi rakha tha waha par. Ki kuch bhi yadi ho, toh forun bhaag sake.
Par...
What he didn't understand was that...
Usne Veer ko underestimate kar diya. Wo sochta tha ki Veer bas ek ladka tha jo ladna jaanta tha bas. Uski halki fulki pehchaan thi aur wo Kaera ki nazron me ek accha ladka tha. Bas, iss se zyada koi impression nahi tha Slogan ke mann me Veer ke liye.
Aur yahi par usse muh ki khaani pad gayi aaj.
Uska plan simple tha. Ek gaadi me jaana jis se bhaagne me asaani ho, yadi kuch gadbad hoti hai toh. Yadi nahi hoti hai toh plan simple hi tha aage bhi.
Kaera ko kidnap karna, aur fir usse apni destination par laana.
Slogan ne saara intezaam kyuki wahi karke rakha hua tha. Usse laga tha ki yadi wo Kaera ko kidnap kar ke le jaega. Toh Kishor shaant nahi baithega. Wo definitely apni poori security bhej dega Kaera ki khoj me. Aur wo ye bhi jaanta tha ki Kishor ki security uska thikaan dhundh bhi legi.
Par...
Par yadi dhundh bhi liya toh kya?
Yahi toh plan tha uska. Usne itne aadmi aur itni force waha laga ke rakhi thi ki yadi Kaera ki security enter karti bhi hai toh unhe poori tarah se andar aane me kaafi samay lag jaega. Yadi Kishor copter bhi bhejta hai toh uska intezaam bhi tha Slogan ke paas. Rocket launcher!!!
Aur jab tak security uski gang se bhidegi, tab tak Slogan Kaera ko thikaane laga chuka hoga.
Uska lakshya poora ho chuka hoga. Par...
Par na keval aaj usne apne lakshya ko khoya, balki Steve ko bhi kho diya tha.
Aur itna hi nahi, uski haalat bheegi billi ki tarah ho chuki thi.
AND, IT WAS ALL BECAUSE OF THAT FUCKING VEER!!!
Of course, yadi Veer nahi tha toh aur kaun tha? Kishor ko bhali bhaati jaanta tha Slogan. Uspe intelligence bhi rakhta tha. Ye uska kaam hargiz nahi tha.
'Kahi wo toh nahi? N-Nahi... Wo nahi ho sakta.'
Sochte hue usne mann ko shaant karne ki koshish kii.
Par gussa uske chehre se jaa hi nahi raha tha.
Ek hi upaay tha. Jald se jald wo apni destination par pohuch jaaye.
Par peeche...
*Vrrrroooommm*
*Vrrrrooooooom*
*Vrrrrooooooom*
Dherr saari gaadiya uske peeche lagi hui thi.
Aur tabhi,
*BANNNNGGGGGGGGGG*
Ek bullet aayi aur seedha aake uski car ke right mirror se lagi aur mirror ko poora ukhaad ke alag kar dii.
"Daaamnnn itttt!!!!"
Iss hamle ka jawaab dene ke liye, Slogan ke saath peeche baithe wo do aadmi bhi apni apni gun nikaal cross firing shuru kar diye.
*BANG*
*BANNNNGGGGGGGGGG*
Jassi aur Raghu, apne poore aadmiyo ke saath uske peeche the. Saathi hi Veer aur Karan bhi.
Slogan ki car ek sunsaan raaste me ghusti jaa rahi thi.
Ye lamba route tha.
Aur rasta aisa tha ki chaah ke bhi Veer aur Karan uski gaadi ko overtake kar usse rok nahi sakte the.
Par Veer ke hontho par muskaan thi. Wo confident tha.
Kitna bhi kyu na bhaag le Slogan, aaj uska ant nishchit tha. Wo isliye kyuki...
Upar halke ghane badlo me jo chamak kar apni roshni bikher raha tha. Wo tha...
FULL MOON!!!
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Dhanyavaad!
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Bahut badhiya update hai bhaiUpdate - 103 ~ A Day to Breathe Out
Ab tak...
Suhana : You fuckiinngggg know something... Tell me what the fuck you are hiding? Huh? Bolo! Kya chhupa rahi ho mujhse?
Divya : Urgghh! Jaan'na hai tumhe? Fine then!!! Ye lo!!! Tumhe yaad hai na kis liye bulaaya tha mene tumhe? Ye lo fir...
Kehte hue usne ek card feka jo seedha Suhana ke muh pe land kiya,
Haatho me pakad jab usne uss card ko dekha toh woh hairaani ke maare hil ke reh gayi,
"Whaaaaaaattttttttttttt!!!????"
Ab aage...
Mumbai...
Purvi's Home...
Morning ~ 8:32 AM
*Klink*
"Ye lo beta, chai!"
Saucer plate par chai se bhara cup rakhte hue Purvi ne kaha.
Saamne sofe par baithi hui thi Tej, aur uske hi bagal se virajmaan thi, Bhavna.
Uss din ke baad se, Purvi ne dono Maa beti ko hotel se check out karwa ke apne ghar me thehra liya tha.
Purvi ke pati wahi Mumbai me hi sthit ek sarkaari school ke principal the. Unn dono ki ek santaan bhi hai. Ek beta, jiska naam Tushar hai. Tushar Veer se keval ek saal hi chota hai aur woh medical ki padhayi hetu AIIMS me Delhi me shift ho chuka hai.
Usne fir ek cup chai ka Bhavna ki saucer plate par rakha, aur fir tray me se ek cup apne liye uthaate hue wahi dining table ki ek chair par baith gayi.
Purvi : Kuch pata laga kya fir?
Uske iss sawaal se Bhavna hairat me uski orr dekhi. Ye kya puch rahi thi woh? Bagal me Tej baithi hui thi. Fir bhi aisa sawaal? Purvi ka sawaal Veer ki khoj ke liye tha. Aur usne Tej ke saamne hi ye prashn puch liya. Zaahir tha ki Bhavna usse ajeeb nazro se dekhe,
Purvi (baat sambhaalte hue) : Ahh! Mera matlab tha ki, kuch pata laga kya kaam ke baare me? Tumne kaha tha na ki kaam chorr ke yaha par aayi ho tum. Toh koi dikkat toh nahi yadi tum yaha kuch aur din ruk jao toh?
Bhavna : R-Right! Nahi! Filhaal aisi koi pareshaani nahi hai.
Purvi (nakli hassi lete hue) : Ahahaha~ Okay!
Bhavna (awkwardly) : Hmm!
*Silence*
Dono ka yeh nakli naatak khatam hua aur ek ajeeb sii shaanti phel gayi kamre me.
Unhe laga ki akhir kaar woh Tejal se baat chhupaane me qamyaab ho gayi par...
Tej : 2 points for your acting.
Purvi : Huhh???
Bhavna : ???
Woh dono usse stabdh nazro se dekhi,
Tej : I said two points for your acting. Ye naatak khatam kar dijiye Mom, Aur maasi aap bhi. Aap dono ki hi acting bilkul bhi nahi jach rahi hai.
*Shwwwwooooooppppp*
Usne chai ki chuski lete hue kaha,
Tej : By the way, Chai acchi hai.
Purvi : T-Tej beta!
Bhavna : Tej! Tum...
Tej (dono ko dekhte hue) : Hmm! Sab pata hai mujhe. Wahi baat jo aap mujhse itne saalo se chhipaate aa rahi thi. Sab jaanti hu mein. I know ki mera ek saga chota bhai bhi hai. Aur woh bhi issi sheher me.
*Silence*
Purvi ka toh pata nahi, par Bhavna ko zaroor 440 volt ka jhatka laga tha. Jis raaz ko woh barso se chhipaate aayi, woh uske bina pata lage hi khul chuka tha?
Purvi (frowns) : Bhavna...!
Bhavna ne ek lambi saas lii aur chai ka cup waapas table par rakh diya,
Bhavna : K-Kab? Kab pata chala tumhe ye?
Raaz par se ab parda chuki khul hi chuka tha toh usse bekaar me firse dhaakne ki koi zaroorat nahi thi. Isliye, Bhavna ne shaanti se sawaal kiya,
Tej : Last year!
Bhavna : ????
Tej : Jab aap aur mein Rajasthan me the. Site par...
Tej ki nazre neeche jhuki hui thi. Jese maano woh ateet ko yaad kar rahi thi. Woh lamha jab usse apne bhai ke astitv ke baare me pehli baar pata chala tha.
Bhavna : Rajasthan me? T-Tab kese!? Mein toh...
Tej : Survey ki ek raat... Jab aap apne camp me thi...
Bhavna : Huh!!!
Tej : Mein aapse baat karne ke liye aa rahi thi. Par, jab tak aapke camp tak pohuchi, mene dekha ki...
Bhavna : !!??
Tej : Aap ro rahi thi. Seene se aap ek bacche ke chote se kapde ko bheenche hue thi. Haatho me ek photograph thi aapke. Aur, Mujhe yaad hai aapke woh bol. "Mera baccha!" "Kesa hoga tu ab?" "Dekh! Teri Maa kese tadap rahi hai yaha." "Kya tujhe yaad nahi aa rahi apni Maa ki?" "Tujhe pata bhi hai tere bina kese jee rahi hu mein?" "Par mein majboor hu mere laal. Mein majboor hu."
Bhavna achambhav me Tej ki saari baatein sunn rahi thi. Usse yaad aaya ki usne sach me uss raat yahi vaakya bole the. Toh kya Tej ne woh sab sunn liya tha?
Par yaha Tej aur Bhavna dono hi nahi jaante the ki jab woh Rajasthan se waapsi kar rahe the. Uss raat hi...
Tej toh apni birth par so chuki thi. Uss raat hi Bhavna apne bete Veer se mili thi. Jiske baare me usse pata bhi nahi tha. Ye wahi pal tha, jab Veer Suhana aur Sonia ki mom ki anguthi waale chor ko pakadne train par sawaar hoke Rajasthan aaya tha. Aur jaipur ke station se baith ke woh Suman, Aabha aur Sonali ko Mumbai leke jaa raha tha jab,
Ek aurat dusre platform par alag train me baithe paani ki bottle ke liye request kar rahi thi. Ye Bhavna hi toh thi. Jo survey ke baad se apne ghar laut rahi thi.
Par na hi Tej aur na hi Bhavna ye baat jaanti thi ki unke raaste aapas me iss tarah bhi mil chuke hai.
Bhavna khamosh reh gayi. Kya kehti ab? Sab kuch toh saamne tha.
Purvi (sighs) : Ek na ek din toh ye hona hi tha. Balki mujhe toh khushi hai ki akhir kaar Tej beta tumhe iss baat ka pata chala. Warna tumhari ye Maa na jaane kab tak ye raaz chhipaati rehti.
Bhavna : Tej mein...
Woh kehne ke liye daayi orr mudi par apne saamne usne jo dekha woh dekh ke Bhavna dang reh gayi,
Tej ki aankho se aasu beh rahe the. Kab dekha tha usne apni nidar beti ko iss tarah naino se paani ki boonde bahaate hue? Shayad Bhavna ko yaad bhi na hoga ki akhiri baar usne kab Tej ko iss qadar rote dekha tha. Par aaj...
Aaj woh ro rahi thi. Woh jaanti thi ki uski beti Tej ko zara bhi pasand nahi tha ki koi usse rota hua dekhe. Aur aaj toh...
Woh na keval uske saamne, balki apni maasi Purvi ke bhi saamne ro rahi thi. Ye ishaara tha ki uski peeda kitni zyaada thi.
Tej : K-Kyu?? Kyu kiya aapne aisa?
Bhavna ki khud ki aankho se anayas hi aasu nikal pade.
Bhavna : Beta...!!!
Tej : Kuch puch rahi hu mein... *sniff* Huh? Boliye! Kyu kiya aapne aisa?
Purvi : Tej! Meri baat suno, mein bataati hu...
Par iske pehle ki Purvi apni baat poori rakh paati, Tej apni jagah se uthi aur,
Tej : WOH SIRF AAPKA BETA HI NAHI HAI!!!!! WOH MERA SAGA BHAI BHI HAI!!!!!
Woh itni zorr se chillaayi ki waha baithi Purvi bhi avak reh gayi.
Tej : Kya soch ke aapne mujhse ye sach chhupaaya tha??? Haaaaannn??? Tell meee!!!!! Aapki himmat kese hui mujhse mere hi bhai ka astistv chhupaane ki???? Boliyeeee!!!!
Bhavna ki aankho se aasuo ki dharaaye behna shuru ho chuki thi. Aur uska shareer kaanpne laga,
Purvi ne jese hi ye dekha woh agle hi pal aage badh Bhavna ko thaam ke uske bagal se baith gayi.
Purvi (frowns) : Tej! Meri baat suno...
Tej ne apni maa ki haalat jab dekhi toh usse bhi ye ehsaas hua ki woh kuch zyaada hi bol gayi thi. Agle hi shan woh waha se palti aur apne kamre me jaake,
*THUUUUUDDDDDD*
Usne zorr se darwaaza band kar liya,
Purvi : Teeeeeejjjj!!!!
Purvi ne usse pukaara par, Bhavna ne uska haath thaam liya.
Bhavna : Rehne do Purvi! Rehne do! Usse akela rehne do thodi derr! Mein hi ek acchi Maa na bann saki. Isme uss bechaari ka koi dosh nahi... *sniff* koi dosh nahi!!!
Purvi (frowns) : Bhavna....!!!
Idhar kamre ke andar Tej darwaaze se tike zorr zorr se ro rahi thi. Na jaane kab iske pehle woh iss tarah royi thi. Usse khud bhi yaad nahi tha.
Woh itni kamzor toh nahi thi. Fir kyu? Harr baar jab bhi baat uske bichhde bhai se sambandhit aati thi toh kyu woh iss tarah toot sii jaati thi? Itni kamzor pad jaati thi? Woh toh mili bhi nahi thi uss se theek se.
Khud ke bhaar ko bed par patakte hue usne apna phone khola aur saamne screen par ek tasveer dekh, uske aasu aur zorr se behne lage,
'Kyuuu??? Aisa mere saath hi kyu hota hai??? And why it had to be you?? Do you have any idea that your Mom and big sis exists too?'
Siski bharte hue usne screen par komalta se haath ferra.
Screen par ek image maujood thi. Aur ye kisi aur ki nahi balki Veer ki hi thi.
Ye photo Tej ne apne phone se tab lii thi jab Egypt ke survey me Veer underground site me waha rakhe gupt samaan ko haath laga raha tha.
Ittefaaq se Tej ne usse tab dekh liya tha. Aur fauran hi usne apna phone nikaal ke ye photo click kar lii thi, ye soch ke ki baad me woh usse chori ke maamle me range haath pakad legi.
Par... Par ye photo dhari ki dhari reh gayi. Kyuki Veer ne uss samaan ko chhuune ke baad usse wese hi chorr diya tha. Usne kuch bhi nahi churaaya tha.
Lekin kisne socha tha ki Tej apni kheechi gayi iss tasveer ko aaj iss qadar apne seene se laga ke roegi? Usne khud bhi ye nahi socha tha kabhi.
'Vikram... Huh...!!?? Mein tumhe dhoondh ke rahungi. Chaahe kuch bhi ho jaaye.'
Woh khud se bol wahi laiti rahi. Na jaane kya chal raha tha uske mann me.
***
Idhar Mumbai me hi, Veer ke puraane ghar me Arohi aur Kavya apni baato me lagi hui thi.
Kavya bed par laiti ceiling ki orr apne dono haath felaaye apni shikaayate jata rahi thi, aur wahi Arohi Kavya ke college ka work kar rahi thi.
Kavya : Uggghhh!!! Agli baar ka competition mein hi jeetungi dekhna aap.
Arohi : Tum jeet jaati, agar woh Pragya participate nahi kari hoti toh.
Kavya : Wahi!!!! Hehehehe~ Par apne last year ke baad wo college toh leave kar hi dengi. Tab mein apne last year me finally first place le sakungi.
Arohi : Stupid! Abhi hi haraane ki koshish kyu nahi karti tum?
Kavya : Because she's better than me.
Arohi : Excuses...!
Kavya : Noooooo ~ Mene sach kaha. Lekin woh sab chorriye. Ye Veer bhaiya kab foreign se lautenge? Kuch bataaya kya aapko?
Arohi ne Kavya ke sawaal par sarr naa me hila diya,
Kavya : Uggghhhh!!! Ye Veer bhaiya bhi na. Harr baar bina bataaye lambi trips par nikal jaate hai. Hmph~ I hate him.
Arohi : Accha? Kuch din pehle woh kaun tha jo apne necklace ko baar baar dekh ke "I love you Veer bhaiya" chillaa raha tha? I guess koi toh tha. Hmm....!? Par kaun?
Kavya (blushes) : Ahhhh!!! W-Wo toh mein aise hi bas... Wait!!! Aap bhi toh... Aap bhi toh jaan boojh ke baar baar apne baalo ko kaan ke peeche karti ho na? Uss din bhi Kritika ke saamne jaan bujh ke aapne kiya tha taaki woh aapse aapki kaan ki baaliyo ke baare me puche. Jo ki usne pucha bhi tha. Weren't you showing off dii???
Arohi (blushes) : Wh-Whaatttt???
Woh achanak hi jhep sii gayi,
Arohi (blushes) : Wh-Whaaat rubbish!!!???
Kavya : Mujhse jhooth nahi bol sakti aap. Choti behan hu aapki. Sab pata hai mujhe. Mein toh atleast... Atleast... *blushes* openly sab kuch karti hu. Par aap toh... Sabse chhipte hue show off karti ho.
Arohi (blushes) : Y-Youuuu!!!! Jao nahi bana rahi mein tumhari ye drawing vrawing... Stupid!!!
Kavya : Kyaaaaaaa???? Ab aap... Ab aap uska gussa meri drawing par nikaalogi?
Arohi : It's your college work. Make it by your own.
Kavya : Par aap jaanti ho ki aapki drawing mujhse acchi hai.
Arohi : Haan toh ye abhi abhi kahe gaye shabdo ko bolne se pehle dhyaan me rakhna tha.
Kavya : Uggghhhhh!! Sorry na...!
Jab Arohi ne apni choti behan ki rondu shaqal dekhi toh ek lambi aah chorr woh waapas se uske kaam me lag gayi.
Arohi (sighs) : Fine!
Kavya : Ehehehehe~ I know! You are the best!
Arohi (khuspusaate hue) : Stupid....!
Kehte hue uska haath apne aap anayaas hi baalo ko kaan ke peeche karne ke liye chala gaya aur...
Uske kaan ki baaliya uski ungli se jaa takraayi. Jo sharm usne chhipa lii thi, agle hi shan gaalo ki wahi laali aur bhi badh gayi.
'Stupid...!'
Firse uske andar se awaaz aayi. Par iss baar keval mann me, aur kisi aur ke liye...
***
Las Vegas...
Forum shops at caesars...
Evening ~ 5:46 PM
Shaam ka samay ho raha tha. Mausam bhi haseen tha. Kul milaake ghoomne firrne ke liye ek perfect time.
Aur Aaj Veer aur Suhana wahi karne nikle the.
Itne dino se jo kuch bhi magazmaari unhone jheli thi, uss se baahar nikaalne ke liye ek breather lena zaroori tha.
Aur shopping se behtar aur kya hi ho sakta tha. Ek kaaran aur bhi tha shopping karne ka. Jo ki Divya ke dwaara dikhaaye gaye uss card me maujood tha.
Suhana aur Veer Divya ki ek dusri car leke khud hi yaha aaye hue the. Chuki investigation department me filhaal abhi koi kaam nahi tha unhe, aur saath hi teesre criminal ko lekar koi details nahi mil paayi thi, toh dono hi shoppi ke liye aa gaye.
Forum shops at caesars. Jo ki Vegas ki best jagah thi khareed-dari ke liye. Wese toh aur bhi behad acchi acchi jagah thi waha par ye sabse mashoor, aur ek must visit place thi.
Suhana hi gaadi chala rahi thi aur Veer baitha hua tha uske bagal se. Aur kuch hi derr me woh jagah ke saamne the.
Suhana : Hum pohuch gaye.
Veer : Hmm? Ohh! Ye jagah kaafi...
Veer ne dur se hi jagah ko dekhte hue kaha,
Suhana : Badi hai?
Veer : Hmm! Saath hi mehngi bhi lag rahi hai.
Suhana : Of course mehngi hai. Sabse mehngi hai ye shopping ke liye. One of the finest places to shop. Last time mein aayi thi toh kaafi kuch khareeda tha mene.
Veer : I see! Toh aap pehle yaha aa chuki hai?
Suhana : Of course! Now come! Be quick! Let's go!
Woh dono hi baahar nikle, aur entrance par pohuche.
Entrance dekhte hi Veer vismit sa hoke wahi sthir khada reh gaya.
Aur uske muh se apne aap hi nikal gaya,
"W-Woooowwww!!!"
Suhana (smiles) : Looks nice right?
Veer : It's actually amazing!
Suhana : Haha~ Let's go! Hamaare paas zyada waqt nahi hai. 8 baje tak hume waha bhi pohuchna hai.
Veer ne haami bhari. Aur woh dono andar chal diye. Andar brands ke showrooms aise maujood the jese chaupaati me alag alag khaane ke thele lage ho.
Aur brands bhi aise aise ki jinka sirf naam hi kaafi tha apni value bataane ke liye.
Gucci, H & M, versace, na jaane kya kya...
Aisi aisi brands maujood thi jo Veer apne desh me shayad hi kisi mall me mushqil se dekh paata tha.
Veer : This...
Suhana : Ye kuch bhi nahi hai. Aao andar chale.
Abhi woh aage badhe hi the ki usse wahi thehrna pada,
*Ring* *Ring*
Suhana ka phone baj utha.
Aur screen par naam tha,
Gaurav!!!!
Apni bauhe sikodte hue woh screen ko dekhi aur fir Veer ko,
Suhana : Umm?!! Give me a second okay?
Veer : Sure!!!
Aur idhar woh thoda distance lete hue aage aayi aur baat karne lagi,
Suhana : Hello??
Gaurav : Tum lauti nahi abhi tak? Aur kya baat hai? Itni busy ho gayi apni dost ke saath ki ek phone tak nahi kiya apne husband ko?
Bas! Ye jese akhiri shabd the jo Suhana abhi iss waqt sunn'na chaahti thi. Gaand ghis ghis ke kese woh log yaha kuch din survive kiye hai unn criminals ke beech me, ye baat keval wahi jaante the. Aur yaha uska pati ye soch raha tha ki woh yaha mazze kar rahi hai.
Pal bhar ke liye Suhana ke muh me gaali aayi thi. Lekin usne apne aap ko control kar liya,
Suhana : What do you mean? Mein yaha koi enjoy karne nahi aayi hu Gaurav! I'm here for work.
Gaurav : Accha? Haha! Arre bhai aisa kya work aa gaya?
Suhana (lambi saans chorrte hue) : Dekho! Mein abhi busy hu. Hum baad me baat karenge.
Gaurav : Busy? Bhala kis liye? Aisa kya ho raha hai waha? Aur zara apni friend Divya se toh baat karao. Kaafi samay se uss se baat nahi hui hai.
Suhana (mann me) : This... This idiot...
Suhana : Gaurav!!! Woh yaha nahi hai. Okay? Ab mein rakh rahi hu.
Gaurav : Nahi hai? Toh tum kaha ho?
Suhana : Mein shopping ke liye aayi hu.
Gaurav : Akele?
Suhana : Nahi! Veer hai saath me.
Gaurav : Veer? Kaun Veer?
Suhana : Huh? Mene tumhe bataya tha na? Veer! Sonu se jiski pehchaan hai? Uski car se jiska accident hua tha? Kuch yaad aaya?
Gaurav : Huh? Ohhhhh! Woh!!?? Haan!!! Ek minute!!! Toh tum uske saath waha kya kar rahi ho?
Suhana : What? Aane se pehle bataya toh tha ki ek friend ke saath jaa rahi hu mein Vegas.
Gaurav : What the hell Suhana? Woh kaha se tumhara friend ban gaya? Aur tumne ye toh nahi bataya tha mujhe ki tum uske saath jaa rahi ho. Matlab tum jabse ek anjaan ladke ke saath....
Suhana : Gauraavvv!!!! Tumhe meri baate sunn'ne ke liye waqt rahe tab toh jaanoge na.
Gaurav : Tum...
Suhana : Tumhe bataane waali thi. Par tumhara toh dhyaan hi nahi tha meri baato par. Jab tumse kaha ki mein jaa rahi hu. Your response was ~ "Yeah yeah! Go!"
Gaurav : Woh isliye kyuki mein meeting me tha Suhana.
Suhana : I don't care Gaurav!!! I don't care!
Gaurav : Youuuu!!!!
Suhana : Aur ab tum free hue ho toh ab yaad aayi meri? Socha ki ab apni patni se do chaar baate toh kar lu uska dil behlaane ke liye,
Gaurav : Tum jaanti ho mein busy tha...
Suhana : Aur mein toh paagalo ki tarah yaha gaand ghis rahi hu na?
Gaurav Suhana ke muh se abhadr shabd sunte hi thoda jhep gaya. Aisa nahi tha ki woh pehli baar uske muh se gaali sunn raha tha. Par bas baat ye thi ki Suhana tabhi aisi bhaasha ka prayog karti thi jab woh behad hi gusse me hoti thi.
Gaurav : Suhana...!
Suhana : Gaurav!! Mein abhi bilkul bhi mood me nahi hu kuch bhi baat karne ke liye. I'm here to freshen up myself a bit. So leave me alone. Is that clear?
Gaurav : Suhana tum...
Par iss se pehle ki woh kuch keh paata,
*Call ends*
Phone cut ho chuka tha.
Mann me gaaliya liye Suhana peeche ko aayi. Usme dekha ki Veer ek statue ko nihaar raha tha.
Gussa shaant kar woh Veer ke paas gayi aur uss se chalne ke liye boli,
Veer : Ho gayi baat?
Suhana : Y-Yeah! Chalo!
Veer : Hmm? Sab theek toh hai na?
Uski sawaal par Suhana ne Veer ko shan bhar ke liye dekha aur fir haan me sarr hila diya.
Veer : Aisa laga ki aap pareshaan ho. So I just... You know...
Veer ka bas itna kehna hi tha ki,
Suhana : Arrrghhh!!! Fucking hell!!!!! What does he think of himself?????? Am I his servant or whaaaattttt???? That stupid idiotic rat.... Aaarrrghhhh!!!!!
Veer : E-Ehhhhh!!??
Uska ye roop dekh Veer ko PTSD sa mehsoos ho raha tha.
'Ohhh fuccckkkkk!!! Y-Ye inhe kya hua?'
[Seems like Suhana ki dusri personality trigger ho rahi hai Master!]
'F-Fuuuccckkkkkk!!! Wait!!! Woh aise kyu dekh rahi hai mujhe? Shittttt!!!! That's scary!!!!'
Suhana ajeeb sii muskaan liye Veer ka haath pakdi aur usse ghaseetate hue andar le gayi,
'Ohhhh fuuuucckkkkk!!!!'
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Woh jese hi ek shop me ghusi,
Uska gussa saatve aasmaan par tha.
Shop me maujood employee uske paas aaya aur vinamrata se pucha,
Employee : Yes! Ma'am! What can I do for you?
Suhana ne apni ek ungli peeche uss employee ki orr point kii,
Suhana : That!!!!
Toh peeche jab Employee ne dekha toh paaya ki ek bada sa teddy waha latka hua tha.
Employee : Ohhh that? Haha~ That will cost you for...
Suhana : Bring me that!!!!
Employee : Huh? O-Okay!!!
Woh employee waha se teddy nikaal ke uske paas laaya,
Employee : Ma'am! This is created by our finest of craftsmen. The quality of the fur is...
Suhana : How durable is this?
Employee : Huh???
Suhana : How much punches it can survive?
Employee : Wh-Whaaattttt???
'Ohhhhh fuccckkk!!!!! Fuck fuck fuck....!!!!'
Idhar Veer Suhana ke peeche khade hoke jab sab dekh raha tha toh bechaare ke shareer me raungte khade ho gaye the.
Suhana ki dusri personality baahar aa chuki thi. She was pissed. Definitely pissed.
Woh ek teddy maang rahi thi. Jaha employee usse ye samjha raha tha ki teddy ka fur acchi quality ka tha toh Suhana ko inn sab baato se matlab hi nahi tha.
Woh toh ye puch rahi thi ki ye teddy kitne ghoose seh sakta tha? Zara sochiye ki aap ki ek gift ki dukaan hai. Aur koi khubsoorat lady aapke paas aake aap se puche ki aapki shop ka teddy kitne ghoose le sakta hai? Toh aapka muh kesa hoga?
Kuch aise hi bhaav abhi uss employee ke chehre par the.
Par iske pehle ki woh kuch keh paata,
Veer : We're leaving!!! Thank you for your time!!!!
'Fuuuuckkkkk!!!!'
Veer ne Suhana ke haath ko thaama aur usse kheech ke baahar le aaya.
Usne usse ek bench par wahi baithaaya aur uska gussa shaant karne ke liye woh chal diya wahi par lagi ek ice cream ki badi sii shop me,
Par jese hi woh aage aaya, saamne ka nazaara dekh ke hi woh chaka chaundh reh gaya.
Kya khubsoorti thi iss jagah ki.
Yadi mall ho toh aisa...
[Ek din aapke paas iss se bhi accha mall hoga. A much bigger one!]
'Pari...!!!'
Kuch bhi ho jaaye, Pari kabhi bhi motivation dena band nahi karti thi.
Veer dekh raha tha unn jagaho ko,
Kya khoob tareeqe se statues ka istemaal kiya gaya tha.
'Hmmm? Wese idea bura nahi hai. Yadi inn statues me hamaare desh ke shurveero ki aakriti rahe toh?'
[That's a nice idea Master! Isse sticky note me add kijiye. Hum apna khud ka mall banaenge iss theme par. I'll support you... Always! ]
'Hahahaha~ We still have a long way to go. By the way mere points ka kya? Itne kam points Nightwalker ke mission ke liye kyu?'
[Mene bataya tha na master. Mission jitne acche tareeqe se poora hoga, points uss hisaab se milenge.]
'Toh mene iss baar kya galti kar dii?'
[3 people died.]
'Ohhhhhh!!!'
[Mil gaya answer?]
'Yup Anyways! Let's go!!!'
Usne ice cream khareedi, aur Suhana ke paas leke gaya. Aur waqai, Suhana ka gussa kuch hadd tak shaant ho chuka tha.
Suhana ne na keval khud dherr saari shoping kii balki Veer ke liye bhi usne kaafi kuch khareed ke usse dilwaaya.
Khaaskar ek accha sa suit, jisse Veer ne pehen ke wahi change kar liya tha. Aur usne khud bhi ek khubsoorat sii dress pehni hui thi.
Kyuki unhe yaha se ab jaana tha apni doosri manzil ki orr,
*Thud*
Car ka darwaaza band hua,
Suhana : Chale?
Veer : Hmm!!!
Aur woh dono hi waha se nikal gaye,
Downtown ki orr. Kyuki yahi unki manzil thi.
Akhir issi ke liye toh woh shopping karne bhi aaye the. Divya ne jo kal card Suhana ko fek ke diya tha, uske sang ek flyer bhi tha.
Jo tha...
Aur akhir me jo card usne feka tha Suhana ke muh pe woh tha, ek invitation card.
Aur, Invitation tha...
Natalia Martin ka...
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
This update was to tone down the gritty and intense situation, as the name suggests. Next update me aap jaante hi hai ki kis se mulaqaat hone waali hai . Toh like thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka guys.
Dhanyavaad!