Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

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Editing!!!

 

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Aor lagta ha aaj bi syd late night hi update aayaga maybe

Waiting dude, take you time, but just inform us and not to forget give a suitable dashing update

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Update - 178 ~ The Collapse
[Note : Update kaafi bada hai. Itminaan se padhna.]​

Ab tak...

Ava jo Veer ko uthata dekh ek raahat ki saans li, usne apni katana ko hawa me feka jo Veer ke bagal se jaa ke zameen par khus gayi.

Ava : Take it... Veer!!!

Magar, Veer ke muh se uske baad jo bol nikle woh uske nahi the. Awaaz uski hi thi, parantu bol Pari ke the.

"I don't need any weapons...! I AM THE WEAPON!!!"

Ab aage...

“Aage badhte raho! Aage badhte raho!”

“Hume rukna nahi hai! Lord aur Miss Erica hamare liye itni kathnaiyo ka saamna kar rahe hai.”

“Chaukanna raho! Aur, Captain Feng ko follow karte raho!”

Order ke do senior sadasya Bo aur Ming baaki sabhi ko samjhane me lage hue the. Sab ke sab Jawan Feng ke peeche peeche uske nirdesh anusar chalte jaa rahe the. Kayi log ghayal awastha me the toh kayi saare ladne ke baad thakaan se joojh rahe the. Magar, kuch chuninda aise the jo apni jaan bhi gawa chuke the.

Unit 2 ka saamna sabhi ne poori nidarta se kiya tha. Par, Legion ke log marr mitne ke liye taiyaar baithe the. Ghamasan ladayi me kayi logo ne apni jaane gawayi aur kuch buri tarah chotil ho gaye. Apne logo ko marta dekh bhala Order kaha chup baithne waala tha? Renshu ke aadesh ke vipreet jaa ke akhir unhone bhi apne bhaiyo ki maut ka badla liya. Bina khoon kharaabe waali ladaayi ab maut ki jung bann chuki thi.

Prann toh liya tha ki kisi ki bhi jaan nahi lenge. Par, jab Legion ke logo ko jaan ki parvah hi nahi toh bhala Order bina pratishodh liye kaise shaant reh sakta tha? Na hi Renshu yaha maujood tha aur na hi Erica. Iss waqt agar Order ke members ko kisi ki shiddat se talash thi toh woh thi apne Lord ki jo unhe kahi bhi nazar nahi aa rahe the.

Bo : Na jaane Lord kaha chale gaye hai. Woh theek toh honge na?

Ming : Lord ko dhundhna hamari sabse pehli priority honi chahiye.

Captain Feng : Dekho! Humare aadmi ghayal hai. Agar, hum firse kisi ladayi me pade toh aur log ghayal honge. Ho sakta hai aur bhi log apni jaan gawa baithe. Aise me sabse pehle humara Renshu Sir ko dhundhna bahut zaroori hai. Kyuki, iss jangal ka kona-kona wahi acche se jaante hai. Tum me se koi hai jo iss jangal se parichit ho?

Bo (aage aate hue) : Mein Lord ke saath kayi baar andar tak gaya hu. Lekin, din ke samay me. Iss andhere me mujhe samajh nahi aa raha ki kaha jaana chahiye. Haan, magar disha ka anuman hai mujhe. Abhi jaha par hum hai, yaha se hume dakshin-poorv disha ki orr badhna chahiye.

Captain Feng : Dakshin-poorv…? Matlab South-east! Pakka? Kya tumhe poora bharosa hai? Yahi sahi disha hai?

Bo (nods) : Haan! Mere khayal se yahi honi chahiye! Mine ka raasta wahi hona chahiye.

Captain Feng : Mere khayal se nahi…! Agar, zara bhi choonk hui toh ho sakta hai ki hum unke kisi jaal me jaake phans jaaye aur sab ke sab maare jaaye.

Bo : Toh aur hum kar bhi kya sakte hai? Yaha khade bhi toh nahi reh sakte na?

Ming : Captain Feng! Mujhe lagta hai Bo theek keh raha hai. Lord ke saath ye kayi baar yaha aa chuka hai aur ise hum sab se zyada anubhav hai. Hum satark reh ke uss disha me aage badh sakte hai. Zyada se zyada kya hoga? Hume ek aur unit se bhidna padega? Yahi karne toh hum yaha aaye hai. Pehle hi humne apne kuch saathiyo ko kho diya hai. Toh fir ab darr kaisa?

Captain Feng (sighs) : Theek hai! Ladayi ab aar ya paar ki ho hi gayi hai toh yahi sahi. Tum…! Aage aao aur mere saath chalna. Baaki sabhi…! Humaare peeche rahenge.

Captain Feng ne Bo ko apne sang chalne ke liye kaha jo iss jangal se thoda bahut parichit tha. Baaki sabhi unke peeche peeche chalne lage. Magar, sabse peeche ke sadasyo me se chal rahi Divya ki vyakulta ab apni seema ko laangh chuki thi.

Divya (pants) : Y-Ye sab chal kya raha hai? Hum kaha jaa rahe hai? Na hi direction ka pata hai, na hamare group ko lead karne waale mil rahe hai, na hi mere friend ka ata pata hai aur upar se-

Usne apne haath me liye hue phone ki screen ko ek baar punah dekha jisme koi bhi network dikhayi nahi de raha tha.

Divya : ...upar se ye goddamn network bhi nahi mil raha hai.

Jawaan 3 (glances) : Ye toh lazmi hai, Miss. Iss ghane jangal me... bhala kaise aapko koi network mil sakta hai?

Divya : Shit!!! Agar, mujhe pehle pata hota toh mein kam se kam kuch zaroori gadgets hi le aati.

Jawaan 3 : Filhal aage badhne ke alawa humare paas koi chaara nahi.

Divya (frowns) : Hamare group ke logo me se kayi log maare gaye hai. Jaane chali gayi. Y-Ye chhoti moti baat nahi.

Jawaan 3 : Isliye to Renshu Sir ne aapse wapas jaane ke liye kaha tha. Yaha aapka koi kaam nahi hai. Fir kyu-!?

Divya : Mein FBCC se hu, Special Agent Divya. Aur, ye mera first assignment hai. Mujhe iss case ke baare me saare raaz jaanane hai. Aur-

Kehte hue uske bol wahi tham gaye. Woh sirf FBCC ke diye gaye assignment ki wajah se yaha nahi thi.

'-Aur mein jaanti hu ki Veer mujhse kuch chhipa raha hai. Woh sirf business karne yaha nahi aaya hai. Director ne bhi mujhe hint kiya tha. Veer ka aise bade bade cases me involved hona. Koi gehra raaz chhipa hai iske peeche-! B-But where is he?'

Apne mann me soch bina kuch aage kahe, woh jawaan ke saath aage badhne lagi. Uski bauhe chinta aur sanshay ke maare kasi hui thi. Iss case ki teh tak jaane se zyada woh Veer ko dhundhne ke liye zyada aatur thi.

Unhe chalte chalte kuch samay beet gaya. Ghane jangal me neeche beechi jhaadiyo ko alag kar woh jaise hi ek khule hisse me daakhil hue toh saamne ka manzar dekh unn sabhi ki aankhein bhay ke maare fel gayi.

"Looordddd!!!!"

"Loooordddd-!!!"

Pukaarte hue woh sabhi saamne ki orr bhaage. Saamne Renshu ped ke tane se lag kar zameen par baitha tha. Magar, unke bhay ka kaaran ye nahi tha.

Kaaran tha unke Lord ki yeh dasha. Renshu ke pait se labalab khoon baha hua tha. Uske pait ko dekh lag raha tha ki kisi ne use nukeele auzaar se cheer diya ho.

Bo : L-Loooorddd-!!!

Samast sadasya Renshu ke ird gird aate hue use gher liye. Bo aur Ming aage aate hue uske paas baithe aur use sahara dete hue uthaane ki koshish karne lage. Unn sabhi ki aankhon me darr toh tha hi par saath hi woh namm bhi padne lagi thi.

Ming : L-Lord-!! Y-Ye kya-!? Kaise? Aapko?

Renshu ne apni palke uthaate hue unn sab ko dekha. Uski saansein ukhdi ukhdi chal rahi thi. Woh samajh gaya ki uske Order ke sadasya uski ye haalat dekh bhaari chinta me aa chuke the. Usne apna daaya haath hawa me uthaaya aur unhe aashvasan dete hue kaha.

Renshu : M-Mein theek hu-!!! Tum sab ko chinta karne ki zaroorat nahi.

Captain Feng (frowns) : Aap theek hai? Apni haalat dekhiye. Ye jaanleva hamla tha. Kisne kiya ye?

Renshu : Chinta mat karo! Ye toh bas mamooli sa- urgh-!!!

Jaise hi usne uthna chaaha, uske pait ke ghaav na use saaf inkaar kar diya.

Bo : Loooorrdd!!

Renshu : Mujhe bas thoda samay lagega. Pareshan mat ho. Aur, pehle... Jald se jald iss par patti baandh do.

Captain Feng : Patti baandhne se kuch hoga, Sir? Jaisi aapki dasha hai aapko isi waqt hospital me le jaane ki zaroorat hai. Damn it!!! Kaash government ki taraf se kam se kam helicopter hi assign kiya gaya hota... Toh aaj... Toh aaj ye sab-

Uske swar me nirasha thi aur krodh bhi. Jaise wo aage ke anjaam ko jaanta tha. Use lag raha tha ki ab Renshu ki zindagi kuch ghanto ki hi mehman thi. Peeche khadi Divya bhi jab saamne aayi toh uske chehre par bhi wahi bhaav umad pade jo samast sadasyo ke chehro par the. Aur, uska anuman bhi Feng se mel khaane wala hi tha.

Divya (frowns) : Y-Ye ghaav...! Bahut bada hai. M-Mujhe nahi lagta ki ab...

Uske kehne ka matlab saaf tha. Aisa ghaav agar kisi bhi aam insaan par hota toh harr koi andaza laga sakta tha ki uska bhavishya kya hone waala tha.

Maut!

Aise ghane jangal me iss tarah ke ghaav se grasit hone ke baad zara bhi sambhavna nahi bachti ki woh insaan zinda wapas ghar laut paaye. Kyuki, lautne ke dauran samay hi itna guzar chuka hoga ki blood loss ke chalte aadmi apni jaan beech raste me hi gawa dega.

Parantu, Captain Feng, Divya aur baaki sabhi sadasya... Koi bhi ye nahi jaanta tha ki Renshu ke paas system tha. Woh koi maamooli vyakti nahi tha.

Renshu Divya aur Feng ko dekh halke se muskuraya aur bola.

Renshu : Mujhe aam insaano ki tarah mat samjho captain! Shaolin ka master hu mein aur Order ka Lord! Ye mamooli chot kuch bhi nahi.

Captain : …?

Divya : ...?

Idhar Bo apne Lord ki aagya ka paalan karte hue aage aaya aur Renshu ke ghaav ko saaf karte hue uske pait par chinese jadi-bootiyon se bani aushdhi ka lep laga kar patti baandhne laga. Ghaav dekh ke bechaare unn sabhi members ki haalat kharab ho rakhi thi. Kintu, Renshu ke chehre par zara bhi dard ke bhaav nahi jhalke.

Ek baar punah sabhi ke mann me unke Lord ke liye izzat aur badh gayi. Akhir kitne sehen-sheel vyakti the unke Lord. Renshu ki marham patti ho jaane ke baad, kuch derr sabhi ne wahi theherne ka faisla liya. Kuch neeche zameen par apne Lord ke ird gird baith gaye toh kuch ped ke tane se tik kar khade ho gaye. Kuch abhi bhi hathyaar liye chaukanne the toh kuch do-chaar ke samooh me apni-apni vartalaap me jut gaye.

Unhi me se Captain Feng ne apne chaaro orr nazre maarte hue ilaake ka jayza liya. Andhere ke chalte use zyada dur ka toh kuch nahi dikhayi diya par apne aas paas ka nazara wo bhali bhaanti dekh paa raha tha. Kayi saare hathyaar zameen par bikhre pade the. Kahi kahi zameen aisi thi jaise maano waha par koi bada visfot hua ho. Sookhe patte bhi ajeeb tareeqe se ast-vyast bikhre hue the. Yeh kisi ghamasan ladaayi ka sanket de raha tha.

Captain Feng : Yaha kuch hua tha. Hai na?

Uske sawaal par Renshu ek baar fir muskuraya. Captain Feng waqai captain kehlaane yogya tha.

Renshu (nods) : Hmm!

Captain Feng : Trap?

Renshu (nods) : Hmm!

Captain Feng (frowns) : Fir?

Renshu : Mujhe gher liya gaya tha. Ek prakar ka jaal tha jo mere liye bichhaya gaya tha. Mujhe maarne ke liye.

Bo (scowls) : Unki itni himmat??

Divya : A-Aur, aap? Aap uss trap se akele baahar nikal aaye?

Renshu : Mujhe nikalna hi tha. Ye mamooli cheezein mere patan ka kaaran nahi bann sakti.

Ming : Woh hamaare Lord hai, madam! Koi aam insaan nahi!

Divya (glances) : …

Captain Feng : Aap waqai theek toh ho na? Kyuki, woh chot-

Renshu : Ghabrao nahi! Meri jaan khatre me nahi hai. Ghaav gehra zaroor hai par mein ghar lautne me saksham hu. Haan, iss haalat me mein daud nahi sakta par chal zaroor sakta hu.

Bo : Ye aap kaisi baat kar rahe hai, Lord? Hamare rehte hue aap iss haalat me kaise chal sakte hai bhala? Hum sab kis liye hai? Hum aapka sahaara banenge.

Renshu : Nahi! Tum sab khud thake hue ho. Apni haalat dekho zara. Aur, wese bhi mujhe chalne me dikkat nahi hogi.

Bo : P-Par-

Renshu : ORDER!!!!

Uske thoda sakhti se kehte hi Bo ne apna sarr turant hi aagya maante hue jhuka liya.

Bo : Jaisa aap kahe, Lord!

Captain Feng (sighs) : Aap ko confident dekh mujhe thodi raahat mili. Par, shayad meri iss khabar se kahi aapka confidence gir na jaaye.

Renshu : Hmm???

Captain Feng (frowns) : Order ke 6 sadasya maare gaye.

Khabar sunte hi Renshu ka sarr neeche jhuk gaya aur apne bhaale par uski pakad mazboot ho gayi.

Captain Feng : Maine bahut koshish ki ise rokne ki magar... Magar, Legion ke log jaise thaan ke aaye the ki unhe jaan leni hi hai. Mein chaah ke bhi kuch kar na saka. M-Mujhe maaf karna-!

Renshu jaanta tha ki aisi ladayi me harr koi sahi salamat bach ke nikal aaye ye sambhav nahi tha. Mann hi mann woh pehle se hi iske liye taiyar tha. Parantu, fir bhi... apne aadmiyon ko khona nirasha janak hi tha. Use jaise fir kuch dhyaan aaya.

Renshu : Tumhari galti nahi-!!! Erica!!! Ye Erica ki zimmedari thi. Kaha hai woh? Erica???

Nazre daudate hue Renshu ne chaaro orr dekha par Erica ka koi naam-o-nishaan nahi tha. Captain Feng, Bo aur Ming teeno ek dusre ko asmanjas me dekhne lage. Koi kaise kahe ki unki laadli Erica unhe pehle hi rann-bhoomi me chorr kahi aur hi laapata ho chuki hai.

Bo : L-Lord-!!

Renshu : Huh?

Bo : Miss Erica humaare saath nahi hai.

Renshu (frowns) : Tumhare saath nahi hai matlab?

Bo : W-Wo-!! L-Lord woh-

Captain Feng : Miss Erica bina bataaye pehle hi kahi aur chali gayi.

Jab Renshu ne ye suna toh uski aankhein aashcharya ke maare fel gayi.

Renshu : Kya?

Captain Feng : Ji! Woh jaise hi hamare paas aayi thi toh unhone humse yahi kaha tha ki unhe bahut zaroori kaam hai aur unka waha pahuchna bahut zaroori hai. Uske baad wo kaha gayi hum me se kisi ko kuch nahi pata.

Renshu ne agle hi shan itni zorr se apna haath ped par maara ki ped ke tane ka kuch hissa ukhad ke neeche gir gaya. Waha maujood sabhi log darr ke maare ekdum shaant pad gaye.

Renshu (gusse me) : Eriiicaaaa!!!!! Erica!!!! Maine use samjhaya bhi tha ki Order ko lead karne ki zimmedari uske sarr hai. Aur, uske bawajood wo...! Tum me se kisi ne roka kyu nahi use?

Ming : Humne bahut koshish ki thi, Lord. Magar, woh hamari baatein sunane ko taiyaar hi nahi thi. Bahut hi chinta me aur jaldbaazi me lag rahi thi.

Renshu (frowns) : Maine samjhaya tha use ki abhi wo frontline missions ke liye taiyaar nahi hai. Tch!!!

[Renshu! Zara pucho ki woh kis disha me bhaagi thi.]

'Hmm!'

Renshu : Tumhe yaad hai wo kis disha me gayi thi?

Bo (nods) : Jaha se hum aaye the, Lord. Usi disha me wo wapas gayi thi.

Jawaab sunte hi Lloyd ki awaaz punah Renshu ke mann me goonji.

[Samajh gaya. Erica agar jaldbazi me hamare aadmiyon ko chorr ke bhaagi hai toh iska ek hi kaaran ho sakta hai, Renshu.]

'Veer-!?'

[Exactly! Blemish apply kiya hoga usne. Iska matlab wo wapas se lauti aur eastside ki orr gayi hogi jaha... Shit! Blemish se notification aana iska matlab Veer khatre me hoga. Aur, Erica wahi gayi hai.]

Ye gyaat hote hi Renshu ke badan me ek sihran daud gayi. Erica uska sab kuch thi. Agar, use kuch ho gaya toh-

'Nahi!'

[Agar, tum ghayal na hue hote toh hum isi waqt mine ke raaste ki orr badh sakte the.]

'Tsk-!!! Ye ghaav!'

Usne apni chot par haath ferr kuch derr pehle ki ghatna ko yaad kiya. Sab kuch uski mutthi me tha. Par, achanak se hi jaise uss anjaan system holder ne baazi palat di thi.

Kuch derr pehle...

Renshu jab unknown system holder ko giraane ke baad uski orr badha toh kahi se bhi wo anjaan naujavan koi bahut shaktishali vyakti prateet nahi ho raha tha.

Uski vyatha saaf batla rahi thi ki use kaafi ghaat pahuchi hai. Renshu uske samaksh aake bas chand qadam ki duri par khada hua aur bola.

Renshu : Maine pehle hi kaha tha ladke. Mujhse bhidna vyarth hai. Tum aaye toh apni marzi se the magar jaoge meri marzi se.

Lekin, woh anjaan system holder khamosh hi raha. Apni saanso ko durust karne me laga hua tha. Muh par kapda lipte hone ke kaaran Renshu ko uska chehra nazar nahi aaya. Apne bhaale ki nok ko uske gale ke saamne kar usne chetavni di.

Renshu : Ab jo mein sawal puchu, unke jawaab seedhe-seedhe ugal dena. Warna, ye bhaala tumhare sarr ko dhad se alag kar dega.

Kintu, wo naujavan ab bhi khamosh bana raha. Uski taraf se koi bhi pratikriya nahi hui.

Renshu (frowns) : Kisne bheja hai tumhe yaha?

Koi jawab nahi. Renshu ke maathe par silvatein aur gehri ho gayi.

Renshu : Tumhe sunayi nahi diya? Maine pucha ki kisne bheja hai tumhe yaha?

Magar, ladka toh jaise uski baato ko ek kaan se sunn dusre kaan se nikaalta jaa raha tha.

Renshu : Tum aise nahi maanoge...!

Gusse me aa ke Renshu ne apne bhaale ko haath me do baar ghumaya aur nishaana saadhate hue woh uss ladke ke kandhe me bhaala khosne hi waala tha jab-

"Hahahaha-!!!"

Woh ladka achanak hi dheere se hassne laga. Uske kandhe thahaako ke chalte upar neeche uchhalne lage.

'!!?'

Ye dekh Renshu wahi ruk gaya. Kya ye ladka pagal ho gaya tha? Iss haalat me bhi bhala woh kaise hass sakta tha?

Ladka dheere dheere apne haath upar kar khud ko nihattha dikhaate hue utha. Renshu ka nishaana ab bhi uske kandhe par jama hua tha.

Ladka : Mein haar gaya! I really surrender.

Akhir kaar, uske muh se kuch shabd nikle.

Renshu : Mujhe bakwas nahi sunani. Mere sawal ka jawab do. Tumhe yaha kisne bheja?

Ladka : Hmm! Agar, mein jawab de du toh kya tum mujhe yaha se jaane de doge?

Renshu : Woh depend karta hai ki tum sahi jawaab dete ho ya nahi!

Ladka : Hahahahahahaha!

Ek baar fir woh zorr zorr se hassne laga. Jaise maano uss par koi bhoot sawaar ho gaya ho.

Ladka : Agar, mein sahi jawab deta hu toh use tum galat thehra ke mujhe maar daaloge. Aur, agar galat deta hu toh bhi. Toh, fir mere jawab dene ka matlab hi kya? Hahahahaha!

Renshu (frowns) : Mein aisa nahi karunga. Tum jaise system holders ko jitna ho sake mein maarne se khud ko rokta hu.

Ladka : Tch! Tch! Tch! Nahi nahi nahi! Tumne yaha par galat baat keh di.

Renshu : !!!??

Ladka (grins) : TUM...! MUJHE MAAR HI NAHI SAKTE!

Khatra!!! Renshu ko jaise uske haav bhaav dekh ek bura andesha hua. Lloyd ki oonchi awaaz bhi uske mann me turant goonj gayi.

[Renshuuuu-!!! Dur hato-!!!]

Aankhein phaade Renshu ne na aav dekha na taav aur seedha apna bhaala uss ladke ke kandhe ki orr feka.

*Swoosh*

Magar, ladka jaise jaanta tha ki uske kandhe ki taraf bhaala aayega. Halka sa bagal me hote hue wo hamle se bacha aur bhaala seedhe ped me jaa ke dhans gaya.

*Thuck*

Usne agle hi shan apne kapdo me kahi se gol sa padarth nikaala aur ungliyon se use Renshu ke perro ki orr feka...! Aur, tabhi-

*Pufffff*

Halka dhua Renshu ke ird gird fel gaya.

'Smoke bomb!!?'

[Smoke bomb nahi. Uska chhota roop hai ye. Baahar niklo! Jaldi!!]

Renshu dhue me se baahar aane ke liye peeche ki orr ucchla. Magar, jaise hi usne chhalaang lagayi. Hawa me rehte hue use ek dhwani sunaayi di, jise sunn uska badan thanda pad gaya.

*Whish*




Aankhein bhay ke maare fel gayi. Ye awaaz aisi thi jaise maano kisi patle se wire ko haatho me leke kheencha gaya ho.

Aur, Renshu ka anumaan ekdum sahi tha. Uss ladke ne-

Apne haath se adrishya samaan wires ko kheencha. Agle hi pal zameen me khusi hui ek blade jo unn wires se bandhi thi woh Renshu ki taraf peeche se tez raftar se lagne ko aayi.

Magar, tabhi-

*Ding*

[Rapid Reaction]

Uski skill activate hui aur usne turant apne ped me khuse bhaale ko chain se zorr se jhatka deke kheencha.

*Kha-ching*

Bhaala itni raftar se uski orr aaya ki hawa me hi Renshu ne khud ke shareer ko tilt kar uss se bacha liya. Aur, woh bhaala seedhe jaake-

*Clang*

Peeche se aa rahi uss blade se takraya aur dono hathyaar hawa me zorr se bhidant ki wajah se gol ghum neeche gir gaye.

'Akhir, usne ye kab-!???'

Renshu hakka bakka tha. Bhala ye wires se lipti blade uss ladke ne kab zameen me khos di?

[That time...!]

Lloyd ne jaise turant hi use yaad dilaya. Renshu ke mann me kuch derr pehle hui vardaat chal-chitra bann daud gayi. Jab usne Mayhem ke lethal attack se uss ladke par hamla kiya tha tab woh ladka hawa me udte hue ped se jaa bhida tha.

Aur, yahi wo waqt tha jab uss ladke ne hawa me hi girne se pehle woh blade neeche khos di thi.

[He was waiting for us. What a scum!]

Ye gyaat hote hi Renshu ne apne daant gusse me mees liye.

Kintu, asli khatra toh ab tha-

*Whoosh*




Dhua halka sa chhata aur achanak hi woh ladka Renshu ke upar lapka. Uske haath me ek chaaku thi. Wire se bandhi blade ka woh hamla toh bas uska dhyaan bhatkaane ke liye tha. Asli vaar toh ye tha.

'Shit-!! A feint attack-!?'

[Renshhhuuuu-!!!]

Na hi uske paas bhaala tha aur na hi itna samay ki bhaale ko kheench liya jaaye. Rapid reaction ne activate hona chaha par jaise woh kisi kaaran-vash ho hi na paayi.

Aur, tabhi-

*Squelchhhhhh*

Hawa me khoon ke chheethe bikhar gaye. Ek dabi hui karaah Renshu ke muh se nikli. Aur, saath hi uss ladke ke hontho par kutil muskaan felti chali gayi. Chaaku Renshu ke pait ko cheerte hue andar ghus chuki thi.

[Renshu-!!!]

'Urgh-!!!'

Dard ko sehen karte hue usne ladke ko jakda par ladka jaise chaaku ko aur marodte hue uske pait se atadiyo ko baahar nikaalne ki firaq me tha.

Renshu ne fauran hi ek haath se uske haath ko roka aur dusre se usne ek zordaar hamla uske sarr par maarna chaaha. Magar, ladka chaaku ko uske pait me chhorte hue khud ko chhura kar peeche kood gaya.

Ladka : Khush-kismat ho tum jo mujhe pehle chot pahucha paaye. Warna, aaj tumhara ant yahi kar deta mein. Par...! Par, abhi ye possible nahi. Tum zaroor bach gaye. Lekin, tumhare dwara bheja gaya woh ladka ab tak junglee janvaro ka maans bann chuka hoga. Hahaha!

Renshu : H-Huh-!?

Ladka (grins) : Jaw Long ke paas Animal Kingdom hai, Li Renshu. Aur, black magic se ladi hui skills aur cards. Ab toh uss ladke ka maans noch-noch ke kha rahe honge janvar. Hahahaha-!!! Tarqeeb acchi lagayi thi tumne ek aur system holder ko bula ke use eastside me bhejne ki. Par-! Tum isme akele nahi the.

Renshu ne jaise hi Jaw Long ki skills aur cards ke baare me suna, uske badan me raungte khade ho gaye. Veer ke liye chinta uske andar samaayi.

Renshu (growls) : T-Tum-!! Kaun kaun hai iske peeche?

Ladka : Tum toh aise puch rahe ho jaise mein ye saare jawaab tumhe de dunga. Hahahaha! Fir milenge...! Li Renshu-! Of course... Agar, tum zinda rahe toh-! Goodbye!

Renshu : R-Ruko-!!! Urgh!!!

Magar, ladka waha se tezi me faraar ho gaya. Woh chaahta toh Renshu ko maar sakta tha lekin, use dur kahi se patto ke hilne ki awaaz pehle hi sunayi de chuki thi. Reinforcements apna raasta tay kar yaha aa rahe the. Majbooran use yaha se bhaagna hi pada.

Renshu apne pait me khusi chaaku ko jakde ped se lag ke neeche baith gaya. Sabse zaroori tha blood loss ko rokna. Usne chaaku ko nikaalte hue use feka. Aur, agle hi shan-

*Ding*

[Chi Perception]

Uski skills me se ek badi hi khubsurat aur upyog me aane waali skill. Aankhein band kar Renshu ne apni chot ko andhruni taur par mehsoos karna shuru kiya.

Chi ka arth hota tha urja. Chi perception use urja ko mehsoos karne ka nazariya uplabdh karwati thi. Woh apne pait ke andar hui haani ko apni urja ke zariye bareeki se jaanchne laga.

Usne ek gehri saans li...! Lloyd ne use chi perception bahut hi acche se sikhaya hua tha.

'Jaha dhyaan hota hai, waha urja hoti hai. Jaha urja hoti hai, waha uddeshya hota hai.'

Lloyd ke kahe gaye ye bol pehle use kadapi samajh nahi aate the. Magar, ab jaise woh isme maahir ho chuka tha.

Apne dhyaan ko usne apni chot par kendrit kiya. Uske mastishq se saari fizool baatein gayab ho chuki thi. Dimag me bas ek hi vichar ghoom raha tha. Aur, woh tha apni chot ko andhruni taur par mehsoos karna.

Jaha dhyaan hota hai, waha urja hoti hai. Chot par dhyaan lagaate hi use uss jagah apni urja mehsoos hone lagi. Woh urja ko apne mann ke hisaab se ek aakaar dene laga.

Jaha urja hoti hai, waha uddeshya hota hai. Apni urja ko mehsoos karte hi... Usne uss urja ko uske uddeshya me laga diya. Aur, uddeshya tha-

Khoon ko baahar behne se rokna. Aur, yahi thi ~ Chi perception. Jo na sirf aisi sthitiyo me balki aakraamak aur bachaav dono hi tareeqo ke liye bhi upyog ki jaa sakti thi.

Yahi sab hua tha inn guzre lamho me. Isi beeti vardaat ko yaad kar woh apni vichaaro se baahar aaya. Order ke sabhi log use chinta-janak bhaav liye ghoor rahe the.

Erica ke liye ab uski chinta atyadhik badh chuki thi. Khaas kar ye jaanane ke baad ki Jaw Long kin-kin prakaro ki shaktiyo ko apne paas rakhe hue tha.

Renshu : Captain! Hume jald se jald mine ke raaste ki orr badhna hoga.

Captain : M-Magar, aisi haalat me aap-?

Renshu : Samay bahut kam hai, captain! Meri beti kisi badi musibat me ho sakti hai. Mera waha pahuchna bahut zaroori hai.

Bo : Lord ke baare me chinta karne ki zaroorat nahi. Hum sab kis liye hai? Ming!! Lakdiyo ko ikhatta kar ek takhta taiyaar karwao. Hum Lord ko uss par bitha ke le jayenge.

Ming (nods) : Hmm!

Aur, Bo ke sujhaav par sabhi aadmi lakdiyo ko ikhatta kar ke ek takhte ko banaane me jut gaye.

Divya : Mera bhi ek sawaal hai.

Renshu : Hmm?

Divya (frowns) : Mera dost...! Veer kaha hai? Ye straight wala rasta Eastside ke raaste se kab milega? Agar, use kuch hua toh-

Renshu : Bas, thoda dur aur-! Hum mine ke kaafi nazdeek hai. Iske thoda baahar nikalte hi hum uss raaste par aa jayenge jaha se eastide judta hai. Aur, Veer sahi salamat hi hoga.

Divya badle me boli kuch nahi. Magar, uski bechaini uske chehre par saaf jhalak rahi thi. Toh wahi Renshu ne keh toh diya ki Veer sahi salamat hoga lekin, use khud andar hi andar nakaratmak vichaar khaaye jaa rahe the.

Renshu : Hamare log... Jinhone apni jaane gawayi. Woh sab kaha hai?

Bo (sarr jhukate hue) : Unhe wahi dafna diya humne, Lord. Hum unke shav ko saath leke nahi chal sakte the. Aur, unhe uss tarah waha chorr bhi nahi sakte the. Isliye, jo sabse sahi hume laga, humne wahi kiya.

Renshu (nods) : Tumne theek kiya. Aur, Legion ke logo ka kya jo maare gaye?

Bo : Unko bhi humne wahi dafna diya, Lord. Aap ne hi sikhaya tha. Jab tak hum zinda rehte hai tabhi tak ye dost dushman ki paribhasha hum par laagu hoti hai. Maut ke baad kya dushman aur kya dost. Sab ek samaan reh jaate hai. Isliye...!

Renshu (smiles) : Tumne kahi kuch galat nahi kiya. Mujhe tum sab par naaz hai.

Sabhi badle me muskuraye. Bhale hi kuch saathiyo ko unhone kho diya tha. Par, woh jazba aur woh ekta ab bhi unme kaayam thi. Aur, unn jaan gawaane waale logo ke balidaan ko woh yu hi vyarth nahi jaane dena chaahte the.

Bo : Mine hum hathya ke rahenge!

"Haaaaaaannn!!!!"

"Yeaaaahhhhhh!!!!"

"Order-!!!!"

"Zindabaaaaaaddd!!!!"

Renshu ne turant hi seeti bajaayi. Toh kahi se na jaane ek kabootar udti hui aasmaan se uske paas aake uske haath par baith gayi.

Renshu ne apne kapde me se ek chithhi nikaali aur use modte hue uske chhote chhote perr par baandh diya.

"Tumhe pata hai na kya karna hai?"

*Coo-hooo*

Woh jaise jawab me chehki. Aur, use apne haatho me lete hue Renshu ne use hawa me chorr diya. Woh pankh fadfadaate hue waha se ravana ho gayi.

Aur, isi tarah Renshu ko takhte par baitha ke woh sabhi fir mine ke raaste par chal diye.

***

Deep inside Eastside...

Jaha Renshu aur baaki sab Eastside ke raaste se judne ke liye nikal pade the wahi yaha idhar jangalo ki gehrayiyo me avishvaneeya drishya dekhne ko mil rahe the.

Pari ne Veer ke shareer par apna niyantran kar liya tha. Veer ke ird gird ki hawa bhaari ho chuki thi. Uske khatarnak aura ke chalte uske baal hawa me lehra rahe the aur jin teero ko fekte hue Jaw Long ne unn par insaano ki khopdi latkayi hui thi woh khopdiya bhi kit-kitate hue hawa me kampan maar rahi thi.

Sookhe patte kisi bheegi billi ki tarah thar-thar kaanp rahe the. Jaw Long khud do qadam peeche ko ho chuka tha. Toh wahi, Erica samet Ava dono ke muh hairat ke maare khule hue the.

[What- What is this?]

Lily ki awaaz Ava ke mann me goonj gayi. Magar, jab Lily ko khud nahi pata tha toh bhala Ava ke paas koi jawab kaise ho sakta tha. Yahi haal Genie aur Erica ka bhi tha. Woh bhauchakki si Veer ke iss naye vikral raudra roop ko dekh rahi thi.

Apne kaale jaadu ka upyog kar Jaw Long ne tamaam nakaratmak urjao se bhaint ki thi jinka aura kaala paaya jaata tha. Magar, usne aaj tak apne jeevan kaal me itna prachand black aura kisi ka bhi nahi dekha tha. Aura itna bheeshan tha ki Veer ke badan ke baahar tak wo lapte maar raha tha.

Aur, Jaw Long ke liye sabse asahejta waali baat thi Veer ki woh muskaan jo iss samay ajeeb tareeqe se uske hontho par feli hui thi.

Veer ne ek qadam apna aage badhaaya-

*Ba-dump*

Jaw Long ki dhadkane tez ho gayi.

Teer me latki hui khopdi ko Veer ne apne ek haath se baahar nikala aur aankhon ki putli waale chhed me apni ungli daal woh khopdi ko gol-gol ghumaane laga. Uske iss roop ko dekh Ava samet Erica ka badan kaanp utha.

Zorr se khopdi ko ghumaate hue usne woh kisi gulel ki tarah chorri jo seedhe Jaw Long ke sarr ki taraf sansanati hui aayi aur-

*Craaaassshhhhh*

Sahi samay par Jaw Long ne apne sarr ko baayi orr jhuka liya. Khopdi uske baalo ki lato se takrate hue jaa ke peeche ped se bhidi aur tukdo me toot ke bikhar gayi.

Insaan ki khopdi sabse mazboot haddiyo me se maani jaati hai. Kitna force lagta hoga ki khopdi ko tukdo me tod ke bikher diya jaaye?

Veer ki aankhein laal ho rakhi thi. Beowulf ON tha. Aur, uski agility, aur senses pehle se kayi guna badh chuke the.

Force = Mass x Acceleration

Veer ne uss khopdi ko itni zorr se feka tha ki uska acceleration hi itna tha jiske chalte uska force apne aap badh gaya. Nateeja? Uska tukdo me bikhar jaana.

Pichli baar woh Jaw Long se bhidte waqt Beowulf ka istemal kar hi nahi paaya tha kyuki Beowulf ki timing ka saara samay usne janvaro se bhaagne me laga diya tha. Magar, iss baar woh taiyaar tha.

Ava aur Erica ekdum stabdh thi. Unke hosh ude hue the. Aur, tabhi-

*Whooooooosshhhh*

Veer apni jagah se gaayab ho gaya-!!

Jaw Long : Tā hěn kuài (He's fast)

Dara hua vyakti... Hamesha apni maatra bhaasha me hi bolta hai. Bhale hi Jaw Long tribal bhaasha ki boli waala tha magar, janm toh uska china ki bhoomi me hi hua tha. Maatra bhaasha toh chinese hi thi.

Aur, iss waqt darr ke maare uska mastishq Mandarin Chinese bhaasha me hi vichaar karne par majboor ho gaya. Usne jaise hi Veer ki raftaar dekhi, uski haalat patli ho gayi. Use pata tak nahi chala ki Veer kab apni jagah se gaayab ho gaya.

Aur, akasmat hi-

*Whoosh*

Kisi glitch hoti hui image ki tarah Veer uske saamne prakat ho gaya. Bhay ke maare Jaw Long jaise hi peeche koodne ko hua-

'Shénme (What?)'

Veer ne apna perr itni kass ke uske perr ke upar rakha ki Jaw Long ka perr hi neeche zameen me dhans gaya. Veer jaise iss baar use kahi bhi bhaagne nahi dena chaahta tha.

Aur, agle hi shan-

Veer ka ek vaar seedhe Jaw Long ke gale ki orr aaya. Jaw Long ne jaise hi apna haath aage kar Veer ke vaar ko rokna chaaha-

Veer ke dusre haath ne uske haath ko maar peeche dhakel diya.

*Baaaammmm*

Aisa ek baar nahi, palak jhapakte hi harr baar hota gaya. Veer jaise jaan boojh ke Jaw Long se wahi hamle karwa raha tha jidhar woh unhe chaahta tha taaki woh unhe khud deflect kar sake.

[Th-This-!!!]

Lily ke honth thar-thara uthe.

'L-Lily-!!?'

[This is insane!!! Woh kaun si fighting style use kar raha hai? Woh jaan boojh ke aise hamle kar raha hai jis ke badle me Jaw Long wahi wahi vaar kar raha hai jaha Veer chaahta hai. It's like... It's like he's making Jaw Long to attack him for his own advantage.]

Veer ke moves ki speed itni zyaada thi ki woh Jaw Long ki capture karne ki capacity se baahar ho chuki thi. Aur, fir wahi hua jo hona tha.

*Thuck*

Ek vaar Jaw Long ke liver ke hisse me...! Uske binn aankho ke khaali maans waale eye socket dard ke maare fel gaye.

*Thuck*

Dusra vaar Jaw Long ke haath ko deflect karta hua uske fefdo ke upar. Laga maano ek shan ke liye uska dil hi rukk gaya ho.

*Thuck*

Teesra vaar uske gale ke bagal me. Dard aisa ki maano nass phatne ko aa jaaye.

*Thuck*

Aur, akhiri vaar seedhe uski chhaathi ke ekdum beecho-beech. Impact itna tagda ki Jaw Long ka bhari bharkam shareer hawa me udd gaya.

Uske shareer ke udte hi Veer ne wahi khusa ek bhaala upar hawa me feka aur tezz raftaar me woh Jaw Long ki taraf lapka...!

Dono aapas me moves exchange karne lage. Dono ke prahar aapas me bhid halki-halki shock waves paida kar rahe the jinke chalte fele patte udte hue bikharte jaa rahe the. Veer uss se ladte ladte use ped ke paas le jaane laga. Dono ek dusre ke haatho ko jakad bhayanak gusse me ek dusre ko ghoor rahe the. Aur, tabhi-

*Swoosh* *Swoosh* *Swoosh*

*Thuck*

"Aaaaarrrrrrrgghhhhh!!!!"

Jaw Long ki dard bhari cheenkh waha goonj gayi. Uska kandha ped se lage hue ek bhaale se khus chuka tha.

Ye wahi bhaala tha jo Veer ne kuch shan pehle upar hawa me feka tha. Jaw Long ki aura vision skill upgraded nahi thi. Woh non living things ko dekhne me asamarth tha.

Veer ne pehle hi bhaale ki trajectory ko calculate kar use hawa me fek diya tha. Aur, woh jaan boojh ke Jaw Long ko uss ped ke paas le jaata gaya. Kyuki... Bhaala yahi par girna tha. Aur, bhaala Jaw Long ko dikhna hi nahi tha.

Veer ne agle hi shan apni do ungliya uski binn aankhon waale khaali hisse me ghused di. Aur, punah-

"Aaaaarrrrrrrgghhhhh-!!!!!"

Ek khaufnak aur dard se bil-bilati cheenkh waha fel gayi. Ava aur Erica itna sehem gayi ki maano unke shareer se unki rooh hi nikal gayi. Aur, fir Veer ke bol Jaw Long ke kaano me pade. Jo asal me Veer ke nahi, Pari ke the.

"IF ONLY I HAD EVEN A TINY OUNCE OF MY POWER THAT I HAD BEFORE, I WOULD HAVE DESTROYED THIS INSIGNIFICANT, LITTLE PLANET OF YOURS IN A BLINK OF AN EYE, YOU LOWLY PIG...! YOU ALL ARE LIKE ANTS GROVELING IN THE DIRT WAITING ONLY TO BE CRUSHED UNDER THE FEET OF AN UNPARALLELED BEING... SUCH AS ME-!!!"

Aur, fauran hi Jaw Long ke system ko andesha ho gaya. Uski ghabrati hui awaaz uske mann me sunayi di.

[L-Long-!!! Bhaago! Bhaago yaha se warna maare jaoge. Ye ladka apne hosh me nahi hai. Iska system iske shareer ko control me kiye hue hai.]

Par, Jaw Long toh bechara dard se bilbila raha tha. Uski aankhon waale khaali hisse me Veer ki do ungliyaan ghusi hui thi. Veer ne apni ungliyon ko kisi machhli pakadne ke hook ki tarah maroda aur turant hi woh andar ke maans ko kheenchte hue baahar nikaalne laga.

"Haaaaarrrrrggghhhhhh-!!!!"

Erica itna ghabra gayi ki pichhle kiye gaye uske sarr par vaar ke chalte aur saamne manzar ko ghatate dekh woh bechari behosh hi ho gayi. Magar, Genie ne aenn waqt par uske behosh hone se theek pehle abhi abhi praapt hui 'Basic Seer Vision' activate kar di.

Jaw Long ke andhruni maans ko jaise Veer baahar kheench ke nikaalna chaah raha tha. Drishya itna bhayanak aur daravna tha ki aam insaan ise lagatar dekh hi nahi sakta tha. Agar, dekh le toh sakpaka ke reh jaaye.

Zorr laga ke Jaw Long ne apne kandhe ko bhaale ki qaid se mukt kiya aur Veer par hamla bolna chaaha par-

*Baaaaammmmmmm*

Ek laat uske nichle jabde par itni zorr se padi ki uska shareer hawa me kisi lakdi ki tarah gol gol ghoomte hue udd gaya. Usne hawa me hi santulan banana chaaha. Jaise hi ghoomne ke baad usne hawa me sthirta praapt ki-

Veer uske saamne tha!

'Huh!???'

Jaw Long ne bhay ke maare apne dono haath se cross banaate hue khud ko chhek liya. Lekin, Veer hawa me hi uske bagal se nikal gaya. Ye sab kuch bahut tezi me ho raha tha. 1 second tak Jaw Long ko kuch samajh nahi aaya ki Veer bina hamla kiye uske bagal se kyu nikal gaya. Kintu, agle hi pal-

*Baaaammmm* *Baaaaammmmmmm*

*Baaaaammmmmmm* *Baaaammmm*

*Baaaammmm* *Baaaaammmmmmm*

Uski chaathi 6 alag alag jagaho se pichak gayi.

*Blurgh*

Muh se khoon ke cheethe nikaalte hue woh neeche zameen par aa gira aur uth ke Veer ko bhaybheet hue dekha. Veer ne pehle hi uske badan par mukke barsa diye the. Gati itni tezz thi ki Jaw Long unhe dekh hi nahi paaya. Jo usne dekha woh toh bas hamle ke after effects the. Jagah jagah use itna dard ho raha tha ki ab ye dard uske liye ek baadha bann ke saamne aa raha tha.

Woh bhi akhir ek insaan hi tha. Na jaane kab se woh iss ladaayi me akela ladd raha tha. Itni chot pahuchne ke baad swabhavik tha ki kahi na kahi dard ab use zyada mehsoos hone laga tha.

Lekin, Veer toh aaj jaise poore aakramak roop me tha. Woh hawa ke jhonke ki tarah apni jagah se gayab hote hue uski orr aaya aur apni laat seedhe Jaw Long ke muh par par maarni chaahi.

Par, Jaw Long ne uski laat ko apne ek haath se pakad liya. Itni derr ke baad pehli baar Jaw Long ke chehre par ek muskaan aayi. Akhir kaar, usne Veer ko pakad hi liya.

Parantu, ye jaise uss bechare ka vaham tha. Kyuki-

*Ding*

[LIMBO]

Fir woh hua jise dekh khud Jaw Long ke raungte khade ho gaye. Veer apne perr ke jakde hone ke bawajood ulti disha me ghoom ke muda...!

Uska perr toh Jaw Long ke haatho me tha. Magar, shareer toh azaad tha. Apne bhaar ka istemal kar woh baayi orr poora ghoom gaya, jiske chalte-

*Crack* *Crack*

Uske ghutno se kuch kasht bhari awaazein aayi. Woh ghoom ke iss qadar aaya ki ab uski daayi laat padne ko taiyaar thi. Jaw Long hakka bakka reh gaya. Aur-

*Baaaaammmmmmm*

Kaam tamaam!!!

Nichle jabde par laat itni zorr se padi ki Jaw Long ka daant toh ukhda hi muh se khoon ki dhaar alag nikal gayi.

Uske girte hi Veer ne apni taang haath se pakdi aur-

*Crack* *Crack*

Apni haddiyo ko wapas se sahi sthaan par le aaya. Usne apne aap ko kasht pahuchaya tha. Ya yu kahe ki Pari uske shareer ke saath khel rahi thi.

Woh Jaw Long par fir aise lapki aur ghuso ki baarish kar uske thobde par itne hamle kiye ki lag raha tha woh uske sarr ko tarbooj ki tarah phod degi.

Idhar, Ava ne jab dekha ki Veer ka palda iss ladaayi me bhaari tha woh chenn ki raahat lete hue khud ki healing ke liye apne hosh kho baithi. Lily ne use kuch derr ke liye unconscious state me daal diya aur Healing Factor activate kar diya.

Magar, kehte hai na... Harr cheez jo shuru hoti hai woh khatam bhi hoti hai. Pari, jisne Veer ke badan par qabza kar rakha tha uska saath bas yahi tak tha.

"YOU MUST THANK ME, LATER KID-!!! DAMN IT!!! IT'S NOT ENOUGH!!! IF ONLY I HAD MORE-!!!!"

Aur, bolte bolte uski awaaz dheemi hoti chali gayi. Pari ki consciousness jaise hi gayi, Veer apne unconscious state se baahar aa gaya.

Hosh me aate hi usne paaya ki uska seena zorro se upar-neeche ho raha tha. Woh haaf raha tha. Aur, tabhi use bhayanak dard apne haath-perro me mehsoos hua.

'Ack-!!'

Pari uske shareer ka istemal kar max speed me jo bhaagi thi. Veer bhale hi Jaw Long se strength me peeche tha. Magar, uski agility iss waqt itni zyaada thi ki woh uska istemal kar apne vaar ki taaqat ko kayi guna badha paane me saksham tha.

Force = Mass x Acceleration

Yaha poora game Pari ne acceleration par khela tha. Aur, yahi kaaran tha ki kyu Veer ke haath aur perr atyadhik dukh rahe the. Indirectly, zaroorat se zyada strength ka istemal jo kar rahe the woh.

Veer ne jaise hi nazre utha ke saamne ladkhadate Jaw Long ko dekha toh uski aankhein phat ke chaar ho gayi.

Uske baal bikhre hue the. Khaali aankhon ke hisse se andar ka kuch maans latak raha tha jisme se khoon behta hua uske gaalo se hoke tapak raha tha. Uske haatho ki kuch ungliyaan vipreet disha me mudi hui thi. Aur, muh se bhi khoon beh raha tha.

'Wh-What happened!'

Veer ki kuch samajh na aaya. Aur, na hi Pari ne kuch jawab diya. Kyunki, woh pehle hi sleep mode me jaa chuki thi. Ab jo kuch tha, Veer ke haatho me hi tha.

Usne dekha ki Ava aur Erica dono hi aankhein band kar laiti hui thi. Dono jeevit thi. Shayad, heal hone ki koshish kar rahi thi. Usne ek raahat ki saans li.

'K-Kya ye... Ye maine kiya?'

Use vishvas nahi ho raha tha ki jis Jaw Long ne unn teen system holders ki khatiya khadi kar ke rakhi hui thi uski ye haalat bhi ho sakti thi.

'Akhir... Hua kya? Fuckkkk! Mujhe kuch yaad nahi aa raha.'

Usne dekha ki Jaw Long mushqil se apna santulan banaate hue bhaag raha tha. Use abhi bhi yahi lag raha tha ki Veer ke shareer ka niyantran uska system kar raha tha.

'Woh mujhse bhaag raha hai-!? Shit!!! I need to catch up.'

Veer utha aur jodo me dard hone ke bawajood woh apni poori koshish kar bhaaga. Jaw Long bhaagta hua mine ke raaste me pravesh karne laga. Aur, mine par woh pahuchne hi waala tha.

China ke liye Yunnan province ki sabse zaroori mines me se ek...! Aur, sabse badi mine, jisme radioactive elements bhi paaye jaate the.




Jaw Long andha-dhundh bhaagte hue mine par pahucha...! Jangal se baahar aate hi vishalkaay mine ki sanrachna chaand ki raushni me Veer ki aankhon ke saamne aayi. Ek aadmi bhi yaha maujood nahi tha. Koi bhi pehra nahi de raha tha. Mine me andar jaane ke liye jagah jagah se kayi raaste the.

Parantu, main opening hi thi jaha se radioactive elements ki khoj ke liye jaaya jaa sakta tha. Baaki, openings jo thi woh non-radioactive elements ke liye banayi gayi thi.

Veer ne dekha ki Jaw Long ek non-radioactive elements ki opening me jaa ke ghus chuka tha.

'Tch-!! This motherfucker!!!'

Bina jhijke woh khud uss entrance me ghus gaya. Toh wahi-

"Badhte raho! Badhte raho!!!"

"Hum bas thodi hi dur hai ab!!!"

Renshu aur Order ke samast members bhi mine ke behad nazdeek aa chuke the.

Jaw Long aise bhaag raha tha jaise maano ek chuha billi ko dekh bhaagta hai. Uski haalat bahut buri ho chuki thi. Woh yahi samajh raha tha ki Veer abhi bhi Pari ke control me tha. Aur, Veer iska poora fayda utha raha tha.

Jaise hi woh andar ghus thodi gehrayi tak gaye. Jaw Long achanak hi ek patli si surang me ghus gaya jo ekdum neeche ki orr jaa rahi thi. Veer ne apna qadam aage badhaya par use hawa me hi rok liya.

'K-Kuch gadbad lag rahi hai. Why is he luring me inside that?'

Veer nahi jaanta tha ki jaha Jaw Long uska andar intezar kar ke use girana chaah raha tha woh iss mine ka bottle neck trap tha. Ek aisa gaddha jaha par insaan agar gira toh uski maut nishchit thi. Kyuki, woh gehra hi itna tha aur upar se Jaw Long agar uske upar koi patthar gira de toh aisi haalat me bachna namumkin tha.

Veer ne apne qadam peeche kar liye. Aur, tabhi-

'Huh-!!?'

Usne kuch check kiya. Jankari praapt hote hi usne apne agal bagal dekha. Ek lohe ki seedhi lagi hui thi jo upar ek hole se baahar nikalne ke liye thi. Ek emergency exit.

Veer turant ke turant uss par chadha aur baahar nikal usne andar jhaakte hue neeche khade Jaw Long ko dekha. Dono ne ek dusre ko dekha...!

Ek taraf jaha Jaw Long Veer ke baahar nikal jaane par asahaj mehsoos karne laga toh wahi Veer ke hontho par ek vijayi muskaan fel gayi.

"This is your end... Jaw Long!"

Usne apni jeb se kuch nikaalte hue seedhe Jaw Long ki orr haule se feka aur tez raftar ke saath woh peeche ko bhaaga. Agle hi pal-

*Booooooooommmmmm*



Ek tez dhamake ne waha janm liya. Dharti kaanp uthi aur halke bhookamp ke chalte Renshu aur uske aadmi shor sunte hi chinta me aa gaye.

"L-Lord!?"

"Ye kya tha??"

"Ruko nahi! Ruko nahi! Jaldi chalo!!!!"

Veer ki body hawa me aag ki lapto se baahar aate hue dur jaa giri.

*Blurgh*

Muh se dherr saara khoon nikla. Internal bleeding kaafi ho chuki thi. Use jald se jald araam ki zaroorat thi. Aur, ek doctor ki bhi-!

Tabhi-

*Ding*

['Mission : Be the saviour.' has been completed.]

[You have been rewarded 15,000 Points.]

*Ding*

[You have gained the card 'Berserk.']

*Ding*

[You have gained the scroll 'Bird Tamer.']

*Ding*

[You have gained the skill 'Aura Vision.']

[You have gained the skill 'Radio Protective.']

Notifications ki jaise jhadi lag gayi uske mann me. Jaw Long marr chuka tha. Par, sawaal tha kaise?

Aur, jawaab tha ~

Methane!!!

Mine me maujood methane gas kaafi bhaari maatra me maujood thi. Ek jwalansheel gas jiski na hi koi gandh hoti thi aur na hi koi rang. Jaw Long ko na hi methane ki koi gandh aayi aur na hi use aura vision me kuch nazar aaya. Gas bhi akhir- non living things me hi aati thi.

Kya hoga agar aisi sakri jwalansheel gas se bhari mine me ek jalta hua lighter fek diya jaaye?

Bhayanak visfot!!!

Jaw Long ki apni hi skill uske patan ka kaaran bann gayi. Use Veer ka feka gaya lighter dikha hi nahi. Veer ke mann me tamaam notifications pop hote jaa rahe the.

Kintu, ye nahi tha jinke liye woh utsuk tha. Use toh bas uss notification ko sunana tha.

*Ding*

[You have been rewarded with a new 'Slot'.]

Ye sunte hi Veer ki mutthi dridhta me kass gayi. Yahi woh cheez thi jo besh-keemti thi. Unn 15000 points se bhi zyada keemti.

Slot!!!

Jo card ko equip karwata tha. Ek slot me Veer card jab chaahe switch kar sakta tha. Par... Kya hoga jab slot hi do ho jaaye? Woh ab ek nahi... Do cards ko ek saath equip kar sakta tha. Dono me kisi bhi card ko jab chaahe shuffle kar unhe equip kar sakta tha. Maatra chhoti si ye cheez kitni taqatvar thi iss baat ka andaza Veer ko pehle hi mission ke rewards dekh ke pata lag gaya tha.

Woh abhi mann hi mann iss khushi se baahar aaya hi tha ki-

*Ding*

[The system has been upgraded to Level 10.]

*Ding*

[The system's internal feature 'Perk hunt' is available now.]

Naye feature ke baare me sunn Veer jigyaasa liye uske baare me dekhna chaahta tha par agle hi shan ek jaani pehchani aur use bhaavuk kar dene waali awaaz uske mann me goonj gayi.

[Maaaasttteerrr-!!!!!]

'Huh-!!??'

[Master-!!!]

'P-Pari???'

Nahi! Ye kaise ho sakta tha. Ye awaaz woh bhali bhaanti pehchanta tha. Harr Pari ki personality ki awaazo me antar hota tha. Aur, ye awaaz-

Usi Pari ki thi jo Crimson ki ladayi ke waqt uske saath thi. Jisne uske dil ko ruk use Crimson aur Ava ke shadiyantra se bahar nikaala tha. Jo atyadhik smart aur saath hi emotional thi. Jise usne itna miss kiya tha.

'P-Pari-! Tum? Kya waqai tum wahi ho?'

[You idiotic stupid bastard, Maaastteerr!!!]

'Huh???'

[Kyuuuuu??? Kyu kiya aapne aisa??]

'What?'

[Why did you give your points to her??]

'Huh? M-Mein-!!!'

[You idiot, Master!!! There was no need to give your points. I missed you so much, aapko pata bhi hai? Mujhe laga tha aap se acche se dobaara milungi. It will be our happy reunion. But no... Here you are in this mess.]

'Agar, mein nahi karta toh mein Ava aur Erica ko kaise bacha paata, Pari.'

[I was so scared when you lost your consciousness. Shit!!! That bitch-!!!! Tsk!!!]

'Huh?'

[Listen to me, Master. Ahinda se kabhi bhi kitni bhi dire situation kyu na ho. Aap kabhi bhi points ko iss tarah mujhe ya meri kisi bhi personality ko nahi denge. Okay?]

'Umm-!'

[Okay? Or not? Boliye!!!]

'H-Haan! Alright!'

[Pakka na?]

'Yeah!'

[Promise me!]

'What?'

[I said, promise me ki aap kabhi bhi iss tarah apne points system me invest nahi karenge.]

'Alright! I promise.'

Jab Veer ne vachan diya tab kahi jaa ke Pari ne ek raahat ki saans li.

'Lekin, bhala kyu?'

[Because... Points are not just points Master. I mean aapke liye woh sirf points ho sakte hai. Par, hamare liye they are like... Something greater than that...]

'Aur, tum mujhe ye nahi batane waali ki unki aur kya ahamiyat hai. Hai na?'

[It's not that I don't want to tell you. It's just that I'm unable to tell you right now. I cannot!]

'Ohh?'

[Kyuki, ye bol ke nahi bataya jaa sakta master. Aur, jo tareeqa hai uske liye abhi aap taiyaar nahi.]

'I see!'

[Par, woh sab chorriye. Look at you! Jagah jagah ghaav hai. I can feel it. Aap khade kaise ho iss waqt? It's so painful-!!!]

'I have to... Pari! Aur-'

Uski baatein beech me hi reh gayi jab-

*Keaaaarrrrrr*

Ek baaj hawa me udta hua aaya. Veer chaukanna ho gaya. Ye wahi baaj tha. Magar, jaise hi woh nazdeek aaya.

'???'

Woh Veer ke kandhe par aake apne panje jamaate hue baith gaya. Aur, taktaki laga ke use dekhne laga.

'Ohh-!!'

*Keaaaarrrrrr*

Uski teevra awaaz Veer ke kaano me padi.

"Tum Sheba ho!! Hai na?"

Veer ne uske gale par ungli halke haath se feri toh baaj ne apna gala upar kar diya. Jaise maano woh chaah raha tha ki use aur sehlaya jaaye.

"Hahaha! Maine kabhi itne paas se kisi baaj ko nahi dekha. Does that mean tum ab Jaw Long ko nahi balki, mujhe apna master maante ho?"

*Keaaaarrrrrr*

Baaj ne jaise Veer ki baaton ko samajh awaaz nikaali.

"Huh? He can understand me? Pari!"

[Bird Tamer scroll ke tehet ise apna paaltu banaya gaya hoga, Master. Choonki ab Jaw Long nahi hai aur Bird Tamer aapke paas hai. Zaahir hai ki woh ab aapko apna master samjhega. It's cute by the way... But deadly too.]

'Yeah-! Well, mujhe lagta hai ki-'

Veer ke bol ek baar fir adhure hi reh gaye kyuki ek naya notification uske mann me goonj gaya.

*Ding*

[Past illustration has been invoked.]

[Do you want to see 'Jaw Long's' past?]

Veer ne jawaab me kuch na kaha. Woh Sheba ko hawa me chorr apne ladkhadate shareer ko ghaseetate hue wahi paas me bane ek lakdi ke cabin me le jaane laga. Ye cabin ek chhote ghar ke barabar tha aur pehle government ka hua karta tha. Par, lag raha tha jaise mine par qabza karne ke baad yaha ke workers ko tribal logo ke dwara bhaga diya gaya tha.

Woh andar daakhil hua. Andar ekdum ghapp andhera tha. Filhal aur kisi ki nazro se bachne ke liye ye kaafi tha. Use shaant jagah chahiye thi Past Illustration dekhne ke liye. Iss se kayi saare saboot uske haath lag sakte the.

Aur, Veer notification ke sawaal par haami bhar Past Illustration ke ateet ke panno me doob gaya.

*Caw* *Caw*

Hawa me udte kauwe shor machaate hue jangal ke upar se nikle. Jangal ke gehre hisse me ek lakdi se bane ghar me Jaw Long apni gaddi par baitha hua tha.

Aur, uske saamne ek sundar si stree baithi hui thi jiska chehre uske sarr par maujood kaali hat se dhaka hua tha.

Jaw Long ne ek lakdi ke glass me sharaab daali aur use peete hue bola.

Jaw Long : Kaho! Kya baat karni hai?

Lady (smiles) : I have a deal for you. Ek simple deal.

Jaw Long : Hmm?

Lady : Mein tumhe wo pradan karwa sakti hu jiski tumhe abhi talaash hai.

Jaw Long : Mudde pe aao. Warna yahi kaat di jaogi. Farq nahi padta ki tum system holder ho. Mere ilaake me parinda bhi meri marzi se udaan bharta hai.

Lady (smiles) : I know everything! Tum Order par dhaava bol ke use apne under karna chaahte ho. Right?

Jaw Long (frowns) : ...

Lady : Lekin, ye toh sab ko pata hoga. Hai na? Toh ek aur cheez puchti hu. Tumhe iss waqt dherr saare insaano ki zaroorat hai. Hai na?

Iss baar Jaw Long ki aankhein uss aurat ke bolo par chaudi ho gayi.

Lady : Insaan jinki bali chadhaayi jaa sake. Jinhe kaale jaadu me upyog kar khud ko taqatvar banaya jaa sake.

Jaw Long : ...

Lady (smiles) : Ek yahi kaaran hai jo tum government ko andar ghusne aur talashi karne nahi dete. Hai na?

Jaw Long : ???

Lady (smiles) : Tumhare iss ghar ke neeche unn insaano ke kankaal jo chhipe hue hai jinhe tumne ab tak maara hua hai.

Ye sunte hi Jaw Long uss aurat ke gale ki orr lapka toh woh peeche uchakte hue uske prahar se bach nikli.

Lady (smiles) : Mein tumhari hi side hu. Mujh se dushmani tumhe bhaari pad sakti hai. Mein toh tumhare liye prastaav leke aayi hu.

Jaw Long : Bolna hai toh seedhe tareeke se bolo. Warna dafa ho jao.

Lady : Mein tumhe insaan provide kar sakti hu.

Jaw Long : Huh?

Lady : Insaan jinhe tum asaani se maar sakte ho aur koi unke baare me kuch puchega bhi nahi.

Jaw Long : Aur, badle me?

Lady (smiles) : Badle me mein chahti hu ki Legion Yunnan ki mine par qabza kare.

Jaw Long : Huh? Aur, uss se tumhe kya?

Lady (smiles) : Mujhe bas kuch chahiye jo mine me hai. Baaki, uske baad...! Poori ki poori mine tumhari.

Jaw Long : ...

Lady : Soch lo! Na sirf tum Order ko jald se jald apne haatho me le loge balki mine bhi tumhari apni ho chuki hogi.

Jaw Long : Mine me aisa kya hai jo tumhe chahiye?

Lady : Kuch hai. Kuch radioactive elements jo asaani se nahi mil sakte.

Jaw Long : Aur, unka kya karogi tum?

Lady (smiles) : Mein unka kuch bhi karu, uss se tumhe kya? Haan, par tumhare khilaaf kuch bhi nahi karungi. I can guarantee you.

Jaw Long (frowns) : Meri skills ke baare me tumhe kaise pata laga?

Lady (smiles) : Meri nazre harr uss zaroorat mand par tiki rehti hai jise meri madad ki talash hoti hai. Kyuki, badle me woh hi... meri madad ke kaam aate hai.

Jaw Long kuch derr sochta raha. Aur, fir haami bharte hue bola.

Jaw Long : Theek hai! Mein taiyaar hu. Par, zara bhi chhal karne ki koshish ki, toh chhalni kar diya jayega.

Lady (smiles) : Never! Never!

Woh lady apni jagah se uthi aur jaane lagi par tabhi wapas mudi aur-

Lady : Ek baat aur-

Kehte hue usne achanak hi apni jeb se ek pocket watch nikaali aur use pendulum ki tarah latka ke daaye baaye karte hue boli,

Lady : Koi hoga... Jo ye dekhega...! So, just to be safe... I must- *smiles*

Uski pocket watch achanak hi Veer ka dhyaan kheenchne lagi.

[Shitttt!!! Masterrrrr-!!! Turn it off!! Baahar aaiye!!!]

Pari ki ghabrahat bhari awaaz ne jaise Veer ko turant hi Past Illustration se baahar nikalne par majboor kar diya. Uski saansein tezz ho rakhi thi.

*huff* *huff*

'What was that-!??'

[She... She's dangerous!!! Woh-]

Parantu, Pari ko apne bol wahi thaamne pade jab Veer ke peeche se ek madhur awaaz uske kaano me padi.

"Ohh? I didn't think you would break free from my casting."

Ye awaaz-!!! Veer ke badan me ruye khade ho gaye. Uske maathe par chinta ki lakeere chhaa gayi. Aur tabhi,

*Click* *Clack*

*Click* *Clack*

Kisi ke jooto ki chalne ki awaaz use apne peeche se aayi. Nahi! Ye joote nahi the. Ye high heels ki awaaz thi. Veer ne apni baayi orr se mud sarr ghumaate hue peeche ko apni nazre daudaayi.

Andhere me se ek aakriti chalte hue aa rahi thi. Aakriti kisi stree ki lag rahi thi. Aur, jaise jaise woh qareeb aa rahi thi uski visheshtaaye aur bhi spasht hoti jaa rahi thi.

Chalne ki woh adaa, wo nazakat, uske baare me kaafi kuch bayaa kar rahi thi. Nazdeek aate hue dheere dheere ventilation se aati roshni uske chehre par bhi padti jaa rahi thi.

Uska ek haath bagal se rakhi table par tha jisme dhool ki parat jami hui thi. Jaise jaise wo aage badh rahi thi, uske saath saath uski ungli table par komalta ke saath fisalte hue aa rahi thi.

Aur jyo hi woh ekdum saamne aayi, ungli me jami dhool ko fookte hue roshni me uska chehra Veer ki nazro me aaya. Parantu, woh kaali hat se aadha dhaka hua tha. Keval uske honth hi dikhayi pad rahe the.




Veer ne jaise hi use dekha, uske raungte khade ho gaye. Ye wahi thi-!!! Jisko past Illustration me abhi usne dekha tha.

'Check!'

Usne ek pal bhi nahi gawaya uss stree ko check karne me. Aur-

*Ding*

[No information available.]

Jaisa usne socha tha bilkul wesa hi nikla. Ye wahi system owner thi! Veer ne inn kuch palo me hi sab kuch bhaanp lia.

Veer : Y-You-!!!?

Woh ajnabi stree muskurayi. Uski nigaahein abhi neeche hi tiki hui thi. Veer ke sawaal par usne apna sarr upar kiya aur uski palke haule-haule badi hi nazakat ke saath uthi aur nazre Veer se jaa ke tiki. Hontho par muskaan aur bhi adhik fel gayi. Woh apne daaye kaan ke paas baalo ki latt ki orr haath leke gayi aur unhe peeche ki.

Veer sachet tha. Saamne kaisa bhi saundarya kyu na ho, woh laparwahi nahi barat sakta tha. Harr surprise attack ke liye woh pehle hi khud ko prepare kar chuka tha.

Woh stree Veer ko neeche se upar tak ek antim baar dekhi aur fir boli,

"You really are such a surprise, Veer. Fufu~"

Veer (frowns) : State your business!

Lady (nods) : Bilkul! Jaisa ki tum dekh hi chuke ho. I’m one of the system owners. And, don't worry please! I'm not here to hurt you.

Veer : ???

Lady : By the way...! Let me introduce myself first. I'm Rebecca Elsher!

Veer : Rebecca?

Rebecca : Don't worry! Ye asli naam hai. I don't like to fake things like your cute lover. Fufu~

Veer ki bauhe kass uthi. Rebecca ka ishaara Ava ki taraf tha. Iska matlab woh jaanti thi ki Ava ne Nat naam rakh ke usko apne jaal me fasaaya tha? Bhala aur kya kya jaanti thi ye Rebecca?

Rebecca ke muh se naam nikalte hi idhar Pari ne uske naam ko poore Google par search kar liya lekin fir bhi kahi pe bhi uska naam nahi mila. Internet search par same naam ki alag Rebecca nazar aa rahi thi. Kintu, Rebecca Elsher nahi.

Veer bahar se toh khud ko sakht dikha raha tha magar andar hi andar woh chintit tha. Ghabrahat bhi thi. Woh kisi bhi waqt behosh hoke gir sakta tha. Thakaan aur dard itna zyada tha ki woh abhi keval apni dridhta ke chalte khada hua tha. Aur, aisi dasha me iss aurat se ladna matlab apne hi perr par kulhadi maarne jaisa tha. Ye aurat zaroorat se zyada hi uske baare me jaanti thi.

Veer (frowns) : So... You were behind all of this, huh?

Rebecca : Hmm? Nahi! Tum bina thos saboot pesh kiye ye sab kaise keh sakte ho, Veer?

Veer : I saw it!!!

Rebecca : Oh!? Isliye, toh mein yaha par hu.

Veer : Huh???

Ek jhatke me Rebecca ne apni pocket watch nikaali aur use pendulum ki tarah daaye baaye ghumaate hue woh Veer ko dekhi. Uske haav bhaav achanak hi badal gaye.




Rebecca : Now...! You will have to forget every-

Par, uske bol adhure reh gaye kyuki, Veer ek jhatke me uski orr lapka. Aur, ye jaldbazi me uski sabse badi bhool thi.

*Baaaaammmmmmm*

Ek titanium se bana hua cane uski chaathi par zorr se laga jo uske poore dhaanche ko hila ke rakh diya. Woh seedha hawa me udta hua dur jaa ke deewar se jaa bhida.

"Hum pahuch gaye!!! Hum pahuch gaye!!!"

Baahar se achanak aate shor ne Rebecca ko chaukanna kar diya.

"Tsk! You are very lucky, my dear!"

*Craaaassshhhhh*

Woh wahi lagi kaanch ki khidki ko todte hue waha se kood ke bhaagi.

"W-Wait-!!!!"

[Maaasterrrr-!!!]

Veer apna haath felaate hue uthne ki koshish karta raha magar, uska shareer pehle hi bahut load jhel chuka tha. Aur, ye jaise antim vaar tha. Kyuki, agle hi shan woh behosh ho gaya.

[Maaasttterrr-!!!!]

Mine ke ek hisse me bheeshan aag lag chuki thi. Methane gas poori tarah se jalti jaa rahi thi. Aur, wo tab tak jalne waali thi jab tak ki andar maujood saara oxygen samapt nahi ho jaata.

Renshu aur baaki sabhi ne jaise hi saamne ka manzar dekha toh unke perro tale zameen khisak gayi.

'Y-Ye kya???'

Renshu : Aag ko bujhaane ki koshish karo aur kar sakte ho toh-!!! Ming!!! Erica ko dhundhne ke liye kuch log leke jao. Bo-!!! Cabin check karo.

Usne ek ke baad ek aadesh diye aur tabhi-

*Chakk-chackk-chak-chak chak-a-chak-akk-chk-chk-chk*

Upar hawa me ek copter zameen se utha. Renshu ne dur se uske darwaaze par dekha toh uska reaction bhi wahi toh jo Veer ka tha.

Rebecca helicopter ke darwaaze se Renshu ko halki muskaan ke saath ghoor rahi thi. Uska aadha chehra uski hat se dhaka hua tha jo usne ek haath se thaam rakhi thi.

Toh wahi, uska dusra haath uske kandhe par tiki kisi stree ko thaame hue tha. Aur, jaisi hi uss stree par Renshu ko nazre padi-

Ek aur jhatka use laga. Woh Divya thi!!! Jo behoshi ki haalat me Rebecca ke kandho par ladi hui thi.

'Shit-!!!'

Aur, helicopter chalaane waala koi aur nahi-!!! Wahi unknown system holder tha.

"Until next time... Li Renshu-!!!"

Uske bol waha goonj gaye. Aur, helicopter waha se udaan bharta hua nikal gaya.

'Damn it!!!'

Renshu : Captain? Miss Divya ke liye jinhe tainaat kiya tha woh kaha hai?

Captain Feng : Woh hamare peeche hi toh the na? Woh- huh!!!?

Feng ne jab dekha toh paaya ki captain 3 dur dur tak kahi nazar nahi aa raha tha. Na hi Divya, aur na hi Divya ke sang aaye Clark aur uska security guard.

Captain Feng : Shit-!!! Kaha gaye woh sab?

Renshu : Pehle Erica ko dhundho!! Jaldi!!!

Captain Feng : J-Ji!!!

Aur, kuch hi palo me Bo apne kandho par Veer ko leke haazir tha. Toh wahi Ava Erica ko apni peeth par laad ke Renshu ke samaksh thi.

Renshu : Ericcaaa--!!!!

Renshu ne uthna chaaha magar dard ke chalte ek karaah uske muh se nikal gayi.

Ava : Woh rest kar rahi hai. Don't worry! She's fine!!!

Renshu : Aur, Jaw Long?

Ava : He's dead!

Renshu ko apne kaano par yakeen nahi hua. Woh jaanta tha ki Jaw Long kin shaktiyo ka maalik tha. Aise me uski hi territory me ghus ke use maar dena, bahut badi baat thi.

Ava : Veer killed him.

Renshu : Huh??

Usne Veer ko dekha jo behosh hue Bo ki peeth par lada hua tha.

'Veer ne Jaw Long ko maar diya-!?'

[He's very powerful. I must say. Kuch bhi ho jaaye, iss ladke ko apne paas se mat jaane dena.]

Renshu apne khayalo se baahar aaya aur sabhi ko lead karte hue le jaane laga. Mine me lagi aag sirf ek hi hisse me thi aur woh jald hi apne aap hi bujh jaane waali thi. Beshaq, thoda bahut nuksaan zaroor pahucha tha magar utna nahi ki elements ko haani pahuch sake.

Filhal, yaha se nikalna zyaada zaroori tha. Unhe yaha se wapas lautne me lagbhag aadhe din se bhi zyada samay lag gaya.

Jaise hi Renshu apne ghar ke mukhya hall me pravesh kiya. Andhere me chamakti do hari aankhein use dassne ki nigaah se ghoor rahi thi.

Renshu : You're here!!!

"Tumne itni guhaar laga ke bulaaya tha. Mujhe aana hi tha."

Andhere se nikalte hue woh baahar aayi. Ye aur koi nahi ~ Garofano hi thi.

Renshu ne jo chithhi bheji thi woh Garofano ke liye hi thi. Jald se jald woh yaha par aa gayi.

Ava ne jab Garofano ko dekha toh woh aashcharya me reh gayi. Ava Garofano ko saamne se pehli baar dekh rahi thi. Woh China tab hi aayi thi jab Garofano ka matter samapt ho chuka tha. Isliye, Veer aur Garofano ke beech ki chemistry ko woh dekh na paayi.

Garofano ne aage badh jaise hi Bo ki peeth se Veer ko apne dono haatho me uthaaya toh Ava ki aankhein hairaangi me fel gayi.

Andar se dil kachot utha. Kaun thi ye ladki? Veer ka iske saath kya rishta tha? Aur, iss tarah se kyu uthayi hui thi woh use?

Ava (panics) : V-Veer ko-

Renshu : It's okay!!!

Ava ne kuch kehna chaaha lekin, Renshu ne haath uthaate hue use aashvashan deke shaant kar diya. Majbooran use chup hona pada.

Garofano ne ek teekhi nazar se Ava ko dekha jaise maano udhar hi use daboch ke dass legi. Kintu, bina kuch kahe woh Veer ko andar ki orr le gayi.

Le jaate hue uski bauhe Veer ki dasha dekh sikudi hui thi.

'Look at you now! Maine tumse kaha tha na Veer. Renshu tumhe Jaw Long se ladne bhejega. Mat jaana...! Fir bhi tumne meri baat nahi maani.'

Veer ko ahista se bed par litaate hue Garofano ne uske gaal ko pyaar se sehlaaya. Aur, usne kamre ko andar se band kar liya.

***

Kuch derr baad...

Erica ki palke jhapki. Aankhein malte hue woh uthi. Usne dekha ki ye toh uska hi kamra tha.

'Mein ghar pe-!?'

[Yes! We won.]

'Uhh!? Kya hua tha?'

[Mujhe kaise pata hoga? I couldn't see anything. Apne dad se pucho.]

'Right-!!'

Woh uthate hue aage badhi. Hall me hi use khusur pusur ki awaazein aa rahi thi. Dead Silence aur Chameleon ko activate kar woh dabe paav hall me darwaze ke paas pahuchi toh use andar ki baatein sunayi di-

Garofano : Maine tumse kaha tha na ki Veer ko mushqil me nahi daalna.

Renshu : Hmph! Ye baat tumhaare muh se acchi nahi lagti. Tumhari wajah se hi Veer uss faaltu case me fasa tha.

Garofano : What? Faaltu case? Tumhe pata bhi hai woh mere liye kitna important tha? Mujhe ye saari formalities karne me itna samay lag gaya ki mein pichli 2 raato se theek se soyi bhi nahi hu. Aur, Veer...! Uski haalat dekhi hai tumne? Kya soch ke use eastside akela bheja tha tumne?

Renshu (sighs) : Mujhse waqai iss maamle me galti hui hai.

Garofano : Huh?

Renshu (frowns) : Unki taraf se do system holders aur the-!!!

Garofano (in shock) : Do???

Renshu (nods) : Haan! Ek anjaan naujavan tha jo mujhse bhida tha. Aur, ek koi aurat thi. Helicopter me...! Woh ant me hi nazar aayi. Miss Divya uske kandho par ladi hui thi.

Garofano (frowns) : Iska matlab woh Divya ko kidnap kar ke chale gaye? Shit!!! Veer ne agar ye suna toh woh gusse me aa jayega.

Renshu : Kuch pak raha hai andar hi andar. Bahut gehraayi me...! Mujhe nahi laga tha itna involvement hoga kisi ka. Lekin, mein galat tha. Veer ne past zaroor dekha hoga Jaw Long ka...! Woh aur jankari hume de sakta hai.

Garofano : Par, galti tumhari hi hai. Akhir, tum use uss danav aadmi se ladne akele kaise bhej sakte ho?

Renshu (smiles) : Simply because of one reason...!

Garofano : Huh??

"...Because, Veer is stronger than I am!!!"

Aur, ye bol sunte hi Garofano se leke baahar khadi Erica ke badan me raungte khade ho gaye.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
This update consists of 11.6k words. Sabse bada update ab ye ho gaya hai. Maine koshish bahut ki likhte rehne ki par 2:30 baje meri jhapki lag chuki thi. So, sorry for that...! Ab mujhse zyada late jaga nahi jaata kyuki subah jaldi uthne ki aadat dali hui hai. Isliye, mein kehta hu timing ka mat pucho karo. Par nahi!! Sudharna nahi hai!
Anyways, ek update aur bacha hai arc ke closure ka. Uske baad ye arc khatam hai. So, likes pelne ka aur revos rakhne ka. Target same hai apna. 200! Also, agar mujhe laga toh iss arc me ek update aur badha dunga. But I don't think ki wo necessary hai filhal.
Dhanyavad!

 

[Werewolf]

MIND-BLOWING UPDATE!!!

Ab dekhte hain what Pari (THE WEAPON) has in store for us.

Fantastic mind-blowing

Jabardast aur Mazedar Update Diya Hai Please Keep It Up ️

Bhai ye kya ta kabhi socha nahi ta Aisa bhi hoga you are next lvl writer bro Mera dimag chakra Gaya bhai

Bro update bohot jayda mast tha
But jo ya last me veer ke sath hoaa ha vo kosh pele nahi pada matlab pari me koi skill ya koi card purchase kiya ha ya pari khod aayi ha for only fight

Bro is baar jayda wait mat karvana is week me hi next update da dene baad me jo next arc ho ga us me time la ka de dene update but is arc ka last update jaldi dene ki koshish kerna

Superb update Bhai

Vah bhai vah Sala rongte Khade Ho Gaye....
Itne Jyada system holder ke bich mein Bhasad machi Hui Hai maja a Gaya... inke bich mein Erica bus Ek bacchi lag rahi hai..
Aise Aise cards aur skills nikal kar a rahi hain Jo Samne Wale Ki gand faad De..
Sala jitne bhi cards ya skills jaw lang ke pass hai sab dark nature ko posh kar rahe hain.... jinki madad se abhi tak vo is yuddh mein apar raha hai....

At the end Ja lang jo bhi ritual kar raha tha Jiski madad se aur dusron ki card Chahe skill ko Apna banaa leta tha ..yah Sala Kuchh Jyada hi Khatarnak tha... aur Aisa Nahin lag raha hai ki isane yah pahli bar istemal kiya ho..

Bahanchod ab Pari ka Kaun Sa Roop nikal kar Bahar aaya hai Jisne Veer ke Sare points ko istemal karte hue Uske body ko hi takeover kar liya ...dekhte hain Jab Ek system khud Bahar Aata Hai ladai ke Maidan mein to kya aur kaisi-kaisi chijen dekhne ko milati Hain.....

Jabardast aur gand faad update bhai lage raho best of luck

Bhai kya update ki ending kari hai.. Words nahi bolne ke liye.. Kya hi kahu... ..ab jitne din next update nahi aa jata tab tak yahi mind me chalta rahega.. How is it possible... Veer ki pari sabse hat kr hai.. Or sbse khatarnak bhi..

Bhai kya update Diya hai...
Emotional dardnak khofnak
Rongte khade ho gye..

बहुत ही अद्भुत अपडेट था भाई क्या लड़ाई Erica ने jaw long से लड़ी और jaw long के full stats भी देखने को मिले खैर अब देखना ये है कि परी ने ऐसा क्या किया है जिससे वीर के शरीर में आश्चर्यजनक बदलाव आया क्या ये कोई legendry card अथवा किसी अद्भुत skill को खरीद कर उपयोग किया है वीर के सभी points से या कुछ और।

वैसे अपडेट बहुत ही ज्यादा अद्भुत था Hollywood की thriller movie की तरह।

Ekdum Jabardast Khatrnak fantastic update

Bahut shaandaar update Bhai
Kya veer ne jo apna control pari ko Diya hai kya wo sahi hoga future me ya kuch to gadbad hai

Bahut hi dhansu update Werewolf bhai...

Atomic update bro, gajab ka update raha Erica aur Ava ne sahi fight ki hai,
Lekin ab dekhna ye ki jaw long ke samne pari kya karti hai aur isse veer ko side effects hote Hain kyunki last me pari ne veer ko khud gulam bana hi liya hai ab dekhte hain ki aage kya hota ....
We are eagerly waiting for next update.

Dhamakedar Update

Chipkali ka free MN mission ho gya
Yh wali pri devil wali feeling y rhi hy
Ava n kafi time dilva diya veer ko
Yh APne ap ko pri k control MN Dena Koch hanikarik sa feel ho rha hy

Ding jabardast update tha werewolf bhai complete update.eva, Erica,veer and jaw long ki fight superb i think next update aur ek level hoga badega. keep posting

Firstly let me take a breathe and cool down my goosebumps hmm now let me start the review werewolf bhai chaahte kya ho readers pagal ho jye kahani padh kar hai bhai sahab mujhe update ke starting padh kar ase bikul nhi laga tha ki end ase aur ase mod par hoyega ek Dum waqt badal diye jazbad badal diya bhai ju ne toh bhai Pura 1 and half hour se jyada lag gya 2 baar update padhne mein lekin Maja ase aaya ki sabhdo mein bataya nhi jaa rha lekin phir bhi kosish hai likhne ki toh phir suru karte hai review bhot karli faltu ki baatein.

Sab se pehle Erica aur uss ke system ki conversation se ase laga ki Genie Erica ko nhi mujhe bataa rahi ki Veer pul ke paar nhi niche kyuki bhot detail mein ussne Erica ko samajhya tha aur finally usse veer mila lekin veer ki halat dekh kar usse jesa feel aur woh jese ju ke dwara dikhaya gya woh ekdum real life ki tarah laga aur uss ke baad Erica aur ava ki conversation se pehle unko ek dusre ko dekh kar mujhe ek Purani film ka title yaad aagya woh film thi na ek phool aur doo Mali ase ava aur erica ki current situation ladka ek aur ladkiyan doo abhi ke liye lekin unne kya pata ki yahn 2 se bhot jyada mali hai iss phool ke liye lekin Garofano ko miss kiya maine warna aur Maja aata tha ab baat karen Erica aur ava ki conversation ki ko Erica apni jagah sahi ki woh ase kisi par bhi barosa nhi kar saki lekin situation se hisab se usne kiya agar koi bhi hota toh usse karna hee padta.

Iss update mein bhot saare past ke raaj aur conversation bhi baar aayi jisme Erica aur renshu ki conversation padh kar saaf pata lag rha ki ek baap yeh koi bhi family wale apne bacho ko pehle ki bataa ke agha kar dete hai ki bacha kis par barosa kar sakta hai aur kis par nhi aur yeh same renshu ne bhi kiya

Aur kehna padhe ka ki Genie ek smart system hai kyuki usne time time par Erica ko sahi cheezein karne ko bola hai chaye woh veer ki bandaged karna ho aur situation ko dekhte hue Erica ka mood lite karne ka ho.Lekin mujhe laga tha ki yeh tak padhne par ki raaj yeh hai ki systems ek dusre stats kyu nhi dekh pata hai lekin badme yeh Baram bhi tuk gya.

Aur uss ke baad finally ava ka past aur usske yeh aane tak ki kahani joki thoda sa last update padh kar samaj aa gyi ki ava bhi pyar mein gir gyi aur bachne aayi hai lekin Pura detail mein padh kar Maja aaya ek ek cheez ek ek emotions mujhe bhi feel ho rha tha kyuki dil toh ju ke bhai ka yani mere bhi tuta hai bas maine kisi ko dokha nhi diya sorry Idher udar chala gya review se bhai sahab ek ek emotions on point tha Maja aa gya. Wese death flag ka idea mujhe tha lekin wahi pichle update mein review nhi diya toh usse liye bhi maafi aur approx 25-27 update Purna rasaiya bhi khul gya ki ava ne jump kyu nhi maara tha.

Aur usske baad ava aur jaw long ki fight bhai ju ne kitna dimag aur time invest kiya hoyega na inn dono ki aur kisi bhi fight ko aur moves ko visualize karne mein aur likhne mein chaye woh katna wala scene ho chaye woh guns wala scene ekdum asi feeling aati hai ki wahi Baath ke dekh rha hu.

Aur iss ke baad finally hum sab readers ke samne ju ne Jaw Long ke stats bhi dikha diye bhai fight ek baari ko visualize kar lete hoyege yaar ju ko stats sochne mien kitni dikkat hoti hoyegi na ki konse system holder ke kya cheezein jyada rakhni kya kam rakhni unke cards ke baare mien details dena unki skills ke baare mein batana bhai Kitna dimag laga dekha hai ju aur ek sab se bada sawal aur kitna dimag hai ju ke pass kahi ju ke pass bhi koi system toh nhi hai na

Aur uss ke baad finally humare veer bhai bhi uth gye warna ava ka game baj jata jaw Long ke hatho lekin veer ki intelligence ka jawab nhi ki Veer ne chaaku fek ke khali dodging skill ka hee nhi aura vision related information bhi nikal li wese Veer ke iss update mein uthne ki umeed maine kam hee lagyi thi mujhe ju phir ase hee bina uthye update katam kar dega.

Aur uss ke baad Veer aur jaw Long nhi nhi veer Erica vs jaw Long ki fight mana ki erica ka cameo chota tha lekin tha lekin jab veer jab maar kha rha mujhe laga ki Pari pagal ho gyi hai jo usse bacha nhi rahi lekin badme jo Pari ne kiya uss ke abhi tak mai ubar nhi paya hu review likhe hue ek hour hone wala hai wese ek aur cheez end mien pata lagi ki system can control human body ab yeh kese yeh bhi bataa dena kahi pata lage yeh raaj last update of story tak ponch jye yeh fir next story par. Wese ek sawal aaya hai ki agar Pari ne Veer ko control kiya yeh jo bhi kiya ase Genie ne erica ko aur lily ne ava ko aur jaw Long ke system ne jaw Long ko kyu nhi kiya ?? Aur Pari ne hee veer ko control kiya hai yeh kisi aur ne kuch aatma type thing ne ??
Aur Veer ka Naya character dekh kar Maja aagya
In the end mai yeh hee kehna chaunga ki story ke iss update ke end ke baad story kis direction mein change hogyi Kai readers ka pata nhi mai toh bikul bhi tyaar nhi tha sayad koi bhi reader nhi hoyega ju ne as usual hum sab ko end padha kar yaad dila diya ki kahani thik se aur dhyaan se padho warna dimag ke upar ke jayegi aur story pichle update par na review dena ke liye maine baad mein dekha toh bhot kam review aaye tha story ke sab se badhe update par
Aur akhir mai fantastic update...

Nice update bro

Awesome update Dear

Keep it​

Zabardast and fantastic update

Behad hi khatarnak or bhayanak update bhai rongte khade hogaye ek ke bad ek twist bhai ye last vala to bhot jyada bhayanak lag raha he ab lagta he jaw Lang ki mayyaa ****** gayi majha aagaya ye es kahani ka sabse best update he bhi sare hi update mast he lekin ye vala supar se bhi uppar he

Amazing Update Bro maza aa gya

Update to Bahuuuut jyada shandaar tha

Mai jese jese update padh rha h , ak alg level ka feel aa rha tha
Aisa lg rha tha jese mai koi adventure movie dekh rha hu
[ Bhaisaab aap to Marvel waalo ko fail kr doge ]

Nice update bro

Update padhte tym y b dar tha ki khi update khtm n ho jaaye
Aur aapne jo update k bd ak short note likha tha ki kisi b cheez ki अति axi n hoti h to y baat glt h kyuki aapke update ki ati axi h

Next update ka ab bahut besabri se intzaar hai
Veer ka ak nya look dekhne ko milega ya
Yu khe ki pari ka naya roop

Vese aapne bola tha ki jo naye villain aayenge vo jaw long se b jyada dangerous honge to ab isse jyada aur kya hi ho skta h

Y to soch k hi maza aa rha h ki kis next level ki fight hogi aur kya kya adventure dekhne ko milega

Lovely update. The turn this update has taken after Veer had given up the control to Pari is beyond words! Catch line is "I am the Weapon"!!!!!!!!!

During the conversation of Veer & Pari I thought he was gonna call her mommy and then she'll help him Btw. Pari is still useless.. chahe Werewolf apni crush ke naam par bane is kirdar ko jitna bhi strong aur useful dikhane ki koshish karen, we'll not be moved...

Superb Update

Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Werewolf bhai....
Nice and lovely update....

Unbelievable, Unimaginable update Bhai

Bhayanak, shamdar, excellent, extraordinary, fantabulesh update brother
I just love your writting skill
Keep it more please

Ise kehte hai aag lagana

Salute to your mind-blowing super
Fantastic update

Bheeshan ladati. Erica bhi is ladayi me kafi mature ho gayi hai. Ava ka Veer ke liye pyar bhi saaf jhalak gaya hai. Lekin ladayi ka vivaran bahut hi bhibhats tha. Har cheez bahut intelligently cheorogaph ki gayi thi. Ava aur Erica bhi khub jam kar ladi.

Pehle to Ava ka past aur phir Erica aur Renshu ke huye conversation ne sab baatein clear kar di ki Ava kaise wahan aa gayi aur kyon Erica Ava par vishvas nahi kar rahi thi. Uske baad aise-aise naye cards nikale ki padh kar sir hi ghoom gaya. Pure stats bhi dikh gaye. Very innovative.

Lekin ant me Veer ka Pari ko surrender karna, aur Veer ke ander se ek tarah ka evil aura nikalna, bilkul samajh nahi aaya. Shayad agle update me clear ho.

Awesome superb update bhau

Ek dam faadu update diya hai,,,,,,,,

Bhai kya update diya h
Heads off h bhai
Aaj tak aisa update na kisi ne pda hoga na kisi ne socha hoga bhai maan gaye
Wait for next update

What the fuck mindblasting update return of ava was just amazing and this fight is giving me goosebumps and the takeover of veer by pari and his last words i am the weapon are enough to increase our anxiety thqnks bro for this fabulous update

Jabardast update sir
Kya isiliye pari use bar bar mumma bolne ko kah Rahi thi ya uska koi aur role hai.
Mumma bolne ke bad bhi yahi hona tha ya kuch alag.
But pari ka ye roop dekhne me maja aayega.

nice update

I m amazed

Abhi sirf itna keh sakta hu Bhai

Update padke esa laga koi fighting movie dekh rha hu pesa vasool update tha

Kya hi update tha bhai Aish laga koi horror movie dekh raha hu ak dam clear vision tha bhai
Fantastic and Update

Amazing update ....but how does pari is taking control...is it some hidden secrets of pari ...

Yaha like se upar koi button do bhailog.

Beyond awesome update. Rongte to hamare khade hue hai.

Take your time bro and keep them coming.

Werewolf kuch toh hai aap mei ...bahut hee accha likhte hai...update padhte waqt har ek scenes saamne chalta hai....lagta hai jaise koi movie...dekh rhi huu ......kisi din rich huye na ...pakka ek movie banaoongi aapko writer leke...

Agar Pari Veer ko possess kar sakti hai, to shyad Kai Jaw Long ko bhi kar sakta hai
Because both of them are systems.

भैंचो, रोएँ खड़े हो गयें बे पढ़ते पढ़ते... ऐसा भी कोई लिखता है क्या... हद करते हो यार... उफ्फ्.... पूरा पसीना पसीना हो गया... इतना पसीना तो सेक्स करते समय भी नही आता भैंचो । अगर best से भी उपर कोई तमगा होता है तो वो इसमे सटीक बैठता है...

Buddy superb and dhasu block buster update jo mene padha 1 ghanta kab beet Gaya paat hi nahi chala

buddy Mera bas ek sawaal hai ki ye perk hunt kya chiz hai

Is baar itna hi review isi liye kyu ki now iam back in business main pichle update ke review de paya kyu main thoda mind free karne trip per tha but ek baar firse rush hour lag Chuka order aachuka hai and firse Bina tel ke lene Raha hai abhi bhi office main hi hu party ko 2 moth ke under 2 tarah ke parst jo hum banate hai unka unka consignment cahiye isi liye iss baar itna hi but jese jese free hote hounga review rakhta jaunga

Sorry buddy main itne acche update par review nahi Dee paya

Amazing update

Zabardast update

Bhai iss story ka sabse thriller update tha end mai jo hua woh unexpected tha brilliant and beautiful update

Bhayanak….exploding…load with super duper thrill…mesmerising…update…

Nice and fantastic update bhai keep posting

Sala iski maa ka saki naka kiya update diya hai AC me paseena nikal update Diya hai sub saley system holder ek doosre ko chakit kar rahey they aur sab se zada end me chakit kia Veer ne ya yu kahoon sab ki kundalini hila ke rakh di. Wow kia dhasu update thaa.
Maza aa gaya bhai. To aakhir kaar Aunty Pari sorry Mummy Pari ne Veer ko submission per majboor kar hi Diya hai aur ab apne auqat pe aa gayi hai aur yah Jaw Long ke liye to qatayi accha nahi hai. Ab dekhna hoga usko kaisay bachta hain.
Waisay accha to yah Veer ke liye bhi nahi lag raha hain. Lag raha hai jaisay uski sari humanity hi khatam ho gayi hai is baar. Kaha sab ko Dil se lagane wala Veer ek dam se ek Demon me tabdeel ho gaya hai. To yah kahna bhi sahi rahega ki Jaw Long ki jagah ab yah dekhna hoga Veer khud ko apni is nahi personality se kaisay bachata hai aur yah sab uske jeevan me kiya changes laatey hain.
Jaha tak mera sixth sense kahta hai shayad yaha is arc ke end me ya phir next arc me Veer ko system and system se related bohat kuch RAAZ ka pata chalega.
Bhai please please please next update Zara jaldi dijiyega. Ab intezar nahi hoga.
At the End aap sab readers and Xforums ke members ko Happy Eid Mubarak.

Bhai lajawab
anime mein bhi video se Aisa seen create karna bhut muskil hai aur aapne srip words mein ye seen fill Kara Diya bhai legend ho bhai fight seen create karne mein
Aur bhai ye perk scroll kya hai ?

Nice update...

Very good update bro

Behtareen update warewolf bhai. Kya fight seen likha h.... Legendary !!! Now its time for pari to show some skills. Aur end to oye hoye hoye...I AM THE WEAPON!!! intzaar nhi ho rha ab next upadte me jaw long ki gaand tutegi. Renshu v other end se aa skta h erica ko bachane k chakkar me. Wo v dekh le veer ka ye roop dekhna hoga divya kese react krti h after all of this. Great story. Keep it up

Speechless, awesome beautiful,

Roj roj online naa aane ka fayda ki ek sath do update padhne ko mile. It almost took 1.5 hour to read both.

That why he is the goat.
I am straight but agar samne hota to tumari puchi le leta. Maa kasam kya likha hai.

BC kuch time to process hi nahi hua sab kuch mind blowing, pehle socha padhke chhod deta hu but ispe review dena to banta tha.

Dono update me kya jabrdast khatrnaak action dala hai, purely goosebumps.

System holder ki line lagi padi hai Jo aa rha hai vahi system holder. Chinatown arc ki jagah system arena hona chahiye tha naam.

Fight scenes are well organized and over the top.

Update 176 me Ava ki entry mast thi, ye to shuru se pta tha ki Ava Zinda hai aur jarur aayegi, lekin yahan use expect nahi Kiya tha. Everyone including me thought ki garofano yahan aayegi, but you always did the unexpected.

And Ava aur Jaw long ki fight to ekdum jabardast specially vo ek sath char gun ek sath handle karne vala scene mast tha and I find it slightly funny. ki Ava goliya chala rhi hai aur Jaw long apni gaa*d bacha rha hai I mean apni Jaan bacha rha hai.

Vaise to meri favourite Bhawna aur Nidhi aur kavya hai but yahan main pighal gya. Veer ne maaf kiya yaa nahi but maine to Ava ko maaf kar diya.
Akhirkaar vo hande ki judwa hai.

Bechara vo tribal man bina baat ke apna khopda khulva betha, isliye kabhi apne se tagdi fight me nahi ghusna chahiye.

Erica realised what real fight is, what happened when two system holder clash with each other.


Crimson arc tak card, skills sabke naam aur unki powers pta thi, lekin ab to unhe yaad rkhna mushkil ho gya hai, I can understand how hard it is for you. Two create and remember every system powers, card, skills, stats. Now I just go with the flow without too much focusing on system stats.
Vo kaam to Werewolf Bhai sambhal lenge.

Inn do update se ek chiz aur samjh aayi yaa phir aur confuse kar di ki system ka raaz unimaginable hai, uska potential bahut jyada hai. Gennie ka Erica ko btana ki blood se related lakho skill ya card hai then what kind off powers the system has is beyond my imagination.

Second thing maybe pari is different from other systems, she is special and extraordinary. Jis tarah se pari ne fight ke bich me jaw long ke sabhi skills aur cards ki jankari itni jaldi veer ko di, Ginnie ke comparison me. Halaki ye isliye bhi ho sakta hai ki unn dono ka level alag alag hai but I think pari knows more than any other system about systems.

And the ending of 177 update proves it that she is different and not totally in control of host body.
Familgia arc me veer ka pari dwara baar baar incestuous relation ki taraf push karna bhi pari alag vajah se kar rhi hai.


Mind-blowing awesome update.

Keep updating, take your time and deliver the best as always.
I can wait for weeks

Bhai apki Ye update lajwab thi....
Next update jldi do yrr..

Bahut mast update
Hairan kar diya

Goosebumps Aa Gaya Padhke Update

Superb update
After long time i read

Shandar update

Kya bolu kahan se start karu kuch samajh nahi araha bas dimaag faad update

storyline system holders ke ird gird converge ho rahi hai which is exciting , thrilling and a treat to read

coming to this thread , begining me last update ka cliff Hanger complete hua ki Ava kyu kese pahuchi - everything was smooth as always

yaha ek cheez worth mentioning hai ki hum readers bas patience rahe.. saare doubts , questions and broken links time ke sath apke har update me milte jayenge
lekin boss ek to story , apke mind blowing narration aur update ke akhir me cliff hangers ye sabhi maa behen ek kar dete patience ki result - next update ka besabri se intzaar..

Ava ka description aur erica ki entry sab Obviously bahut acha tha mujhe personally Yaha thoda sa boring laga , ,
actually update itne awaited hote hai ki jab bhi aate (bhale hi itne late lateef lekin sab well understanding hai ki kyu late aate hai = quality is top notch ,) mai regardless of time, place, situation, read karne baith jata. Jab update aaya ya nahi check karne site Open ki to luckily 12 minute pehle hi aap post kar chuke the bas to padhne laga me fauran lekin is boring juncture par aake mene padhna band kar diya ki kaam karlu sham/raat ko aaram se read karunga.

But but but , jab sham ko padhna start kya aur Ava & System holder Tarzan ki fight start hui bas fir to sama bandhta chala gaya
tabadtod story telling maza aa gaya
jese hi Ava ka wo 4 pistol stunt start hua bas ek analogy aa gayi thi mind me.. let me share it with you, actions scenes itne dekh liye logo ne ki kuch bhi New and afresh nahi lagta unme lekin here comes SS Rajamouli .. Bahubali and RRR , dono me unhone innovative action scenes dikhaye the aur same yaha apne .. Ava ka wo 4 pistol juggle very New aur creative tha
uske baad twist and turns phir game tarzan ke hak me aa jana.

ek baat noticing hai apka haal to aisa hai bhai ki ab to aap agar ek dot ( ".") Bhi type kar do to hum yahi sochenge ki iska bhi koi reason hoga koi meaning hoga ye baat me update ke title ke niche jo disclaimer likhe the aap uske context me bol raha hu. Absolutely justifying

aur Veer to phir Veer hai , akela woh lucky nahi hai ki use system mila. Uska system Pari bhi equally lucky hai ki use veer mila. Ye baat me jab Veer ne Tarzan ki aura sight skill ki weakness ko decode kiya tha us reference me bol raha hu. Pari ka reaction mazedaar tha waah waah waah

Witch craft activites well narrated aur bas fir aata hai dhamakedaar last segment update ka jiski tareef me to words naa hai mere paas
Daanshu, bawandar, outstanding , fabulous , gand faad ye sare praising words unsuitable hai iss last segment ke aage

ab kuch queries hai - ki Ava ne jo points bachaye the wo kisliye bachaye the ye grey area for me. (Joki usne flag skill me use kar liye the)

- Dusri, ki veer ke points dakaar kar pari ne akhir kara kya?? Kya system level upgrade hua ya koi skill ke liye gambling hui ya Kuch aur .. Totally sus.

Now about ur last note, ending sahi hui update ki isse behtar cliff Hanger bhala aur kya ho sakta tha. Aur bhai ye update late nahi balki jaldi aya hai agar hum recent past ke kuch updates ko consider kare to . Lekin haan ap maan rahe ki ye update late hai to meri ye baat bhool jao aur agle updates jaldi jaldi de do

bahut bak bak ho gayi par ye update forced kiya ki nahi mamu ye update ke liye aaye thoughts apne munna bhai (aap) tak pahuchne ka

bhai mere jaise kayi readers bhale hi active na ho iss Amazing thread par , like nahi dete , comment nahi karte but bro at first place mere jaise kayi to login hi nahi karte. Bas xforum ye site open karte bhi hai to sirf baadshah ke liye

haan jo log active hai unko to 1000000% like , comment sab karna chahiye u deserve all this so badly so -bows-

Phewww likhne ko to aur bhi bahut kuch hai, praise to jitni ki jaye utni kam hai . Apka target bhale hi 200 ho lekin I am sure ki 200 ke minimum 6-7 guna log taraste hai is kahani ke har update ke liye
Thank you so fucking much bhai for this out class super duper story

Fantastic bro

Sorry... I'm late... I'm quite busy these days.

Aate hi 2 updates mil gye pdhne ko... I thought you would have uploaded only 1 update (coz you're always so late.. )

but it was a surprise... Seeing you have already uploaded two updates. Reading one after the another... Updates with such lengths... It took time... It took hell lot of time for me to grasp each and everything (which I still couldn't do it fully ) and to read carefully without losing the grip (thanks to your immaculate narration skills which takes the hold of our mind like different poles of magnets attracting to each other)

I'm speechless for now. I need a few hours to digest what happened in last two updates. To reply for those two updates... I need some time. So... Thorough review I'll give later. I don't have anything to say now. I'll be back with my review. Have a nice day

The future belongs to a different kind of person with a different kind of mind: artists, inventors, storytellers-creative and holistic ‘right-brain’ thinkers.”
Supar hit updet bro... Ek dum jkaass likhte ho bro tum

इस स्टोरी का एक्सन सीन्स , फाइटिंग सीन्स पढ़कर यह सौ फीसदी क्लियर हो गया है कि आप यदि फिल्मी लाइन मे होते तो नम्बर वन स्टंट डायरेक्ट अवश्य होते ।
क्या ही एक्सन सीन्स लिखा है आपने ! न कुछ कहने लायक छोड़ा है आपने और न ही कुछ लिखने लायक ।

इस फाइटिंग सीन्स की अपेक्षा था हमे क्योंकि प्रीवियस अपडेट तक फाइटिंग मुकम्मल नही हुआ था । अगर कुछ हैरान करने वाला वाक्या था तो वह था एवा का अचानक से यहां टपक पड़ना ।
लेकिन वह न सिर्फ टपकी बल्कि जाॅउ लोंग को हमेशा के लिए इस दुनिया से टपकाने की व्यवस्था भी कर दी ।
जाॅउ लोंग साहब की नानी याद दिला दी इन्होने । कवच कुंडल रूपी सिस्टम से लैस जाॅउ लोंग साहब को जंग के मैदान से भागने को विवश कर दिया ।
जिस तरह वह चार - चार रिवाल्वर को अपने दोनो हाथों से एक ही वक्त मे हैंडल करते हुए गोलियों की बौछार कर रही थी वह किसी भी कल्पना से परे था । यह वास्तव मे अविश्वसनीय सीन्स और आउटस्टैंडिंग लेखनी था ।

इरिका मैडम ने अपनी क्षमतानुसार इस युद्ध मे पार्टिशिपेशन किया । वीर के सलामती के लिए हरसंभव काम किया । वीर के लिए फिक्रमंद हुई । मौत को सामने देखकर भी रणक्षेत्र से पलायन नही करी । यह इस लड़की की बहादुरी नही है तो फिर क्या है !

जाॅउ लोंग साहब ने एक बल्डंर गलती कर दी । ऐसी गलती जो उनके मौत का कारण बन सकती है । साहब को अपना इंटेलिजेंट प्वाइंट शुन्य नही करना था । अपनी शारीरिक ताकत , स्ट्रैंथ को बढ़ाने के लिए इंटेलिजेंट की गठरी को रिक्त कर दिया ।
वगैर दिमाग के , वगैर बुद्धी के , वगैर चेतना के मनुष्य एक पागल मनुष्य माना जाता है । एक पागल व्यक्ति के अंदर भले ही दस हाथी का बल आ जाए फिर भी वह किस काम का ! एक विवेक शुन्य व्यक्ति युद्ध के दौरान अपने रणकौशल का प्रयोग कैसे कर सकता है !

जाॅउ लोंग साहब की हार सुनिश्चित है और इसके लिए कोई वास्तव मे जिम्मेदार है तो यह नतालिया मार्टिन है जिसने अपने रिवाल्वर के हैरतअंगेज कारनामे से जाॅउ लोंग को गलती करने पर मजबूर कर दिया ।

वीर के सामने सिर्फ एक चुनौती है , उसे जाॅउ लोंग के प्रहार से खुद को सुरक्षित रखना । वह अपने विवेक का इस्तेमाल कर आसानी से उसे मात दे सकता है ।
जाॅउ लोंग ने महिलाओं के साथ निर्दयता दिखाकर अपनी ताबूत पर स्वयं ही आखिरी कील ठोंक लिया ।

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट वोल्फी भाई ।
हमेशा की तरह ही यह अपडेट भी जगमग जगमग था
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग।

Superb update

बहुत सुंदर और लाजवाब अध्याय गुरु जी
बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद
ऐसे ही महा अध्याय की प्रतीक्षा है

Werewolf bhai ek qus. Ki baki sabhi systm holder ke system ki personality level badne badalti hai kya pari ke jese..???

Or jese jese pari ne take over kiya hai veer ko. Wese hi kya baki syatm bhi kr skte hai kya

Supper fantastic update janab

Bahut hi behtreen update bro

Shandar update brother jabrdast...

Suna tha ki ek baar Rajnikant ne ek goli chalyi aur phir ek chaku phenk kar us goli ko do parts me slice kar ke ek hi goli se do jano ko maar diya. Yahan par Ava ki revolver skill, ek saath chaar revolver chala kar kya sama bandha hai, ki jaan hi nikal gayi. Wo Jaw Long ki nahi, hum readers ki. Ava ki katana, 'Berserk' aur uske against 'Vinona's Mark' ka use, Ava ki Katana to Erica ka 'Boomerang', ek-ek scene kya khoob racha hai. Is Jaw Long ki khopdi bhi kitni majboot hai, Veer ke itne kas ke patakne ke baad bhi kharbuje ki taraf nahi phati.

Veer hum sab ka chaheta hai, kisi ke saamne na jhukne wali spirit ke liye, tab bhi jab uske pass System nahi tha, uski honesty ke liye, uski sabko help kerne wali nature ke liye, par aakhir me usne Pari ko kaise surrender kar diya. Aur weh evil aura, shayad 'Evil' ko maarne ke liye 'Evil' ki jaroorat padi aur Jaw Long ke marte hi Veer apni pehle wali sthiti me aa jaye. Pehle bhi ek baar bataya tha ki is arc ke ant me 'System' ke baare me kuch raaz saamne aayenge, lagta hai ki yeh uski shuruat hai.

Ek baat aur dimag me aayi, agar Pari Jaw Long ko maarti hai, ofcourse Veer ke through, to kya Veer ko mission completion ke rewards milenge.

Awesome update bro

What the hell brother akhir kya tha yeh puri body feel kr hi yeh update dimag hill gya or jo ending kri hai update ki yeh to out of the universe hai words nae mil rhe kuch likhne ko but supr fantastic update

werewolf bhai thanks for this update because I was deeply inspired by your logical writing! Remembering the past then giving updates on each and every thing ur genius! I admire writing updates for next chapter is vary workful job to you specilly when in climax! Now comes to this update 1. This update is most unique update till now in this story
2. System holders are fighting each other
3. (Hint) systems some time take over control of host(spoiler may be I think)
4.preparing updates for this will definitely takes ur time coz it's mind game and vary though for rememering all of things in last thanks for this update

mast action update bhai

भाई इतनी शानदार स्टोरी को इतना विलंब से क्यों पोस्ट कर रहे हों, थोड़ा स्पीड से पोस्ट करों

Awesome update

Wow wow and wow.....bahut awesome update...Aisa lag raha tha ki ye meri ankho ke samane chal Raha hai....maza aa gaya.....Dil.me ek pyas jg uthi hai ki age wale.scene kab padhane (dekhane) milenge......muze thoda thoda lagata hai iss power ke piche jrur veer ki mom ka hath hai....aur o neelmani usaki bhi kuch story and power veer ke sath hai jo veer ko auro se alag bana Rahi hai....keep it up and thanks sir

jhakaas update bhai
action aur emotion dono the is update me
jaha ava apne dil ke haatho majboor hokar veer ke piche aayi aur usse bacha liya
wahi erica bhi kahi na kahi usi rah par hai
jow long ki to fat gayi veer ke naye roop ko dekhkar balckaura lagta hai bahot hi dangerous hone wala hai
veer ne sahi kiya ya galat ye to pata nahi par avi veer ko shayad isi ki zarurat thi
pehle bhi pari ne kai baar bola tha veer ko call me mommy i will show you the way
kya ho sakta iska matlab
dekhna padega aagle update me kya hota hai
keep going bro grreat writing

Ab jow long ki tabiyat se gand mari jayegi veer 2 baar maar kha liya tabiyat se ab baari veer ki h

Wow that's amazing update

Speechless.

Awesome amazing phadoo dhasu totally unbelievably fantastic rapchik update

BEHAD KHOOBSURAT ADBHUT ROMANCHAK JABARDUST FANTASTIC MIND BLOWING EXCELLENT AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI

Bhai beja ka fuse udgaya ye scene dekhe

Maja aa gaya intjaar agale update ka

Bahut khoob
Wakai Ava ke aane se veer ko kuch waqt Mila apne body ko heal karne ke liye nahi to veer ki halat aur bhi bigad sakti thi

Bahut hi shandaar lajawaab update hai bhai maza aa gaya aakhir jaw long bhi veer ke is roop ko dekh kar bhayabhit ho gaya jo khud apne aap me itna bhayanak danav Jaisa hai aur ab apne kadam pichhe khich Raha hai use samajh aa gaya hai ki uska antim samay aa gaya hai

Par ye veer ka kaisa roop hai aur khud ko pari ko saup Dena ye kuch samajh nahi aaya


Waiting for next update bro

Simply marvellous, and last update kay end main I was thinking kay kameena mara gaya. Wow kya amazing update di hay bahi. Last update main aik bat meray mind main a rahi thi kay may b wo 2nd system holder Jaw long ka slave ho jisay Black magic ya Dark card say slave banaya ho Jaw long nay. But is update main to really Jaw long nay 3no ko control karnay ka ritual kar dia. Wow . Bhai next update jaldi day dena plzzzzzz this curiosity uffff kya zabardast update di hay bro ......

And obviously who is Pari is the biggest dhamaka in the next updates seems like it will be a huge kaboom. May be with the takeover of Veers body ab shayad kuch system ki hakeekat b khulay kay system actually hay kya.

Mind blowing update bhai

Bahut badiya update bhai

Superb

Aik outstanding Fabolous awesome story hai Kash update jaldi mil jaya karey to kamaal ho ga

Update ki length kamaal Hoti hai is ke liye shukkriya

Bohat hi unique story hai

यह Update अब तक का सबसे शानदार Update था last मे मेरा तो रोगटे खडे हो गए

Super update

veer ki system Pari jitne bhi systems hai mujhe lagta hai sabse jyada खतरनाक hai jaw long ka system Kai bhi nahi jaan paya ye kya hai
Bhai mere to abhi bhi रोंगटे khade ho rahe last wala seen soch soch kar
Ye wali Pari bahut खतरनाक hai re baba बच ke rahna sab log ye sirf cute lagti hai par hai nahi

Zabardast shandaar update

Bahut hi bhayankar wala update diya ha bro abhi tak rongte khade ho rakhe han matlab ki ab pari form me aa chuki ha or usne veer ki body par bhi controll kar liya ha or jis juu long ko ye sab milkar nahi hara paa rahe pari ise bas aise treat kar rahi ha jaise ki wo iske samne pani kam chai ha bhai pata nahi agla update me kya hone wala ha lekin jo bhi hoga bahut hi bhayanak hoga

Sare systems me se pari hi ikloti system ha jo veer ke sath level up hui ha har bar uski personality change hui ha or jab se ye wali personality ai ha tabse hi pari use khud ko sonpne ke liye bol rahi thi ab jab veer ne use khud ko sonp diya ha to bhai lagta ha ki ab veer khud system ban chuka ha kyonki ab pari sab kuchh karne wali ha or wo shayad koi raham bhi nahi karegi kisi par bhi

Waiting for next update

Waiting for.......

Fabulous update Bhai

Aisa lag raha hai pari emotions hai aur Veer dimag aur ab Dil ne dimag PE kabu kar liya hai. Dekho aage kya hota hai.

Nice behtarin mast awesome update bro is darshata hai burai par achhai ki jeet

Top class update bhai.... Ye scene bilkul halo series k cortana aur master cheif wala scene ban gya hy. Us series main bhi AI cortana apny host ki command pe uski body pe control kar k sare dushmans ko hra deti hy aur is main bhi same wohi hony wala hy, absolute uncontrollable unstoppable host.... Ab system ki puri power unleash hogi...

Magar sawal ye bhi hy agar veer ka system apni death ko samny dekh k is tarha host ko control kar k full potential show kar sakta hy tu phir veer ka samna karny waly ka system aysa q nhi kar sakta? Crimson k system ny khud ko bachany k liye aysa q nhi kiya aur ab kya uska system bhi aysa kuch kar sakta hy? Ye aysa q hua? What is the logic and reason behind that.... I should be quite interesting to know about it.



Bohat shiddat sy agli update ka intazar hy aur umeed hy k update bohat jaldi aaye ga.

I never thought that I will read something like this, till now I have also read , this update is the best, I have become a fan of your writing, Werewolf brother, you have influenced me the most among the writers I have read in my life.

200 ka target bhi pura ho chuka hy. Ab dekhain k warewolf bhai update kab dety hain...

Jis hisab sy ye update end hui hy tu agli update ka naam ye hona chahiye

"let the darkness take control"

Yaar update jaldi ki koshish karna plz... Wait karna bohat mushkil hy.

Lagbhag ek saal ho gaya he mujhe wapis aaye iss kahani pe. 1 mahine se bas current update ko hi catch up karne me lag gaya
Amazing work Werewolf bhai. Har ek character bahut achhe se grow kara he ju ne. Ava ka betrayal hard tha par wo bhi fasi hui thi aur usko uske karmo ki saja bhi mil chuki, ab to uske paas koi he nahi jisko wo apna keh sake. Isiliye abhi veer ko bachne aayi he jisse wo mann hi mann apna manti he par dusri side se abhi rashta bandh he. Dhoka to ek tarah se garofano ne bhi diya par usko dosh nahi de sakte kyuki iss baar veer ne outsmart kar diya tha usko aur na garofano ka koi galat intent tha.
Har ek update me tumhari mehnat dikhai deti he. Iss update me bhi bahut badhiya action scene likhe he fir chahe wo veer ke ho ya Ava ke. Ava weapons chalane me expert lag rahi he just like baba yaga .. apni apni speciality he bhai sabki. Veer dimag se kaam leta, ladte samay bhi dushman ki tricks ka counter khojne me laga rehta he aur ye humne har fight me dekha he. Iss me bhi pata laga liya ki jaw long non living things ko nahi dekh sakta. Yahi presence of mind pari ko impress kar gaya jo itna hass rahi thi.
Last me bebas tha veer, kuch kar nahi sakta tha aur ye pari ka attitude ese time me sahi na laga, dusri personality hoti to kabka veer ko bachne ka upay de deti.. par ye wali personality jitni jaldi jaye utna achha.
Ek baat notice ki he yaha iss arc me, sabhi system owners aur unke system ke bich me bond ki. Rensu aur uske system ke bich mutual understanding aur respect he ek dusre ke prati jitna abhi tak dekha, Erica aur uski system ke bich ek caring guardian aur pupil ka bond he kyuki har samay Erica ko uski system salah deti he, usko choti choti details yaad dilati he for example veer ko bandage karna, isse shayad ye sabit hota he ki Erica new he abhi system ki understanding me. Wahi Ava aur uski lily ke bich me ek tarah se master servant type jesa kuch he, maybe I am wrong but something like kaera & Julia, Veer ke case me kuch sahi se clear nahi he kyuki har level pe uski pari ki personality change hoti rehti he. Dekhte he aage, abhi to dher sare secrets khulna baki he..
arc pura hote hi Veer wapis ghar hoga aur tab khas karke Tejal, kavya, Ragini ke liye kuch le jaye to achha he, aur Vese bhi lagta he Neha ki tarah Tejal kahi iss kahani me gift jala na de khair uss me Anshu thi jisko gift me chupa pyaar dikha tha yaha kon hoga ?? Aarohi one of the best character. Aarohi aur bhavna (saas bahu) ki jamne wali he kyuki dono shant swabhav aur dono ki priority veer he.
Ek suggestion bhi he bhai. Kahani me real brand lao, veer ki life ab aur bhi luxurious hogi aage chalke, Rolls Royce padi he ek, to aage Lamborghini, Porsche, Nissan bhi add kardo samay leke…. Aur ek vastu khas add karna bhai wo he watches. Imagine Nidhi ek ek paisa jod ke veer ke liye watch leti he aur veer ko khud pehnati he, kaera to Rolex, AGP ke niche koi lene na wali apne veer ke liye. Aur watch apne partner ko dena ek love ka strong bond bhi show karta he jesa real life me bhi dekha hi hoga.
Well ye sab to mere apne vichar he add karna na karna aap pe.. par itne samay baad kahani padh ke achha laga ab hope ye flow continue rahe..
hopefully ab Veer thoda time family ke bich rahe warna Ese to koi bhi relationship develop nahi hogi uski kisi ke bhi sath. Har samay bahar hi rahega to Ragini biwiyon wale taane hi dengi
Great work Werewolf.
BTW like this style of kiyotaka.

When a system holder kills another system holder then he gets the skills then. why need black magic??

Yes

Her waqt chipki SI rhti hy

Superb update brother agar ho paye to agla update jaldi dena pari ki power dekhni hai aur first time veer jhuka hai sab kuch sanup diya usko waise dekha jaye to ye theek bhi hai kyunki pari uska hi dusra chehra hai jono sathi ek duje ke.agle update ka intezaar rahega

WHAT A TWIST!

Some of it was expected. Nice way to set up veer’s re-entry for round 2! I would have thought he would have been bit smarter for round 2! But heavy damage from earlier not enough to win!

The black aura feels so similar to Naruto’s nine tails! It’ll be interesting to see what happens next! One thing that seemed clear was - if points hit zero - system holder may die. What will happen of veer? Even if he wins, will he be back to as he was? Will Pari now have some sort of permanent partial control on veer all the time? pari’ s expressions are creepy.

Really looking forward to the next chapter!

Great update Werewolf! Looking forward to what you’ve got cooking for us!

गजब अजब

Ava ने अपने अब सही साबित किया है। या यूं कहें वो वापस से रुख करना चाहती है। अपनी पुराने जीवन मे जहां खुसिया थी। वो अपनी दोनों सहेली ओर वीर का साथ चाहती है।

अब वो कब क्या कैसे करेगी वो अपना लेखक कलम चला कर बता देगा। क्यो की इसका पता नही कलम से कब गुपचुप में कही और भेज दे छोरी को,

अब एक छोरी जो कभी जंग का मुह तक ना देखी और उसके सामने विशाल काय ओर शक्तिशाली राक्षस जैसी देहि वाला खतरनाक इंसान हो, जो देख रही हो, उसे कहि अधिक शक्तिशाली साथी भी उसका कुछ नही कर पा रहा है। उसकी तो औकात ही क्या है।

फिर भी वो अपना जो दे सकती है। वो सहयोग कर रही है।

अब बापू ने जो कहा उसके मन मे वही धारणा ava के लिए बन गयी है। क्यो की उसे अभी बाहरी लोगों की समझ नही है। कब किसी कैसे सहयोग लिया जाता है। या वीर ने तो कभी दुश्मन बनाये ही नही है। वो तो सब का भला ही चाहता आया है।

जिसको जब समझ आता है। वो वीर पर मर मिटता है।

अब वीर ने अपनी शक्ति का अच्छा प्रदर्शन किया है। इसमें कोई शक नही है। और ना वो कहि भी चुका है।

जावा लांग की मदद उसका वो इलाका कर रहा है। क्यो वो उसकी जगह है। वहा की परिस्तिति उसके अनुकूल है।
उसने पहले फेश में कुछ किये बिना ही वीर को 50% थका दिया था। उसके बाद जब वो आया तो गलती कहि नही वीर की,

अब परी ने क्या सोच रखा था, या वो क्या सोचकर अपने आप को वीर से आगे चल रही है। कह नही सकते, परि का अपना ईगो भी है। वो साबित करना चाहती है।

अब अपने लेखक भाई का कलम से नीव रखेगे, परी के इस किरदार के लिए ये वही जाने, मन मे कई अवधारणा बन सकती है। जिनका तोड़ लेखक देगा।

Werewolf excited 4 nxt update

Nice update

Is update mein bahut kuch dekhne ko mila

Jaise Ava k sath kya kya hua or Ava ne kya kya Kiya Veer k Jane k baad
Ava ne Veer k liye apni Jaan ki baazi laga di jo usne pehle galti ki thi uska thoda bahut pachtawa kar liya

Wahi Erica or uske system k bich ki conversation jo shayad kuch logo ko boring Lage lekin jaise ap caracter ko dikhate ho uske hisab se Erica ki feeling bhi humko Janna jaruri tha

Veer ne 1bar phir se maut jo lagbhag aa he gayi thi usko maat de di
Jaw Long sach mein 1 khatarnak dushman hai jiske pass bahut he jabardast power or skills ka Malik hai
Usne apna akhiri daav khel Diya hai

Wahi Pari ne bhi 1 naya or khatrnak roop dikhya hai jo kya kya karega yeh agle update mein shayad clear ho jaye

Li Renusha ne kya kya Kiya is dauran yeh bhi dekhna hai

Bahut hi jabardast update AVA ke woh 4 handgun chalane wali style bahut unique thi aur berserk kamal ka skill hai bas jaw long jaise log hi usko use kar sakte hein usko magar kahin na kahin pari ka jo mystic nature raha hai shuruaat se aur ab Jaw long ke aura vision se joh pata chala Pari normal system toh nahi hai (shayad koi special mommy system hi hogi) jiske iss weapon wale roop ko dusre system holder bhi asani se analyze/detect nahi kar paa rahe hein.

Erica abhi ek dam se samajh gayi ki veer ki kahi baatein magar ein mauke pe apna nerve control karne mein AVA bhi veer ke aaspas nahi pahunchi hai..

Khair iss arc ke last wale scene dekhne mein maja jarur aayega tab tak Waiting for your next update

Note : lekhak ji ne fight scene mein badhiya jaan phoonki hai jaisa lag raha hai samne chal rahi ladai ko saamne mein kursi pe baith kar aaram se enjoy kar raha hun (I don't think isse bakwas appreciate kisi ne kiya ho kisi writer ko magar mere manna hai ki ek writer agar reader ko apni likhi hui cheezein feel karwa de toh usse jyada satisfaction wali cheez kuch nahi ho sakti so isliye cheers to Werewolf sir for your beautiful writing and for such a lovely and engaging fighting scene naration) and yeah sach mein crimson se one step aage hai.

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Waiting 4 update

Waiting for the next update

Bhai kya hi likh dala hai ye!!!
Hr update ko padhne ke bad ek question aata hai mn me ki ab isse badhiya kya hi hoga pr phir agle update me hi answer mil jata hai ki ye hoga
Without any doubt this is the greatest fight scene I have ever read...And for writing such updates a massive for you...Last part ko padh ke to literally goosebumps aa gye pura

Jb suru me aapne bola tha ki ye fight scene 4 updates lega to mn me ye bat aayi thi ki 4 updates kewal fight ke liye to boring ho jaiega...lekin sayad tb mai bhul gya tha ki kiski story padh rha tha

Literally itne sare twist n turns aur jabardast scene aaye inn 3 updates me ki ek word ke liye bhi boriyat feel nhi hui...Aur aapka unique and best style of writing to hai char chand lgane ke liye updates me...Sare scene kisi movie ke tarah samne chalne lgte hai aake update padhne ke bad...Aur itna tagda fight scene likh kaise lete ho aap?? mtlb itni imagination kha se late ho aise scene likhne ke liye , koi bhi scene aisa nhi lgta ki repeat ho rha ho sare scene ekdum fresh aur jadardast lgte hai

To Ava ko Veer ka location death flag ke through pta chalta tha...Last update padhne ke bad mere dimag me bhi thore der ke liye ye Death flag wala point aaya tha ki Ava ko Veer ka pta isi ke through lga hoga pr fir usi time lga ki nhi ye nhi ho skta hai kyuki agar death flag location btata to Ava ko Veer ko location tb kyu nhi pta chala jb Renshu ne Veer ko france me bacha liya tha aur Ava ko lga tha ki Veer mr chuka hai...Ab mujhe kya pta tha ki Death Flag update hone bad range badhane ke sath sath location bhi btane lgega

I'm feeling a bit sad for Ava after this update....Bechari puri tarah se akeli hai abhi apne life me....Bap ko crimson ne bhut phle hi chin liya , Uski Maa jo uske jine ka ek matr sahara hua krti thi unko bhi usse chin liya gya , ek dost ko bhi chin liya gya usse ( jisko house of killer ke time mara gya tha wo jahrili sarab pila kr , ab nam nhi yaad aa rha) , Bachpan ke do khas dost Sonia aur Kaera se bhi koi connection nhi hai , aur Veer jiske sath rhna Ava ko pasand hai ya jisse wo pyar bhi kr baithi hai wo usse buri tarah se naraz hai..Itni bdi Singer aur system holder hone ke bawjud she has nothing with her right now
I think she deserves a second chance....Ha manta hu ki usne Veer ko dokha deke usko marne ka plan bnaya pr uss time uske pas aur koi option bhi to nhi tha , I mean jb ye plan usne bnaya tha uss Veer was nothing for her whereas her mother whose life was on stack was everything for her
Aur fir aaj jo Veer jinda bach paya wo bhi kewal Ava ke karan hi sambhav ho paya...

Aaj ke update ke sare fight scene hi jabardast aur well written the
Ava ka 4 banduko ke sath ladna bhi ek kamal ka scene tha...Ye scene mujhe bhut hdd tk ek circus ke scene ko resemble krte lge...Ava as a circus ringmaster balls ke jagah gun ka juggling kr rhi thi aur iss circus ringmaster(Ava) ne Jaw Long jaise sher ko bhi apne isare pe nacha diya joki actually ek circus me hota hai

Iss update me fight ke alawa kafi sari information bhi dekhne ko mili such as Jaw Long and Ava's system stats card and information about different skill and cards
Jaw Long one more interesting and powerfull card Berserk... Ye card ek do dhari talwar ke tarah hai jo opponent and host dono ko nuksan pahuca skti hai...Intelligence zero hone ka bharphur faida opponents bhi utha skte hai pr iske chalte power me jo massive increase hota hai wo kafi hai kisi ko bhi pel ke rakh dene ke liye

Ab to iss kahani me itni sari information ho gyi hai (such as all the information about different different cards , skills , stats , etc. etc.) Ki lgta hai ek copy pe notes bnana pdega iss kahani ke liye ...Idk aap kaise yad rakh pate hoge itni sari information akele...

Update ke first half ko to puri tarah se dono beauties ne hi control kiya jb Veer behosh tha...Aur jis tarah ki condition Veer ki update ke starting me dikhai gai thi usko dekh ke to ye bhi lga tha ki sayad usse jldi hosh na aaye aur uska role iss update me na ho , pr pari ke rhte jyada der tk kaise kuch ho skta hai Veer ko
Finally Veer hosh me aaya aur hosh me aate hi kya dhamake dar information di Jaw Long ke khilaf...Aise hi thore na sb ladkiya mrti hai Veer pr

Erica ko to Jaw Long ne majak me hi liya...Usse ladne khud na jakar apne paltu chil ko bhejta hai , 2 mukko me mar ke behosh kr deta hai...Pr Erica ne bhi har nhi mani aur hrr bar uska samna krne gyi....Usse ab Veer ki khi gyi bat badhiya se samaj aa gyi hogi ki - 'You can't even imagine the chaos when 2 system holders fight each other without any restraint.'...

Iss update ke end ke bare me to kya hi bolu , kya hi ending ki hai
Hrr bar jb kabhi koi update kisi suspense ke sath khatam hota hai to dimag me ek hint aa jaya krta hai ki ye reason ho skta hai iss suspense ke piche , pr aaj ka update padhne ke bad to bss dimag me yhi aaya ki agla update kb aaiega...I hvae literally no clue about what happened at the end of the update

Pichle update ke review me maine likha tha ki Jaw Long kuch jyada hi serious lg rha hai iss fight ko leke...Ab smajh me aaya ki kyu wo itna serious hai , Mine to sayad se kabhi uske liye utna important tha hi nhi...Uska vision to mine se khi jyada bda tha...Use system holders cahiye the jinhe wo apne kale jadu se marke uske sare powers chin na cahta tha...Aur agar wo aaj isme kamyab ho jata to fir to uski power unimaginable ho jati...Ek to phle se hi itna takatwar hai aur upr se 3-3 system holders ke cards skill lene ke bad to literally uske pas sare type ke skill aur card ho jate...

Pr jb tk Pari hai Veer ko koi itni aasani se kaise mar skta hai...Uske pas always plan B ready rhta hai...Pr aaj wala plan B kuch jyada dark nhi ho gya??
Mtlb Veer ke pure body pe hi control le liya?? Veer to behosh hai , usko to pta bhi nhi hoga ki kya kregi Pari ab Jaw Long ke sath
Jis tarah se Pari bat kr rhi thi uss hisab se to wo koi completely different Pari lg rhi hai....Veer to wapas aa jaiega ...hai nn??

Ek aur chiz hai jo aksar mere dimag me aati hai ki kya System ek acchi chiz hai??...Mtlb kya system sach me logo ke bhalai ke liye hai ya wo apne host ke through koi aur hi maksad pana cahte hai??...I don't know why , pr kabhi kabhi mujhe inn sb system se negative feeling aati hai....jo bhi ho itna to confirm hai ki system ke raaz bhut gahre hai aur sayad hme iss arc me kuch kuch dekhne ko bhi mile system ke bare me , jiski neev issi update me rakh bhi di gyi hai

Btw , feeling sad for Pari...Jaw Long ko to hara degi pr sigma Veer se mommy nhi hi bulwa pai ant me bhi

AS ALWAYS A GREAT UPDATE ONCE AGAIN
KEEP WRITING...
WAITING FOR NEXT...

Werewolf ne update mein jaan phoonk ke readers ki jaan nikal diya tha. Gote munh me aa gaye the almost!!!!!!!!!!

Best story of this forum

Fantastic update

Aapki baat bilkul sahi hai naukri karne walo ke pass apna time khatam ho jata hai aur aapki writers logo ki isi baat ki respect hai ki hum logo ki mohabbat Mai aap log apne precious time se humay waqt detay hain.

Looks like she is madly hungry for points.
Kuchh bahut hi bdi gadbad chal rahi hai yaha pe

Mind-blowing update indeed, dear bro . How many skills and cards, capabilities, phew... used by the warring system holders - hair raising and new nail biting, in real sense, - how they tackled each other nonstop with their grit & deft tactics - thought we are witnessing a gory horror movie, that's the thrill & feel that you gave us all in this single update , last but not the least you added black magic too to heighten the tension, a superb masterstroke indeed , dear bro & given fright of our lives. When we were all losing hope, Paris takes over Veer's body and is about to decimate Law Jong which will definitely happen in the next update, we all sincerely hope so. Mega one Indeed

Update superb hain ugala update ka intezar hai

Another Twist maaza aa gaya bhai what a come back

Now PARI is the controller/Master

bhai update jldi dena zaida intizar nae hoo paa raha

Werewolf bro next update ki pratiksha kab tak kar sakte hai

Jabardast update bhai

Waiting for the next update

Next update kab doge bhai bta do

O ho ho bhai bahut hi gazab

Was busy for some time now when I got some time I read story till the current update last few updates were very exciting writing is so commendable that there is no need to praise.

You presented the combination of emotions with words in an excellent way while reading which we get lost in another world. Let us see how Pari with Veer's consent takes over Veer's body and comes to the front line.

Hats Off !! You will always get full support from my side. ​

Werewolf hmmm mom ka nahi ye to pakka ho Gaya then Rahi bat neelmani Jo veer ke gale me hai usaka to jarur kuch bada Raaz hoga jo veer ko alag bana raha hai

Bawaal update bhai...kisi na sahi kaha sab log "Power" ka piche pade hai...abb toh system ko bhi new power mili li dekhta kya ghul khilati hai...Waiting for next update bhai

Kya Ava aur veer ke beech fir se pahle jaisa ho payega aur Erica ka kya reaction hoga wo dekhne
me bahut maaja ayega baaki werewolf bhai ke imagination ke adhar par hi chalega
Baaki dekhte hai ki veer wapas lout kar
ghar jata hai to sabka kaisa reaction veer ke prati hota hai mujhe to lagta dhamal hone wala hai

Baaki kisko goli marna hai kisko jinda rahna hai wo to Werewolf bhai hi Jane
Jald hi update de do bhai intezaar nahi ho rha hai
Next update joy long death

Werewolf bhai thoda raham karo bhai kuchh word samajh nahi aata hai to Google par search karna pad jata hai to bahut dikkat hota hai kyoki English nahi pada hai na to hinglish me bhi thoda bahut kar dena sabd

Bro i am waiting for update please jitna jaldi ho saka update da do aor wait mat karvana

Update please Bhai

Waiting for update

Waiting

Bahot zabardast shaandar lajawab update bhai
Sab kuch clear ho gaya matlab Ava ko kaise Veer ki ek ek pal ki khaber thi or isliye woh yaha pahoch gayi
Ava ne bahot hi niderta se jaw long ka mukabla kia lekin aakhir jaw long hi bhari pada sabpe
Ab dekhte Pari n veer ki body ko apne control m leker kia halat kerne wali h jaw long
Bahot badhiya shaandar update bhai

Bhai aapka update kab tak aayega

Thik hai Bhai
Waiting for next update

bohat he bhayanak zabadast gazab update tha sir ye update to soch sy pary tha ek taraf ava ne khud itne time bohat tayar kia hy ta ke kabi veer pr koi musibat aaye to usse madad kr sake vahi jaw long bhi bohat bhayank kisam ka banda nikla 3 system holder ko akely maat dedi or doosri taraf ab pari ka ek alag roop dekhne ko mil raha pata nhi pari kon kon se or raaz chupaye huye hy eagerly waiting for next update

Shandaar update bro

Wolfi bro we are excited!!

I agree, very well said. I will also include Erica in this category, she also feels for Veer because of Veer's unselfish commitment to help Renshu and her clan followers, even if it is due to returning of a favor.

...Update dedo
.. kab Tak wait karvavo ge...
update milega tabhi hi sabi readers ka sab doubt clear hojayenge...

I am sick of this story bruhhhh...

Kaafi time wait Kiya... Socha kuch update saath mai padhunga maja aayega... Shyad magar fir pagal ho gya padh kar ki abhi suspence khatam hi nahi hua hai...

Last 4 update maine padhe nahi the socha ek saath padhunga maja aayega... Aur shayad jiska intejar 1 1/2 saal se ho raha woh dekhne ko mill jaye a seen with keara but kya kare...

Jaha par seen chutha tha wanha Julia keara ko good women ke baare mai samjha Rahi thi... Shyad kuch jayada ummed laga di maine... Itna jaldi kuch nahi hone wala... Update / events itne bade ho rahe veer ki life mai ki woh free hi nahi ho paa raha...

Rahi baat updates ki... Toh as usual jaisa manual mai hota hai waise dish pesh kar dete ho aap wohi swaad wohi masala jo dish ko behtreen bana de...

Baaki AVA ko itne time baad toh nahi bolunga... Keara , Sonia ke mukable iska screen time kuch update pehle Tak dekha gaya tha... Magar fir bhi dekh kar kaafi aacha laga... AVA ki MOM ke baad veer aur uske dost keara aur Sonia hi bache hai... Uski life mai... AVA ko kahi na kahi softcorner me kuch toh pakk raha h... Waise favourility abhi 20 h toh kuch kehna sahi nhi... Baaki future kaafi unpredictable h...

Woh seen bhi Kamal ka hoga jab Ava , Sonia , keara ek baar fir aamne saamne hongi... Aur woh wjh of course non other then veer hi hoga... AVa shyad guilt mai veer par hak na jataye... Magar in keara aur Sonia veer ke liye... Aamne saamne jarur hongi... Ufff... Syad abhi uss seen mai kaafi time hai... Yeh theory soch kar hi goosebumps aa gaye...

Baaki baat kare other characters ki... Mumbai mai kya ho raha abhi kuch pata nahi chala in update mai... Rahi baat Erica ki hhhh saare system holder veer par kyun lattu ho rahi hai... veer alag alfa / beta male bana ghoom raha hai... Toh jitni aaye welcome baaki baw come...

Last transaction of pari... Was very scary ab yeh personality jisko veer ki powers aur body pasnd aa gayi... Kya karti h... Dekhne layk hai... Aur veer hosh Mai aane ke baad kaise handle karta h pari ko... Yaa nahi kar payega... Kuch keh nahi sakte...

Baaki dimaag mai bhut kuch lekin abhi rok deta hun.... Fir kabhi ke... Liye... Aage waale update jald hi milte hai rebu ke saath.

Werewolf bhai iss week mein koi chance hai update ka

Waiting for next update bhai

Waiting for next update

Warewolf bhai update kitna complete ho gya hai ? Waiting eagerly.....!

Any update my lord !

Bhai update kab tak
Aayega

Waiting for the next update

भाया उम्मीद कब तक

Jab Pari ne Veer ki body KO takeover Karne ke baad, yeh Kaha ki I don't need weapons ! I am the weapon! , tabhise neend haraam ho gayi yeh Soch Soch ke ki w/o weapons, Law Jong Jaise bahubali KO Pari kaise maar Sakegi - it's like a riddle to me, dear bro. Please, try to give your next update sooner than later & relieve us all of this stress so that we all can heave a sigh of relief. Hope you understand & mitigate our suffering, dear bro, please,.
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3k words likhe hai aur 10k niche aaj kal update size hota nahi so I am damn sure it's not gonna happen

"Hamko malum hai jannat ki hakikat lekin,
Dil ko khush rakhne ko galib khayal acha hai"

Ab kal raat update deke mujhe galat sabit karo Werewolf bhai.

Haa nahi to parso to aahi jayega koi dikkat wali baat nai hai

intezaar rahega Werewolf bhai....

wooooohooooooo

Take care brother... story well chal rhi hai.... hm sb wait kr rha haiiii.....

Please update kar do bhai neend nahi aa rahi intezaar me ki kab aayega......

That's the reason brother why I never ask for update.
Everyone has to understand that writers are writing story on this forum just because of their passion.
Aur tumlog khud bhi socho bhai kuch earn to hone wala hai nhi yha se to jahir si bat koi bhi aadmi apne job or daily life ko hi n priority dega.
Ha ye jarur writer ki priority honi cahiye ki bhale hi thora late ho pr story complete jarur ho joki werewolf bhai kitne bar bta chuke hai ki hoga tb bhala kis bat ka tension.

Werewolf bro kya ap saath saath wo bhi kr skte ho... (Creating a section for the information of all the skills and cards)... It would be actually very helpful

Kya lole ke baal ko samjhare ho
Isse achcha ek mast song sun leyo
Aise gendu aate rehte hain
Gand na chuchi
Baatein unchi unchi..

बिल्कुल भाई इंतजार रहेगा।।

Bro nxt update kab de rahe ho

Aaj update aayega prabhu? Werewolf

इसीलिए आपको "दि ग्रेट ग्रैंड मैन ऑफ फोरम" का तमगा देने का प्रस्ताव रखने का सोच रहा हुँ संजु दा ।

Bhai its already late night? Please update us if there is no update today.

Update 178 has been posted.

 

[Werewolf]

Index has been updated.

Remaining comments ke replies samay rehte hi diye jayenge.

 

[ironman123]

Update - 178 ~ The Collapse
[Note : Update kaafi bada hai. Itminaan se padhna.]​

Ab tak...

Ava jo Veer ko uthata dekh ek raahat ki saans li, usne apni katana ko hawa me feka jo Veer ke bagal se jaa ke zameen par khus gayi.

Ava : Take it... Veer!!!

Magar, Veer ke muh se uske baad jo bol nikle woh uske nahi the. Awaaz uski hi thi, parantu bol Pari ke the.

"I don't need any weapons...! I AM THE WEAPON!!!"

Ab aage...

“Aage badhte raho! Aage badhte raho!”

“Hume rukna nahi hai! Lord aur Miss Erica hamare liye itni kathnaiyo ka saamna kar rahe hai.”

“Chaukanna raho! Aur, Captain Feng ko follow karte raho!”

Order ke do senior sadasya Bo aur Ming baaki sabhi ko samjhane me lage hue the. Sab ke sab Jawan Feng ke peeche peeche uske nirdesh anusar chalte jaa rahe the. Kayi log ghayal awastha me the toh kayi saare ladne ke baad thakaan se joojh rahe the. Magar, kuch chuninda aise the jo apni jaan bhi gawa chuke the.

Unit 2 ka saamna sabhi ne poori nidarta se kiya tha. Par, Legion ke log marr mitne ke liye taiyaar baithe the. Ghamasan ladayi me kayi logo ne apni jaane gawayi aur kuch buri tarah chotil ho gaye. Apne logo ko marta dekh bhala Order kaha chup baithne waala tha? Renshu ke aadesh ke vipreet jaa ke akhir unhone bhi apne bhaiyo ki maut ka badla liya. Bina khoon kharaabe waali ladaayi ab maut ki jung bann chuki thi.

Prann toh liya tha ki kisi ki bhi jaan nahi lenge. Par, jab Legion ke logo ko jaan ki parvah hi nahi toh bhala Order bina pratishodh liye kaise shaant reh sakta tha? Na hi Renshu yaha maujood tha aur na hi Erica. Iss waqt agar Order ke members ko kisi ki shiddat se talash thi toh woh thi apne Lord ki jo unhe kahi bhi nazar nahi aa rahe the.

Bo : Na jaane Lord kaha chale gaye hai. Woh theek toh honge na?

Ming : Lord ko dhundhna hamari sabse pehli priority honi chahiye.

Captain Feng : Dekho! Humare aadmi ghayal hai. Agar, hum firse kisi ladayi me pade toh aur log ghayal honge. Ho sakta hai aur bhi log apni jaan gawa baithe. Aise me sabse pehle humara Renshu Sir ko dhundhna bahut zaroori hai. Kyuki, iss jangal ka kona-kona wahi acche se jaante hai. Tum me se koi hai jo iss jangal se parichit ho?

Bo (aage aate hue) : Mein Lord ke saath kayi baar andar tak gaya hu. Lekin, din ke samay me. Iss andhere me mujhe samajh nahi aa raha ki kaha jaana chahiye. Haan, magar disha ka anuman hai mujhe. Abhi jaha par hum hai, yaha se hume dakshin-poorv disha ki orr badhna chahiye.

Captain Feng : Dakshin-poorv…? Matlab South-east! Pakka? Kya tumhe poora bharosa hai? Yahi sahi disha hai?

Bo (nods) : Haan! Mere khayal se yahi honi chahiye! Mine ka raasta wahi hona chahiye.

Captain Feng : Mere khayal se nahi…! Agar, zara bhi choonk hui toh ho sakta hai ki hum unke kisi jaal me jaake phans jaaye aur sab ke sab maare jaaye.

Bo : Toh aur hum kar bhi kya sakte hai? Yaha khade bhi toh nahi reh sakte na?

Ming : Captain Feng! Mujhe lagta hai Bo theek keh raha hai. Lord ke saath ye kayi baar yaha aa chuka hai aur ise hum sab se zyada anubhav hai. Hum satark reh ke uss disha me aage badh sakte hai. Zyada se zyada kya hoga? Hume ek aur unit se bhidna padega? Yahi karne toh hum yaha aaye hai. Pehle hi humne apne kuch saathiyo ko kho diya hai. Toh fir ab darr kaisa?

Captain Feng (sighs) : Theek hai! Ladayi ab aar ya paar ki ho hi gayi hai toh yahi sahi. Tum…! Aage aao aur mere saath chalna. Baaki sabhi…! Humaare peeche rahenge.

Captain Feng ne Bo ko apne sang chalne ke liye kaha jo iss jangal se thoda bahut parichit tha. Baaki sabhi unke peeche peeche chalne lage. Magar, sabse peeche ke sadasyo me se chal rahi Divya ki vyakulta ab apni seema ko laangh chuki thi.

Divya (pants) : Y-Ye sab chal kya raha hai? Hum kaha jaa rahe hai? Na hi direction ka pata hai, na hamare group ko lead karne waale mil rahe hai, na hi mere friend ka ata pata hai aur upar se-

Usne apne haath me liye hue phone ki screen ko ek baar punah dekha jisme koi bhi network dikhayi nahi de raha tha.

Divya : ...upar se ye goddamn network bhi nahi mil raha hai.

Jawaan 3 (glances) : Ye toh lazmi hai, Miss. Iss ghane jangal me... bhala kaise aapko koi network mil sakta hai?

Divya : Shit!!! Agar, mujhe pehle pata hota toh mein kam se kam kuch zaroori gadgets hi le aati.

Jawaan 3 : Filhal aage badhne ke alawa humare paas koi chaara nahi.

Divya (frowns) : Hamare group ke logo me se kayi log maare gaye hai. Jaane chali gayi. Y-Ye chhoti moti baat nahi.

Jawaan 3 : Isliye to Renshu Sir ne aapse wapas jaane ke liye kaha tha. Yaha aapka koi kaam nahi hai. Fir kyu-!?

Divya : Mein FBCC se hu, Special Agent Divya. Aur, ye mera first assignment hai. Mujhe iss case ke baare me saare raaz jaanane hai. Aur-

Kehte hue uske bol wahi tham gaye. Woh sirf FBCC ke diye gaye assignment ki wajah se yaha nahi thi.

'-Aur mein jaanti hu ki Veer mujhse kuch chhipa raha hai. Woh sirf business karne yaha nahi aaya hai. Director ne bhi mujhe hint kiya tha. Veer ka aise bade bade cases me involved hona. Koi gehra raaz chhipa hai iske peeche-! B-But where is he?'

Apne mann me soch bina kuch aage kahe, woh jawaan ke saath aage badhne lagi. Uski bauhe chinta aur sanshay ke maare kasi hui thi. Iss case ki teh tak jaane se zyada woh Veer ko dhundhne ke liye zyada aatur thi.

Unhe chalte chalte kuch samay beet gaya. Ghane jangal me neeche beechi jhaadiyo ko alag kar woh jaise hi ek khule hisse me daakhil hue toh saamne ka manzar dekh unn sabhi ki aankhein bhay ke maare fel gayi.

"Looordddd!!!!"

"Loooordddd-!!!"

Pukaarte hue woh sabhi saamne ki orr bhaage. Saamne Renshu ped ke tane se lag kar zameen par baitha tha. Magar, unke bhay ka kaaran ye nahi tha.

Kaaran tha unke Lord ki yeh dasha. Renshu ke pait se labalab khoon baha hua tha. Uske pait ko dekh lag raha tha ki kisi ne use nukeele auzaar se cheer diya ho.

Bo : L-Loooorddd-!!!

Samast sadasya Renshu ke ird gird aate hue use gher liye. Bo aur Ming aage aate hue uske paas baithe aur use sahara dete hue uthaane ki koshish karne lage. Unn sabhi ki aankhon me darr toh tha hi par saath hi woh namm bhi padne lagi thi.

Ming : L-Lord-!! Y-Ye kya-!? Kaise? Aapko?

Renshu ne apni palke uthaate hue unn sab ko dekha. Uski saansein ukhdi ukhdi chal rahi thi. Woh samajh gaya ki uske Order ke sadasya uski ye haalat dekh bhaari chinta me aa chuke the. Usne apna daaya haath hawa me uthaaya aur unhe aashvasan dete hue kaha.

Renshu : M-Mein theek hu-!!! Tum sab ko chinta karne ki zaroorat nahi.

Captain Feng (frowns) : Aap theek hai? Apni haalat dekhiye. Ye jaanleva hamla tha. Kisne kiya ye?

Renshu : Chinta mat karo! Ye toh bas mamooli sa- urgh-!!!

Jaise hi usne uthna chaaha, uske pait ke ghaav na use saaf inkaar kar diya.

Bo : Loooorrdd!!

Renshu : Mujhe bas thoda samay lagega. Pareshan mat ho. Aur, pehle... Jald se jald iss par patti baandh do.

Captain Feng : Patti baandhne se kuch hoga, Sir? Jaisi aapki dasha hai aapko isi waqt hospital me le jaane ki zaroorat hai. Damn it!!! Kaash government ki taraf se kam se kam helicopter hi assign kiya gaya hota... Toh aaj... Toh aaj ye sab-

Uske swar me nirasha thi aur krodh bhi. Jaise wo aage ke anjaam ko jaanta tha. Use lag raha tha ki ab Renshu ki zindagi kuch ghanto ki hi mehman thi. Peeche khadi Divya bhi jab saamne aayi toh uske chehre par bhi wahi bhaav umad pade jo samast sadasyo ke chehro par the. Aur, uska anuman bhi Feng se mel khaane wala hi tha.

Divya (frowns) : Y-Ye ghaav...! Bahut bada hai. M-Mujhe nahi lagta ki ab...

Uske kehne ka matlab saaf tha. Aisa ghaav agar kisi bhi aam insaan par hota toh harr koi andaza laga sakta tha ki uska bhavishya kya hone waala tha.

Maut!

Aise ghane jangal me iss tarah ke ghaav se grasit hone ke baad zara bhi sambhavna nahi bachti ki woh insaan zinda wapas ghar laut paaye. Kyuki, lautne ke dauran samay hi itna guzar chuka hoga ki blood loss ke chalte aadmi apni jaan beech raste me hi gawa dega.

Parantu, Captain Feng, Divya aur baaki sabhi sadasya... Koi bhi ye nahi jaanta tha ki Renshu ke paas system tha. Woh koi maamooli vyakti nahi tha.

Renshu Divya aur Feng ko dekh halke se muskuraya aur bola.

Renshu : Mujhe aam insaano ki tarah mat samjho captain! Shaolin ka master hu mein aur Order ka Lord! Ye mamooli chot kuch bhi nahi.

Captain : …?

Divya : ...?

Idhar Bo apne Lord ki aagya ka paalan karte hue aage aaya aur Renshu ke ghaav ko saaf karte hue uske pait par chinese jadi-bootiyon se bani aushdhi ka lep laga kar patti baandhne laga. Ghaav dekh ke bechaare unn sabhi members ki haalat kharab ho rakhi thi. Kintu, Renshu ke chehre par zara bhi dard ke bhaav nahi jhalke.

Ek baar punah sabhi ke mann me unke Lord ke liye izzat aur badh gayi. Akhir kitne sehen-sheel vyakti the unke Lord. Renshu ki marham patti ho jaane ke baad, kuch derr sabhi ne wahi theherne ka faisla liya. Kuch neeche zameen par apne Lord ke ird gird baith gaye toh kuch ped ke tane se tik kar khade ho gaye. Kuch abhi bhi hathyaar liye chaukanne the toh kuch do-chaar ke samooh me apni-apni vartalaap me jut gaye.

Unhi me se Captain Feng ne apne chaaro orr nazre maarte hue ilaake ka jayza liya. Andhere ke chalte use zyada dur ka toh kuch nahi dikhayi diya par apne aas paas ka nazara wo bhali bhaanti dekh paa raha tha. Kayi saare hathyaar zameen par bikhre pade the. Kahi kahi zameen aisi thi jaise maano waha par koi bada visfot hua ho. Sookhe patte bhi ajeeb tareeqe se ast-vyast bikhre hue the. Yeh kisi ghamasan ladaayi ka sanket de raha tha.

Captain Feng : Yaha kuch hua tha. Hai na?

Uske sawaal par Renshu ek baar fir muskuraya. Captain Feng waqai captain kehlaane yogya tha.

Renshu (nods) : Hmm!

Captain Feng : Trap?

Renshu (nods) : Hmm!

Captain Feng (frowns) : Fir?

Renshu : Mujhe gher liya gaya tha. Ek prakar ka jaal tha jo mere liye bichhaya gaya tha. Mujhe maarne ke liye.

Bo (scowls) : Unki itni himmat??

Divya : A-Aur, aap? Aap uss trap se akele baahar nikal aaye?

Renshu : Mujhe nikalna hi tha. Ye mamooli cheezein mere patan ka kaaran nahi bann sakti.

Ming : Woh hamaare Lord hai, madam! Koi aam insaan nahi!

Divya (glances) : …

Captain Feng : Aap waqai theek toh ho na? Kyuki, woh chot-

Renshu : Ghabrao nahi! Meri jaan khatre me nahi hai. Ghaav gehra zaroor hai par mein ghar lautne me saksham hu. Haan, iss haalat me mein daud nahi sakta par chal zaroor sakta hu.

Bo : Ye aap kaisi baat kar rahe hai, Lord? Hamare rehte hue aap iss haalat me kaise chal sakte hai bhala? Hum sab kis liye hai? Hum aapka sahaara banenge.

Renshu : Nahi! Tum sab khud thake hue ho. Apni haalat dekho zara. Aur, wese bhi mujhe chalne me dikkat nahi hogi.

Bo : P-Par-

Renshu : ORDER!!!!

Uske thoda sakhti se kehte hi Bo ne apna sarr turant hi aagya maante hue jhuka liya.

Bo : Jaisa aap kahe, Lord!

Captain Feng (sighs) : Aap ko confident dekh mujhe thodi raahat mili. Par, shayad meri iss khabar se kahi aapka confidence gir na jaaye.

Renshu : Hmm???

Captain Feng (frowns) : Order ke 6 sadasya maare gaye.

Khabar sunte hi Renshu ka sarr neeche jhuk gaya aur apne bhaale par uski pakad mazboot ho gayi.

Captain Feng : Maine bahut koshish ki ise rokne ki magar... Magar, Legion ke log jaise thaan ke aaye the ki unhe jaan leni hi hai. Mein chaah ke bhi kuch kar na saka. M-Mujhe maaf karna-!

Renshu jaanta tha ki aisi ladayi me harr koi sahi salamat bach ke nikal aaye ye sambhav nahi tha. Mann hi mann woh pehle se hi iske liye taiyar tha. Parantu, fir bhi... apne aadmiyon ko khona nirasha janak hi tha. Use jaise fir kuch dhyaan aaya.

Renshu : Tumhari galti nahi-!!! Erica!!! Ye Erica ki zimmedari thi. Kaha hai woh? Erica???

Nazre daudate hue Renshu ne chaaro orr dekha par Erica ka koi naam-o-nishaan nahi tha. Captain Feng, Bo aur Ming teeno ek dusre ko asmanjas me dekhne lage. Koi kaise kahe ki unki laadli Erica unhe pehle hi rann-bhoomi me chorr kahi aur hi laapata ho chuki hai.

Bo : L-Lord-!!

Renshu : Huh?

Bo : Miss Erica humaare saath nahi hai.

Renshu (frowns) : Tumhare saath nahi hai matlab?

Bo : W-Wo-!! L-Lord woh-

Captain Feng : Miss Erica bina bataaye pehle hi kahi aur chali gayi.

Jab Renshu ne ye suna toh uski aankhein aashcharya ke maare fel gayi.

Renshu : Kya?

Captain Feng : Ji! Woh jaise hi hamare paas aayi thi toh unhone humse yahi kaha tha ki unhe bahut zaroori kaam hai aur unka waha pahuchna bahut zaroori hai. Uske baad wo kaha gayi hum me se kisi ko kuch nahi pata.

Renshu ne agle hi shan itni zorr se apna haath ped par maara ki ped ke tane ka kuch hissa ukhad ke neeche gir gaya. Waha maujood sabhi log darr ke maare ekdum shaant pad gaye.

Renshu (gusse me) : Eriiicaaaa!!!!! Erica!!!! Maine use samjhaya bhi tha ki Order ko lead karne ki zimmedari uske sarr hai. Aur, uske bawajood wo...! Tum me se kisi ne roka kyu nahi use?

Ming : Humne bahut koshish ki thi, Lord. Magar, woh hamari baatein sunane ko taiyaar hi nahi thi. Bahut hi chinta me aur jaldbaazi me lag rahi thi.

Renshu (frowns) : Maine samjhaya tha use ki abhi wo frontline missions ke liye taiyaar nahi hai. Tch!!!

[Renshu! Zara pucho ki woh kis disha me bhaagi thi.]

'Hmm!'

Renshu : Tumhe yaad hai wo kis disha me gayi thi?

Bo (nods) : Jaha se hum aaye the, Lord. Usi disha me wo wapas gayi thi.

Jawaab sunte hi Lloyd ki awaaz punah Renshu ke mann me goonji.

[Samajh gaya. Erica agar jaldbazi me hamare aadmiyon ko chorr ke bhaagi hai toh iska ek hi kaaran ho sakta hai, Renshu.]

'Veer-!?'

[Exactly! Blemish apply kiya hoga usne. Iska matlab wo wapas se lauti aur eastside ki orr gayi hogi jaha... Shit! Blemish se notification aana iska matlab Veer khatre me hoga. Aur, Erica wahi gayi hai.]

Ye gyaat hote hi Renshu ke badan me ek sihran daud gayi. Erica uska sab kuch thi. Agar, use kuch ho gaya toh-

'Nahi!'

[Agar, tum ghayal na hue hote toh hum isi waqt mine ke raaste ki orr badh sakte the.]

'Tsk-!!! Ye ghaav!'

Usne apni chot par haath ferr kuch derr pehle ki ghatna ko yaad kiya. Sab kuch uski mutthi me tha. Par, achanak se hi jaise uss anjaan system holder ne baazi palat di thi.

Kuch derr pehle...

Renshu jab unknown system holder ko giraane ke baad uski orr badha toh kahi se bhi wo anjaan naujavan koi bahut shaktishali vyakti prateet nahi ho raha tha.

Uski vyatha saaf batla rahi thi ki use kaafi ghaat pahuchi hai. Renshu uske samaksh aake bas chand qadam ki duri par khada hua aur bola.

Renshu : Maine pehle hi kaha tha ladke. Mujhse bhidna vyarth hai. Tum aaye toh apni marzi se the magar jaoge meri marzi se.

Lekin, woh anjaan system holder khamosh hi raha. Apni saanso ko durust karne me laga hua tha. Muh par kapda lipte hone ke kaaran Renshu ko uska chehra nazar nahi aaya. Apne bhaale ki nok ko uske gale ke saamne kar usne chetavni di.

Renshu : Ab jo mein sawal puchu, unke jawaab seedhe-seedhe ugal dena. Warna, ye bhaala tumhare sarr ko dhad se alag kar dega.

Kintu, wo naujavan ab bhi khamosh bana raha. Uski taraf se koi bhi pratikriya nahi hui.

Renshu (frowns) : Kisne bheja hai tumhe yaha?

Koi jawab nahi. Renshu ke maathe par silvatein aur gehri ho gayi.

Renshu : Tumhe sunayi nahi diya? Maine pucha ki kisne bheja hai tumhe yaha?

Magar, ladka toh jaise uski baato ko ek kaan se sunn dusre kaan se nikaalta jaa raha tha.

Renshu : Tum aise nahi maanoge...!

Gusse me aa ke Renshu ne apne bhaale ko haath me do baar ghumaya aur nishaana saadhate hue woh uss ladke ke kandhe me bhaala khosne hi waala tha jab-

"Hahahaha-!!!"

Woh ladka achanak hi dheere se hassne laga. Uske kandhe thahaako ke chalte upar neeche uchhalne lage.

'!!?'

Ye dekh Renshu wahi ruk gaya. Kya ye ladka pagal ho gaya tha? Iss haalat me bhi bhala woh kaise hass sakta tha?

Ladka dheere dheere apne haath upar kar khud ko nihattha dikhaate hue utha. Renshu ka nishaana ab bhi uske kandhe par jama hua tha.

Ladka : Mein haar gaya! I really surrender.

Akhir kaar, uske muh se kuch shabd nikle.

Renshu : Mujhe bakwas nahi sunani. Mere sawal ka jawab do. Tumhe yaha kisne bheja?

Ladka : Hmm! Agar, mein jawab de du toh kya tum mujhe yaha se jaane de doge?

Renshu : Woh depend karta hai ki tum sahi jawaab dete ho ya nahi!

Ladka : Hahahahahahaha!

Ek baar fir woh zorr zorr se hassne laga. Jaise maano uss par koi bhoot sawaar ho gaya ho.

Ladka : Agar, mein sahi jawab deta hu toh use tum galat thehra ke mujhe maar daaloge. Aur, agar galat deta hu toh bhi. Toh, fir mere jawab dene ka matlab hi kya? Hahahahaha!

Renshu (frowns) : Mein aisa nahi karunga. Tum jaise system holders ko jitna ho sake mein maarne se khud ko rokta hu.

Ladka : Tch! Tch! Tch! Nahi nahi nahi! Tumne yaha par galat baat keh di.

Renshu : !!!??

Ladka (grins) : TUM...! MUJHE MAAR HI NAHI SAKTE!

Khatra!!! Renshu ko jaise uske haav bhaav dekh ek bura andesha hua. Lloyd ki oonchi awaaz bhi uske mann me turant goonj gayi.

[Renshuuuu-!!! Dur hato-!!!]

Aankhein phaade Renshu ne na aav dekha na taav aur seedha apna bhaala uss ladke ke kandhe ki orr feka.

*Swoosh*

Magar, ladka jaise jaanta tha ki uske kandhe ki taraf bhaala aayega. Halka sa bagal me hote hue wo hamle se bacha aur bhaala seedhe ped me jaa ke dhans gaya.

*Thuck*

Usne agle hi shan apne kapdo me kahi se gol sa padarth nikaala aur ungliyon se use Renshu ke perro ki orr feka...! Aur, tabhi-

*Pufffff*

Halka dhua Renshu ke ird gird fel gaya.

'Smoke bomb!!?'

[Smoke bomb nahi. Uska chhota roop hai ye. Baahar niklo! Jaldi!!]

Renshu dhue me se baahar aane ke liye peeche ki orr ucchla. Magar, jaise hi usne chhalaang lagayi. Hawa me rehte hue use ek dhwani sunaayi di, jise sunn uska badan thanda pad gaya.

*Whish*




Aankhein bhay ke maare fel gayi. Ye awaaz aisi thi jaise maano kisi patle se wire ko haatho me leke kheencha gaya ho.

Aur, Renshu ka anumaan ekdum sahi tha. Uss ladke ne-

Apne haath se adrishya samaan wires ko kheencha. Agle hi pal zameen me khusi hui ek blade jo unn wires se bandhi thi woh Renshu ki taraf peeche se tez raftar se lagne ko aayi.

Magar, tabhi-

*Ding*

[Rapid Reaction]

Uski skill activate hui aur usne turant apne ped me khuse bhaale ko chain se zorr se jhatka deke kheencha.

*Kha-ching*

Bhaala itni raftar se uski orr aaya ki hawa me hi Renshu ne khud ke shareer ko tilt kar uss se bacha liya. Aur, woh bhaala seedhe jaake-

*Clang*

Peeche se aa rahi uss blade se takraya aur dono hathyaar hawa me zorr se bhidant ki wajah se gol ghum neeche gir gaye.

'Akhir, usne ye kab-!???'

Renshu hakka bakka tha. Bhala ye wires se lipti blade uss ladke ne kab zameen me khos di?

[That time...!]

Lloyd ne jaise turant hi use yaad dilaya. Renshu ke mann me kuch derr pehle hui vardaat chal-chitra bann daud gayi. Jab usne Mayhem ke lethal attack se uss ladke par hamla kiya tha tab woh ladka hawa me udte hue ped se jaa bhida tha.

Aur, yahi wo waqt tha jab uss ladke ne hawa me hi girne se pehle woh blade neeche khos di thi.

[He was waiting for us. What a scum!]

Ye gyaat hote hi Renshu ne apne daant gusse me mees liye.

Kintu, asli khatra toh ab tha-

*Whoosh*




Dhua halka sa chhata aur achanak hi woh ladka Renshu ke upar lapka. Uske haath me ek chaaku thi. Wire se bandhi blade ka woh hamla toh bas uska dhyaan bhatkaane ke liye tha. Asli vaar toh ye tha.

'Shit-!! A feint attack-!?'

[Renshhhuuuu-!!!]

Na hi uske paas bhaala tha aur na hi itna samay ki bhaale ko kheench liya jaaye. Rapid reaction ne activate hona chaha par jaise woh kisi kaaran-vash ho hi na paayi.

Aur, tabhi-

*Squelchhhhhh*

Hawa me khoon ke chheethe bikhar gaye. Ek dabi hui karaah Renshu ke muh se nikli. Aur, saath hi uss ladke ke hontho par kutil muskaan felti chali gayi. Chaaku Renshu ke pait ko cheerte hue andar ghus chuki thi.

[Renshu-!!!]

'Urgh-!!!'

Dard ko sehen karte hue usne ladke ko jakda par ladka jaise chaaku ko aur marodte hue uske pait se atadiyo ko baahar nikaalne ki firaq me tha.

Renshu ne fauran hi ek haath se uske haath ko roka aur dusre se usne ek zordaar hamla uske sarr par maarna chaaha. Magar, ladka chaaku ko uske pait me chhorte hue khud ko chhura kar peeche kood gaya.

Ladka : Khush-kismat ho tum jo mujhe pehle chot pahucha paaye. Warna, aaj tumhara ant yahi kar deta mein. Par...! Par, abhi ye possible nahi. Tum zaroor bach gaye. Lekin, tumhare dwara bheja gaya woh ladka ab tak junglee janvaro ka maans bann chuka hoga. Hahaha!

Renshu : H-Huh-!?

Ladka (grins) : Jaw Long ke paas Animal Kingdom hai, Li Renshu. Aur, black magic se ladi hui skills aur cards. Ab toh uss ladke ka maans noch-noch ke kha rahe honge janvar. Hahahaha-!!! Tarqeeb acchi lagayi thi tumne ek aur system holder ko bula ke use eastside me bhejne ki. Par-! Tum isme akele nahi the.

Renshu ne jaise hi Jaw Long ki skills aur cards ke baare me suna, uske badan me raungte khade ho gaye. Veer ke liye chinta uske andar samaayi.

Renshu (growls) : T-Tum-!! Kaun kaun hai iske peeche?

Ladka : Tum toh aise puch rahe ho jaise mein ye saare jawaab tumhe de dunga. Hahahaha! Fir milenge...! Li Renshu-! Of course... Agar, tum zinda rahe toh-! Goodbye!

Renshu : R-Ruko-!!! Urgh!!!

Magar, ladka waha se tezi me faraar ho gaya. Woh chaahta toh Renshu ko maar sakta tha lekin, use dur kahi se patto ke hilne ki awaaz pehle hi sunayi de chuki thi. Reinforcements apna raasta tay kar yaha aa rahe the. Majbooran use yaha se bhaagna hi pada.

Renshu apne pait me khusi chaaku ko jakde ped se lag ke neeche baith gaya. Sabse zaroori tha blood loss ko rokna. Usne chaaku ko nikaalte hue use feka. Aur, agle hi shan-

*Ding*

[Chi Perception]

Uski skills me se ek badi hi khubsurat aur upyog me aane waali skill. Aankhein band kar Renshu ne apni chot ko andhruni taur par mehsoos karna shuru kiya.

Chi ka arth hota tha urja. Chi perception use urja ko mehsoos karne ka nazariya uplabdh karwati thi. Woh apne pait ke andar hui haani ko apni urja ke zariye bareeki se jaanchne laga.

Usne ek gehri saans li...! Lloyd ne use chi perception bahut hi acche se sikhaya hua tha.

'Jaha dhyaan hota hai, waha urja hoti hai. Jaha urja hoti hai, waha uddeshya hota hai.'

Lloyd ke kahe gaye ye bol pehle use kadapi samajh nahi aate the. Magar, ab jaise woh isme maahir ho chuka tha.

Apne dhyaan ko usne apni chot par kendrit kiya. Uske mastishq se saari fizool baatein gayab ho chuki thi. Dimag me bas ek hi vichar ghoom raha tha. Aur, woh tha apni chot ko andhruni taur par mehsoos karna.

Jaha dhyaan hota hai, waha urja hoti hai. Chot par dhyaan lagaate hi use uss jagah apni urja mehsoos hone lagi. Woh urja ko apne mann ke hisaab se ek aakaar dene laga.

Jaha urja hoti hai, waha uddeshya hota hai. Apni urja ko mehsoos karte hi... Usne uss urja ko uske uddeshya me laga diya. Aur, uddeshya tha-

Khoon ko baahar behne se rokna. Aur, yahi thi ~ Chi perception. Jo na sirf aisi sthitiyo me balki aakraamak aur bachaav dono hi tareeqo ke liye bhi upyog ki jaa sakti thi.

Yahi sab hua tha inn guzre lamho me. Isi beeti vardaat ko yaad kar woh apni vichaaro se baahar aaya. Order ke sabhi log use chinta-janak bhaav liye ghoor rahe the.

Erica ke liye ab uski chinta atyadhik badh chuki thi. Khaas kar ye jaanane ke baad ki Jaw Long kin-kin prakaro ki shaktiyo ko apne paas rakhe hue tha.

Renshu : Captain! Hume jald se jald mine ke raaste ki orr badhna hoga.

Captain : M-Magar, aisi haalat me aap-?

Renshu : Samay bahut kam hai, captain! Meri beti kisi badi musibat me ho sakti hai. Mera waha pahuchna bahut zaroori hai.

Bo : Lord ke baare me chinta karne ki zaroorat nahi. Hum sab kis liye hai? Ming!! Lakdiyo ko ikhatta kar ek takhta taiyaar karwao. Hum Lord ko uss par bitha ke le jayenge.

Ming (nods) : Hmm!

Aur, Bo ke sujhaav par sabhi aadmi lakdiyo ko ikhatta kar ke ek takhte ko banaane me jut gaye.

Divya : Mera bhi ek sawaal hai.

Renshu : Hmm?

Divya (frowns) : Mera dost...! Veer kaha hai? Ye straight wala rasta Eastside ke raaste se kab milega? Agar, use kuch hua toh-

Renshu : Bas, thoda dur aur-! Hum mine ke kaafi nazdeek hai. Iske thoda baahar nikalte hi hum uss raaste par aa jayenge jaha se eastide judta hai. Aur, Veer sahi salamat hi hoga.

Divya badle me boli kuch nahi. Magar, uski bechaini uske chehre par saaf jhalak rahi thi. Toh wahi Renshu ne keh toh diya ki Veer sahi salamat hoga lekin, use khud andar hi andar nakaratmak vichaar khaaye jaa rahe the.

Renshu : Hamare log... Jinhone apni jaane gawayi. Woh sab kaha hai?

Bo (sarr jhukate hue) : Unhe wahi dafna diya humne, Lord. Hum unke shav ko saath leke nahi chal sakte the. Aur, unhe uss tarah waha chorr bhi nahi sakte the. Isliye, jo sabse sahi hume laga, humne wahi kiya.

Renshu (nods) : Tumne theek kiya. Aur, Legion ke logo ka kya jo maare gaye?

Bo : Unko bhi humne wahi dafna diya, Lord. Aap ne hi sikhaya tha. Jab tak hum zinda rehte hai tabhi tak ye dost dushman ki paribhasha hum par laagu hoti hai. Maut ke baad kya dushman aur kya dost. Sab ek samaan reh jaate hai. Isliye...!

Renshu (smiles) : Tumne kahi kuch galat nahi kiya. Mujhe tum sab par naaz hai.

Sabhi badle me muskuraye. Bhale hi kuch saathiyo ko unhone kho diya tha. Par, woh jazba aur woh ekta ab bhi unme kaayam thi. Aur, unn jaan gawaane waale logo ke balidaan ko woh yu hi vyarth nahi jaane dena chaahte the.

Bo : Mine hum hathya ke rahenge!

"Haaaaaaannn!!!!"

"Yeaaaahhhhhh!!!!"

"Order-!!!!"

"Zindabaaaaaaddd!!!!"

Renshu ne turant hi seeti bajaayi. Toh kahi se na jaane ek kabootar udti hui aasmaan se uske paas aake uske haath par baith gayi.

Renshu ne apne kapde me se ek chithhi nikaali aur use modte hue uske chhote chhote perr par baandh diya.

"Tumhe pata hai na kya karna hai?"

*Coo-hooo*

Woh jaise jawab me chehki. Aur, use apne haatho me lete hue Renshu ne use hawa me chorr diya. Woh pankh fadfadaate hue waha se ravana ho gayi.

Aur, isi tarah Renshu ko takhte par baitha ke woh sabhi fir mine ke raaste par chal diye.

***

Deep inside Eastside...

Jaha Renshu aur baaki sab Eastside ke raaste se judne ke liye nikal pade the wahi yaha idhar jangalo ki gehrayiyo me avishvaneeya drishya dekhne ko mil rahe the.

Pari ne Veer ke shareer par apna niyantran kar liya tha. Veer ke ird gird ki hawa bhaari ho chuki thi. Uske khatarnak aura ke chalte uske baal hawa me lehra rahe the aur jin teero ko fekte hue Jaw Long ne unn par insaano ki khopdi latkayi hui thi woh khopdiya bhi kit-kitate hue hawa me kampan maar rahi thi.

Sookhe patte kisi bheegi billi ki tarah thar-thar kaanp rahe the. Jaw Long khud do qadam peeche ko ho chuka tha. Toh wahi, Erica samet Ava dono ke muh hairat ke maare khule hue the.

[What- What is this?]

Lily ki awaaz Ava ke mann me goonj gayi. Magar, jab Lily ko khud nahi pata tha toh bhala Ava ke paas koi jawab kaise ho sakta tha. Yahi haal Genie aur Erica ka bhi tha. Woh bhauchakki si Veer ke iss naye vikral raudra roop ko dekh rahi thi.

Apne kaale jaadu ka upyog kar Jaw Long ne tamaam nakaratmak urjao se bhaint ki thi jinka aura kaala paaya jaata tha. Magar, usne aaj tak apne jeevan kaal me itna prachand black aura kisi ka bhi nahi dekha tha. Aura itna bheeshan tha ki Veer ke badan ke baahar tak wo lapte maar raha tha.

Aur, Jaw Long ke liye sabse asahejta waali baat thi Veer ki woh muskaan jo iss samay ajeeb tareeqe se uske hontho par feli hui thi.

Veer ne ek qadam apna aage badhaaya-

*Ba-dump*

Jaw Long ki dhadkane tez ho gayi.

Teer me latki hui khopdi ko Veer ne apne ek haath se baahar nikala aur aankhon ki putli waale chhed me apni ungli daal woh khopdi ko gol-gol ghumaane laga. Uske iss roop ko dekh Ava samet Erica ka badan kaanp utha.

Zorr se khopdi ko ghumaate hue usne woh kisi gulel ki tarah chorri jo seedhe Jaw Long ke sarr ki taraf sansanati hui aayi aur-

*Craaaassshhhhh*

Sahi samay par Jaw Long ne apne sarr ko baayi orr jhuka liya. Khopdi uske baalo ki lato se takrate hue jaa ke peeche ped se bhidi aur tukdo me toot ke bikhar gayi.

Insaan ki khopdi sabse mazboot haddiyo me se maani jaati hai. Kitna force lagta hoga ki khopdi ko tukdo me tod ke bikher diya jaaye?

Veer ki aankhein laal ho rakhi thi. Beowulf ON tha. Aur, uski agility, aur senses pehle se kayi guna badh chuke the.

Force = Mass x Acceleration

Veer ne uss khopdi ko itni zorr se feka tha ki uska acceleration hi itna tha jiske chalte uska force apne aap badh gaya. Nateeja? Uska tukdo me bikhar jaana.

Pichli baar woh Jaw Long se bhidte waqt Beowulf ka istemal kar hi nahi paaya tha kyuki Beowulf ki timing ka saara samay usne janvaro se bhaagne me laga diya tha. Magar, iss baar woh taiyaar tha.

Ava aur Erica ekdum stabdh thi. Unke hosh ude hue the. Aur, tabhi-

*Whooooooosshhhh*

Veer apni jagah se gaayab ho gaya-!!

Jaw Long : Tā hěn kuài (He's fast)

Dara hua vyakti... Hamesha apni maatra bhaasha me hi bolta hai. Bhale hi Jaw Long tribal bhaasha ki boli waala tha magar, janm toh uska china ki bhoomi me hi hua tha. Maatra bhaasha toh chinese hi thi.

Aur, iss waqt darr ke maare uska mastishq Mandarin Chinese bhaasha me hi vichaar karne par majboor ho gaya. Usne jaise hi Veer ki raftaar dekhi, uski haalat patli ho gayi. Use pata tak nahi chala ki Veer kab apni jagah se gaayab ho gaya.

Aur, akasmat hi-

*Whoosh*

Kisi glitch hoti hui image ki tarah Veer uske saamne prakat ho gaya. Bhay ke maare Jaw Long jaise hi peeche koodne ko hua-

'Shénme (What?)'

Veer ne apna perr itni kass ke uske perr ke upar rakha ki Jaw Long ka perr hi neeche zameen me dhans gaya. Veer jaise iss baar use kahi bhi bhaagne nahi dena chaahta tha.

Aur, agle hi shan-

Veer ka ek vaar seedhe Jaw Long ke gale ki orr aaya. Jaw Long ne jaise hi apna haath aage kar Veer ke vaar ko rokna chaaha-

Veer ke dusre haath ne uske haath ko maar peeche dhakel diya.

*Baaaammmm*

Aisa ek baar nahi, palak jhapakte hi harr baar hota gaya. Veer jaise jaan boojh ke Jaw Long se wahi hamle karwa raha tha jidhar woh unhe chaahta tha taaki woh unhe khud deflect kar sake.

[Th-This-!!!]

Lily ke honth thar-thara uthe.

'L-Lily-!!?'

[This is insane!!! Woh kaun si fighting style use kar raha hai? Woh jaan boojh ke aise hamle kar raha hai jis ke badle me Jaw Long wahi wahi vaar kar raha hai jaha Veer chaahta hai. It's like... It's like he's making Jaw Long to attack him for his own advantage.]

Veer ke moves ki speed itni zyaada thi ki woh Jaw Long ki capture karne ki capacity se baahar ho chuki thi. Aur, fir wahi hua jo hona tha.

*Thuck*

Ek vaar Jaw Long ke liver ke hisse me...! Uske binn aankho ke khaali maans waale eye socket dard ke maare fel gaye.

*Thuck*

Dusra vaar Jaw Long ke haath ko deflect karta hua uske fefdo ke upar. Laga maano ek shan ke liye uska dil hi rukk gaya ho.

*Thuck*

Teesra vaar uske gale ke bagal me. Dard aisa ki maano nass phatne ko aa jaaye.

*Thuck*

Aur, akhiri vaar seedhe uski chhaathi ke ekdum beecho-beech. Impact itna tagda ki Jaw Long ka bhari bharkam shareer hawa me udd gaya.

Uske shareer ke udte hi Veer ne wahi khusa ek bhaala upar hawa me feka aur tezz raftaar me woh Jaw Long ki taraf lapka...!

Dono aapas me moves exchange karne lage. Dono ke prahar aapas me bhid halki-halki shock waves paida kar rahe the jinke chalte fele patte udte hue bikharte jaa rahe the. Veer uss se ladte ladte use ped ke paas le jaane laga. Dono ek dusre ke haatho ko jakad bhayanak gusse me ek dusre ko ghoor rahe the. Aur, tabhi-

*Swoosh* *Swoosh* *Swoosh*

*Thuck*

"Aaaaarrrrrrrgghhhhh!!!!"

Jaw Long ki dard bhari cheenkh waha goonj gayi. Uska kandha ped se lage hue ek bhaale se khus chuka tha.

Ye wahi bhaala tha jo Veer ne kuch shan pehle upar hawa me feka tha. Jaw Long ki aura vision skill upgraded nahi thi. Woh non living things ko dekhne me asamarth tha.

Veer ne pehle hi bhaale ki trajectory ko calculate kar use hawa me fek diya tha. Aur, woh jaan boojh ke Jaw Long ko uss ped ke paas le jaata gaya. Kyuki... Bhaala yahi par girna tha. Aur, bhaala Jaw Long ko dikhna hi nahi tha.

Veer ne agle hi shan apni do ungliya uski binn aankhon waale khaali hisse me ghused di. Aur, punah-

"Aaaaarrrrrrrgghhhhh-!!!!!"

Ek khaufnak aur dard se bil-bilati cheenkh waha fel gayi. Ava aur Erica itna sehem gayi ki maano unke shareer se unki rooh hi nikal gayi. Aur, fir Veer ke bol Jaw Long ke kaano me pade. Jo asal me Veer ke nahi, Pari ke the.

"IF ONLY I HAD EVEN A TINY OUNCE OF MY POWER THAT I HAD BEFORE, I WOULD HAVE DESTROYED THIS INSIGNIFICANT, LITTLE PLANET OF YOURS IN A BLINK OF AN EYE, YOU LOWLY PIG...! YOU ALL ARE LIKE ANTS GROVELING IN THE DIRT WAITING ONLY TO BE CRUSHED UNDER THE FEET OF AN UNPARALLELED BEING... SUCH AS ME-!!!"

Aur, fauran hi Jaw Long ke system ko andesha ho gaya. Uski ghabrati hui awaaz uske mann me sunayi di.

[L-Long-!!! Bhaago! Bhaago yaha se warna maare jaoge. Ye ladka apne hosh me nahi hai. Iska system iske shareer ko control me kiye hue hai.]

Par, Jaw Long toh bechara dard se bilbila raha tha. Uski aankhon waale khaali hisse me Veer ki do ungliyaan ghusi hui thi. Veer ne apni ungliyon ko kisi machhli pakadne ke hook ki tarah maroda aur turant hi woh andar ke maans ko kheenchte hue baahar nikaalne laga.

"Haaaaarrrrrggghhhhhh-!!!!"

Erica itna ghabra gayi ki pichhle kiye gaye uske sarr par vaar ke chalte aur saamne manzar ko ghatate dekh woh bechari behosh hi ho gayi. Magar, Genie ne aenn waqt par uske behosh hone se theek pehle abhi abhi praapt hui 'Basic Seer Vision' activate kar di.

Jaw Long ke andhruni maans ko jaise Veer baahar kheench ke nikaalna chaah raha tha. Drishya itna bhayanak aur daravna tha ki aam insaan ise lagatar dekh hi nahi sakta tha. Agar, dekh le toh sakpaka ke reh jaaye.

Zorr laga ke Jaw Long ne apne kandhe ko bhaale ki qaid se mukt kiya aur Veer par hamla bolna chaaha par-

*Baaaaammmmmmm*

Ek laat uske nichle jabde par itni zorr se padi ki uska shareer hawa me kisi lakdi ki tarah gol gol ghoomte hue udd gaya. Usne hawa me hi santulan banana chaaha. Jaise hi ghoomne ke baad usne hawa me sthirta praapt ki-

Veer uske saamne tha!

'Huh!???'

Jaw Long ne bhay ke maare apne dono haath se cross banaate hue khud ko chhek liya. Lekin, Veer hawa me hi uske bagal se nikal gaya. Ye sab kuch bahut tezi me ho raha tha. 1 second tak Jaw Long ko kuch samajh nahi aaya ki Veer bina hamla kiye uske bagal se kyu nikal gaya. Kintu, agle hi pal-

*Baaaammmm* *Baaaaammmmmmm*

*Baaaaammmmmmm* *Baaaammmm*

*Baaaammmm* *Baaaaammmmmmm*

Uski chaathi 6 alag alag jagaho se pichak gayi.

*Blurgh*

Muh se khoon ke cheethe nikaalte hue woh neeche zameen par aa gira aur uth ke Veer ko bhaybheet hue dekha. Veer ne pehle hi uske badan par mukke barsa diye the. Gati itni tezz thi ki Jaw Long unhe dekh hi nahi paaya. Jo usne dekha woh toh bas hamle ke after effects the. Jagah jagah use itna dard ho raha tha ki ab ye dard uske liye ek baadha bann ke saamne aa raha tha.

Woh bhi akhir ek insaan hi tha. Na jaane kab se woh iss ladaayi me akela ladd raha tha. Itni chot pahuchne ke baad swabhavik tha ki kahi na kahi dard ab use zyada mehsoos hone laga tha.

Lekin, Veer toh aaj jaise poore aakramak roop me tha. Woh hawa ke jhonke ki tarah apni jagah se gayab hote hue uski orr aaya aur apni laat seedhe Jaw Long ke muh par par maarni chaahi.

Par, Jaw Long ne uski laat ko apne ek haath se pakad liya. Itni derr ke baad pehli baar Jaw Long ke chehre par ek muskaan aayi. Akhir kaar, usne Veer ko pakad hi liya.

Parantu, ye jaise uss bechare ka vaham tha. Kyuki-

*Ding*

[LIMBO]

Fir woh hua jise dekh khud Jaw Long ke raungte khade ho gaye. Veer apne perr ke jakde hone ke bawajood ulti disha me ghoom ke muda...!

Uska perr toh Jaw Long ke haatho me tha. Magar, shareer toh azaad tha. Apne bhaar ka istemal kar woh baayi orr poora ghoom gaya, jiske chalte-

*Crack* *Crack*

Uske ghutno se kuch kasht bhari awaazein aayi. Woh ghoom ke iss qadar aaya ki ab uski daayi laat padne ko taiyaar thi. Jaw Long hakka bakka reh gaya. Aur-

*Baaaaammmmmmm*

Kaam tamaam!!!

Nichle jabde par laat itni zorr se padi ki Jaw Long ka daant toh ukhda hi muh se khoon ki dhaar alag nikal gayi.

Uske girte hi Veer ne apni taang haath se pakdi aur-

*Crack* *Crack*

Apni haddiyo ko wapas se sahi sthaan par le aaya. Usne apne aap ko kasht pahuchaya tha. Ya yu kahe ki Pari uske shareer ke saath khel rahi thi.

Woh Jaw Long par fir aise lapki aur ghuso ki baarish kar uske thobde par itne hamle kiye ki lag raha tha woh uske sarr ko tarbooj ki tarah phod degi.

Idhar, Ava ne jab dekha ki Veer ka palda iss ladaayi me bhaari tha woh chenn ki raahat lete hue khud ki healing ke liye apne hosh kho baithi. Lily ne use kuch derr ke liye unconscious state me daal diya aur Healing Factor activate kar diya.

Magar, kehte hai na... Harr cheez jo shuru hoti hai woh khatam bhi hoti hai. Pari, jisne Veer ke badan par qabza kar rakha tha uska saath bas yahi tak tha.

"YOU MUST THANK ME, LATER KID-!!! DAMN IT!!! IT'S NOT ENOUGH!!! IF ONLY I HAD MORE-!!!!"

Aur, bolte bolte uski awaaz dheemi hoti chali gayi. Pari ki consciousness jaise hi gayi, Veer apne unconscious state se baahar aa gaya.

Hosh me aate hi usne paaya ki uska seena zorro se upar-neeche ho raha tha. Woh haaf raha tha. Aur, tabhi use bhayanak dard apne haath-perro me mehsoos hua.

'Ack-!!'

Pari uske shareer ka istemal kar max speed me jo bhaagi thi. Veer bhale hi Jaw Long se strength me peeche tha. Magar, uski agility iss waqt itni zyaada thi ki woh uska istemal kar apne vaar ki taaqat ko kayi guna badha paane me saksham tha.

Force = Mass x Acceleration

Yaha poora game Pari ne acceleration par khela tha. Aur, yahi kaaran tha ki kyu Veer ke haath aur perr atyadhik dukh rahe the. Indirectly, zaroorat se zyada strength ka istemal jo kar rahe the woh.

Veer ne jaise hi nazre utha ke saamne ladkhadate Jaw Long ko dekha toh uski aankhein phat ke chaar ho gayi.

Uske baal bikhre hue the. Khaali aankhon ke hisse se andar ka kuch maans latak raha tha jisme se khoon behta hua uske gaalo se hoke tapak raha tha. Uske haatho ki kuch ungliyaan vipreet disha me mudi hui thi. Aur, muh se bhi khoon beh raha tha.

'Wh-What happened!'

Veer ki kuch samajh na aaya. Aur, na hi Pari ne kuch jawab diya. Kyunki, woh pehle hi sleep mode me jaa chuki thi. Ab jo kuch tha, Veer ke haatho me hi tha.

Usne dekha ki Ava aur Erica dono hi aankhein band kar laiti hui thi. Dono jeevit thi. Shayad, heal hone ki koshish kar rahi thi. Usne ek raahat ki saans li.

'K-Kya ye... Ye maine kiya?'

Use vishvas nahi ho raha tha ki jis Jaw Long ne unn teen system holders ki khatiya khadi kar ke rakhi hui thi uski ye haalat bhi ho sakti thi.

'Akhir... Hua kya? Fuckkkk! Mujhe kuch yaad nahi aa raha.'

Usne dekha ki Jaw Long mushqil se apna santulan banaate hue bhaag raha tha. Use abhi bhi yahi lag raha tha ki Veer ke shareer ka niyantran uska system kar raha tha.

'Woh mujhse bhaag raha hai-!? Shit!!! I need to catch up.'

Veer utha aur jodo me dard hone ke bawajood woh apni poori koshish kar bhaaga. Jaw Long bhaagta hua mine ke raaste me pravesh karne laga. Aur, mine par woh pahuchne hi waala tha.

China ke liye Yunnan province ki sabse zaroori mines me se ek...! Aur, sabse badi mine, jisme radioactive elements bhi paaye jaate the.




Jaw Long andha-dhundh bhaagte hue mine par pahucha...! Jangal se baahar aate hi vishalkaay mine ki sanrachna chaand ki raushni me Veer ki aankhon ke saamne aayi. Ek aadmi bhi yaha maujood nahi tha. Koi bhi pehra nahi de raha tha. Mine me andar jaane ke liye jagah jagah se kayi raaste the.

Parantu, main opening hi thi jaha se radioactive elements ki khoj ke liye jaaya jaa sakta tha. Baaki, openings jo thi woh non-radioactive elements ke liye banayi gayi thi.

Veer ne dekha ki Jaw Long ek non-radioactive elements ki opening me jaa ke ghus chuka tha.

'Tch-!! This motherfucker!!!'

Bina jhijke woh khud uss entrance me ghus gaya. Toh wahi-

"Badhte raho! Badhte raho!!!"

"Hum bas thodi hi dur hai ab!!!"

Renshu aur Order ke samast members bhi mine ke behad nazdeek aa chuke the.

Jaw Long aise bhaag raha tha jaise maano ek chuha billi ko dekh bhaagta hai. Uski haalat bahut buri ho chuki thi. Woh yahi samajh raha tha ki Veer abhi bhi Pari ke control me tha. Aur, Veer iska poora fayda utha raha tha.

Jaise hi woh andar ghus thodi gehrayi tak gaye. Jaw Long achanak hi ek patli si surang me ghus gaya jo ekdum neeche ki orr jaa rahi thi. Veer ne apna qadam aage badhaya par use hawa me hi rok liya.

'K-Kuch gadbad lag rahi hai. Why is he luring me inside that?'

Veer nahi jaanta tha ki jaha Jaw Long uska andar intezar kar ke use girana chaah raha tha woh iss mine ka bottle neck trap tha. Ek aisa gaddha jaha par insaan agar gira toh uski maut nishchit thi. Kyuki, woh gehra hi itna tha aur upar se Jaw Long agar uske upar koi patthar gira de toh aisi haalat me bachna namumkin tha.

Veer ne apne qadam peeche kar liye. Aur, tabhi-

'Huh-!!?'

Usne kuch check kiya. Jankari praapt hote hi usne apne agal bagal dekha. Ek lohe ki seedhi lagi hui thi jo upar ek hole se baahar nikalne ke liye thi. Ek emergency exit.

Veer turant ke turant uss par chadha aur baahar nikal usne andar jhaakte hue neeche khade Jaw Long ko dekha. Dono ne ek dusre ko dekha...!

Ek taraf jaha Jaw Long Veer ke baahar nikal jaane par asahaj mehsoos karne laga toh wahi Veer ke hontho par ek vijayi muskaan fel gayi.

"This is your end... Jaw Long!"

Usne apni jeb se kuch nikaalte hue seedhe Jaw Long ki orr haule se feka aur tez raftar ke saath woh peeche ko bhaaga. Agle hi pal-

*Booooooooommmmmm*



Ek tez dhamake ne waha janm liya. Dharti kaanp uthi aur halke bhookamp ke chalte Renshu aur uske aadmi shor sunte hi chinta me aa gaye.

"L-Lord!?"

"Ye kya tha??"

"Ruko nahi! Ruko nahi! Jaldi chalo!!!!"

Veer ki body hawa me aag ki lapto se baahar aate hue dur jaa giri.

*Blurgh*

Muh se dherr saara khoon nikla. Internal bleeding kaafi ho chuki thi. Use jald se jald araam ki zaroorat thi. Aur, ek doctor ki bhi-!

Tabhi-

*Ding*

['Mission : Be the saviour.' has been completed.]

[You have been rewarded 15,000 Points.]

*Ding*

[You have gained the card 'Berserk.']

*Ding*

[You have gained the scroll 'Bird Tamer.']

*Ding*

[You have gained the skill 'Aura Vision.']

[You have gained the skill 'Radio Protective.']

Notifications ki jaise jhadi lag gayi uske mann me. Jaw Long marr chuka tha. Par, sawaal tha kaise?

Aur, jawaab tha ~

Methane!!!

Mine me maujood methane gas kaafi bhaari maatra me maujood thi. Ek jwalansheel gas jiski na hi koi gandh hoti thi aur na hi koi rang. Jaw Long ko na hi methane ki koi gandh aayi aur na hi use aura vision me kuch nazar aaya. Gas bhi akhir- non living things me hi aati thi.

Kya hoga agar aisi sakri jwalansheel gas se bhari mine me ek jalta hua lighter fek diya jaaye?

Bhayanak visfot!!!

Jaw Long ki apni hi skill uske patan ka kaaran bann gayi. Use Veer ka feka gaya lighter dikha hi nahi. Veer ke mann me tamaam notifications pop hote jaa rahe the.

Kintu, ye nahi tha jinke liye woh utsuk tha. Use toh bas uss notification ko sunana tha.

*Ding*

[You have been rewarded with a new 'Slot'.]

Ye sunte hi Veer ki mutthi dridhta me kass gayi. Yahi woh cheez thi jo besh-keemti thi. Unn 15000 points se bhi zyada keemti.

Slot!!!

Jo card ko equip karwata tha. Ek slot me Veer card jab chaahe switch kar sakta tha. Par... Kya hoga jab slot hi do ho jaaye? Woh ab ek nahi... Do cards ko ek saath equip kar sakta tha. Dono me kisi bhi card ko jab chaahe shuffle kar unhe equip kar sakta tha. Maatra chhoti si ye cheez kitni taqatvar thi iss baat ka andaza Veer ko pehle hi mission ke rewards dekh ke pata lag gaya tha.

Woh abhi mann hi mann iss khushi se baahar aaya hi tha ki-

*Ding*

[The system has been upgraded to Level 10.]

*Ding*

[The system's internal feature 'Perk hunt' is available now.]

Naye feature ke baare me sunn Veer jigyaasa liye uske baare me dekhna chaahta tha par agle hi shan ek jaani pehchani aur use bhaavuk kar dene waali awaaz uske mann me goonj gayi.

[Maaaasttteerrr-!!!!!]

'Huh-!!??'

[Master-!!!]

'P-Pari???'

Nahi! Ye kaise ho sakta tha. Ye awaaz woh bhali bhaanti pehchanta tha. Harr Pari ki personality ki awaazo me antar hota tha. Aur, ye awaaz-

Usi Pari ki thi jo Crimson ki ladayi ke waqt uske saath thi. Jisne uske dil ko ruk use Crimson aur Ava ke shadiyantra se bahar nikaala tha. Jo atyadhik smart aur saath hi emotional thi. Jise usne itna miss kiya tha.

'P-Pari-! Tum? Kya waqai tum wahi ho?'

[You idiotic stupid bastard, Maaastteerr!!!]

'Huh???'

[Kyuuuuu??? Kyu kiya aapne aisa??]

'What?'

[Why did you give your points to her??]

'Huh? M-Mein-!!!'

[You idiot, Master!!! There was no need to give your points. I missed you so much, aapko pata bhi hai? Mujhe laga tha aap se acche se dobaara milungi. It will be our happy reunion. But no... Here you are in this mess.]

'Agar, mein nahi karta toh mein Ava aur Erica ko kaise bacha paata, Pari.'

[I was so scared when you lost your consciousness. Shit!!! That bitch-!!!! Tsk!!!]

'Huh?'

[Listen to me, Master. Ahinda se kabhi bhi kitni bhi dire situation kyu na ho. Aap kabhi bhi points ko iss tarah mujhe ya meri kisi bhi personality ko nahi denge. Okay?]

'Umm-!'

[Okay? Or not? Boliye!!!]

'H-Haan! Alright!'

[Pakka na?]

'Yeah!'

[Promise me!]

'What?'

[I said, promise me ki aap kabhi bhi iss tarah apne points system me invest nahi karenge.]

'Alright! I promise.'

Jab Veer ne vachan diya tab kahi jaa ke Pari ne ek raahat ki saans li.

'Lekin, bhala kyu?'

[Because... Points are not just points Master. I mean aapke liye woh sirf points ho sake hai. Par, hamare liye they are like... Something greater than that...]

'Aur, tum mujhe ye nahi batane waali ki unki aur kya ahamiyat hai. Hai na?'

[It's not that I don't want to tell you. It's just that I'm unable to tell you right now. I cannot!]

'Ohh?'

[Kyuki, ye bol ke nahi bataya jaa sakta master. Aur, jo tareeqa hai uske liye abhi aao taiyaar nahi.]

'I see!'

[Par, woh sab chorriye. Look at you! Jagah jagah ghaav hai. I can feel it. Aap khade kaise ho iss waqt? It's so painful-!!!]

'I have to... Pari! Aur-'

Uski baatein beech me hi reh gayi jab-

*Keaaaarrrrrr*

Ek baaj hawa me udta hua aaya. Veer chaukanna ho gaya. Ye wahi baaj tha. Magar, jaise hi woh nazdeek aaya.

'???'

Woh Veer ke kandhe par aake apne panje jamaate hue baith gaya. Aur, taktaki laga ke use dekhne laga.

'Ohh-!!'

*Keaaaarrrrrr*

Uski teevra awaaz Veer ke kaano me padi.

"Tum Sheba ho!! Hai na?"

Veer ne uske gale par ungli halke haath se feri toh baaj ne apna gala upar kar diya. Jaise maano woh chaah raha tha ki use aur sehlaya jaaye.

"Hahaha! Maine kabhi itne paas se kisi baaj ko nahi dekha. Does that mean tum ab Jaw Long ko nahi balki, mujhe apna master maante ho?"

*Keaaaarrrrrr*

Baaj ne jaise Veer ki baaton ko samajh awaaz nikaali.

"Huh? He can understand me? Pari!"

[Bird Tamer scroll ke tehet ise apna paaltu banaya gaya hoga, Master. Choonki ab Jaw Long nahi hai aur Bird Tamer aapke paas hai. Zaahir hai ki woh ab aapko apna master samjhega. It's cute by the way... But deadly too.]

'Yeah-! Well, mujhe lagta hai ki-'

Veer ke bol ek baar fir adhure hi reh gaye kyuki ek naya notification uske mann me goonj gaya.

*Ding*

[Past illustration has been invoked.]

[Do you want to see 'Jaw Long's' past?]

Veer ne jawaab me kuch na kaha. Woh Sheba ko hawa me chorr apne ladkhadate shareer ko ghaseetate hue wahi paas me bane ek lakdi ke cabin me le jaane laga. Ye cabin ek chhote ghar ke barabar tha aur pehle government ka hua karta tha. Par, lag raha tha jaise mine par qabza karne ke baad yaha ke workers ko tribal logo ke dwara bhaga diya gaya tha.

Woh andar daakhil hua. Andar ekdum ghapp andhera tha. Filhal aur kisi ki nazro se bachne ke liye ye kaafi tha. Use shaant jagah chahiye thi Past Illustration dekhne ke liye. Iss se kayi saare saboot uske haath lag sakte the.

Aur, Veer notification ke sawaal par haami bhar Past Illustration ke ateet ke panno me doob gaya.

*Caw* *Caw*

Hawa me udte kauwe shor machaate hue jangal ke upar se nikle. Jangal ke gehre hisse me ek lakdi se bane ghar me Jaw Long apni gaddi par baitha hua tha.

Aur, uske saamne ek sundar si stree baithi hui thi jiska chehre uske sarr par maujood kaali hat se dhaka hua tha.

Jaw Long ne ek lakdi ke glass me sharaab daalti aur use peete hue bola.

Jaw Long : Kaho! Kya baat karni hai?

Lady (smiles) : I have a deal for you. Ek simple deal.

Jaw Long : Hmm?

Lady : Mein tumhe wo pradan karwa sakti hu jiski tumhe abhi talaash hai.

Jaw Long : Mudde pe aao. Warna yahi kaat di jaogi. Farq nahi padta ki tum system holder ho. Mere ilaake me parinda bhi meri marzi se udaan bharta hai.

Lady (smiles) : I know everything! Tum Order par dhaava bol ke use apne under karna chaahte ho. Right?

Jaw Long (frowns) : ...

Lady : Lekin, ye toh sab ko pata hoga. Hai na? Toh ek aur cheez puchti hu. Tumhe iss waqt dherr saare insaano ki zaroorat hai. Hai na?

Iss baar Jaw Long ki aankhein uss aurat ke bolo par chaudi ho gayi.

Lady : Insaan jinki bali chadhaayi jaa sake. Jinhe kaale jaadu me upyog kar khud ko taqatvar banaya jaa sake.

Jaw Long : ...

Lady (smiles) : Ek yahi kaaran hai jo tum government ko andar ghusne aur talashi karne nahi dete. Hai na?

Jaw Long : ???

Lady (smiles) : Tumhare iss ghar ke neeche unn insaano ke kankaal jo chhipe hue hai jinhe tumne ab tak maara hua hai.

Ye sunte hi Jaw Long uss aurat ke gale ki orr lapka toh woh peeche uchakte hue uske prahar se bach nikli.

Lady (smiles) : Mein tumhari hi side hu. Mujh se dushmani tumhe bhaari pad sakti hai. Mein toh tumhare liye prastaav leke aayi hu.

Jaw Long : Bolna hai toh seedhe tareeke se bolo. Warna dafa ho jao.

Lady : Mein tumhe insaan provide kar sakti hu.

Jaw Long : Huh?

Lady : Insaan jinhe tum asaani se maar sakte ho aur koi unke baare me kuch puchega bhi nahi.

Jaw Long : Aur, badle me?

Lady (smiles) : Badle me mein chahti hu ki Legion Yunnan ki mine par qabza kare.

Jaw Long : Huh? Aur, uss se tumhe kya?

Lady (smiles) : Mujhe bas kuch chahiye jo mine me hai. Baaki, uske baad...! Poori ki poori mine tumhari.

Jaw Long : ...

Lady : Soch lo! Na sirf tum Order ko jald se jald apne haatho me le loge balki mine bhi tumhari apni ho chuki hogi.

Jaw Long : Mine me aisa kya hai jo tumhe chahiye?

Lady : Kuch hai. Kuch radioactive elements jo asaani se nahi mil sakte.

Jaw Long : Aur, unka kya karogi tum?

Lady (smiles) : Mein unka kuch bhi karu, uss se tumhe kya? Haan, par tumhare khilaaf kuch bhi nahi karungi. I can guarantee you.

Jaw Long (frowns) : Meri skills ke baare me tumhe kaise pata laga?

Lady (smiles) : Meri nazre harr uss zaroorat mand par tiki rehti hai jise meri madad ki talash hoti hai. Kyuki, badle me woh hi... meri madad ke kaam aate hai.

Jaw Long kuch derr sochta raha. Aur, fir haami bharte hue bola.

Jaw Long : Theek hai! Mein taiyaar hu. Par, zara bhi chhal karne ki koshish ki, toh chhalni kar diya jayega.

Lady (smiles) : Never! Never!

Woh lady apni jagah se uthi aur jaane lagi par tabhi wapas mudi aur-

Lady : Ek baat aur-

Kehte hue usne achanak hi apni jeb se ek pocket watch nikaali aur use pendulum ki tarah latka ke daaye baaye karte hue boli,

Lady : Koi hoga... Jo ye dekhega...! So, just to be safe... I must- *smiles*

Uski pocket watch achanak hi Veer ka dhyaan kheenchne lagi.

[Shitttt!!! Masterrrrr-!!! Turn it off!! Baahar aaiye!!!]

Pari ki ghabrahat bhari awaaz ne jaise Veer ko turant hi Past Illustration se baahar nikalne par majboor kar diya. Uski saansein tezz ho rakhi thi.

*huff* *huff*

'What was that-!??'

[She... She's dangerous!!! Woh-]

Parantu, Pari ko apne bol wahi thaamne pade jab Veer ke peeche se ek madhur awaaz uske kaano me padi.

"Ohh? I didn't think you would break free from my casting."

Ye awaaz-!!! Veer ke badan me ruye khade ho gaye. Uske maathe par chinta ki lakeere chhaa gayi. Aur tabhi,

*Click* *Clack*

*Click* *Clack*

Kisi ke jooto ki chalne ki awaaz use apne peeche se aayi. Nahi! Ye joote nahi the. Ye high heels ki awaaz thi. Veer ne apni baayi orr se mud sarr ghumaate hue peeche ko apni nazre daudaayi.

Andhere me se ek aakriti chalte hue aa rahi thi. Aakriti kisi stree ki lag rahi thi. Aur, jaise jaise woh qareeb aa rahi thi uski visheshtaaye aur bhi spasht hoti jaa rahi thi.

Chalne ki woh adaa, wo nazakat, uske baare me kaafi kuch bayaa kar rahi thi. Nazdeek aate hue dheere dheere ventilation se aati roshni uske chehre par bhi padti jaa rahi thi.

Uska ek haath bagal se rakhi table par tha jisme dhool ki parat jami hui thi. Jaise jaise wo aage badh rahi thi, uske saath saath uski ungli table par komalta ke saath fisalte hue aa rahi thi.

Aur jyo hi woh ekdum saamne aayi, ungli me jami dhool ko fookte hue roshni me uska chehra Veer ki nazro me aaya. Parantu, woh kaali hat se aadha dhaka hua tha. Keval uske honth hi dikhayi pad rahe the.




Veer ne jaise hi use dekha, uske raungte khade ho gaye. Ye wahi thi-!!! Jisko past Illustration me abhi usne dekha tha.

'Check!'

Usne ek pal bhi nahi gawaya uss stree ko check karne me. Aur-

*Ding*

[No information available.]

Jaisa usne socha tha bilkul wesa hi nikla. Ye wahi system owner thi! Veer ne inn kuch palo me hi sab kuch bhaanp lia.

Veer : Y-You-!!!?

Woh ajnabi stree muskurayi. Uski nigaahein abhi neeche hi tiki hui thi. Veer ke sawaal par usne apna sarr upar kiya aur uski palke haule-haule badi hi nazakat ke saath uthi aur nazre Veer se jaa ke tiki. Hontho par muskaan aur bhi adhik fel gayi. Woh apne daaye kaan ke paas baalo ki latt ki orr haath leke gayi aur unhe peeche ki.

Veer sachet tha. Saamne kaisa bhi saundarya kyu na ho, woh laparwahi nahi barat sakta tha. Harr surprise attack ke liye woh pehle hi khud ko prepare kar chuka tha.

Woh stree Veer ko neeche se upar tak ek antim baar dekhi aur fir boli,

"You really are such a surprise, Veer. Fufu~"

Veer (frowns) : State your business!

Lady (nods) : Bilkul! Jaisa ki tum dekh hi chuke ho. I’m one of the system owners. And, don't worry please! I'm not here to hurt you.

Veer : ???

Lady : By the way...! Let me introduce myself first. I'm Rebecca Elsher!

Veer : Rebecca?

Rebecca : Don't worry! Ye asli naam hai. I don't like to fake things like your cute lover. Fufu~

Veer ki bauhe kass uthi. Rebecca ka ishaara Ava ki taraf tha. Iska matlab woh jaanti thi ki Ava ne Nat naam rakh ke usko apne jaal me fasaaya tha? Bhala aur kya kya jaanti thi ye Rebecca?

Rebecca ke muh se naam nikalte hi idhar Pari ne uske naam ko poore Google par search kar liya lekin fir bhi kahi pe bhi uska naam nahi mila. Internet search par same naam ki alag Rebecca nazar aa rahi thi. Kintu, Rebecca Elsher nahi.

Veer bahar se toh khud ko sakht dikha raha tha magar andar hi andar woh chintit tha. Ghabrahat bhi thi. Woh kisi bhi waqt behosh hoke gir sakta tha. Thakaan aur dard itna zyada tha ki woh abhi keval apni dridhta ke chalte khada hua tha. Aur, aisi dasha me iss aurat se ladna matlab apne hi perr par kulhadi maarne jaisa tha. Ye aurat zaroorat se zyada hi uske baare me jaanti thi.

Veer (frowns) : So... You were behind all of this, huh?

Rebecca : Hmm? Nahi! Tum bina thos saboot pesh kiye ye sab kaise keh sakte ho, Veer?

Veer : I saw it!!!

Rebecca : Oh!? Isliye, toh mein yaha par hu.

Veer : Huh???

Ek jhatke me Rebecca ne apni pocket watch nikaali aur use pendulum ki tarah daaye baaye ghumaate hue woh Veer ko dekhi. Uske haav bhaav achanak hi badal gaye.




Rebecca : Now...! You will have to forget every-

Par, uske bol adhure reh gaye kyuki, Veer ek jhatke me uski orr lapka. Aur, ye jaldbazi me uski sabse badi bhool thi.

*Baaaaammmmmmm*

Ek titanium se bana hua cane uski chaathi par zorr se laga jo uske poore dhaanche ko hila ke rakh diya. Woh seedha hawa me udta hua dur jaa ke deewar se jaa bhida.

"Hum pahuch gaye!!! Hum pahuch gaye!!!"

Baahar se achanak aate shor ne Rebecca ko chaukanna kar diya.

"Tsk! You are very lucky, my dear!"

*Craaaassshhhhh*

Woh wahi lagi kaanch ki khidki ko todte hue waha se kood ke bhaagi.

"W-Wait-!!!!"

[Maaasterrrr-!!!]

Veer apna haath felaate hue uthne ki koshish karta raha magar, uska shareer pehle hi bahut load jhel chuka tha. Aur, ye jaise antim vaar tha. Kyuki, agle hi shan woh behosh ho gaya.

[Maaasttterrr-!!!!]

Mine ke ek hisse me bheeshan aag lag chuki thi. Methane gas poori tarah se jalti jaa rahi thi. Aur, wo tab tak jalne waali thi jab tak ki andar maujood saara oxygen samapt nahi ho jaata.

Renshu aur baaki sabhi ne jaise hi saamne ka manzar dekha toh unke perro tale zameen khisak gayi.

'Y-Ye kya???'

Renshu : Aag ko bujhaane ki koshish karo aur kar sakte ho toh-!!! Ming!!! Erica ko dhundhne ke liye kuch log leke jao. Bo-!!! Cabin check karo.

Usne ek ke baad ek aadesh diye aur tabhi-

*Chakk-chackk-chak-chak chak-a-chak-akk-chk-chk-chk*

Upar hawa me ek copter zameen se utha. Renshu ne dur se uske darwaaze par dekha toh uska reaction bhi wahi toh jo Veer ka tha.

Rebecca helicopter ke darwaaze se Renshu ko halki muskaan ke saath ghoor rahi thi. Uska aadha chehra uski hat se dhaka hua tha jo usne ek haath se thaam rakhi thi.

Toh wahi, uska dusra haath uske kandhe par tiki kisi stree ko thaame hue tha. Aur, jaisi hi uss stree par Renshu ko nazre padi-

Ek aur jhatka use laga. Woh Divya thi!!! Jo behoshi ki haalat me Rebecca ke kandho par ladi hui thi.

'Shit-!!!'

Aur, helicopter chalaane waala koi aur nahi-!!! Wahi unknown system holder tha.

"Until next time... Li Renshu-!!!"

Uske bol waha goonj gaye. Aur, helicopter waha se udaan bharta hua nikal gaya.

'Damn it!!!'

Renshu : Captain? Miss Divya ke liye jinhe tainaat kiya tha woh kaha hai?

Captain Feng : Woh hamare peeche hi toh the na? Woh- huh!!!?

Feng ne jab dekha toh paaya ki captain 3 dur dur tak kahi nazar nahi aa raha tha. Na hi Divya, aur na hi Divya ke sang aaye Clark aur uska security guard.

Captain Feng : Shit-!!! Kaha gaye woh sab?

Renshu : Pehle Erica ko dhundho!! Jaldi!!!

Captain Feng : J-Ji!!!

Aur, kuch hi palo me Bo apne kandho par Veer ko leke haazir tha. Toh wahi Ava Erica ko apni peeth par laad ke Renshu ke samaksh thi.

Renshu : Ericcaaa--!!!!

Renshu ne uthna chaaha magar dard ke chalte ek karaah uske muh se nikal gayi.

Ava : Woh rest kar rahi hai. Don't worry! She's fine!!!

Renshu : Aur, Jaw Long?

Ava : He's dead!

Renshu ko apne kaano par yakeen nahi hua. Woh jaanta tha ki Jaw Long kin shaktiyo ka maalik tha. Aise me uski hi territory me ghus ke use maar dena, bahut badi baat thi.

Ava : Veer killed him.

Renshu : Huh??

Usne Veer ko dekha jo behosh hue Bo ki peeth par lada hua tha.

'Veer ne Jaw Long ko maar diya-!?'

[He's very powerful. I must say. Kuch bhi ho jaaye, iss ladke ko apne paas se mat jaane dena.]

Renshu apne khayalo se baahar aaya aur sabhi ko lead karte hue le jaane laga. Mine me lagi aag sirf ek hi hisse me thi aur woh jald hi apne aap hi bujh jaane waali thi. Beshaq, thoda bahut nuksaan zaroor pahucha tha magar utna nahi ki elements ko haani pahuch sake.

Filhal, yaha se nikalna zyaada zaroori tha. Unhe yaha se wapas lautne me lagbhag aadhe din se bhi zyada samay lag gaya.

Jaise hi Renshu apne ghar ke mukhya hall me pravesh kiya. Andhere me chamakti do hari aankhein use dassne ki nigaah se ghoor rahi thi.

Renshu : You're here!!!

"Tumne itni guhaar laga ke bulaaya tha. Mujhe aana hi tha."

Andhere se nikalte hue woh baahar aayi. Ye aur koi nahi ~ Garofano hi thi.

Renshu ne jo chithhi bheji thi woh Garofano ke liye hi thi. Jald se jald woh yaha par aa gayi.

Ava ne jab Garofano ko dekha toh woh aashcharya me reh gayi. Ava Garofano ko saamne se pehli baar dekh rahi thi. Woh China tab hi aayi thi jab Garofano ka matter samapt ho chuka tha. Isliye, Veer aur Garofano ke beech ki chemistry ko woh dekh na paayi.

Garofano ne aage badh jaise hi Bo ki peeth se Veer ko apne dono haatho me uthaaya toh Ava ki aankhein hairaangi me fel gayi.

Andar se dil kachot utha. Kaun thi ye ladki? Veer ka iske saath kya rishta tha? Aur, iss tarah se kyu uthayi hui thi woh use?

Ava (panics) : V-Veer ko-

Renshu : It's okay!!!

Ava ne kuch kehna chaaha lekin, Renshu ne haath uthaate hue use aashvashan deke shaant kar diya. Majbooran use chup hona pada.

Garofano ne ek teekhi nazar se Ava ko dekha jaise maano udhar hi use daboch ke dass legi. Kintu, bina kuch kahe woh Veer ko andar ki orr le gayi.

Le jaate hue uski bauhe Veer ki dasha dekh sikudi hui thi.

'Look at you now! Maine tumse kaha tha na Veer. Renshu tumhe Jaw Long se ladne bhejega. Mat jaana...! Fir bhi tumne meri baat nahi maani.'

Veer ko ahista se bed par litaate hue Garofano ne uske gaal ko pyaar se sehlaaya. Aur, usne kamre ko andar se band kar liya.

***

Kuch derr baad...

Erica ki palke jhapki. Aankhein malte hue woh uthi. Usne dekha ki ye toh uska hi kamra tha.

'Mein ghar pe-!?'

[Yes! We won.]

'Uhh!? Kya hua tha?'

[Mujhe kaise pata hoga? I couldn't see anything. Apne dad se pucho.]

'Right-!!'

Woh uthate hue aage badhi. Hall me hi use khusur pusur ki awaazein aa rahi thi. Dead Silence aur Chameleon ko activate kar woh dabe paav hall me darwaze ke paas pahuchi toh use andar ki baatein sunayi di-

Garofano : Maine tumse kaha tha na ki Veer ko mushqil me nahi daalna.

Renshu : Hmph! Ye baat tumhaare muh se acchi nahi lagti. Tumhari wajah se hi Veer uss faaltu case me fasa tha.

Garofano : What? Faaltu case? Tumhe pata bhi hai woh mere liye kitna important tha? Mujhe ye saari formalities karne me itna samay lag gaya ki mein pichli 2 raato se theek se soyi bhi nahi hu. Aur, Veer...! Uski haalat dekhi hai tumne? Kya soch ke use eastside akela bheja tha tumne?

Renshu (sighs) : Mujhe waqai iss maamle me galti hui hai.

Garofano : Huh?

Renshu (frowns) : Unki taraf se do system holders aur the-!!!

Garofano (in shock) : Do???

Renshu (nods) : Haan! Ek anjaan naujavan tha jo mujhse bhida tha. Aur, ek koi aurat thi. Helicopter me...! Woh ant me hi nazar aayi. Miss Divya uske kandho par ladi hui thi.

Garofano (frowns) : Iska matlab woh Divya ko kidnap kar ke chale gaye? Shit!!! Veer ne agar ye suna toh woh gusse me aa jayega.

Renshu : Kuch pak raha hai andar hi andar. Bahut gehraayi me...! Mujhe nahi laga tha itna involvement hoga kisi ka. Lekin, mein galat tha. Veer ne past zaroor dekha hoga Jaw Long ka...! Woh aur jankari hume de sakta hai.

Garofano : Par, galti tumhari hi hai. Akhir, tum use uss danav aadmi se ladne akele kaise bhen sakte ho?

Renshu (smiles) : Simply because of one reason...!

Garofano : Huh??

"...Because, Veer is stronger than I am!!!"

Aur, ye bol sunte hi Garofano se leke baahar khadi Erica ke badan me raungte khade ho gaye.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
This update consists of 11.6k words. Sabse bada update ab ye ho gaya hai. Maine koshish bahut ki likhte rehne ki par 2:30 baje meri jhapki lag chuki thi. So, sorry for that...! Ab mujhse zyada late jaga nahi jaata kyuki subah jaldi uthne ki aadat dali hui hai. Isliye, mein kehta hu timing ka mat pucho karo. Par nahi!! Sudharna nahi hai!
Anyways, ek update aur bacha hai arc ke closure ka. Uske baad ye arc khatam hai. So, likes pelne ka aur revos rakhne ka. Target same hai apna. 200! Also, agar mujhe laga toh iss arc me ek update aur badha dunga. But I don't think ki wo necessary hai filhal.
Dhanyavad!

Ab tak kaa best update tha
Sab kosh clear ho gaya ha
But last vala jo vi aurat aayi thi vi kon ha aor vo divya ko kis liye la ka gayi ha ya fir vo divya ko as a chara la ka gayi ha jis se vo fir se veer ko bola saka apna pass
Aor vo dusra ladka vo bi us ka sathi ha
Dekhna se to lag raha ha ki ab jo next enemy aaya he vo ab tak ka sab se dengures ho ga.
Ab intazar rahaga next update ka

 

[Abhay@1]

Hello wolf bhai. .
I am a silent reader.
But ek chiz bolunga. Ye story etni zabardast likhi gyi hai ki aane wale time me ye es site PE top pe rhegi and kaafi time tak rhegi.
Aapke likhne ka tarika bhut shandar hai. Aam taur pe yaha log views ke liye bus sex story hi likh dete hai. But apne aisa nhi kiyaa. .
Veer ke andar jo system hai shyad vo kaafi takatwar system hai. And aage shyad veer hi saare system owners ka head bnega.
Bus ek chiz mujhe abhi tak pta nhi lag saki ki
'NEELMANI' ka kya role hai. Coz uska bus starting ke update me hi jikar kiya tha aapne , kya uska bhi system se lena dena hai kuch??.
And lastly
Thank you so much for such a wonderful story. Aise hi hum logo ka manoranjan krte rhe aap.
Dhyanawad