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Vinayak jab Naya Naya guru ji ke aashramain main aye tha tab hamesha wo chup chap hi rehte the aur kisi se baat bi nahi karte Hain ishi ki waka se Guruji pareshan the air soch Lage ke Kya Kya jaye bohut der tak soch ne ke bad guru ji ko ek idea atta hain aur us per Amal karte hue aone ek sissy ko bola the Hain
Sissy: guru ji Apne mujhe boloya
Guruji ha Tum ek kaam karo Satya ko mera samdesh bej ho us ko bolo ke Guruji ne ushe bolaya hain aur iske bete ko bi Saath lete ana ab Jao
Sissy: Jo agya Guruji
Yeh bol kar sissy waha se chala jata hain
Kareeb 1 ghante ke bad 1 black color ki car AA kar aashramain ke bahar rukti hain aur us main se 1 admi aur ek 7 Saal ka ladka utar kr Ander guru ji se Milne Guruji is waqt deyan main bete hain Kuch time bad Guruji apna deyan khatam Karke us admi ko Apne pass beth ne ka bol deta Hain admi beth jats Hain aur haath jot kar Guruji se bol ta hain
Admi ( haath jodte hue): Guruji Apne mujhe bolaye agya de Kya baat hain

Guruji: ha Satya bolya toh awasya hain parantu tumhe nahi tumhare bete ko

Satya: main Kuch samja nahi Guruji ap Kya Keh Rahe ho
Guruji: sab Samaj jaoke l(adke se) adhar Aao beta
Guruji ke bolne per wo ladka AA kar Guruji ke per chu kar unse ashirwad le let's hain
Guruji: Khush raho beta aur batao tumhari padhai kese chal rahi hain
Ladka : thek chal rahi hain guru ji
Guruji: bohut ache ek baat Mano ge Meri
Ladka : agya de Guruji
Guruji : Kal se Tum mere pass roz subhe 4 baje aya karoge apni training ke liye thek hain
Yeh baat sun kar ladka Apne bap ki taraf delta hain aur Satya Guruji se Bolta hain
Satya : is ke Piche he kaas waja guru ji
Guruji: ha ek bohut badi waja hain samay Anne per hum kud Tumhe Bata denge
Satya : Jo agya Guruji
Ladka: bohut bohut danyawad Guruji apka ke apne mujhe Meri training ke liye bol deya mujhe bi Apne pita se is bareain baat Karne hi wala tha ke mujhe training chahiye
Guruji: (muskurate hue ) is main danyawad ki Kya baat hain (Satya se) Satya Tumhe Mera ek Kam Karna hain
Satya: jee guruji agya kare
Guruji : Satya Tumhe Apne bete ko hostel main admission Karwa do
Satya: parantu q guru ji iski Kya waja hain hamara Ghar toh is aashramain se ziyada dor nahi hain phir aisa q
Guruji: iske Piche 1 waja hain Jo samay Anne per Tumhe hum Bata denga thek hain
Satya: thek hain Guruji
Guruji: Satya Kya Tum todi der ke Leye bahar jaa sakte hain hum ko tumhere bete se Kuch baat Karni hain
SSatya Bina Kuch bole bahar Nikal jate hain Satya ke bahar Jane ke bad Guruji ladke ko Apne pass bolate Hain aur us se bolte hain
Guruji: beta Kya tumhare school main tumhari kaksha ek Naya ladka aye hain Kya
Ladka: gee ha guru ji aye Hain aur uska Naam Vinayak Hain
Guruji: ha wahi Tumhe use dosti Karni Hain thek hain
Ladka : thek hain Guruji Lekin ek baat Samaj nahi ayi ap mujhe use dosti ka q bol Rahe Hain jab ke jab bi main use baat Karne bi koshish karta hain wo bilkul chup chap rahta hain
Guruji: beta Tumhe ziyada Samaj ne ki zarorat nahi hain bas isna janlo ke Tumhe har hal main use dosti Karni Hain ishi Leye tu mainne tumhara admission hostel main Karwa ya hain
Ladka: thek hain Guruji
Guruji: aur haa usse dosti Karne ke bad dere dere usko manana hain Tumhe ke wo mujse training le sakhe thek hain
Ladka : thek hain Guruji Kya ab main jaa Sakta ho
Guru ji : ha Tum ja sakte ho ek baat aur yeh baat Kisi ho bi pata nahi chal ni chahiye thek hain
Ladka : thek hain Guruji
Yeh bol kar ladka waha se Chala jata hain aur Apne bap ke Saath gadi main beth jats Hain aur soch ne ladta hain ke
Kese wo Vinayak se dosti kare
Agle din wo ladka ja kar Vinayak ke Saath beth jata Hain aur use baate karta Hain per Vinayak koi kaa jawab nahi deta aur school ke chuti hone ke bad Vinayak sidhe hostal chal jata Hain jab wo dekhta Hain ke wo ladka bi ab se uske Saath uske hi room main Rahe ga toh toda pareshan ho jata Hain aur Bolta hain
Vinayak: vikram Tum Yaha Kya jar rahe ho
Vikram : (muskurate hue) q Kya main hostel main nahi rah Sakta
Vinayak: reh sakte ho per Yaha nahi Kisi AUR room main
Vikram: sorry maine try Kiya tha per Kya hai na hostel main aur koi room available nahi hain is hi Leye hain is room main shift ho gaya
Vinayak phir Kuch nahi bolta aur ja kar Apne bad per let jats Hain phir Kuch kas nahi hota
Ishi tarha dere dere vikram aur Vinayak ki dosti bi ho jati Hain aur vikram bi Guruji se training le Rahe hote Hain aur Jo bi pore din Vinayak karta uski report vikram Guruji ji ke pass pohancha ta the dere dere vikram ne Vinayak ko bi taray Karwa leya training ke liye
Aur Vinayak ki bi training suru ho Gai
Guru ji ne hi khud Vinayak ko training de Rahe the yeh baat jab Guruji ke sissy ko pata Chali to sab shocked ho gaye q ke sab jante the ke Guruji ager Kisi ko training dege to koi bohut hi kass Hoga woh ladka
Ishi tarha dere dere samay nikalne Laga aur vikram aur Vinayak ki dosti aur bi mozbot ho gaye dono dost nahi balke Bhaion ki tarha rehte the
Vikram ke bap ek businessesman tha Jo India main top 10 ki list main atta Lekin uske bawajod vikram main bilkul gamand nahi tha
Aj Vinayak aur vikram ke 10th standad ka result the Vinayak ke 10th main 91% aye the jabke vikram ke 89%
Aur ishi ke Saath hi Vinayak aur vikram ki training bi pori ho gayi dono dost Guruji ke pass jate hain aur unse ashirwad lete hain
Guruji: sada khush raho aur kamyabi Tum dono ki kadam chume
Dono : danyawad guru ji
Guruji: vikram Tum Jao Yaha se mujhe Vinayak se Kuch zarori baat Karni Hain
Vikram: thek hain Guruji
Yeh bol kar vikram waha se Chala jata Hain aur picha reh jate hain sirf Vinayak aur Guruji
Vinayak: jee guru ji boliye kya baat hain
Guru ji: Vinayak beta main Tumhe Jo batane jaa Raha ho usko deyan se zin na tek
Vinayak: thek hain Guruji boliye
Phir Guruji Jo bolte hain ushe sun kar Vinayak ka dimag ko bi hilla ke rak dete hain
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Guruji: Vinayak main Tumhe Jo batane jaa Raha ho wo deyan se Sunna thek hain
Vinayak: jee guru ji boliye
Guruji: beta Tumhe tumhare parivar ke bare main batane jaa Raha ho
Vinayak: mere parivar ke bare main Kya baat hain Guruji main Kuch samja nahi
Guruji: main samjata ho Suno
Jis parivar ko Tum bachpan se apna mante AA Rahe wo tumhara parivar nahi hain beta
Vinayak (haste hue) majak achcha kar lete hain aap Guruji
Guruji: beta yah majak Nahin hai tumhari jindagi ki sabse Badi sacchai hai Jo aaj tak humne tumse chhupai thi ab samay a chuka hai tumhe tumhare parivar ke bare mein batane ka
Vinayak (serious hote hue) boliye Guruji

Guru ji; beta tumhare pita ka naam Rajiv rajvanshi hai jo ki India ka sabse bada businessman tha uske Sath Saath ek bahut bada Don bhi jiske samne har Koi jhukane per majbur ho jata itni power rakhta tha tumhara baap ab jab Koi insan bahut bada aadami banta hai to uske dost bhi bante hain aur dushman bhi aur vahi ho tumhare pita ke Sath tumhare pita ke bahut sare dushman Ban Gaye aksar police wale bhi Rajiv se madad mangne aate Hain aur vah hamesha har Kisi ki madad karta tumhare pita Delhi mein 2 sal tak rahe hain do salon mein Delhi mein jitna bhi crime tha sab Ka safaya Kar Diya usne aur wapas Rajasthan chale Gaye aur vahin per apni jindagi gujarne Lage Rajiv ne apne pita ke Pasand ki shaadi ki shaadi ke 2 sal bad Tum paida hue
Sab bahut achcha ja raha tha itne mein Meri Hi ek sissy ne mere Sath aur Rajiv ke sath dhokha Kiya aur Rajiv ke dushmanon ke sath hath mila liya aur tumhare pita se jhooth bol diya ki 2 mahine bad mein Delhi ja raha hun jab vah log 2 mahine bad Delhi ka mandir mein puja paath karne aur mujhse milane main to vahan unhen Naam Mila Lekin achanak se unki dushmanon ne unke hamla Kiya hamla itna Bada tha ke vahan per 200 se 300 log mare gaye the isase ab tumko andaza Laga sakte ho ki kitna bada hamla tha to samne mein tumhara parivar ka kya hua mujhe kuchh bhi nahin pata lekin tumhari bua ne apni jaan dekar tumhari jaan bachai tumhari bua tumhen lekar ek hospital bhag Gai hospital mein use waqt ek chhote se bacche ki mrutyu hui thi aur usse tumhen badal kar vahan se bhag gai aur raste mein tumhare pita ke dushmanon ne use pakadkar maar Diya
Vinayak: guruji yah sab aapko kaise pata aap to abhi kah rahe the ki aap vahan Gaye bhi Nahin
Guruji: jab tumhari bua ne tumhen use bacche se badal Diya tab usne ek doctor ko sari baten Bata di Thi aur vah doctor 2 mahine bad mujhse milane aaya aur sari baat mujhe Bata di tumhari Gale mein Jo locket pada hai vah tumhari phone hai tumhen pahnaya yah ek Tarah ka tracking device hai jisse mujhe pata chalta hai ki tum kahan ho aur kya kar rahe ho jab mujhe pata Chala ki Tum Mumbai mein ho tab maine apne kuchh wafadar sissy se kaha ki vah din Raat tumhari suraksha Karen aur unhone bhi vahi Kiya mere shishyon mein se ek shishya ne tumhare pita se bahut acchi dost se kanoon the jab tumhare pita tumhen hostel mein admission dilane ki baat kar rahe the tab mere usi shishya ne tumhare sautele pita ko Yahan per admission karvane ki baat ki aur tumhare sautele pita bhi man gaye aur tumhen Yahan admission dilva Diya jab Tum Yahan naye naye aaye the tab hamesha gum rahte the kisi se baat Nahin karte The
Tumhen is frustration hai nikaalne ke liye Meri hi Vikram ko tumse dosti karne ko kaha aur dere dere usne tumse dosti bhi kar li aur tumhen training ke liye bhi Raji Kar Diya
Guruji: beta tumhari bahut bada tyag karte tumhari jaan bachai Thi samay a chuka hai ab apni ushi bua ka maut Ka badla lene ka aur sath hi sath Apne parivar Ka badla lene ka samay a chuka hai aap apnon ke liye vighnharta banne ka aur apne dushmanon ke liye vighn karta

Vinayak bhi apni family ke bare mein jankari ho chuki thi aur dukhi bhi aur gussa use bahut a raha tha aur so Guruji se bole

Vinayak: aapane bilkul theek kaha Guruji samay a chuka hai ab UN sabki barbadi ka jisne mujhe barbad Kiya jisne mujhse mere parivar ki khushiyan sab kuchh chhina hai aap us sabko unke anjam tak pahunchana ka samay a chuka hai main kasam khata hun Apne pita ki apni Man ki aur apni use bua ki jisne Meri jaan bachane ki bhi Apne jante di aisi maut marunga UN sabko unhen Apne Sath Le jaane se tar tar kampegi
Guruji: han beta lekin usse pahle tumhen ek pariksha Deni Hogi aaj tak Maine tumhen jo bhi sikhaya hai uski pariksha
Vinayak: boliye Guruji Kaisi pariksha Deni Hogi mujhe
Guruji: Tum filhal apni jaane ki taiyari karo pariksha kab aur kaisi leni hai mujhe bahut ache se pata hai
Vinayak: theek hai guru ji Aage de mujhe
Guruji: kalyan ho beta tumhara vaise ek baat hai tum Yahan se Kahan jaaoge
Vinayak: main samjha Nahin Guruji
Guruji: Tum apne sotele parivar ke pass jaaoge ya kahin aur
Vinayak: vahan jakar Kya karunga ab jinhone kabhi bhi mujhe apna Nahin mana vahan kyon jaaun main Yahan se Delhi jaunga aur apne parivar ke bare mein pata lagaunga
Guruji: theek hai jao aur apni packing karo
Vinayak vahan se nikalkar sidhe hostel mein Chala jata hai aur apni packing karne lag jata hai kyunki Raat ke 10:00 baj rahe the aur Vinayak ko subah 8:00 baje Delhi Jana tha aur uske bad khana khakar so jata hai agale din subah Vinayak uthkar Naha dhokar fresh ho jata hai aur jogging Karne Chala jata hai vahan se hokar nashta karta hai aur ek bar FIR se apna Sara Saman check Karke nikal jata hai raste mein use Vikram bhi milta hai aur vah Vikram se puchta hai ki vah kahan apni Aage ki padhaai per karega to Vikram usse bolata hai ki Jahan Tum karoge Vinayak use batata hai ki vah apni Aage ki padhaai Delhi mein karega to vah bhi man jata hai aur kahta hai ki next week vah bhi Delhi a jaega Vinayak bhi man jata hai aur chal padta hai bus station ki taraf vahan jakar wo Delhi ki bus ki ticket karta hai aur baith jata hai bus mein aur chal padta hai Delhi ki taraf Lekin Vinayak ek baat se Anjan tha ki aage ek bahut bada khatra uska intezar kar raha hai
Abhi bus ne takreeban 1 ghante ka safar kiya tha kya achanak bus ruk Gai aur bus mein 5 se 6 nakabposh aadami ghus Gaye jinke hathon mein latest kism ke guns aur banduk the vah log sab ke upar apna yogdan dete Hain aur bolate Hain
Nakabposh1: agar Kisi ne bhi Hindi ki koshish ki to sabko maar Dunga main isliye chupchap baithe raho aur corporate karte raho
Bus mein jitni bhi pessenger baithe hue The sab chillane lagte Hain

Bachao bachao bachao


Nakabposh 2 : maine kaha na tu sab logon ko chupchap baithe raho Varna Apne anjam ke jimmedaar tum log khud hoge
Vinayak jab yah sunta hai to usse main a jata hai aur ek nakabposh ke munh per panch maar deta hai
Yah hamla UN per achanak hua tha isiliye unko sambhalne ka mauka tak na Mila jab Baki ke nakabposh yah dekhte hain ki unke Sathi per hamla hua hai to sab satark ho jate hain aur Vinayak Aage badhkar bakiyon ki taraf Chala jata hai abhi vah thoda hi Aage gaya tha kya achanak Vinayak ke aankhon ke samne andhera chha jata hai aur vah
Aap sab soch rahe honge achanak se kaise behosh ho gaya Tumhe Bata deta hoon jaise hi Vinayak Aage badhane Laga kuchh hi Aage badhata ke jiske munh per abhi vinayak ne panch Mara tha vah ud jata hai aur Vinayak gardan ki NAS ko daba Deta hai jiski vajah se Vinayak behosh ho jata hai
uske bad vah sare nakabposh milkar Vinayak ko bus se bahar Le jaate Hain aur ek Khai ki Tarah bhi chalte Hain aur uska hi mein Vinayak ko gira dete Hain to piche se bus driver ko ek achcha mauka Mil jata hai bus ko full speed se dauda dete Hain
Nakabposh3 : are vah bus to Chala Gaya hai ab Kya Karen
Nakabposh1: koi baat nahin hamara kam to ho gaya hai hamen ISI ko Yahan tak pahunchana tha Jo humne pahuncha diya ab chalo yahan se
Nakabpost 2: isko kuchh hoga to nahin na agar isko kuchh bhi hua to guru ji hamen Nahin chhodenge
Nakabposh1: Tum fikar na Karo kuchh Nahin Hoga usse guru ji ne special training di hai isko itni aasani se to yah Nahin Mar Sakta chalo ab Yahan se
Ji han doston yah attack Koi terrorist attack nahin tha balki Guruji ne karvaya tha Vinayak ki pariksha lene ke liye ab vah aage kya karta hai aaiae jante Hain
3 ghante tak behosh rahane ke bad Vinayak hosh mein aata hai jab vah aaspaas dekhta hai to khud ko ek jungle mein pata hai aur sochne lagta hai ki vah Yahan kaise a Gaya FIR dere dere use sab kuchh yad aane lagta hai
Jab sab kuchh use yad aata hai to Vinayak ko saaf karne lagta hai kyunki jungle ki mitti ki vajah se uske kapde pure kharab ho gaye the aur uske kapde jagha jagha fate hue the kyunki jab Vinayak pahadi se niche gir raha tha tab pedon mein atak gaya tha ISI vajah se uske kapde fat gaye the kher Vinayak uth kar Apne aspass dekta hain toh koi nahi tha pure jungle main sannata chhaya hua tha ek bar to Vinayak ke Dil mein bhi darr baith jata hai is sannate ko dekhkar FIR aapane dar ko kabu Karke Aage badhane lagta hai abhi wo toda hi aghe gaye tha ke achanak hi uske kanoon main ek dahad sunai deti hain
Aur wo dahad Kisi AUR ki nahi sher ki thi Vinayak use Sher ko dekhkar dar jata hun aur wapas Piche ki taraf bhaagane lagta hai shayad Vinayak ki Kismat acchi thi ki sher ki najar Vinayak per Nahin padi Vinayak bohut der tak daudta Raha jab vah thak jata hai to ek ped ki niche baith jata hai aur aaram karne lagta hai aur sochne lagta hai ki aap is jungle se kaise nikala jaaye abhi wo soch hi Raha tha ke achanak se Kahi se ek punch AA kar Vinayak ke moo per lagta hain aur
Vinayak hadbara kar apni soch se bahar aata hai aur aaspaas dekhta hai ki usko panch kisne mara jab vah aaspaas dekhta hai to Koi Nahin hota to sochta hai to shayad uska vaham hai to fir se aaram karne ped ke niche baithata hai aur apni aankhen band kar deta hai abhi usne aakar Pani ki Thi ke ek aur panch ki munh per padta hai aur Vinayak niche gir jata hai aur wapas khada hokar aaspaas dekhta hai aur jor se chillata hai
Vinayak: kaun hai samne aao agar himmat hai to samne aakar war kar is Tarah chhipkar Marne Ka Kya fayda
Tabhi ek admi ki hansne ke awaz Anne lagti Hain aur wo admi bolta hain
Admi : himmat to tujh mein bhi bahut hai bacche ki mere ilake mein ghus aye ho khir ab Tum AA hi gaye ho to tumhen maar Hi deta hun
Vinayak admi ki baat sunkar Bolta hain
Vinayak: pahle tu samne to a FIR batata hun tumhen ki Kaun kisko maarta hai
Admi : agar yahi tumhari aakhiri khwahish hai to theek hai abhi tumhari yah khwahish bhi puri kar deta hun
Itna bol kar vah aadami achanak se Vinayak ke samne prakat ho jata hai
Vinayak achanak se apne samne aadami ko prakat hota dekhkar thoda dar jata hai aur FIR apni dar ko kabu Karke bolata hai
Vinayak: Kon ho tum aur yeh aise achanak prakat kaise ho gaye
Admi: abhi to bahut himmat ki baat kar rahe the bacche ab Kahan Gai tumhari himmat kya dar lag raha hai
Vinayak: darta to main kisi ke baap se nahin hun Chala ja
Itna bol kar Vinayak use aadami ki taraf daudta hai jab wo admi dekta hain ke Vinayak uski taraf daud Raha hain to wo vi tayar ho jata Hain fight ke liye abhi vinayak jaise hi use aadami ki pass pahunchna hai Vinayak uchhalkar ek lath use aadami ke face per maarta hai aur aadami niche girta hai aur Bina waqt ganwae aadami fauran uth jata hai aur vah aadami ek aur panch Vinayak ke path per maarta hai Vinayak udata hua Piche jakar gir jata hai kyunki Vinayak pahle se Hi bahut jyada thaka hua tha fir bhi himmat Karke khada ho jata hai aur use aadami ko apni taraf aane ka ishara karta hai aur aadami daudta hua Vinayak ki taraf aata hai jaise hi vah Vinayak ke pass pahunchta hai use fir se panch Marne ki Koshish karta hai lekin Vinayak ek hath se uske fund ko block kar deta hai aur dusra panch ful takat se uske sine per maar deta hai aur vah aadami niche jakar girta hai vah aadami fir se himmat karte hain khada ho jata hai jaisi hi vah khada hota hai usse pahle hi Vinayak ne ek lath hawa main ghum kar us admi ke garden per de Mari aur wo admi phir se ghir jata Hain Lekin is admi ki shayad aaj Kismat kharab thi
Kyunki vah aadami jaise hi niche girta hai theek uske sar ke niche ek pathar pada tha jisse uska sar takra jata hai aur uske sar se khoon aane lagta hai aur vahi behosh ho jata hai use aadami ke behosh hote hain Vinayak sans Lene lagta hai aur Piche aakar wapas pair ke niche baithata hai aur aankhen band kar deta hai abhi usne aankhen band hi ki thi achanak se ek awaaz uske kanoon mein gunjane lagti Hain
Awaz : Vinayak beta kese ho tum
Vinayak ki awaaz sunkar apni aankhen kholta hai aur aaspaas dekhta hai Koi Nahin hota FIR use aadami ki taraf dekhta hai to ab vah aadami bhi gayab ho chuka tha to vah samajh jata hai aur bolata hai
Vinayak: kuchh der pahle to Meri jaan ke Piche pade the aur ab beta kuchh samajh Nahin a Rahi
AWaz : nahi wo main nahi tha woh koi aur tha jis ko Tumne hara diya hain aur ab Yaha se Chala Gaya hain
Vinayak: acha phir Tum Kon ho aur samne q nahi AA Rahe ho
Awaz : q ke tumhare aankhon mein vah Shakti Nahin hai Jo mujhe dekh sakun
Vinayak: acha phir hum bi toh sunhe ke Kon ho tum apna parichay do Kon ho tum
Awaz : ager yahi tumhari ichcha hai to suno main aur koi nahi balki
VIGHNHARTA GANESH HO MAIN
Vinayak jab yah sunta hai toh zor zor se hansne lagta hai aur Bolta hain
Vinayak: (haste hue) : ager Tum swayam vighnharta Ganesh ho to main Narayan hun ab yakin karo ki meri baat ka
Vinayak ki baat sun kar wo awaz Bolta hain
Awaz:Maine bola tha na ke Tum Yaqeen nahi karo ge toh phir kher koi baat nahi toh Dekho
Itna bolte hi uper asman se do rays Nikal kar aati Hain aur Vinayak ke aankhon mein samaa jati Hain iske bad jab Vinayak Apne aspass dekta hain phir dekta hain do uper Sach main vighnharta Ganesh the jab Vinayak yeh dekta hain toh Apne gutno ke bal beth kar apni kiye ki maafi magta Hain aur Bolta hain
Vinayak: mujhe maaf kar dijiye Prabhu mujhe yakin nahin a Raha ki aap swayam mere samne khade Hain main dhanya ho Gaya
GANESH ji : koi baat nahin putra utho aur meri baat dhyan se suno tumhen mera ek kam karna hai Vinayak
Vinayak: aagya de Prabhu
GANESH ji: hamen Gyan hai putra ki tumhen Apne parivar Ka badla Lene hetu Delhi ja rahe ho parantu tum apne parivar ke badle ke sath sath is dharti per fail hue paap kabhi hath mat karna hai
Vinayak: main kuchh samjha Nahin Prabhu
GANESH ji: samay aane per tum khud Hi samajh jaaoge filhal itna samajh lo ki tumhen is dharti per jitni bhi paap ho rahe hain UN sab Ka khatma karna hai jaise ke Jo dharti per Raj karna chahte hain jaise ke terrorist aur bade se bade Don aur organisations jiska maksad sirf duniya per Raj Karna hai un sab Ka khatma Tumne karna hoga aur iske liye main tumhen kuchh jaadui shaktiyan Dena chahta hun
Vinayak: parantu sirf main hi kyon Prabhu mere jaise to aur bhi Kai honge is dharti per
Ganesh ji : han hai parantu usmein tumhari jaisi kabiliyat Kisi mein bhi Nahin hai isiliye Maine tumhen chuna hai
Vinayak: Jo agya Prabhu
Ganesh ji: main tumhen apni shaktiyan de raha hun agar tum us saktiyou ko niyantrit karne lag jaaoge to tumhen bahut adhik samay lagega aur ISI bich tumhare parivar ke sath kuchh bura bhi ho sakta hai isiliye main tumhen ek magical system de raha hun uska upyog kaise karna hai vah system tumhen swayam Bata dega
Vinayak: jaise aapko uchit Lage Prabhu
Ganesh ji: kuchh sawal hai tumhare man mein tu poochh sakte ho
Vinayak: Prabhu Maine aj tak Kisi Ka bura nahi chaha hain na hi Kisi Ka bura Kiya hain phir mere Saath hi itna bura q ho Raha hain bachpan main mere parivar ke Saath Jo hua Kya wo Sahi tha
Ganesh ji: Ham mante Hain putra tumhare sath Jo hua bahut galat hua lekin yahi tumhari niyati hai aur tumhare niyati mein sadaiv sangharsh karna likha hai aur tum apni niyati ko chahkar bhi nahin badal sakte
Vinayak: parantu q Prabhu
Ganesh ji: wo is liye q ke tumhara janm ek bahut bade maksad ko anjam dene ke liye hua hai
Vinayak: kesa maksad Prabhu
Ganesh ji : wo samay Anne per the khud Hi pata chal jaye ga nikat samay mein ek bahut badi aur mahan Shakti dharti log per janm Lene Wali hai Ham chahte Hain uske janm Lene se pahle tumhen dharti per pahle hue paap Ka ant karna hoga Taki Jo Shakti janm len toh usko Apne maksad mein Koi rukavat paida na ho

Vinayak: Jo agya apka Prabhu
Ganesh ji: ek aur baat tumhari is jivan mein tumhari 3 shadiyan honi hai
Vinayak: yeh ap Kya ke Rahe ho Prabhu ajkal log 1 patni nahi sambal sakti aur main 3 3 kese sambal sakta ho
Ganesh ji yeh sun kar muskurate Hain aur bolte hain
Ganesh ji: acha toh Meri bi toh 2 patniyan Hain phir Maine kese sambal rakhi Hain
Vinayak: apto bagwaan Hain sab kar sakte hain Lekin main
Ganesh ji: koi baat nahi samay Anne per sab Kuch thek ho jaye ga acha Suno
Vinayak: boliye Prabhu
Ganesh ji: putra tumhari teen shadiyon ke sath tumhare sambandh bhi kahin striyon ke sath hoga kintu itna smaran rakhna tumhara pratham santan tumhari pahli patni se hona chahie aisa kyon tumhen samay aane per pata chal jaega

Yad rakhna theek hai
Vinayak: thek hain Prabhu
GANESH ji: acha ab main chalta ho
Itna bol kar Ganesh ji ke Sharir se ek aag ka gola Nikal kar Vinayak ke sharir main sama jata Hain aur Ganesh ji waha se gayab ho jate hain
Abhi vinayak yeh sab soch hi Raha tha ke yeh sab Sapna hain ya Sach itne main uske maan main ek awaz gunjti Hain
Good evening boss
Vinayak ki awaaz sunkar Apne aaspaas dekhta hai to Koi Nahin hota
Aur Vinayak apne aap se hi badbadata hai
Lagta hai mera dimag kharab ho gaya hai yah sab soch kar chal beta Vinayak ab is jungle se nikalne ka koi Rasta dhundh Nahin to yahi aaj tu Sher Ka khana banega

Abhi vah badbada hi raha tha ki achanak ek bar FIR se uske Man mein ek awaaz bhejti hai
Don't worry boss main hun na aapke sath aur abhi jo kuchh bhi aapane dekha vah Sapna Nahin hakikat hai
Vinayak: matlab Ganesh ji sach mein mujhse milane Aaye The
Ji han Boss sach mein aapse hi milane Aaye The
Vinayak: vaise tum kaun ho aur mujhe yah boss boss kyon bol rahi ho aur tum najar kyon Nahin a Rahi
Are kya Boss aap bhi na abhi abhi Ganesh ji ne aapko kya kaha tha ki vah aapko ek system denge ek magical system main vahi hun
Vinayak: Kya Sach main Tum ek magical system ho
System: jee ha boss main Sach main ek system ho and tumhare pass ab jaadui shaktiyan a chuki Hain jiska istemal kaise karna hai vah main aapko bataungi
Vinayak: thek hain phir jaldi jaldi batao kese karo in saktiyou ka istsmaal
System: are are aram se boss air saktiyou ko istamal Karne ager isna hi asan hota toh Kya Ganesh ji mujhe tumhare sarir main bejte Kya
Vinayak: ha yeh bi thek hain phir bolo Kya Karna Hoga mujhe
System: abhi nahi boss abhi Raat ho rahi pahla app aram karo phir
Vinayak: ha yeh bi thek hain per is jun
gle main aram karo kaha per itne bade bade machar hain kat Rahe Hain
System: don't worry boss main ho nnaap agar aap chaho to main tumhen fauran Delhi pahuncha sakti hun

Vinayak: Sach main woh kese
System woh aise he
Itna bol kar achanak se Vinayak Hawa mein udane lagta achanak se aisa hone per banaya ghabra jata hai aur iski munh se chith nikal jaati hai vah dar ke mare ne aankhen band kar deta hai jab vah aankh khulata hai Delhi gaye ek shandar Hotel ke samne khada hota hai
System: kesa Laga boss
Vinayak bohut hi zabardest per agali bar aisa karne se pahle mujhe please pata jarur Dena Nahin to mujhe heart attack a kar rahega
System: sorry boss fir se aisa Nahin karungi
Vinayak: it's okay
Itna bol kar Vinayak Hotel ke andar chala jata hun aur apne liye ek room book karta hai room mein jaane ke bad vah fresh hota hai kuchh khane ka order karta hai aur khana khakar so jata hai


~~~ajj ke liye itna hi baqi ka next update main

( Pahle Maine Socha tha ki ek fight wala update de dun lekin FIR Socha pahle Vinayak ho unki musical power de dun uske bad ki fight seen karenge Baki
Aap sab log bataiyega aapko update kaisa laga and please like karna aur sath mein comment bhi agar koi galti ho Gai to maaf kar dena dhanyvad
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Bhai vese to story achhi hai but mujhe kuch kuch jagah problem lagi
1 aap thoda slow bhi likh sakte the..
2 aapne god wala concept jodkar thoda story ko alg disha me mod diya shaktiyan kahin se bhi dilwa dete...
Ye sirf suggestion hai jese aapne mange they inko otherwise bilkul naa le....
Fool and final khudke hisaab se story likhe sune sabki bass aaram aaram se story ko badhate jaaye...
 
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Bhai vese to story achhi hai but mujhe kuch kuch jagah problem lagi
1 aap thoda slow bhi likh sakte the..
2 aapne god wala concept jodkar thoda story ko alg disha me mod diya shaktiyan kahin se bhi dilwa dete...
Ye sirf suggestion hai jese aapne mange they inko otherwise bilkul naa le....
Fool and final khudke hisaab se story likhe sune sabki bass aaram aaram se story ko badhate jaaye...
Bhai aapane bilkul theek kaha Lekin is Kahani ka jab part tu aaega to usmein got ke related power hongi isliye maine ismein yah add abhi se add kar diya Taki bad mein kisi ko koi problem na ho apni Rai dene ke liye बहुत-बहुत shukriya
 

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Zabardast update bhai keep posting
 
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Update 3

Guruji: Vinayak main Tumhe Jo batane jaa Raha ho wo deyan se Sunna thek hain
Vinayak: jee guru ji boliye
Guruji: beta Tumhe tumhare parivar ke bare main batane jaa Raha ho
Vinayak: mere parivar ke bare main Kya baat hain Guruji main Kuch samja nahi
Guruji: main samjata ho Suno
Jis parivar ko Tum bachpan se apna mante AA Rahe wo tumhara parivar nahi hain beta
Vinayak (haste hue) majak achcha kar lete hain aap Guruji
Guruji: beta yah majak Nahin hai tumhari jindagi ki sabse Badi sacchai hai Jo aaj tak humne tumse chhupai thi ab samay a chuka hai tumhe tumhare parivar ke bare mein batane ka
Vinayak (serious hote hue) boliye Guruji

Guru ji; beta tumhare pita ka naam Rajiv rajvanshi hai jo ki India ka sabse bada businessman tha uske Sath Saath ek bahut bada Don bhi jiske samne har Koi jhukane per majbur ho jata itni power rakhta tha tumhara baap ab jab Koi insan bahut bada aadami banta hai to uske dost bhi bante hain aur dushman bhi aur vahi ho tumhare pita ke Sath tumhare pita ke bahut sare dushman Ban Gaye aksar police wale bhi Rajiv se madad mangne aate Hain aur vah hamesha har Kisi ki madad karta tumhare pita Delhi mein 2 sal tak rahe hain do salon mein Delhi mein jitna bhi crime tha sab Ka safaya Kar Diya usne aur wapas Rajasthan chale Gaye aur vahin per apni jindagi gujarne Lage Rajiv ne apne pita ke Pasand ki shaadi ki shaadi ke 2 sal bad Tum paida hue
Sab bahut achcha ja raha tha itne mein Meri Hi ek sissy ne mere Sath aur Rajiv ke sath dhokha Kiya aur Rajiv ke dushmanon ke sath hath mila liya aur tumhare pita se jhooth bol diya ki 2 mahine bad mein Delhi ja raha hun jab vah log 2 mahine bad Delhi ka mandir mein puja paath karne aur mujhse milane main to vahan unhen Naam Mila Lekin achanak se unki dushmanon ne unke hamla Kiya hamla itna Bada tha ke vahan per 200 se 300 log mare gaye the isase ab tumko andaza Laga sakte ho ki kitna bada hamla tha to samne mein tumhara parivar ka kya hua mujhe kuchh bhi nahin pata lekin tumhari bua ne apni jaan dekar tumhari jaan bachai tumhari bua tumhen lekar ek hospital bhag Gai hospital mein use waqt ek chhote se bacche ki mrutyu hui thi aur usse tumhen badal kar vahan se bhag gai aur raste mein tumhare pita ke dushmanon ne use pakadkar maar Diya
Vinayak: guruji yah sab aapko kaise pata aap to abhi kah rahe the ki aap vahan Gaye bhi Nahin
Guruji: jab tumhari bua ne tumhen use bacche se badal Diya tab usne ek doctor ko sari baten Bata di Thi aur vah doctor 2 mahine bad mujhse milane aaya aur sari baat mujhe Bata di tumhari Gale mein Jo locket pada hai vah tumhari phone hai tumhen pahnaya yah ek Tarah ka tracking device hai jisse mujhe pata chalta hai ki tum kahan ho aur kya kar rahe ho jab mujhe pata Chala ki Tum Mumbai mein ho tab maine apne kuchh wafadar sissy se kaha ki vah din Raat tumhari suraksha Karen aur unhone bhi vahi Kiya mere shishyon mein se ek shishya ne tumhare pita se bahut acchi dost se kanoon the jab tumhare pita tumhen hostel mein admission dilane ki baat kar rahe the tab mere usi shishya ne tumhare sautele pita ko Yahan per admission karvane ki baat ki aur tumhare sautele pita bhi man gaye aur tumhen Yahan admission dilva Diya jab Tum Yahan naye naye aaye the tab hamesha gum rahte the kisi se baat Nahin karte The
Tumhen is frustration hai nikaalne ke liye Meri hi Vikram ko tumse dosti karne ko kaha aur dere dere usne tumse dosti bhi kar li aur tumhen training ke liye bhi Raji Kar Diya
Guruji: beta tumhari bahut bada tyag karte tumhari jaan bachai Thi samay a chuka hai ab apni ushi bua ka maut Ka badla lene ka aur sath hi sath Apne parivar Ka badla lene ka samay a chuka hai aap apnon ke liye vighnharta banne ka aur apne dushmanon ke liye vighn karta

Vinayak bhi apni family ke bare mein jankari ho chuki thi aur dukhi bhi aur gussa use bahut a raha tha aur so Guruji se bole

Vinayak: aapane bilkul theek kaha Guruji samay a chuka hai ab UN sabki barbadi ka jisne mujhe barbad Kiya jisne mujhse mere parivar ki khushiyan sab kuchh chhina hai aap us sabko unke anjam tak pahunchana ka samay a chuka hai main kasam khata hun Apne pita ki apni Man ki aur apni use bua ki jisne Meri jaan bachane ki bhi Apne jante di aisi maut marunga UN sabko unhen Apne Sath Le jaane se tar tar kampegi
Guruji: han beta lekin usse pahle tumhen ek pariksha Deni Hogi aaj tak Maine tumhen jo bhi sikhaya hai uski pariksha
Vinayak: boliye Guruji Kaisi pariksha Deni Hogi mujhe
Guruji: Tum filhal apni jaane ki taiyari karo pariksha kab aur kaisi leni hai mujhe bahut ache se pata hai
Vinayak: theek hai guru ji Aage de mujhe
Guruji: kalyan ho beta tumhara vaise ek baat hai tum Yahan se Kahan jaaoge
Vinayak: main samjha Nahin Guruji
Guruji: Tum apne sotele parivar ke pass jaaoge ya kahin aur
Vinayak: vahan jakar Kya karunga ab jinhone kabhi bhi mujhe apna Nahin mana vahan kyon jaaun main Yahan se Delhi jaunga aur apne parivar ke bare mein pata lagaunga
Guruji: theek hai jao aur apni packing karo
Vinayak vahan se nikalkar sidhe hostel mein Chala jata hai aur apni packing karne lag jata hai kyunki Raat ke 10:00 baj rahe the aur Vinayak ko subah 8:00 baje Delhi Jana tha aur uske bad khana khakar so jata hai agale din subah Vinayak uthkar Naha dhokar fresh ho jata hai aur jogging Karne Chala jata hai vahan se hokar nashta karta hai aur ek bar FIR se apna Sara Saman check Karke nikal jata hai raste mein use Vikram bhi milta hai aur vah Vikram se puchta hai ki vah kahan apni Aage ki padhaai per karega to Vikram usse bolata hai ki Jahan Tum karoge Vinayak use batata hai ki vah apni Aage ki padhaai Delhi mein karega to vah bhi man jata hai aur kahta hai ki next week vah bhi Delhi a jaega Vinayak bhi man jata hai aur chal padta hai bus station ki taraf vahan jakar wo Delhi ki bus ki ticket karta hai aur baith jata hai bus mein aur chal padta hai Delhi ki taraf Lekin Vinayak ek baat se Anjan tha ki aage ek bahut bada khatra uska intezar kar raha hai
Abhi bus ne takreeban 1 ghante ka safar kiya tha kya achanak bus ruk Gai aur bus mein 5 se 6 nakabposh aadami ghus Gaye jinke hathon mein latest kism ke guns aur banduk the vah log sab ke upar apna yogdan dete Hain aur bolate Hain
Nakabposh1: agar Kisi ne bhi Hindi ki koshish ki to sabko maar Dunga main isliye chupchap baithe raho aur corporate karte raho
Bus mein jitni bhi pessenger baithe hue The sab chillane lagte Hain

Bachao bachao bachao


Nakabposh 2 : maine kaha na tu sab logon ko chupchap baithe raho Varna Apne anjam ke jimmedaar tum log khud hoge
Vinayak jab yah sunta hai to usse main a jata hai aur ek nakabposh ke munh per panch maar deta hai
Yah hamla UN per achanak hua tha isiliye unko sambhalne ka mauka tak na Mila jab Baki ke nakabposh yah dekhte hain ki unke Sathi per hamla hua hai to sab satark ho jate hain aur Vinayak Aage badhkar bakiyon ki taraf Chala jata hai abhi vah thoda hi Aage gaya tha kya achanak Vinayak ke aankhon ke samne andhera chha jata hai aur vah
Aap sab soch rahe honge achanak se kaise behosh ho gaya Tumhe Bata deta hoon jaise hi Vinayak Aage badhane Laga kuchh hi Aage badhata ke jiske munh per abhi vinayak ne panch Mara tha vah ud jata hai aur Vinayak gardan ki NAS ko daba Deta hai jiski vajah se Vinayak behosh ho jata hai
uske bad vah sare nakabposh milkar Vinayak ko bus se bahar Le jaate Hain aur ek Khai ki Tarah bhi chalte Hain aur uska hi mein Vinayak ko gira dete Hain to piche se bus driver ko ek achcha mauka Mil jata hai bus ko full speed se dauda dete Hain
Nakabposh3 : are vah bus to Chala Gaya hai ab Kya Karen
Nakabposh1: koi baat nahin hamara kam to ho gaya hai hamen ISI ko Yahan tak pahunchana tha Jo humne pahuncha diya ab chalo yahan se
Nakabpost 2: isko kuchh hoga to nahin na agar isko kuchh bhi hua to guru ji hamen Nahin chhodenge
Nakabposh1: Tum fikar na Karo kuchh Nahin Hoga usse guru ji ne special training di hai isko itni aasani se to yah Nahin Mar Sakta chalo ab Yahan se
Ji han doston yah attack Koi terrorist attack nahin tha balki Guruji ne karvaya tha Vinayak ki pariksha lene ke liye ab vah aage kya karta hai aaiae jante Hain
3 ghante tak behosh rahane ke bad Vinayak hosh mein aata hai jab vah aaspaas dekhta hai to khud ko ek jungle mein pata hai aur sochne lagta hai ki vah Yahan kaise a Gaya FIR dere dere use sab kuchh yad aane lagta hai
Jab sab kuchh use yad aata hai to Vinayak ko saaf karne lagta hai kyunki jungle ki mitti ki vajah se uske kapde pure kharab ho gaye the aur uske kapde jagha jagha fate hue the kyunki jab Vinayak pahadi se niche gir raha tha tab pedon mein atak gaya tha ISI vajah se uske kapde fat gaye the kher Vinayak uth kar Apne aspass dekta hain toh koi nahi tha pure jungle main sannata chhaya hua tha ek bar to Vinayak ke Dil mein bhi darr baith jata hai is sannate ko dekhkar FIR aapane dar ko kabu Karke Aage badhane lagta hai abhi wo toda hi aghe gaye tha ke achanak hi uske kanoon main ek dahad sunai deti hain
Aur wo dahad Kisi AUR ki nahi sher ki thi Vinayak use Sher ko dekhkar dar jata hun aur wapas Piche ki taraf bhaagane lagta hai shayad Vinayak ki Kismat acchi thi ki sher ki najar Vinayak per Nahin padi Vinayak bohut der tak daudta Raha jab vah thak jata hai to ek ped ki niche baith jata hai aur aaram karne lagta hai aur sochne lagta hai ki aap is jungle se kaise nikala jaaye abhi wo soch hi Raha tha ke achanak se Kahi se ek punch AA kar Vinayak ke moo per lagta hain aur
Vinayak hadbara kar apni soch se bahar aata hai aur aaspaas dekhta hai ki usko panch kisne mara jab vah aaspaas dekhta hai to Koi Nahin hota to sochta hai to shayad uska vaham hai to fir se aaram karne ped ke niche baithata hai aur apni aankhen band kar deta hai abhi usne aakar Pani ki Thi ke ek aur panch ki munh per padta hai aur Vinayak niche gir jata hai aur wapas khada hokar aaspaas dekhta hai aur jor se chillata hai
Vinayak: kaun hai samne aao agar himmat hai to samne aakar war kar is Tarah chhipkar Marne Ka Kya fayda
Tabhi ek admi ki hansne ke awaz Anne lagti Hain aur wo admi bolta hain
Admi : himmat to tujh mein bhi bahut hai bacche ki mere ilake mein ghus aye ho khir ab Tum AA hi gaye ho to tumhen maar Hi deta hun
Vinayak admi ki baat sunkar Bolta hain
Vinayak: pahle tu samne to a FIR batata hun tumhen ki Kaun kisko maarta hai
Admi : agar yahi tumhari aakhiri khwahish hai to theek hai abhi tumhari yah khwahish bhi puri kar deta hun
Itna bol kar vah aadami achanak se Vinayak ke samne prakat ho jata hai
Vinayak achanak se apne samne aadami ko prakat hota dekhkar thoda dar jata hai aur FIR apni dar ko kabu Karke bolata hai
Vinayak: Kon ho tum aur yeh aise achanak prakat kaise ho gaye
Admi: abhi to bahut himmat ki baat kar rahe the bacche ab Kahan Gai tumhari himmat kya dar lag raha hai
Vinayak: darta to main kisi ke baap se nahin hun Chala ja
Itna bol kar Vinayak use aadami ki taraf daudta hai jab wo admi dekta hain ke Vinayak uski taraf daud Raha hain to wo vi tayar ho jata Hain fight ke liye abhi vinayak jaise hi use aadami ki pass pahunchna hai Vinayak uchhalkar ek lath use aadami ke face per maarta hai aur aadami niche girta hai aur Bina waqt ganwae aadami fauran uth jata hai aur vah aadami ek aur panch Vinayak ke path per maarta hai Vinayak udata hua Piche jakar gir jata hai kyunki Vinayak pahle se Hi bahut jyada thaka hua tha fir bhi himmat Karke khada ho jata hai aur use aadami ko apni taraf aane ka ishara karta hai aur aadami daudta hua Vinayak ki taraf aata hai jaise hi vah Vinayak ke pass pahunchta hai use fir se panch Marne ki Koshish karta hai lekin Vinayak ek hath se uske fund ko block kar deta hai aur dusra panch ful takat se uske sine per maar deta hai aur vah aadami niche jakar girta hai vah aadami fir se himmat karte hain khada ho jata hai jaisi hi vah khada hota hai usse pahle hi Vinayak ne ek lath hawa main ghum kar us admi ke garden per de Mari aur wo admi phir se ghir jata Hain Lekin is admi ki shayad aaj Kismat kharab thi
Kyunki vah aadami jaise hi niche girta hai theek uske sar ke niche ek pathar pada tha jisse uska sar takra jata hai aur uske sar se khoon aane lagta hai aur vahi behosh ho jata hai use aadami ke behosh hote hain Vinayak sans Lene lagta hai aur Piche aakar wapas pair ke niche baithata hai aur aankhen band kar deta hai abhi usne aankhen band hi ki thi achanak se ek awaaz uske kanoon mein gunjane lagti Hain
Awaz : Vinayak beta kese ho tum
Vinayak ki awaaz sunkar apni aankhen kholta hai aur aaspaas dekhta hai Koi Nahin hota FIR use aadami ki taraf dekhta hai to ab vah aadami bhi gayab ho chuka tha to vah samajh jata hai aur bolata hai
Vinayak: kuchh der pahle to Meri jaan ke Piche pade the aur ab beta kuchh samajh Nahin a Rahi
AWaz : nahi wo main nahi tha woh koi aur tha jis ko Tumne hara diya hain aur ab Yaha se Chala Gaya hain
Vinayak: acha phir Tum Kon ho aur samne q nahi AA Rahe ho
Awaz : q ke tumhare aankhon mein vah Shakti Nahin hai Jo mujhe dekh sakun
Vinayak: acha phir hum bi toh sunhe ke Kon ho tum apna parichay do Kon ho tum
Awaz : ager yahi tumhari ichcha hai to suno main aur koi nahi balki
VIGHNHARTA GANESH HO MAIN
Vinayak jab yah sunta hai toh zor zor se hansne lagta hai aur Bolta hain
Vinayak: (haste hue) : ager Tum swayam vighnharta Ganesh ho to main Narayan hun ab yakin karo ki meri baat ka
Vinayak ki baat sun kar wo awaz Bolta hain
Awaz:Maine bola tha na ke Tum Yaqeen nahi karo ge toh phir kher koi baat nahi toh Dekho
Itna bolte hi uper asman se do rays Nikal kar aati Hain aur Vinayak ke aankhon mein samaa jati Hain iske bad jab Vinayak Apne aspass dekta hain phir dekta hain do uper Sach main vighnharta Ganesh the jab Vinayak yeh dekta hain toh Apne gutno ke bal beth kar apni kiye ki maafi magta Hain aur Bolta hain
Vinayak: mujhe maaf kar dijiye Prabhu mujhe yakin nahin a Raha ki aap swayam mere samne khade Hain main dhanya ho Gaya
GANESH ji : koi baat nahin putra utho aur meri baat dhyan se suno tumhen mera ek kam karna hai Vinayak
Vinayak: aagya de Prabhu
GANESH ji: hamen Gyan hai putra ki tumhen Apne parivar Ka badla Lene hetu Delhi ja rahe ho parantu tum apne parivar ke badle ke sath sath is dharti per fail hue paap kabhi hath mat karna hai
Vinayak: main kuchh samjha Nahin Prabhu
GANESH ji: samay aane per tum khud Hi samajh jaaoge filhal itna samajh lo ki tumhen is dharti per jitni bhi paap ho rahe hain UN sab Ka khatma karna hai jaise ke Jo dharti per Raj karna chahte hain jaise ke terrorist aur bade se bade Don aur organisations jiska maksad sirf duniya per Raj Karna hai un sab Ka khatma Tumne karna hoga aur iske liye main tumhen kuchh jaadui shaktiyan Dena chahta hun
Vinayak: parantu sirf main hi kyon Prabhu mere jaise to aur bhi Kai honge is dharti per
Ganesh ji : han hai parantu usmein tumhari jaisi kabiliyat Kisi mein bhi Nahin hai isiliye Maine tumhen chuna hai
Vinayak: Jo agya Prabhu
Ganesh ji: main tumhen apni shaktiyan de raha hun agar tum us saktiyou ko niyantrit karne lag jaaoge to tumhen bahut adhik samay lagega aur ISI bich tumhare parivar ke sath kuchh bura bhi ho sakta hai isiliye main tumhen ek magical system de raha hun uska upyog kaise karna hai vah system tumhen swayam Bata dega
Vinayak: jaise aapko uchit Lage Prabhu
Ganesh ji: kuchh sawal hai tumhare man mein tu poochh sakte ho
Vinayak: Prabhu Maine aj tak Kisi Ka bura nahi chaha hain na hi Kisi Ka bura Kiya hain phir mere Saath hi itna bura q ho Raha hain bachpan main mere parivar ke Saath Jo hua Kya wo Sahi tha
Ganesh ji: Ham mante Hain putra tumhare sath Jo hua bahut galat hua lekin yahi tumhari niyati hai aur tumhare niyati mein sadaiv sangharsh karna likha hai aur tum apni niyati ko chahkar bhi nahin badal sakte
Vinayak: parantu q Prabhu
Ganesh ji: wo is liye q ke tumhara janm ek bahut bade maksad ko anjam dene ke liye hua hai
Vinayak: kesa maksad Prabhu
Ganesh ji : wo samay Anne per the khud Hi pata chal jaye ga nikat samay mein ek bahut badi aur mahan Shakti dharti log per janm Lene Wali hai Ham chahte Hain uske janm Lene se pahle tumhen dharti per pahle hue paap Ka ant karna hoga Taki Jo Shakti janm len toh usko Apne maksad mein Koi rukavat paida na ho

Vinayak: Jo agya apka Prabhu
Ganesh ji: ek aur baat tumhari is jivan mein tumhari 3 shadiyan honi hai
Vinayak: yeh ap Kya ke Rahe ho Prabhu ajkal log 1 patni nahi sambal sakti aur main 3 3 kese sambal sakta ho
Ganesh ji yeh sun kar muskurate Hain aur bolte hain
Ganesh ji: acha toh Meri bi toh 2 patniyan Hain phir Maine kese sambal rakhi Hain
Vinayak: apto bagwaan Hain sab kar sakte hain Lekin main
Ganesh ji: koi baat nahi samay Anne per sab Kuch thek ho jaye ga acha Suno
Vinayak: boliye Prabhu
Ganesh ji: putra tumhari teen shadiyon ke sath tumhare sambandh bhi kahin striyon ke sath hoga kintu itna smaran rakhna tumhara pratham santan tumhari pahli patni se hona chahie aisa kyon tumhen samay aane per pata chal jaega

Yad rakhna theek hai
Vinayak: thek hain Prabhu
GANESH ji: acha ab main chalta ho
Itna bol kar Ganesh ji ke Sharir se ek aag ka gola Nikal kar Vinayak ke sharir main sama jata Hain aur Ganesh ji waha se gayab ho jate hain
Abhi vinayak yeh sab soch hi Raha tha ke yeh sab Sapna hain ya Sach itne main uske maan main ek awaz gunjti Hain
Good evening boss
Vinayak ki awaaz sunkar Apne aaspaas dekhta hai to Koi Nahin hota
Aur Vinayak apne aap se hi badbadata hai
Lagta hai mera dimag kharab ho gaya hai yah sab soch kar chal beta Vinayak ab is jungle se nikalne ka koi Rasta dhundh Nahin to yahi aaj tu Sher Ka khana banega

Abhi vah badbada hi raha tha ki achanak ek bar FIR se uske Man mein ek awaaz bhejti hai
Don't worry boss main hun na aapke sath aur abhi jo kuchh bhi aapane dekha vah Sapna Nahin hakikat hai
Vinayak: matlab Ganesh ji sach mein mujhse milane Aaye The
Ji han Boss sach mein aapse hi milane Aaye The
Vinayak: vaise tum kaun ho aur mujhe yah boss boss kyon bol rahi ho aur tum najar kyon Nahin a Rahi
Are kya Boss aap bhi na abhi abhi Ganesh ji ne aapko kya kaha tha ki vah aapko ek system denge ek magical system main vahi hun
Vinayak: Kya Sach main Tum ek magical system ho
System: jee ha boss main Sach main ek system ho and tumhare pass ab jaadui shaktiyan a chuki Hain jiska istemal kaise karna hai vah main aapko bataungi
Vinayak: thek hain phir jaldi jaldi batao kese karo in saktiyou ka istsmaal
System: are are aram se boss air saktiyou ko istamal Karne ager isna hi asan hota toh Kya Ganesh ji mujhe tumhare sarir main bejte Kya
Vinayak: ha yeh bi thek hain phir bolo Kya Karna Hoga mujhe
System: abhi nahi boss abhi Raat ho rahi pahla app aram karo phir
Vinayak: ha yeh bi thek hain per is jun
gle main aram karo kaha per itne bade bade machar hain kat Rahe Hain
System: don't worry boss main ho nnaap agar aap chaho to main tumhen fauran Delhi pahuncha sakti hun

Vinayak: Sach main woh kese
System woh aise he
Itna bol kar achanak se Vinayak Hawa mein udane lagta achanak se aisa hone per banaya ghabra jata hai aur iski munh se chith nikal jaati hai vah dar ke mare ne aankhen band kar deta hai jab vah aankh khulata hai Delhi gaye ek shandar Hotel ke samne khada hota hai
System: kesa Laga boss
Vinayak bohut hi zabardest per agali bar aisa karne se pahle mujhe please pata jarur Dena Nahin to mujhe heart attack a kar rahega
System: sorry boss fir se aisa Nahin karungi
Vinayak: it's okay
Itna bol kar Vinayak Hotel ke andar chala jata hun aur apne liye ek room book karta hai room mein jaane ke bad vah fresh hota hai kuchh khane ka order karta hai aur khana khakar so jata hai


~~~ajj ke liye itna hi baqi ka next update main

( Pahle Maine Socha tha ki ek fight wala update de dun lekin FIR Socha pahle Vinayak ho unki musical power de dun uske bad ki fight seen karenge Baki
Aap sab log bataiyega aapko update kaisa laga and please like karna aur sath mein comment bhi agar koi galti ho Gai to maaf kar dena dhanyvad
Bahot badhiya shaandar update
Tow guru ji ne Vinayak ko uski family ki poori haqeekat Bata di
Ab use dhoondhna h or sabse badla Lena
Magic power bhi mil gayi saath system bhi
Dekhte h aage kia hota h
 

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Bahot badhiya shaandar update
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Ab use dhoondhna h or sabse badla Lena
Magic power bhi mil gayi saath system bhi
Dekhte h aage kia hota h
Jee Bhai magical powers bi mil Gai hain pahle Maine Socha tha ke sirf medical powers do but badain Socha ke ager aisa Kiya toh deyan Laga kar hi medical powers control ho sakti hain is se acha ke isko ek system mil jaye jis se dere dere Vinayak ko apni powers ko bi Samaj aya jaye ga
 

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Guruji: Vinayak main Tumhe Jo batane jaa Raha ho wo deyan se Sunna thek hain
Vinayak: jee guru ji boliye
Guruji: beta Tumhe tumhare parivar ke bare main batane jaa Raha ho
Vinayak: mere parivar ke bare main Kya baat hain Guruji main Kuch samja nahi
Guruji: main samjata ho Suno
Jis parivar ko Tum bachpan se apna mante AA Rahe wo tumhara parivar nahi hain beta
Vinayak (haste hue) majak achcha kar lete hain aap Guruji
Guruji: beta yah majak Nahin hai tumhari jindagi ki sabse Badi sacchai hai Jo aaj tak humne tumse chhupai thi ab samay a chuka hai tumhe tumhare parivar ke bare mein batane ka
Vinayak (serious hote hue) boliye Guruji

Guru ji; beta tumhare pita ka naam Rajiv rajvanshi hai jo ki India ka sabse bada businessman tha uske Sath Saath ek bahut bada Don bhi jiske samne har Koi jhukane per majbur ho jata itni power rakhta tha tumhara baap ab jab Koi insan bahut bada aadami banta hai to uske dost bhi bante hain aur dushman bhi aur vahi ho tumhare pita ke Sath tumhare pita ke bahut sare dushman Ban Gaye aksar police wale bhi Rajiv se madad mangne aate Hain aur vah hamesha har Kisi ki madad karta tumhare pita Delhi mein 2 sal tak rahe hain do salon mein Delhi mein jitna bhi crime tha sab Ka safaya Kar Diya usne aur wapas Rajasthan chale Gaye aur vahin per apni jindagi gujarne Lage Rajiv ne apne pita ke Pasand ki shaadi ki shaadi ke 2 sal bad Tum paida hue
Sab bahut achcha ja raha tha itne mein Meri Hi ek sissy ne mere Sath aur Rajiv ke sath dhokha Kiya aur Rajiv ke dushmanon ke sath hath mila liya aur tumhare pita se jhooth bol diya ki 2 mahine bad mein Delhi ja raha hun jab vah log 2 mahine bad Delhi ka mandir mein puja paath karne aur mujhse milane main to vahan unhen Naam Mila Lekin achanak se unki dushmanon ne unke hamla Kiya hamla itna Bada tha ke vahan per 200 se 300 log mare gaye the isase ab tumko andaza Laga sakte ho ki kitna bada hamla tha to samne mein tumhara parivar ka kya hua mujhe kuchh bhi nahin pata lekin tumhari bua ne apni jaan dekar tumhari jaan bachai tumhari bua tumhen lekar ek hospital bhag Gai hospital mein use waqt ek chhote se bacche ki mrutyu hui thi aur usse tumhen badal kar vahan se bhag gai aur raste mein tumhare pita ke dushmanon ne use pakadkar maar Diya
Vinayak: guruji yah sab aapko kaise pata aap to abhi kah rahe the ki aap vahan Gaye bhi Nahin
Guruji: jab tumhari bua ne tumhen use bacche se badal Diya tab usne ek doctor ko sari baten Bata di Thi aur vah doctor 2 mahine bad mujhse milane aaya aur sari baat mujhe Bata di tumhari Gale mein Jo locket pada hai vah tumhari phone hai tumhen pahnaya yah ek Tarah ka tracking device hai jisse mujhe pata chalta hai ki tum kahan ho aur kya kar rahe ho jab mujhe pata Chala ki Tum Mumbai mein ho tab maine apne kuchh wafadar sissy se kaha ki vah din Raat tumhari suraksha Karen aur unhone bhi vahi Kiya mere shishyon mein se ek shishya ne tumhare pita se bahut acchi dost se kanoon the jab tumhare pita tumhen hostel mein admission dilane ki baat kar rahe the tab mere usi shishya ne tumhare sautele pita ko Yahan per admission karvane ki baat ki aur tumhare sautele pita bhi man gaye aur tumhen Yahan admission dilva Diya jab Tum Yahan naye naye aaye the tab hamesha gum rahte the kisi se baat Nahin karte The
Tumhen is frustration hai nikaalne ke liye Meri hi Vikram ko tumse dosti karne ko kaha aur dere dere usne tumse dosti bhi kar li aur tumhen training ke liye bhi Raji Kar Diya
Guruji: beta tumhari bahut bada tyag karte tumhari jaan bachai Thi samay a chuka hai ab apni ushi bua ka maut Ka badla lene ka aur sath hi sath Apne parivar Ka badla lene ka samay a chuka hai aap apnon ke liye vighnharta banne ka aur apne dushmanon ke liye vighn karta

Vinayak bhi apni family ke bare mein jankari ho chuki thi aur dukhi bhi aur gussa use bahut a raha tha aur so Guruji se bole

Vinayak: aapane bilkul theek kaha Guruji samay a chuka hai ab UN sabki barbadi ka jisne mujhe barbad Kiya jisne mujhse mere parivar ki khushiyan sab kuchh chhina hai aap us sabko unke anjam tak pahunchana ka samay a chuka hai main kasam khata hun Apne pita ki apni Man ki aur apni use bua ki jisne Meri jaan bachane ki bhi Apne jante di aisi maut marunga UN sabko unhen Apne Sath Le jaane se tar tar kampegi
Guruji: han beta lekin usse pahle tumhen ek pariksha Deni Hogi aaj tak Maine tumhen jo bhi sikhaya hai uski pariksha
Vinayak: boliye Guruji Kaisi pariksha Deni Hogi mujhe
Guruji: Tum filhal apni jaane ki taiyari karo pariksha kab aur kaisi leni hai mujhe bahut ache se pata hai
Vinayak: theek hai guru ji Aage de mujhe
Guruji: kalyan ho beta tumhara vaise ek baat hai tum Yahan se Kahan jaaoge
Vinayak: main samjha Nahin Guruji
Guruji: Tum apne sotele parivar ke pass jaaoge ya kahin aur
Vinayak: vahan jakar Kya karunga ab jinhone kabhi bhi mujhe apna Nahin mana vahan kyon jaaun main Yahan se Delhi jaunga aur apne parivar ke bare mein pata lagaunga
Guruji: theek hai jao aur apni packing karo
Vinayak vahan se nikalkar sidhe hostel mein Chala jata hai aur apni packing karne lag jata hai kyunki Raat ke 10:00 baj rahe the aur Vinayak ko subah 8:00 baje Delhi Jana tha aur uske bad khana khakar so jata hai agale din subah Vinayak uthkar Naha dhokar fresh ho jata hai aur jogging Karne Chala jata hai vahan se hokar nashta karta hai aur ek bar FIR se apna Sara Saman check Karke nikal jata hai raste mein use Vikram bhi milta hai aur vah Vikram se puchta hai ki vah kahan apni Aage ki padhaai per karega to Vikram usse bolata hai ki Jahan Tum karoge Vinayak use batata hai ki vah apni Aage ki padhaai Delhi mein karega to vah bhi man jata hai aur kahta hai ki next week vah bhi Delhi a jaega Vinayak bhi man jata hai aur chal padta hai bus station ki taraf vahan jakar wo Delhi ki bus ki ticket karta hai aur baith jata hai bus mein aur chal padta hai Delhi ki taraf Lekin Vinayak ek baat se Anjan tha ki aage ek bahut bada khatra uska intezar kar raha hai
Abhi bus ne takreeban 1 ghante ka safar kiya tha kya achanak bus ruk Gai aur bus mein 5 se 6 nakabposh aadami ghus Gaye jinke hathon mein latest kism ke guns aur banduk the vah log sab ke upar apna yogdan dete Hain aur bolate Hain
Nakabposh1: agar Kisi ne bhi Hindi ki koshish ki to sabko maar Dunga main isliye chupchap baithe raho aur corporate karte raho
Bus mein jitni bhi pessenger baithe hue The sab chillane lagte Hain

Bachao bachao bachao


Nakabposh 2 : maine kaha na tu sab logon ko chupchap baithe raho Varna Apne anjam ke jimmedaar tum log khud hoge
Vinayak jab yah sunta hai to usse main a jata hai aur ek nakabposh ke munh per panch maar deta hai
Yah hamla UN per achanak hua tha isiliye unko sambhalne ka mauka tak na Mila jab Baki ke nakabposh yah dekhte hain ki unke Sathi per hamla hua hai to sab satark ho jate hain aur Vinayak Aage badhkar bakiyon ki taraf Chala jata hai abhi vah thoda hi Aage gaya tha kya achanak Vinayak ke aankhon ke samne andhera chha jata hai aur vah
Aap sab soch rahe honge achanak se kaise behosh ho gaya Tumhe Bata deta hoon jaise hi Vinayak Aage badhane Laga kuchh hi Aage badhata ke jiske munh per abhi vinayak ne panch Mara tha vah ud jata hai aur Vinayak gardan ki NAS ko daba Deta hai jiski vajah se Vinayak behosh ho jata hai
uske bad vah sare nakabposh milkar Vinayak ko bus se bahar Le jaate Hain aur ek Khai ki Tarah bhi chalte Hain aur uska hi mein Vinayak ko gira dete Hain to piche se bus driver ko ek achcha mauka Mil jata hai bus ko full speed se dauda dete Hain
Nakabposh3 : are vah bus to Chala Gaya hai ab Kya Karen
Nakabposh1: koi baat nahin hamara kam to ho gaya hai hamen ISI ko Yahan tak pahunchana tha Jo humne pahuncha diya ab chalo yahan se
Nakabpost 2: isko kuchh hoga to nahin na agar isko kuchh bhi hua to guru ji hamen Nahin chhodenge
Nakabposh1: Tum fikar na Karo kuchh Nahin Hoga usse guru ji ne special training di hai isko itni aasani se to yah Nahin Mar Sakta chalo ab Yahan se
Ji han doston yah attack Koi terrorist attack nahin tha balki Guruji ne karvaya tha Vinayak ki pariksha lene ke liye ab vah aage kya karta hai aaiae jante Hain
3 ghante tak behosh rahane ke bad Vinayak hosh mein aata hai jab vah aaspaas dekhta hai to khud ko ek jungle mein pata hai aur sochne lagta hai ki vah Yahan kaise a Gaya FIR dere dere use sab kuchh yad aane lagta hai
Jab sab kuchh use yad aata hai to Vinayak ko saaf karne lagta hai kyunki jungle ki mitti ki vajah se uske kapde pure kharab ho gaye the aur uske kapde jagha jagha fate hue the kyunki jab Vinayak pahadi se niche gir raha tha tab pedon mein atak gaya tha ISI vajah se uske kapde fat gaye the kher Vinayak uth kar Apne aspass dekta hain toh koi nahi tha pure jungle main sannata chhaya hua tha ek bar to Vinayak ke Dil mein bhi darr baith jata hai is sannate ko dekhkar FIR aapane dar ko kabu Karke Aage badhane lagta hai abhi wo toda hi aghe gaye tha ke achanak hi uske kanoon main ek dahad sunai deti hain
Aur wo dahad Kisi AUR ki nahi sher ki thi Vinayak use Sher ko dekhkar dar jata hun aur wapas Piche ki taraf bhaagane lagta hai shayad Vinayak ki Kismat acchi thi ki sher ki najar Vinayak per Nahin padi Vinayak bohut der tak daudta Raha jab vah thak jata hai to ek ped ki niche baith jata hai aur aaram karne lagta hai aur sochne lagta hai ki aap is jungle se kaise nikala jaaye abhi wo soch hi Raha tha ke achanak se Kahi se ek punch AA kar Vinayak ke moo per lagta hain aur
Vinayak hadbara kar apni soch se bahar aata hai aur aaspaas dekhta hai ki usko panch kisne mara jab vah aaspaas dekhta hai to Koi Nahin hota to sochta hai to shayad uska vaham hai to fir se aaram karne ped ke niche baithata hai aur apni aankhen band kar deta hai abhi usne aakar Pani ki Thi ke ek aur panch ki munh per padta hai aur Vinayak niche gir jata hai aur wapas khada hokar aaspaas dekhta hai aur jor se chillata hai
Vinayak: kaun hai samne aao agar himmat hai to samne aakar war kar is Tarah chhipkar Marne Ka Kya fayda
Tabhi ek admi ki hansne ke awaz Anne lagti Hain aur wo admi bolta hain
Admi : himmat to tujh mein bhi bahut hai bacche ki mere ilake mein ghus aye ho khir ab Tum AA hi gaye ho to tumhen maar Hi deta hun
Vinayak admi ki baat sunkar Bolta hain
Vinayak: pahle tu samne to a FIR batata hun tumhen ki Kaun kisko maarta hai
Admi : agar yahi tumhari aakhiri khwahish hai to theek hai abhi tumhari yah khwahish bhi puri kar deta hun
Itna bol kar vah aadami achanak se Vinayak ke samne prakat ho jata hai
Vinayak achanak se apne samne aadami ko prakat hota dekhkar thoda dar jata hai aur FIR apni dar ko kabu Karke bolata hai
Vinayak: Kon ho tum aur yeh aise achanak prakat kaise ho gaye
Admi: abhi to bahut himmat ki baat kar rahe the bacche ab Kahan Gai tumhari himmat kya dar lag raha hai
Vinayak: darta to main kisi ke baap se nahin hun Chala ja
Itna bol kar Vinayak use aadami ki taraf daudta hai jab wo admi dekta hain ke Vinayak uski taraf daud Raha hain to wo vi tayar ho jata Hain fight ke liye abhi vinayak jaise hi use aadami ki pass pahunchna hai Vinayak uchhalkar ek lath use aadami ke face per maarta hai aur aadami niche girta hai aur Bina waqt ganwae aadami fauran uth jata hai aur vah aadami ek aur panch Vinayak ke path per maarta hai Vinayak udata hua Piche jakar gir jata hai kyunki Vinayak pahle se Hi bahut jyada thaka hua tha fir bhi himmat Karke khada ho jata hai aur use aadami ko apni taraf aane ka ishara karta hai aur aadami daudta hua Vinayak ki taraf aata hai jaise hi vah Vinayak ke pass pahunchta hai use fir se panch Marne ki Koshish karta hai lekin Vinayak ek hath se uske fund ko block kar deta hai aur dusra panch ful takat se uske sine per maar deta hai aur vah aadami niche jakar girta hai vah aadami fir se himmat karte hain khada ho jata hai jaisi hi vah khada hota hai usse pahle hi Vinayak ne ek lath hawa main ghum kar us admi ke garden per de Mari aur wo admi phir se ghir jata Hain Lekin is admi ki shayad aaj Kismat kharab thi
Kyunki vah aadami jaise hi niche girta hai theek uske sar ke niche ek pathar pada tha jisse uska sar takra jata hai aur uske sar se khoon aane lagta hai aur vahi behosh ho jata hai use aadami ke behosh hote hain Vinayak sans Lene lagta hai aur Piche aakar wapas pair ke niche baithata hai aur aankhen band kar deta hai abhi usne aankhen band hi ki thi achanak se ek awaaz uske kanoon mein gunjane lagti Hain
Awaz : Vinayak beta kese ho tum
Vinayak ki awaaz sunkar apni aankhen kholta hai aur aaspaas dekhta hai Koi Nahin hota FIR use aadami ki taraf dekhta hai to ab vah aadami bhi gayab ho chuka tha to vah samajh jata hai aur bolata hai
Vinayak: kuchh der pahle to Meri jaan ke Piche pade the aur ab beta kuchh samajh Nahin a Rahi
AWaz : nahi wo main nahi tha woh koi aur tha jis ko Tumne hara diya hain aur ab Yaha se Chala Gaya hain
Vinayak: acha phir Tum Kon ho aur samne q nahi AA Rahe ho
Awaz : q ke tumhare aankhon mein vah Shakti Nahin hai Jo mujhe dekh sakun
Vinayak: acha phir hum bi toh sunhe ke Kon ho tum apna parichay do Kon ho tum
Awaz : ager yahi tumhari ichcha hai to suno main aur koi nahi balki
VIGHNHARTA GANESH HO MAIN
Vinayak jab yah sunta hai toh zor zor se hansne lagta hai aur Bolta hain
Vinayak: (haste hue) : ager Tum swayam vighnharta Ganesh ho to main Narayan hun ab yakin karo ki meri baat ka
Vinayak ki baat sun kar wo awaz Bolta hain
Awaz:Maine bola tha na ke Tum Yaqeen nahi karo ge toh phir kher koi baat nahi toh Dekho
Itna bolte hi uper asman se do rays Nikal kar aati Hain aur Vinayak ke aankhon mein samaa jati Hain iske bad jab Vinayak Apne aspass dekta hain phir dekta hain do uper Sach main vighnharta Ganesh the jab Vinayak yeh dekta hain toh Apne gutno ke bal beth kar apni kiye ki maafi magta Hain aur Bolta hain
Vinayak: mujhe maaf kar dijiye Prabhu mujhe yakin nahin a Raha ki aap swayam mere samne khade Hain main dhanya ho Gaya
GANESH ji : koi baat nahin putra utho aur meri baat dhyan se suno tumhen mera ek kam karna hai Vinayak
Vinayak: aagya de Prabhu
GANESH ji: hamen Gyan hai putra ki tumhen Apne parivar Ka badla Lene hetu Delhi ja rahe ho parantu tum apne parivar ke badle ke sath sath is dharti per fail hue paap kabhi hath mat karna hai
Vinayak: main kuchh samjha Nahin Prabhu
GANESH ji: samay aane per tum khud Hi samajh jaaoge filhal itna samajh lo ki tumhen is dharti per jitni bhi paap ho rahe hain UN sab Ka khatma karna hai jaise ke Jo dharti per Raj karna chahte hain jaise ke terrorist aur bade se bade Don aur organisations jiska maksad sirf duniya per Raj Karna hai un sab Ka khatma Tumne karna hoga aur iske liye main tumhen kuchh jaadui shaktiyan Dena chahta hun
Vinayak: parantu sirf main hi kyon Prabhu mere jaise to aur bhi Kai honge is dharti per
Ganesh ji : han hai parantu usmein tumhari jaisi kabiliyat Kisi mein bhi Nahin hai isiliye Maine tumhen chuna hai
Vinayak: Jo agya Prabhu
Ganesh ji: main tumhen apni shaktiyan de raha hun agar tum us saktiyou ko niyantrit karne lag jaaoge to tumhen bahut adhik samay lagega aur ISI bich tumhare parivar ke sath kuchh bura bhi ho sakta hai isiliye main tumhen ek magical system de raha hun uska upyog kaise karna hai vah system tumhen swayam Bata dega
Vinayak: jaise aapko uchit Lage Prabhu
Ganesh ji: kuchh sawal hai tumhare man mein tu poochh sakte ho
Vinayak: Prabhu Maine aj tak Kisi Ka bura nahi chaha hain na hi Kisi Ka bura Kiya hain phir mere Saath hi itna bura q ho Raha hain bachpan main mere parivar ke Saath Jo hua Kya wo Sahi tha
Ganesh ji: Ham mante Hain putra tumhare sath Jo hua bahut galat hua lekin yahi tumhari niyati hai aur tumhare niyati mein sadaiv sangharsh karna likha hai aur tum apni niyati ko chahkar bhi nahin badal sakte
Vinayak: parantu q Prabhu
Ganesh ji: wo is liye q ke tumhara janm ek bahut bade maksad ko anjam dene ke liye hua hai
Vinayak: kesa maksad Prabhu
Ganesh ji : wo samay Anne per the khud Hi pata chal jaye ga nikat samay mein ek bahut badi aur mahan Shakti dharti log per janm Lene Wali hai Ham chahte Hain uske janm Lene se pahle tumhen dharti per pahle hue paap Ka ant karna hoga Taki Jo Shakti janm len toh usko Apne maksad mein Koi rukavat paida na ho

Vinayak: Jo agya apka Prabhu
Ganesh ji: ek aur baat tumhari is jivan mein tumhari 3 shadiyan honi hai
Vinayak: yeh ap Kya ke Rahe ho Prabhu ajkal log 1 patni nahi sambal sakti aur main 3 3 kese sambal sakta ho
Ganesh ji yeh sun kar muskurate Hain aur bolte hain
Ganesh ji: acha toh Meri bi toh 2 patniyan Hain phir Maine kese sambal rakhi Hain
Vinayak: apto bagwaan Hain sab kar sakte hain Lekin main
Ganesh ji: koi baat nahi samay Anne per sab Kuch thek ho jaye ga acha Suno
Vinayak: boliye Prabhu
Ganesh ji: putra tumhari teen shadiyon ke sath tumhare sambandh bhi kahin striyon ke sath hoga kintu itna smaran rakhna tumhara pratham santan tumhari pahli patni se hona chahie aisa kyon tumhen samay aane per pata chal jaega

Yad rakhna theek hai
Vinayak: thek hain Prabhu
GANESH ji: acha ab main chalta ho
Itna bol kar Ganesh ji ke Sharir se ek aag ka gola Nikal kar Vinayak ke sharir main sama jata Hain aur Ganesh ji waha se gayab ho jate hain
Abhi vinayak yeh sab soch hi Raha tha ke yeh sab Sapna hain ya Sach itne main uske maan main ek awaz gunjti Hain
Good evening boss
Vinayak ki awaaz sunkar Apne aaspaas dekhta hai to Koi Nahin hota
Aur Vinayak apne aap se hi badbadata hai
Lagta hai mera dimag kharab ho gaya hai yah sab soch kar chal beta Vinayak ab is jungle se nikalne ka koi Rasta dhundh Nahin to yahi aaj tu Sher Ka khana banega

Abhi vah badbada hi raha tha ki achanak ek bar FIR se uske Man mein ek awaaz bhejti hai
Don't worry boss main hun na aapke sath aur abhi jo kuchh bhi aapane dekha vah Sapna Nahin hakikat hai
Vinayak: matlab Ganesh ji sach mein mujhse milane Aaye The
Ji han Boss sach mein aapse hi milane Aaye The
Vinayak: vaise tum kaun ho aur mujhe yah boss boss kyon bol rahi ho aur tum najar kyon Nahin a Rahi
Are kya Boss aap bhi na abhi abhi Ganesh ji ne aapko kya kaha tha ki vah aapko ek system denge ek magical system main vahi hun
Vinayak: Kya Sach main Tum ek magical system ho
System: jee ha boss main Sach main ek system ho and tumhare pass ab jaadui shaktiyan a chuki Hain jiska istemal kaise karna hai vah main aapko bataungi
Vinayak: thek hain phir jaldi jaldi batao kese karo in saktiyou ka istsmaal
System: are are aram se boss air saktiyou ko istamal Karne ager isna hi asan hota toh Kya Ganesh ji mujhe tumhare sarir main bejte Kya
Vinayak: ha yeh bi thek hain phir bolo Kya Karna Hoga mujhe
System: abhi nahi boss abhi Raat ho rahi pahla app aram karo phir
Vinayak: ha yeh bi thek hain per is jun
gle main aram karo kaha per itne bade bade machar hain kat Rahe Hain
System: don't worry boss main ho nnaap agar aap chaho to main tumhen fauran Delhi pahuncha sakti hun

Vinayak: Sach main woh kese
System woh aise he
Itna bol kar achanak se Vinayak Hawa mein udane lagta achanak se aisa hone per banaya ghabra jata hai aur iski munh se chith nikal jaati hai vah dar ke mare ne aankhen band kar deta hai jab vah aankh khulata hai Delhi gaye ek shandar Hotel ke samne khada hota hai
System: kesa Laga boss
Vinayak bohut hi zabardest per agali bar aisa karne se pahle mujhe please pata jarur Dena Nahin to mujhe heart attack a kar rahega
System: sorry boss fir se aisa Nahin karungi
Vinayak: it's okay
Itna bol kar Vinayak Hotel ke andar chala jata hun aur apne liye ek room book karta hai room mein jaane ke bad vah fresh hota hai kuchh khane ka order karta hai aur khana khakar so jata hai


~~~ajj ke liye itna hi baqi ka next update main

( Pahle Maine Socha tha ki ek fight wala update de dun lekin FIR Socha pahle Vinayak ho unki musical power de dun uske bad ki fight seen karenge Baki
Aap sab log bataiyega aapko update kaisa laga and please like karna aur sath mein comment bhi agar koi galti ho Gai to maaf kar dena dhanyvad
Shaandar jabardast update
 
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Subhe Vinayak uth kar fresh hota hai aur khana karta Hain phir wo system se baate karta hai
System: good morning boss
Vinayak: good morning
System kesi Rahi apki neend
Vinayak: bohut achi
System: acha boss apki ek baat Karni thi
Vinayak: haa bolo
System: boss ap mera Naam raklo na please
Vinayak: use Kya ho ga
system : battai ho pahle tak to lo
Vinayak: acha thek hain thari awaz bohut hi sweet Hain aur Tum bi ishi liye aj se tumhara Naam sweetie ho ga kese Raha Naam
System: thanks soo much boss
System ke chup hoti hi Vinayak ke aankhon ke samne ek screen AA jata Hain
[Name Vinayak

Age 18
Status student

Stats:
Strength - 96/100
Intelligence - 91/100
Agility - 88/100
Endurance - 84/100
Appearance - 85/100
Ramming point 15+ 10 bonus points]
Vinayak yeh dek kar system se puchta hai
Vinayak: yeh Kya hain sweetie
(Doston ab se main system ki jagha sweetie likhunga)
Sweetie: boss yeh point hain ap iska istamal Karke aur strong ho sakte ho
Vinayak: acha aur apni magical powers kese hasel kar sakta ho
Sweetie: simple boss mere system main total 20 level Hain jab bi ap 20 level complete karoge to apko apki sari magical powers mil jayegi
Vinayak: acha aur is main kitna time Lage ga
Sweetie: boss yeh ap per depend karta hai ap jitna jaldi kar Sako ya jitna late karo wo ap per depend karta Hain
Vinayak: acha thek hain chalo ab main bi chalta ho
Sweetie: kaha boss
Vinayak: aree bus station per waha per Mera bag Hoga ushi ko Lene
Sweetie: okay boss
Phir Vinayak bahar AA kar hotel se check out karta Hain aur bill bi pay kar deta Hain aur hotel se bahar AA kar ek texi wale ko rokne ka ishara karta Hain aur texi main beth jata Hain
Texi wala: jee sir kaha Jana hain apko
Vinayak: sun yar mujhe ek bike ke showroomain Leke ja
Texi wala : okay Saab
Phir wo texi wala 15 minutes main ek bike ke showroomain ke samne apni bike ko rok deta Hain phir Vinayak texi wale ko paise deta Hain aur abhi wo showroom ke Ander Jane hi wala the ke picha se ek admi Vinayak ko awaz Laga ta Hain aur Bolta hain ke
Admi: Kya ap bike kharidne ja Rahe ho
Vinayak: jee ha per ap Kon Hain aur yeh q poch Rahe ho
Admi: wo Kya hain na ke main apni bike bichna chahta hun ager ap isko Lele toh bari mehribani Hogi apki
Vinayak: acha toh dekao apni bike kaha Hain
Admi : aye mere Saath
Phir Vinayak us admi ke Saath chal deta Hain todi dorr Jane ke bad admi ek bike ki taraf ishara karta Hain aur Bolta hain
Admi : sir yeh bike hain Meri
Vinayak: bike toh achi hain phir bichna q chahte ho
Admi : wo Kiya hain na Meri beti ka college main admission Ke liye paise ki zarorat Jain ishi liye
Vinayak: acha thek hain ek kaam karo bike ko showroom main Leke chalo wo jitna bolege main de Dunga
Admi : thek hain sir
Phir wo admi aur Vinayak dono showroom AA jate hain aur showroom wale se bolte hain ke
Vinayak: Suno Bhai is bike ki Kismat kitni hain
Showroom wala: bichni hain Kya
Vinayak: bichni nahi hain Maine Lene hain (admi ki taraf ishara karte how )inse
Showroom wala: Bhai Kitne time chale hain apki bike
Admi; 2 mahine ho Gai hain Bhai apki hi showroom se li thi
Showroom wala: acha thek hain P 5 mint with kijiye main apko Batata hun
Showroom wala Dekho sir yeh bike
KTM 250 Duke hain waise ager p new lo toh 2lakh30 hajar tak jayegi Lekin yeh 2 month Chali hoi hain is liye iski Kismat 2lakh ho gi
Vinayak: thek hain thank you
Phir wo admi sare paper dekha ta Hain jos ko Vinayak check karta hIm sab ok hota Hain phir Vinayak us admi ko online payment karta Hain
(Doston Vinayak ke pass Apne paise the Jo bachpan se Vinayak ko uska sotela bap har month Vinayak ke account main transfer karta hain Jo ab achi kazi raqam uske account main thi
Phir Vinayak bike start karke bus station ki taraf Chala jata hai
Waha pouch kar sidhe unke office chal jata hain aue dor per knock karta hain toh Ander se permission mil jati Hain
Ander Jane ke bad Vinayak officer ko Apne aane ki vajah batata hai vah officer pahle heran ho jata hai FIR usse puchta hai ki aap Bach kaise Gaye UN logo se
Vinayak unse jhooth bolata hai ki police ne use bachaya FIR vah officer bhi kuchh Nahin bolata aur Vinayak ko uska bag aur apna Saman de deta hai FIR Vinayak wapas chal leta hai vahan se jaane ke bad Vinayak ek Hotel mein chai pita hai FIR vahan se uth kar bahar AA jata Hain ki tabhi Vinayak ko Kisi chij ki girne ki awaaz aati hai jab Vinayak idhar udhar dekhta hai to ek aurat niche giri hui thi aur vah behosh Thi Vinayak usko uthata hai aur ek chair per bita deta hai aur uske moo per Pani Marta Hain aur us aurat ko hosh a jata hai Vinayak aurat se puchta hai kya usko Kya hua to vah bolati hai ki shayad blood pressure high ho gaya hai use aurat ko uske Ghar tak pahunchane ka bolata hai vah aurat to pahle mana kar deti hai FIR Mang jaati Hain aur Vinayak ke sath uske bike per baithkar Chali jaati hai Vinayak use aurat se Rasta puchte puchte uske Ghar tak pahunchta hai aur us aurat ko utar kar chalne hi lagta hain ke wo aurat Vinayak ko zid Karke apni Saath Ander ane ka kehta hain toh Vinayak bi maan jata Hain aur us aurat ke Saath Ander Chala jata Hain wo aurat Vinayak ko bethne ka bol kar ander Chali jati Hain aur chai banati Hain aur wo beth kar chai pite pite Vinayak se bate Karti Hain bato hi bato main usko pata chal jata Hain ke us aurat ke husband Hain Jo kiryane ki ek CHOTI dukan chalate Hain aur inki ek beti Hain aur ek beta aur Inka beta ek ladki ke Pyar ke chakar main padkar Ghar se bag gaya Hain
Abhi yeh dono baate hi kar rahe te ke bahar ka door per nok hoti hain aurat uth kar gate kolti hain to bahar se ek admi aur ek ladki Ander as jaye hain us admi ko Vinayak dek kar Samaj jate hain yeh is aurat ka husband Hain aur wo ladki inki beti us admi ki jese hi Nazar Vinayak per padti Hain to wo Vinayak se pochta hain
Admi : Kya hua Saab ap Yaha per
Vinayak: jee ha Maine Socha nahi tha phir apse mulakat ho jaye gi
Phir wo aurat sab Kuch admi ko Bata deti hain ke wo behosh ho Gai thi aur ishi ne mujhe yaha tak Leke aye Hain toh wo admi aur ladki Vinayak ko danyawad dete Hain phir wo admi aurat se Bolta hain ke inki beti ka college main admission ho gaya Hain aur yeh bi Bata dete Hain ke Vinayak ne hi I nki bike li hain
Short introduction
Vivek Sharma age ( 45) ek kiryane ki CHOTI si dukan Hain inki
Rakhi Sharma age (41) ek house wife Hain
Sanaya Sharma age ( 19) ek college student Hain
Inke bete ka koi role nahi hain

Vivek Sharma : beta tumhara bohut bohut sukarya Tumne Meri madad Karne ke liye ager hamare layak Kuch hain toh bol sakte ho
Vinayak: waise to Kuch kas nahi per ager mujhe ek room mil jata kiraye per toh acha hota Kya hain na ek toh hotel main paise bi ziyada lagte Hain aur khana bi thek se nahi milta
Vivek : is main Kya hai. Beta vaise bhi hamare Yahan ek kamra Khali hai Tum chaho to usmein rah sakte ho
Vinayak: thank you uncle vaise rent Kitna hoga
Vivek : beta Tum 5000 de dena
Vinayak: theek hai uncle main aapko 5000 Nahin 10000 Diya karunga
RAkhi : aur wo q
Vinayak: vah isliye kyunki main Akela hun aur mujhe khana banana Nahin aata to kya aap khana banaa kar de sakte hain mujhe
Rakhi : ismein kya hai theek hai
Vinayak: thank you aunty Tumhe aaj se Hi shift karta hun
FIR Vinayak unko ₹30000 deta hai aur apna Saman use room mein rakh deta hai aur rakhi ko bolkar college ki taraf nikal jata Hain jab Vinayak college pahunchta hai to vahan per bahut bheed hoti hai fir bhi 1 ghante ke intezar ke bad Vinayak admission form bhara deta hai aur submit karte apna admission karva deta hai hain vahan se Chala jata hai ine sab mein kareeb 2:00 baj jaate Hain FIR Vinayak vahin per Kisi Hotel mein khana khata hai aur FIR sochta hai ki aage kya karna hai
Sweety: Boss ek baat samajh nahi aa rahi
Vinayak: aur wo Kya
Sweety: yahi bahut guru ji ne aapko bataya tha ki itna Bada hamla hua hai jismein 200 se 300 log mare Gaye Hain uske bavjud bhi police ne koi action Nahin liya iska matlab saaf hai ki police ke kuchh bade adhikari bhi inse mile hue the
Vinayak: aur yah tumhen kaise pata Chala
Sweety: simple si baat hai Boss jab main aapke sharir mein gai to mujhe aapki puri information Mil Gai thi
Vinayak: interesting yahi to main bhi soch Raha Hun per Kaun Mila hua hai kyunki bahut sare officer Hain ab ham har kisi ki alag alag to kundli Nahin nikal sakte
Sweety: aap theek kah rahe hain Boss Lekin agar use hamle ko dhyan se dekha jaaye to hamla bahut bada tha ismein inspector ya Kisi aur kagaj shamil hua to upar se jarur pressure aata lekin aisa kuchh Nahin hua Matlab ki high officer ismein hamle mein involve hain jaisa ka commissioner SP dig for MLA
Vinayak:  Tum theek kah rahi ho lekin kaise karun kuchh samajh Nahin a Raha
Sweety: Boss aapke pass paise hain kya
Vinayak: han hai to sahi kyon Tum kyon poochh rahi ho
Sweety: vah isliye Boss kyunki aap Kisi bhi inspector ko kuchh paise de dijiye aur usse tumhara Kam hai aasan ho jaega
Vinayak: han yaar Tumne to bilkul theek kaha hai chalo FIR chalte Hain police station
FIR Vinayak vahan se uthkar police station ki taraf Chala jata hai
Aur aur inspector ko₹10000 deta hai sare information nikalwa leta hai inspector ko jyada kuchh to Nahin pata tha Lekin jo bhi pata ta wo Vinayak usko Bata deta hai
Jisko sunkar Vinayak chehre per muskan a jaati hai aur vah inspector ko thank u bolkar nikal jata hai vahan se



~~~~~ aj ke liye itna hi Baki ka agle update main ~~~~~

( Sorry for late update vah kya hai na main Raj family of the hero ki story padh raha tha ISI vajah se thoda let ho Gaya
Baki aap bataiye story padhakar kaisa laga and agar koi galti ho Gai ho to comment mein please bata Dena story ko like karna dhanyvad


Aur kal ek friend ne mujhe bataya the ke front size toda Bada Karke likho agar Kisi bhi friend ko pata ho ki front size kaise Bada karte Hain to please bata do mujhe kyunki mujhe nahin pata kaise Bada karte Hain main is froum mein new hun)
 
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