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Badhiya shaandar updateUpdate 4
Subhe Vinayak uth kar fresh hota hai aur khana karta Hain phir wo system se baate karta hai
System: good morning boss
Vinayak: good morning
System kesi Rahi apki neend
Vinayak: bohut achi
System: acha boss apki ek baat Karni thi
Vinayak: haa bolo
System: boss ap mera Naam raklo na please
Vinayak: use Kya ho ga
system : battai ho pahle tak to lo
Vinayak: acha thek hain thari awaz bohut hi sweet Hain aur Tum bi ishi liye aj se tumhara Naam sweetie ho ga kese Raha Naam
System: thanks soo much boss
System ke chup hoti hi Vinayak ke aankhon ke samne ek screen AA jata Hain
[Name Vinayak
Age 18
Status student
Stats:
Strength - 96/100
Intelligence - 91/100
Agility - 88/100
Endurance - 84/100
Appearance - 85/100
Ramming point 15+ 10 bonus points]
Vinayak yeh dek kar system se puchta hai
Vinayak: yeh Kya hain sweetie
(Doston ab se main system ki jagha sweetie likhunga)
Sweetie: boss yeh point hain ap iska istamal Karke aur strong ho sakte ho
Vinayak: acha aur apni magical powers kese hasel kar sakta ho
Sweetie: simple boss mere system main total 20 level Hain jab bi ap 20 level complete karoge to apko apki sari magical powers mil jayegi
Vinayak: acha aur is main kitna time Lage ga
Sweetie: boss yeh ap per depend karta hai ap jitna jaldi kar Sako ya jitna late karo wo ap per depend karta Hain
Vinayak: acha thek hain chalo ab main bi chalta ho
Sweetie: kaha boss
Vinayak: aree bus station per waha per Mera bag Hoga ushi ko Lene
Sweetie: okay boss
Phir Vinayak bahar AA kar hotel se check out karta Hain aur bill bi pay kar deta Hain aur hotel se bahar AA kar ek texi wale ko rokne ka ishara karta Hain aur texi main beth jata Hain
Texi wala: jee sir kaha Jana hain apko
Vinayak: sun yar mujhe ek bike ke showroomain Leke ja
Texi wala : okay Saab
Phir wo texi wala 15 minutes main ek bike ke showroomain ke samne apni bike ko rok deta Hain phir Vinayak texi wale ko paise deta Hain aur abhi wo showroom ke Ander Jane hi wala the ke picha se ek admi Vinayak ko awaz Laga ta Hain aur Bolta hain ke
Admi: Kya ap bike kharidne ja Rahe ho
Vinayak: jee ha per ap Kon Hain aur yeh q poch Rahe ho
Admi: wo Kya hain na ke main apni bike bichna chahta hun ager ap isko Lele toh bari mehribani Hogi apki
Vinayak: acha toh dekao apni bike kaha Hain
Admi : aye mere Saath
Phir Vinayak us admi ke Saath chal deta Hain todi dorr Jane ke bad admi ek bike ki taraf ishara karta Hain aur Bolta hain
Admi : sir yeh bike hain Meri
Vinayak: bike toh achi hain phir bichna q chahte ho
Admi : wo Kiya hain na Meri beti ka college main admission Ke liye paise ki zarorat Jain ishi liye
Vinayak: acha thek hain ek kaam karo bike ko showroom main Leke chalo wo jitna bolege main de Dunga
Admi : thek hain sir
Phir wo admi aur Vinayak dono showroom AA jate hain aur showroom wale se bolte hain ke
Vinayak: Suno Bhai is bike ki Kismat kitni hain
Showroom wala: bichni hain Kya
Vinayak: bichni nahi hain Maine Lene hain (admi ki taraf ishara karte how )inse
Showroom wala: Bhai Kitne time chale hain apki bike
Admi; 2 mahine ho Gai hain Bhai apki hi showroom se li thi
Showroom wala: acha thek hain P 5 mint with kijiye main apko Batata hun
Showroom wala Dekho sir yeh bike
KTM 250 Duke hain waise ager p new lo toh 2lakh30 hajar tak jayegi Lekin yeh 2 month Chali hoi hain is liye iski Kismat 2lakh ho gi
Vinayak: thek hain thank you
Phir wo admi sare paper dekha ta Hain jos ko Vinayak check karta hIm sab ok hota Hain phir Vinayak us admi ko online payment karta Hain
(Doston Vinayak ke pass Apne paise the Jo bachpan se Vinayak ko uska sotela bap har month Vinayak ke account main transfer karta hain Jo ab achi kazi raqam uske account main thi
Phir Vinayak bike start karke bus station ki taraf Chala jata hai
Waha pouch kar sidhe unke office chal jata hain aue dor per knock karta hain toh Ander se permission mil jati Hain
Ander Jane ke bad Vinayak officer ko Apne aane ki vajah batata hai vah officer pahle heran ho jata hai FIR usse puchta hai ki aap Bach kaise Gaye UN logo se
Vinayak unse jhooth bolata hai ki police ne use bachaya FIR vah officer bhi kuchh Nahin bolata aur Vinayak ko uska bag aur apna Saman de deta hai FIR Vinayak wapas chal leta hai vahan se jaane ke bad Vinayak ek Hotel mein chai pita hai FIR vahan se uth kar bahar AA jata Hain ki tabhi Vinayak ko Kisi chij ki girne ki awaaz aati hai jab Vinayak idhar udhar dekhta hai to ek aurat niche giri hui thi aur vah behosh Thi Vinayak usko uthata hai aur ek chair per bita deta hai aur uske moo per Pani Marta Hain aur us aurat ko hosh a jata hai Vinayak aurat se puchta hai kya usko Kya hua to vah bolati hai ki shayad blood pressure high ho gaya hai use aurat ko uske Ghar tak pahunchane ka bolata hai vah aurat to pahle mana kar deti hai FIR Mang jaati Hain aur Vinayak ke sath uske bike per baithkar Chali jaati hai Vinayak use aurat se Rasta puchte puchte uske Ghar tak pahunchta hai aur us aurat ko utar kar chalne hi lagta hain ke wo aurat Vinayak ko zid Karke apni Saath Ander ane ka kehta hain toh Vinayak bi maan jata Hain aur us aurat ke Saath Ander Chala jata Hain wo aurat Vinayak ko bethne ka bol kar ander Chali jati Hain aur chai banati Hain aur wo beth kar chai pite pite Vinayak se bate Karti Hain bato hi bato main usko pata chal jata Hain ke us aurat ke husband Hain Jo kiryane ki ek CHOTI dukan chalate Hain aur inki ek beti Hain aur ek beta aur Inka beta ek ladki ke Pyar ke chakar main padkar Ghar se bag gaya Hain
Abhi yeh dono baate hi kar rahe te ke bahar ka door per nok hoti hain aurat uth kar gate kolti hain to bahar se ek admi aur ek ladki Ander as jaye hain us admi ko Vinayak dek kar Samaj jate hain yeh is aurat ka husband Hain aur wo ladki inki beti us admi ki jese hi Nazar Vinayak per padti Hain to wo Vinayak se pochta hain
Admi : Kya hua Saab ap Yaha per
Vinayak: jee ha Maine Socha nahi tha phir apse mulakat ho jaye gi
Phir wo aurat sab Kuch admi ko Bata deti hain ke wo behosh ho Gai thi aur ishi ne mujhe yaha tak Leke aye Hain toh wo admi aur ladki Vinayak ko danyawad dete Hain phir wo admi aurat se Bolta hain ke inki beti ka college main admission ho gaya Hain aur yeh bi Bata dete Hain ke Vinayak ne hi I nki bike li hain
Short introduction
Vivek Sharma age ( 45) ek kiryane ki CHOTI si dukan Hain inki
Rakhi Sharma age (41) ek house wife Hain
Sanaya Sharma age ( 19) ek college student Hain
Inke bete ka koi role nahi hain
Vivek Sharma : beta tumhara bohut bohut sukarya Tumne Meri madad Karne ke liye ager hamare layak Kuch hain toh bol sakte ho
Vinayak: waise to Kuch kas nahi per ager mujhe ek room mil jata kiraye per toh acha hota Kya hain na ek toh hotel main paise bi ziyada lagte Hain aur khana bi thek se nahi milta
Vivek : is main Kya hai. Beta vaise bhi hamare Yahan ek kamra Khali hai Tum chaho to usmein rah sakte ho
Vinayak: thank you uncle vaise rent Kitna hoga
Vivek : beta Tum 5000 de dena
Vinayak: theek hai uncle main aapko 5000 Nahin 10000 Diya karunga
RAkhi : aur wo q
Vinayak: vah isliye kyunki main Akela hun aur mujhe khana banana Nahin aata to kya aap khana banaa kar de sakte hain mujhe
Rakhi : ismein kya hai theek hai
Vinayak: thank you aunty Tumhe aaj se Hi shift karta hun
FIR Vinayak unko ₹30000 deta hai aur apna Saman use room mein rakh deta hai aur rakhi ko bolkar college ki taraf nikal jata Hain jab Vinayak college pahunchta hai to vahan per bahut bheed hoti hai fir bhi 1 ghante ke intezar ke bad Vinayak admission form bhara deta hai aur submit karte apna admission karva deta hai hain vahan se Chala jata hai ine sab mein kareeb 2:00 baj jaate Hain FIR Vinayak vahin per Kisi Hotel mein khana khata hai aur FIR sochta hai ki aage kya karna hai
Sweety: Boss ek baat samajh nahi aa rahi
Vinayak: aur wo Kya
Sweety: yahi bahut guru ji ne aapko bataya tha ki itna Bada hamla hua hai jismein 200 se 300 log mare Gaye Hain uske bavjud bhi police ne koi action Nahin liya iska matlab saaf hai ki police ke kuchh bade adhikari bhi inse mile hue the
Vinayak: aur yah tumhen kaise pata Chala
Sweety: simple si baat hai Boss jab main aapke sharir mein gai to mujhe aapki puri information Mil Gai thi
Vinayak: interesting yahi to main bhi soch Raha Hun per Kaun Mila hua hai kyunki bahut sare officer Hain ab ham har kisi ki alag alag to kundli Nahin nikal sakte
Sweety: aap theek kah rahe hain Boss Lekin agar use hamle ko dhyan se dekha jaaye to hamla bahut bada tha ismein inspector ya Kisi aur kagaj shamil hua to upar se jarur pressure aata lekin aisa kuchh Nahin hua Matlab ki high officer ismein hamle mein involve hain jaisa ka commissioner SP dig for MLA
Vinayak: Tum theek kah rahi ho lekin kaise karun kuchh samajh Nahin a Raha
Sweety: Boss aapke pass paise hain kya
Vinayak: han hai to sahi kyon Tum kyon poochh rahi ho
Sweety: vah isliye Boss kyunki aap Kisi bhi inspector ko kuchh paise de dijiye aur usse tumhara Kam hai aasan ho jaega
Vinayak: han yaar Tumne to bilkul theek kaha hai chalo FIR chalte Hain police station
FIR Vinayak vahan se uthkar police station ki taraf Chala jata hai
Aur aur inspector ko₹10000 deta hai sare information nikalwa leta hai inspector ko jyada kuchh to Nahin pata tha Lekin jo bhi pata ta wo Vinayak usko Bata deta hai
Jisko sunkar Vinayak chehre per muskan a jaati hai aur vah inspector ko thank u bolkar nikal jata hai vahan se
~~~~~ aj ke liye itna hi Baki ka agle update main ~~~~~
( Sorry for late update vah kya hai na main Raj family of the hero ki story padh raha tha ISI vajah se thoda let ho Gaya
Baki aap bataiye story padhakar kaisa laga and agar koi galti ho Gai ho to comment mein please bata Dena story ko like karna dhanyvad
Aur kal ek friend ne mujhe bataya the ke front size toda Bada Karke likho agar Kisi bhi friend ko pata ho ki front size kaise Bada karte Hain to please bata do mujhe kyunki mujhe nahin pata kaise Bada karte Hain main is froum mein new hun)
Vinayak ne apna admission kerwa lia or saath rehne or khane ko kamra bhi mil gaya
Ab dekhte h police inspector ne kia Jan kaari di