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Dhruv ke saath kiska taanka lagega???

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:applause:wow Bahut hi Shandar aur lajawab Brilliant update bhai ekdum jhakaas dhamakedaar mind blowing,
Aapne sari baton ko bade hi behtareen dhang se dikhaya hai.
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FALSHBACK CONTINUED
"dhruv?? dhruv??"anuradha chillaye ja rahi thi

"Kya hai mom??"bol apne kamre ka darwaza khola dhruv ne

"Ander a sakti hoon??"anuradha ne poochha

"Aaiye"bol darwaze se hat gaya dhruv

Anuradha aakar bed par baith gayi.kuch der waise hi baithi rahi.

"Baitho beta"bol anuradha ne baithne ka ishara kiya

"Kya hai mom"bol dhruv baith gaya

"Beta.....dekh abhi tu bada ho gaya hai.ab dheere dheere zimmedari lena seekhe le.sab kuch us vishal ke bas ki baat nahi.tum chaar bhai ek saath business sambhaloge tab jaakar business khada hoga beta"anuradha boli

"Are relax mom iske liye vishal aur avinash bhaiyya hai na??mere to khelne koodne ke din hai,khair aaj party hai mom aur mujhe late ho raha hai,bye"bol apni maa ko ek hug dekar nikal gaya dhruv

Anuradha ne ek phone kiya

"Boliye madam,kya khayal hai??apni company ko merge karenge Grover's ke saath"doosri aur se awaaz aayi

"Jaan bhi chali jaayegi tab bhi nahi"swabhimani swar me anuradha boli

"Six months,fir to company gayi aapki,all the best"bol phone rakh diya gaya

Anuradha ne apne purse me se ek photo nikala

"Sorry niranjan,mai is company ko bacha nahi paayi"bol footfootkar rone lagi anuradha

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PARTY HOUSE
"Wow tere friend ne to wakai mast arrangements kiya hua hai bro"karan ne neha se kaha

Party full in thi.music ekdum High aur poori ki poori college lag raha tha ki yahi a gayi ho

"Waise karan kis par line maar raha hai??"dhruv ne karan se poochha

"Abey chal.mere type ki koi nahi hai"karan bola

"Ya ye bolo ki koi ise ghaas nahi dal raha"neha ne kaha

Is baat par dhruv aur neha hasne lage aur ek doosre ko hifi kiya

"Acha mai abhi aayi"bol neha chali gayi

"Bataya use??"karan ne poochha

"K kya???"dhruv ne poochha

"Abey tu usse pyaar karta hai,bol use"karan ne haskar kaha

"Tujhe kaise pata chala??"hairani ke saath dhruv ne poocha.

"Dost hoon tera,samjha ??ab ja.aaj last day hai college ka"bol dhakka dekar dhruv ko bhej diya

Dhruv darte hue ek baar peecha muda,karan ne thumbs up dikhaya.fir dhruv neha ko khojne laga

Idhar udhar dekhte hue dhruv sidiyon se jab upar ja raha tha use hasne ki awaz aayi

"Are bata kyun nahi deti tum apne gharwalo ko neha??"

"Kya batana yaar,dhruv aur karan bhaiyya se hi to baat karni hai,ek baar tumhe job lag gayi.fir to hamari shaadi"neha boli

DHADAM DHADAM DHADAM

dhruv ke pair KAMZOR pad rahe the,kaano se jo suna wo yakeen nahi ho raha tha,sab kuch toot gaya tha,bikhar gaya tha

Aansu ki dhara behne lagi aankhon se
Wo daud kar ghar se bahar aakar ek sunsan jagah par rone laga,shayad hi kabhi aisa roya tha wo.jise sachhe dil se chaha usi ne aaj uska dil tod diya
Lekin lekin dhruv ne bhi to apne dil ka haal kabhi nahi sunaya tha.fir neha ki kahan galti thi.

Nahi wo jakar dono ko congratulate karega.yahi sochkar dhruv wapas party me a gaya.aur us room me pohunch gaya

"D dhruv i can explain.y y ye samar hai samar goyal"behan ne sar jhukakar kaha

"Hmm to ab sab kuch chupaya ja raha hai hum logo se??"dhruv ne zabardasti muskurane ki koshish hi

" A aisa kuch nahi hai ...mai.."

"Chod tu karan ko bula fir baat karenge,mai manaunga use"dhruv bola

"Sachhiiii"bol lipat gayi dhruv se neha.dhruv chahkar bhi apna haath neha ke peeth par na rakh saka

Aur fir neha daudkar neeche karan ke paas a gai

"Dhruv ne propose kiya"karan ne ye pochkar chaunka diya neha ko

"Propose??"neha ne poocha

"Haan tujhe propose hi to karne ja raha tha wo"karan ne muskurate hue kaha

"Oh god karan bhaiyya jaldi chalo "bol karan ka haath pakadkar upar jaane lagi neha


Udhar samar se baatein kar raha tha dhruv achanak ek goli chali

GHAI

samar ne hichki li aur neeche ludak gaya.

SAMAR

peeche se neha aur karan halke bakke khade the.neha daudkar samar se lipat gayi.dhruv ke haath me bandook thi

"Ye tune kya kiya dhruv samar ko maar diya.tujhe kya laga tu samar ko maarkar mujhe pa lega??ha ha ha.mai kisi ki nahi hoon.mai khud ki hoon"bol betahasha hasne lagi neha aur fir behosh ho gayi.

Dhruv aage aaya use pakadne ke liye lekin karan ne dhakka dekar door kar diya dhruv ko jo door jakar gira

"Door rakh apne gande haath mere behen se,tujh jaisi gandi naali ke keede ko apna dost banakar jo bhool ki uski hi saza mil rahi hai mujhe,tera mera rishta aaj se khatam.ab hum jab bhi milenge.dushmano ki tarah,ab bhaag yahan se."zahar ugalne laga karan

Dhruv chupchap jaane laga

"Aur haan tujhe mai barbaad kar dunga dhruv.teri barbaadi hi mera maksad hoga"bol apni behen ko sambhalne laga karan.

Dhruv nikal gaya wahan se aur anjane raah me chalne laga.sab dudh budh kho chuka tha wo.tabhi uski phone bajne lagi.aur bajti hi ja rahi thi

Saamne se a rahe ek aadmi ne dhruv ko bataya ki uska phone baj raha tha

"Hello"dheere se dhruv ne kaha

"Anuradha mausi ka accident ho gaya dhruv,zyada time nahi hai unke paas,jaldi a ja"bol vishal ne phone rakh diya
 

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FALSHBACK CONTINUED
"dhruv?? dhruv??"anuradha chillaye ja rahi thi

"Kya hai mom??"bol apne kamre ka darwaza khola dhruv ne

"Ander a sakti hoon??"anuradha ne poochha

"Aaiye"bol darwaze se hat gaya dhruv

Anuradha aakar bed par baith gayi.kuch der waise hi baithi rahi.

"Baitho beta"bol anuradha ne baithne ka ishara kiya

"Kya hai mom"bol dhruv baith gaya

"Beta.....dekh abhi tu bada ho gaya hai.ab dheere dheere zimmedari lena seekhe le.sab kuch us vishal ke bas ki baat nahi.tum chaar bhai ek saath business sambhaloge tab jaakar business khada hoga beta"anuradha boli

"Are relax mom iske liye vishal aur avinash bhaiyya hai na??mere to khelne koodne ke din hai,khair aaj party hai mom aur mujhe late ho raha hai,bye"bol apni maa ko ek hug dekar nikal gaya dhruv

Anuradha ne ek phone kiya

"Boliye madam,kya khayal hai??apni company ko merge karenge Grover's ke saath"doosri aur se awaaz aayi

"Jaan bhi chali jaayegi tab bhi nahi"swabhimani swar me anuradha boli

"Six months,fir to company gayi aapki,all the best"bol phone rakh diya gaya

Anuradha ne apne purse me se ek photo nikala

"Sorry niranjan,mai is company ko bacha nahi paayi"bol footfootkar rone lagi anuradha

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------
PARTY HOUSE
"Wow tere friend ne to wakai mast arrangements kiya hua hai bro"karan ne neha se kaha

Party full in thi.music ekdum High aur poori ki poori college lag raha tha ki yahi a gayi ho

"Waise karan kis par line maar raha hai??"dhruv ne karan se poochha

"Abey chal.mere type ki koi nahi hai"karan bola

"Ya ye bolo ki koi ise ghaas nahi dal raha"neha ne kaha

Is baat par dhruv aur neha hasne lage aur ek doosre ko hifi kiya

"Acha mai abhi aayi"bol neha chali gayi

"Bataya use??"karan ne poochha

"K kya???"dhruv ne poochha

"Abey tu usse pyaar karta hai,bol use"karan ne haskar kaha

"Tujhe kaise pata chala??"hairani ke saath dhruv ne poocha.

"Dost hoon tera,samjha ??ab ja.aaj last day hai college ka"bol dhakka dekar dhruv ko bhej diya

Dhruv darte hue ek baar peecha muda,karan ne thumbs up dikhaya.fir dhruv neha ko khojne laga

Idhar udhar dekhte hue dhruv sidiyon se jab upar ja raha tha use hasne ki awaz aayi

"Are bata kyun nahi deti tum apne gharwalo ko neha??"

"Kya batana yaar,dhruv aur karan bhaiyya se hi to baat karni hai,ek baar tumhe job lag gayi.fir to hamari shaadi"neha boli

DHADAM DHADAM DHADAM

dhruv ke pair KAMZOR pad rahe the,kaano se jo suna wo yakeen nahi ho raha tha,sab kuch toot gaya tha,bikhar gaya tha

Aansu ki dhara behne lagi aankhon se
Wo daud kar ghar se bahar aakar ek sunsan jagah par rone laga,shayad hi kabhi aisa roya tha wo.jise sachhe dil se chaha usi ne aaj uska dil tod diya
Lekin lekin dhruv ne bhi to apne dil ka haal kabhi nahi sunaya tha.fir neha ki kahan galti thi.

Nahi wo jakar dono ko congratulate karega.yahi sochkar dhruv wapas party me a gaya.aur us room me pohunch gaya

"D dhruv i can explain.y y ye samar hai samar goyal"behan ne sar jhukakar kaha

"Hmm to ab sab kuch chupaya ja raha hai hum logo se??"dhruv ne zabardasti muskurane ki koshish hi

" A aisa kuch nahi hai ...mai.."

"Chod tu karan ko bula fir baat karenge,mai manaunga use"dhruv bola

"Sachhiiii"bol lipat gayi dhruv se neha.dhruv chahkar bhi apna haath neha ke peeth par na rakh saka

Aur fir neha daudkar neeche karan ke paas a gai

"Dhruv ne propose kiya"karan ne ye pochkar chaunka diya neha ko

"Propose??"neha ne poocha

"Haan tujhe propose hi to karne ja raha tha wo"karan ne muskurate hue kaha

"Oh god karan bhaiyya jaldi chalo "bol karan ka haath pakadkar upar jaane lagi neha


Udhar samar se baatein kar raha tha dhruv achanak ek goli chali

GHAI

samar ne hichki li aur neeche ludak gaya.

SAMAR

peeche se neha aur karan halke bakke khade the.neha daudkar samar se lipat gayi.dhruv ke haath me bandook thi

"Ye tune kya kiya dhruv samar ko maar diya.tujhe kya laga tu samar ko maarkar mujhe pa lega??ha ha ha.mai kisi ki nahi hoon.mai khud ki hoon"bol betahasha hasne lagi neha aur fir behosh ho gayi.

Dhruv aage aaya use pakadne ke liye lekin karan ne dhakka dekar door kar diya dhruv ko jo door jakar gira

"Door rakh apne gande haath mere behen se,tujh jaisi gandi naali ke keede ko apna dost banakar jo bhool ki uski hi saza mil rahi hai mujhe,tera mera rishta aaj se khatam.ab hum jab bhi milenge.dushmano ki tarah,ab bhaag yahan se."zahar ugalne laga karan

Dhruv chupchap jaane laga

"Aur haan tujhe mai barbaad kar dunga dhruv.teri barbaadi hi mera maksad hoga"bol apni behen ko sambhalne laga karan.

Dhruv nikal gaya wahan se aur anjane raah me chalne laga.sab dudh budh kho chuka tha wo.tabhi uski phone bajne lagi.aur bajti hi ja rahi thi

Saamne se a rahe ek aadmi ne dhruv ko bataya ki uska phone baj raha tha

"Hello"dheere se dhruv ne kaha

"Anuradha mausi ka accident ho gaya dhruv,zyada time nahi hai unke paas,jaldi a ja"bol vishal ne phone rakh diya
FALSHBACK CONTINUED
"dhruv?? dhruv??"anuradha chillaye ja rahi thi

"Kya hai mom??"bol apne kamre ka darwaza khola dhruv ne

"Ander a sakti hoon??"anuradha ne poochha

"Aaiye"bol darwaze se hat gaya dhruv

Anuradha aakar bed par baith gayi.kuch der waise hi baithi rahi.

"Baitho beta"bol anuradha ne baithne ka ishara kiya

"Kya hai mom"bol dhruv baith gaya

"Beta.....dekh abhi tu bada ho gaya hai.ab dheere dheere zimmedari lena seekhe le.sab kuch us vishal ke bas ki baat nahi.tum chaar bhai ek saath business sambhaloge tab jaakar business khada hoga beta"anuradha boli

"Are relax mom iske liye vishal aur avinash bhaiyya hai na??mere to khelne koodne ke din hai,khair aaj party hai mom aur mujhe late ho raha hai,bye"bol apni maa ko ek hug dekar nikal gaya dhruv

Anuradha ne ek phone kiya

"Boliye madam,kya khayal hai??apni company ko merge karenge Grover's ke saath"doosri aur se awaaz aayi

"Jaan bhi chali jaayegi tab bhi nahi"swabhimani swar me anuradha boli

"Six months,fir to company gayi aapki,all the best"bol phone rakh diya gaya

Anuradha ne apne purse me se ek photo nikala

"Sorry niranjan,mai is company ko bacha nahi paayi"bol footfootkar rone lagi anuradha

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------
PARTY HOUSE
"Wow tere friend ne to wakai mast arrangements kiya hua hai bro"karan ne neha se kaha

Party full in thi.music ekdum High aur poori ki poori college lag raha tha ki yahi a gayi ho

"Waise karan kis par line maar raha hai??"dhruv ne karan se poochha

"Abey chal.mere type ki koi nahi hai"karan bola

"Ya ye bolo ki koi ise ghaas nahi dal raha"neha ne kaha

Is baat par dhruv aur neha hasne lage aur ek doosre ko hifi kiya

"Acha mai abhi aayi"bol neha chali gayi

"Bataya use??"karan ne poochha

"K kya???"dhruv ne poochha

"Abey tu usse pyaar karta hai,bol use"karan ne haskar kaha

"Tujhe kaise pata chala??"hairani ke saath dhruv ne poocha.

"Dost hoon tera,samjha ??ab ja.aaj last day hai college ka"bol dhakka dekar dhruv ko bhej diya

Dhruv darte hue ek baar peecha muda,karan ne thumbs up dikhaya.fir dhruv neha ko khojne laga

Idhar udhar dekhte hue dhruv sidiyon se jab upar ja raha tha use hasne ki awaz aayi

"Are bata kyun nahi deti tum apne gharwalo ko neha??"

"Kya batana yaar,dhruv aur karan bhaiyya se hi to baat karni hai,ek baar tumhe job lag gayi.fir to hamari shaadi"neha boli

DHADAM DHADAM DHADAM

dhruv ke pair KAMZOR pad rahe the,kaano se jo suna wo yakeen nahi ho raha tha,sab kuch toot gaya tha,bikhar gaya tha

Aansu ki dhara behne lagi aankhon se
Wo daud kar ghar se bahar aakar ek sunsan jagah par rone laga,shayad hi kabhi aisa roya tha wo.jise sachhe dil se chaha usi ne aaj uska dil tod diya
Lekin lekin dhruv ne bhi to apne dil ka haal kabhi nahi sunaya tha.fir neha ki kahan galti thi.

Nahi wo jakar dono ko congratulate karega.yahi sochkar dhruv wapas party me a gaya.aur us room me pohunch gaya

"D dhruv i can explain.y y ye samar hai samar goyal"behan ne sar jhukakar kaha

"Hmm to ab sab kuch chupaya ja raha hai hum logo se??"dhruv ne zabardasti muskurane ki koshish hi

" A aisa kuch nahi hai ...mai.."

"Chod tu karan ko bula fir baat karenge,mai manaunga use"dhruv bola

"Sachhiiii"bol lipat gayi dhruv se neha.dhruv chahkar bhi apna haath neha ke peeth par na rakh saka

Aur fir neha daudkar neeche karan ke paas a gai

"Dhruv ne propose kiya"karan ne ye pochkar chaunka diya neha ko

"Propose??"neha ne poocha

"Haan tujhe propose hi to karne ja raha tha wo"karan ne muskurate hue kaha

"Oh god karan bhaiyya jaldi chalo "bol karan ka haath pakadkar upar jaane lagi neha


Udhar samar se baatein kar raha tha dhruv achanak ek goli chali

GHAI

samar ne hichki li aur neeche ludak gaya.

SAMAR

peeche se neha aur karan halke bakke khade the.neha daudkar samar se lipat gayi.dhruv ke haath me bandook thi

"Ye tune kya kiya dhruv samar ko maar diya.tujhe kya laga tu samar ko maarkar mujhe pa lega??ha ha ha.mai kisi ki nahi hoon.mai khud ki hoon"bol betahasha hasne lagi neha aur fir behosh ho gayi.

Dhruv aage aaya use pakadne ke liye lekin karan ne dhakka dekar door kar diya dhruv ko jo door jakar gira

"Door rakh apne gande haath mere behen se,tujh jaisi gandi naali ke keede ko apna dost banakar jo bhool ki uski hi saza mil rahi hai mujhe,tera mera rishta aaj se khatam.ab hum jab bhi milenge.dushmano ki tarah,ab bhaag yahan se."zahar ugalne laga karan

Dhruv chupchap jaane laga

"Aur haan tujhe mai barbaad kar dunga dhruv.teri barbaadi hi mera maksad hoga"bol apni behen ko sambhalne laga karan.

Dhruv nikal gaya wahan se aur anjane raah me chalne laga.sab dudh budh kho chuka tha wo.tabhi uski phone bajne lagi.aur bajti hi ja rahi thi

Saamne se a rahe ek aadmi ne dhruv ko bataya ki uska phone baj raha tha

"Hello"dheere se dhruv ne kaha

"Anuradha mausi ka accident ho gaya dhruv,zyada time nahi hai unke paas,jaldi a ja"bol vishal ne phone rakh diya
Bohat hi dard bhari zindagi hain Dhurv ki waqai aur in sab ke baad itne dushman. Koi apna kehnay wala bhi nahi hain har ek dushman hi dushman hai.
 
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Bohat hi dard bhari zindagi hain Dhurv ki waqai aur in sab ke baad itne dushman. Koi apna kehnay wala bhi nahi hain har ek dushman hi dushman hai.
Isliye to mai keh raha tha bro dhruv ke ateet ke saath sab kuch juda hua hai.flashback khatam nahi hua hai abhi.
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:shocked: Dhurv ne Samar ko mara yeh me believe nhi kar sakta iske piche mujhe bahut badi sajis lag rahi hai...
 
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