Romance BADLA

[Swaraj]

Wow!!!!! Sharon aka sharmili ne pehla teer to bohat sahi choda seedha neviditta ke dil ke aar paar aur ab bari hai Avi ki dekhay uske liye kia plan kia hain. Sab ko sath karne me lagi hui hain magar khud uski jaan ko khatra hain coz Gaurav chal pada hain usay marney. Bhai Sharon ke character ko khatam mat kar dena please warna story me jaan na rahegi. Aur ho sake to thoda kaldi update dena is baar ki tarah 12 din baad nahi boss coz continuation bohat zaroori joti specially aap jis level pe likhtey ho bhai.

Wahi ab karne ki soch raha hoon bro
Do stories complete kar li ab agent 2 aur is par dhyan doonga
Updates ab regular ayenge

 

[RAAZ]

Wahi ab karne ki soch raha hoon bro
Do stories complete kar li ab agent 2 aur is par dhyan doonga
Updates ab regular ayenge

Good but abhi Agent 2 thoda ruk ke start kare pehlay isay atleast last phase me lekar aa jaye tab agent 2 shuru karey aakhir woh aapki best story ka sequel hai. Aur doosri kaun si complete kar li story.

 

[Swaraj]

Good but abhi Agent 2 thoda ruk ke start kare pehlay isay atleast last phase me lekar aa jaye tab agent 2 shuru karey aakhir woh aapki best story ka sequel hai. Aur doosri kaun si complete kar li story.

Bro wo meri short story thi
Pagle sahab ki kabr

 

[Jitu kumar]

Jungle me hamesha do saman saath hone chahiye
Paani ki bottle aur mosquito repellent.ye baat dhruv ke dimag me a he se ghus gayi aaj

"Dhruv Neenu nahi aaying"sharon ne maasoomiyat ke saath kaha.

"Kya problem hai yaar so jao na"dhruv halke se irritate hokar bola

"Pehli Baar 31st bina friends ke mana rahi hoon.pata hai papa aaj ka din mere liye free rakhte hai,din me hum poori family ek saath lunch karte hai"sharon apne aansoo pochte hue boli

Dhruv chup hi raha.anuradha ke dehant ke baad vishal ka divorce ho chuka tha.isliye sab kuch chod chaad business me koodna pada.saare dost peeche choot gaye.masti,maza ,pyaar ,ishq aur family kya hai kuch pata hi nahi.ghar me bhi sirf business ki hi baatein hoti hai.

"Pata hai tum bhi miss kar rahe ho na family ko??"sharon ne poochha

Dhruv muskuraya.31st ki raat ek anjaan ladki ke saath.pata nahi zindagi aur kya kya din dikhayegi.waise khoobsurat to hai,cute hai lekin akad aur ghamand koot koot kar bhara hai is ladki mein.shayad paison ka ghamand hai ise

"Sharon happy new year"achanak dhruv muskurate hue bola

Chaunk uthi sharon.saal ka pehla wish ye aadmi karega???hain???
Waise thoda bohut thik thak hai shakl.thoda skinny hai.

"Maine kaha happy new year sharon ji"dhruv fir bola

"H happy new year dhruv"bol sone ki koshish karne lagi sharon lekin aaj is dudhiya chandani raat me ek chashmish ladke ke saath yun jungle me raat guzaarna kya experience hai boss

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USA
TRING TRING
"bolo"vishal bhaari awaaz me bola

"Happy new year vishal"doosri aur se awaaz aayi

"Aur kuch??"vishal ne seedhe seedhe poocha

"Kam se kam wapas wish to kar dete vishal"doosri aur se awaaz aayi

"Kuch aur baatein hai??ya phone rakhun"vishal irritate ho raha tha

"Dhruv ke baare me suna.koi khabar..."

"Dhruv ki chinta karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai nivedita, actually hamare kisi bhi sadasya ke baare me tension lene ki koi zaroorat nahi"vishal bola

"Kya dhruv mera bhai nahi??"nivedita boli

"Jis bhai ko sare aam thappad mara tha usse itna lagav??kamaal hai nivedita divorce ko kai saal ho gaye,ab natak karna chodo"vishal daant peeskar bola

"Vishal wo moment tensed tha,divorce ka din tha aur dhruv sulah karne ki zid par ada hua tha isliye..."

"Isliye haath utha diya uspar.wow.ek baat kaan kholkar sun lo nivedita grover mai to zameen aasman ek kar apne bhai ko khoj nikalunga,lekin agar mujhe pata chala ki uske gayab hone ke peeche tumhare family ka haath hai,to yaad rakhna.tahalka macha doonga grover industries par"bol phone rakh deta hai vishal

Phir kuch sochkar phone ghumata Hai

"Book an earliest flight for me to India "bol phone kaat deta hai vishal

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MALAD POLICE STATION
"Saab ek boodhi aurat aayi hai.milne ki zid kar rahi hai"constable SI ko bola

"Bhej do"SI bola

"Saab saab maine kaha tha na,kaha tha na"aurat khush hote hue ander aayi

"Arey aap??aap ko bola tha na ki aapke bete ke baare me kuch nahi pata chala"SI bola

"Lekin maine TV par dekha hai saab,mera beta hai wo,ye dekhiye newspaper me photo aayi hai uski"boodhi aurat excited hote hue boli

SI ne photo dekha aur kaha
"Kahan maa ji,ye Dhruv singh hai mashoor business tycoon.ye to india me rehta bhi nahi america me rehta hai,samjhi.ye aapka beta nahi hai"SI samjhate hue bola

"Lekin...lekin"boodhi aurat ko vishwas hi nahi ho raha tha.lekin kya karti muh latkakar aansu pochkar chali gayi

"Kya ho raha hai??"door se inspector iyer ki awaa aayi

"Arey saab wahi gaurav wala problem.aai shapat bohut tedha case lag raha hai"SI ne sab kuch samjhaya

Sab kuch sunkar iyer soch me pad gaya

Awesome story bhai,
maine ye story xp par padhi thi,
lekin yaha story me kuchh changes lag rahe hai,
abhi tak to story poori suspence me hi chal rahi hai,
dekhte hai ab aage kya hota hai

 

[Swaraj]

Awesome story bhai,
maine ye story xp par padhi thi,
lekin yaha story me kuchh changes lag rahe hai,
abhi tak to story poori suspence me hi chal rahi hai,
dekhte hai ab aage kya hota hai

Haan bhai thode changes kiye hai maine.lekin ab is story ko bhi complete karunga

 

[Jitu kumar]

Awesome story bhai,
behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing story hai,
ab bhi bahot saare suspence baaki hai,
sharon ne poori family ko ek karne ke liye kosish shuru kar di hai,
udhar nivedita ke man me vishal ke dusri shadi ka baat daal diya hai,
idhar avinash ko alag hone se bacha liya hai,
dekhte hai ab aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update

 

[Sajid111]

Just finished bro

Aaj hi padhna start kiya aur aaj hi khatam kiya.

Bahut interesting aur suspence wala laga
...


Itne update aagye par aaj bhi har ek person ke life me kuch na kuch suspence hai...


Babut hi damdar plot hai bro


Bechari riya..mujhe laga main lead hogi..

Par wo mar gyi...


Sharon ka role jabardsht hai


Mujhe to lagta h ki neha ke bf ko warne wala seen bhi suspence hi h...


Karan ka kya hoga jab hakikat pata chalega....

Everything that you done is superb bro


But


But.

Yar logo ke response sahi nahi h....


Itna update huwa but page sirf 40...


Comment bhi ek do ko chhor ke sab ke sab chhote...

Waise bhai . Ek request hai
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Jabardsht story hai bhai


Keep rocking

 

[Swaraj]

Awesome story bhai,
behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing story hai,
ab bhi bahot saare suspence baaki hai,
sharon ne poori family ko ek karne ke liye kosish shuru kar di hai,
udhar nivedita ke man me vishal ke dusri shadi ka baat daal diya hai,
idhar avinash ko alag hone se bacha liya hai,
dekhte hai ab aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update

Abhi to sharon ki jaan ke laale pade hai bro dekhiye kya hota hai

 

[Swaraj]

Just finished bro

Aaj hi padhna start kiya aur aaj hi khatam kiya.

Bahut interesting aur suspence wala laga
...


Itne update aagye par aaj bhi har ek person ke life me kuch na kuch suspence hai...


Babut hi damdar plot hai bro


Bechari riya..mujhe laga main lead hogi..

Par wo mar gyi...


Sharon ka role jabardsht hai


Mujhe to lagta h ki neha ke bf ko warne wala seen bhi suspence hi h...


Karan ka kya hoga jab hakikat pata chalega....

Everything that you done is superb bro


But


But.

Yar logo ke response sahi nahi h....


Itna update huwa but page sirf 40...


Comment bhi ek do ko chhor ke sab ke sab chhote...

Waise bhai . Ek request hai
Copy paste karte time bold use kar le..taki highlight hota rahega ....



Jabardsht story hai bhai


Keep rocking

Bro ye meri apni story hai.isliyr no copy paste
Badla,agent,agent 2 meri apni khud ki story hai.
Haan" pagle sahab ki kabr "
Adapted story hai jo srishendu Mukherji ke novel se maine twist kar likha hai.
Lekin baaki ke stories meri apni hai
Actually is story se itna response mil nahi raha tha isliye maine rok diya tha
Ab aap logo ke karan fir se continue kar raha hoon
Support karte rahiyr

 

[Swaraj]

RUDRA TOWERS
"Mai kehta hoon ek baar fir se soch lo avinash"vishal bola

"Nahi bhaiya mere bas ki nahi hai shayad.waise bhi jo mai karne ja raha tha wo to aapne dekh hi liya"bol abhinav chala gaya chair chod ke

Tanya jaise hi Rudra towers me ghusi sab usko dekhte hi chup ho gaye aur khusur fusur shuru kar diya

Tanya ko ajeeb laga lekin wo chalte hue jaise hi avinash ke cabin ki aur gayi usne avinash ko apni aur aate hue paaya

"Hi avinash sir aap......'

CHATAAAAAAAAK

ek jhannatedar thappad ne tanya ko farsh par gira diya

Sab chup ho gaya.ab log chup ho gaye

"Ye thappad kyun maara tumhe ache se pata hai"bol nikal gaya avinash

Tanya farsh par nazrein rakh dheere dheere uthi aur building ke bahar nikal gayi
Peecha se ek halki si Awaz sunai di

Gaddar

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LAVENDER PALACE
"Bhaiya chalo musibat tal gayi"dhruv khush hote hue bola

"Haan dhruv,sahi kaha.avinash thoda disturbed hai.lekin wo samjha ja sakta hai.itna bada dhoka koun bardasht kar payega,khair tanya ka termination ho gaya hai filhal uski jagah koun lega??"vishal bola

Dhruv-sharon can do it.MBA kiya hua hai usne aur thoda bohut mai sikha doonga,kya kehti ho sharon??

"Waise kya actually hua tha avinash bhaiya ko lekar??"sharon ne masoomiyat se poocha

Krish ki hansi chootne lagi lekin usne apne aap ko control kar liya

"K kuch nahi wo uski tabiyat thodi thik nahi hai isliye usne resign kar diya,abhi filhaal mai khud use dekhunga,lekin tum tanya ki jagah sambhalogi filhal ke liye"bol dhruv uthkar chala gaya

Krish ko sharon ne ishara kiya to wo bhi uthkar chala gaya

"Waise bhaiyya ek baat bolni thi aapse"sharon boli

"Bolo"vishal careless hokar bola

"Mera ek bhaiyya hai aur wo shaadi kar raha hai.mujhe wo shaadi attend karni padegi"sharon boli

"To isme kya hai,dhruv aur tum ho aao,waise bhi honeymoon to gaye nahi.isi bahane ghoomte fir aao"vishal bola

"Thanks bhaiyya ,waise wo ms nivedita hai na GROVER group ki,wo kaisi hai??"sharon ne poocha

"Kyun aaj achanak nivedita ke baare me poochtaach??"vishal bola

"Well bhaiyya ki shaadi usi se ho rahi hai to..."sharon ke Bolte hi vishal chaunka

Aur uth khada hua

"WHATTTTTT"vishal ke muh se apne aap nikla

"Haan bhaiya suna hai divorce ho gaya hai single hai "sharon boli

"But but ....lekin .......excuse me"bol vishal nikal gaya

Aur sharon hasne lagi
"Vishal bhaiyya .mera plan kabhi fail ho hi nahi sakta."
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Tanya park me anuj ke saath thi

"Kya baat hai udaas ho??"anuj ne poocha

"Anuj avinash ko mere plan ke baare me pata chal chuka hai"tanya boli

"WHATTTTTT????"ek zabardast jhatka laga anuj ko

"How can you be so irresponsible tanya,itni badi idiot kaisi ho sakti ho tum??"anuj bola

"Itna chillao mat anuj.tumhari kharidi hui gulam nahi hoon.pyaar karti hoon.iska matlab ye nahi ki tum jaisa chaho mujhe treat karo.avinash tse laakh guna acha hai.kam se kam hamesha meri tareef to karta tha"tanya gusse me boli

"To usi ke paas ja.aaj se hamara rishta khatam"bol anuj jaane laga

Tanya usko rokne lagi.kaafi minnate karne lagi lekin wo ruka nahi aur chala gaya

Uske jaane ke baad tanya fafak kar rone lagi

Ye sab sharon chup kar dekh rahi thi.use bura to lag raha tha lekin ab wo kuch nahi kar sakti thi

Door sharon ki nazar padi ek bench par.avinash wahan chidiyon ko dana de raha tha

Sharon dheere dheere wahan gayi
"Avinash bhaiyya"halke se bulai avinash ko

"Aao sharon,dekho in chidiyon ko.kitne wafadar hote hai ye.kabhi kisi ko dhoka nahi dete,kisi ka dil nahi todte hai na"???avinash udaas swar me bola.

Sharon bas chup hi rahi.uske paas bole ko kuch nahi tha