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Bhai Preet jasa aap suru may kaha Kay app first time likh rahay huu aap kee last update tuuk kahani purhi hay or qasam lay loo pahlay update Kay baad say last update tuuk jub tuk purh nahi leya Chan nahi aaya or ab last update purh Kay magay kee kahani koo purhnay kee baychani hay aap jaduu kurety huu jasay or aap likh raahy huu wasay shadar kahani koi koi hee likhta hay Kasey aak aak dana peroo Kay mala bunty huu tuu wasay hee aap kee kahani khubsurty say bahi hay please keep going
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Nice n fantastic concept ..Bas update rukna nahi chaiye nahi to sara mamla bigad jayega
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वाह भाई वाह बहुत ही सुंदर कहानी की पटकथा है जहां एक ओर मां की ममता श्राप के वशीभूत होकर कामवासना के कारण क्रूर हो गई , तो वही कामवासना मोनी के प्रेम पर भारी पड़ गई , जिसके वशीभूत होकर अपने ही प्रेमी को वह कष्ट देने को बाध्य हुई
वहीं दूसरी ओर विधि का निश्चल प्रेम जो अपने प्रेमी की सुरक्षा के लिए अपने प्रेम को त्यागने के लिए भी तैयार है और वही प्रीत अपने प्रेम को श्राप मुक्त करने के लिए किसी भी हद तक गुजरने को तैयार है ,
वही पूर्व जन्म की कथा कर्मफल को दर्शाती है
अब तक की कहानी बहुत ही सुंदर तरीके से हर घटना को श्रृंखलाबद्ध उत्तम दर्शाते हुए आपने लिखी
वहीं दूसरी ओर विधि का निश्चल प्रेम जो अपने प्रेमी की सुरक्षा के लिए अपने प्रेम को त्यागने के लिए भी तैयार है और वही प्रीत अपने प्रेम को श्राप मुक्त करने के लिए किसी भी हद तक गुजरने को तैयार है ,
वही पूर्व जन्म की कथा कर्मफल को दर्शाती है
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UPDATE 16
Preet fresh ho kar apne room se bahar aa gaya. Usko aj bapis jana tha. To apna saman pack karke nikal pada railway station ki or.. train me beth kar apne hi khayalo me khud se hi ladta hua ek taraf dekhe ja raha tha. Per jaha uski nigahe tiki thi waha ek khubsoort si ladki bethi thi. Or uske sath me shyad uski maa bhi bethi thi. Dekhne me dono hi kamaal ki lag rahi thi. Per preet ka dyaan to keval apne khayalo me tha. Per us ladki ki maa ko laga ki wo uski beti ko ghur raha hai
Mahila – ye ladke aese kyu ghur rahe ho meri beti ko.. tere ghar me maa behan nahi hai kya???
Preet ka dhyan us mahila ki awaj se tuta.. to preet bola – kya kuch kaha apne???
Mahila – hey bhagwan kitna battamij ladka hai.. pehle aese kaam or fir puchta hai ki kuch kaha kya??
Preet gusse me – aaeee hai kon tu?? Kya kiya hai mene?? Kyu chilla rahi hai???
Mahila – ye ladke tamij se baat kar samja… or meri beti ko ghurna band kar..
Preet – mujpe nahi aati tamij se baat karna bol kya karegi..
Tabhi bich me wo ladki boli – maa kyu lafda kar rahi ho.. shant ho jao ye hamara city nahi hai.. kyu muh lagti ho aese ladko ke…
Preet ki awaj or uski body dekh kar wo mahila thoda dar gayi thi to apni beti ke kahne per shant beth gayi. Per man hi man pata nahi kya kya kehti rahi..
Per a preet ka dhyan us ladki ki taraf chala gaya tha. Uska sundar sa face dekh kar preet ke dil me fir se halchal hone lagi to preet man hi man bola – saala kal hi dil tuta hai or aj fir is ladki ko dekh kar uchalne laga.. chup karke beth. Ab mujko kisi bhi ladki ke lafde me nahi padna hai….
Tabhi preet ka dhyan us mahila per gaya. Jo sari pahne bethi thi or preet ko man hi man galiya de rahi thi. Preet ne jese hi usko scan kiya uska baburam khada hone laga. Kam se kam 36 ki chuchiya jo blouse se bahar aane ko bethab ho rahi thi. Chikni kamar jis per thodi si hi charbi hogi.. or bahar ko feli huyi mast gand… jo sari me lipti apna size bata rahi thi… ek bar preet ka man hua ki is aurat ko yahi patak kar chodna suru kar de… per fir khud ko hi gaaliya deta hua toilet ki taraf chala gaya.
Thabhi wo ladki boli – maa ap bhi na kabhi bhi kahi bhi ladna suru kar deti ho.. kuch kaha raha tha kya wo jo apne usse ladna suru kar diya..
Mahila – nidhi beti tum nahi janti is awara ladko ko, kab kya kar de pata bhi nahi chalta. Chori, lutpaat, balatkaar aese hi ladke to karte hai..
Nidhi – ap janti ho maa ki hamare sath wo kuch bhi nahi kar sakta kosis bhi karega to khud hi mara jayega. Apne khandaan ki kisi ladki ke sat haj tak koi kuch kar paya hai kya??
Mahila – haan teri bhi baat sahi hai. Per beta main dar gayi thi…
Mahila man me – ab tujko kya batau beti is ladke ko dekh kar meri choot gili hone lagi thi. Aj kar ye bahut pareshan kar rahi hai. Janti hu ye kya koi kuch nahi kar sakta is baat ka hi to rona hai.. mera man is ladke ke samne tange feline ka ho raha tha or ye kamina meri taraf dekh bhi nahi raha tha. Bus tujko hi ghure ja raha tha… haaye ye nigodi choot.. saali ab ye apni hi beti se jalne lagi hai….
Pata nahi or kya kya wo preet ke bare me sochti rahi per bolne ki himmat usme nahi thi. Preet kuch der baad apni seat per aa kar beth gaya to us mahila ne preet ko ghurte huye hi safar pura kar liya. Preet ne is baat ko ignor kar diya tha ki koi usko ghur raha hai. Preet unse pehle hi utar gaya tha. Shyad un dono ko kahi aage jana tha…..
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Preet ghar (dhaba) pahuch kar apni padai me lag gaya. Dhabe ka kaam padai or boxing ko ek bar fir apni duniya bana kar isme hi busy ho gaya tha. Per susma ko preet ken a milne ka dar sata raha tha. Deeraj abhi bhi apni kosiso me laga hua tha per usko abhi tak koi safalta nahi mili thi. Koi detactive agency ko bhi hire kar chukka tha wo jo kar sakta tha usne sab kiya. As par ke sabhi city gaon me ghum ghum kar bhi talasha. Per koi fayeda nahi hua…
Aj susma ki saas ka phone aaye 15 din ho chuke the to susma ka dar badta ja raha tha. Akhir susma ne is kasmkash ko khatam karne ke liye ek bahut bada feshla kiya. Jo shayad uske liye ghatak bhi ho sakta tha. Apne feshle ko final rup dene ke liye wo deeraj ke pass pahuchi..
Susma – suniye mujko apko kuch kahna hai.. (susma ki awaj me ek drdh nishchay tha jese jo wo soch kar aayi hai wo karegi hi)
Deeraj – hmm bol kya bolna chahati ho..
Susma – deeraj maa ji ab is sach ko or jyada din tak nahi chupa sakte hai. To mene kuch soch hai..
Deeraj – haan ye to hai ab kitna late karegi amma utna hi jyada gussa karegi. Per batane per bhi to gussa karegi hi..
Susma – haan karegi isliye hi mene soch hai ki kyu na hum sabhi maa ji ke pass chalte hai. Or unko sab sach sach bata dege.
Deeraj – susma mere me himat nahi hai amma ke samne bolne ki. Tum janti ho main amma se bachpan se hi darta aaya hu…
Susma – koi nahi ap maaji ke samne mat aana maa ji se baat me kar lugi..
Deeraj – or neha??? Neha ko kya kahege?? Or kab usko wo sach batayege ??
Susma – dekho abhi to neha ko bina kuch bataye hi yaha se le jana sahi hoga. Fir jab wo waha pahuch jayegi tab dekhte hai. Per abhi neha se jyada us preet ke bare me sochne ka samay hai. Yadi wo nahi mila to pata nahi kya – 2 hoga or wo sab sambhalne ke liye hum sabhi ko ek bar fir ek chhat ke niche hona hoga.
Deeraj – hmm kaha to tum thik rahi ho tum jao packing suru karo main ja kar neha se baat karta hu. Kal subha jaldi hi nikal chalege…
Fir deeraj neha ke room ki taraf chal deta hai to susma apne room me chali jati hai. Neha ke Bsc ke exam ho chuke the or wo ghar per raha kar next year ki tayari kar rahi thi. Preet ki yaado se bahar nikane ke liye usne books ko hi apna sathi bana liya tha. Per books khol kar bethi huyi bhi wo preet ke khyalo me hi rahati thi. Ya kabhi -2 wo sab sochti jo susma ne usko kuch time pehle hi kaha tha. Susma ne usko bataya tha ki uski shadi bachpan me hi tay ho chuki hai to wo kabhi bhul kar bhi kisi or ladke ke karib na jaye. Wese bhi neha ko kabhi kisi ladke me intrest hi nahi hua. Wo jab se badi huyi thi tab se apne bhai ko hi yaad karne se usko fursat nahi thi… abhi bhi neha roj ki tarha apni book khol kar apne khyalo me gum thi…
Deeraj – kya ho raha hai beta kis khyal me itna kho gayi hai tu???
Neha (hadbadate huye) – kuch nahi papa kuch nahi … bus padhai kar rahi thi..
Deeraj – beta itna mat soch kar apne bhai ke bare me .. dekh tune to jeena hi chod diya hai.
Neha nam aankhon se – papa mujko bahut yaad aati hai uski.. wo hi tha kiske sath me kushi ke 2 pal bitati thi. Ap hi batao kiske sath time spend karu?? Kon hai jo mujko samaj sakta hai??
Deeraj – chal fir main teri is muskil ko aasan kar deta hu… hum log bahar chalte hai.. teri dadi ke ghar … waha tera sath dene ke liye teri kayi behne hogi… unke sath tera man lag jayega…
Neha chok kar – kya dadi-dada ke ghar ?? waha meri bahane hai???? Kon si behane?? Aj se pehle to mujko yaad nahi ki hum kabhi gaye ho waha…
Deeraj – to ab to chal sakte hai na.. mere 2 bade bhai hai or unki 4 betiya hai jo teri hi umar ki hai. Unke sath tera man lag jayega…
Neha ye sun kar khus ho jati hai ki koi or bhi hai or uska kuch lagta hai. Wo apni behno se milne ke liye exited hone lagti hai. Per wo ye nahi janti thi ki wo jaha jane se khus hai waha ja kar uski puri jindgi hi badal jayegi…
Neha – kab chalege hum papa waha??
Deeraj – kal subha
Neha – oo nnooo !!! papa apko thoda late karna hoga. Mujko apni ek book leni hai ek shop se nahi to wo book fir pata nahi kab milegi..
Deeraj – beta book to tum waha bhi le sakti ho waha bhi sab milta hai…
Neha – nahi papa wo yaha bhi nahi mil rrahi thi 4 din pehle hi mene advance paise de kar magwayi hai. Pata nahi waha milegi bhi ya nahi…
Deeraj man me – kya kargi beta book ka, waha ja kar sab udal putal hone wala hai.. ab wo wakt aa gaya hai jab sab kuch badal jayega… ab suru hoga us shraap ka Ashli khel… badle ka khel..
Sochte huye deeraj ke man me kisi ki chhavi aa jati hai. Ye wo hi hai jisne ye khatarnaak shraap diya hai. To deeraj sochta hai – apne sabhi ke sath nyay kiya bus ap mere bete or hamari bachchiyo ke sath nyay karna bhul gayi.. pata nahi bhagwan ko kya manjur hai .. dekho hamari bachichiyo ke sath kya hota hai….
Neha – kaha kho gaye papa?? Kis soch me ho?? Bhai ki yaad aa gayi na?? yadi wo bhi hamare sath jata to usko bhi kuch khushi ke pal mil jate.. dada-dadi ke samne to maa bhi bhai ko kuch nahi kaha pati…kitna maza aata na yadi bhai bhi sath hota…
Deeraj – haan beta ye to hai… cha lab tu apni packing kar mujko bhi karni hai. Or hum kal teri book lene ke baad 10 baje tak chalege .. ok
Neha khush hote huye – ek dum thik papa… love you papa…
Deeraj ko bhi neha ke face per khushi dekh kar ek sukun mila tha per wo janta tha ki ye khushi jhooti hai. Wo apni beti ko ek aesi daldal me le kar ja raha hai jaha se wo kabhi bapis nahi aa payegi……
Preet fresh ho kar apne room se bahar aa gaya. Usko aj bapis jana tha. To apna saman pack karke nikal pada railway station ki or.. train me beth kar apne hi khayalo me khud se hi ladta hua ek taraf dekhe ja raha tha. Per jaha uski nigahe tiki thi waha ek khubsoort si ladki bethi thi. Or uske sath me shyad uski maa bhi bethi thi. Dekhne me dono hi kamaal ki lag rahi thi. Per preet ka dyaan to keval apne khayalo me tha. Per us ladki ki maa ko laga ki wo uski beti ko ghur raha hai
Mahila – ye ladke aese kyu ghur rahe ho meri beti ko.. tere ghar me maa behan nahi hai kya???
Preet ka dhyan us mahila ki awaj se tuta.. to preet bola – kya kuch kaha apne???
Mahila – hey bhagwan kitna battamij ladka hai.. pehle aese kaam or fir puchta hai ki kuch kaha kya??
Preet gusse me – aaeee hai kon tu?? Kya kiya hai mene?? Kyu chilla rahi hai???
Mahila – ye ladke tamij se baat kar samja… or meri beti ko ghurna band kar..
Preet – mujpe nahi aati tamij se baat karna bol kya karegi..
Tabhi bich me wo ladki boli – maa kyu lafda kar rahi ho.. shant ho jao ye hamara city nahi hai.. kyu muh lagti ho aese ladko ke…
Preet ki awaj or uski body dekh kar wo mahila thoda dar gayi thi to apni beti ke kahne per shant beth gayi. Per man hi man pata nahi kya kya kehti rahi..
Per a preet ka dhyan us ladki ki taraf chala gaya tha. Uska sundar sa face dekh kar preet ke dil me fir se halchal hone lagi to preet man hi man bola – saala kal hi dil tuta hai or aj fir is ladki ko dekh kar uchalne laga.. chup karke beth. Ab mujko kisi bhi ladki ke lafde me nahi padna hai….
Tabhi preet ka dhyan us mahila per gaya. Jo sari pahne bethi thi or preet ko man hi man galiya de rahi thi. Preet ne jese hi usko scan kiya uska baburam khada hone laga. Kam se kam 36 ki chuchiya jo blouse se bahar aane ko bethab ho rahi thi. Chikni kamar jis per thodi si hi charbi hogi.. or bahar ko feli huyi mast gand… jo sari me lipti apna size bata rahi thi… ek bar preet ka man hua ki is aurat ko yahi patak kar chodna suru kar de… per fir khud ko hi gaaliya deta hua toilet ki taraf chala gaya.
Thabhi wo ladki boli – maa ap bhi na kabhi bhi kahi bhi ladna suru kar deti ho.. kuch kaha raha tha kya wo jo apne usse ladna suru kar diya..
Mahila – nidhi beti tum nahi janti is awara ladko ko, kab kya kar de pata bhi nahi chalta. Chori, lutpaat, balatkaar aese hi ladke to karte hai..
Nidhi – ap janti ho maa ki hamare sath wo kuch bhi nahi kar sakta kosis bhi karega to khud hi mara jayega. Apne khandaan ki kisi ladki ke sat haj tak koi kuch kar paya hai kya??
Mahila – haan teri bhi baat sahi hai. Per beta main dar gayi thi…
Mahila man me – ab tujko kya batau beti is ladke ko dekh kar meri choot gili hone lagi thi. Aj kar ye bahut pareshan kar rahi hai. Janti hu ye kya koi kuch nahi kar sakta is baat ka hi to rona hai.. mera man is ladke ke samne tange feline ka ho raha tha or ye kamina meri taraf dekh bhi nahi raha tha. Bus tujko hi ghure ja raha tha… haaye ye nigodi choot.. saali ab ye apni hi beti se jalne lagi hai….
Pata nahi or kya kya wo preet ke bare me sochti rahi per bolne ki himmat usme nahi thi. Preet kuch der baad apni seat per aa kar beth gaya to us mahila ne preet ko ghurte huye hi safar pura kar liya. Preet ne is baat ko ignor kar diya tha ki koi usko ghur raha hai. Preet unse pehle hi utar gaya tha. Shyad un dono ko kahi aage jana tha…..
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Preet ghar (dhaba) pahuch kar apni padai me lag gaya. Dhabe ka kaam padai or boxing ko ek bar fir apni duniya bana kar isme hi busy ho gaya tha. Per susma ko preet ken a milne ka dar sata raha tha. Deeraj abhi bhi apni kosiso me laga hua tha per usko abhi tak koi safalta nahi mili thi. Koi detactive agency ko bhi hire kar chukka tha wo jo kar sakta tha usne sab kiya. As par ke sabhi city gaon me ghum ghum kar bhi talasha. Per koi fayeda nahi hua…
Aj susma ki saas ka phone aaye 15 din ho chuke the to susma ka dar badta ja raha tha. Akhir susma ne is kasmkash ko khatam karne ke liye ek bahut bada feshla kiya. Jo shayad uske liye ghatak bhi ho sakta tha. Apne feshle ko final rup dene ke liye wo deeraj ke pass pahuchi..
Susma – suniye mujko apko kuch kahna hai.. (susma ki awaj me ek drdh nishchay tha jese jo wo soch kar aayi hai wo karegi hi)
Deeraj – hmm bol kya bolna chahati ho..
Susma – deeraj maa ji ab is sach ko or jyada din tak nahi chupa sakte hai. To mene kuch soch hai..
Deeraj – haan ye to hai ab kitna late karegi amma utna hi jyada gussa karegi. Per batane per bhi to gussa karegi hi..
Susma – haan karegi isliye hi mene soch hai ki kyu na hum sabhi maa ji ke pass chalte hai. Or unko sab sach sach bata dege.
Deeraj – susma mere me himat nahi hai amma ke samne bolne ki. Tum janti ho main amma se bachpan se hi darta aaya hu…
Susma – koi nahi ap maaji ke samne mat aana maa ji se baat me kar lugi..
Deeraj – or neha??? Neha ko kya kahege?? Or kab usko wo sach batayege ??
Susma – dekho abhi to neha ko bina kuch bataye hi yaha se le jana sahi hoga. Fir jab wo waha pahuch jayegi tab dekhte hai. Per abhi neha se jyada us preet ke bare me sochne ka samay hai. Yadi wo nahi mila to pata nahi kya – 2 hoga or wo sab sambhalne ke liye hum sabhi ko ek bar fir ek chhat ke niche hona hoga.
Deeraj – hmm kaha to tum thik rahi ho tum jao packing suru karo main ja kar neha se baat karta hu. Kal subha jaldi hi nikal chalege…
Fir deeraj neha ke room ki taraf chal deta hai to susma apne room me chali jati hai. Neha ke Bsc ke exam ho chuke the or wo ghar per raha kar next year ki tayari kar rahi thi. Preet ki yaado se bahar nikane ke liye usne books ko hi apna sathi bana liya tha. Per books khol kar bethi huyi bhi wo preet ke khyalo me hi rahati thi. Ya kabhi -2 wo sab sochti jo susma ne usko kuch time pehle hi kaha tha. Susma ne usko bataya tha ki uski shadi bachpan me hi tay ho chuki hai to wo kabhi bhul kar bhi kisi or ladke ke karib na jaye. Wese bhi neha ko kabhi kisi ladke me intrest hi nahi hua. Wo jab se badi huyi thi tab se apne bhai ko hi yaad karne se usko fursat nahi thi… abhi bhi neha roj ki tarha apni book khol kar apne khyalo me gum thi…
Deeraj – kya ho raha hai beta kis khyal me itna kho gayi hai tu???
Neha (hadbadate huye) – kuch nahi papa kuch nahi … bus padhai kar rahi thi..
Deeraj – beta itna mat soch kar apne bhai ke bare me .. dekh tune to jeena hi chod diya hai.
Neha nam aankhon se – papa mujko bahut yaad aati hai uski.. wo hi tha kiske sath me kushi ke 2 pal bitati thi. Ap hi batao kiske sath time spend karu?? Kon hai jo mujko samaj sakta hai??
Deeraj – chal fir main teri is muskil ko aasan kar deta hu… hum log bahar chalte hai.. teri dadi ke ghar … waha tera sath dene ke liye teri kayi behne hogi… unke sath tera man lag jayega…
Neha chok kar – kya dadi-dada ke ghar ?? waha meri bahane hai???? Kon si behane?? Aj se pehle to mujko yaad nahi ki hum kabhi gaye ho waha…
Deeraj – to ab to chal sakte hai na.. mere 2 bade bhai hai or unki 4 betiya hai jo teri hi umar ki hai. Unke sath tera man lag jayega…
Neha ye sun kar khus ho jati hai ki koi or bhi hai or uska kuch lagta hai. Wo apni behno se milne ke liye exited hone lagti hai. Per wo ye nahi janti thi ki wo jaha jane se khus hai waha ja kar uski puri jindgi hi badal jayegi…
Neha – kab chalege hum papa waha??
Deeraj – kal subha
Neha – oo nnooo !!! papa apko thoda late karna hoga. Mujko apni ek book leni hai ek shop se nahi to wo book fir pata nahi kab milegi..
Deeraj – beta book to tum waha bhi le sakti ho waha bhi sab milta hai…
Neha – nahi papa wo yaha bhi nahi mil rrahi thi 4 din pehle hi mene advance paise de kar magwayi hai. Pata nahi waha milegi bhi ya nahi…
Deeraj man me – kya kargi beta book ka, waha ja kar sab udal putal hone wala hai.. ab wo wakt aa gaya hai jab sab kuch badal jayega… ab suru hoga us shraap ka Ashli khel… badle ka khel..
Sochte huye deeraj ke man me kisi ki chhavi aa jati hai. Ye wo hi hai jisne ye khatarnaak shraap diya hai. To deeraj sochta hai – apne sabhi ke sath nyay kiya bus ap mere bete or hamari bachchiyo ke sath nyay karna bhul gayi.. pata nahi bhagwan ko kya manjur hai .. dekho hamari bachichiyo ke sath kya hota hai….
Neha – kaha kho gaye papa?? Kis soch me ho?? Bhai ki yaad aa gayi na?? yadi wo bhi hamare sath jata to usko bhi kuch khushi ke pal mil jate.. dada-dadi ke samne to maa bhi bhai ko kuch nahi kaha pati…kitna maza aata na yadi bhai bhi sath hota…
Deeraj – haan beta ye to hai… cha lab tu apni packing kar mujko bhi karni hai. Or hum kal teri book lene ke baad 10 baje tak chalege .. ok
Neha khush hote huye – ek dum thik papa… love you papa…
Deeraj ko bhi neha ke face per khushi dekh kar ek sukun mila tha per wo janta tha ki ye khushi jhooti hai. Wo apni beti ko ek aesi daldal me le kar ja raha hai jaha se wo kabhi bapis nahi aa payegi……
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