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Update 2​

Kal subah, jab kallu raj se baat kane ke baad ghar lauta to usne apni maa ko saara majra samjhaya..

Kallu ki ma: kya!!!..3 ekad, beta ye to bohot achhi khabar h...... lekin us sharabi ka koi bharosha nahi.....Tu iss bare me ek bar... seema se jaroor punchh lena..
Kallu: thik h maa...apki tasalli ke liye puchh lunga..

Kallu ki maa: thik h..thik h, bharosha to nahi ho raha lekin aur kya kaha raju ne??

Kallu: Aur to!!!.....are!! han aaj se doodh wahi se aaya karega, sham ko lene to me chala jaunga lekin subah meena ko bhej diya karna..
Kallu ki ma: ye to or bhi badhiya khabar h....
Kallu: wo sab to thik h lekin mujhe kal k kal hi..... aam ke pas wali jagah par baadi lagai h.... Raju keh raha tha bhabhi waha sabjiya lagayengi..


Kallu ki maa: are! to main chalungi na tere sath...... aur tu kahe to meena ko bhi le chale


Kallu: nahi!!! Hm dono hi bohot h sham se pehele kaam khatm karne k liye.. ....aur aakhir me us khet ki sabjiya khane .....hame v to milne wali h...


Kallu ki maa: kya?? To tune iss bare me bhi usse baat kar li...
Kallu: are! Maa raju mera dost h .... ye bhala koi kehne puchhne ki baat h..


(Sham ko mar khane ki wajah se... lete lete raj ko halki neend aa gai thi...thik usi wakt kallu bade ghar tak Amma ko khana pahuchane ke liye daubara wapis aaya......aur tabhi usne khet wali saari baatein seema se confirm kr li)

Rat me jb raj leta hua tha.... use neend nahi aa rahi thi, maar khane ki wajah se sara badan toot raha tha ...aur uske samne seema ka wo udas chehra bar bar aa rha tha...

Raaj: Bhagwan!! ab to khush ho na aap! ......hsshh!! Kya hi lode lage pade h zindagi ke....ek to is mc ne jua khel ke sari fasal barbad di.... uper se Ravi seth, 'behen ke lode' aaj hi marna tha tere ko ....sala ab to m seema ke kamre me bhi nahi ja sakta....kaha sab thik karne chala tha...aur kya ho gaya


Pareshan hoke jb raaj ne apni aankhe band ki.....to dheere-dheere uska man shant hone laga..... aur jese hi uska man shant hua, dimag kaam karne laga... Aaj jo v hua usme meri kya galti thi??.....ye sab to us gandu ka kiya dhara h ....sshh!!! sala iski yaadon ne confuse kar rakha h, Pata hi nahi chalta galti kiski h ...


Hmm... to thik h, Kal sabse pehle sheher nikalte h, wahi se shuru hoga ....."iss naye jivan ka safar"
Raj ko bistar bohot hi uncomfortable lag rha tha isliye man me counting krne lagta h, taaki neend aa jaaye....aur kaafi koshisho ke baad wah gehri neend so jata h


Khair raat gujri subah hui....Seema apna daily routine follow krte huye pehle aaj ke liye aata taiyar karti h...aur fir naha dhoke pooj path..


Suraj nikalne wala tha...chidiya chahchahaa rahi thi... to Raaj bhi uthte huye Angdai leta h aur hath pau stretch karte huye ...bahar nikal aata h


Use yaad tha .....aaj sheher nikalna h isiliye fataft se datun karke ....nahane chala jaata h...


Wahi seema nashta taiyar karne me lagi thi....tab tak raaj naha-dhoke wapis aa jata h


Subah se ek bhi baar dono ka 'aamna-samna' nahi hua tha..
Khair.....Seema chai leke aati h, aur raj ko pakdake, ruchi ke pas chali jaati h


Raaj chai peete peete sochta h.... Bc iske sath itna bura vyavhar hota aaya h, iske baad bhi ye aurat itni achhi kyun h.... abhi kal kal jo hua, mujhe to laga tha kuchh dino tk roothi rahegi..


Wo abhi ye soch hi raha tha k.....seema wahi aangan me aake....taar me kapde daalne lagti h
Raaj ka dhyan iss wakt kahi aur tha, lekin jese hi kapde se pani ki boond chhitak ke uske maathe pe padi... wo seema ki or dekhne laga


Suraj se aane wali, subah ki sheetal kirne seema pr pad rhi thi..... Jisme se nikharta hua uska ye roop...raj ko mohit kar raha tha....gadraya badan, chikni kamar... uper se leke niche tak "sundarta ki murat"!!!


Seema ko bhi ab ye ehsaas ho gaya tha, ki ....Raj use hi ghoor raha h... tabhi dono ka dhyan bhang karne wali dhwani unke kaano m padti h....Bhabhi!!


Meena: Are!! itni jaldi.....aapne subha-subha kyu naha liya, kahi jaana h kya??
Seema: Nahi! Banno, me to roj isi tarah, subah hi nahake taiyar ho jaati hu..... Par aaj doodh lene tum aai ho??


Meena: hn, bhabhi.... Aur av se subah, me hi aaya karungi..
Seema: thik h lekin pehle nashta kr le..
Meena: are!! nahi bhabhi, bhai aur maa chai ka intezar kr h aur unhe bhi to nashta karana h....
Seema: thik h! fir kabhi kehte huye, use doodh pakda deti h.....


Meena ke jaate hi Raj Seema se kehta hai.....Seema! m aaj sheher jaa raha hu kaam talashne.... par seema ki taraf se koi jawab nahi aata


Raj: abhi to meena se hans-hans k baat kar rahi thi... aur ab dekho..... tabhi seema uske pas nashta leke aa jaati h
Raj nashta karte huye, bas use hi dekh raha tha .... to wahin seema, tirchhi najron se use aisa krte huye dekh rahi thi..


Wahi dusri taraf:
Ghar pahunchte hi meena.... sabse pehle chai banne rakhti h aur fir nashte ki taiyari m lag jati h..

Kallu: maa aaj baadi lagane ka kaam nipta lete h.... Fir kal se jutai chalu kar denge
Kallu ki maa: hn beta!! ab or der nahi karni chahiye..... Gao me sabne jutai chalu kar di h


Tabhi meena waha chai leke aa jaati h...aur jb tak ye dono chai peete huye baat krte h... tab tak nashta bhi banke taiyar ho jaata h....
Khair dono, maa-bete nashta krke, nikal padte h aam k pas wali zameen par..


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Wahin Jb raj ka nashta ho gaya to usne amma ke liye nashta pack karwaya aur seema se kaha..dopahar, ka khana dene chali jaana... Mujhe aane me der ho jayegi..aur nikal pada, amma ka nashta leke...

shehar jaane ke liye raaj ki jeb m footi kodi nii thi....tabhi uski nazar ek bailgaadi pe padi....hmmm..Kaka bhi to sheher jaate rhte h!!!
Raaj: aur kaka!!! ...kaha chali sawari???
Kaka: bas bitwa, sheher hii jaa raha the
Raaj: to kaka mujhe v sath le chaloge...
Kaha: thik bitwa, bas ek bar gaadi load ho jaye


Raaj: thik h kaka....tb tk me amma ko, ye nashta de aau aur raj nikal padta hai bade ghar ki or


Wahi dusri or:
Beta!! kallu ye jagah to bohot badi h sabjiya lagane ke liye...
Kallu: hnn maa, aur iski maati bhi badhiya h..
Kallu ki ma: beta kuchh socha, h itni sari jameen pe jutai kese hogi??
Kallu: maa!! kaam utna hii h, jitna me dusron ke kheton me karta tha...aur tum ho to sahi mere sath..

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Raaj nashta dete hi, kaka ke paas wapis aa gaya....
Raj: ho gai kaka loading??
Kaka: bas beta!! ho hii gai....raaj aakhiri kuchh bore uthwane me unki madad krta h..


Thodi der bad:

'Raj aur kaka dono bailgaadi me' .. kaka! ye maal.....ab kaha utrega??
Kaka: factory me utrega, bitua....

Raj: hmm...
"Abhi ke liye factory hi sahi rahegi... Jyada bhatakna v nahi padega'
Raj: kaka! Factory me mere layak koi kaam hoga kya??


Kaka...raaj ki taraf ashcharya se dekhne lage..... unhe lag rha tha, kahi unhone kuchh galat to nahi sun liya ......


(Raju ke karam the hi itne famous!! Poora gaon janta tha raaju kitna bada juari h.....hnn nashe ki aadat use avi avi lagii thi......lekin uski harkaton ki wjh se .......iss baat ko failne me zara bhi wakt nahi lagaa)


Raj: kaka!!...kaka.. are! kaha kho gaye??
Kaka: are! Hn hn beta...kaam...kaam h to sahi lekin tum ...tum kar to paoge...(raj bich me hi) .... Are hn hn kaka me kar lunga...


2:30 ghante bad:

Kaka:bitwa uu rahi factory.....
Raj(khosh hokar): hnn hnn kaka!.....

(Man me ...aakhir aa hii gai, achha hua! factory sheher ke bahar hi thi...... bc 13-14 kilometer m hi dhai ghante barbad ho gaye)


Kaka: chalo bitwa...Tumhe kam dilwata hu.....aur kaka Pahuch jate h .......waha ke prabhari k pas (prabhari- incharge)


Prabhari: aao rambihari aao.... bilkul!! sahi time pe aaye ho!!
Rambihari: bas maalik kripa h aapki.... ye balak h, agar iske layak koi kaam mil jaata to..


Prabhari: hnn hnn, wo waha boriya dekh rahe ho unhe wahaaaaa se uthakar andar rakhna h....
Aur ha bhai ram bihari.... ye rahi tumare aaj ke maal ki kimat..

Raj: kaka... Kb tak nikloge ??
Rambihari: bas beta.... Maal utarte hi nakal jaunga..
Raj (prabhari se): aur m...mujhe kitni kimat milegi?
Prabhari....raj ko uper se niche tak dekhte huye......10 bori pe 50 paisa...(1/2₹)


Raj(man me): ye bhosdi ka! mujhe aise q dekh raha h... abhi majboori h... Bas thode se pese ban jaaye fr thukunga tk nahi aise kaam pe


Khair Raaj jake bori uthane lagta h lekin usse nahi uthti.... Fir thodi der koshish karne ke baad.. .....jab use sahi technique aa gai to usne bori ko uthaya ....kandhe pe rakha.... aur andar le gaya..


7 boriya uthane ke baad hii raj ko pata lag gaya, wo admi.... use aise kyun dekh rha tha ...
raj: ek aur..bas ek aur krte-krte 10 boriya andar rakh leta h...


(Ek to wo bas 19 sal ka tha upar se kal jo mar padi thi wo alg dard kr rhi thi)


Raj dashvi bori rakhne ke bad ....andar hi thak ke baith gaya aur waha chal rhe kaam ko dekhne laga ....
Kaafi der tak jo bhi chize uske samne ghatti rahi wo unhe observe krta raha ....aur man me unke bare me aanklan karne laga .... bohot sare calculation uske dimag me chal hi rahe the ki ....tabhi!!


Prabhari: oye! hero abhi se thak gaya, beta ye bachchon ka kaam nii h...


(Raj ko gussa to bohot aa rha tha Lekin kya hii kr leta)
kaafi aaram ho gaya tha, to fir lag gaya boriyan uthane...... or boriya uthate-uthate...


Bhagwan ye kaisa khel khel rahe ho aap...'Jb mere pas sabkuchh tha to pariwar chhin liya' .....ab mere pas pariwar h..... to unhe dene ke liye "na mere pas wakt hai aur na hi pese"


Raaj ab tak 40 boriyan andar rakh chuka tha aur uski halat..... bohot hi jyada patli ho rakkhi thi....
Hanfte huye..... bc! itni dur boriya rakhne ko kisne kaha tha..... (Sans bharte huye)..andar hi le jani thi, to..... pas me rakhwa lete.....



Raaj baithe-baithe aaram kar raha tha Tabhi us factory ka malik nirikshan krne aa jata h aur Puri factory ka chakkar laga lene ke bad..... wahi aake ek kurshi pe beth jata h


Prabhari, factory malik ko aaj ki attendance aur anya chizo Ka lekha jokha pakda ke chala jata h.... tabhi raj uske pas aata h....
Factory malik (Niranjan das).....raj ko dekhte hii....mundi hilake punchhta h ....kya hai????
Raj: sir, factory me kuchh chize sahi nahi ho rahi!!



(Nirajan das... uske bolne ka lehja aur body language dekhte hi... ye ladka jaisa dikh raha h wesa h nahi)
Nirajan das: aur kya h wo chize??? Mene khud, sara nirikshan apni aankho se kiya h... mujhe to kuchh galat nazar nahi aaya


Raaj....nukile patthar se zameen pe hi utpadan me.... Upyog hone wale raw material ka anupat use samjhane laga kyunki Niranjan das kaafi padha likha aadmi tha to use sab smjh aane laga..



Niranjan das: tumhara name kya h ladke...
Raj: ji, mera nam raj h
Niranjan das: kya tum ye pura plan is paper par likh kr mujhe de sakte ho.
Raaj: ji jaroor



Raaj ek-ek detail ko paper par likhte huye....plan taiyar karne lagta h .... Sare raw material ka production me kitna anupat rahega.....abhi tak jo matra dali jaati thi usse kitna sara waste nikalta tha....aur ab kitna niklega .....kitna fayda hoga...wo sab kuchh likh hii raha tha....ke bich bich me Niranjan das usse sawal karne lagta h..


Niranjan das: to raj ....kaha tak padhai ki h??
Raj: sir...swa-adhdhyan(self study)
Niranjan das: kisi ne to padhaya hii hoga aakhir khud se itna sab koi.... kese sikh sakta h??


Raj: hnn sir, bachpan me, dadaji ne padhna sikhaya tha ....aur unke bad mene khud se hi padha h (jhooth)
Nirajan das: to tumne or aage padhne ke bare me kuchh socha??
Raj: ghar ke halaat thik nahi h sir....abhi abhi yaha 40 boriyan uthayi h!!


Niranjan das: tum ho to kaafi kaabil, mai to kahunga tumhe aage ki padhai karni chahiye???
Raj (man me): "kyu dimag kha raha h be...tujhse to jyada hi pada likha hu"....... Jii nhi sir, kaafi jimmedarian h sar pe


Niranjan das: to aage ke liye kuchh or soch rakkha h...
Raj: ye lo sir, ho gaya aapka plan ready....


nuranjan das sabhi chizon ko bariki se dekhta h ....dono ke bich kaafi chizo ko lekar discussion bhi hota h..


Niranjan das: to iska matlab h .....mahine ke 13 se 17 hajar ka munafa aur hoga...
Raj: bilkul sir..ye ratio ek dam satik h


Niranjan das: raj ko 1 hajar ka chek pakdate huye... ye pese tumhare is plan k liye..aaj mai bohot khush hu...
Raj: sir, kya mai kuchh aur bhi mang sakta hu?


Niranjan das: hnn hn batao ....mujhse ban sakega to jaroor kar dunga
Raj: thik h to mujhe is factory me advisor ki post de do..
Niranjan das: kuchh sochte huyelekin..
Raj: uske liye me aapse pese nahi lunga
Par agar..... kuchh aur khamiya main aapko bata paya to uske..... lagenge
(Raj man me: mujhe nahi pata tha iske liye 1000 rupay ka inam mil jayga, uperwale! kya khel khelte ho yrr )


Niranjan das....man me bina pese ke hi to rakhna h "ye to aur bhi achhi baat h"

Niranjan das raj ko ek pasbook ki tarah dikhne wali chhoti si dairy pakda deta h, jiske andar ek hii page tha aur usme nirajan das ki seal aur sign dono maujood the....ye ek prakar ka permit tha...


Raj use dekh, bohot khush hua..... Kyunki use pata tha is factory me bohot se sudhar ab bhi kiye jaa sakte h...tabhi waha prabhari aa jata h..


Prabhari: kyun ladke thak gaya kya ....bas 40 boriyan
Raj...uske muh ke aage permit dikhate huye ....ab me ye borian nahi uthaunga aur hath aage karte huye "40 boriyon ke 2 rupay"


Prabhari ki bolti band ho gai ....usne nirajan das ki taraf dekha... to usne bhi sir hilake use pese de dene ke liye kaha ....ab raaj ke pas 1002 rupay the


Niranjan das: mere dost ki factory yaha se ek kilometer door h.... Aur band hone ki kagar pe aa gai h ....agar tum uski madad kar sakte ho to .....
Raj: jii bilkul, lekin usse pehle mujhe bank jaana h..


Niranjan das ...raj ko address pakdate huye ....iske pas hi bank bhi h.
Raj: dhanyawad, sir....


Raj: suraj ki taraf dekhte huye 1 baj rhe honge...
"Sabse pehle bank se pese le leta hu, agar band ho gaya to dikkat ho jaygi"



Wahin Ghar par:

Seema: kaafi der ho gai h, chalo amma ko khana de aati hu .... aur wo nikal padti h bade ghar ki or

Seema.. gate khatkhatate huye, Amma!...o .. Amma!!..
Budhiya: aa rahi hu....naashpiti, kahi darwaja hi na tod de!!
Seema : Amma ko khana pakdake jane hi wali thi k....

Budhiya: ye bhagwan!! Yehh .. yehh... bahu, mere Paon dukh rahe h, daba de zara.. to seema uske pair dabane lagti h
Budhiya: raju kyun nahi aaya khana dene
Seema: wo..wo sheher gaye h amma!!....

budhiya: aisa kon sa kaam aa gya tha... ki sheher jana pada??
Seema: kaam hi talshne gaye h....??
Budhiya: hmmm... are!! zor laga, khana nhi khai ka, zara bhi dam nahi h hathon me....... ishhh!! Are itne zor se kyun daba rahi h marna chahti h kya mujhe

(Budhiya jab tak kisi ko taane na de de uska khana hajam nahi hota, aur aaj to use kaafi dino baad mauka mila tha..... Seema ko khoob jali-kati sunati h aur saf safai ke kaam me laga k rakhti h)




Shehar mein:

Raj bank se pese lene ke baad address punchhte punchhte factory pahuch jata h


Factory malik (chandra shekhar): to tum ho raj ..... darasal Niranjan das ne pehle hi telephone par chandra shekhar ko raj ke bare m bata diya tha


Raj: jii han, usne Niranjan das se mila permit dikhate huye kaha
Chandrashekhar: uper se niche tak raj ko ghoorke dekhta h, use lag hii nahi rha tha ki ye wahi ladka ..... Jiski tarif usne Niranjan se suni


Chandrashekhar: thik h, aao yaha .....dekho ye h hamari mashine jo kharab hii hoti rehti h.....fayde se jyada nuksan ho raha h.....pehle to sab sahi chal raha tha ....lekin achanak se ghata hone laga h..


Raaj sari masino ko dekhta h ....fir unhe bar bar chalu karke .... Apne tamam observation likhta jata h....aur phir 5 mashine ek sath chala deta h ...... 2 ghante ho chuke the use observe krte- karte.... Isi chakkar me... 2 aur mashino me kharabi aa gai ...


Raj: jb shuruwat me aapne ye mashine lagwai to wo ekdam nai thi .... isiliye adhik load le paa rahi thi....aur aapne bhi inse jyada se jyda kaam liya.....to

Pehli galti ye h kii aapne mashino par bohot jyada load dala... aur ab bhi utna hi load dal rahe ho..

Dusri galti ....mashine garam hoti h ....har 2 ghante k bad aapko inhe band karna chahiye jo ki aap nahi karte

Teesri galti....inka rakh-rakhav sahi se nahi kiya ja raha... isiliye mashino me gadbadi kuchh jyada hi jaldi aa rahi h..


Khair agar aap pehli do galtiya sudhar lete ho........to kal se aapki mashine km kharab hongi.....chalo check karte h...
aur Raj sari ki saari mashine chala deta h


Raaj ke man me chal raha tha... agar yun hii mashine check karne betha to aaj ghar nahi ja paunga .... Par pese bhi to kamane h....koi baat nahi agar aaj ghar nahi jaa paya to..



Khet me:

Kallu: chalo maa, ye baadi ka kaam to ho gaya.... 'Ab bhabi jaane unka kaam jaane'
Kallu ki maa: hnn beta chal.....pehle kuye me chalke hath muh dho le fr aaram karna.....

Thodi hi der bad kallu apne ghar me aaram karte huye chai pi raha tha....'meena agar m so jau to utha dena .....doodh lene v jana h'..



5:00pm
Factory me~

Chandrashekhar: Raj itna kaafi h, tum shayad sahi keh rahe ho....
Raj: nahi !!abhi nahi..... pichhle do ghante se ek v mashin kharab nhi hui aur to aur unse awaj bhi ekdam thik aa rahi h.....aapko iss taraf se v hawa ko pas hone ke liye jagah deni padegi ....isse mashino ki efficiency badh jayegi...


Raj: mujhe laga tha..... aaj sari rat hm testing krne wale .....par thik ....aapko ghar jana h to..... chalte h
Chandrashekhar: tumhara avlokan to ekdam sahi lag raha h lekin..... Kitna kaam karega kitna nahi kal pata lagega....


Raaj: kal me khud hi kharab hui mashino ke parts dekhunga.... Aur mashin me kya sudhar ho sakta h ye bhi bataunga..
Chandrashekhar: bohot bohot shukriya
Raj: are koi baat nhi par kya aap mujhe apni cycle se bas stand tk chhod denge..
Chandrashekhar: chalo betho


Aur thodi hii der bad raaj bus stand me khada tha, abhi bhi bus ko chhutne me 20 minute baaki the ..... To usne pas hi dukan se.... kiraane ka saman pack karaya..... sath hi ruchi k khane k liye biscuits aur ek dabba chocolate....


uske gaon ki taraf 2 hi bus jaati thi-

"ek subah~ gaon se sheher aur sham ko sheher se gaon tak chhodti thi" jabki "dusri subha sheher se gaon aur sham ko gaon se sheher leke jaati thi"


Khair bus chal padi....aur jb raj se 10 paise bus conductor ne liye ....to wo fr se soch me pad gaya....kaafi der sochne aur samjhne k bad wo is natije par pahucha .... Overall mere hajar rupay 2024 ke 27 hajar rupay to bante h ......lekin mai kin chizon par kharch karta hu ye un par v nirbhar karta h


Kuchh chizo ke liye yahi hajar rupay 40 hajar h to kuchh ke liye bas 30 hajar..... Jise exact .... calculate nahi kiya jaa sakta...tabhi shor hone laga...bus kharab ho gai...bus kharab ho gai..


Andhera ho chuka tha... to sabhi log bus ke ird gird mandra rahe the.....jbki bus conductor aur driver bar bar yahi keh rhe the bas ho gaya.... bas ho gaya....


isi bas ho gaya ke chakkar me 3 ghante gujar gaye ....bas bhi jake bich sunsan raste me bigdi thi...ab koi kare to kya kre ...."Bc isse achha to bailgaadi thi" ....bas is gali ki hi kami thi k Bus chalu ho gai .....
aur kachche ubad-khabad raston me dolti hui, hmari udanpari ja pohonchi 'TOLA'


Jii han raj ka gaon tola aa gya tha.... raj ghar pahunchte hii....seema!!!..seema!!
raj ki itni tej aawaj sunke kahi aaj v sharab pike to nhi aaye

bechari ki halki si aankh lag gai thi.... ab dar lag raha tha.... dari hui jake wo gate kholti h ......raj use saman pakdate huye... chalo khana lagao....


Ek to din bhar ki thakan uper se naaste ke alawa kuchh v gaya nahi tha pet m.......Raj... hath muh dhoke khane beth jata h ...


Raaj kha raha tha aur seema use khate huye dekh rahi thi....bhookh ke mare raj ka uski taraf bilkul v dhyan nahi tha ...aur jb dhyan gya..


tumne khana khaya??
Seema...mundi hilate huye nahi ka ishara karti h
Raj..kyu nahi khaya??.....ab seema kya hii bole wo shant rehti h

Raj:kyu???...nahi????...khaya?????...
Raj ke is tarike se punchne pr uske aanshu behne lgte h..
Raj: are! Thik h ...thik h...mene kal bhi samjhaya tha....mere bina khana khay..... tum khana kha sakti ho ....

Jb kal kha liya tha to aaj v kha leti... Raj uske liye khana plate me dalta h or apne hathon se khilane lagta h.....wo khate huy ....ab v sisak rhi thi.... to raj use shant karwata h...aur fr se khilane lagta h..



Khana ho jaane ke baad raj uska hath apne sir pe rakhta huye kasam deta h....ab se time se khana kha lena.... chahe me yaha rahu ya na rahu.....

"main jaha bhi rahunga bhukha to bilkul bhi nahi rahunga..."


Raj: seema ka hath pakadte huye, chalo ab apni aankhe band karo......are! mundi niche nahi karni ....bas aakhe band karni h.... hmmnn..aur ab aankhe khol do


Seema ke hath me 800rs the....ek to usne pehli bar 50rs ka note hath me liya tha.... uper se itne sare


(50rs ka note jari huye abhi kuchh hi wakt hua tha to bohot ki kam log the jinhone use dekha bhi tha)



Seema unhe baar baar gin rahi thi....aur har bar galti kr rhi thi....raj use correct krta h..
Seema: kya?? 800 rupay...k..k..kahi aapne jua to nahi khela??

(Bol to gai thi kuchh aisa jo use nahi bolna tha)

Raj: mn me kehta h "ek to pehli bar muh se kuchh foota .... Uper se itna ganda"......are nahi, pagal juye me bhala koi ek din me itne sare pese jitta h??


Raj use permit dikhate huye..... Ye dekh mujhe kam mila h aur ye usi k pese h.... seema ko to kuchh bhi smjh nahi aaya lekin muhar aur hastakshaar dekh ke usne bharosa kr lia..
"lekin man me ye tha ki kahi koi galat kaam to nahi kar rhe ... Aakhir aisa kon sa kaam h jisme ek hii din me itne sare pese milte h....note to ekdam naye h"


Fir Raaj apne kamre me chala gya aur seema ne pese chhipake sahi jagah rakh diye....


Abhi wo leti hi thi k........ raaj chaddar leke uske kamre me aa gaya... Aur
Seema jo pehle se sehmi hui thi... Uske aane ki ahat paate hi... dubak ke so gai....

Raaj uske bagal m jake lait gaya ...Aur dheere dheere uske karib jane laga

seema bayi karwat liye ruchi ki taraf muh karke leti hui thi.....
"dibbi ki halki Roshni me uski kamar ka wo curve.... jese balkhati hui hirni koi vishisht aakriti dharan .....kiye leti ho"

Raj jese-jese uske barib ja raha tha... uski dhadkane badhti jaa rhi thi....

"Fir jese hi raj ki garam saanson ne uski gardan ko chhua.......pure sharir me ek sihran si daud gai"


Seema ke itne pas.... raj kabhi nahi aaya tha... aur aaj jab wo jaag rahi thi ...uske man me...yahi chal rha tha.... ab kya hoga???.......uski ghabrahat bhi badhti jaa rahi thi....


Raj kii garam sanse......uske jism me ek alag hi romanch paida kr rhi thi....

raj ne fr aage badhte huye apne ek hath ko uski kamar pe lapeta aur ekdam hii chipak gaya...


Iss hamle se seema ka sharir ekdam hi sunn pad gaya tha....bas dhadkane hii thi jinki awaj aur gati use mehsoos ho rahi thi....

Aage badhte huye raj ne jb apne honth uski gardan par rakhe.... To seema ne apne hath kade/kathor karte huye..... mutthi bhinch li..


Gardan pe chumban ke sath hi, raj ne apna hath kamar se thoda or uper.... uske pet pr chalana shuru kar diya .........sath hi ek tang uthake uske uper rakh dii


Raj ke chalte huye hath ne jaise hii seema ki nabhi ko chhua.... uski kapkapi chhot gai ......... Aur usne apne aap ko sikod liya....


Raj ko bhi pata tha..... seema jaag rahi h to usne apne hath .....ko uske bayi gal ke nich rakha aur uska muh ko apni taraf ghuma liya.......isse seema ko karwat badalni pad gai ...

Raj ne fr apne dono hatho me seema ka chehra thama aur uske labon ko bohot hi jor se chusne laga....

Raj ne seema k hontho ko apne hontho me kaid kar liye tha.... itnti zordar kis ke bad bhi seema ki taraf se koi pahel nahi hui... Uske liye ye bilkul hi naya anubhav tha....


Suresh ne kabhi... Uske sath aisa nahi kiya tha....ye pehli bar tha jb kisi ne.... uske adhron ko.... Apne hontho ke bich bharke...... is tarike se choosa tha


Raj kiss me itna doob gaya tha ki.....use ehsaas hii nahi hua....
Seema zara bhi uska sath nahi de rahi...aur jb use ehsaas hua to usne use chhod diya...


Raj aankhe band kiye huye soch raha tha.... Bc hamare bich to zara bhi pyar nahi h.... Lagta h mene jaldbazi kar di......kafi sochne samjhne ke baad usne nishchay kiya .... Vah pehle seema ka dil jeetega...


Wahi seema ke dil ki dhadkane ab jaake thoda shant hui thi ....... usne muh wapis se ruchi ki taraf ghuma liya
.........abhi abhi jo hua uska ehsas abhi v uske labon pe tha ..... Apni ungli se jese hii usne honth ko chhua .....uske chehre par muskan fail gai..


Raj: lekin bc dil jitunga kese???.... bolti to kuchh... h niii....... To kyu na, pehle beti ko pataya jaye ....."samll steps"...... "Ab sabse aasan to wahi h"


Raaj isi udhedh-bun me... gehri nind chala gaya.......jabki Seema chehre pe muskan liye pehle hi so chuki thi
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Ab raj aage.... kya-kya krta h.... Aur beti ka support..... seema ka dil jeetne me..... kitni madad karta h ....jaanne k liye bane rahiye
Thank you for your love & support

Shandar jabardast romantic update

 

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Update 2​

Kal subah, jab kallu raj se baat kane ke baad ghar lauta to usne apni maa ko saara majra samjhaya..

Kallu ki ma: kya!!!..3 ekad, beta ye to bohot achhi khabar h...... lekin us sharabi ka koi bharosha nahi.....Tu iss bare me ek bar... seema se jaroor punchh lena..
Kallu: thik h maa...apki tasalli ke liye puchh lunga..

Kallu ki maa: thik h..thik h, bharosha to nahi ho raha lekin aur kya kaha raju ne??

Kallu: Aur to!!!.....are!! han aaj se doodh wahi se aaya karega, sham ko lene to me chala jaunga lekin subah meena ko bhej diya karna..
Kallu ki ma: ye to or bhi badhiya khabar h....
Kallu: wo sab to thik h lekin mujhe kal k kal hi..... aam ke pas wali jagah par baadi lagai h.... Raju keh raha tha bhabhi waha sabjiya lagayengi..


Kallu ki maa: are! to main chalungi na tere sath...... aur tu kahe to meena ko bhi le chale


Kallu: nahi!!! Hm dono hi bohot h sham se pehele kaam khatm karne k liye.. ....aur aakhir me us khet ki sabjiya khane .....hame v to milne wali h...


Kallu ki maa: kya?? To tune iss bare me bhi usse baat kar li...
Kallu: are! Maa raju mera dost h .... ye bhala koi kehne puchhne ki baat h..


(Sham ko mar khane ki wajah se... lete lete raj ko halki neend aa gai thi...thik usi wakt kallu bade ghar tak Amma ko khana pahuchane ke liye daubara wapis aaya......aur tabhi usne khet wali saari baatein seema se confirm kr li)

Rat me jb raj leta hua tha.... use neend nahi aa rahi thi, maar khane ki wajah se sara badan toot raha tha ...aur uske samne seema ka wo udas chehra bar bar aa rha tha...

Raaj: Bhagwan!! ab to khush ho na aap! ......hsshh!! Kya hi lode lage pade h zindagi ke....ek to is mc ne jua khel ke sari fasal barbad di.... uper se Ravi seth, 'behen ke lode' aaj hi marna tha tere ko ....sala ab to m seema ke kamre me bhi nahi ja sakta....kaha sab thik karne chala tha...aur kya ho gaya


Pareshan hoke jb raaj ne apni aankhe band ki.....to dheere-dheere uska man shant hone laga..... aur jese hi uska man shant hua, dimag kaam karne laga... Aaj jo v hua usme meri kya galti thi??.....ye sab to us gandu ka kiya dhara h ....sshh!!! sala iski yaadon ne confuse kar rakha h, Pata hi nahi chalta galti kiski h ...


Hmm... to thik h, Kal sabse pehle sheher nikalte h, wahi se shuru hoga ....."iss naye jivan ka safar"
Raj ko bistar bohot hi uncomfortable lag rha tha isliye man me counting krne lagta h, taaki neend aa jaaye....aur kaafi koshisho ke baad wah gehri neend so jata h


Khair raat gujri subah hui....Seema apna daily routine follow krte huye pehle aaj ke liye aata taiyar karti h...aur fir naha dhoke pooj path..


Suraj nikalne wala tha...chidiya chahchahaa rahi thi... to Raaj bhi uthte huye Angdai leta h aur hath pau stretch karte huye ...bahar nikal aata h


Use yaad tha .....aaj sheher nikalna h isiliye fataft se datun karke ....nahane chala jaata h...


Wahi seema nashta taiyar karne me lagi thi....tab tak raaj naha-dhoke wapis aa jata h


Subah se ek bhi baar dono ka 'aamna-samna' nahi hua tha..
Khair.....Seema chai leke aati h, aur raj ko pakdake, ruchi ke pas chali jaati h


Raaj chai peete peete sochta h.... Bc iske sath itna bura vyavhar hota aaya h, iske baad bhi ye aurat itni achhi kyun h.... abhi kal kal jo hua, mujhe to laga tha kuchh dino tk roothi rahegi..


Wo abhi ye soch hi raha tha k.....seema wahi aangan me aake....taar me kapde daalne lagti h
Raaj ka dhyan iss wakt kahi aur tha, lekin jese hi kapde se pani ki boond chhitak ke uske maathe pe padi... wo seema ki or dekhne laga


Suraj se aane wali, subah ki sheetal kirne seema pr pad rhi thi..... Jisme se nikharta hua uska ye roop...raj ko mohit kar raha tha....gadraya badan, chikni kamar... uper se leke niche tak "sundarta ki murat"!!!


Seema ko bhi ab ye ehsaas ho gaya tha, ki ....Raj use hi ghoor raha h... tabhi dono ka dhyan bhang karne wali dhwani unke kaano m padti h....Bhabhi!!


Meena: Are!! itni jaldi.....aapne subha-subha kyu naha liya, kahi jaana h kya??
Seema: Nahi! Banno, me to roj isi tarah, subah hi nahake taiyar ho jaati hu..... Par aaj doodh lene tum aai ho??


Meena: hn, bhabhi.... Aur av se subah, me hi aaya karungi..
Seema: thik h lekin pehle nashta kr le..
Meena: are!! nahi bhabhi, bhai aur maa chai ka intezar kr h aur unhe bhi to nashta karana h....
Seema: thik h! fir kabhi kehte huye, use doodh pakda deti h.....


Meena ke jaate hi Raj Seema se kehta hai.....Seema! m aaj sheher jaa raha hu kaam talashne.... par seema ki taraf se koi jawab nahi aata


Raj: abhi to meena se hans-hans k baat kar rahi thi... aur ab dekho..... tabhi seema uske pas nashta leke aa jaati h
Raj nashta karte huye, bas use hi dekh raha tha .... to wahin seema, tirchhi najron se use aisa krte huye dekh rahi thi..


Wahi dusri taraf:
Ghar pahunchte hi meena.... sabse pehle chai banne rakhti h aur fir nashte ki taiyari m lag jati h..

Kallu: maa aaj baadi lagane ka kaam nipta lete h.... Fir kal se jutai chalu kar denge
Kallu ki maa: hn beta!! ab or der nahi karni chahiye..... Gao me sabne jutai chalu kar di h


Tabhi meena waha chai leke aa jaati h...aur jb tak ye dono chai peete huye baat krte h... tab tak nashta bhi banke taiyar ho jaata h....
Khair dono, maa-bete nashta krke, nikal padte h aam k pas wali zameen par..


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Wahin Jb raj ka nashta ho gaya to usne amma ke liye nashta pack karwaya aur seema se kaha..dopahar, ka khana dene chali jaana... Mujhe aane me der ho jayegi..aur nikal pada, amma ka nashta leke...

shehar jaane ke liye raaj ki jeb m footi kodi nii thi....tabhi uski nazar ek bailgaadi pe padi....hmmm..Kaka bhi to sheher jaate rhte h!!!
Raaj: aur kaka!!! ...kaha chali sawari???
Kaka: bas bitwa, sheher hii jaa raha the
Raaj: to kaka mujhe v sath le chaloge...
Kaha: thik bitwa, bas ek bar gaadi load ho jaye


Raaj: thik h kaka....tb tk me amma ko, ye nashta de aau aur raj nikal padta hai bade ghar ki or


Wahi dusri or:
Beta!! kallu ye jagah to bohot badi h sabjiya lagane ke liye...
Kallu: hnn maa, aur iski maati bhi badhiya h..
Kallu ki ma: beta kuchh socha, h itni sari jameen pe jutai kese hogi??
Kallu: maa!! kaam utna hii h, jitna me dusron ke kheton me karta tha...aur tum ho to sahi mere sath..

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Raaj nashta dete hi, kaka ke paas wapis aa gaya....
Raj: ho gai kaka loading??
Kaka: bas beta!! ho hii gai....raaj aakhiri kuchh bore uthwane me unki madad krta h..


Thodi der bad:

'Raj aur kaka dono bailgaadi me' .. kaka! ye maal.....ab kaha utrega??
Kaka: factory me utrega, bitua....

Raj: hmm...
"Abhi ke liye factory hi sahi rahegi... Jyada bhatakna v nahi padega'
Raj: kaka! Factory me mere layak koi kaam hoga kya??


Kaka...raaj ki taraf ashcharya se dekhne lage..... unhe lag rha tha, kahi unhone kuchh galat to nahi sun liya ......


(Raju ke karam the hi itne famous!! Poora gaon janta tha raaju kitna bada juari h.....hnn nashe ki aadat use avi avi lagii thi......lekin uski harkaton ki wjh se .......iss baat ko failne me zara bhi wakt nahi lagaa)


Raj: kaka!!...kaka.. are! kaha kho gaye??
Kaka: are! Hn hn beta...kaam...kaam h to sahi lekin tum ...tum kar to paoge...(raj bich me hi) .... Are hn hn kaka me kar lunga...


2:30 ghante bad:

Kaka:bitwa uu rahi factory.....
Raj(khosh hokar): hnn hnn kaka!.....

(Man me ...aakhir aa hii gai, achha hua! factory sheher ke bahar hi thi...... bc 13-14 kilometer m hi dhai ghante barbad ho gaye)


Kaka: chalo bitwa...Tumhe kam dilwata hu.....aur kaka Pahuch jate h .......waha ke prabhari k pas (prabhari- incharge)


Prabhari: aao rambihari aao.... bilkul!! sahi time pe aaye ho!!
Rambihari: bas maalik kripa h aapki.... ye balak h, agar iske layak koi kaam mil jaata to..


Prabhari: hnn hnn, wo waha boriya dekh rahe ho unhe wahaaaaa se uthakar andar rakhna h....
Aur ha bhai ram bihari.... ye rahi tumare aaj ke maal ki kimat..

Raj: kaka... Kb tak nikloge ??
Rambihari: bas beta.... Maal utarte hi nakal jaunga..
Raj (prabhari se): aur m...mujhe kitni kimat milegi?
Prabhari....raj ko uper se niche tak dekhte huye......10 bori pe 50 paisa...(1/2₹)


Raj(man me): ye bhosdi ka! mujhe aise q dekh raha h... abhi majboori h... Bas thode se pese ban jaaye fr thukunga tk nahi aise kaam pe


Khair Raaj jake bori uthane lagta h lekin usse nahi uthti.... Fir thodi der koshish karne ke baad.. .....jab use sahi technique aa gai to usne bori ko uthaya ....kandhe pe rakha.... aur andar le gaya..


7 boriya uthane ke baad hii raj ko pata lag gaya, wo admi.... use aise kyun dekh rha tha ...
raj: ek aur..bas ek aur krte-krte 10 boriya andar rakh leta h...


(Ek to wo bas 19 sal ka tha upar se kal jo mar padi thi wo alg dard kr rhi thi)


Raj dashvi bori rakhne ke bad ....andar hi thak ke baith gaya aur waha chal rhe kaam ko dekhne laga ....
Kaafi der tak jo bhi chize uske samne ghatti rahi wo unhe observe krta raha ....aur man me unke bare me aanklan karne laga .... bohot sare calculation uske dimag me chal hi rahe the ki ....tabhi!!


Prabhari: oye! hero abhi se thak gaya, beta ye bachchon ka kaam nii h...


(Raj ko gussa to bohot aa rha tha Lekin kya hii kr leta)
kaafi aaram ho gaya tha, to fir lag gaya boriyan uthane...... or boriya uthate-uthate...


Bhagwan ye kaisa khel khel rahe ho aap...'Jb mere pas sabkuchh tha to pariwar chhin liya' .....ab mere pas pariwar h..... to unhe dene ke liye "na mere pas wakt hai aur na hi pese"


Raaj ab tak 40 boriyan andar rakh chuka tha aur uski halat..... bohot hi jyada patli ho rakkhi thi....
Hanfte huye..... bc! itni dur boriya rakhne ko kisne kaha tha..... (Sans bharte huye)..andar hi le jani thi, to..... pas me rakhwa lete.....



Raaj baithe-baithe aaram kar raha tha Tabhi us factory ka malik nirikshan krne aa jata h aur Puri factory ka chakkar laga lene ke bad..... wahi aake ek kurshi pe beth jata h


Prabhari, factory malik ko aaj ki attendance aur anya chizo Ka lekha jokha pakda ke chala jata h.... tabhi raj uske pas aata h....
Factory malik (Niranjan das).....raj ko dekhte hii....mundi hilake punchhta h ....kya hai????
Raj: sir, factory me kuchh chize sahi nahi ho rahi!!



(Nirajan das... uske bolne ka lehja aur body language dekhte hi... ye ladka jaisa dikh raha h wesa h nahi)
Nirajan das: aur kya h wo chize??? Mene khud, sara nirikshan apni aankho se kiya h... mujhe to kuchh galat nazar nahi aaya


Raaj....nukile patthar se zameen pe hi utpadan me.... Upyog hone wale raw material ka anupat use samjhane laga kyunki Niranjan das kaafi padha likha aadmi tha to use sab smjh aane laga..



Niranjan das: tumhara name kya h ladke...
Raj: ji, mera nam raj h
Niranjan das: kya tum ye pura plan is paper par likh kr mujhe de sakte ho.
Raaj: ji jaroor



Raaj ek-ek detail ko paper par likhte huye....plan taiyar karne lagta h .... Sare raw material ka production me kitna anupat rahega.....abhi tak jo matra dali jaati thi usse kitna sara waste nikalta tha....aur ab kitna niklega .....kitna fayda hoga...wo sab kuchh likh hii raha tha....ke bich bich me Niranjan das usse sawal karne lagta h..


Niranjan das: to raj ....kaha tak padhai ki h??
Raj: sir...swa-adhdhyan(self study)
Niranjan das: kisi ne to padhaya hii hoga aakhir khud se itna sab koi.... kese sikh sakta h??


Raj: hnn sir, bachpan me, dadaji ne padhna sikhaya tha ....aur unke bad mene khud se hi padha h (jhooth)
Nirajan das: to tumne or aage padhne ke bare me kuchh socha??
Raj: ghar ke halaat thik nahi h sir....abhi abhi yaha 40 boriyan uthayi h!!


Niranjan das: tum ho to kaafi kaabil, mai to kahunga tumhe aage ki padhai karni chahiye???
Raj (man me): "kyu dimag kha raha h be...tujhse to jyada hi pada likha hu"....... Jii nhi sir, kaafi jimmedarian h sar pe


Niranjan das: to aage ke liye kuchh or soch rakkha h...
Raj: ye lo sir, ho gaya aapka plan ready....


nuranjan das sabhi chizon ko bariki se dekhta h ....dono ke bich kaafi chizo ko lekar discussion bhi hota h..


Niranjan das: to iska matlab h .....mahine ke 13 se 17 hajar ka munafa aur hoga...
Raj: bilkul sir..ye ratio ek dam satik h


Niranjan das: raj ko 1 hajar ka chek pakdate huye... ye pese tumhare is plan k liye..aaj mai bohot khush hu...
Raj: sir, kya mai kuchh aur bhi mang sakta hu?


Niranjan das: hnn hn batao ....mujhse ban sakega to jaroor kar dunga
Raj: thik h to mujhe is factory me advisor ki post de do..
Niranjan das: kuchh sochte huyelekin..
Raj: uske liye me aapse pese nahi lunga
Par agar..... kuchh aur khamiya main aapko bata paya to uske..... lagenge
(Raj man me: mujhe nahi pata tha iske liye 1000 rupay ka inam mil jayga, uperwale! kya khel khelte ho yrr )


Niranjan das....man me bina pese ke hi to rakhna h "ye to aur bhi achhi baat h"

Niranjan das raj ko ek pasbook ki tarah dikhne wali chhoti si dairy pakda deta h, jiske andar ek hii page tha aur usme nirajan das ki seal aur sign dono maujood the....ye ek prakar ka permit tha...


Raj use dekh, bohot khush hua..... Kyunki use pata tha is factory me bohot se sudhar ab bhi kiye jaa sakte h...tabhi waha prabhari aa jata h..


Prabhari: kyun ladke thak gaya kya ....bas 40 boriyan
Raj...uske muh ke aage permit dikhate huye ....ab me ye borian nahi uthaunga aur hath aage karte huye "40 boriyon ke 2 rupay"


Prabhari ki bolti band ho gai ....usne nirajan das ki taraf dekha... to usne bhi sir hilake use pese de dene ke liye kaha ....ab raaj ke pas 1002 rupay the


Niranjan das: mere dost ki factory yaha se ek kilometer door h.... Aur band hone ki kagar pe aa gai h ....agar tum uski madad kar sakte ho to .....
Raj: jii bilkul, lekin usse pehle mujhe bank jaana h..


Niranjan das ...raj ko address pakdate huye ....iske pas hi bank bhi h.
Raj: dhanyawad, sir....


Raj: suraj ki taraf dekhte huye 1 baj rhe honge...
"Sabse pehle bank se pese le leta hu, agar band ho gaya to dikkat ho jaygi"



Wahin Ghar par:

Seema: kaafi der ho gai h, chalo amma ko khana de aati hu .... aur wo nikal padti h bade ghar ki or

Seema.. gate khatkhatate huye, Amma!...o .. Amma!!..
Budhiya: aa rahi hu....naashpiti, kahi darwaja hi na tod de!!
Seema : Amma ko khana pakdake jane hi wali thi k....

Budhiya: ye bhagwan!! Yehh .. yehh... bahu, mere Paon dukh rahe h, daba de zara.. to seema uske pair dabane lagti h
Budhiya: raju kyun nahi aaya khana dene
Seema: wo..wo sheher gaye h amma!!....

budhiya: aisa kon sa kaam aa gya tha... ki sheher jana pada??
Seema: kaam hi talshne gaye h....??
Budhiya: hmmm... are!! zor laga, khana nhi khai ka, zara bhi dam nahi h hathon me....... ishhh!! Are itne zor se kyun daba rahi h marna chahti h kya mujhe

(Budhiya jab tak kisi ko taane na de de uska khana hajam nahi hota, aur aaj to use kaafi dino baad mauka mila tha..... Seema ko khoob jali-kati sunati h aur saf safai ke kaam me laga k rakhti h)




Shehar mein:

Raj bank se pese lene ke baad address punchhte punchhte factory pahuch jata h


Factory malik (chandra shekhar): to tum ho raj ..... darasal Niranjan das ne pehle hi telephone par chandra shekhar ko raj ke bare m bata diya tha


Raj: jii han, usne Niranjan das se mila permit dikhate huye kaha
Chandrashekhar: uper se niche tak raj ko ghoorke dekhta h, use lag hii nahi rha tha ki ye wahi ladka ..... Jiski tarif usne Niranjan se suni


Chandrashekhar: thik h, aao yaha .....dekho ye h hamari mashine jo kharab hii hoti rehti h.....fayde se jyada nuksan ho raha h.....pehle to sab sahi chal raha tha ....lekin achanak se ghata hone laga h..


Raaj sari masino ko dekhta h ....fir unhe bar bar chalu karke .... Apne tamam observation likhta jata h....aur phir 5 mashine ek sath chala deta h ...... 2 ghante ho chuke the use observe krte- karte.... Isi chakkar me... 2 aur mashino me kharabi aa gai ...


Raj: jb shuruwat me aapne ye mashine lagwai to wo ekdam nai thi .... isiliye adhik load le paa rahi thi....aur aapne bhi inse jyada se jyda kaam liya.....to

Pehli galti ye h kii aapne mashino par bohot jyada load dala... aur ab bhi utna hi load dal rahe ho..

Dusri galti ....mashine garam hoti h ....har 2 ghante k bad aapko inhe band karna chahiye jo ki aap nahi karte

Teesri galti....inka rakh-rakhav sahi se nahi kiya ja raha... isiliye mashino me gadbadi kuchh jyada hi jaldi aa rahi h..


Khair agar aap pehli do galtiya sudhar lete ho........to kal se aapki mashine km kharab hongi.....chalo check karte h...
aur Raj sari ki saari mashine chala deta h


Raaj ke man me chal raha tha... agar yun hii mashine check karne betha to aaj ghar nahi ja paunga .... Par pese bhi to kamane h....koi baat nahi agar aaj ghar nahi jaa paya to..



Khet me:

Kallu: chalo maa, ye baadi ka kaam to ho gaya.... 'Ab bhabi jaane unka kaam jaane'
Kallu ki maa: hnn beta chal.....pehle kuye me chalke hath muh dho le fr aaram karna.....

Thodi hi der bad kallu apne ghar me aaram karte huye chai pi raha tha....'meena agar m so jau to utha dena .....doodh lene v jana h'..



5:00pm
Factory me~

Chandrashekhar: Raj itna kaafi h, tum shayad sahi keh rahe ho....
Raj: nahi !!abhi nahi..... pichhle do ghante se ek v mashin kharab nhi hui aur to aur unse awaj bhi ekdam thik aa rahi h.....aapko iss taraf se v hawa ko pas hone ke liye jagah deni padegi ....isse mashino ki efficiency badh jayegi...


Raj: mujhe laga tha..... aaj sari rat hm testing krne wale .....par thik ....aapko ghar jana h to..... chalte h
Chandrashekhar: tumhara avlokan to ekdam sahi lag raha h lekin..... Kitna kaam karega kitna nahi kal pata lagega....


Raaj: kal me khud hi kharab hui mashino ke parts dekhunga.... Aur mashin me kya sudhar ho sakta h ye bhi bataunga..
Chandrashekhar: bohot bohot shukriya
Raj: are koi baat nhi par kya aap mujhe apni cycle se bas stand tk chhod denge..
Chandrashekhar: chalo betho


Aur thodi hii der bad raaj bus stand me khada tha, abhi bhi bus ko chhutne me 20 minute baaki the ..... To usne pas hi dukan se.... kiraane ka saman pack karaya..... sath hi ruchi k khane k liye biscuits aur ek dabba chocolate....


uske gaon ki taraf 2 hi bus jaati thi-

"ek subah~ gaon se sheher aur sham ko sheher se gaon tak chhodti thi" jabki "dusri subha sheher se gaon aur sham ko gaon se sheher leke jaati thi"


Khair bus chal padi....aur jb raj se 10 paise bus conductor ne liye ....to wo fr se soch me pad gaya....kaafi der sochne aur samjhne k bad wo is natije par pahucha .... Overall mere hajar rupay 2024 ke 27 hajar rupay to bante h ......lekin mai kin chizon par kharch karta hu ye un par v nirbhar karta h


Kuchh chizo ke liye yahi hajar rupay 40 hajar h to kuchh ke liye bas 30 hajar..... Jise exact .... calculate nahi kiya jaa sakta...tabhi shor hone laga...bus kharab ho gai...bus kharab ho gai..


Andhera ho chuka tha... to sabhi log bus ke ird gird mandra rahe the.....jbki bus conductor aur driver bar bar yahi keh rhe the bas ho gaya.... bas ho gaya....


isi bas ho gaya ke chakkar me 3 ghante gujar gaye ....bas bhi jake bich sunsan raste me bigdi thi...ab koi kare to kya kre ...."Bc isse achha to bailgaadi thi" ....bas is gali ki hi kami thi k Bus chalu ho gai .....
aur kachche ubad-khabad raston me dolti hui, hmari udanpari ja pohonchi 'TOLA'


Jii han raj ka gaon tola aa gya tha.... raj ghar pahunchte hii....seema!!!..seema!!
raj ki itni tej aawaj sunke kahi aaj v sharab pike to nhi aaye

bechari ki halki si aankh lag gai thi.... ab dar lag raha tha.... dari hui jake wo gate kholti h ......raj use saman pakdate huye... chalo khana lagao....


Ek to din bhar ki thakan uper se naaste ke alawa kuchh v gaya nahi tha pet m.......Raj... hath muh dhoke khane beth jata h ...


Raaj kha raha tha aur seema use khate huye dekh rahi thi....bhookh ke mare raj ka uski taraf bilkul v dhyan nahi tha ...aur jb dhyan gya..


tumne khana khaya??
Seema...mundi hilate huye nahi ka ishara karti h
Raj..kyu nahi khaya??.....ab seema kya hii bole wo shant rehti h

Raj:kyu???...nahi????...khaya?????...
Raj ke is tarike se punchne pr uske aanshu behne lgte h..
Raj: are! Thik h ...thik h...mene kal bhi samjhaya tha....mere bina khana khay..... tum khana kha sakti ho ....

Jb kal kha liya tha to aaj v kha leti... Raj uske liye khana plate me dalta h or apne hathon se khilane lagta h.....wo khate huy ....ab v sisak rhi thi.... to raj use shant karwata h...aur fr se khilane lagta h..



Khana ho jaane ke baad raj uska hath apne sir pe rakhta huye kasam deta h....ab se time se khana kha lena.... chahe me yaha rahu ya na rahu.....

"main jaha bhi rahunga bhukha to bilkul bhi nahi rahunga..."


Raj: seema ka hath pakadte huye, chalo ab apni aankhe band karo......are! mundi niche nahi karni ....bas aakhe band karni h.... hmmnn..aur ab aankhe khol do


Seema ke hath me 800rs the....ek to usne pehli bar 50rs ka note hath me liya tha.... uper se itne sare


(50rs ka note jari huye abhi kuchh hi wakt hua tha to bohot ki kam log the jinhone use dekha bhi tha)



Seema unhe baar baar gin rahi thi....aur har bar galti kr rhi thi....raj use correct krta h..
Seema: kya?? 800 rupay...k..k..kahi aapne jua to nahi khela??

(Bol to gai thi kuchh aisa jo use nahi bolna tha)

Raj: mn me kehta h "ek to pehli bar muh se kuchh foota .... Uper se itna ganda"......are nahi, pagal juye me bhala koi ek din me itne sare pese jitta h??


Raj use permit dikhate huye..... Ye dekh mujhe kam mila h aur ye usi k pese h.... seema ko to kuchh bhi smjh nahi aaya lekin muhar aur hastakshaar dekh ke usne bharosa kr lia..
"lekin man me ye tha ki kahi koi galat kaam to nahi kar rhe ... Aakhir aisa kon sa kaam h jisme ek hii din me itne sare pese milte h....note to ekdam naye h"


Fir Raaj apne kamre me chala gya aur seema ne pese chhipake sahi jagah rakh diye....


Abhi wo leti hi thi k........ raaj chaddar leke uske kamre me aa gaya... Aur
Seema jo pehle se sehmi hui thi... Uske aane ki ahat paate hi... dubak ke so gai....

Raaj uske bagal m jake lait gaya ...Aur dheere dheere uske karib jane laga

seema bayi karwat liye ruchi ki taraf muh karke leti hui thi.....
"dibbi ki halki Roshni me uski kamar ka wo curve.... jese balkhati hui hirni koi vishisht aakriti dharan .....kiye leti ho"

Raj jese-jese uske barib ja raha tha... uski dhadkane badhti jaa rhi thi....

"Fir jese hi raj ki garam saanson ne uski gardan ko chhua.......pure sharir me ek sihran si daud gai"


Seema ke itne pas.... raj kabhi nahi aaya tha... aur aaj jab wo jaag rahi thi ...uske man me...yahi chal rha tha.... ab kya hoga???.......uski ghabrahat bhi badhti jaa rahi thi....


Raj kii garam sanse......uske jism me ek alag hi romanch paida kr rhi thi....

raj ne fr aage badhte huye apne ek hath ko uski kamar pe lapeta aur ekdam hii chipak gaya...


Iss hamle se seema ka sharir ekdam hi sunn pad gaya tha....bas dhadkane hii thi jinki awaj aur gati use mehsoos ho rahi thi....

Aage badhte huye raj ne jb apne honth uski gardan par rakhe.... To seema ne apne hath kade/kathor karte huye..... mutthi bhinch li..


Gardan pe chumban ke sath hi, raj ne apna hath kamar se thoda or uper.... uske pet pr chalana shuru kar diya .........sath hi ek tang uthake uske uper rakh dii


Raj ke chalte huye hath ne jaise hii seema ki nabhi ko chhua.... uski kapkapi chhot gai ......... Aur usne apne aap ko sikod liya....


Raj ko bhi pata tha..... seema jaag rahi h to usne apne hath .....ko uske bayi gal ke nich rakha aur uska muh ko apni taraf ghuma liya.......isse seema ko karwat badalni pad gai ...

Raj ne fr apne dono hatho me seema ka chehra thama aur uske labon ko bohot hi jor se chusne laga....

Raj ne seema k hontho ko apne hontho me kaid kar liye tha.... itnti zordar kis ke bad bhi seema ki taraf se koi pahel nahi hui... Uske liye ye bilkul hi naya anubhav tha....


Suresh ne kabhi... Uske sath aisa nahi kiya tha....ye pehli bar tha jb kisi ne.... uske adhron ko.... Apne hontho ke bich bharke...... is tarike se choosa tha


Raj kiss me itna doob gaya tha ki.....use ehsaas hii nahi hua....
Seema zara bhi uska sath nahi de rahi...aur jb use ehsaas hua to usne use chhod diya...


Raj aankhe band kiye huye soch raha tha.... Bc hamare bich to zara bhi pyar nahi h.... Lagta h mene jaldbazi kar di......kafi sochne samjhne ke baad usne nishchay kiya .... Vah pehle seema ka dil jeetega...


Wahi seema ke dil ki dhadkane ab jaake thoda shant hui thi ....... usne muh wapis se ruchi ki taraf ghuma liya
.........abhi abhi jo hua uska ehsas abhi v uske labon pe tha ..... Apni ungli se jese hii usne honth ko chhua .....uske chehre par muskan fail gai..


Raj: lekin bc dil jitunga kese???.... bolti to kuchh... h niii....... To kyu na, pehle beti ko pataya jaye ....."samll steps"...... "Ab sabse aasan to wahi h"


Raaj isi udhedh-bun me... gehri nind chala gaya.......jabki Seema chehre pe muskan liye pehle hi so chuki thi
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Ab raj aage.... kya-kya krta h.... Aur beti ka support..... seema ka dil jeetne me..... kitni madad karta h ....jaanne k liye bane rahiye
Thank you for your love & support

Fantastic

 

[Yashu7979]

Zabardast update bhai

 

[Sudipkr]

Superb update bro....
Maza aa gaya padh kar Bhai...

Awesome...
Waiting for next update....

 

[Abhi123]

Update 2​

Kal subah, jab kallu raj se baat kane ke baad ghar lauta to usne apni maa ko saara majra samjhaya..

Kallu ki ma: kya!!!..3 ekad, beta ye to bohot achhi khabar h...... lekin us sharabi ka koi bharosha nahi.....Tu iss bare me ek bar... seema se jaroor punchh lena..
Kallu: thik h maa...apki tasalli ke liye puchh lunga..

Kallu ki maa: thik h..thik h, bharosha to nahi ho raha lekin aur kya kaha raju ne??

Kallu: Aur to!!!.....are!! han aaj se doodh wahi se aaya karega, sham ko lene to me chala jaunga lekin subah meena ko bhej diya karna..
Kallu ki ma: ye to or bhi badhiya khabar h....
Kallu: wo sab to thik h lekin mujhe kal k kal hi..... aam ke pas wali jagah par baadi lagai h.... Raju keh raha tha bhabhi waha sabjiya lagayengi..


Kallu ki maa: are! to main chalungi na tere sath...... aur tu kahe to meena ko bhi le chale


Kallu: nahi!!! Hm dono hi bohot h sham se pehele kaam khatm karne k liye.. ....aur aakhir me us khet ki sabjiya khane .....hame v to milne wali h...


Kallu ki maa: kya?? To tune iss bare me bhi usse baat kar li...
Kallu: are! Maa raju mera dost h .... ye bhala koi kehne puchhne ki baat h..


(Sham ko mar khane ki wajah se... lete lete raj ko halki neend aa gai thi...thik usi wakt kallu bade ghar tak Amma ko khana pahuchane ke liye daubara wapis aaya......aur tabhi usne khet wali saari baatein seema se confirm kr li)

Rat me jb raj leta hua tha.... use neend nahi aa rahi thi, maar khane ki wajah se sara badan toot raha tha ...aur uske samne seema ka wo udas chehra bar bar aa rha tha...

Raaj: Bhagwan!! ab to khush ho na aap! ......hsshh!! Kya hi lode lage pade h zindagi ke....ek to is mc ne jua khel ke sari fasal barbad di.... uper se Ravi seth, 'behen ke lode' aaj hi marna tha tere ko ....sala ab to m seema ke kamre me bhi nahi ja sakta....kaha sab thik karne chala tha...aur kya ho gaya


Pareshan hoke jb raaj ne apni aankhe band ki.....to dheere-dheere uska man shant hone laga..... aur jese hi uska man shant hua, dimag kaam karne laga... Aaj jo v hua usme meri kya galti thi??.....ye sab to us gandu ka kiya dhara h ....sshh!!! sala iski yaadon ne confuse kar rakha h, Pata hi nahi chalta galti kiski h ...


Hmm... to thik h, Kal sabse pehle sheher nikalte h, wahi se shuru hoga ....."iss naye jivan ka safar"
Raj ko bistar bohot hi uncomfortable lag rha tha isliye man me counting krne lagta h, taaki neend aa jaaye....aur kaafi koshisho ke baad wah gehri neend so jata h


Khair raat gujri subah hui....Seema apna daily routine follow krte huye pehle aaj ke liye aata taiyar karti h...aur fir naha dhoke pooj path..


Suraj nikalne wala tha...chidiya chahchahaa rahi thi... to Raaj bhi uthte huye Angdai leta h aur hath pau stretch karte huye ...bahar nikal aata h


Use yaad tha .....aaj sheher nikalna h isiliye fataft se datun karke ....nahane chala jaata h...


Wahi seema nashta taiyar karne me lagi thi....tab tak raaj naha-dhoke wapis aa jata h


Subah se ek bhi baar dono ka 'aamna-samna' nahi hua tha..
Khair.....Seema chai leke aati h, aur raj ko pakdake, ruchi ke pas chali jaati h


Raaj chai peete peete sochta h.... Bc iske sath itna bura vyavhar hota aaya h, iske baad bhi ye aurat itni achhi kyun h.... abhi kal kal jo hua, mujhe to laga tha kuchh dino tk roothi rahegi..


Wo abhi ye soch hi raha tha k.....seema wahi aangan me aake....taar me kapde daalne lagti h
Raaj ka dhyan iss wakt kahi aur tha, lekin jese hi kapde se pani ki boond chhitak ke uske maathe pe padi... wo seema ki or dekhne laga


Suraj se aane wali, subah ki sheetal kirne seema pr pad rhi thi..... Jisme se nikharta hua uska ye roop...raj ko mohit kar raha tha....gadraya badan, chikni kamar... uper se leke niche tak "sundarta ki murat"!!!


Seema ko bhi ab ye ehsaas ho gaya tha, ki ....Raj use hi ghoor raha h... tabhi dono ka dhyan bhang karne wali dhwani unke kaano m padti h....Bhabhi!!


Meena: Are!! itni jaldi.....aapne subha-subha kyu naha liya, kahi jaana h kya??
Seema: Nahi! Banno, me to roj isi tarah, subah hi nahake taiyar ho jaati hu..... Par aaj doodh lene tum aai ho??


Meena: hn, bhabhi.... Aur av se subah, me hi aaya karungi..
Seema: thik h lekin pehle nashta kr le..
Meena: are!! nahi bhabhi, bhai aur maa chai ka intezar kr h aur unhe bhi to nashta karana h....
Seema: thik h! fir kabhi kehte huye, use doodh pakda deti h.....


Meena ke jaate hi Raj Seema se kehta hai.....Seema! m aaj sheher jaa raha hu kaam talashne.... par seema ki taraf se koi jawab nahi aata


Raj: abhi to meena se hans-hans k baat kar rahi thi... aur ab dekho..... tabhi seema uske pas nashta leke aa jaati h
Raj nashta karte huye, bas use hi dekh raha tha .... to wahin seema, tirchhi najron se use aisa krte huye dekh rahi thi..


Wahi dusri taraf:
Ghar pahunchte hi meena.... sabse pehle chai banne rakhti h aur fir nashte ki taiyari m lag jati h..

Kallu: maa aaj baadi lagane ka kaam nipta lete h.... Fir kal se jutai chalu kar denge
Kallu ki maa: hn beta!! ab or der nahi karni chahiye..... Gao me sabne jutai chalu kar di h


Tabhi meena waha chai leke aa jaati h...aur jb tak ye dono chai peete huye baat krte h... tab tak nashta bhi banke taiyar ho jaata h....
Khair dono, maa-bete nashta krke, nikal padte h aam k pas wali zameen par..


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Wahin Jb raj ka nashta ho gaya to usne amma ke liye nashta pack karwaya aur seema se kaha..dopahar, ka khana dene chali jaana... Mujhe aane me der ho jayegi..aur nikal pada, amma ka nashta leke...

shehar jaane ke liye raaj ki jeb m footi kodi nii thi....tabhi uski nazar ek bailgaadi pe padi....hmmm..Kaka bhi to sheher jaate rhte h!!!
Raaj: aur kaka!!! ...kaha chali sawari???
Kaka: bas bitwa, sheher hii jaa raha the
Raaj: to kaka mujhe v sath le chaloge...
Kaha: thik bitwa, bas ek bar gaadi load ho jaye


Raaj: thik h kaka....tb tk me amma ko, ye nashta de aau aur raj nikal padta hai bade ghar ki or


Wahi dusri or:
Beta!! kallu ye jagah to bohot badi h sabjiya lagane ke liye...
Kallu: hnn maa, aur iski maati bhi badhiya h..
Kallu ki ma: beta kuchh socha, h itni sari jameen pe jutai kese hogi??
Kallu: maa!! kaam utna hii h, jitna me dusron ke kheton me karta tha...aur tum ho to sahi mere sath..

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Raaj nashta dete hi, kaka ke paas wapis aa gaya....
Raj: ho gai kaka loading??
Kaka: bas beta!! ho hii gai....raaj aakhiri kuchh bore uthwane me unki madad krta h..


Thodi der bad:

'Raj aur kaka dono bailgaadi me' .. kaka! ye maal.....ab kaha utrega??
Kaka: factory me utrega, bitua....

Raj: hmm...
"Abhi ke liye factory hi sahi rahegi... Jyada bhatakna v nahi padega'
Raj: kaka! Factory me mere layak koi kaam hoga kya??


Kaka...raaj ki taraf ashcharya se dekhne lage..... unhe lag rha tha, kahi unhone kuchh galat to nahi sun liya ......


(Raju ke karam the hi itne famous!! Poora gaon janta tha raaju kitna bada juari h.....hnn nashe ki aadat use avi avi lagii thi......lekin uski harkaton ki wjh se .......iss baat ko failne me zara bhi wakt nahi lagaa)


Raj: kaka!!...kaka.. are! kaha kho gaye??
Kaka: are! Hn hn beta...kaam...kaam h to sahi lekin tum ...tum kar to paoge...(raj bich me hi) .... Are hn hn kaka me kar lunga...


2:30 ghante bad:

Kaka:bitwa uu rahi factory.....
Raj(khosh hokar): hnn hnn kaka!.....

(Man me ...aakhir aa hii gai, achha hua! factory sheher ke bahar hi thi...... bc 13-14 kilometer m hi dhai ghante barbad ho gaye)


Kaka: chalo bitwa...Tumhe kam dilwata hu.....aur kaka Pahuch jate h .......waha ke prabhari k pas (prabhari- incharge)


Prabhari: aao rambihari aao.... bilkul!! sahi time pe aaye ho!!
Rambihari: bas maalik kripa h aapki.... ye balak h, agar iske layak koi kaam mil jaata to..


Prabhari: hnn hnn, wo waha boriya dekh rahe ho unhe wahaaaaa se uthakar andar rakhna h....
Aur ha bhai ram bihari.... ye rahi tumare aaj ke maal ki kimat..

Raj: kaka... Kb tak nikloge ??
Rambihari: bas beta.... Maal utarte hi nakal jaunga..
Raj (prabhari se): aur m...mujhe kitni kimat milegi?
Prabhari....raj ko uper se niche tak dekhte huye......10 bori pe 50 paisa...(1/2₹)


Raj(man me): ye bhosdi ka! mujhe aise q dekh raha h... abhi majboori h... Bas thode se pese ban jaaye fr thukunga tk nahi aise kaam pe


Khair Raaj jake bori uthane lagta h lekin usse nahi uthti.... Fir thodi der koshish karne ke baad.. .....jab use sahi technique aa gai to usne bori ko uthaya ....kandhe pe rakha.... aur andar le gaya..


7 boriya uthane ke baad hii raj ko pata lag gaya, wo admi.... use aise kyun dekh rha tha ...
raj: ek aur..bas ek aur krte-krte 10 boriya andar rakh leta h...


(Ek to wo bas 19 sal ka tha upar se kal jo mar padi thi wo alg dard kr rhi thi)


Raj dashvi bori rakhne ke bad ....andar hi thak ke baith gaya aur waha chal rhe kaam ko dekhne laga ....
Kaafi der tak jo bhi chize uske samne ghatti rahi wo unhe observe krta raha ....aur man me unke bare me aanklan karne laga .... bohot sare calculation uske dimag me chal hi rahe the ki ....tabhi!!


Prabhari: oye! hero abhi se thak gaya, beta ye bachchon ka kaam nii h...


(Raj ko gussa to bohot aa rha tha Lekin kya hii kr leta)
kaafi aaram ho gaya tha, to fir lag gaya boriyan uthane...... or boriya uthate-uthate...


Bhagwan ye kaisa khel khel rahe ho aap...'Jb mere pas sabkuchh tha to pariwar chhin liya' .....ab mere pas pariwar h..... to unhe dene ke liye "na mere pas wakt hai aur na hi pese"


Raaj ab tak 40 boriyan andar rakh chuka tha aur uski halat..... bohot hi jyada patli ho rakkhi thi....
Hanfte huye..... bc! itni dur boriya rakhne ko kisne kaha tha..... (Sans bharte huye)..andar hi le jani thi, to..... pas me rakhwa lete.....



Raaj baithe-baithe aaram kar raha tha Tabhi us factory ka malik nirikshan krne aa jata h aur Puri factory ka chakkar laga lene ke bad..... wahi aake ek kurshi pe beth jata h


Prabhari, factory malik ko aaj ki attendance aur anya chizo Ka lekha jokha pakda ke chala jata h.... tabhi raj uske pas aata h....
Factory malik (Niranjan das).....raj ko dekhte hii....mundi hilake punchhta h ....kya hai????
Raj: sir, factory me kuchh chize sahi nahi ho rahi!!



(Nirajan das... uske bolne ka lehja aur body language dekhte hi... ye ladka jaisa dikh raha h wesa h nahi)
Nirajan das: aur kya h wo chize??? Mene khud, sara nirikshan apni aankho se kiya h... mujhe to kuchh galat nazar nahi aaya


Raaj....nukile patthar se zameen pe hi utpadan me.... Upyog hone wale raw material ka anupat use samjhane laga kyunki Niranjan das kaafi padha likha aadmi tha to use sab smjh aane laga..



Niranjan das: tumhara name kya h ladke...
Raj: ji, mera nam raj h
Niranjan das: kya tum ye pura plan is paper par likh kr mujhe de sakte ho.
Raaj: ji jaroor



Raaj ek-ek detail ko paper par likhte huye....plan taiyar karne lagta h .... Sare raw material ka production me kitna anupat rahega.....abhi tak jo matra dali jaati thi usse kitna sara waste nikalta tha....aur ab kitna niklega .....kitna fayda hoga...wo sab kuchh likh hii raha tha....ke bich bich me Niranjan das usse sawal karne lagta h..


Niranjan das: to raj ....kaha tak padhai ki h??
Raj: sir...swa-adhdhyan(self study)
Niranjan das: kisi ne to padhaya hii hoga aakhir khud se itna sab koi.... kese sikh sakta h??


Raj: hnn sir, bachpan me, dadaji ne padhna sikhaya tha ....aur unke bad mene khud se hi padha h (jhooth)
Nirajan das: to tumne or aage padhne ke bare me kuchh socha??
Raj: ghar ke halaat thik nahi h sir....abhi abhi yaha 40 boriyan uthayi h!!


Niranjan das: tum ho to kaafi kaabil, mai to kahunga tumhe aage ki padhai karni chahiye???
Raj (man me): "kyu dimag kha raha h be...tujhse to jyada hi pada likha hu"....... Jii nhi sir, kaafi jimmedarian h sar pe


Niranjan das: to aage ke liye kuchh or soch rakkha h...
Raj: ye lo sir, ho gaya aapka plan ready....


nuranjan das sabhi chizon ko bariki se dekhta h ....dono ke bich kaafi chizo ko lekar discussion bhi hota h..


Niranjan das: to iska matlab h .....mahine ke 13 se 17 hajar ka munafa aur hoga...
Raj: bilkul sir..ye ratio ek dam satik h


Niranjan das: raj ko 1 hajar ka chek pakdate huye... ye pese tumhare is plan k liye..aaj mai bohot khush hu...
Raj: sir, kya mai kuchh aur bhi mang sakta hu?


Niranjan das: hnn hn batao ....mujhse ban sakega to jaroor kar dunga
Raj: thik h to mujhe is factory me advisor ki post de do..
Niranjan das: kuchh sochte huyelekin..
Raj: uske liye me aapse pese nahi lunga
Par agar..... kuchh aur khamiya main aapko bata paya to uske..... lagenge
(Raj man me: mujhe nahi pata tha iske liye 1000 rupay ka inam mil jayga, uperwale! kya khel khelte ho yrr )


Niranjan das....man me bina pese ke hi to rakhna h "ye to aur bhi achhi baat h"

Niranjan das raj ko ek pasbook ki tarah dikhne wali chhoti si dairy pakda deta h, jiske andar ek hii page tha aur usme nirajan das ki seal aur sign dono maujood the....ye ek prakar ka permit tha...


Raj use dekh, bohot khush hua..... Kyunki use pata tha is factory me bohot se sudhar ab bhi kiye jaa sakte h...tabhi waha prabhari aa jata h..


Prabhari: kyun ladke thak gaya kya ....bas 40 boriyan
Raj...uske muh ke aage permit dikhate huye ....ab me ye borian nahi uthaunga aur hath aage karte huye "40 boriyon ke 2 rupay"


Prabhari ki bolti band ho gai ....usne nirajan das ki taraf dekha... to usne bhi sir hilake use pese de dene ke liye kaha ....ab raaj ke pas 1002 rupay the


Niranjan das: mere dost ki factory yaha se ek kilometer door h.... Aur band hone ki kagar pe aa gai h ....agar tum uski madad kar sakte ho to .....
Raj: jii bilkul, lekin usse pehle mujhe bank jaana h..


Niranjan das ...raj ko address pakdate huye ....iske pas hi bank bhi h.
Raj: dhanyawad, sir....


Raj: suraj ki taraf dekhte huye 1 baj rhe honge...
"Sabse pehle bank se pese le leta hu, agar band ho gaya to dikkat ho jaygi"



Wahin Ghar par:

Seema: kaafi der ho gai h, chalo amma ko khana de aati hu .... aur wo nikal padti h bade ghar ki or

Seema.. gate khatkhatate huye, Amma!...o .. Amma!!..
Budhiya: aa rahi hu....naashpiti, kahi darwaja hi na tod de!!
Seema : Amma ko khana pakdake jane hi wali thi k....

Budhiya: ye bhagwan!! Yehh .. yehh... bahu, mere Paon dukh rahe h, daba de zara.. to seema uske pair dabane lagti h
Budhiya: raju kyun nahi aaya khana dene
Seema: wo..wo sheher gaye h amma!!....

budhiya: aisa kon sa kaam aa gya tha... ki sheher jana pada??
Seema: kaam hi talshne gaye h....??
Budhiya: hmmm... are!! zor laga, khana nhi khai ka, zara bhi dam nahi h hathon me....... ishhh!! Are itne zor se kyun daba rahi h marna chahti h kya mujhe

(Budhiya jab tak kisi ko taane na de de uska khana hajam nahi hota, aur aaj to use kaafi dino baad mauka mila tha..... Seema ko khoob jali-kati sunati h aur saf safai ke kaam me laga k rakhti h)




Shehar mein:

Raj bank se pese lene ke baad address punchhte punchhte factory pahuch jata h


Factory malik (chandra shekhar): to tum ho raj ..... darasal Niranjan das ne pehle hi telephone par chandra shekhar ko raj ke bare m bata diya tha


Raj: jii han, usne Niranjan das se mila permit dikhate huye kaha
Chandrashekhar: uper se niche tak raj ko ghoorke dekhta h, use lag hii nahi rha tha ki ye wahi ladka ..... Jiski tarif usne Niranjan se suni


Chandrashekhar: thik h, aao yaha .....dekho ye h hamari mashine jo kharab hii hoti rehti h.....fayde se jyada nuksan ho raha h.....pehle to sab sahi chal raha tha ....lekin achanak se ghata hone laga h..


Raaj sari masino ko dekhta h ....fir unhe bar bar chalu karke .... Apne tamam observation likhta jata h....aur phir 5 mashine ek sath chala deta h ...... 2 ghante ho chuke the use observe krte- karte.... Isi chakkar me... 2 aur mashino me kharabi aa gai ...


Raj: jb shuruwat me aapne ye mashine lagwai to wo ekdam nai thi .... isiliye adhik load le paa rahi thi....aur aapne bhi inse jyada se jyda kaam liya.....to

Pehli galti ye h kii aapne mashino par bohot jyada load dala... aur ab bhi utna hi load dal rahe ho..

Dusri galti ....mashine garam hoti h ....har 2 ghante k bad aapko inhe band karna chahiye jo ki aap nahi karte

Teesri galti....inka rakh-rakhav sahi se nahi kiya ja raha... isiliye mashino me gadbadi kuchh jyada hi jaldi aa rahi h..


Khair agar aap pehli do galtiya sudhar lete ho........to kal se aapki mashine km kharab hongi.....chalo check karte h...
aur Raj sari ki saari mashine chala deta h


Raaj ke man me chal raha tha... agar yun hii mashine check karne betha to aaj ghar nahi ja paunga .... Par pese bhi to kamane h....koi baat nahi agar aaj ghar nahi jaa paya to..



Khet me:

Kallu: chalo maa, ye baadi ka kaam to ho gaya.... 'Ab bhabi jaane unka kaam jaane'
Kallu ki maa: hnn beta chal.....pehle kuye me chalke hath muh dho le fr aaram karna.....

Thodi hi der bad kallu apne ghar me aaram karte huye chai pi raha tha....'meena agar m so jau to utha dena .....doodh lene v jana h'..



5:00pm
Factory me~

Chandrashekhar: Raj itna kaafi h, tum shayad sahi keh rahe ho....
Raj: nahi !!abhi nahi..... pichhle do ghante se ek v mashin kharab nhi hui aur to aur unse awaj bhi ekdam thik aa rahi h.....aapko iss taraf se v hawa ko pas hone ke liye jagah deni padegi ....isse mashino ki efficiency badh jayegi...


Raj: mujhe laga tha..... aaj sari rat hm testing krne wale .....par thik ....aapko ghar jana h to..... chalte h
Chandrashekhar: tumhara avlokan to ekdam sahi lag raha h lekin..... Kitna kaam karega kitna nahi kal pata lagega....


Raaj: kal me khud hi kharab hui mashino ke parts dekhunga.... Aur mashin me kya sudhar ho sakta h ye bhi bataunga..
Chandrashekhar: bohot bohot shukriya
Raj: are koi baat nhi par kya aap mujhe apni cycle se bas stand tk chhod denge..
Chandrashekhar: chalo betho


Aur thodi hii der bad raaj bus stand me khada tha, abhi bhi bus ko chhutne me 20 minute baaki the ..... To usne pas hi dukan se.... kiraane ka saman pack karaya..... sath hi ruchi k khane k liye biscuits aur ek dabba chocolate....


uske gaon ki taraf 2 hi bus jaati thi-

"ek subah~ gaon se sheher aur sham ko sheher se gaon tak chhodti thi" jabki "dusri subha sheher se gaon aur sham ko gaon se sheher leke jaati thi"


Khair bus chal padi....aur jb raj se 10 paise bus conductor ne liye ....to wo fr se soch me pad gaya....kaafi der sochne aur samjhne k bad wo is natije par pahucha .... Overall mere hajar rupay 2024 ke 27 hajar rupay to bante h ......lekin mai kin chizon par kharch karta hu ye un par v nirbhar karta h


Kuchh chizo ke liye yahi hajar rupay 40 hajar h to kuchh ke liye bas 30 hajar..... Jise exact .... calculate nahi kiya jaa sakta...tabhi shor hone laga...bus kharab ho gai...bus kharab ho gai..


Andhera ho chuka tha... to sabhi log bus ke ird gird mandra rahe the.....jbki bus conductor aur driver bar bar yahi keh rhe the bas ho gaya.... bas ho gaya....


isi bas ho gaya ke chakkar me 3 ghante gujar gaye ....bas bhi jake bich sunsan raste me bigdi thi...ab koi kare to kya kre ...."Bc isse achha to bailgaadi thi" ....bas is gali ki hi kami thi k Bus chalu ho gai .....
aur kachche ubad-khabad raston me dolti hui, hmari udanpari ja pohonchi 'TOLA'


Jii han raj ka gaon tola aa gya tha.... raj ghar pahunchte hii....seema!!!..seema!!
raj ki itni tej aawaj sunke kahi aaj v sharab pike to nhi aaye

bechari ki halki si aankh lag gai thi.... ab dar lag raha tha.... dari hui jake wo gate kholti h ......raj use saman pakdate huye... chalo khana lagao....


Ek to din bhar ki thakan uper se naaste ke alawa kuchh v gaya nahi tha pet m.......Raj... hath muh dhoke khane beth jata h ...


Raaj kha raha tha aur seema use khate huye dekh rahi thi....bhookh ke mare raj ka uski taraf bilkul v dhyan nahi tha ...aur jb dhyan gya..


tumne khana khaya??
Seema...mundi hilate huye nahi ka ishara karti h
Raj..kyu nahi khaya??.....ab seema kya hii bole wo shant rehti h

Raj:kyu???...nahi????...khaya?????...
Raj ke is tarike se punchne pr uske aanshu behne lgte h..
Raj: are! Thik h ...thik h...mene kal bhi samjhaya tha....mere bina khana khay..... tum khana kha sakti ho ....

Jb kal kha liya tha to aaj v kha leti... Raj uske liye khana plate me dalta h or apne hathon se khilane lagta h.....wo khate huy ....ab v sisak rhi thi.... to raj use shant karwata h...aur fr se khilane lagta h..



Khana ho jaane ke baad raj uska hath apne sir pe rakhta huye kasam deta h....ab se time se khana kha lena.... chahe me yaha rahu ya na rahu.....

"main jaha bhi rahunga bhukha to bilkul bhi nahi rahunga..."


Raj: seema ka hath pakadte huye, chalo ab apni aankhe band karo......are! mundi niche nahi karni ....bas aakhe band karni h.... hmmnn..aur ab aankhe khol do


Seema ke hath me 800rs the....ek to usne pehli bar 50rs ka note hath me liya tha.... uper se itne sare


(50rs ka note jari huye abhi kuchh hi wakt hua tha to bohot ki kam log the jinhone use dekha bhi tha)



Seema unhe baar baar gin rahi thi....aur har bar galti kr rhi thi....raj use correct krta h..
Seema: kya?? 800 rupay...k..k..kahi aapne jua to nahi khela??

(Bol to gai thi kuchh aisa jo use nahi bolna tha)

Raj: mn me kehta h "ek to pehli bar muh se kuchh foota .... Uper se itna ganda"......are nahi, pagal juye me bhala koi ek din me itne sare pese jitta h??


Raj use permit dikhate huye..... Ye dekh mujhe kam mila h aur ye usi k pese h.... seema ko to kuchh bhi smjh nahi aaya lekin muhar aur hastakshaar dekh ke usne bharosa kr lia..
"lekin man me ye tha ki kahi koi galat kaam to nahi kar rhe ... Aakhir aisa kon sa kaam h jisme ek hii din me itne sare pese milte h....note to ekdam naye h"


Fir Raaj apne kamre me chala gya aur seema ne pese chhipake sahi jagah rakh diye....


Abhi wo leti hi thi k........ raaj chaddar leke uske kamre me aa gaya... Aur
Seema jo pehle se sehmi hui thi... Uske aane ki ahat paate hi... dubak ke so gai....

Raaj uske bagal m jake lait gaya ...Aur dheere dheere uske karib jane laga

seema bayi karwat liye ruchi ki taraf muh karke leti hui thi.....
"dibbi ki halki Roshni me uski kamar ka wo curve.... jese balkhati hui hirni koi vishisht aakriti dharan .....kiye leti ho"

Raj jese-jese uske barib ja raha tha... uski dhadkane badhti jaa rhi thi....

"Fir jese hi raj ki garam saanson ne uski gardan ko chhua.......pure sharir me ek sihran si daud gai"


Seema ke itne pas.... raj kabhi nahi aaya tha... aur aaj jab wo jaag rahi thi ...uske man me...yahi chal rha tha.... ab kya hoga???.......uski ghabrahat bhi badhti jaa rahi thi....


Raj kii garam sanse......uske jism me ek alag hi romanch paida kr rhi thi....

raj ne fr aage badhte huye apne ek hath ko uski kamar pe lapeta aur ekdam hii chipak gaya...


Iss hamle se seema ka sharir ekdam hi sunn pad gaya tha....bas dhadkane hii thi jinki awaj aur gati use mehsoos ho rahi thi....

Aage badhte huye raj ne jb apne honth uski gardan par rakhe.... To seema ne apne hath kade/kathor karte huye..... mutthi bhinch li..


Gardan pe chumban ke sath hi, raj ne apna hath kamar se thoda or uper.... uske pet pr chalana shuru kar diya .........sath hi ek tang uthake uske uper rakh dii


Raj ke chalte huye hath ne jaise hii seema ki nabhi ko chhua.... uski kapkapi chhot gai ......... Aur usne apne aap ko sikod liya....


Raj ko bhi pata tha..... seema jaag rahi h to usne apne hath .....ko uske bayi gal ke nich rakha aur uska muh ko apni taraf ghuma liya.......isse seema ko karwat badalni pad gai ...

Raj ne fr apne dono hatho me seema ka chehra thama aur uske labon ko bohot hi jor se chusne laga....

Raj ne seema k hontho ko apne hontho me kaid kar liye tha.... itnti zordar kis ke bad bhi seema ki taraf se koi pahel nahi hui... Uske liye ye bilkul hi naya anubhav tha....


Suresh ne kabhi... Uske sath aisa nahi kiya tha....ye pehli bar tha jb kisi ne.... uske adhron ko.... Apne hontho ke bich bharke...... is tarike se choosa tha


Raj kiss me itna doob gaya tha ki.....use ehsaas hii nahi hua....
Seema zara bhi uska sath nahi de rahi...aur jb use ehsaas hua to usne use chhod diya...


Raj aankhe band kiye huye soch raha tha.... Bc hamare bich to zara bhi pyar nahi h.... Lagta h mene jaldbazi kar di......kafi sochne samjhne ke baad usne nishchay kiya .... Vah pehle seema ka dil jeetega...


Wahi seema ke dil ki dhadkane ab jaake thoda shant hui thi ....... usne muh wapis se ruchi ki taraf ghuma liya
.........abhi abhi jo hua uska ehsas abhi v uske labon pe tha ..... Apni ungli se jese hii usne honth ko chhua .....uske chehre par muskan fail gai..


Raj: lekin bc dil jitunga kese???.... bolti to kuchh... h niii....... To kyu na, pehle beti ko pataya jaye ....."samll steps"...... "Ab sabse aasan to wahi h"


Raaj isi udhedh-bun me... gehri nind chala gaya.......jabki Seema chehre pe muskan liye pehle hi so chuki thi
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Ab raj aage.... kya-kya krta h.... Aur beti ka support..... seema ka dil jeetne me..... kitni madad karta h ....jaanne k liye bane rahiye
Thank you for your love & support

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Update 2​

Kal subah, jab kallu raj se baat kane ke baad ghar lauta to usne apni maa ko saara majra samjhaya..

Kallu ki ma: kya!!!..3 ekad, beta ye to bohot achhi khabar h...... lekin us sharabi ka koi bharosha nahi.....Tu iss bare me ek bar... seema se jaroor punchh lena..
Kallu: thik h maa...apki tasalli ke liye puchh lunga..

Kallu ki maa: thik h..thik h, bharosha to nahi ho raha lekin aur kya kaha raju ne??

Kallu: Aur to!!!.....are!! han aaj se doodh wahi se aaya karega, sham ko lene to me chala jaunga lekin subah meena ko bhej diya karna..
Kallu ki ma: ye to or bhi badhiya khabar h....
Kallu: wo sab to thik h lekin mujhe kal k kal hi..... aam ke pas wali jagah par baadi lagai h.... Raju keh raha tha bhabhi waha sabjiya lagayengi..


Kallu ki maa: are! to main chalungi na tere sath...... aur tu kahe to meena ko bhi le chale


Kallu: nahi!!! Hm dono hi bohot h sham se pehele kaam khatm karne k liye.. ....aur aakhir me us khet ki sabjiya khane .....hame v to milne wali h...


Kallu ki maa: kya?? To tune iss bare me bhi usse baat kar li...
Kallu: are! Maa raju mera dost h .... ye bhala koi kehne puchhne ki baat h..


(Sham ko mar khane ki wajah se... lete lete raj ko halki neend aa gai thi...thik usi wakt kallu bade ghar tak Amma ko khana pahuchane ke liye daubara wapis aaya......aur tabhi usne khet wali saari baatein seema se confirm kr li)

Rat me jb raj leta hua tha.... use neend nahi aa rahi thi, maar khane ki wajah se sara badan toot raha tha ...aur uske samne seema ka wo udas chehra bar bar aa rha tha...

Raaj: Bhagwan!! ab to khush ho na aap! ......hsshh!! Kya hi lode lage pade h zindagi ke....ek to is mc ne jua khel ke sari fasal barbad di.... uper se Ravi seth, 'behen ke lode' aaj hi marna tha tere ko ....sala ab to m seema ke kamre me bhi nahi ja sakta....kaha sab thik karne chala tha...aur kya ho gaya


Pareshan hoke jb raaj ne apni aankhe band ki.....to dheere-dheere uska man shant hone laga..... aur jese hi uska man shant hua, dimag kaam karne laga... Aaj jo v hua usme meri kya galti thi??.....ye sab to us gandu ka kiya dhara h ....sshh!!! sala iski yaadon ne confuse kar rakha h, Pata hi nahi chalta galti kiski h ...


Hmm... to thik h, Kal sabse pehle sheher nikalte h, wahi se shuru hoga ....."iss naye jivan ka safar"
Raj ko bistar bohot hi uncomfortable lag rha tha isliye man me counting krne lagta h, taaki neend aa jaaye....aur kaafi koshisho ke baad wah gehri neend so jata h


Khair raat gujri subah hui....Seema apna daily routine follow krte huye pehle aaj ke liye aata taiyar karti h...aur fir naha dhoke pooj path..


Suraj nikalne wala tha...chidiya chahchahaa rahi thi... to Raaj bhi uthte huye Angdai leta h aur hath pau stretch karte huye ...bahar nikal aata h


Use yaad tha .....aaj sheher nikalna h isiliye fataft se datun karke ....nahane chala jaata h...


Wahi seema nashta taiyar karne me lagi thi....tab tak raaj naha-dhoke wapis aa jata h


Subah se ek bhi baar dono ka 'aamna-samna' nahi hua tha..
Khair.....Seema chai leke aati h, aur raj ko pakdake, ruchi ke pas chali jaati h


Raaj chai peete peete sochta h.... Bc iske sath itna bura vyavhar hota aaya h, iske baad bhi ye aurat itni achhi kyun h.... abhi kal kal jo hua, mujhe to laga tha kuchh dino tk roothi rahegi..


Wo abhi ye soch hi raha tha k.....seema wahi aangan me aake....taar me kapde daalne lagti h
Raaj ka dhyan iss wakt kahi aur tha, lekin jese hi kapde se pani ki boond chhitak ke uske maathe pe padi... wo seema ki or dekhne laga


Suraj se aane wali, subah ki sheetal kirne seema pr pad rhi thi..... Jisme se nikharta hua uska ye roop...raj ko mohit kar raha tha....gadraya badan, chikni kamar... uper se leke niche tak "sundarta ki murat"!!!


Seema ko bhi ab ye ehsaas ho gaya tha, ki ....Raj use hi ghoor raha h... tabhi dono ka dhyan bhang karne wali dhwani unke kaano m padti h....Bhabhi!!


Meena: Are!! itni jaldi.....aapne subha-subha kyu naha liya, kahi jaana h kya??
Seema: Nahi! Banno, me to roj isi tarah, subah hi nahake taiyar ho jaati hu..... Par aaj doodh lene tum aai ho??


Meena: hn, bhabhi.... Aur av se subah, me hi aaya karungi..
Seema: thik h lekin pehle nashta kr le..
Meena: are!! nahi bhabhi, bhai aur maa chai ka intezar kr h aur unhe bhi to nashta karana h....
Seema: thik h! fir kabhi kehte huye, use doodh pakda deti h.....


Meena ke jaate hi Raj Seema se kehta hai.....Seema! m aaj sheher jaa raha hu kaam talashne.... par seema ki taraf se koi jawab nahi aata


Raj: abhi to meena se hans-hans k baat kar rahi thi... aur ab dekho..... tabhi seema uske pas nashta leke aa jaati h
Raj nashta karte huye, bas use hi dekh raha tha .... to wahin seema, tirchhi najron se use aisa krte huye dekh rahi thi..


Wahi dusri taraf:
Ghar pahunchte hi meena.... sabse pehle chai banne rakhti h aur fir nashte ki taiyari m lag jati h..

Kallu: maa aaj baadi lagane ka kaam nipta lete h.... Fir kal se jutai chalu kar denge
Kallu ki maa: hn beta!! ab or der nahi karni chahiye..... Gao me sabne jutai chalu kar di h


Tabhi meena waha chai leke aa jaati h...aur jb tak ye dono chai peete huye baat krte h... tab tak nashta bhi banke taiyar ho jaata h....
Khair dono, maa-bete nashta krke, nikal padte h aam k pas wali zameen par..


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Wahin Jb raj ka nashta ho gaya to usne amma ke liye nashta pack karwaya aur seema se kaha..dopahar, ka khana dene chali jaana... Mujhe aane me der ho jayegi..aur nikal pada, amma ka nashta leke...

shehar jaane ke liye raaj ki jeb m footi kodi nii thi....tabhi uski nazar ek bailgaadi pe padi....hmmm..Kaka bhi to sheher jaate rhte h!!!
Raaj: aur kaka!!! ...kaha chali sawari???
Kaka: bas bitwa, sheher hii jaa raha the
Raaj: to kaka mujhe v sath le chaloge...
Kaha: thik bitwa, bas ek bar gaadi load ho jaye


Raaj: thik h kaka....tb tk me amma ko, ye nashta de aau aur raj nikal padta hai bade ghar ki or


Wahi dusri or:
Beta!! kallu ye jagah to bohot badi h sabjiya lagane ke liye...
Kallu: hnn maa, aur iski maati bhi badhiya h..
Kallu ki ma: beta kuchh socha, h itni sari jameen pe jutai kese hogi??
Kallu: maa!! kaam utna hii h, jitna me dusron ke kheton me karta tha...aur tum ho to sahi mere sath..

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Raaj nashta dete hi, kaka ke paas wapis aa gaya....
Raj: ho gai kaka loading??
Kaka: bas beta!! ho hii gai....raaj aakhiri kuchh bore uthwane me unki madad krta h..


Thodi der bad:

'Raj aur kaka dono bailgaadi me' .. kaka! ye maal.....ab kaha utrega??
Kaka: factory me utrega, bitua....

Raj: hmm...
"Abhi ke liye factory hi sahi rahegi... Jyada bhatakna v nahi padega'
Raj: kaka! Factory me mere layak koi kaam hoga kya??


Kaka...raaj ki taraf ashcharya se dekhne lage..... unhe lag rha tha, kahi unhone kuchh galat to nahi sun liya ......


(Raju ke karam the hi itne famous!! Poora gaon janta tha raaju kitna bada juari h.....hnn nashe ki aadat use avi avi lagii thi......lekin uski harkaton ki wjh se .......iss baat ko failne me zara bhi wakt nahi lagaa)


Raj: kaka!!...kaka.. are! kaha kho gaye??
Kaka: are! Hn hn beta...kaam...kaam h to sahi lekin tum ...tum kar to paoge...(raj bich me hi) .... Are hn hn kaka me kar lunga...


2:30 ghante bad:

Kaka:bitwa uu rahi factory.....
Raj(khosh hokar): hnn hnn kaka!.....

(Man me ...aakhir aa hii gai, achha hua! factory sheher ke bahar hi thi...... bc 13-14 kilometer m hi dhai ghante barbad ho gaye)


Kaka: chalo bitwa...Tumhe kam dilwata hu.....aur kaka Pahuch jate h .......waha ke prabhari k pas (prabhari- incharge)


Prabhari: aao rambihari aao.... bilkul!! sahi time pe aaye ho!!
Rambihari: bas maalik kripa h aapki.... ye balak h, agar iske layak koi kaam mil jaata to..


Prabhari: hnn hnn, wo waha boriya dekh rahe ho unhe wahaaaaa se uthakar andar rakhna h....
Aur ha bhai ram bihari.... ye rahi tumare aaj ke maal ki kimat..

Raj: kaka... Kb tak nikloge ??
Rambihari: bas beta.... Maal utarte hi nakal jaunga..
Raj (prabhari se): aur m...mujhe kitni kimat milegi?
Prabhari....raj ko uper se niche tak dekhte huye......10 bori pe 50 paisa...(1/2₹)


Raj(man me): ye bhosdi ka! mujhe aise q dekh raha h... abhi majboori h... Bas thode se pese ban jaaye fr thukunga tk nahi aise kaam pe


Khair Raaj jake bori uthane lagta h lekin usse nahi uthti.... Fir thodi der koshish karne ke baad.. .....jab use sahi technique aa gai to usne bori ko uthaya ....kandhe pe rakha.... aur andar le gaya..


7 boriya uthane ke baad hii raj ko pata lag gaya, wo admi.... use aise kyun dekh rha tha ...
raj: ek aur..bas ek aur krte-krte 10 boriya andar rakh leta h...


(Ek to wo bas 19 sal ka tha upar se kal jo mar padi thi wo alg dard kr rhi thi)


Raj dashvi bori rakhne ke bad ....andar hi thak ke baith gaya aur waha chal rhe kaam ko dekhne laga ....
Kaafi der tak jo bhi chize uske samne ghatti rahi wo unhe observe krta raha ....aur man me unke bare me aanklan karne laga .... bohot sare calculation uske dimag me chal hi rahe the ki ....tabhi!!


Prabhari: oye! hero abhi se thak gaya, beta ye bachchon ka kaam nii h...


(Raj ko gussa to bohot aa rha tha Lekin kya hii kr leta)
kaafi aaram ho gaya tha, to fir lag gaya boriyan uthane...... or boriya uthate-uthate...


Bhagwan ye kaisa khel khel rahe ho aap...'Jb mere pas sabkuchh tha to pariwar chhin liya' .....ab mere pas pariwar h..... to unhe dene ke liye "na mere pas wakt hai aur na hi pese"


Raaj ab tak 40 boriyan andar rakh chuka tha aur uski halat..... bohot hi jyada patli ho rakkhi thi....
Hanfte huye..... bc! itni dur boriya rakhne ko kisne kaha tha..... (Sans bharte huye)..andar hi le jani thi, to..... pas me rakhwa lete.....



Raaj baithe-baithe aaram kar raha tha Tabhi us factory ka malik nirikshan krne aa jata h aur Puri factory ka chakkar laga lene ke bad..... wahi aake ek kurshi pe beth jata h


Prabhari, factory malik ko aaj ki attendance aur anya chizo Ka lekha jokha pakda ke chala jata h.... tabhi raj uske pas aata h....
Factory malik (Niranjan das).....raj ko dekhte hii....mundi hilake punchhta h ....kya hai????
Raj: sir, factory me kuchh chize sahi nahi ho rahi!!



(Nirajan das... uske bolne ka lehja aur body language dekhte hi... ye ladka jaisa dikh raha h wesa h nahi)
Nirajan das: aur kya h wo chize??? Mene khud, sara nirikshan apni aankho se kiya h... mujhe to kuchh galat nazar nahi aaya


Raaj....nukile patthar se zameen pe hi utpadan me.... Upyog hone wale raw material ka anupat use samjhane laga kyunki Niranjan das kaafi padha likha aadmi tha to use sab smjh aane laga..



Niranjan das: tumhara name kya h ladke...
Raj: ji, mera nam raj h
Niranjan das: kya tum ye pura plan is paper par likh kr mujhe de sakte ho.
Raaj: ji jaroor



Raaj ek-ek detail ko paper par likhte huye....plan taiyar karne lagta h .... Sare raw material ka production me kitna anupat rahega.....abhi tak jo matra dali jaati thi usse kitna sara waste nikalta tha....aur ab kitna niklega .....kitna fayda hoga...wo sab kuchh likh hii raha tha....ke bich bich me Niranjan das usse sawal karne lagta h..


Niranjan das: to raj ....kaha tak padhai ki h??
Raj: sir...swa-adhdhyan(self study)
Niranjan das: kisi ne to padhaya hii hoga aakhir khud se itna sab koi.... kese sikh sakta h??


Raj: hnn sir, bachpan me, dadaji ne padhna sikhaya tha ....aur unke bad mene khud se hi padha h (jhooth)
Nirajan das: to tumne or aage padhne ke bare me kuchh socha??
Raj: ghar ke halaat thik nahi h sir....abhi abhi yaha 40 boriyan uthayi h!!


Niranjan das: tum ho to kaafi kaabil, mai to kahunga tumhe aage ki padhai karni chahiye???
Raj (man me): "kyu dimag kha raha h be...tujhse to jyada hi pada likha hu"....... Jii nhi sir, kaafi jimmedarian h sar pe


Niranjan das: to aage ke liye kuchh or soch rakkha h...
Raj: ye lo sir, ho gaya aapka plan ready....


nuranjan das sabhi chizon ko bariki se dekhta h ....dono ke bich kaafi chizo ko lekar discussion bhi hota h..


Niranjan das: to iska matlab h .....mahine ke 13 se 17 hajar ka munafa aur hoga...
Raj: bilkul sir..ye ratio ek dam satik h


Niranjan das: raj ko 1 hajar ka chek pakdate huye... ye pese tumhare is plan k liye..aaj mai bohot khush hu...
Raj: sir, kya mai kuchh aur bhi mang sakta hu?


Niranjan das: hnn hn batao ....mujhse ban sakega to jaroor kar dunga
Raj: thik h to mujhe is factory me advisor ki post de do..
Niranjan das: kuchh sochte huyelekin..
Raj: uske liye me aapse pese nahi lunga
Par agar..... kuchh aur khamiya main aapko bata paya to uske..... lagenge
(Raj man me: mujhe nahi pata tha iske liye 1000 rupay ka inam mil jayga, uperwale! kya khel khelte ho yrr )


Niranjan das....man me bina pese ke hi to rakhna h "ye to aur bhi achhi baat h"

Niranjan das raj ko ek pasbook ki tarah dikhne wali chhoti si dairy pakda deta h, jiske andar ek hii page tha aur usme nirajan das ki seal aur sign dono maujood the....ye ek prakar ka permit tha...


Raj use dekh, bohot khush hua..... Kyunki use pata tha is factory me bohot se sudhar ab bhi kiye jaa sakte h...tabhi waha prabhari aa jata h..


Prabhari: kyun ladke thak gaya kya ....bas 40 boriyan
Raj...uske muh ke aage permit dikhate huye ....ab me ye borian nahi uthaunga aur hath aage karte huye "40 boriyon ke 2 rupay"


Prabhari ki bolti band ho gai ....usne nirajan das ki taraf dekha... to usne bhi sir hilake use pese de dene ke liye kaha ....ab raaj ke pas 1002 rupay the


Niranjan das: mere dost ki factory yaha se ek kilometer door h.... Aur band hone ki kagar pe aa gai h ....agar tum uski madad kar sakte ho to .....
Raj: jii bilkul, lekin usse pehle mujhe bank jaana h..


Niranjan das ...raj ko address pakdate huye ....iske pas hi bank bhi h.
Raj: dhanyawad, sir....


Raj: suraj ki taraf dekhte huye 1 baj rhe honge...
"Sabse pehle bank se pese le leta hu, agar band ho gaya to dikkat ho jaygi"



Wahin Ghar par:

Seema: kaafi der ho gai h, chalo amma ko khana de aati hu .... aur wo nikal padti h bade ghar ki or

Seema.. gate khatkhatate huye, Amma!...o .. Amma!!..
Budhiya: aa rahi hu....naashpiti, kahi darwaja hi na tod de!!
Seema : Amma ko khana pakdake jane hi wali thi k....

Budhiya: ye bhagwan!! Yehh .. yehh... bahu, mere Paon dukh rahe h, daba de zara.. to seema uske pair dabane lagti h
Budhiya: raju kyun nahi aaya khana dene
Seema: wo..wo sheher gaye h amma!!....

budhiya: aisa kon sa kaam aa gya tha... ki sheher jana pada??
Seema: kaam hi talshne gaye h....??
Budhiya: hmmm... are!! zor laga, khana nhi khai ka, zara bhi dam nahi h hathon me....... ishhh!! Are itne zor se kyun daba rahi h marna chahti h kya mujhe

(Budhiya jab tak kisi ko taane na de de uska khana hajam nahi hota, aur aaj to use kaafi dino baad mauka mila tha..... Seema ko khoob jali-kati sunati h aur saf safai ke kaam me laga k rakhti h)




Shehar mein:

Raj bank se pese lene ke baad address punchhte punchhte factory pahuch jata h


Factory malik (chandra shekhar): to tum ho raj ..... darasal Niranjan das ne pehle hi telephone par chandra shekhar ko raj ke bare m bata diya tha


Raj: jii han, usne Niranjan das se mila permit dikhate huye kaha
Chandrashekhar: uper se niche tak raj ko ghoorke dekhta h, use lag hii nahi rha tha ki ye wahi ladka ..... Jiski tarif usne Niranjan se suni


Chandrashekhar: thik h, aao yaha .....dekho ye h hamari mashine jo kharab hii hoti rehti h.....fayde se jyada nuksan ho raha h.....pehle to sab sahi chal raha tha ....lekin achanak se ghata hone laga h..


Raaj sari masino ko dekhta h ....fir unhe bar bar chalu karke .... Apne tamam observation likhta jata h....aur phir 5 mashine ek sath chala deta h ...... 2 ghante ho chuke the use observe krte- karte.... Isi chakkar me... 2 aur mashino me kharabi aa gai ...


Raj: jb shuruwat me aapne ye mashine lagwai to wo ekdam nai thi .... isiliye adhik load le paa rahi thi....aur aapne bhi inse jyada se jyda kaam liya.....to

Pehli galti ye h kii aapne mashino par bohot jyada load dala... aur ab bhi utna hi load dal rahe ho..

Dusri galti ....mashine garam hoti h ....har 2 ghante k bad aapko inhe band karna chahiye jo ki aap nahi karte

Teesri galti....inka rakh-rakhav sahi se nahi kiya ja raha... isiliye mashino me gadbadi kuchh jyada hi jaldi aa rahi h..


Khair agar aap pehli do galtiya sudhar lete ho........to kal se aapki mashine km kharab hongi.....chalo check karte h...
aur Raj sari ki saari mashine chala deta h


Raaj ke man me chal raha tha... agar yun hii mashine check karne betha to aaj ghar nahi ja paunga .... Par pese bhi to kamane h....koi baat nahi agar aaj ghar nahi jaa paya to..



Khet me:

Kallu: chalo maa, ye baadi ka kaam to ho gaya.... 'Ab bhabi jaane unka kaam jaane'
Kallu ki maa: hnn beta chal.....pehle kuye me chalke hath muh dho le fr aaram karna.....

Thodi hi der bad kallu apne ghar me aaram karte huye chai pi raha tha....'meena agar m so jau to utha dena .....doodh lene v jana h'..



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Factory me~

Chandrashekhar: Raj itna kaafi h, tum shayad sahi keh rahe ho....
Raj: nahi !!abhi nahi..... pichhle do ghante se ek v mashin kharab nhi hui aur to aur unse awaj bhi ekdam thik aa rahi h.....aapko iss taraf se v hawa ko pas hone ke liye jagah deni padegi ....isse mashino ki efficiency badh jayegi...


Raj: mujhe laga tha..... aaj sari rat hm testing krne wale .....par thik ....aapko ghar jana h to..... chalte h
Chandrashekhar: tumhara avlokan to ekdam sahi lag raha h lekin..... Kitna kaam karega kitna nahi kal pata lagega....


Raaj: kal me khud hi kharab hui mashino ke parts dekhunga.... Aur mashin me kya sudhar ho sakta h ye bhi bataunga..
Chandrashekhar: bohot bohot shukriya
Raj: are koi baat nhi par kya aap mujhe apni cycle se bas stand tk chhod denge..
Chandrashekhar: chalo betho


Aur thodi hii der bad raaj bus stand me khada tha, abhi bhi bus ko chhutne me 20 minute baaki the ..... To usne pas hi dukan se.... kiraane ka saman pack karaya..... sath hi ruchi k khane k liye biscuits aur ek dabba chocolate....


uske gaon ki taraf 2 hi bus jaati thi-

"ek subah~ gaon se sheher aur sham ko sheher se gaon tak chhodti thi" jabki "dusri subha sheher se gaon aur sham ko gaon se sheher leke jaati thi"


Khair bus chal padi....aur jb raj se 10 paise bus conductor ne liye ....to wo fr se soch me pad gaya....kaafi der sochne aur samjhne k bad wo is natije par pahucha .... Overall mere hajar rupay 2024 ke 27 hajar rupay to bante h ......lekin mai kin chizon par kharch karta hu ye un par v nirbhar karta h


Kuchh chizo ke liye yahi hajar rupay 40 hajar h to kuchh ke liye bas 30 hajar..... Jise exact .... calculate nahi kiya jaa sakta...tabhi shor hone laga...bus kharab ho gai...bus kharab ho gai..


Andhera ho chuka tha... to sabhi log bus ke ird gird mandra rahe the.....jbki bus conductor aur driver bar bar yahi keh rhe the bas ho gaya.... bas ho gaya....


isi bas ho gaya ke chakkar me 3 ghante gujar gaye ....bas bhi jake bich sunsan raste me bigdi thi...ab koi kare to kya kre ...."Bc isse achha to bailgaadi thi" ....bas is gali ki hi kami thi k Bus chalu ho gai .....
aur kachche ubad-khabad raston me dolti hui, hmari udanpari ja pohonchi 'TOLA'


Jii han raj ka gaon tola aa gya tha.... raj ghar pahunchte hii....seema!!!..seema!!
raj ki itni tej aawaj sunke kahi aaj v sharab pike to nhi aaye

bechari ki halki si aankh lag gai thi.... ab dar lag raha tha.... dari hui jake wo gate kholti h ......raj use saman pakdate huye... chalo khana lagao....


Ek to din bhar ki thakan uper se naaste ke alawa kuchh v gaya nahi tha pet m.......Raj... hath muh dhoke khane beth jata h ...


Raaj kha raha tha aur seema use khate huye dekh rahi thi....bhookh ke mare raj ka uski taraf bilkul v dhyan nahi tha ...aur jb dhyan gya..


tumne khana khaya??
Seema...mundi hilate huye nahi ka ishara karti h
Raj..kyu nahi khaya??.....ab seema kya hii bole wo shant rehti h

Raj:kyu???...nahi????...khaya?????...
Raj ke is tarike se punchne pr uske aanshu behne lgte h..
Raj: are! Thik h ...thik h...mene kal bhi samjhaya tha....mere bina khana khay..... tum khana kha sakti ho ....

Jb kal kha liya tha to aaj v kha leti... Raj uske liye khana plate me dalta h or apne hathon se khilane lagta h.....wo khate huy ....ab v sisak rhi thi.... to raj use shant karwata h...aur fr se khilane lagta h..



Khana ho jaane ke baad raj uska hath apne sir pe rakhta huye kasam deta h....ab se time se khana kha lena.... chahe me yaha rahu ya na rahu.....

"main jaha bhi rahunga bhukha to bilkul bhi nahi rahunga..."


Raj: seema ka hath pakadte huye, chalo ab apni aankhe band karo......are! mundi niche nahi karni ....bas aakhe band karni h.... hmmnn..aur ab aankhe khol do


Seema ke hath me 800rs the....ek to usne pehli bar 50rs ka note hath me liya tha.... uper se itne sare


(50rs ka note jari huye abhi kuchh hi wakt hua tha to bohot ki kam log the jinhone use dekha bhi tha)



Seema unhe baar baar gin rahi thi....aur har bar galti kr rhi thi....raj use correct krta h..
Seema: kya?? 800 rupay...k..k..kahi aapne jua to nahi khela??

(Bol to gai thi kuchh aisa jo use nahi bolna tha)

Raj: mn me kehta h "ek to pehli bar muh se kuchh foota .... Uper se itna ganda"......are nahi, pagal juye me bhala koi ek din me itne sare pese jitta h??


Raj use permit dikhate huye..... Ye dekh mujhe kam mila h aur ye usi k pese h.... seema ko to kuchh bhi smjh nahi aaya lekin muhar aur hastakshaar dekh ke usne bharosa kr lia..
"lekin man me ye tha ki kahi koi galat kaam to nahi kar rhe ... Aakhir aisa kon sa kaam h jisme ek hii din me itne sare pese milte h....note to ekdam naye h"


Fir Raaj apne kamre me chala gya aur seema ne pese chhipake sahi jagah rakh diye....


Abhi wo leti hi thi k........ raaj chaddar leke uske kamre me aa gaya... Aur
Seema jo pehle se sehmi hui thi... Uske aane ki ahat paate hi... dubak ke so gai....

Raaj uske bagal m jake lait gaya ...Aur dheere dheere uske karib jane laga

seema bayi karwat liye ruchi ki taraf muh karke leti hui thi.....
"dibbi ki halki Roshni me uski kamar ka wo curve.... jese balkhati hui hirni koi vishisht aakriti dharan .....kiye leti ho"

Raj jese-jese uske barib ja raha tha... uski dhadkane badhti jaa rhi thi....

"Fir jese hi raj ki garam saanson ne uski gardan ko chhua.......pure sharir me ek sihran si daud gai"


Seema ke itne pas.... raj kabhi nahi aaya tha... aur aaj jab wo jaag rahi thi ...uske man me...yahi chal rha tha.... ab kya hoga???.......uski ghabrahat bhi badhti jaa rahi thi....


Raj kii garam sanse......uske jism me ek alag hi romanch paida kr rhi thi....

raj ne fr aage badhte huye apne ek hath ko uski kamar pe lapeta aur ekdam hii chipak gaya...


Iss hamle se seema ka sharir ekdam hi sunn pad gaya tha....bas dhadkane hii thi jinki awaj aur gati use mehsoos ho rahi thi....

Aage badhte huye raj ne jb apne honth uski gardan par rakhe.... To seema ne apne hath kade/kathor karte huye..... mutthi bhinch li..


Gardan pe chumban ke sath hi, raj ne apna hath kamar se thoda or uper.... uske pet pr chalana shuru kar diya .........sath hi ek tang uthake uske uper rakh dii


Raj ke chalte huye hath ne jaise hii seema ki nabhi ko chhua.... uski kapkapi chhot gai ......... Aur usne apne aap ko sikod liya....


Raj ko bhi pata tha..... seema jaag rahi h to usne apne hath .....ko uske bayi gal ke nich rakha aur uska muh ko apni taraf ghuma liya.......isse seema ko karwat badalni pad gai ...

Raj ne fr apne dono hatho me seema ka chehra thama aur uske labon ko bohot hi jor se chusne laga....

Raj ne seema k hontho ko apne hontho me kaid kar liye tha.... itnti zordar kis ke bad bhi seema ki taraf se koi pahel nahi hui... Uske liye ye bilkul hi naya anubhav tha....


Suresh ne kabhi... Uske sath aisa nahi kiya tha....ye pehli bar tha jb kisi ne.... uske adhron ko.... Apne hontho ke bich bharke...... is tarike se choosa tha


Raj kiss me itna doob gaya tha ki.....use ehsaas hii nahi hua....
Seema zara bhi uska sath nahi de rahi...aur jb use ehsaas hua to usne use chhod diya...


Raj aankhe band kiye huye soch raha tha.... Bc hamare bich to zara bhi pyar nahi h.... Lagta h mene jaldbazi kar di......kafi sochne samjhne ke baad usne nishchay kiya .... Vah pehle seema ka dil jeetega...


Wahi seema ke dil ki dhadkane ab jaake thoda shant hui thi ....... usne muh wapis se ruchi ki taraf ghuma liya
.........abhi abhi jo hua uska ehsas abhi v uske labon pe tha ..... Apni ungli se jese hii usne honth ko chhua .....uske chehre par muskan fail gai..


Raj: lekin bc dil jitunga kese???.... bolti to kuchh... h niii....... To kyu na, pehle beti ko pataya jaye ....."samll steps"...... "Ab sabse aasan to wahi h"


Raaj isi udhedh-bun me... gehri nind chala gaya.......jabki Seema chehre pe muskan liye pehle hi so chuki thi
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