Incest Bastard 2

[Silent lover]

Bhailog mujhe nhi pata kisne kya comments kiya hai. Maine comments v na padhe sacchi me. Mai idhar bahut saare story par faltu ke negative comments dekh raha hu isiliye mai yeh bahut din se kahna chahta tha.

Comments karna acchii baat hai. Usse writer's ko pata chalata hai ki kya sahi hai kya galat jaa raha hai story me.

Kuch chutiye log hote hai joh negative comments karke poore writers ka mood kharab kar dete hai. Aisa karne se writer ka mann likhne ka karta nhi aur woh kahani chorr nikal lete hai.

Joh chutiye log faltu ke negative comments karte hai ( mai sabhi negative comments walo ko nahi bol raha. Maine saaf saaf likha hai faltu ke joh negative comments karte hai.) woh jara kahani likhe gaand na mara liya toh fir bolna.

Sidhe sabdo me bole toh bhai kahani padho acchi lage toh like karo comments karo but yaar negative comment karna yeh faaltu ho gaya. Writer's apna time nikal ke yaha forum me likhte hai. Kam se kam unki mehnat ko disrespect na karo. Sabhi jaante hai yaha forum par likhne ka koi paisa milta nhi . Sabhi writers apna kimti time nikal ke hame entertain karte hai kam se kam usi ke liye yaar respect kar liya karo .

Nhi kuch chutiye bhosdiwale apne aap ko mahan samjhte hai. Joh aise hai na un chutiyo ko kahna chahta hu bhai aap jara kahani start karna ham v padhe kya likhte ho aap.

sorry dosto kuch galat word's use kiye hai but yeh jaruri hai. Bahut din se kuch bande kisi v random story par pahltu ke comments kar rahe hai. Woh v acchii story par. Isiliye gussa aa gya tha. Aaj v iss story par tu tu me me dekha toh kuch aashirwad Swarup unke liye joh faltu ke negative comments karte hai.

Shi bole bhai ek dum me 6 saal se maybe online hu kisi na kisi site pe but ye baat har jagah common ho rakhi hai admin h id ban krde aise logo ki to accha rhe

 

[King of the world]

Bhailog mujhe nhi pata kisne kya comments kiya hai. Maine comments v na padhe sacchi me. Mai idhar bahut saare story par faltu ke negative comments dekh raha hu isiliye mai yeh bahut din se kahna chahta tha.

Comments karna acchii baat hai. Usse writer's ko pata chalata hai ki kya sahi hai kya galat jaa raha hai story me.

Kuch chutiye log hote hai joh negative comments karke poore writers ka mood kharab kar dete hai. Aisa karne se writer ka mann likhne ka karta nhi aur woh kahani chorr nikal lete hai.

Joh chutiye log faltu ke negative comments karte hai ( mai sabhi negative comments walo ko nahi bol raha. Maine saaf saaf likha hai faltu ke joh negative comments karte hai.) woh jara kahani likhe gaand na mara liya toh fir bolna.

Sidhe sabdo me bole toh bhai kahani padho acchi lage toh like karo comments karo but yaar negative comment karna yeh faaltu ho gaya. Writer's apna time nikal ke yaha forum me likhte hai. Kam se kam unki mehnat ko disrespect na karo. Sabhi jaante hai yaha forum par likhne ka koi paisa milta nhi . Sabhi writers apna kimti time nikal ke hame entertain karte hai kam se kam usi ke liye yaar respect kar liya karo .

Nhi kuch chutiye bhosdiwale apne aap ko mahan samjhte hai. Joh aise hai na un chutiyo ko kahna chahta hu bhai aap jara kahani start karna ham v padhe kya likhte ho aap.

sorry dosto kuch galat word's use kiye hai but yeh jaruri hai. Bahut din se kuch bande kisi v random story par pahltu ke comments kar rahe hai. Woh v acchii story par. Isiliye gussa aa gya tha. Aaj v iss story par tu tu me me dekha toh kuch aashirwad Swarup unke liye joh faltu ke negative comments karte hai.

Bhai kon log h jo negative cmnt krty ha,dafa karo aiso logo ko app ki story kamal ki hai bhai ap humaray liye likhe pls

 

[Sam190]

Bhai kon log h jo negative cmnt krty ha,dafa karo aiso logo ko app ki story kamal ki hai bhai ap humaray liye likhe pls

Bhai page number 311 aur 312 dekh lo usme Sadhu baba naam ke reader ne sirf kahani ke baarey me negative comments hi kiya hai ek bhi positive comments nhi hai.aur bastard kahani ke pehle part me bhi sirf negative comments hi post kiye hai.
Mera yahi manna hai ke agar aap writer ki kami hi q dikhatey ho acchi cheezey bhi comments me batao na.
Writer jab bhi story me aayenga aur negative comments dekh kar sirf uska mind na badal jaaye kahani likjnry ka.

 

[King of the world]

Bhai page number 311 aur 312 dekh lo usme Sadhu baba naam ke reader ne sirf kahani ke baarey me negative comments hi kiya hai ek bhi positive comments nhi hai.aur bastard kahani ke pehle part me bhi sirf negative comments hi post kiye hai.
Mera yahi manna hai ke agar aap writer ki kami hi q dikhatey ho acchi cheezey bhi comments me batao na.
Writer jab bhi story me aayenga aur negative comments dekh kar sirf uska mind na badal jaaye kahani likjnry ka.

To ye story parhte hi kyun h hi ki story likhe naa....ajeeb log hai

 

[Forward]

To ye story parhte hi kyun h hi ki story likhe naa....ajeeb log hai

Aise log (who comment's negative) ko sirf dhusron ki kamiyan nikalna hi aata hai. Agar itna hi perfect hain to khud kyon nahi koi story likhna start kar deten hain. Phir dhekte hain kitna hai DUM.

 

[King of the world]

Aise log (who comment's negative) ko sirf dhusron ki kamiyan nikalna hi aata hai. Agar itna hi perfect hain to khud kyon nahi koi story likhna start kar deten hain. Phir dhekte hain kitna hai DUM.

Main bhi yahi keh rha hoon k khud ki story m jo chahe likhe or agar story nhi lagi achi to na parhe naa

 

[ANUJ KUMAR]

Bhailog mujhe nhi pata kisne kya comments kiya hai. Maine comments v na padhe sacchi me. Mai idhar bahut saare story par faltu ke negative comments dekh raha hu isiliye mai yeh bahut din se kahna chahta tha.

Comments karna acchii baat hai. Usse writer's ko pata chalata hai ki kya sahi hai kya galat jaa raha hai story me.

Kuch chutiye log hote hai joh negative comments karke poore writers ka mood kharab kar dete hai. Aisa karne se writer ka mann likhne ka karta nhi aur woh kahani chorr nikal lete hai.

Joh chutiye log faltu ke negative comments karte hai ( mai sabhi negative comments walo ko nahi bol raha. Maine saaf saaf likha hai faltu ke joh negative comments karte hai.) woh jara kahani likhe gaand na mara liya toh fir bolna.

Sidhe sabdo me bole toh bhai kahani padho acchi lage toh like karo comments karo but yaar negative comment karna yeh faaltu ho gaya. Writer's apna time nikal ke yaha forum me likhte hai. Kam se kam unki mehnat ko disrespect na karo. Sabhi jaante hai yaha forum par likhne ka koi paisa milta nhi . Sabhi writers apna kimti time nikal ke hame entertain karte hai kam se kam usi ke liye yaar respect kar liya karo .

Nhi kuch chutiye bhosdiwale apne aap ko mahan samjhte hai. Joh aise hai na un chutiyo ko kahna chahta hu bhai aap jara kahani start karna ham v padhe kya likhte ho aap.

sorry dosto kuch galat word's use kiye hai but yeh jaruri hai. Bahut din se kuch bande kisi v random story par pahltu ke comments kar rahe hai. Woh v acchii story par. Isiliye gussa aa gya tha. Aaj v iss story par tu tu me me dekha toh kuch aashirwad Swarup unke liye joh faltu ke negative comments karte hai.

Bahut badiya

 

[ANUJ KUMAR]

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[Sukhi Choudhry]

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[Soku74]

Sorry yaar bas meri adat hay har story ko seriously pardne ki or jab koi galti ati hay toh wohi haal hota hay jayse ki ham kisi badi achi road par gadi chala rahe ho bade aram se or achanak koi ghada main pahiya pad jaye tab jo jhatka lagta hay samaj sakte hay...main yeh nahi kahta ki story achi nahi story ka concept acha hay bas kuch main baten hay jo story main mention honi chahyea jo nahi hay ya phir kuch cheejen reality se pare hoti hay toh ajeb lagta hay jayse ki south India ki movie jismain ek ungli dikhane se train reverse main chali jati hay, kele se gala karna,lat marne se tufan ka ajana...sign ab isko kaise hajam karen ab story agar fantasy "tag" laga ho toh samaj ati hay....main jayda nahi kahunga....is page par mera kisi ko ek lamba sa essay hay kryipya usko pade agar aapko tab gusa aye toh chama chata hoon

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Yaar mujhe itna gusa araha hay ki kya bataoon kisko kahoon....jab karan college gaya or chiller party ne usko bataya uske baad bhi woh apne chaha se poochta hay ki too kyun rahe hoo kya hua...banizbat ke jake sabko baye....phir poori raam kahani suni jo ki bachane baad bhi suni jansakti thi or mast bhasad or dialog bhi dena jaroori hay jo ki baad main ho sakta hay .... matlab agar koi admi mar raha ho or usko treatment ki jaroorat ho yoh pahle aramse Sam ram kahani suni chaheyea bhale marne wala mar he kyun na jaye....haan karlo baat,baat karna pahle hay.

Bhai kuch toh raham karo karan par....bechare ko ek musibat se nikla nahi ki doosri musibat...kuch toh peace of time mile ki uske sareer ke zakham theek ho jaye... reality main pata hay ki sirf ek ungli main cut lag jata hay use 2 se 3 din lagte hay sahi hone main...or yaha toh aap imagine kar sakte hay kya haal hay sareer ka usko toh kamse kam 1 haft chaheye or ye Shalini ko kya sapna aya ki karan ko Nageswara se kal college main milna hay? Aysa hay toh badi achi baat hay iska matlab usko pahle se pata chal jata hay ki bhavishya main kya hone wala hay.

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Ooooh ab samaj aya ki jab tabiyat kharab ho or hospital main nurse pooche ki kya hua hay toh sabse pahle apna introduction dena chahiye or jo sath main hay unka bhi ab agar 5 log hay toh pahle pacho ka instruction phir patiant ko kya hua woh batana chahiye

Kabhi kabhi ye kahani mujhe samaj nahi ati...jis collage main raghav apne jija Nageswara ke dam par kisi bhi ladki ka rap kar sakta hay...balke first encounter Sweta ke saath jab use raghav ko Thapar mara uske baad story main likha tha ki usne ek ladki ke sirf takkar lag jane se uska rape kiya woh bhi ghar main Gus kar use family ke samne or koi kuch nahi kar paya...or principal tak kuch uska nahi kar paye...toh yeh Niharika teacher jo backless blouse pahnker bomb ban ke ati hay kaise bachi hay abhi tak? Or bhai main toh taras gaya par aaj tak na Scholl or nahi college main meri koi female teacher backless blouse main nahi dhiki balke poore india main he...kash back less ke saath frontless bhi dhik jati....Or is story mai sabhi saree pahne wali ko sirf backless bluse ka keeda kyun kat khaya hay...or karan ko toh 5 crore mile the Shalini ke yaha se woh paise kaha gaye? Jo isko ghar walon se paise lene par rahe...na toh isne koi credit card banwaya na debit card phir sala itni bari rakam kya is karan ne apni gand main ghusa li?

PAta nhi dost tu sayad iss duniya ka sabse serious banda hoga. Yeh koi real life nhi hai dost, story hai. Story ka meaning hota hai imagination. Itna mat ghuss andar na toh aur jayda tu serious ho jayega.

Dost dekh story padh comment kar acchi baat hai lekin yaar yeh kya yaar tu logic dhund raha hai har ek baat ko khod raha hai. Ek baat bata sala ek baar me kisi ki shirt nhi pahtt sakti kya. Kya bhasar macha rakhi hai tune. Kyun tu ek acchi story ki lene pe tula hai. Pahla part v massstttt tha aur yeh v acchi hai. Main forum ki jitni v story hai usme se bahut saari story padhi hai kuch ko chod kar. Uske hisaab se yeh story acchi hai.

Tu itna hi serious hai na toh apni story likh joh v ho short story ho ya long dekhte hai tere mai kitna damm hai. Mai janta hu tuj jaisa aadmi nhi likhega bass usse bolna aata hai jab apne upar aati hai toh bhag jaate hai. Aur main janta hu tu iske baad mujhe gyaan dega woh v acchi wali. Toh joh maine kaha usse phale pura kar damm hai toh ek story likh main v forum par hu tu v hai. Yaadi sahi mai story acchi hui toh ham sab hai na acche comments ke liya. Aur story na hui acchii toh bajane ke liye. Bhai forum ka wasul hai dekh le koi v story utha ke story acchi hai toh sab padhte hai acche comments karte hai. Yadi na acchi story matlab average hai usko v support karte hai. Toh forum ka niyam aur kayde mat bigar. Support karne ka mann nhi hai toh chupp chap story padh aur nikal aur bhasar Matt maccha. Aur mai kah raha hu story acchi hai. Yaddi tujhe lagta hai mai galat bol raha hu toh tu 2no parts ke views aur comments dekh le lakho me hai. Isiliye apne hath kabu me rakh aur sahi comments karr. Story padhne aaya hai padh jayda gyaan mat de yaha tere se v acche gyaan dene wale hai. Woh v iss story ko accha bol ke gaye hai.

Mai v dekhta hu tu kitni acchi story likhta hai chall aja dekhte hai.

best of luck. Mai janta hu tu bura manega. Lekin jaruri tha tere ko bolna kyuki tune phaltu ke negative comments kare hai.