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Sam190

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Kabhi kabhi ye kahani mujhe samaj nahi ati...jis collage main raghav apne jija Nageswara ke dam par kisi bhi ladki ka rap kar sakta hay...balke first encounter Sweta ke saath jab use raghav ko Thapar mara uske baad story main likha tha ki usne ek ladki ke sirf takkar lag jane se uska rape kiya woh bhi ghar main Gus kar use family ke samne or koi kuch nahi kar paya...or principal tak kuch uska nahi kar paye...toh yeh Niharika teacher jo backless blouse pahnker bomb ban ke ati hay kaise bachi hay abhi tak? Or bhai main toh taras gaya par aaj tak na Scholl or nahi college main meri koi female teacher backless blouse main nahi dhiki balke poore india main he...kash back less ke saath frontless bhi dhik jati....Or is story mai sabhi saree pahne wali ko sirf backless bluse ka keeda kyun kat khaya hay...or karan ko toh 5 crore mile the Shalini ke yaha se woh paise kaha gaye? Jo isko ghar walon se paise lene par rahe...na toh isne koi credit card banwaya na debit card phir sala itni bari rakam kya is karan ne apni gand main ghusa li?
Bhai mujhe to abhi bhi samajh nhi aa raha hai ke aap kahani q padh rahey ho.
Mujhe to aisa lagta hai ke kahani ka har kirdaar chahey wo hero ho ya villain,wo din me kya kya karta hai wo sab writer kahani me likhey jaisey ke hero ne konse colour ka shirt pehna hai ya konsi colour ki underwear pehni hai.hero ne debit card konse colour ka banaya hai.bhai itni choti choti baato ko to writer kahani me nhi dikha sakta hai na.abhi hero debit card aur credit card banaye ya nhi wo writer ko apni kahani me batana chahiye kya
Ya phir uske pocket me kitney paisey hai ye bhi batana chahiye kya kahani me.
Bhai ye kahani hai isko kahani ke jaisa hi lo.agar itna hi dhyaan se padhna hai to upsc ki books padh lo aap paas bhi ho jaongey.
Aap ne har comments me bas kahani me choti choti galtiyo ko hi bataya hai.kahani me kuch acchi cheezey bhi to hongi na wo bhi bataya karo na.
Writer ek mahiney ke liye to online nhi aaney waala hai aur jab aa jayenga to shayed aap ke sawalo ka jawaab de ya phir ignore karey aap jaisey readers ko jo sirf kahani me galtiya nikalney ke liye comments kartey hai lekin kabhi bhi positive comments nhi kartey hai.
Kahani acchi chal rahi hai pls isko band mat karao.agar aap ko acchi nhi lag rahi hai to mat padho aur agar padhna hai to manoranjan ke liye padho na ke choti choti galtiya nikaal kar writer ko pareshan karo.writer ko paisey nhi mil rahey hai jo wo apna poora time nikaal kar kahani likh sakey aur jitna time bhi milta hai itney time me wo itni choti choti galtiyo par dhyaan nhi de sakta hai.
 

Sadhu baba

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Bhai mujhe to abhi bhi samajh nhi aa raha hai ke aap kahani q padh rahey ho.
Mujhe to aisa lagta hai ke kahani ka har kirdaar chahey wo hero ho ya villain,wo din me kya kya karta hai wo sab writer kahani me likhey jaisey ke hero ne konse colour ka shirt pehna hai ya konsi colour ki underwear pehni hai.hero ne debit card konse colour ka banaya hai.bhai itni choti choti baato ko to writer kahani me nhi dikha sakta hai na.abhi hero debit card aur credit card banaye ya nhi wo writer ko apni kahani me batana chahiye kya
Ya phir uske pocket me kitney paisey hai ye bhi batana chahiye kya kahani me.
Bhai ye kahani hai isko kahani ke jaisa hi lo.agar itna hi dhyaan se padhna hai to upsc ki books padh lo aap paas bhi ho jaongey.
Aap ne har comments me bas kahani me choti choti galtiyo ko hi bataya hai.kahani me kuch acchi cheezey bhi to hongi na wo bhi bataya karo na.
Writer ek mahiney ke liye to online nhi aaney waala hai aur jab aa jayenga to shayed aap ke sawalo ka jawaab de ya phir ignore karey aap jaisey readers ko jo sirf kahani me galtiya nikalney ke liye comments kartey hai lekin kabhi bhi positive comments nhi kartey hai.
Kahani acchi chal rahi hai pls isko band mat karao.agar aap ko acchi nhi lag rahi hai to mat padho aur agar padhna hai to manoranjan ke liye padho na ke choti choti galtiya nikaal kar writer ko pareshan karo.writer ko paisey nhi mil rahey hai jo wo apna poora time nikaal kar kahani likh sakey aur jitna time bhi milta hai itney time me wo itni choti choti galtiyo par dhyaan nhi de sakta hai.
Main aapse kuch nahi kahunga kyunki aapne mera Last reply sure nahi pada jismain maine ek story ka link attach kiya tha jo maine kisi ko kiya tha or usko read karne ko kaha tha so sorry I will not say you anything anymore coz you don't hay time to look all the aspects.or jaha tha daily report ki baat hay toh is par hay aysi story jis ko pard kar aap aysa kahna bhool jayenge kyunki woh kisi professional ki story hay or ek nahi maine 3 abhi tak ayse Nayab story yaha padi hay....woh professional ayse he nahi bane galtiya karke bane.
 

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Main aapse kuch nahi kahunga kyunki aapne mera Last reply sure nahi pada jismain maine ek story ka link attach kiya tha jo maine kisi ko kiya tha or usko read karne ko kaha tha so sorry I will not say you anything anymore coz you don't hay time to look all the aspects.or jaha tha daily report ki baat hay toh is par hay aysi story jis ko pard kar aap aysa kahna bhool jayenge kyunki woh kisi professional ki story hay or ek nahi maine 3 abhi tak ayse Nayab story yaha padi hay....woh professional ayse he nahi bane galtiya karke bane.
Ha to bhai agar aap ko writer ki galti batana hi hai to usko private me msg kar ke batao na aap comments section me q writer ki galti batate ho.
Ek do ke negative comments se doosrey aur readers ko bahana mil jaata hai kahani ko band karney ka
Pehle se xforum par kuch readers ki wajah se acchi acchi kahani band ho gayee hai aur yahi writer ki ek aur kahani najayaz rishta bhi band ho gayee thi jis me writer ko readers gaali de raha tha.
Agar aap ko galti hi batana hai to writer ko personal msg kar ke batao na.
 

Devil12

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Bhai doosra part suru hogay acha hay... Par yaha bhi story se samband kuch galtiyan hay kahne ko toh choti galtiya hay par bahut jaroor wali galtiya hay jinko darshaya jana jaroori tha...agar kisi ko janana ho toh main jaroor shauk se batana chahunga.
Bhai aap q khaali fukat acchi story ko band karna chahte ho.aap ke comments padh kar to lagta hai ke aap story ko band karney ke liye hi padh rahey ho.
Aap kehtey ho ke professional writer tabhi ban saktey hai jab unko unki galtiya batayee jaaye lekin professional writer banney ke liye sirf galti hi nhi writer ki acchi baatey bhi batani chahiye jo aap ne abhi tak to bataya nhi comments section me.
Kuch acchi baatey bhi bataya kariye ya phir kahani me kuch accha aap ko dikha hi nhi jo aap batana nhi chahtey ho.
Aur aap galtiya writer ki personal me msg kar ke batana chahiye.aap to doosre readers ko keh bhi rahey ho ke kisi ko galti jaanna hai writer ki to me bataney ke liye ready hu.
 

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Bhailog mujhe nhi pata kisne kya comments kiya hai. Maine comments v na padhe sacchi me. Mai idhar bahut saare story par faltu ke negative comments dekh raha hu isiliye mai yeh bahut din se kahna chahta tha.

Comments karna acchii baat hai. Usse writer's ko pata chalata hai ki kya sahi hai kya galat jaa raha hai story me.

Kuch chutiye log hote hai joh negative comments karke poore writers ka mood kharab kar dete hai. Aisa karne se writer ka mann likhne ka karta nhi aur woh kahani chorr nikal lete hai.

Joh chutiye log faltu ke negative comments karte hai ( mai sabhi negative comments walo ko nahi bol raha. Maine saaf saaf likha hai faltu ke joh negative comments karte hai.) woh jara kahani likhe gaand na mara liya toh fir bolna.

Sidhe sabdo me bole toh bhai kahani padho acchi lage toh like karo comments karo but yaar negative comment karna yeh faaltu ho gaya. Writer's apna time nikal ke yaha forum me likhte hai. Kam se kam unki mehnat ko disrespect na karo. Sabhi jaante hai yaha forum par likhne ka koi paisa milta nhi . Sabhi writers apna kimti time nikal ke hame entertain karte hai kam se kam usi ke liye yaar respect kar liya karo .

Nhi kuch chutiye bhosdiwale apne aap ko mahan samjhte hai. Joh aise hai na un chutiyo ko kahna chahta hu bhai aap jara kahani start karna ham v padhe kya likhte ho aap.

sorry dosto kuch galat word's use kiye hai but yeh jaruri hai. Bahut din se kuch bande kisi v random story par pahltu ke comments kar rahe hai. Woh v acchii story par. Isiliye gussa aa gya tha. Aaj v iss story par tu tu me me dekha toh kuch aashirwad Swarup unke liye joh faltu ke negative comments karte hai.
 

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Bhailog mujhe nhi pata kisne kya comments kiya hai. Maine comments v na padhe sacchi me. Mai idhar bahut saare story par faltu ke negative comments dekh raha hu isiliye mai yeh bahut din se kahna chahta tha.

Comments karna acchii baat hai. Usse writer's ko pata chalata hai ki kya sahi hai kya galat jaa raha hai story me.

Kuch chutiye log hote hai joh negative comments karke poore writers ka mood kharab kar dete hai. Aisa karne se writer ka mann likhne ka karta nhi aur woh kahani chorr nikal lete hai.

Joh chutiye log faltu ke negative comments karte hai ( mai sabhi negative comments walo ko nahi bol raha. Maine saaf saaf likha hai faltu ke joh negative comments karte hai.) woh jara kahani likhe gaand na mara liya toh fir bolna.

Sidhe sabdo me bole toh bhai kahani padho acchi lage toh like karo comments karo but yaar negative comment karna yeh faaltu ho gaya. Writer's apna time nikal ke yaha forum me likhte hai. Kam se kam unki mehnat ko disrespect na karo. Sabhi jaante hai yaha forum par likhne ka koi paisa milta nhi . Sabhi writers apna kimti time nikal ke hame entertain karte hai kam se kam usi ke liye yaar respect kar liya karo .

Nhi kuch chutiye bhosdiwale apne aap ko mahan samjhte hai. Joh aise hai na un chutiyo ko kahna chahta hu bhai aap jara kahani start karna ham v padhe kya likhte ho aap.

sorry dosto kuch galat word's use kiye hai but yeh jaruri hai. Bahut din se kuch bande kisi v random story par pahltu ke comments kar rahe hai. Woh v acchii story par. Isiliye gussa aa gya tha. Aaj v iss story par tu tu me me dekha toh kuch aashirwad Swarup unke liye joh faltu ke negative comments karte hai.
Ye wahi log Jo xvideo pe mom and so. Sex video Dekh ke usme logic dhundte hai Bhai ap Iske chakkar main na padho ap story pe focus kijiye aese chutiye ate rahenge
 
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