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Incest Bastard 2

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Isi liye bhai aap ko pehle hi keh chuka hu ke aap kahani ko ek baar acchey se padh ley.aap ko kahani ke baare me kuch pata hai hi nhi aur aap comment karte rehte hai.
Aap ek baar acchey se padh ley aur priyanka,Rajveer aur Rajvansh kon hai ye aap ko pata chal jayenga.🙏
Acchese padatha usilye bhul gaya
 
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Muze yaad nahi ke ye ye priyanka kon he, jara bataoge firse?
Priyanka Rajveer ki beti hai aur shraddha ki maa aur behan aur Reena mam ki beti aur behan ko priyanka ke ghar par hi rakha hai karan ne.
Aur itna hi nhi pandit ki dono daasiya ekta aur chandni ko jab karan ne doosre goan me jaa kar bachaya tha,bachaney ke baad priyanka ke yaha par hi rakha tha karan ne.
 
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Aur rahi bat Rajveer ke sarkar rahane ke bat to bhai. Apko bata du story ka sabse chutiya villain wo hoga. Bahot bada chutiya na ki khatarnak.
 
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Acchese padatha usilye bhul gaya
Rajveer aur ranjvansh ka intro update number 5 me milenga aur Rasika ka dada hi Rajveer hai aur Rasika ki birthday party me karan gaya tha family ke saath jaha par ghar ke bhedi ne call lagaya tha.
 

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Aur rahi bat Rajveer ke sarkar rahane ke bat to bhai. Apko bata du story ka sabse chutiya villain wo hoga. Bahot bada chutiya na ki khatarnak.
Aur wo chutiya q honga zara ye bhi bata denge to accha ho jayenga mujhe bhi.
Zara bata dijiye mujhe bhi
 
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Priyanka Rajveer ki beti hai aur shraddha ki maa aur behan aur Reena mam ki beti aur behan ko priyanka ke ghar par hi rakha hai karan ne.
Aur itna hi nhi pandit ki dono daasiya ekta aur chandni ko jab karan ne doosre goan me jaa kar bachaya tha,bachaney ke baad priyanka ke yaha par hi rakha tha karan ne.
Koi sense nahi banata uska villain hone ka. Mujhe laga priyanka Naya character hoga
 

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Koi sense nahi banata uska villain hone ka. Mujhe laga priyanka Naya character hoga
Priyanka koi new character nhi hai uski entry anjali ke shaadi ke wakt hi ho chuki thi.
Aur Rajveer villain hai ya nhi aur hai to q hai wo sab aagey pata chal jayenga aur sence banta hai ya nhi ye bhi aage hi pata chal jayenga.
Mujhe aap ye batao Rajveer ka villain honey ka sence q nhi banta hai aap ke hisaab ss
 
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Aur wo chutiya q honga zara ye bhi bata denge to accha ho jayenga mujhe bhi.
Zara bata dijiye mujhe bhi
Apko kisi ko marna hai apko chupke naki samne ake to bhai wusko chances mile hai marne ke fir bhi wo chutiya ache moke ki talash me baithi tha. Aur bhai gaon walo ne Rajveer ko bataya tha ki karan aur gaon wale mil ke nageshwar ko marne wale hai. Fir bhi us chutiye ne kisi ko khabar nahi karan ane ki. Khabar di hoti to wo Mara jata. Na Na use to marne ke pdi hai karan ke haatho se.
Aur bhai sarkaar ke aj tak kiye planning nahi Banta jo najdik rahakar nahi mar saka to kahe ka villain.if
Aur isase khatarnak to anil tha jo ki karan zinda rakha kar fir marne ke koshish ki thi.
Ye chutiya samne rahakar karan ko jitata dekh kar fir mauke ki talash me baitha ta aur ye ghar ke bhedi konsa Mal fukake baithe kisko pata
 
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Mujhe laga dusre konse gaon ka hoga sarkaar na ki ye rajveer
Isase powerful anil tha. Baithe baithe planing ki thi.
Wo bhi lag bag mar hi chuka tha.
Bhai ek bat hai apki bastard story jaisi koi story nahi thi. Kyunki wo story ke character samajne me der nahi lagata. Aur har character apne character bakhubhi nibha raha tha. Ye story me har koi apana aparna Universe bana raha jo ki koi Mayne nahi rakhta.
 
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Apko kisi ko marna hai apko chupke naki samne ake to bhai wusko chances mile hai marne ke fir bhi wo chutiya ache moke ki talash me baithi tha. Aur bhai gaon walo ne Rajveer ko bataya tha ki karan aur gaon wale mil ke nageshwar ko marne wale hai. Fir bhi us chutiye ne kisi ko khabar nahi karan ane ki. Khabar di hoti to wo Mara jata. Na Na use to marne ke pdi hai karan ke haatho se.
Aur bhai sarkaar ke aj tak kiye planning nahi Banta jo najdik rahakar nahi mar saka to kahe ka villain.if
Aur isase khatarnak to anil tha jo ki karan zinda rakha kar fir marne ke koshish ki thi.
Ye chutiya samne rahakar karan ko jitata dekh kar fir mauke ki talash me baitha ta aur ye ghar ke bhedi konsa Mal fukake baithe kisko pata
Pehli baat to ye hai ke nageshwar ne karan ke ghar waalo ko kidnap kar ke wo power me tha isliye ho sakta hai Rajveer ne karan ke aaney ki khabar na di ho.rajveer aur Nagesh ko apni planning par poora bharosa ho sakta honga.
Aur Rajveer kabhi bhi karan ke nazdeek raha hi nhi hai.kahani me sirf 3 baar hi rajveer ka character aaya hai.me ne to kabhi bhi Rajveer aur karan ko close dikhaya hi nhi hu.
Aur agar Rajveer main villain hota bhi hai to usne bohot saari planning ki hai.
1.....pandit ke haatho karan ko maarne ki.
2...... Nageshewar ke haatho maarne ki
3.......un kutto ke haatho maarne ki
4..........ghar ke bhedi ki help le kar karan ko maarne ki.
Ye sab planning to main villain ne kiya hai na.
Aur yahi anil ki baat to end me anil ne kaha tha ke jis ne bhi karan ke maa baap ko maara hai wo bohot takatwar hai.
Agar is part me main villain ki starting ss hi power dikha deta to kahani ke start me hi hi sab ko pata chal jaata ke main villain kon honga.
Kuch cheezey writer ko baad ke liye bhi bacha kat rakhni hoti hai.agsr sab detail me start me hi kahani ke bata diya writer ne to kahani me mazaa nhi rehta hai
 
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