Incest Bastard 2

[Thakur]

Priyanka Rajveer ki beti hai aur shraddha ki maa aur behan aur Reena mam ki beti aur behan ko priyanka ke ghar par hi rakha hai karan ne.
Aur itna hi nhi pandit ki dono daasiya ekta aur chandni ko jab karan ne doosre goan me jaa kar bachaya tha,bachaney ke baad priyanka ke yaha par hi rakha tha karan ne.

Thanks, you're writing good.

 

[AaRYaN8380]

Pehli baat to ye hai ke nageshwar ne karan ke ghar waalo ko kidnap kar ke wo power me tha isliye ho sakta hai Rajveer ne karan ke aaney ki khabar na di ho.rajveer aur Nagesh ko apni planning par poora bharosa ho sakta honga.
Aur Rajveer kabhi bhi karan ke nazdeek raha hi nhi hai.kahani me sirf 3 baar hi rajveer ka character aaya hai.me ne to kabhi bhi Rajveer aur karan ko close dikhaya hi nhi hu.
Aur agar Rajveer main villain hota bhi hai to usne bohot saari planning ki hai.
1.....pandit ke haatho karan ko maarne ki.
2...... Nageshewar ke haatho maarne ki
3.......un kutto ke haatho maarne ki
4..........ghar ke bhedi ki help le kar karan ko maarne ki.
Ye sab planning to main villain ne kiya hai na.
Aur yahi anil ki baat to end me anil ne kaha tha ke jis ne bhi karan ke maa baap ko maara hai wo bohot takatwar hai.
Agar is part me main villain ki starting ss hi power dikha deta to kahani ke start me hi hi sab ko pata chal jaata ke main villain kon honga.
Kuch cheezey writer ko baad ke liye bhi bacha kat rakhni hoti hai.agsr sab detail me start me hi kahani ke bata diya writer ne to kahani me mazaa nhi rehta hai

Bhai apke story ka villain powerful hai is me koi kharabi nahi hai. Kyunki karan ki usane bahot bar gand mari hai. Par bhai villain bolke Rajveer koi sense nahi banata.

 

[Red Skull]

Bhai apke story ka villain powerful hai is me koi kharabi nahi hai. Kyunki karan ki usane bahot bar gand mari hai. Par bhai villain bolke Rajveer koi sense nahi banata.

Rajveer ke villain ka sence banta hai ya nhi ye to aagey aap ko pata chal hi jayenga.
Aur ek baar bata do karan ki main villain ne gaand kab maari hai.

 

[Sorry]

Bhai apke story ka villain powerful hai is me koi kharabi nahi hai. Kyunki karan ki usane bahot bar gand mari hai. Par bhai villain bolke Rajveer koi sense nahi banata.

Mujhe to ye samajh nhi aa raha hai ke agar aap ko kahani pasand nhi hai to aap q padh rahey hai.
Hum ko to ye kahani acchi lag rahi hai agar aap ko nhi lag rahi hai to mat padhiye na.q dimaag ka kharaab kar rahey ho apna padh kar ke.

 

[AaRYaN8380]

Mujhe to ye samajh nhi aa raha hai ke agar aap ko kahani pasand nhi hai to aap q padh rahey hai.
Hum ko to ye kahani acchi lag rahi hai agar aap ko nhi lag rahi hai to mat padhiye na.q dimaag ka kharaab kar rahey ho apna padh kar ke.

Ap writer ho kya.
Bhai mai writes se bat kar raha hu. Aur bhai mujhe character karan accha lagta hai abhi satisfy nahi kar raha hai to mai writer ko bolunga aur wo bata rahe hai.
Ha apko kahani acchi lag rahi hai acchi bat hai

 

[AaRYaN8380]

Rajveer ke villain ka sence banta hai ya nhi ye to aagey aap ko pata chal hi jayenga.
Aur ek baar bata do karan ki main villain ne gaand kab maari hai.

Pandit ke haatho Admara kiya wo bhi gharwlo ke jariyeye
Khet me kutto ke hatho

 

[Red Skull]

Pandit ke haatho Admara kiya wo bhi gharwlo ke jariyeye
Khet me kutto ke hatho

Bhai kuttey to bhaag gaye they aur aap wo pandit waala update padhney ke baad readers ke comments bhi ek baar padh lena.usme kisi ne karan ko darpok ya chutiya nhi kaha tha usme sab ne pandit ki planning ki taarif ki thi agar wo update kharaab hota to readers us hi wakt keh detey ke karan chutiya lag raha hai.

Aur aap ek side bata rahey ho abhi doosri side bhi dekho.us wakt mayuri ke beta sanju ko kidnap kar rakha tha.aur pandit ke vansh me karan ka poora parivaar tha agar us wakt karan kuch bhi action leta wo us par backfire hi hota.
Karan ne sab se pehle sanju ko bachaya uske baad pandit aur arjun ko bhi maar kar chapter close kiya.aap kehte hai na karan dimaag ka use nhi karta hai to us wakt karan ne dimaag ka hi use kiya tha.usne sab se pehle situation ko solve kiya uske baad action kiya lekin aap ko har baar karan chutiya hi lag raha hai.

 

[Red Skull]

Pandit ke haatho Admara kiya wo bhi gharwlo ke jariyeye
Khet me kutto ke hatho

Aur aap first part ki baat kar rahey hai ke wo sab se accha hai to aap zara mujhe ye bhi bata dijiye ke us part me anil aur laxmi dono ne mil kar karan ko phansaya tha.
Jab karan ne amit ka phone check kiya to usko pata chala ke vivek sab planning ke pichey hai aur jab karan vivek se puchne aaya to pata chala ke vivek ne phaansi laga li.
Us waqt to sab ne suspence ki taarif ki thi
Baad ke update me pata chala tha ke anil ne dhanush ke zariye vivek ko maara tha.
Us wakt aap to kahani aur suspence ki taarif kar rahey they.
Us wakt aap ne karan ko chutiya q nhi kaha is part me hi q keh rahey ho mujhe to ye samajh nhi aa raha hai.

 

[Shek]

superb marvelous fantastic fabulous and wonderful update hai bhai aur bahuth badiya Shukriya bhai aisi updates dene keliye. my expected PRIYANKA,neha,aur Deepak college friends hai to priyanka one side love story ho ga aur isiliye usne abtak shadi nahi ki hai.

 

[RWAY-19149]

Fantastic update