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Red Skull

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I quit the story🙂

Spcha tha padhne ke baad acha sa rebu dunga
But 💔💔💔

Disappointed totally hero chutiya tha hai aur rahega

First mein bhi chutiya bAna usse seekh nahi mili to second mein bhi cutiya bana without any planing💔💔💔

Totallly heart is broken🙂💔💔
Sahi kaha bhai Mai bhi nahi pad raha hu. Aj last update tha. Mera
Lovingheart bhai
Bhai me aap ko kuch keh nhi sakta hu ke aap meri kahani padho ya mat padho.
Q ke aap ne na to meri pehli story bastard me na to kabhi like aur na hi comments kiya hai.aap ka is story me bhi ye pehla hi comments tha.to mujhe koi problem nhi hai aap ke kahani padhney ya na padhnry se.
AaRYaN8380 bhai aap meri har kahani ke regular readers rahey ho aur aap ke feedback se mujhe kabhi bhi bura nhi lagta hai lekin ha bjai me ek cheez batata hu aap ko.
Avengers me superhero thanos se haar gaye they phir baad me unho ne fight back kiya.wo bhi infinity waar me chutiya hi lag rahey they jo thanos se haar gaye they.lekin baad me fight back kiya.
Bhai jab superhero haar saktey hai to apna hero (karan) q nhi haar sakta hai.karan haar jaanrt ke baad fight back ksrenga.abhi villains ko thora khish honey de raha hu me.abhi kahani me thora drama honga uske baad karan sab ki gaand bhi maarenga.
Mujhe bas yahi kehna hai bhai.aagey aap ki marzi.jab karan badla lenga us wakt me aap ko tag kar doonga bhai.
 

eternity

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Lovingheart bhai
Bhai me aap ko kuch keh nhi sakta hu ke aap meri kahani padho ya mat padho.
Q ke aap ne na to meri pehli story bastard me na to kabhi like aur na hi comments kiya hai.aap ka is story me bhi ye pehla hi comments tha.to mujhe koi problem nhi hai aap ke kahani padhney ya na padhnry se.
AaRYaN8380 bhai aap meri har kahani ke regular readers rahey ho aur aap ke feedback se mujhe kabhi bhi bura nhi lagta hai lekin ha bjai me ek cheez batata hu aap ko.
Avengers me superhero thanos se haar gaye they phir baad me unho ne fight back kiya.wo bhi infinity waar me chutiya hi lag rahey they jo thanos se haar gaye they.lekin baad me fight back kiya.
Bhai jab superhero haar saktey hai to apna hero (karan) q nhi haar sakta hai.karan haar jaanrt ke baad fight back ksrenga.abhi villains ko thora khish honey de raha hu me.abhi kahani me thora drama honga uske baad karan sab ki gaand bhi maarenga.
Mujhe bas yahi kehna hai bhai.aagey aap ki marzi.jab karan badla lenga us wakt me aap ko tag kar doonga bhai.
Bhai Life mai keval jeet to nahi milati bulki jeet se jyada haar ka hi samna karna parta hai. jab koi tutata hai to prakriti aur samaj use aur torne ka prayas karta hai. yahi to jiwan hai. aur jo in lagatar mil rahe jhatko se ubarta hai use hi to vijeta kahte hai.

Great going.................................
 

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Bhai update ke liye aaya tha sayad jaldi aa gya..😁
Lekin yaha to kuchh aur hi scene chal rha h reviews me last update ke baad kuchh log kahani chhodne ko keh rhe h.. (sayad unko achha ni lg rha h last update se 🧐)
#No

Isiliye v h ki aisa phle kisi ki khani me ni mila pdhane ko.. jisme hota v h to itna details me na hota ho.. bs kuchh drama fir action..

Bhai mai bs ye kehna chahunga ki ye koi super story to h ni.. jisme hero ek do baar halka fulka chhot lge aur fir power aa jaye..
Ab bhai likh rhe h update to kuchh to sochha hoga.. last part v kuchh aisa hi gya..

ye kahani h jismi dono phlu malum h hme.. asal jindagi me aisa ni hota..
hero ke saath bura ho rha h avi to aisa thodi h hmesa hoga avi girega to fir uthega..
Bahut phle se to ni pr kuchh samay se hi is kahani se judda hu aur aage v saath rahunga..

keep going bhai..
 

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Lovingheart bhai
Bhai me aap ko kuch keh nhi sakta hu ke aap meri kahani padho ya mat padho.
Q ke aap ne na to meri pehli story bastard me na to kabhi like aur na hi comments kiya hai.aap ka is story me bhi ye pehla hi comments tha.to mujhe koi problem nhi hai aap ke kahani padhney ya na padhnry se.
AaRYaN8380 bhai aap meri har kahani ke regular readers rahey ho aur aap ke feedback se mujhe kabhi bhi bura nhi lagta hai lekin ha bjai me ek cheez batata hu aap ko.
Avengers me superhero thanos se haar gaye they phir baad me unho ne fight back kiya.wo bhi infinity waar me chutiya hi lag rahey they jo thanos se haar gaye they.lekin baad me fight back kiya.
Bhai jab superhero haar saktey hai to apna hero (karan) q nhi haar sakta hai.karan haar jaanrt ke baad fight back ksrenga.abhi villains ko thora khish honey de raha hu me.abhi kahani me thora drama honga uske baad karan sab ki gaand bhi maarenga.
Mujhe bas yahi kehna hai bhai.aagey aap ki marzi.jab karan badla lenga us wakt me aap ko tag kar doonga bhai.
Boro in ki baton ka dhian met do ap apni story pa concentrate kero baki ap kahani super lik raha ho
 

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Update...........12
Idhar Anjali di ne nighty pahen kar bathroom se bahar aa gayee.me ne arjun ko bhi aata hua dekh liya tha room me Anjali di ke.
Ab aage...............
Idhar jaisey hi Anjali di room se bahar nikli aur phir me ne arjun ko bhi room me aata dikha to me ne phataphat Anjali di ke paas gaya aur phir anjali di ko pakad liya aur uski gaand me ungli karney laga.itne me arjun ne bhi dekh liya door ke paas se.mere achanak ke hamley se Anjali di darr gayee thi.me anjali di ke gaand me ungli kar raha tha aur uske hontho ko zabardasti kiss karney laga.ye achanak ke hamley se Anjali di darr gayee thi.wo mujhe apne aap se door karna chahti thi lekin me ne usko tight hug kiya tha.
Anjali.............Karan tum ye kya kar rahey ho.tum ko sharam bhi nhi aa rahi hai kya.choro mujhe nhi to me chillaungi.
Idhar Anjali di mujhe par zor se chilla kar bol rahi thi aur gussa to saatvey aasmaan par tha.phir me ne kaha.
Karan...............kya hua di aaj aap ka mood nhi hai.hum to ye pehli baar nhi kar rahey ho na.me to aap ko hamesha se hi aisey hi pyaar karta hu na.to aaj aap ko itna gussa q aa raha hai.aaj mera romantic mood hai.plz mujhe aaj roko mat.mera lund poora khada ho gaya hai.plz isko pshle ki tarah shaant kar do.
Idhar baat kartey kartey me Anjali di ki gaand par thappad maar raha tha aur phir ungli bhi kar raha tha gaand ke ched par.mere aisa karney se Anjali di ko bohot gussa aa raha tha.ye dekh kar ke Arjun ko bohot gussa aa raha tha.
Itne me room ke mirror me Anjali di ne arjun ko dekh liya jo door par khadey ho kar sab dekh raha tha.jaisey hi Anjali di ne dekhi ke arjun dekh raha hai to wo bohot darr gayee thi.uske chehrey par pasina aa gaya tha darr ke maarey.itne me arjun room me aa gaya door ko laat maar kar ke.aur phir arjun ke room me aaney se me ne Anjali di ko chor diya.aur phir usko dekhna laga.
Arjun.................kya hua tum dono q ruk gaye.karan daal dena chahiye tha na apna lund Anjali ki bur aur gaand me.is se shaadi ke baad Anjali ko problem nhi hongi.q ke shaadi ke baad sirf mera hi lund nhi balkey goan me jitne me randwey hai unsab ka lund anjali ki bur aur gaand me jaaney waala hai.
Idhar me aur Anjali kuch samjhe nhi ke arjun aisa q bol raha hai.
Arjun...............karan bas ek baar shaadi ho jaaney de uske baad anjali meri biwi ke saath saath is goan ki bhi randi ban jayengi.ek saath uski gaand aur bur me 4 se 5 logo ke lund to jayengey.shaadi ke baad anjali ke badan me sirf 2 ched nhi hongey balkey bohot saarey ched ho jayenge jis se wo ek hi saath me bohot saarey lund lengi.
Ye baat sun kar ke Anjali bhi darr gayee thi.
Karan................Arjun bsdk tu shaadi kar q raha hai.tujhe jab pyaar nhi hai anjali di se.
Arjun...............karan kuch suspence bhi rehney de.na to mujhe is se pyaar hai aur na hi kabhi honga.ye ek randi ban kar rahengi shaadi ke baad.goan ka har randwa ki raand ban kar rahengi.abhi iske do ched hai jaha lund ghusa saktey hai.lekin shaadi ke baad anjali ke badan me itne ched kar doonga ke uske har ched se 2 se 3 lund to aaram se jaaye.wo goan ki raand ban kar rahengi.
Karan.................Bsdk mere hotey huye tu kabhi bhi Anjali di se shaadi nhi kar paayenga.aur ye mera challenge hai.
Itna kehtey hi me ne arjun ka collar pakad liya aur phir arjun ne mere haatho ko hata liya aur phir mere galey par haath rakh kar kehney laga.
Arjun.................abey me tera jija honey waala hu.aur hamesha se hi ye Prata rahi hai ke jija hi saaley ki gaand maartey hai.kabhi saala nhi jija ki gaand maarta hai.
Phir me ne uska haath zor se pakad kar apney galey se haath hata liya aur phir uske galey ko pakad liya aur deewar se touch kar ke kehney laga.
Karan..................abey ye saala paagal hai.yaad rakh me thora pshycho hu agar mere parivaar par koi bhi buri nazar rakhta hai to mere andar ka jaanvar koi bhi rishta ya phir power nhi dekhta.aur rahi parampara ki to yaad rakh agar meri behan ke saath kuch bhi bura kiya na to ye saala tujh jaisey jija ki gaand me danda daal kar ke tera lund se bahar nikalenga.
Arjun.................tu kuch nhi kar sakta bsdk.agar tu ne mujhe touch bhi kiya to tere parivaar ke logo ko accha nhi lagenga.tera parivaar vaaley to mujhe bhagwaan ki tarah maantey hai.aur me tujhe challenge karta hu tu kuch bhi kar ley tu ye shaadi kabhi bhi rok nhi payenga.
Karan..............aur tujhe bhi jo karna hai kar le.meri behan ki bhi shaadi tujh se nhi hongi.aur ye mera vaada hai.aur me apna vaada hamesha poora karta hu.
Arjun.............wo to dekh hi lengey.ab me jaata hu tu acchey se apna lund anjali ki gaand aur bur me daal.shaadi ke baad to motey motey lambey lambey lund teri behan ki bur aur gaand me jaaney waaley hai.khi teri behan ko taklif na ho.
Itna kehtey hi arjun bhi chaley gaya.aur jaisey hi arjun gaya anjali ne mujhe zor se thappar maara aur kehney lagi.
Anjali................karan tu ne ye kya kar diya.tu apni behan ke saath ye aisi gandi harkat kaisey kar sakta hai.dekh ab to arjun ne bhi dekh liya hai.
Karan.................usko dikhaney ke liye hi to me ye sab kar raha tha.mujhe ye jaanna tha ke arjun q shaadi karna chahta hai.aur ab pata chal gaya hai ke uska maksad aap ko pareshan karna hai.wo aap se pyaar vyaar nhi karta hai.wo kisi aur cheez ki wajah se aap se Shaadi karna chahta hai.
Mere itna kehtey hi Anjali ki batti bhi jal gayee thi.usko bhi laga tha ke jo me keh raha hu wo sahi hai.
Karan.............di mujhe pata hai aap ko bura laga hai.lrkin jis tarah se Arjun aap ko torture kar raha tha mere aur aap ke baarey me ganda bol bol kar ke.isliye me uske saamney hi aap ke saath gandi harkat kiya hu.aur yahi uski jal gayee thi aur usne josh me aa kar ke apna asli chehra dikha diya hai.wo apney aap ko bohot Sharif dikha raha tha lekin ab uski sharafat ka parda uth gaya hai.aur ab ye parda sab ke saamney bhi uth jayenga.aur mera aap se vaada hai me aap ki arjun se shaadi honey nhi doonga chahey to iske liye me mar hi q na jao.
Itna kehtey hi me bhi bahar aa gaya tha.me anjali di se aankhey bhi nhi mila paa raha tha.jo bhi harkat ki thi wo majburi me thi lekin gandi harkat ki thi.aur wo bhi di se begair puchey unke badan ko haath jo lagaya tha.mujhe bhi bohot guilty feel ho raha tha.aur yahi haal anjali di ka bhi tha.unho ne kuch jaaney begair mujhe thappad jo maar diya tha.
Me bahar aa kar dekha to arjun sab ghar waalo ke saath bohot Hasee mazaak kar raha tha.ghar ka damaad honey waala tha to sab uske saath bohot acchey se bartaav kar rahey they.phir me ne phone lagaya Mayuri ko aur usne pick kiya.
Karan..............kaha ho aap.
Mayuri..............tum ne jaisa kaha tha hum tumharey ghar ke pass hi khadey hai.
Karan................ha to thik hai andar aa jaiye.aur aap ne jo bhi mujhe bataya tha wo sab ghar waalo ko bata dijiye.
Mayuri...............karan lekin is se mere Betey ki jaan ko khatra ho sakta hai.arjun mere betey ko maar denga.
Karan..............Mayuri ji jab tak ye shaadi nhi hoti arjun aap ke bacchey ko maar nhi sakta.agar wo aap ke bacchey ko maar denga to uska bhaanda phoot sakta hai.isliye usne abhi tak aap ke bacchey ko zinda rakha hai.lekin shaadi ho jaaney ke baad usko aap ki koi zarurat nhi hongi aur us wakt wo aap ko aur aapke bacchey ko maar sakta hai.bas ek baar arjun ki sacchayee ghar waalo ko pata chal jaaye aur ye shaadi bhi ruk jaye phir to me uske halaq me haath daal kR ke aap ke bacchey ka pata lagaunga.
Mayuri................thik hai karan hum ko tum par bharosa hai.tum jaisa kehtey ho hum waisa hi karengey.hum bas abhi aatey hai.
Phir phone par baat ho jaaney ke baad me bhi nichey aa gaya tha.idhar ghar waaley sab arjun ki khatirdaari karney me lagey huye they.itne me Sulekha,Mayuri aur arjun ki behan Anushka teeno ghar me aa gaye.jaisey hi teeno aaye to ghar waaley khush ho gaye aur sab ko sofey par bitha diye.
Arjun...............maa aap log bhi yaha aaney waaley they.mujhe aap ne bataya q nhi.
Sulekha.............wo achanak se aaney ka plan ban gaya to aa gaye.hum ko kuch baat karni thi.
Rohit...............kahiye na samdhan ji kya baat karni hai.
Mayuri..............Uncle ji agar sab ek saath aa jaaye to sab ko baat bata dengey.isliye aap anjali aur baaki sab ko bula lijiye.
Poonam..............Ansh jaa sab ko bula ley.
Phir ansh ne baari baari sab ko bula kar le aaya.anjali bhi kurti aur leggins pahen kar aa gayee.kavya di aur baaki sab ghar waaley dono bua aur phuppa ji aur baaki sab aa gaye they.arjun ko kuch pata nhi tha ke kya baat karney waali hai sulekha.
Rohit...............samdhan ji kya baat karni hai aap ko.hum sab yaha aa gaye hai.
Sulekha...............Mayuri bata hum yaha q aaye hai.
Mayuri................thik hai mummy.
Phir Mayuri khadi huyee aur phir arjun ke paas gayee aur uske collar ko pakad li aur uske oopar thappad ki baarish karney lagi.idhar arjun ke saath saath sab ghar waaley bhi shocked ho gaye they ke Mayuri apney devar ko itna q thappad maar rahi hai.
Sulekha..............Mayuri aur maar is kaminey ko zinda mat chorna is ne hamari zindgi ko barbaad kar diya hai.
Idhar ghar waalo ko kuch samajh hi nhi aa raha tha ke kya ho raha hai.idhar phir me ne Mayuri ko kamar se pakda aur usko arjun se door kiya.me kisi ke saamney ye zaahir nhi karna chahta tha ke ye plan mera hai.isliye me ne Mayuri ko door kiya aur kaha.
Karan..................Mayuri bhabhi aap apney hi devar ko q maar rahey ho.aur aunty ji aap q keh rahey ho arjun bhai ko maarney ke liye.
Sulekha................wo isliye ke arjun mera beta nhi hai.aur na hi wo Mayuri ka damaad hai aur na hi anuska ka bhai.wo to mere betey ka kaatil hai.usne mere betey ko maar diya hai.usne mere potey aur Mayuri ke betey ko kidnap kar ke rakha hai.aur anjali se shaadi karna chahta hai.is ka kuch maksad hai jo usko poora karna hai anjali se shaadi kar ke aur shaadi karnry ke liye hum ko mohra banaya hai.mera pota iski giraft me hai isliye hum uske maa aur bhabhi honey ka natak kar rahey hai.
Ye sach sun kar ke ghar waaley sab shocked ho gaye they.ab sab arjun ki taraf gussY se dekh rahey they.kisi ko bhi vishwas nhi ho raha tha.idhar arjun ko sab accha samajh rahey they lekin wo to bura nikal gaya tha.phir sulekha ne arjun ka gala pakdi aur kehney lagi.
Sulekha............Haraami bata mera pota kidhar hai.jaldi bata nhi to tujhe jaan se maar doongi.
Arjun..................aap teeno ye kya bol rahey ho.me to aap ka hi beta hu to aap mujhe q apna beta maan ne se inkaar kar rahey hai.aur bhai ki mout to axxident se huyee thi na aur Mayuri bhabhi ko abhi tak baccha hua hi nhi hai to me kaisey kidnap karunga.
Mayuri................Mc jhooth mat bol.tu ek maa ko apney betey se door kar raha hao iski haay tujhe zarur lagengi.bata kaha hai mera bsta.
Arjun................aap teeno ko ho kya gaya hai.papa (Rohit) aap mera vishwas kijiye me sach keh raha hu.me inka hi beta hu.me ne kisi ko kidnap nhi kiya hu.mayuri bhabhi ko kabhi baccha hua hi nhi hai.
Idhar ghar waalo ko kuch samajh nhi aa raha tha ke kis par vishwas karey.idhar sulekha aur Mayuri arjun se apney bacchey ke baarey me puch rahi thi
Sulekha.............bhai saheb aap hamara vishwas kijiye hum sach keh rahey hai.ye accha ladka nhi hai.aap is se apni beti ki shaadi mat honey dena.nhi to aap ki beti ko jeeteji ye raavan maar denga.
Idhar Sulekha ke aankho se aansu beh rahry they.uska ro ro kar bura haal ho gaya tha.uske aankho ke aansu ko dekh kar ke ghar ke logo ko bhi ab vishwas ho raha tha.aur jab arjun ne dekha ke ghar waaley sulekha aur Mayuri ki baato ko sach maan rahey hai to arjun ne ek zordaar tamacha sulekha ko maara jis se wo nichey gir gayee.aur phir Mayuri ke baal khich kar ke uske sir ko deewar se maarney laga tha.ab Mayuri ke sir se khoon bhi nikal raha tha.phir Mayuri ko maarnry ke baad ab wo sulekha ko laato se maarney laga.aur ye mujhe accha nhi laga to me ne uska haath pakda aur usko ek zordaar punch de maara jis se uske chehrey se khoon nikalney laga.
Karan.................ye dono tujhe apna beta aur devar nhi maantey lekin tu kehta hai ke ye meri maa aur bhabhi hai.aur tu kehta hai ke ye teri maa aur bhabhi hai to koi apni maa ko itna buri tarah se maarta hai kya.maa ke kadmo me to jannat hoti hai aur tu usko itni buri tarah se maar raha hai.tu agar apni maa aur bhabhi ko maar sakta hai to shaadi ke baad to anjali di ko bhi maar sakta hai.aur jo aurto par haath uthata hai wo mard nhi hota.aur teri ye harkat se lagta hai ke jo bhi aunty aur bhabhi ne bola hai wo sach hai.tu unka beta nhi hai.aur tu ne hi unke potey ko kidnap kiya honga.Badey papa ab aap sab ke oopar hai aap ko ye rishta karna hai ya nhi.jo apni maa ko maar sakta hai wo apni biwi ko bhi maar sakta hai.
Ajay...............hum tujh par kitna bharosa kartey they aur tu ne hi hum ko dhoka diya hai.pandit ji ke bolney par hum ne ye rishta pakka kiya tha aur tu ne humarey saath saath pandit ji ko bhi dhoka diya hai.
Itna kehtey hi Ajay chacha ne arjun ko maara.aur phir uske baad baday papa ne bhi arjun ki dhunayee kar di.
Rohit..............bata q tu shaadi karna chahta tha anjali se.kon hai tu,tera maksad kya hai.
arjun..............papa aap sab bhi mujh par shak kar rahey hai.mujhe zarur koi phasa raha hai.aur mom aur bhabhi mujhe q apna beta Nhi maan rahey hai mujhe samajh nhi aa raha hai.aap plz meri baato par vishwas kijiye me sach keh raha hu.
Idhar phir se badey papa ne arjun ko maara aur kehney lagey.
Rohit...............tu aisey nhi bolenga.tujhe to police ke hawaley karna honga.
Abhi itna badey papa ne kaha hi tha ke pandit ki dono daasiya ne ghar ke bahar se kaha ke pandit ji aa rahey hai to unka swagat kijiye.jaisey hi dono daasiyo ne kaha waisey hi ghar ki aurtey kitchen me gayee aur paani le kar aayee aur phir pandit ke pairo ko paani se dhoya aur phir pandit ghar me aa gaya.jaisey hi andar aaya to arjun ki haalat ko dekh kar pucha.
Pandit.................Arjun ye tum ko ho kya gaya hai.tumharey chehrey se khoon q nikal raha hai.
Rohit...............pandit ji me aap ko batata hu.
Aur phir pandit ko baday papa ne sab bata diya jo bhi abhi kuch samay hua tha.phir pandit ne kaha.
Pandit................is me arjun ki koi galti nhi hai.me aap sab ko kuch batana chahta hu.aap sab Beth jaiye aap ko jo bataunga us se aap sab shocked ho jayengey.
Phir ghar waaley sab Beth gaye aur unke saath me aur sulekha,Mayuri aur Anushka bhi beth gayee.
Pandit...............aap sab logo ne arjun ko bura kaisey samajh liya hai.ye rishta me ne fix kiya tha aur kya me aap ke saath kabhi dhoka kar sakta hu kya.
Rohit..............pandit Ji hamein aap par poora bharosa hai aur aap kabhi bhi hamara bura nhi chah saktey hai.lekin haalat keh rahey hai ke arjin ek accha ladka nhi hai
Pandit..............me tum ko kuch batana xhata hu isliye aap meri baato ko dhyaan se suniye.Rohit tum keh rahey they ke raat me kuch ajeeb ho raha hai.ghar me se ghoonghroo ki awaaz aa rahi hai aur ek kaala saaya hai.
Rohit..............ha pandit ji.
Pandit..............ha to wo ghoonghroo waali ek bhatakti huyee aatma hai aur ye aatma koi aur nhi Neha
(karan mom) hai.
Jaisey hi pandit ne mom ka naam liya hum sab shockd ho gaye they.kavya di aur me zyaada shocked ho gaye they.ghoonghroo waali koi aur nhi mom hai ye to mere sir ke oopar se jaa raha tha.

Next........karan shocked,Pandit and Arjun Rocked.
Next update me horror ke suspence,akash ki mout ka raaz khulenga.

laajwaab update hai bhai
 
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