Romance BEAUTY AND THE BEAST 2 (COMPLETED)

[Swaraj]

Bohot badhiya update

Thanks bro

 

[Swaraj]

First of all congratulation for new story &second is that yeh kesa bemurawat banda hai jis ke pas apni behno keliye bhi time ni hai

Thanks bro
Lekin character bhi to beast hi hai na
Isliye attitude bhi beast jaisa hi hona chahiye

 

[Swaraj]

bhai new story ke liye

1st update se hi pata chal raha h ki ye hero bhi Yash aur Dhruv jaisa hi khadus type ka h.

Par dusri 2 story jaise isko bhi thoda sa likh ke chale mat jaiyega.

Thanks bro
Story poora zaroor hoga
Saath rahiye

 

[Swaraj]

Awesome update
Aa hi gaya attitude person
Keep posting

Thanks bro
Wahi to main character hai Saath rahiye

 

[Swaraj]

first of all for new story
1 st update is nice itna to dhayan main aa gaya ki story india main based nahi hai kyuki india main koi indian restaurant nahi dhundega start acha hai lekin ye kaisa banda hai yaar ranvijay ki ise koi rakhi bandhne aayi hai aur ye bhai saab bagair bat chit kiye chale gaye this is against indian culture khair shayad iske piche bhi koi kahani ho pata chal hi jayega ki wo aisa kyu hai

nice update keep up the good work

Thanks bro
Bilkul sahi kaha aapne
Agar aapne part 1 padhi hogi to pata chalega ki ranvijay story ke last me apna intro de chuka tha
Ranvijay ka character par shayad aapko gussa bhi a jaaye
Lekin kya kare ek beast ka character aisa hi hona chahiye

 

[oscar pistorious]

Character of beast can be understood but who is gonna be the beauty opposite to this beast becoz komal is already hooked up with yash... then who else??? Or it will be a brother sister story or incest becoz sharon and komal tied rakhi on his hands

 

[Swaraj]

Character of beast can be understood but who is gonna be the beauty opposite to this beast becoz komal is already hooked up with yash... then who else??? Or it will be a brother sister story or incest becoz sharon and komal tied rakhi on his hands

Thanks bro
Not incest, kyunki aapko pata hai mai adult oriented story likhta nahi
Thoda sabr kijiye

 

[johnsamuri]

wow............................................

 

[Assassin]

car tezi se apne manzil ki aur ja rahi thi

"kya baat hai didi aap yahan kyun le aayi" komal boli

"rakshabandhan yaad hai na" Sharon ne yaad dilaya

"Haan lekin ab koun bach gaya" komal ne fir poocha

"hai ek shishya mere pati parmeshwar ka" Sharon ne natkiya andaz me kaha

Aur komal khilkhilakar has padi

"hmm to uske ghar kyun nahi ja rahe hai??" komal ne poocha

"kyunki us mahan insan ko in sab me koi dilchaspi nahi hai" Sharon boli

"strange, Yash bhi to aisa hi tha shayad" komal ne kaad karte hue kaha

"nahi komal yash itna insensitive nahi tha" Sharon boli

"oh" komal soch me pad gayi
Yash ke Saath kab Shaadi hui, kab pyaar hua pata hi nahi chala. Kaafi insensitive tha yash lekin Shaadi ke baad dheere dheere poora badal gaya tha

"lekin jo Insaan apna school khatam karte hi mental hospital...." Sharon ke itna bolte hi car ruk gayi

"madam we're at the destination" driver bola

Sharon aur komal ne building dekha, kambakht poore ka poora dhruv ke building ki copy hai ye building

Ander aate hi staffs poore josh se kaam karte hue dikhe. Kisi ke chehre par koi smile nahi koi khushi nahi

Appointment nahi liya tha Sharon ne isliye dono lobby me baithe hue the

"kya work culture hai yaar"

"sahi kaha I'm gonna resign"

"lekin iski jaise koi dosari company salary degi bhi nahi"

"to kya salary ke liye Jaan de de?"

"kab kise nikal deta hai kab kise demote karta hai kab kise sunata hai bhagwan Jaane"

Komal staffs ke beech ki Saari baatein sun rahi thi

Tabhi ek Gaadi unke Saamne ruki aur Saath me Saare staffs me afra tafri mach gayi

Driver ne kaampte hue haathon se car ka darwaza khola

"you are 3 minutes late Mr Brian, next time if it happens I'll have to recruit a new driver" bol wo shaks ne apna briefcase uthaya aur pocket se mobile nikalkar message padhne laga

Fir tezi se building me dakhil hua

"good morning sir" receptionist ne smile ke Saath wish kiya. Lekin is wish me darr zyada tha aur khushi kam

US shaks ne koi jawab nahi diya aur aage nikal gaya

Charo aur staffs use wish karte rahe lekin wo shaks seedha lobby me gaya aur Sharon aur komal ko dekhte hi unke Paas gaya

"ranvijay bhaiyya" Sharon muskurate hue us shaks ke Saamne gayi to us shaks ne Sharon ko wahi rok liya

"sorry aap logo ko wait karna pada" us shaks ne bola aur fir sabhi office me chale gaye

Komal Sharon dono ne ranvijay ke kalai me rakhi baandhi

"aap logo ka gift mai aap logo ke ghar bhej chuka hoon. Ab mujhe airport ke liye late ho raha hai" bol kuch sune bina hi ranvijay wahan se chala gaya

"ye kaisa Insaan hai Sharon didi. Iske liye hum yahan aaye the" halki si hairaani aur halka sa gussa tha komal ki awaz me

Sharon kuch nahi boli bas ranvijay ko jaate hue dekhne lagi

"chal chalte hai, aaj ek achi si Indian restaurant try karte hai" bol Sharon ne komal ka haath pakad kar kheenchte hue use building ke bahar le gayi

for new story Swaraj

 

[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

Thanks bro
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