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[A.A.G.]

इन्वॉल्व आपने किया था कि कुछ लोग कह रहे है करीम का सच्चा प्यार

aap page no. 16 par jakar meri update pe pehli comment hai woh padhiye..usme maine kisi ko bhi involve nahi kiya hai..lekin meri comment ke niche hi aapki comment hai aur aapne usme muze involve kiya hai yeh bol kar ki "kuchh dost aisa bol rahe hai"..toh suruwat kisne ki woh please check kar lijiyega..!!
aise hi hamari behes pichhle ek update pe huyi thi waha pe maine suruwat ki thi mai manta hu lekin iss baar aapne ki hai..kuchh kiya hai toh manane ki bhi himmat rakhe please..!!

 

[Rekha rani]

aap page no. 16 par jakar meri update pe pehli comment hai woh padhiye..usme maine kisi ko bhi involve nahi kiya hai..lekin meri comment ke niche hi aapki comment hai aur aapne usme muze involve kiya hai yeh bol kar ki "kuchh dost aisa bol rahe hai"..toh suruwat kisne ki woh please check kar lijiyega..!!
aise hi hamari behes pichhle ek update pe huyi thi waha pe maine suruwat ki thi mai manta hu lekin iss baar aapne ki hai..kuchh kiya hai toh manane ki bhi himmat rakhe please..!!

मैंने अपना कमनेट दिया था न कि आपका reply ok, न आपका नाम लिखा कहि भी , हिम्मत है तभी इतनी देर से जवाब भी दे रही हु पीछे नही हट रही, जो सही है सही कहा जायेगा और जो गलत है उसे गलत,

 

[A.A.G.]

मैंने अपना कमनेट दिया था न कि आपका reply ok, न आपका नाम लिखा कहि भी , हिम्मत है तभी इतनी देर से जवाब भी दे रही हु पीछे नही हट रही, जो सही है सही कहा जायेगा और जो गलत है उसे गलत,

toh maine kaha aapko reply diya tha..mai bhi toh apne comments kar raha tha..jaise aapne bola tha ki kuchh dost aisa keh rahe hai maine bhi same waise hi bola tha ki kuchh log aisa keh rahe hai..toh aap bhi check kijiyega ek baar..!! aaj aapne pehle meri comment pe reply kiya hai na ki maine..toh kaun suruwat ki hai yeh dikh raha hai..!! page 19 pe dekhiye 5 th comment hai aapka jisme aapne muze reply kiya hai..toh suruwat reply karne ki kisne ki yeh toh pata chal gaya hoga aapko..!!

 

[Lucky..]

Bhai kahani ka plot bahot damdar hai par aapne kaahani ko galat disha me le jake sara mood off kar diya..
Ye kaarim or shruti ki love story ne puri kahani ko duba diya..
Kareem ke sath shruti ko sett karvana hai aapko to sanju ko villen bana do to kuch maja aaye varna ye sanju ka roll kyu hai kuch samaj nahi aa raha ..
Kahani me kareem or shruti ka pyaar aage badhte dikh raha hai. Jisme hume to koi interest nahi aa raha .
Mujhe kahani kaafi pasand aay par kareem or shruti ki love story aage aayegi ye soch kar hi ab kahani me rushi nahi rahi..

Khair aapki kahani hai aap apne liye likh rahe hai to aap apne hisab se likhye..
Hum reader ko jo pasand nahi hai woh bataya sirf ..

Bhura mat man na bhai soryy..
Bad apna mat diya hai.

 

[sandy619]

Bhai kahani ka plot bahot damdar hai par aapne kaahani ko galat disha me le jake sara mood off kar diya..
Ye kaarim or shruti ki love story ne puri kahani ko duba diya..
Kareem ke sath shruti ko sett karvana hai aapko to sanju ko villen bana do to kuch maja aaye varna ye sanju ka roll kyu hai kuch samaj nahi aa raha ..
Kahani me kareem or shruti ka pyaar aage badhte dikh raha hai. Jisme hume to koi interest nahi aa raha .
Mujhe kahani kaafi pasand aay par kareem or shruti ki love story aage aayegi ye soch kar hi ab kahani me rushi nahi rahi..

Khair aapki kahani hai aap apne liye likh rahe hai to aap apne hisab se likhye..
Hum reader ko jo pasand nahi hai woh bataya sirf ..

Bhura mat man na bhai soryy..
Bad apna mat diya hai.

Sabse pehle thanks Bhai, apna point of view rakhne ke liye.
Abhi toh kahani proper way me start bhi nahi hui hai aur aap sab pehle se predict kr rhe hai ki kya hone wala hai.
Khair kahani ko thoda time dijiye growth lene dijiye...
Wese bhi yaha bahut si kahaniya hai jo intresting hai aur Aapki favourite kahani mujhe bhi suggest kre..
Me bhi koshish krunga unse kuch sikhne ki..

 

[A.A.G.]

Bhai kahani ka plot bahot damdar hai par aapne kaahani ko galat disha me le jake sara mood off kar diya..
Ye kaarim or shruti ki love story ne puri kahani ko duba diya..
Kareem ke sath shruti ko sett karvana hai aapko to sanju ko villen bana do to kuch maja aaye varna ye sanju ka roll kyu hai kuch samaj nahi aa raha ..
Kahani me kareem or shruti ka pyaar aage badhte dikh raha hai. Jisme hume to koi interest nahi aa raha .
Mujhe kahani kaafi pasand aay par kareem or shruti ki love story aage aayegi ye soch kar hi ab kahani me rushi nahi rahi..

Khair aapki kahani hai aap apne liye likh rahe hai to aap apne hisab se likhye..
Hum reader ko jo pasand nahi hai woh bataya sirf ..

Bhura mat man na bhai soryy..
Bad apna mat diya hai.

bhai mai bhi kabhi imagine hi nahi kar sakta kareem aur shruti ko sath me..kyunki yeh kareem itna harami hai, itne kand kar chuka hai, kitni ladkiyon ke sath khel chuka hai aur isko apne baap ke paise aur power ka itna ghamand hai, jo kisi ki respect nahi karta aise ladke ke sath shruti ko dikhana hi galat hai..iss harami kareem ka chacha aur baap bhi kitne 2 number ke kaam karte honge..!! ab dekhte hai sanjy kya karta hai..muze toh lagta sanju shruti ko apne sath hi rakhe..!!

 

[Suniya]

Aaj update aayega kya bhai

 

[Lucky..]

Sabse pehle thanks Bhai, apna point of view rakhne ke liye.
Abhi toh kahani proper way me start bhi nahi hui hai aur aap sab pehle se predict kr rhe hai ki kya hone wala hai.
Khair kahani ko thoda time dijiye growth lene dijiye...
Wese bhi yaha bahut si kahaniya hai jo intresting hai aur Aapki favourite kahani mujhe bhi suggest kre..
Me bhi koshish krunga unse kuch sikhne ki..

Bhai aapki kahani hai to aapki marji hum bas apna maat rakh rahe the.. Khair abhi jo padha kahani me usse lagta hai kareem ko aap ek hero ki tarah dikhane ki koshish kar rahe hai.. Khair aapki marji jaise aap ko likhna hai vaise aap likh sakte hai.

And meri fav kahani to Filhal close ho gay hai.. "Pyaar 100 baar". Par or bhi hai jaise " werewolf" bhai ki kahani bhi ek baar aap badh sakte hai .

 

[Rekha rani]

लेखक महोदय कहानी बहुत बढ़िया चल रही है इसका पता रीडर्स की उत्सुकता से पता चलता है, हम रीडर्स को इग्नोर कीजिये और जो कहानी आपने सोच रखी हो वो पेश कीजिये , उसमे कोई हीरो हो या गुंडा कोई फर्क नही पड़ेगा, सब लेखक की अपनी लेखन शैली होती है और हर कहानी का अलग प्लाट, अगर सभी कहानी एक ही तर्ज़ पर चलेगी तो नई और पुरानी में क्या फर्क रह जायेगा।
ऐसे बहुत सी कहानिया है जोकि पसन्द नापसन्द के चक्कर मे अधूरी रह गयी है, हम चाहेंगे कि ये कहानी अपनी मुकाम तक पहुचे।
और एक बहुत बेहतरीन कहानी हमे पढ़ने को मिले,

 

[Suniya]

Waiting for new update bhai