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sham1234

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Awesome update,
श्रुति और करिम भागने की कोशिस कर रहे है बिरजवा के चंगुल से,
इस हालत में भी करीम अपने प्यार को दिखा रहा है कि श्रुति वहाँ से निकल जाए क्योंकि करीम चलने की हालत में नही है, लेकिन श्रुति भी उसको छोड़ कर जाने को तैयार नही है, और उसे प्यार से डांटते हुए चुप कर्राती है
उधर रेयान और संजू दोनो को कुछ नही मालूम चल रहा है
बिरजवा और मुन्ना मिल पर पहुच गए और वहाँ से श्रुति और करीम को गायब पाते है
उधर करीम की हालत खराब है उससे चला नही जा रहा श्रुति पानी लेने गयी और रॉकी वहाँ पहुच गया,
लेकिन करीम खराब हालात में भी डरा नही और श्रुति का नही बताया
रॉकी ने उसे बहुत मारा, लेकिन श्रुति ने वहाँ आकर एक बार रॉकी और उसके गुंडे को मारकर करीम को बचा लिया।
लेकिन फिर पकड़े भी गए
उधर संजू ने ये पता लगा लिया कि रॉकी कहा है और वहाँ पहुचने और अपने लड़को को भी बुला लिया है
अब बिजरवा और संजू की जंग होगी जीत किसकी होगी देखते है
क्या इन सबके बीच श्रुति और करीम की प्रेम कहानी आगे बढ़ेगी या श्रुति अब भी मना करेगी
Bilkul rakha rani
 

sham1234

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nice update..!!
ab shruti ko malum huva hoga munna ki baaton se ki iss harami kareem ki wajah se hi woh iss zamele me fas gayi hai..yeh kareem shruti ko bachane ke liye try kar raha hai lekin iss harami ne kabhi socha hai ki isne aur iske dosto ne kitni ladkiyon ko uthakar maje kiye aur jab iss harami kareem ko jo ladki pasand hai uski baari aayi toh yeh nahi seh pa raha hai lekin isne kitni ladkiyon ki ijjat luti hai apne chacha aur baap ke dum par..aur shruti ke sath bhi isko maje karne the lekin dusre karne lage isliye yeh harami ab shruti ko bachane ka natak kar raha hai..!! yeh brijwa shruti ki ijjat lutane wala tha lekin shruti hasne lagi kyunki usko malum tha sanju jarur aayega aur usko kuchh nahi hone dega..aur sanju bhi shruti ke liye aagaya..sanju kya zabardast entry li hai..brijwa ne bhi galat ladki par hath daal diya..kareem aur munna ka yeh apna matter tha isme shruti ka koi role hi nahi tha lekin iss munna aur brijwa ne usko bhi iss matter me involve kar liya..aur ab nateeja unke samne hai..sanju ne itni buri tarah se mara hai ki police inn haramiyon ko hospital laekar gaye hai..!! sanju ne bola ki riyaz iss harami kareem ko lekar chala jayega..matlab sanju ne riyaz, kareem ki bhi info nikal li hogi ki inka pariwar kitna ghamandi hai..aur yeh riyaz aur kareem kitna galat kaam karte hai..!! bhai meri bas aapse ek request hai ki please shruti aur kareem ka love angle mat dikhana kyuni kareem jaisa harami banda shruti jaisi achhi ladki deserve nahi karta..kyunki yeh kareem bhi iss munna ki tarah hi harami hai, isne bhi kayi ladkiyon ki ijjat luti hai, jaise brijwa shruti ka dupatta chhin raha tha waise hi kareem bhi kar chuka hai public me aur iss matter me bhi shruti harami kareem ki wajah se hi fansi hai..toh kareem kabhi bhi shruti ko deserve nahi karta..aakhirkar sanju hi aakar shruti ko bachata hai..sanju ab shruti ko apne sath hi rakhe aur apni buva ke ghar lekar jaye..!! mera bas yahi kehna hai ki kareem jaisa banda 100 gunah kare aur fir sudhar jaye aur usko pyaar mile toh galat hai..aisa banda pyaar nahi saja deserve karta hai..isliye please kareem aur shruti ke bich kuchh mat dikhana kyunki kareem deserve nahi karta..nahi toh fir kahani ke sath nainsafi hogi..!!
Lakin kareem sudhar gaya h
 

sham1234

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अगर गलत को गलत बोल सकते है तो जहाँ वो सही हो उसको सही भी बोल सकते है, किसी का तरीका गलत हो सकता उसको बताने का ढंग गलत हो सकता है लेकिन जरूरी नही हर बार वो गलत हो, पिछले तीन अपडेट में प्यार के लिए किसी का प्रयास दिखा है खुद को दरकिनार करके , बाकी माया तो लेखक की है, क्या रचते है।
Kya Rekha rani bat ho sakti h
 

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Mumbai ki ek choti si kholi me Munna apne dosto ke sath betha hota hai aur apni si soch me khoya hua hota hai.

Uska dost raaju - kya re Munna kaha khoya hua hai. Jaldi Jaa ke Pani bhar le warna pani nahi milega sham tak.
Dekh mujhe Jana hai kaam par. Baaki tu bhi kuch kaam dhanda dhund le. Yaha kamre me kitne din pade rahega..

Munna uthta hai aur balti le kar bahar nikal jata hai aur line me lag jata hai.

Munna mann me - yeh sala sab us Kareem aur us ladki ki wajah se ho rha hai. Sala dono ko sabak sikhaonga bas ek baar mauka mil jaye.
Aur us ladki ka bhai bhi. Sala usi ne brijwa bhaiya ko marwaya. Use toh jarur maut dilwaonga me.

Dusri taraf line me se ek aurat bol padti hai.

Areee Bhai..
Aage bad na. Pani lena nhi hai toh aage hat ja..
Pta nhi khade khade sapne dekhte rehte hai lukhe kahi ke..

Munna ......soch hi raha tha k aurat ki awaz sun k usko ghum k dekha toda gusse se or phir line me age badh gaya .....han han badh raha hu itna kya halla kar rahi ho aram se bhi to bol sakti ho na


(Sala kya jindagi ho gai hai ab to koi bhi bol k chala ja raha hai brijwa bhaiya tha to sala kisi ki aukat na thi bolne ki .....brijwa bhaiya tera badla mai lunga us kareem or uski chamiya ko aur uske Bhai ko. jab tak un logon ko sabak na sikha du mai chain se na baithunga

per kaise yahan aise baitha rahunga to kuch na kar paonga mujhe to kuch samjh me na a raha hai k kya karu kiske pass jao. Ek toh us mantri ne apne aadmi mere piche laga rkhe hai. Sala yaha chupna pad rha hai. Kher kuch din ese hi butana padega fir tode din me mamla shant ho jayega phir dekhunga inko)

Idhar subah ki pehli kiran padte hi Meena ki neend khulti hai aur woh samne padi Sabrina ko dekhti hai jo neend me hoti hai puri nangi.
Meena use dekh ke muskurati hai aur washroom me chali jati hai fresh hone. Fir naha ke wapis aati hai aur Sabrina ko uthati hai.

Meena - aree sabbu darling uth Jaa. Subah ke 10 bajne wale hai aur tu abhi tak soyi hai.

Meena ke uthane par Sabrina uthti hai aur khud ko nangi pa ke apne aap ko kambhal ke andar chupa leti hai.

Meena muskurate huye - aree meri jaan..
Ab kyu Sharma rhi hai. Raat bhar toh pure mazze liye tune aur ab dekho rajkumari ko..

Sabrina ko Meena Meena ki baat sunke bahut sharam aarhi hoti hai. Use yakeen nahi hota ki kal raat ko usne yeh sab kar Diya jo usne kabhi socha bhi nhi tha. Woh uthi hai aur Bina kuch bole washroom me chali jati hai.

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Shower k niche khadi ho gai ankh band kar k raat ka sochne lagi .....phir ankh band hote hi sanju samne hota hai apne bade se land k sath ....ufff yaar mai pagal ho jaongi jab se shurti k ghar gai hu bas uska bhai ka wo mota land hi meri nazron k samne hota hai kya karu mai mujhe kuch samjh na a raha hai


Naha k towel me bahar ati hu or bina Meena se nazre milaye mai kapde pahanne lagti hu

Sabrina nahate huye raat ki ghatna ko soch rhi hoti hai aur woh sab dobara uske aankho ke samne aane lgta hai.

( Yeh sab mujhse kese ho gya. Me kese behek gyi. Kal raat mujhe kya ho gya tha. Aaj se pehle esa toh kabhi kuch nahi hua mere sath. Ab mujhe khud pe control rkhna padega warna kahi me apna apna na kho du.)

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Sabrina naha kar wapis aati hai aur apne kapde pehn ke Meena se kuch bole Bina hi nikal jaati hai.

Dusri taraf Sanju aur Sruthi aur uske dad nashta kr rhe hote hai. Aur ma andar se nashta le kar aati hai.

Dad - accha me chalta hu aaj office me bahut kaam hai.

Ma - theek h mene apna lunch car me rkh diya hai.

Vijay Jane lgta hai toh Seema uske piche jaane lgti hai.

Sruthi nashta krte huye - dekhna abhi ma papa ko kiss Dene gyi hogi..😜

Sanju shauk se use dekhte huye - oye pagal kya bol rhi hai tu. Badi bigad rhi hai aajkal..
( Kaan kheechte huye )
college me jake tere to par hi nikal aye hain hahahaha 🤣 chal ab chup se kha badmash nahi to abhi petai kar dunga mai teri

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Sruthi - aree bhaiya tum yaha nhi rehte na. Isliye tumhe pta nhi hai. Mom dad ka romance toh abhi bhi jawa hai. Purane Laila majnu hai dono 😜😁

Sanju - accha baba ab nashta krle. Faltu ki baate bahut banane lgi hai aajkal tu. College nhi Jana tujhe kya aaj jo faltu ki bato me lgi hai...

Sruthi - kya krungi jaake.
Aajkal kuch khaas padhai na chal rhi hai. Bas cultural event ki taiyaaria chal rhi hai. Wese aap batao aapka kya plan hai aajka. Kuch khas na ho toh mujhe hi ghuma do aaj..😜

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Sanju - chal hatt..
Mere paas koi kaam na hai kya Jo tujhe ghumata firunga. Tu apne dosto ke sath maze kr. Mujhe Aaj kafi kaam hai.

Sruthi nashta khatam krti hai aur apna bag le kar nikal jaati hai. Raste me pahuch ke.

Sruthi - oye majnu...
Chalna nahi hai kya Aaj college.

Kareem - me toh kabse wait kr rha hu Tumhara yaar. Tu hi hai ki aa nhi Rahi hai.

Sruthi - kaha wait kr rha hai. ?

Kareem - tere gali me hi khada hu. Abhi abhi uncle ji ki car nikali hai. Shayd dekha nhi unhone mujhe..

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Sruthi - kameene kitni baar kaha hai. Apni ghaadi yaha mat laya kr. Ruk me aati hu.

Kareem.....are yaar tu bhi na kitna darti hai kab se wait kar raha hu tera or tu hai k mujhe hi dant rahi hai
Ye to wahi baat ho gayi na madam ko lene bhi ao or madam ji ki dant bhi khao .....

• Thodi der me Sruthi waha aa jaati hai aur Kareem use dekhta hu rehta hai.

Sruthi - kya hua..
Ab ese kya dekh rha hai tu..

Kareem - ese hi..
Dekh nahi sakta kya tujhe..
Wese bahut khubsurat lag rahi....

Sruthi Kareem ki baat sunke thoda Sharmati hai aur fir use daatne lgti hai.

Sruthi - tujhe kitni baar bola hai mere Ghar ke aas paas mat fatka kar. Faltu me lafde ho sakte hai.

Kareem - yaar itni chupa k to car lagaya hu kun dekhega tu bina matlab hi gussa karti hai

Sruthi - accha accha ab baate na bana. Tere sath isliye ja rhi hu college kyuki tune kaha tha ki jab theek hounga toh tere sath hi college jaonga isliye. Ab jaldi kr.

Sruthi car me beth jaati hai. Aur Kareem car start kr deta hai aur dono chal padte hai.

Sruthi - mujhe nahi raste pe dhyaan de. Warna accident ho jayega..

Sruthi ki baat sunkar Kareem jhep jata hai aur aage dekhne lgta hai par kuch bolta nhi hai. Sruthi bhi mann hi mann muskurati hai aur fir use dekhte huye kehti hai.

Sruthi - kya hua, kuch bol nhi rha hai tu. Lgta h janab ki jabse haddiya tut ke judi hai tabse akal aagyi hai.

Kareem Sruthi ko dekhte huye - ab kuch bolunga toh tu daatne lgegi isliye chup betha hu.
Wese me bada khush hu.

Sruthi - woh kyu..

Kareem - kyuki tu aaj meri car me mere sath bethi hai.

Sruthi - ohhoo..
Dialogue maar rhe ho..
Wese agar tum ladai jhagda chor do. Aur faltu ke chakkaro ko chorke padhai me dhyaan do toh hum dono ki dosti aage badh sakti hai.

Kareem - dosti toh tumhare taraf se hai. Me toh deewana hu Tera. Tere liye kuch bhi kr sakta hu.

Sruthi - fir se suru ho gya na tu..
Pehle khud ki pehchan bana fir mere bare me sochna. Chal college aagya.

• Kareem car rokta hai aur Sruthi utar ke apne class me chali jati hai aur Kareem bhi car park karke lecture attend krne ja rha hota hai ki uske dost use mil jate hai.

Dost - kya Kareem Bhai..
Waha kaha Jaa rhe ho. Apna adda toh yaha hai. Chalo canteen me thodi masti krte hai.

Kareem - nhi yaar. Tum betho mujhe aaj lecture attend krne hai.

Kareem yeh kehte huye andar chala jata hai aur uske dost use dekhte reh jaate hai.

Kareem ka dost - yaar yeh Kareem Bhai kuch badle badle najar nhi aarhe..

Dusra dost - haa yaar, jabse hospital se aaye hai hum logo se bah
This was the last update i guess
 
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