Thriller BEGUNAAH ( Completed )

[TheBlackBlood]

to jay aur vijay dono hamshakl hai ..aur vijay achcha aadmi hai aur jay bura jo property ke lalach me apno ko maar raha hai ..
lagta hai jay bure kaam karta aur apna naam vijay batata tha isliye sab vijay ko galat samajhte honge ..

Jay aur vijay me se Jay hi achha aadmi hai. Vijay ne jay ki jagah li aur jay ban gaya tha,,,,

 

[TheBlackBlood]

yaa ek aur baat vijay ne jagah le li thi jay ki aur wo saundarya ke saath jay bankar rehta tha ..usne jay ko maarna chaha par wo mara nahi par ye khabar kar di ki jay ne vijay ko zakhmi kiya ( zakhmi isliye ki wo mara nahi ) ..aur wo isliye shant tha ki usko maa baap ko dhundna tha ..

Bilkul sahi,,,,,

 

[TheBlackBlood]

ekdam mast update ..jay aur vijay ki fighting scene zabardast tha ..aakhir jay ne halat kharab kar hi di vijay ki .. is update se aisa lagta hai jay ne sach bata diya ho sab dushyant ko .. isliye dushyant direct saamne nahi aaya jab dono ladh rahe the ..

Shukriya bhai,,,,
Haan jay ka bhed khul gaya tha ek dushyant ke samne, uske baad dushyant ke puchne par jay ko apni kahani batani padi. Tabhi to jay ke jane ke baad dushyant itna befikra tha,,,,

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Chutiyadr sahab, story ka index bana diya hai maine. Ab aapke liye story padhna easy ho gaya. Khair intzaar rahega kahani ke prati aapke vichaaro ka,,,,

 

[TheBlackBlood]

romanchak update ..saari baate samajh aa gayi ki kaise police wale vijay tak pahuche .
saundarya ne sahi kiya vijay ko goli maarke ..uske kiye ki saja use saundarya ne de di .
par khudko goli maarkar sahi nahi kiya usne ..jay kitna pyar karta hai usse ..

ab shayad jay aur pratiksha ki shadi ho jaaye ..

Shukriya bhai,,,,
Saundarya us waqt jis maansik haalat me thi usi ke anusaar usne khud ko goli maari thi,,,,

Jay ki shaadi pratiksha se,,,,
I na ho sakela,,,,

 

[KEKIUS MAXIMUS]

Shukriya bhai,,,,
Saundarya us waqt jis maansik haalat me thi usi ke anusaar usne khud ko goli maari thi,,,,

Jay ki shaadi pratiksha se,,,,
I na ho sakela,,,,

sochne me kya jata hai ..
ab jay hero tha to us waqt ye khayal aa gaya dimaag me .
aur kisi ladki ka jikr hai hi nahi kahani me pratiksha aur vidhi ke alawa ...yashwant behan maanta hai pratiksha ko .

to saundarya ke marne ke baad yahi baat dimaag me aa gayi ..

bura lage to sorry ...

 

[TheBlackBlood]

mast tha kahani ka end ..par ye dono aisa kyu keh rahe the ki saari baate moorat ne batayi inko ..wo bhi to wahi maujud the ..

Sari baate to khud vijay hi batata lekin waisa time hi nahi aa paya, saundarya ki vajah se mara gaya wo. Uske baad jab khud saundarya ne bhi khud ko goli maar li to us waqt kisi se kuch puchna theek nahi laga. Waise bhi moorat to zinda pakda hi gaya tha is liye baad me inspector ne usse saari baat puchhi thi,,,,

saundarya ko shayad bacha sakta tha dushyant ,,agar wo goli chalake uski banduk gira deta ( jaisa filmo me hota hai ,gun pe yaa haath pe goli chalake ) .
ab police me hai to goli chala sakta hi tha par sirf dekhta raha khade rehkar ..

Hone ko to kuch bhi ho sakta tha. Ye bhi ho sakta tha ki dushyant saundarya ke haatho vijay ko goli maarne se bacha leta par kahani ki zarurat jo thi wahi hua. Filmo me bhi aisa ho jata hai ye koi badi baat nahi hai,,,,

aakhir me jay apne maa baap ke saath kaha gaya ye bataya nahi clear karke ..

Jay apne maa baap ke sath apne gaav gaya tha aur dushyant ke sath hi to gaya tha, update me bhi bataya tha maine. Aur last me to swabhaavik hai ki wo apne gaav me hi rahega ya koi kaam dhandha karega,,,,

 

[TheBlackBlood]

zabardast kahani thi ..aur writer ne usko likha bhi zabardast tarike se tha ..

Shukriya,,,,

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Bahot behtareen update bhai
Bahot shaandaar kahani ka lajawab end
Intizar rehega bhai aapki agli kahani
Thanks for lovely and wonderful story

Shukriya bhai,,,,
Next ka sochuga fir kabhi,,,,

 

[TheBlackBlood]

sochne me kya jata hai ..
ab jay hero tha to us waqt ye khayal aa gaya dimaag me .
aur kisi ladki ka jikr hai hi nahi kahani me pratiksha aur vidhi ke alawa ...yashwant behan maanta hai pratiksha ko .

to saundarya ke marne ke baad yahi baat dimaag me aa gayi ..

bura lage to sorry ...

Duniya me ladkiyo ki kami to nahi hai bhai. Dusri baat ye zaruri to nahi ki dushyant apni bahan ko jay ke gale me ghanti bana kar baandh de,,,,

Bura lagne wali kauno baat nahi hai,,,,