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With who should Aliyar have his first sexual encounter?


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Somahvii

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Introduction - Page 1
Update 1 - Page 4
Update 2 - Page 5
Update 3 - Page 6
Update 4 - Page 9
Update 5 - Page 12
Update 6 - Page 13
Update 7 - Page 16
Update 8 - Page 16
Update 9 - Page 17
Update 10 - Page 21
Update 11 - Page 25


Disclaimer: I will not include any interfaith content as I personally don’t believe in sexualising religion. I will not include cuckholding as that isn’t something I find appealing and even if there is any Adultery content it will not feature cuckholding. And obviously there shall be no mention of characters under the age of 18 in a sexual setting.
 
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Update 9: The Final Confrontation

Aliyar Lyari se Korangi ke liye raasta pakad chuka tha. Chalis minute guzar chuke the jab Aliza aur Rahmati ko yeh pata chala ke Aliyar bina kisi ko bataye chala gaya hai. Aliza pareshan thi, aur Rahmati bhi chinta mein tha, lekin apne jazbat ko control karte hue, usne Aliyar ke ghoomne ki wajah ko samajhne ki koshish ki.

Aliyar Korangi mein aik plane ke shakl wali building ke paas pohncha, jo ke Rafiq Gang ka base tha. Building ne ek ordinary structure ke sath, multiple floors ko cover kiya tha, aur Aliyar ko nazar aaya ke Nazia uchi manzil par bandi thi.

Aliyar ne building ke neeche ke manzilon par attack kiya, jahan aam henchmen the. Usne har ek henchman ko efficiently handle kiya, unke saath intense fighting ki. Har punch aur kick precise thi, aur Aliyar ne inhe asaani se hara diya. Lekin, choton aur blood ke bawajood, Aliyar ne determination ke sath ladayi ki.

Zulfiqar: “Yeh pehla step hai, Aliyar. Tumhara determination tumhe aage le jayega. Lekin zaroori hai ke tum apne dushmanon ko underestimate na karo.”

Jaise hi Aliyar ne middle floors ki taraf barhna shuru kiya, resistance zyada intense ho gaya. Yeh fighters zyada trained aur formidable the. Aliyar ne unke saath brutal close-quarters combat kiya. Har punch aur kick ke saath, Aliyar ke body par blood aur bruises lagte gaye. Ek fighter ne Aliyar ko wall se takra diya, lekin Aliyar ne apni agility aur strength ko use karke is challenge ka samna kiya.

Zulfiqar: “Tumhare her punch aur kick tumhare irado ki mazbooti ko dikhati hai. Lekin, yeh asli test abhi aage hai.”

Aliyar uchi manzil tak pohncha aur final confrontation ka samna kiya. Babar, jo Rafiq Gang ka deputy tha, uska intezaar kar raha tha. Ladai shuru hui, aur yeh ek ghore aur brutal clash ban gayi.

Babar ki punches aur kicks powerful thi. Uski muscular body ke saath, har attack intense aur dangerous tha. Aliyar ke chehre par choton ke asar the, aur uska jism khoon se bhar gaya tha. Babar ne Aliyar ko ground par gira diya aur apne boots se us par pressure banaya. Aliyar ne apni last strength ko ikattha karte hue Babar ke attack ka jawab diya, aur ek powerful counter-attack se Babar ko neeche gira diya.

Zulfiqar: “Yeh tumhara final stand hai. Tumhe apne sab se zyada zor lagana hoga.”

Ladai Babar aur Aliyar ke beech itni intense thi ke wo dono Nazia ke captive room tak aa gaye. Kamra andhera aur tanav bhara tha. Nazia, jo band aur gagged thi, ne is fight ko dekha. Uski aankhon se aansoo beh rahe the. Uska dard aur guilt itna gehra tha ke uski saari emotions bahar aa gayi thi.

Nazia: (apni soch mein) “Yeh mere bhai kaam kar raha hai, jisey maine maarne ke liye bheja tha. Uski zindagi bacha raha hai wohi insan, jise main khud khatam karna chahti thi. Yeh mere liye ek zordar samna hai. Mera apna bhai, jo mujhe bachane ke liye lad raha hai.”

Jab Aliyar aur Babar ki ladai kamre mein ghusi, Nazia ne Aliyar ki her move ko dekhna shuru kiya. Usne dekha ke Aliyar ka body khoon se bhar gaya tha aur woh apne injuries ke bawajood lad raha tha. Uski aankhon se tears aa gaye jab usne dekha ke Aliyar apni zindagi ki aakhri dafa me bhi uski madad kar raha tha.

Nazia: (apni soch mein) “Yeh kis tarah ka insaaf hai? Maine apne bhai ko marne ke liye bheja aur ab woh mujhe bachane ke liye lad raha hai. Yeh meri sabse badi galti thi. Aur ab mujhe uske samne sharminda hone ki saza mil rahi hai.”

Hania aur Raja, jo shadows mein chhup kar yeh sab dekh rahe the, pehle shock hua aur phir unki aankhon mein cold calculation thi.

Hania: “Aliyar? Tum zinda ho? Yeh sab kuch humne nahi socha tha. Tumhare hone se humare plans khatre mein hain.”

Raja: “Tumne sab kuch barbad kar diya. Tumhe yahaan se jaane nahi denge. Hania, humein isse nipatna hoga.”

Aliyar, jo ke heavily injured aur barely conscious tha, ne Hania aur Raja ko dekha jab wo Babar ko hara chuka tha. Ladai ne use collapse ke edge par chhod diya, lekin usne betrayers ke saamne apni resolve ko barqarar rakha. Usne apni behan se dekh kar anjaam tak pohnanchne ka faisla kiya.


Zulfiqar: “Yeh waqt hai tumhare maqsad ko pura karne ka. Tumhara kaam abhi khatam nahi hua hai.”
Zabardast fight huwi lekin abhi kaam poora nahi huwa h
Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h kia Aliyar Paar pa payega kyonki Aliyar kaafi injured ho Chuka h
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🙏 You for 70K + Views
 
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Motaland2468

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Shaandar story thanks Bhai
 

urc4me

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Hania Nazia ko bhi nipta ke akele hi company hathiyane ke chakkar me hai. Pratiksha agle rasprad update ki
 

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Updates will start soon. The Male lead will be Aliyar and his heroines will be his 4 older sisters to whom he’ll marry.

Is kahani ko main jald shuru karunga, aaj hi kardeta lekin kuch kam hai jo mujhe dekhna parega, ummid karta hoon kiski ko isse koi masla nahi rahega.

Naamon se pata lagta hai yeh kahani Pakistan main base hoga, agar aap chaho to aap suggest karsakte Kahani kahan honi chahiye Pakistan andar, kaisi honi chahiye, themes kya chahiye aur jo aur khwaishat hai woh aap bata sakte hain main koshish karunga unhe pure karne main.
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Motaland2468

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Congratulations 🎉🎉🎉 for a wonderful story brother...🎉🎉

Kehne ko bhut kuch magar ijajat chahta hun positive ke saath negetive review ke liye agar aap pasand kare toh mai chaap dunga ab tak story kaise chal rahi hai kya sudhar aur kya galtiyan hai...

Agar nahi toh silent reader reh kar story update par likes karta rahunga... 🤧

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uday29

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Very good updates bhai
 

Somahvii

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Congratulations 🎉🎉🎉 for a wonderful story brother...🎉🎉

Kehne ko bhut kuch magar ijajat chahta hun positive ke saath negetive review ke liye agar aap pasand kare toh mai chaap dunga ab tak story kaise chal rahi hai kya sudhar aur kya galtiyan hai...

Agar nahi toh silent reader reh kar story update par likes karta rahunga... 🤧

"Past experience kuch khaas pasand nahi writers ko mera unko review dena... " 😅😅
You can say whatever you feel. As longs it’s constructive criticism I have no problem.
 
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