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With who should Aliyar have his first sexual encounter?


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Somahvii

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Introduction - Page 1
Update 1 - Page 4
Update 2 - Page 5
Update 3 - Page 6
Update 4 - Page 9
Update 5 - Page 12
Update 6 - Page 13
Update 7 - Page 16
Update 8 - Page 16
Update 9 - Page 17
Update 10 - Page 21
Update 11 - Page 25


Disclaimer: I will not include any interfaith content as I personally don’t believe in sexualising religion. I will not include cuckholding as that isn’t something I find appealing and even if there is any Adultery content it will not feature cuckholding. And obviously there shall be no mention of characters under the age of 18 in a sexual setting.
 
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If there is anyone who wants to add a review they can do so freely. I’ll take on what’s said in mind as I have Updates 10,11,12 planned out so I can arrange them to fit to your expectations and constructive criticism or feedback.
 
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Congratulations 🎉🎉🎉 for a wonderful story brother...🎉🎉

Kehne ko bhut kuch magar ijajat chahta hun positive ke saath negetive review ke liye agar aap pasand kare toh mai chaap dunga ab tak story kaise chal rahi hai kya sudhar aur kya galtiyan hai...

Agar nahi toh silent reader reh kar story update par likes karta rahunga... 🤧

"Past experience kuch khaas pasand nahi writers ko mera unko review dena... " 😅😅
Dil khol ke review de dena, koi masla nahi hai
 

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Update 9: The Final Confrontation

Aliyar Lyari se Korangi ke liye raasta pakad chuka tha. Chalis minute guzar chuke the jab Aliza aur Rahmati ko yeh pata chala ke Aliyar bina kisi ko bataye chala gaya hai. Aliza pareshan thi, aur Rahmati bhi chinta mein tha, lekin apne jazbat ko control karte hue, usne Aliyar ke ghoomne ki wajah ko samajhne ki koshish ki.

Aliyar Korangi mein aik plane ke shakl wali building ke paas pohncha, jo ke Rafiq Gang ka base tha. Building ne ek ordinary structure ke sath, multiple floors ko cover kiya tha, aur Aliyar ko nazar aaya ke Nazia uchi manzil par bandi thi.

Aliyar ne building ke neeche ke manzilon par attack kiya, jahan aam henchmen the. Usne har ek henchman ko efficiently handle kiya, unke saath intense fighting ki. Har punch aur kick precise thi, aur Aliyar ne inhe asaani se hara diya. Lekin, choton aur blood ke bawajood, Aliyar ne determination ke sath ladayi ki.

Zulfiqar: “Yeh pehla step hai, Aliyar. Tumhara determination tumhe aage le jayega. Lekin zaroori hai ke tum apne dushmanon ko underestimate na karo.”

Jaise hi Aliyar ne middle floors ki taraf barhna shuru kiya, resistance zyada intense ho gaya. Yeh fighters zyada trained aur formidable the. Aliyar ne unke saath brutal close-quarters combat kiya. Har punch aur kick ke saath, Aliyar ke body par blood aur bruises lagte gaye. Ek fighter ne Aliyar ko wall se takra diya, lekin Aliyar ne apni agility aur strength ko use karke is challenge ka samna kiya.

Zulfiqar: “Tumhare her punch aur kick tumhare irado ki mazbooti ko dikhati hai. Lekin, yeh asli test abhi aage hai.”

Aliyar uchi manzil tak pohncha aur final confrontation ka samna kiya. Babar, jo Rafiq Gang ka deputy tha, uska intezaar kar raha tha. Ladai shuru hui, aur yeh ek ghore aur brutal clash ban gayi.

Babar ki punches aur kicks powerful thi. Uski muscular body ke saath, har attack intense aur dangerous tha. Aliyar ke chehre par choton ke asar the, aur uska jism khoon se bhar gaya tha. Babar ne Aliyar ko ground par gira diya aur apne boots se us par pressure banaya. Aliyar ne apni last strength ko ikattha karte hue Babar ke attack ka jawab diya, aur ek powerful counter-attack se Babar ko neeche gira diya.

Zulfiqar: “Yeh tumhara final stand hai. Tumhe apne sab se zyada zor lagana hoga.”

Ladai Babar aur Aliyar ke beech itni intense thi ke wo dono Nazia ke captive room tak aa gaye. Kamra andhera aur tanav bhara tha. Nazia, jo band aur gagged thi, ne is fight ko dekha. Uski aankhon se aansoo beh rahe the. Uska dard aur guilt itna gehra tha ke uski saari emotions bahar aa gayi thi.

Nazia: (apni soch mein) “Yeh mere bhai kaam kar raha hai, jisey maine maarne ke liye bheja tha. Uski zindagi bacha raha hai wohi insan, jise main khud khatam karna chahti thi. Yeh mere liye ek zordar samna hai. Mera apna bhai, jo mujhe bachane ke liye lad raha hai.”

Jab Aliyar aur Babar ki ladai kamre mein ghusi, Nazia ne Aliyar ki her move ko dekhna shuru kiya. Usne dekha ke Aliyar ka body khoon se bhar gaya tha aur woh apne injuries ke bawajood lad raha tha. Uski aankhon se tears aa gaye jab usne dekha ke Aliyar apni zindagi ki aakhri dafa me bhi uski madad kar raha tha.

Nazia: (apni soch mein) “Yeh kis tarah ka insaaf hai? Maine apne bhai ko marne ke liye bheja aur ab woh mujhe bachane ke liye lad raha hai. Yeh meri sabse badi galti thi. Aur ab mujhe uske samne sharminda hone ki saza mil rahi hai.”

Hania aur Raja, jo shadows mein chhup kar yeh sab dekh rahe the, pehle shock hua aur phir unki aankhon mein cold calculation thi.

Hania: “Aliyar? Tum zinda ho? Yeh sab kuch humne nahi socha tha. Tumhare hone se humare plans khatre mein hain.”

Raja: “Tumne sab kuch barbad kar diya. Tumhe yahaan se jaane nahi denge. Hania, humein isse nipatna hoga.”

Aliyar, jo ke heavily injured aur barely conscious tha, ne Hania aur Raja ko dekha jab wo Babar ko hara chuka tha. Ladai ne use collapse ke edge par chhod diya, lekin usne betrayers ke saamne apni resolve ko barqarar rakha. Usne apni behan se dekh kar anjaam tak pohnanchne ka faisla kiya.


Zulfiqar: “Yeh waqt hai tumhare maqsad ko pura karne ka. Tumhara kaam abhi khatam nahi hua hai.”
Shandar jabardast faddu update 🔥 👌👌
 

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UPDATE 4 - ALIYAR, HOSPITAL MEIN (MEGA UPDATE)


Yahaan ek ajeeb jagah par ek ward jaisa setup tha jahaan hum ek larki aur ek mard ko behas karte hue dekh rahe hain. Chalo dekhte hain ke yeh kis baat par behas kar rahe hain.

Ladki: Bhai, tum yeh ajeeb aadmi ko hamare base mein kyun laaye ho?

Mard: Guriya, tum jaanti ho main ise yahaan kyun laya hoon.

Ladki: Pehli baat, mera naam Guriya nahi, Kinza hai. Aur doosri baat, yeh ajeeb aadmi bhai se kuch bhi taluq nahi rakhta, toh in dono ko ek hi shakhs samajhkar mat dekho.

Mard: Maaf karo, Kinza dear, mujhe tumhe naraaz karna ka iraada nahi tha, lekin tum inkar nahi kar sakti ke woh bilkul usi jaisa lagta hai—bilkul ek jaisa.

Kinza: Rahmati Bhai, is ka matlab yeh nahi ke agar woh Bhai jaisa lagta hai, toh humein use Bhai samajh kar apna lena chahiye.


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Rahmati: Kinza, main samajh raha hoon jo tum keh rahi ho, lekin jab maine use dariya ke kinare dekha, toh main usay apne saath le aaye bina reh nahi saka.

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Kinza: Theek hai, main maan leti hoon ke woh Waqar Bhai ke bilkul ek jaisa lagta hai. Jab tum use laaye the, tab main bhi kuch dair ke liye hairaan reh gayi thi, lekin phir mujhe yaad aaya ke Waqar Bhai guzar chuke hain.

Kinza: Aur waise bhi, tumhara kya plan hai jab yeh ajnabi uth kar yeh sochay ga ke woh kahaan hai?

Rahmati: Yeh "ajnabi" kehne ka kya matlab hai? Uska naam hai, Aliyar. Mere aadmiyon ne uska poora bio data maloom kiya hai, aur woh koi aam shakhs nahi hai. Woh halaak shuda Zaviyar Baloch ka beta hai, jo abhi haal hi mein guzar gaye. Aur tum yeh toh jaanti ho ke us khandan ka kya maqam hai. Unka siyasatdanon aur generalon par bohat asar hai.

Rahmati: Aur jab se police ne rasmi taur par usay mar chuka qarar diya hai, toh company ka control uski badi behan Nazia ke paas chala gaya hai. Is liye usay uske ghar wapas bhejne ka koi khaas faida nahi. Usay apne paas rakhna hamare liye zyada mufeed hoga.

Kinza: Humein us se kya faida ho sakta hai?

Rahmati: Sada sa hai, jaise hum dono ne pehle hi tasleem kiya hai, woh Waqar jaisa hi lagta hai. Toh kyun na hum usay Waqar ke tor par pesh karen?

Kinza: Kya aap apna hosh kho baithe hain, Rahmati Bhai? Hum usay Waqar Bhai ki jagah kaise de sakte hain? Nahi, main yeh bilkul nahi hone doongi!

Rahmati: Main bilkul apne hosh mein hoon, Kinza, lekin mujhe lagta hai ke tum apne hosh mein nahi ho. Agar hum Aliyar ko Waqar ke tor par pesh karein, toh hum Lyari par dobara qabza hasil kar sakte hain. Jo log Waqar ke guzarte hi hum se mukhphir ho gaye the, woh foran peeche hat jaayenge, yeh soch kar ke Waqar kabhi mara hi nahi tha. Hum dono jaante hain ke Waqar ne logon mein kitna khauf daala hua tha.

Kinza: Main usay Waqar Bhai ke tor par kabhi qabool nahi kar sakti, aur na hi Aliza Bhabhi usay qabool karengi.

Rahmati: Kaun Aliza ko yeh batayega ke yeh Waqar nahi hai?

Rahmati: Usay yeh hi samajhne do ke yeh Waqar hai. Yeh hi usay uske depression se nikaalne ka tareeqa hai. Main apni behan ko us halat mein aur nahi dekh sakta. Agar woh Aliyar ko Waqar samajhkar khush rahegi, toh usay khush rehne do.

Kinza: Kya yeh dagha nahi hoga? Aur main ek ajnabi ko apna Waqar Bhai kaise keh sakti hoon?

Rahmati: Jaise main usay meri behan ka shauhar banne de raha hoon, waise hi yeh humari maslaat ka hal hai. Woh hamara najat dehinda hai.

Kinza: Tumhare plan mein ek masla hai—agar woh sab kuch karne se inkaar kar de toh?

Rahmati: Hum use uske khaliq ke paas bhej denge.


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Is beech, Baloch Mansion mein...

Hania aur Nazia Nazia ke kamre mein baith kar ek aham guftagu kar rahi hain.

Nazia: Achha kiya tumne. Mujhe nahi laga tha ke tum sirf Rafiq Gang ke mercenaries ko Aliyar ki qatal ke liye hi nahi, balki uski laash bhi khatam karwa dogi taake koi shak na kare.

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Hania: Haan, maine qatal karne walon ko hire kiya, lekin maine uski laash ghayab nahi ki.

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Nazia: Phir kisne kiya? Koi baat nahi, kam az kam woh chale gaya aur company aakhirkar hamare haath mein hai. Agar abbu par chhodte, toh woh ab bhi company ka control Aliyar ko de deta, chahe woh kuch bhi theek se na kar sakta.

Nazia: Aur yeh humare saath na-insafi hai, kyunki hum hamesha zyada qabil thi. Lekin abbu ne sirf Aliyar ko apna successor dekha, kyunki woh mard hai aur hum auratein hain, jinka sirf shadi aur bachay paida karna hi kirdar hai. Lekin saari shohrat aur izzat unhi bekaar ke logon ke liye hai, jaise Aliyar, jo sirf apne gender ki wajah se sab kuch milta hai.

Hania: Ab kya hoga?

Nazia: Pehle ek press conference rakho, jismein hum Aliyar ki maut ka elan karenge. Uske baad, ek board meeting bulayenge. Humein kuch aham faisle lene hain.

Hania: Jaise ke?

Nazia: Hum wo kaam karne wale hain jo abbu ne kabhi humein karne nahi diya. Ab waqt aa gaya hai ke hum apne muqabla karon ke khilaf jang ilan karein aur unhein dikhayein ke humarey raaste mein aane ki saza kya hoti hai.

Hania: Aur tum isse kaise anjaam dene ka plan bana rahi ho?

Nazia: Ab waqt aa gaya hai ke hum apni taqat aur asar ka istemal karein. Lt. General Shafiq ko bulao aur keh do ke sabko utha le aur unhein tab tak jabr karein jab tak woh humari baat manne na lagayen. Agar woh inkaar karte hain, toh yeh koi mushkil baat nahi ke kisi ko gaib kar diya jaye.

Nazia: Lekin unki auraton ko chhod do, taake mardon ko yeh lagay ke unki izzat khatre mein hai. Mardzaat, apni izzat ke naam par, humari demands manne ko majboor ho jayenge.

Hania: Lekin hum asal mein in auraton ko nuqsan nahi pohchayenge, hai na?

Nazia: Hania, tumhe zyada sawal karna band karna hoga. Main itna keh deti hoon: agar dhamaki ke bawajood bhi woh manzoor nahi karte, toh humein unhein ek misaal dikhani padegi taake woh samajh saken ke hum mazak nahi kar rahe. Agar is dauran kuch auratein aisi halat mein aa jati hain jo unki izzat ko khatre mein daalti hain, toh woh hamari zimmedari nahi hogi.

Hania: Aapi, tum sach mein dimaag se bilkul fucked up ho, hain na?

Nazia: Haan, main sach mein dimag se fucked up hoon.




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Base par wapas...


Kuch waqt guzar gaya aur Kinza ko raazi karne ke baad, Rahmati ne usay plan mein shamil kar liya. Usne Aliza ko raabta kiya aur bataya ke unhone uska shauhar mil gaya hai aur woh filhal unke medical room mein base par hai. Unhone yeh bhi kaha ke Waqar (Aliyar) ke hosh mein aate hi unhein base par bula liya jayega.

Shaam tak, Aliyar hosh mein aa gaya.


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"Ahhrgh," Aliyar ne ek cheekh ke sath aankh kholi, jo uske dard ko bayaan kar rahi thi.

Cheezain dhundhli thi aur kamra ghoomta hua lag raha tha.

Usne kuch baar palak jhapkai aur cheezain zyada wazeh hone lagi. Usne mehsoos kiya ke woh ek hospital room mein hai.

Uska sar dard se phata ja raha tha, jaise kisi ne uske sar par danda maar diya ho.

Dheere dheere usay yaad aane laga ke uske saath kya hua tha. Pehle usne kisi boodhe aadmi ke mukabla karne walon ke files access ki thi, phir Hamza ke ghutne mein goli lagi thi, aur phir Rafiq Gang ne usay itna maara tha ke woh be-hosh ho gaya tha.

Usne apne sar par haath rakha, aansu uski aankhon se tapak rahe the. Woh apne walid ke bare mein soch kar ghabra gaya, yeh sochta hua ke unhein kaisa mehsoos ho raha hoga.

Bechara Aliyar, jo ab tak is baat se bekhabar hai ke uski gayab hone ke dauran kya kuch ho chuka hai, khaaskar uske walid ke inteqal ke baare mein.

Khair, Aliyar apne khayalon mein ghum hota hua, wapas apne hospital bed par let gaya.

Woh apni sochon mein ghuma hua tha, jab achanak usay apne andar se ek awaaz sunayi di, jo usay itna dara gayi ke uska dil zor se dhadak utha.

[NIZAM HAS BEEN ACTIVATED]

Aliyar: yeh saala awaaz kahan se aa gayi?

[I am Zulfiqar, you're Nizam. Nice to meet you, Sir Aliyar.]

Aliyar bemani tareeqay se bila mutasir hokar poochta hai, "Jahan se bhi yeh awaaz aa rahi hai, apna aap dikhawo. Tum mujhe aisa dikhane par majboor kar rahe ho jaise main khud se baat kar raha hoon, aur please mujhe Sir mat kaho, main itna budha nahi hoon."

Zulfiqar: I am afraid I cannot do that for you, as I reside inside you and have fully connected myself to your being. Also, may I add that you can communicate with me directly through your mind? I can hear and understand you just the same, and you won't look like a psycho talking to himself either. Talk to me through your mind, as no one other than you can hear me or know about my existence. I recommend we communicate this way, just as I’ve instructed.

Aliyar: theek hai, hum aise hi baat karenge lekin kam az kam mujhe yeh to batao ke tum mere andar kyun ho? Aur yeh main badtameezi se nahi pooch raha, bas curious hoon. Kyun ke ek pal mein toh main larr raha tha jaise ke main ek dum badass hoon, aur agle pal mein apne dimagh se kisi cheez se baat kar raha hoon jo apne aap ko mera Nizam keh raha hai.

Zulfiqar: No problem, I can explain. I am a symbiotic being that seeks hosts to help sustain my existence, and in exchange, I assist them. I am not from this world but rather from a planet quite distant from here. I ended up here in search of a host.

Aliyar: samajh aata hai, lekin tumhe shayad ek aise host ki talash karni chahiye thi jo zyada munasib ho, jaise ke koi zyada athletic aur powerful insaan. Isliye yeh baat mere liye theek nahi lagti ke tumne mujhe apna host banaya.

Zulfiqar: That’s not how we symbiotic beings operate. A host must be someone with whom you feel an affinity, which I do for you.

Aliyar: Mujh se ek affinity?

Zulfiqar: I do share an affinity for you. The reason is that you resemble my previous host, who was actually my first host on this planet. Due to his passing, I was left searching for a suitable host, and fate led me to you. Seeing you, I couldn’t help myself, so I decided to save you from dying because, let’s be real, you would have died otherwise.

Aliyar: Haan, zyada hairaan nahi hua. Baba ne mujhe bataya tha ke is duniya mein har kisi ke 7 lookalikes hote hain. Lagta hai tumne pehle mere lookalike se mil liya tha. Lekin iske ilawa, ab kya? Tumne kaha ke tum kisi ko host banane ki ijazat dete ho, aur badle mein unki madad karte ho. Yeh kaise kaam karta hai?

Zulfiqar: The person gives permission to be used as a host, and in return, I assist them by enhancing their abilities or providing support as needed.

Aliyar: Yeh kaise karte ho?

Zulfiqar: Rather than me telling you, let me demonstrate. In your mind, say, "Nizam, show me my status."

Aliyar: "Nizam, show me my status."



[ Name - Aliyar Baloch
Age - 22 Years Old
Current Status - Presumed Dead
Occupation: Disappointment

Host Stats:
Strength - 5/100
Intelligence - 8/100
Agility - 3/100
Endurance - 8/100
Appearance - 10/100
Accumulated Points: 0
Points Spent: 0
Nizam Level: 1 ]



Aliyar: "What am I supposed to do with all this?"

Zulfiqar: It's actually simple. As you may notice, you have stats that vary based on your own capabilities. By completing missions, which will appear when needed, you can earn points. These points can be used to improve your stats and overall self.

Aliyar: Aur agar main missions complete nahi kar paata?

Zulfiqar: Upon failing a mission, you will face a penalty that you will have to endure. This may take the form of a task, a deduction of points, or, if there are no points remaining, it could mean the end of our Host-Nizam relationship, as the Nizam would be compelled to leave the host body if there is no value in staying.

Aliyar: Aur agar main apni stats upgrade kar loon, to exactly kya hota hai?

Zulfiqar: If you properly allocate your points over time, you will reach a level of greatness where there will be no rival to you on this planet.

Aliyar: Theek hai, to mission kaise milta hai?

Zulfiqar: As I’ve explained, missions will appear by themselves. I must emphasize that you need to complete these missions, as it's important for us to gain points. This will help you achieve greatness and, in turn, allow me to continue using your body to sustain myself.

Aliyar kuch kehne se pehle hi, Kinza, Rahmati, aur Aliza makeshift ward mein enter karte hain.

Teen anjaane shakalain dekh kar, jo usne pehle nahi dekhi thi, Aliyar apne aap ko uthaata hai aur hoshiyar ho jaata hai.

Aliyar: Tum sab kaun ho?



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Yeh interaction agle update mein jaari rahega. Update padne ke liye shukriya, jo mera pehla Mega Update hai. Main aapke vichar sunna chaahunga aur aapke sujhav sunne ke liye khush hoonga.
I think ap ne story kahi se uthai hai Warewolf bhai kahi ye apni kahani jaisi to nahi please check
 
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