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With who should Aliyar have his first sexual encounter?


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Introduction - Page 1
Update 1 - Page 4
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Disclaimer: I will not include any interfaith content as I personally don’t believe in sexualising religion. I will not include cuckholding as that isn’t something I find appealing and even if there is any Adultery content it will not feature cuckholding. And obviously there shall be no mention of characters under the age of 18 in a sexual setting.
 
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You make a point. I live abroad so there’s a time difference and when I had planned to release the Update I may have fell asleep so I’ll give it soon, just running some errands. It’ll be a decently sized update. BTW I’m operating under GMT so yeah there can be inconsistencies in time, I do apologise for that.
 
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You make a point. I live abroad so there’s a time difference and when I had planned to release the Update I may have fell asleep so I’ll give it soon, just running some errands. It’ll be a decently sized update. BTW I’m operating under GMT so yeah there can be inconsistencies in time, I do apologise for that.
I also live in Africa so ?..😅chalo koi na khairiyat se h aap ye bhi aachi baat h...kafi time se update nahi diya h aapne .....I know aapko lagaga me aaj please visit me update ke liye boli but not....bas id se nahi padhi thi baki padha h .....😅thodi kabhi kabhi aap hard Urdu me chale jate h jo ki itna bura bhi nahi h but hum jante h Urdu ke har labz ke alg matlab hote h....so thode se assan sabdo ka prayog karne ki gujarish rahagi......🤔
 

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I also live in Africa so ?..😅chalo koi na khairiyat se h aap ye bhi aachi baat h...kafi time se update nahi diya h aapne .....I know aapko lagaga me aaj please visit me update ke liye boli but not....bas id se nahi padhi thi baki padha h .....😅thodi kabhi kabhi aap hard Urdu me chale jate h jo ki itna bura bhi nahi h but hum jante h Urdu ke har labz ke alg matlab hote h....so thode se assan sabdo ka prayog karne ki gujarish rahagi......🤔
No issues further updates will be in more simplified form of Urdu more akin to basic level Hindi
 
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Update 10 — Dhoka

Kamra khamoshi se bhara tha, jo sirf Aliyar ki mushkil saansain aur lahrati khoon ki halki awaaz se toot raha tha. Farsh tooti hui furniture aur kaanch ke chhote tukdon se bhara tha, jo hawa mein chhayi hui ajeeb sukoon ke saath bilkul mukhalif tha.

Aliyar Babar ke bejaan jism ke upar khada tha, uska jism khud ko sambhalne ki koshish mein tha. Khoon uski maatha se girta hua uske zakhamon ko bhigo raha tha. Uski nazar dhundhli ho gayi thi, aur thakan ne us par qabil-e-bardaasht asar kiya, jis se uski peshiyan kaanp rahi thi. Lekin, uski mudra be-himmat thi; kuch aisa tha jo uski tawajjoh ka talabgaar tha.

Nazia ne apne nazariye se apne bhai ko dekha, jo uska hifazati tha, khoon mein bhiga hua tha. Har dhadkan uske seene mein dhol ki tarah goonj rahi thi, use yaad dilate hue ke kaise usne kuch hi waqt pehle uski maut ki sazish ki thi. Khamosh aansu uski gaalon par beh rahe the, aur uska jism gham aur dar ki milawat mein behtar tha.


Ek bechain kar dene wali thandak ne kamra bhar diya, ek thandi shanakht jo Aliyar ne dekhne se pehle mehsoos ki. Ek saaya kone mein chamakta hua nazar aaya.

Hania andhere se sabse pehle nikal kar aayi, uski thandi aur hisaab se sochne wali aankhein behtareen nazar se us bechain manzar ko dekh rahi thi, phir Aliyar par thahar gayi. Usne ruka, uske chehre par nafrat ka izhaar tha.

Hania: Aliyar, tum… tum toh mar chuke the.

Pehli dafa, Hania ke chehre se tahafuz ka mask utar gaya. Usay yeh yaqeen tha ke Aliyar chala gaya hai, Malir Darya mein dafan kiya gaya, uska jism nasht hone ke liye chhod diya gaya.

Aliyar ne aankhein jhapki, be-yaqeen aur uske ird-gird ke hungame ka milan hota hua mehsoos kiya. Hania, uski badi behan, uske saamne khadi thi, uska chehra shock aur pareshani ka milan tha. Usne use achhe se pehchana, lekin uske zehan mein ek bada sawal tha: woh yahan kya kar rahi thi?

[Zulfiqar]: Aliyar, ghabrao mat. Yeh waqt hairaan hone ka nahi hai. Tumhari behan us aadmi ke saath hai jisne tumhe maarne ki koshish ki, jabke doosri behan bandhi hui hai. Hania shayad kisi khufnaak maamle mein shamil hai?

Aliyar: Khufnaak?

[Zulfiqar]: Shayad yeh tumhare aur tumhari behan Nazia ko khatam karke khandaan ki business par kabza karne ki sazish hai. Tum Desi logon ko jaidad ke jhagde par ek dusre ko maarne ka shauq hai. Yeh koi hairani ki baat nahi hogi.

Aliyar: Pehle to, rasism mat karo. Doosra, woh aisa kyun karegi? Usay woh sab mil gaya jo usne chaha; use R&D department diya gaya jaise usne kaha tha. Abu ne kabhi bhi uski maangain nahi jhuki, toh woh aisa kyun karegi?

[Zulfiqar]: Woh ek bhale ke poshak mein bhediya hai. Usne sabko yeh dikhaya ke yeh uske liye kaafi hai, lekin asal mein usay sab kuch chahiye tha. Usne ise zabardasti hasil karne ka faisla kiya. Seedhe lafzon mein, woh leadership ke liye pehli pasand nahi thi, nominally.

Aliyar ka jawab dene se pehle, Raja ne use itna zor daar uppercut maara ke Aliyar deewar se takra kar gir gaya, aur uska jahaan uske ird-gird ghoom raha tha.


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Raja: Tumhe mar jana chahiye tha, Aliyar!

Hania ka chehra shock se iraade mein tabdeel ho gaya jab woh aage badhi, uski aankhein jazbat se chamak rahi thi.

Hania: Bas karo, Raja! Woh hamara dushman nahi— woh hamare khel ka ek maamooli hissa hai.

Aliyar ne apne paaon par khade hone ki koshish ki, uske andar ghabrahat aur dhoka mehsoos ho raha tha.

Aliyar: Hania Aapi, tum uske saath kyun ho? Tumhe ismein shamil hone ki zaroorat nahi thi!

Hania nazdeek aayi, uski awaaz neechi aur hukmati bhari thi.

Hania: Kyunki mujhe apne khandaan ki virasat ke liye kisi bhi khatrey ko khatam karna tha. Tum hi ek aakhri rukawat the, aur ab tum mere jaal mein aagaye ho.

Aliyar ka dil gir gaya jab uski asal niyat ka ehsaas us par hone laga.

Aliyar: Tum kis baare mein baat kar rahi ho? Mujhe samajh nahi aa raha.

Hania ne muskurahat di, uski aankhon mein jeet ka ek jhalak thi.

Hania: Tum hamesha se bahut naive the, Aliyar. Tumhe yeh nahi dikhai deta ke tum kitne kamzor ho. Ab is sab ka khatam karne ka waqt aa gaya hai.

Aliyar ne apne reedh ki haddi mein thandak mehsoos ki.

Aliyar: Tumhara kya matlab hai? Main ab bhi tumhara bhai hoon!

Hania ka rawaya sakht ho gaya, uski awaaz thandi thi.

Hania: Is khel mein khandaan ka koi maayne nahi, main Nazia Aapi se ek istifa bayan film karwaungi, jo meri kabza ka elan karega. Jab mujhe taqat mil jayegi, main usay bhi khatam kar sakti hoon.

Aliyar: Tum paagal ho gayi ho, Hania Aapi! Tum taqat ke liye hum dono ko dhoka dogi?

Hania hansi, ek thandi awaaz jo kamre ke hungame mein goonj uthi.

Hania: Tum samajh nahi rahe, Aliyar. Yeh tumse ya mujhse bohot bada hai. Tumhe kabhi bhi lead karne ke liye nahi banaya gaya; tum hamesha mere raste mein the.

Raja, ab ek kadam peeche hote hue, is guftagu ko ek milajula jazbaat ke saath dekh raha tha, uske chehre par tareef aur shak ki milan thi.

Raja: Tum chahti kya ho, Hania?

Hania ne uski taraf dekha, uska rawaya hukmati tha.

Hania: Woh kaam khatam karo jo humne shuru kiya tha, Raja. Aliyar ko jeene nahi diya ja sakta. Woh bahut khatarnak hai.

Aliyar be-himmat khada tha, uske chehre se khoon gir raha tha, nazar dhundhli thi lekin uska iraada mazboot tha. Woh Hania ke twisted plan ko kaamiyab nahi hone de sakta tha. Kamre ke doosre kone par, Raja ek shikari ki tarah khada tha, Aliyar ki mushkil dekh kar muskurata hua. Kamra, tooti hui furniture aur debris se bhara hua, is lamhe ki intensity se goonj raha tha. Aliyar ke jism ka har ek hisa dard se cheekh raha tha, lekin usne isay dabaya. Ab yeh sirf survival ki baat thi.

Aliyar: Main yahan isay khatam nahi hone de sakta.

Raja ne apne haathon ki ungliyan jhodi, saaf saaf is lamhe ka maza lete hue. Uska bhaari jism tabahi ke liye bana tha, aur Aliyar sirf agla nishana tha.

[Zulfiqar]: Haan, koi pressure nahi. Bas khud ko roadkill ki tarah flat mat karna. Lekin agar tumhein meri do baatein sunni hain, to uski kadmon ki harkat par nazar rakhna. Woh bada hai, lekin dheere hai. Yeh tumhara mauqa hai, dost.

Aliyar ko pata tha ke Zulfiqar sahi tha. Tezi hi uska ek matra faida tha aise kisi ke khilaf jaise Raja. Usne apni mudra badli, uski saansain mushkil se lekin markazi thi. Magar, Raja ne waqt zaya nahi kiya. Ek ghoosht ke saath, woh dauda, apne bhaari haath ko ek jungli chakkar mein ghooma raha tha.

Aliyar ne aakhri pal mein jhuk gaya, Raja ke haath se hawa ka jhonka mehsoos karte hue jab woh uske sir ke paas se kuch inch door guzra. Jab Raja ka punch deewar se laga, to zameen kanp gayi, aur plaster aur lakri har taraf chhinkar ud gaye.


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Aliyar: Wah, woh toh mujhe maar hi dalta.

[Zulfiqar]: Haan, yeh toh sach hai. Ab, kyun na tum deewar ka shukriya ada karo jo uska woh vaar saha gaya? Jaldi se uski tangon par vaar karo! Usay girane se kam se kam is bade ko dheere kar sakte ho.

Bina kisi hichkichahat ke, Aliyar ne Raja ke ghutnon par ek neeche se kick maar di. Takraar mazboot thi, aur ek pal ke liye, Raja thoda jhuka. Lekin girne ke bajaye, usne gusse se gurraaya, uski aankhein nafrat se kaali ho gayi. Usne apne khaali haath se vaar kiya, Aliyar ko apne seene par ek backhanded maar di, jo use debris ke dher par girne par majboor kar diya.

Dard bepanah tha, jaise uska seena aag se jalan raha ho. Aliyar ne saans lene ki koshish ki, uske munh mein khoon ikattha ho raha tha, lekin usne khud ko uthane ki koshish ki. Uski pasliyan shikayat kar rahi thi, lekin usay aage badhna tha. Raja ab phir se uski taraf aa raha tha, is baar dheere lekin zyada focused.

[Zulfiqar]: Hey, accha kaam kiya usay gussa dilane mein. Ab kyun nahi tum usay kisi aise jagah par maarne ki koshish karte jo dard de? Jaise, har jagah. Behtar hoga agar koi teerha cheez ho!

Aliyar ki aankhein kamre mein idhar-udhar ghoomi, kisi bhi cheez ki talash mein jo wo istemal kar sake. Tab usne dekha, ek girne wali table ke neeche adha dhaka hua, ek toota hua kaanch ka tukda, jo madham roshni mein chamak raha tha.


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Raja ne dobara vaar kiya, is baar ek khatarnak hook jo Aliyar ke sir par tha. Aliyar ne bilkul waqt par jhuk gaya, mehsoos karte hue ke hawa uske temple ko chhoo gayi. Usne farsh par roll kiya, ek tezi se kaanch ka tukda uthate hue.

Raja ne gussa se apna chehra morha aur phir se dauda. Aliyar ne kaanch ka tukda mazbooti se pakra, uska har ek muscle kashmakash mein tha. Jab Raja ne aage badhne ki koshish ki, Aliyar ne side step kiya, aur kaanch ka tukda Raja ke forearm par maara. Khoon chhalak gaya, lekin isne sirf us bade ko aur bhi gusse mein daal diya.

Aliyar: Yeh aadmi kitna seh sakta hai?

[Zulfiqar]: Oh, fikar mat karo. Woh aakhirkar khoon beh jayega… kuch ghanton mein. Is dauran, kyun na tum apne aap ko pancake banne se bacha lo? Uski size ko uske khilaf istemal karo. Usay bait karo!

Aliyar, Zulfiqar ki salaah par amal karte hue, peeche hatne laga, Raja ko tooti hui furniture ke beech ek chhoti si jagah mein kheenchta hua. Raja ka gussa use be-wakoof bana raha tha, aur jab usne ek baar phir daud lagayi, Aliyar ne daayein taraf jhoota kiya, phir daayein taraf tezi se bhaaga, aur bade aadmi ke peeche chala gaya.

Aliyar ne ek grunt ke saath, kaanch ka tukda Raja ke ghutne ke peeche par maar diya. Woh bada aadmi dard se cheekh utha, ek ghutne par gir gaya, aur khoon naye zakhm se behne laga.

Aliyar: Woh dheere ho raha hai.

[Zulfiqar]: Haan, yeh toh sach hai. Usme Swiss cheese se zyada chhed hain. Ab, kaam khatam karo! Sir par vaar karo, aur isay kaam ka banao.

Aliyar ko pata tha ke Zulfiqar sahi hai. Woh isay aur zyada der tak nahi kheench sakta. Raja ek monster tha, lekin monsters ko bhi maarna mumkin hai. Ek achanak tezi se, Aliyar ne apne aap ko Raja ki taraf dauda diya, uske gale par vaar karne ka iraada kiya. Lekin Raja, apni kamzori ke bawajood, ek aakhri taqat ka jhatka de gaya.

Raja ka haath akele utha, Aliyar ko gale se pakad liya, uska pakad itna mazboot tha ke uski saansain turant ruk gayi. Raja ne use hawa mein utha liya, uska pakad ek vice ki tarah kashta gaya.


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[Zulfiqar]: Thik hai, yeh toh plan nahi tha! Tum yahan literally ghalat ho rahe ho, dost! Kuch karo, jaldi!

Aliyar ki nazar dhundhli ho gayi jab uski lungs hawa ke liye cheekh rahe the. Usne chudne ki koshish ki, lekin Raja ka pakad loha tha. Umeed ke liye, Aliyar ne kaanch ka tukda Raja ke kalai mein ghusa diya, jitna ho sake usay ghooma kar. Khoon uske zakhm se chhalak gaya, aur dard se gusse mein, Raja ne use chhod diya.

Aliyar farsh par gir gaya, hawa ke liye taras raha tha, uska seena chhal raha tha jab usne apne neele pad gaye gale ko pakda. Raja, ab khoon behte hue, peeche ki taraf jhuka, uska jism aise hil raha tha jaise ek girne wala darakht ho.

[Zulfiqar]: Ab baat ban rahi hai! Ab woh aur dheere ho gaya hai. Jaldi se usay phir se lapko, aur usay apne qadam par tikne mat do!

Raja ne ek deewane saand ki tarah garajte hue apne haath se jungli vaar kiya, lekin Aliyar bach gaya, uski pohanch se bahar hokar. Aliyar ne Raja ki doosri taang par vaar kiya, uski muscle ko kaat diya. Ek aur dard se bhari cheekh Raja ke munh se nikal gayi, jab uske pair aur zyada hil gaye, ab uska wazan theek se sambhalne ke qabil nahi rahe.

Aliyar: Isay ab khatam hona hi padega.

[Zulfiqar]: Haan, warna tum apni eulogy ke galat side par honge. Ab woh apne aakhri dum par hai, ek aur acha vaar karke isay khatam karo.

Aliyar ne apni bachi kuchi taqat ko jama karte hue khud ko uthaya. Raja mushkil se apne qadam par tha, uski saans bhaari thi, aankhein dard aur gusse se bhari hui thi. Lekin woh ab tak khatam nahi hua tha. Ek aakhri cheekh ke saath, usne phir se daud lagayi, apne haath utha kar maut ka vaar karne ke liye.

Aliyar ne aakhri lamha mein jhuk kar bach gaya, uski instincts jagi. Jab Raja ka mukka zameen mein dhaar se laga, Aliyar ghuma aur sabse nazdeek pada ek bhari, dhaar wala lohay ka tukda uthaya. Baghair kisi jhijhak ke, usne lohay ka tukda Raja ke sir ke ek taraf ghusa diya, ek gandi, chilane wali aawaz ke saath.

Raja ka jism achanak se theher gaya, uski aankhein hairat se phail gayi. Khoon zakhm se behta raha jab woh ladkhadaya, uska bhaari jism khatarnaak taur par jhoolta raha. Aliyar ne saans rokte hue dekha, jab Raja zor daar dhamaakay ke saath zameen par gir gaya, aur uski aankhon se zindagi dheere dheere chali gayi.

[Zulfiqar]: Aur giant gir gaya! Khoobsoorat kaam, Aliyar. Ab, yeh batao ke hum aaj aur monsters ke saath kushti nahi kar rahe, kyunki mere paas ab mazeed witty comebacks nahi bache.

Jab dhool baithne lagi, Aliyar Raja ke giray huay jism ke ooper khara tha, zor zor se saans le raha tha. Uske haath thakan se kaanp rahe the, lekin sab kuch khatam ho chuka tha. Woh jeet gaya tha.

Lekin jab adrenaline kam hone lagi, Aliyar ka dimaag wapas asli khatre par gaya—Hania. Woh poore waqt usay dekh rahi thi, uski aankhein thandi aur hisaab se bhari hui, bilkul ek moorti ki tarah be haraqat khadi thi. Aliyar ne uski aankhon se sampark kiya, ummeed karte hue ke woh aage barhegi aur apne twisted plan ka agla qadam dikhayegi. Magar iske bajaye, uske honton par ek chhoti si, samajhdar muskuraahat thi.


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Aliyar ne abhi ek aur qadam uthane ka socha bhi nahi tha ke Hania saaye mein wapas chali gayi, uski harkatein sahi aur pur-sukoon thi.

[Zulfiqar]: Oh, yeh lo. Woh grand finale ka intezar nahi kar rahi, hai na? Tumhein pata hai, kitna acha hota agar bura aadmi yahan rukta aur classic ‘evil mastermind escape’ nahi karta.

Nazia, bandhi hui aur khauf se dekhte hue, mehsoos kar rahi thi ke uska dil tezi se dhadak raha hai jab usne samjha ke kya ho raha hai. Woh behelta tha, apne bhai aur us aadmi ke darmiyan hone wale khofnaak takraav ko dekhne par majboor thi, jo usay maarne wala tha. Har haddi ki tooti awaaz, har dard bhari groan, Aliyar aur Raja ke darmiyan, uske dil ko aur bhi tezi se dhadakne par majboor kar raha tha. Yeh sab kuch aise nahi hona tha. Hania ka plan kuch safed aur jaldi hone ka waada karta tha, lekin ab... sab kuch ulat gaya tha.

Aliyar Raja ke toote, khoon se bhare jism ke ooper khara tha, uski saans tezi se aur halki thi. Usne apni aankhon se khoon aur paseena hataaya, uske hathon ke knuckles ladai ke thakan se kaanp rahe the. Uski nazar kamre mein ghoomi, aur uski behan Nazia par ruki, jo abhi bhi kursi se bandhi hui thi. Ek lamha ke liye, uski aankhein naram hui jab woh uski taraf jhakte hue aage badha.

Aliyar: Nazia Aapi… khatam ho gaya. Main tumhe yahan se nikaal raha hoon.

Kaapti hui haathon ke saath, usne uski kalaiyon ke ird-gird bandhi rassi kholna shuru ki. Nazia ne jhatka khaaya, guilt aur sharm se bhari hui, lekin usne khud ko khamosh rakhne par majboor kiya. Aliyar ko is baat ka pata nahi tha ke usne usay maarne ke saazish mein kya kirdar ada kiya. Usne samjha ke woh sirf ek aur shikaar hai.

Jaise hi rassi dhili hui, woh azaad ho gayi, lekin shukr ki jagah, uski khiyanat ka bojh usay neeche kheench raha tha. Nazia ka galaa sukh gaya, aur uska jism kaanp raha tha jab woh bechain paon par khadi hui. Usne apne dil mein shabdon ko ubalte hue mehsoos kiya, lekin Aliyar ki pratikriya ka dar unhe rok raha tha. Woh kaise samjha sakti thi?

Aliyar ne dheere se uske kandhe ko chhua, uska chehra ab bhi fikr se bhara hua tha. “Nazia Aapi, kya tum theek ho? Humein jaana hoga pehle se pehle—“

Usne beech mein hi rok diya, uski awaz kamzor aur kaanp rahi thi. “Aliyar… mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai.”

Usne uski taraf dekha, pareshan. “Kya? Hum baad mein baat kar sakte hain. Chalo, bas yahan se nikalte hain.”

Lekin Nazia ne apna sar hilaaya, uski aankhein aansuon se bhar gayi. “Nahi. Tum samajhte nahi. Main... main ismein shamil thi.”

Aliyar thak gaya, uska haath ab bhi uski kali par tha. “Tum kis baare mein baat kar rahi ho?”

Nazia ke paon lagbhag uske neeche se khisak gaye jab sach usse bahar nikal aaya. “Hania… Raja… yeh sirf unka kaam nahi tha. Main bhi thi. Humein tumhe maarne ka plan banaya tha, Aliyar. Humne milkar yeh socha. Main… main chahti thi ke tum chale jao.”

Ek lamha ke liye, duniya thak gayi, Aliyar ne aankhein jhapki jaise usne suna hua samajhne ki koshish ki, lekin shabd uske zehan mein nahi ghus rahe the. Uski behen, jisay usne bachane ke liye yahan aaya tha, ne uski jaan lene ki sazish ki thi? Uska pet ulatne laga.

Aliyar: “Nahi… tum nahi kar sakti… tum nahi karogi…”

Nazia kursi par gir gayi, roti. “Humne socha… agar hum tumhe khatam kar denge, toh hum haqdaar ban sakenge. Hania aur maine, business ko control karne ki koshish ki. Maine socha ke yeh akeli raasta hai, Aliyar. Main tumhari parchai mein hamesha nahi jeena chahti thi. Lekin Hania ne mujhe dhoka diya. Usne hamesha mujhe dhoka dena tha.”

Aliyar peechay hat gaya, us par aise dekh raha tha jaise pehli baar usay dekh raha ho. Uska dil dhadakne laga, saans lene mein takleef hone lagi jab sachai us par chhayi. Uski apni behan usay maarna chahti thi. Usne kabhi us par shak nahi kiya, kabhi nahi socha tha ke woh usay aise dhoka de sakti hai.

[Zulfiqar]: Ouch. Yeh toh peeth mein chura ghonpne jaisa hai… ya keh lo, dil mein. Main toh soch raha tha ke aaj tumne itni dhokebaazi dekh li hai, lekin lagta hai ke abhi aur bhi hai.

Aliyar be-senshi ka ehsaas kar raha tha. Usay cheekh maarne ka, gussa nikaalne ka dil kar raha tha, lekin us mein koi taqat nahi thi. Sirf dard tha. Sirf uski itraf ko saari khudai ka bojh mehsoos ho raha tha, jaise kisi ne uski chhati par dhaar dal di ho.

Aliyar: Tum... tum mujhe marna chahti thi?

Nazia ne apni aansu ponchhe, uska chehra guilt aur sharam se bhara hua tha. “Mujhe ehsaas nahi hua… mujhe nahi pata tha ke aisa mehsoos hoga. Mujhe maaf kar do, Aliyar. Main galat thi. Main… kabhi nahi chahti thi ke yeh itna door tak chale.”

Aliyar ne apni jaw ko kas liya, uski jazbat gusse aur dil tooti hui khushi ke darmiyan leher rahi thi. Usne uski taraf se munh morh liya, uska chehra aur dekhne ki taqat nahi thi.

Aliyar: Tumhe nahi pata tha ke yeh itna door tak chalega? Tum mujhe khatam karna chahti thi. Tumhe kya ummeed thi?

Nazia ne uski taraf haath badhaya, uski awaaz mein bechaini thi. “Please… mujhe maaf kar do. Main samajh gayi hoon ke main kitni galat thi. Main samajh rahi hoon ke maine tumhe kitna dard diya. Bas… tum mujhe aise akela mat chhod do. Mujhse nafrat mat karo.”

Lekin Aliyar ka dil thanda ho gaya tha. Woh kuch pal pehle jo warmth aur fikar dikhata tha, ab uski jagah thandi alagav aa gayi thi. Usne uski taraf dekha bhi nahi jab wo nikalne ki taraf barh gaya, uski kadam thakan aur gusse se bhari hui thi.

Aliyar: Chalo. Main tumhe yahan se nikaal raha hoon.

Nazia uske peechay khamoshi se chali, uski sobs ab mushkil se sunai de rahi thi. Usne phir se bolne ki koshish ki, zyada maafi dene ke liye, lekin har baar jab usne apna munh khola, Aliyar ki thandi nazar usse chup kar deti.

Jab wo imarat ke purane hallon se guzarte gaye, Aliyar ne raasta dikhaya, uska jism abhi bhi ladai se dard se bhara tha, lekin uska dimaag dard se itna bhara tha ke usne is par dhyan nahi diya. Nazia uske peechay rahi, faasla banaye rakhti, usse saath chalne ki sharm mehsoos hoti thi.

Nazia: Aliyar, please… main sab theek kar doongi. Main jo kuch bhi karna pade, karungi.

Usne jawab nahi diya. Uska jabda itna kas raha tha ke dard mehsoos ho raha tha, aur uska dimaag abhi bhi dhoka se hil raha tha. Uski khamoshi kisi bhi saza se badi thi, aur Nazia ne isay aise mehsoos kiya jaise ek aisa zakhm ho jo wo theek nahi kar sakti. Har kadam par, har lamha jab usne usse nazarandaz kiya, uske dil mein chhura aur gehra hota gaya.

Aakhir kar, wo street par pahunche. Raat ki hawa thandi thi, unke darmiyan se bhari hui sanakd ki hawa ko kaat rahi thi. Aliyar ne raste ke kone par ek taxi dekhi aur isay rukne ke liye hath hilaya, bina kisi shabd ke darwaza khol diya. Usne isay andar aane ka ishara kiya.

Nazia ne thoda rukawat ki, uski aankhein bhikhaas rahi thi. “Kya tum waaqi mujhe is tarah bhej doge? Sab kuch hone ke baad? Kya hum isay theek nahi kar sakte, Aliyar?”

Aliyar ki awaz thandi aur be-parwaah thi. “Gaari mein baitho, Aapi.”

Usne ek lamha aur wahan khade rehne ki koshish ki, ummeed karte hue ke shayad wo apna faisla badal de, lekin jab usne apni nazar us se hata li, to usne jaan gaya ke aaj raat iski koi umeed nahi. Haar kar, usne pichle seat par baith gayi, aur Aliyar ne darwaza band kar diya.

Aliyar ne driver ki khidki ki taraf jhuka. “Usay ghar le chalo.”

Driver ne sir hilaaya, lekin gaari chalu hone se pehle, Nazia ne bahar jhukkar kaha, “Aliyar, mujhe maaf kar do! Main bahut maafi chahti hoon!”

Usne peechay dekhne ki bhi zarurat mehsoos nahi ki jab wo turn karke chala gaya, uska dimaag Hania ke dhoke aur aane wale toofan ki soch mein uljha tha. Nazia ke roone ki awaaz sheher ki garmi mein kho gayi, lekin uske dil ki dard wahi raha.


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[Zulfiqar]: Tumhein pata hai… shayad wo sach mein maafi chahti hai. Lekin main samajhta hoon, tumhe dard ho raha hai. Parivaar se dhoka khana gehra lagta hai, hai na? Tumhein gussa aana samajh aata hai.

Aliyar ne jawab nahi diya, uske khayalat itne andhere the ke Zulfiqar ki baatein sunne ka mann nahi tha.

[Zulfiqar]: Lekin dekho, kam se kam tum mar nahi gaye. Choti choti jeetain, hai na?

Aliyar ne saans chhodi, uska dimaag agle qadam ki taraf shift ho raha tha. Ye sab kuch khatam nahi hua tha. Hania ab bhi wahan bahar thi, aur ab ye sirf vyapaar ki baat nahi thi. Ye personal ho gaya tha. Aur wo use dhundne ke liye tayaar tha, chahe jo bhi ho.


Us thaan mein mazbooti ke saath, Aliyar Rahmati ke ghar ki taraf badha, dhokey ki toofan ko kuch waqt ke liye chhodte hue.
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Sorry for the delay I had prior commitments that had slowed me down. Everything is now sorted. Thank you so much for passing 100K+ Views on this story, 30K more than it was the previous update. 🙏
 
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