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With who should Aliyar have his first sexual encounter?


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Somahvii

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Introduction - Page 1
Update 1 - Page 4
Update 2 - Page 5
Update 3 - Page 6
Update 4 - Page 9
Update 5 - Page 12
Update 6 - Page 13
Update 7 - Page 16
Update 8 - Page 16
Update 9 - Page 17
Update 10 - Page 21
Update 11 - Page 25


Disclaimer: I will not include any interfaith content as I personally don’t believe in sexualising religion. I will not include cuckholding as that isn’t something I find appealing and even if there is any Adultery content it will not feature cuckholding. And obviously there shall be no mention of characters under the age of 18 in a sexual setting.
 
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Somahvii

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Lagta he behano ne supari di he magarkyo
Ye achi sawal hai, lagta hai humein intezaar karna padega aur dekhna padega.
 

Somahvii

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Hum ab Aliyar Arc par shuru karenge jo kuch chapters ke liye hoga. Yeh hamara pehla arc hai aur humare maqsad tak pohnchne tak bohot se arcs honge, jo hamare title ki taraf ishaara karti hai. Sex aakhir mein introduce kiya jayega, lekin main sab kuch natural tareeqay se introduce karne ka plan bana raha hoon. Toh mere sath rahein. Shukriya.
 

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UPDATE 3 - NAZIA AUR HANIA KA TAKEOVER


Is waqt Baloch Mansion mein…


Zaviyar: Aliyar abhi tak wapas nahi aaya, usay itna waqt kyun lag raha hai?

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Sania: Ji, aap bilkul theek keh rahe hain. Woh kahaan ho sakta hain?

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Nazia: Woh apne doston ke saath hamesha ki tarah badmaashiyon mein masroof hoga.

Hania: Aapi bilkul sahi keh rahi hain.


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Sania: Nahi, yeh sach nahi hai. Woh hamesha waqt par wapas aa jata hai, aur abhi raat ke 10 baj rahe hain. Yeh uski aam aadat nahi hai. Main kaafi pareshan hoon.

Nazia: Aray Aapi, aap bina wajah fikar kar rahi hain. Woh jaldi wapas aa jayega. Shayad waqt ka pata nahi chala.


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Zaviyar: Nahi, Nazia, Sania bilkul sahi keh rahi hai. Yeh uske liye aam baat nahi hai. Woh calls aur messages ka jawab bhi nahi de raha, jo woh hamesha karta hai. Main pareshan hoon ke shayad kuch galat ho gaya ho.

Sania: Abbu, mujhe lagta hai ke humein police se baat karni chahiye.

Zaviyar: Haan, tum bilkul sahi keh rahi ho. Mere achhe connections hain AIG ke saath, woh humein madad kar sakte hain.

Nazia: Abbu, iski zaroorat nahi hai. Woh apne doston ke saath awaragardi kar raha hoga. Aap bina wajah pareshan ho rahe hain.

Hania: Haan, Abbu, Nazia bilkul theek keh rahi hai.

Lekin unki koshishon ke bawajood, Zaviyar ne AIG ko call karne ka faisla kiya. AIG ne Zaviyar ko bharosa dilaya ke Aliyar mil jayega.

Zaviyar ke contacts ke zariye ek search party Aliyar ko dhoondhne ke liye bheji jaati hai. Hania aur Nazia sir dard ka bahaana bana kar apne kamron mein chali jaati hain.

Rabia poori guftagu ke dauran khamosh rahi, shayad woh itni hairaan thi ke kuch keh nahi paayi. Uska pyaara bhai, jo uska sabse achha dost bhi tha, laapata tha, aur kisi ko uske patah nahi tha.



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Sania aur Zaviyar, jo ghar ke sabse baday thay, ghar se nikal kar AIG ke saath search party mein shaamil hone gaye thay.

Shayad ab tak aadhi raat ho chuki thi, aur search party ne poore ilaaqe ko chhaan maara tha, lekin unhein koi suraag nahi mil saka.

Sania ne samajhdari se yaad kiya ke unhein uske doston ko call karna chahiye. Unhon ne Iqbal ko kai dafa call kiya lekin usne phone nahi uthaya. Phir unhon ne Hamza ko call kiya, pehli dafa koi jawab nahi aaya, aur doosri dafa kisi ne phone uthaya jo Hamza nahi tha—shayad ek nurse thi. Sania ki nurse ke saath guftagu se yeh maloom hua ke Hamza goli lagne ki wajah se zakhmi ho gaya tha. Yeh sun kar aur Iqbal ke phone na uthane par Sania ko sabse buri sochne par majboor ho gayi.

Ab khaufzada Zaviyar aur Sania ne AIG ko Hamza ke saath huay waqia ke baare mein ittila di aur AIG se darkhwast ki ke woh kuch karein.

AIG faisla karta hai ke unhein sabse bura haal maan kar tayyari karni chahiye. Woh apni force ko hidayat deta hai ke sab hospitals se raabta karein aur mumkin hai ke kisi lash ki talaash karni parhe. Yeh sunkar Zaviyar aur Sania aur bhi zyada daar gaye.

Aur zyada waqt guzar chuka tha, aur ab subah ke 4 baj rahe thay. AIG ne socha ke shayad iss waqt kuch milna mushkil ho, aur woh talaashi rokne hi wala tha ke usse ek officer ka phone aaya. Officer ne ittila di ke Malir dariya ke paas khoon mein lathpath kapde mile hain jo Aliyar ke wohi kapde hain jo usne apne gaib hone se pehle pehne thay.


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AIG, Zaviyar, Sania, aur baqi search party ke log site par pohanch gaye aur ye tasdeeq ho gayi ke yeh waqai mein Aliyar ke kapde hain. Yeh nishchit kiya gaya ke Aliyar ko qatal kar diya gaya tha aur shayad uska jism dariya mein phenk diya gaya, kapde chhod diye gaye the.

AIG ne qatal ki tajweez ke liye ek tahqiqat ka hukam diya aur Zaviyar aur Sania ko ghar jaane ke liye keh diya.

Un dono ke liye, wahan unka duniya khatam ho gayi. Waqt jaise ruk gaya tha, unki aankhon se aansoon beh rahe the. Zaviyar ne ek mazboot shakhsiyat dikhayi taake apni beti Sania ko bekaar na mehsoos ho. Lekin Sania apne aansoon ko nahi rok paayi; usne behad royaa, kyunke Aliyar uske liye ek apne hi beta jaisa tha—shakal se sharaarati, lekin dil se meherban.

Waqt guzarta gaya, lekin Zaviyar apne eklaute bete ke inteqal ka gham bardasht nahi kar paaye, jiske natije mein unhe ek bara heart attack hua jo unki maut ka sabab bana. Isse Baloch Group of Companies ki zimmedari Nazia ke haath mein aa gayi, jo ab CEO aur President of the Board ban gayi. Iska matlab tha ke saari power ab uske paas thi. Woh company ki eklauti aabroo aur zimmedari ban gayi thi.


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Ghar ka mahol kharab ho gaya tha kyunki ghar ke dono mard ek ke baad ek wafat pa gaye the. Rabia aur Sania ne mushkilat ke bawajood apne aap ko sambhal liya aur apne rozmarra ke kaam ko pehle ki tarah chalane ki koshish ki. Hania aur Nazia, dono hi, is sab se bilkul beparwah thi, lekin unhone achi tarah se dikhaya ke woh dil se dukhi hain. Lekin yeh sab dekh kar yeh samajh aata hai ke yeh unke liye shayad sabse behtareen nateeja tha. Nazia CEO bani aur Hania COO.

Kitna waqt guzar chuka hai? Main kahunga, behtareen halat mein ek hafte ke aas-paas. Theek hai, magar hamara main character kahaan hai? Yeh accha sawaal hai, jiska jawab agle update mein diya jayega. Hamne ye tay kar liya hai ke main character maut ka shikaar nahi hua, to phir woh kahaan ho sakta hai? Uske kapde mile hain, lekin uska jism kahin nahi mila. Agar woh zinda hai, to ab woh kahaan hai aur kis haal mein hai? Uske jazbat kya hain?



Thank you for reading, I agree that the Update is a little short but I felt that it is better to write the smaller parts first and then worry about the larger details in the next Update as we’ll cover the whereabouts of Aliyar and his way forward.
 
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Kumar Wadhwani

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Bhot aache strat h aage bhe up date de te rhna thanks
 
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Mahesh007

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Do nehan to gai inki pol to khilegi lekin do se niksh hoga
 

Hami123

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Nice update
 
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