Incest Behanon se Nikkah

[Somahvii]

Introduction - Page 1
Update 1 - Page 4
Update 2 - Page 5
Update 3 - Page 6
Update 4 - Page 9
Update 5 - Page 12
Update 6 - Page 13
Update 7 - Page 16
Update 8 - Page 16
Update 9 - Page 17
Update 10 - Page 21
Update 11 - Page 25

Disclaimer: I will not include any interfaith content as I personally don’t believe in sexualising religion. I will not include cuckholding as that isn’t something I find appealing and even if there is any Adultery content it will not feature cuckholding. And obviously there shall be no mention of characters under the age of 18 in a sexual setting.

 

[1112]

Update 1
Hamare Hero aur Heroines kaun hain?

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Har doosri kahani ki tarah, hamari kahani mein bhi ek protagonist hai, hamara male lead Aliyar, jo apne khandan ke azeem business empire, Baloch Group of Companies, ka waris hai. Aur kyun ke paanch bachon mein se sirf wohi ek beta hai, is liye hamesha usi se yeh tawaqqu ki gayi ke woh apne walidain ki umeedon par khara utare. Jab ke uski badi behnon Sania, Rabia, Nazia, aur Hania par bahut kam dabaav dala gaya.

Sania behnon bhaiyon mein sabse badi hai aur shayad sabse zyada samajhdaar aur hoshiyar bhi. Choti si umar se hi usne maa ki zimmedariyaan apne upar le li thi, kyun ke unki maa unke bachpan mein hi guzar gayi thi aur unke walid apne karobar sambhalne mein itne masroof rehte the ke unke paas apne bachon ko theek se parvarish karne ka waqt nahi hota tha, aur aksar unhe naukaron ke supurd kar dete the. Lekin Sania, sabse badi hone ke nate, hamesha apne chhote behnon aur bhai ki dekhbhaal karti thi. Waqt guzarne ke saath woh ek khoobsurat aurat ban gayi, jise poore Pakistan ke maanne hue aur izzatdaar business khandanon ke waris aur beton ne pasand kiya, lekin usne kabhi bhi shaadi ke liye koi bhi rishta qabool nahi kiya, kyun ke shaadi mein uski dilchaspi nahi thi. Agar uski marzi hoti, toh woh shaadi hi na karti. Usne Baloch khandan ke de facto sardar ka kirdar apna liya hai aur apna din ghar ke maamlat aur naukaron ko sambhalne mein guzarti hai. Uske daur mein kabhi koi masla nahi aaya, chahe woh business parties hoon ya koi aur event, usne har event ko yaadgaar aur munfarid banaya. Uske baghair Baloch khandan mein kuch theek se nahi chal sakta. Baloch khandan ki matoraak. Uska Aliyar ke saath maa jaisa rishta hai, aur woh usse ek tarah se apna beta samajhti hai. Woh 29 saal ki hai.



Phir aati hai Rabia, jo Baloch khandan ki doosri beti aur doosri aulaad hai. Rabia apni fitrat mein shayad sabse zyada khushmizaaj aur maze daar hai. Apne tabiat ke sabab, woh ghar mein sabse zyada pasand ki jaane wali shakhsiyat bhi hai aur shayad apne walid ki sabse pasandeeda aulaad bhi. Rabia apni funkaar tabiat ke lihaaz se Baloch Group of Companies mein Marketing Director hai. Guzishta teen saalon mein usne ek taiz marketing muhim ki dekhbhaal ki hai, jisne company ko khaleej ke mumalik mein phailaane mein madad ki, jiss se aamdani mein khaasa izafa hua. Company mein Marketing Director ke taur par kaam karne ke vajah se uske paas bhi shaadi ka waqt nahi hai, lekin apni badi behen ke muqable mein woh shaadi ke liye khuli hai, bas abhi tak usse koi pasand nahi aaya. Aliyar ke saath uska rishta wohi hai jo aam behnon-bhaiyon ka hota hai; woh ek doosre se ladte hain, saath khelte hain, aur ek doosre ka khayal rakhte hain. Kul mila kar unka rishta ek purkhuloos rishta hai. Woh 26 saal ki hai.



Phir aati hai Baloch khandan ki sabse chamakdar sitara, Nazia. Woh behnon mein sabse khoobsurat hai (kam az kam hamare male lead ke mutabiq) aur sabse zyada buland himmat bhi. Woh Baloch Group of Companies ki COO hai. Usne company ke be-reham tosee mein aham kirdar ada kiya hai aur company ko aaj jis muqaam par hai, wahan tak pohanchane ke liye bohot mehnat ki hai. Woh atharah saal ki umar se hi company se judi hui hai aur usne company ko aaj ke muqaam tak le jaane ke liye sakht mehnat ki hai. Na hi uska shaadi karne ka koi iraada hai, kyun ke uska maanna hai ke ek mard sirf uske liye bojh banega. Uske walid aksar usse apna fakhr aur imandari kehte hain. Ghar mein use sabse door aur sangdil samjha jata hai. Aliyar ke saath uska rishta lagbhag na ke barabar hai; na woh usse kuch tawaqqu rakhte hai aur na hi usse uski kamiyaabi ki koi ummeed hai. Ek tarah se woh khud ko hi khandan ka asal waris samajhti hai. Woh 25 saal ki hai.



Phir aati hai Baloch khandan ki chhoti beti aur chauthi aulaad, Hania. Apne dimples aur khoobsurti ke liye mashhoor (jo Aliyar ke mutabiq doosri sabse khoobsurat behen hai, kyun ke woh Sania aur Rabia ko ek hi darje par rakhta hai), woh apni fitrat mein sabse zyada zahanat rakhne wali hai, aur isi wajah se woh Baloch Group of Companies ke R&D Department ki Head hai. Uske daur mein company ne kaafi tajrube kiye hain aur mulk bhar mein apne raqeepon ko piche chhodne ke liye innovation aur technology mein taraqqi ki hai. Uska maanna hai ke woh abhi shaadi ke liye tayyar nahi hai kyun ke usse apne laayak koi ideal saathi nahi mila, jo uski zahanat ka muqaabla kar sake. Aliyar ke saath uska rishta mukhtasar hai; woh aksar usse sirf khane ki table par milti hai, iske ilawa woh apna waqt apne kamre mein ya Baloch library mein guzaarti hai. Woh aksar bhool jaati hai ke woh (Aliyar) maujood bhi hai. Woh 24 saal ki hai.



Aur aakhir mein aate hain hamare mard-e-maidan, Aliyar Baloch, sona beta. Woh jis par uske walid ki umeedein tikti thin, lekin kabhi un par poora nahi utar saka. Uska company mein koi bhi ohda nahi hai kyun ke woh bas karna hi nahi chahta. Woh apne bekaar doston ke saath uljha rehna pasand karta hai, wohi karta hai jo elite bacche behtareen karte hain: peena aur party karna. Usne apni zindagi apne walid aur behnon ko mayoos karte hue guzari hai. Uske walid ke asar se use behtareen taleemi idaron mein bheja gaya tha, lekin usne kabhi parwah nahi ki aur aksar bunk kar leta ya apne buray bartao ya apne lecturers ka mazak uthane ki wajah se classes se nikaal diya jata tha. Asal ma’anon mein woh ek lafanga hai. Ek ameer lafanga. Woh kaam nahi karta aur apna din ya toh sote hue, peete hue, party karte hue ya idhar udhar masti karte hue guzarta hai. Lekin dil se woh bura nahi hai, warna woh hamara hero nahi hota. Aur na hi woh apni heroines ko paata agar woh aisa hi rehta. Uski zindagi mein ek zabardast tabdeeli aayegi jab uska ta’aruf uske nizam se hota hai, ZULFIQAR.



Aur yeh na bhoolte hue ke unke walid Zaviyar Baloch, jo ke CEO aur Board ke President hain. Woh ek sakht geer baap hain jo apne bachon ko apne business empire ko aage badhane ke zariye ke taur par dekhte hain. Unki apne bete Aliyar se bohat zyada umeedein thi, lekin uske expectations par poora na utarne ki wajah se, unki behnein ab uski jagah company chalane mein madad kar rahi hain. Dil se unhe ab bhi ummeed hai ke unka beta sudhar jayega aur business empire ko sambhalega. Lekin iss waqt woh koi mauka nahi chhodte apne bete ko zaleel karne ka aur usse uski ziyada hunarmand behnon se muqaabla karne ka.






Yehi sab hai is update ke liye, isey ta’aruf ka ek tausee karda hissa samjha jaye aur asli kahani Update 2 se shuru hogi. Aur jaisa ke aap dekh sakte hain, kahani ek aise concept par mabni hai jo forum ke readers ke liye naya nahi hai, yani ke system concept. Yeh kahani ka ahem hissa hoga. Aur fikr mat karein, main bas yeh keh kar lollipop nahi de raha hoon ke update aayega, aur phir sirf ta’aruf ka tausee karda version de diya, Update 2 bohat jald aa raha hai kyun ke main usse likh hi raha hoon. Bara-e-karam apne feedback aur tajaveez zaroor dein, main unhein madde nazar rakhunga. Shukriya.

Very nice intro.

 

[Vikashkumar]

Achi shuruwat hai
Bs normal se jayada kuch bhi mat likhna (ladai jagada suspence magic etc).
Keep it up
Waiting For Next Update

 

[Motaland2468]

UPDATE 2 — NIZAM
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Karachi ko aksar shehr-e-roshan kaha jata hai. Us shehr mein ek bohat bara haweli hai jismein ek bohat hi sanjeeda guftagu ho rahi hai, zara dekho.

“Jo bhi tum karo, humein yaqeen karna hai ke hum us se jitni jaldi mumkin ho chutkara pa saken,” ek bohat narmi lekin mazboot awaaz ne kaha, khidki se bahar dekhte hue.

Unke peeche ek shakhs unhein ittifaq se dekhta hai aur kehta hai, “Fikr mat karo, aaj hi wo din hai jab hum us se chutkara paa sakte hain. Agar sab kuch mansuba ke mutabiq hua, to usko bachana namumkin hoga.’”

“Kaisa mansuba?”

“Behen, zyada pareshaan mat ho. Mere paas ek foolproof mansuba hai jo humein kamiyaabi ki guarantee dega aur yakeen karega ke tumhe tumhara haq mile.”

“Shabash, yeh hi umeed thi mujhko tumse, lekin yeh yakeen kar lo ke kuch galat na ho. Aur agar kisi tarah kuch galat ho jaye, to hum mein se kisi ka naam saamne nahi aana chahiye, samjhi!”

“Fikr mat karo Nazia Aapi, tumhe kisi cheez ka dar nahi hona chahiye jab Hania cheezon ko sambhal rahi hai, kyunki kabhi bhi aisa waqt nahi aaya jab maine kisi cheez mein nakami ka samna kiya ho.” Hania ne lagbhag ghamand ke sath kaha.



Nazia: Shandaar

Nazia muskurate hue chali gayi, jo kuch hum itna aksar nahi dekhte, lekin jab bhi woh aise muskurati hai, kuch bada hone ki ummeed rakho.



Hania apne pasandeeda jagah ki taraf chali gayi, jo aam taur par usse milti hai—Baloch Mansion mein, Korangi, Karachi mein waqia library.

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Is dauran, thodi dair ke liye hum dekhte hain ke hamara hero kya kar raha hai. Kahaan hai woh? Haan, yeh raha—hamari kahani ka hero, Aliyar Baloch, ek aazad-fikar shakhs jo apni zindagi apni shiraa’rat ke mutabiq jeena pasand karta hai aur sirf apni shiraa’rat ke mutabiq. Usay kabhi bhi kisi bhi qisam ke control se ghabraahat hoti hai.



Aur jaise hamesha hota hai, yeh raha woh apni behtareen cheez karte hue—hacking. Haan, sahi suna aapne, hacking. Yeh ajeeb baat hai ke woh isme kaafi maharat rakhta hai. Woh sirf apna waqt bekaar ke doston ke saath nahi guzarta, balki logon ke liye odd jobs karke apna paisa kamata hai, jo woh apne khud ke maqsad ke liye istemal karta hai—jaise ke alcohol aur weed kharidne ke liye, jo uska baap kabhi bhi manne ko tayyar nahi hoga.

"Yakin hai ke tum yeh kaam waqt par kar sakoge? Mujhe waqai zaroorat hai ke tum mere badtameez rival se woh files wapas laao," ek budha mard, jo ek nafrat angrez lambe moochhon ke saath tha, ne kaha.

Aliyar: "Yeh to bahut asaan kaam hai, tumhein woh files bahut aasani se mil jayengi. Lekin yaad rakhna, jo raqam humne tay ki thi."

"Jee jee, maine nahi bhoolha. Tum mujhe woh files de do aur main tumhein 5 lakh de dunga jo tumhein chahiye."

Aliyar: "Achi baat hai."

Aur bas, Aliyar ne aasani se us budhe mard ke business rival ke systems mein hack kar liya aur usse woh files de di, jo us rival ke mustaqbil ke plans ka tafseeli bayan thi.

Woh 5 lakh cash le kar Korangi chala gaya, jahan woh rehta hai aur apne doston ke saath ghoomta hai. Uske bekaar doston ka intezaar ek local eatery par ho raha tha.

Woh apne hamesha wafadar saathi, Honda CD70, par eatery par pohnchta hai—aik partner jo har haal mein uske saath raha hai, chahe situation kuch bhi ho.


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“Oye, lagta hai tumne aakhirkar apne yaaron ko yaad karna shuru kiya hai,” ek jawaan ne bhaari awaaz mein kaha.

Aliyar: "Tumhe pata hai ke main paisa kamane ke liye bahar jata hoon taake hum jitna chahein alcohol aur weed khareed saken. Toh itna shor kyun?"

“Usse bhool jao, Aliyar, woh to bekaar hai. Aao baitho aur humare saath chai piyoo,” ek aur aadmi ne kaha, jiska awaaz raspy thi aur jo usi par suit karti thi.

“Mujhe bekaar keh rahe ho, tumhe yeh pata hona chahiye ke maine 11th grade pass kiya hai, theek hai!”

Aliyar: "Iqbal, Hamza, kya tum dono chup reh sakte ho aur mujhe aaram se chai peene do?"

Iqbal, jo bhaari awaaz wala tha, aur Hamza, jo raspy awaaz wala tha, Aliyar ke sabse qareebi doston mein se hain, jinke saath woh apne sab khayalat share karta hai aur apna zyada waqt guzarta hai. Sacchai yeh hai ke yeh dono poori tarah se Aliyar aur uski odd jobs se kamai par dependent hain, jo unhein achi quality ki weed aur alcohol tak access dilati hai, kyunki yeh khud kuch nahi karte—bilkul berozgaar hain aur apne families ke liye niraashajanak hain.

Aliyar, jo ek ameer khandan se taluq rakhta hai (shayad desh ka sabse ameer khandan), in dono se mukhtalif hai. Iqbal aur Hamza aam middle class households se hain aur Aliyar ko unki same area ki wajah se jaante hain. Sirf farq yeh hai ke Aliyar ek gated community mein rehta hai aur yeh dono chhote apartments mein.

Aur yun hi, teenon doston ne apni chai khatam ki aur apni mashhoor badmashiyon ko anjam dene nikal gaye.

Sham ke lagbhag 6 baje the, aur teenon dost ek kaafi secluded area mein ghoom rahe the. Yeh aam baat hai, kyunki yeh unka usual spot hai jahan woh aksar ghoomte hain, aur yeh baat sabko pata hai.




Hamza: "Mujhe lagta hai humein wapas chalna chahiye, kyun ke maine suna hai ke Rafiq Gang ne iss ilaqe ke logon se bhatta lena shuru kar diya hai. Aur mujhe poori yakeen hai ke iss waqt ke aas-paas woh aksar dekhe jaate hain."

Iqbal: "Aisa kuch nahi hai, yeh sirf police ki phailai hui afwaahein hain taake hum jaise log yahaan idhar-udhar ghoomne se baaz aajayein."

Aliyar: "Iqbal theek keh raha hai, Rafiq Gang jaisi koi cheez hoti hi nahi. Aur sach kahun toh Hamza yeh sirf isliye keh raha hai kyun ke woh humare card game mein haarne wala hai aur usse shart ke rules maanne padenge. Isliye woh isse bachne ki koshish kar raha hai, sahi keh raha hoon na, Iqbal?"

Iqbal: "Haan, bilkul sahi keh rahe ho."

Hamza: "Main jhoot nahi bol raha, lekin agar tum mujh par yaqeen nahi karte toh tumhari marzi. Main ja raha hoon, tum yahin raho aur Rafiq ke saath cards khelo. Main toh apni jaan bachane ko tarjeeh dunga."

Aliyar: "Pfft! Hahaha, kya bewakoof hai! Thik hai, apni marzi se jao. Chalo, Iqbal, hum khud hi game poori kar lete hain."

Iqbal: "Bilkul, bhai!"

Jab Aliyar aur Iqbal card game khelte rahe aur game apne anjaam ki taraf badhne laga, toh unhone ek cheekh suni—ek aisi awaaz jo unke liye kaafi pehchaani hui thi. Yeh ek aisi cheekh thi jaise koi shaks shadeed takleef mein ho.

Aliyar aur Iqbal ne us awaaz ko pehchaan liya aur foran us cheekh ki taraf bhage. Wahan pohnch kar unhone dekha ke Hamza dard se bilbila raha tha, jaise uske ghutnon par goli lagi ho. Khoon har taraf phail raha tha, aur yeh manzar haqeeqat mein dekhne mein bahut hi haibatnaak tha. Hamza dard aur khoon ke zyada behne ki wajah se behosh ho chuka tha.

Jab woh wahan pohnche, toh unhone dekha ke kam az kam 20-30 aadmi har tarah ke hathiyaar uthaye khade the—pistolein, lathiyan, paanein, aur kulhaadiyan—unke haath mein sab kuch tha. Unka sarbarah nazar aa raha tha ek bahut hi bada aadmi, shayad 6’5 ya 6’6 lambai ka, jo kaafi muscular bhi tha. Uske chehre par ek manhoos muskurahat thi, jaise usse doosron ko takleef dene mein khud maza aata ho. Waakai ghin aane wali baat thi.

Iqbal having looked at this all practically pissed himself and ran off taking the only mode of transport with him Aliyar’s Honda CD70. This of course left Aliyar by himself to deal with this situation. What a shit friend Iqbal is.

Isse beparwaah, Aliyar ne gusse se kaha, "Yeh kahan se aaye ho! Aur meri dost ke saath tumne kya kiya hai?"




Jaisa ke umeed thi, hathiyaar le kar chale aaye mardon ki gang, unke leader ke saath, hasne lage jaise unhone koi bohot hi funny joke suna ho.

Aliyar: "Maine ek sawaal kiya hai aur mujhe jawab chahiye!"

“Arrey beta! Tumhari bakwas ko main sarahunga. Mera naam Raja hai aur main Rafiq Gang ka commander hoon aur yeh mere log hain.”

Aliyar: “Theek hai, tumne mere sawaal ka ek hissa jawab diya. Ab yeh batao ke tum yeh sab kyun kar rahe ho?”

Raja: “Bohat simple hai, hum is area ke malik hain aur hum nahi chahte ke koi yahaan ghuse.”

Aliyar: “Tum log paise bhi maangte ho, to tum humse paise le sakte the. Tumhe asal mein kya chahiye?”

Raja: “Chatur ladke, tum bilkul sahi keh rahe ho. Dekho, mujhe tumhe maarne bheja gaya tha aur isi liye main yahaan hoon.”

Aliyar: “Mujhe maarna? Tumhe kisne bheja?”

Raja: “Yeh nahi bata sakta. Hamare kaam mein hum apne customers ko nahi batate, hum unki anonymity ko bahut seriously lete hain.”

Aliyar: “Theek hai! Yeh khatam karte hain, mere paas aur bhi kaam hain.”

Raja: “Kaam? Tum zinda nahi rahoge aur kisi aur cheez ko karne ke liye!”

Aliyar: “Hansi ki baat hai! Main yeh khatam kar ke jaake jaise aam tor par, ek bada sa weed puff karunga.”

Random Goon: “Boss, mujhe lagta hai woh abhi drugs ke effect mein hai.”

Raja: No problem lads just get rid of him so we can collect our money!

Aliyar aur Rafiq Gang ke members ke darmiyan baat cheet ke baad, goons jo melee weapons le kar aaye the aage badhe, jabke jo log guns le kar aaye the woh ruk gaye aur dekhte rahe. Rafiq Gang apni brutality ke liye mashhoor hai aur apni prey ko physically torture karke maarna pasand karti hai, isliye melee weapons ki preference hai. Gunmen tabhi intervene karte hain jab target ko jaldi se khatam karna zaroori ho, lekin aam taur par melee weapons wale hi kafi hote hain.

Aliyar ne apne aap ko theek stance mein le kar fists utha diye, dushman ka samna karne ke liye tayar ho gaya.

Aur waqt zaya kiye bina, chhe aadmi jo sticks aur wrenches le kar aaye the, Aliyar par jumlaa kar diye, use apne hamle se bachne ka waqt nahi diya. Jaise ki umeed thi, unhone aasani se Aliyar ko overpower kar liya aur apne weapons se use maarna shuru kar diya. Hairaan kun baat yeh thi ke maarne ke bawajood, Aliyar apne paon par bana raha, thoda jhujhila raha tha lekin ab bhi khada tha.

Chot lagne ke baad, Aliyar ek nasha ki halat mein jhoolte hue, bekaar ke punches maara jo khud bhi sahi se target nahi kar paaye. Jo punches lag bhi gaye, unka asar bahut kam tha, isliye goons ko zyada nuksan nahi hua.

Goons ne uske ird-gird ek circle bana liya aur peetne ko aur bhi zyada tez kar diya, jisse Aliyar zameen par gir gaya.

*Thud

Aliyar, jo ab thoda khoon se bhara hua tha, apni taqat ikattha karke dubara se khada hone ki koshish karta hai aur purani jazbaat ke saath apne haath phailaata hai. Lekin is baar bhi uska koi asar nahi hota, aur woh ek aur baar zameen par gir jata hai, is baar aur bhi zyada khoon se latpat. Goons ne uske phir se uthne ka intezaar nahi kiya aur uske jism par paon se stamp karne aur sir par zor se maarne lag gaye, bahut hi brutal tareeke se. Uske jeene ki koi umeed nahi thi. Yeh log aam goons nahi the; yeh professionals the jo apne boss ki tarah bade aur powerful the. Aliyar ke jeene ka koi chance nahi tha. Unhone apni baziyaati hamlaavari jaari rakhi jab tak Aliyar mein koi movement nahi dekha. Yeh dekh kar yeh asaan hai ke Aliyar bilkul mar chuka tha. Usne wahi pe jaan de di.



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Koi aur random goon: “Boss, mujhe lagta hai woh mar chuka hai. Ab hum uske saath kya karein?”

Raja: “Uski body ki photo le lo aur hamare naye customers ko bhej do. Phir uske jism ko kisi gutter mein fenk do aur yaad rakhna, uske dost ki body ko nazdeek ke hospital bhejna, kyunki hume sirf Aliyar ko maarne ke liye paisa mila tha.”

Raja ke goons ne uske hukmon ki paabandi se amal kiya aur jo bhi unse ummeed thi, woh kiya.

Photo kam se kam teen mukhtalif angles se bheji gayi. Hamza ko hospital mein admit kar diya gaya aur uski family ko hospital mein admission ke baare mein inform kar diya gaya.

Jo kuch bacha tha woh Aliyar ki body ka disposal tha, jiske liye goons ne faisla kiya ke Aliyar ke laash ko Malir River mein fenk denge.

Body dispose karne ke baad, goons apne base ki taraf wapas chal diye.

Aliyar ki body puri tarah paani mein doob kar nadi ke gehraiyon mein chali gayi, shayad yeh ek zindagi ke tragic end ki nishani thi jo ek successful aur prosperous life ban sakti thi. Is marhale par jaan ke chali jana, usse bas ek aise prodigal son ke roop mein yaad rakha jayega jo kabhi apne potential ko nahi samajh paya aur apni zindagi ko bekaar ki chizon mein barbad kar diya. Yeh sach mein ek bekaar ki zindagi thi.



Lekin...

Lekin... agar yeh sach mein uski zindagi ka aakhri manzil hoti, to woh hamari kahani ka hero nahi hota. Aisa nahi hai ki yeh uska aakhri raasta hai. Dekho, woh itna bada hai aur uske liye maqsad hai jo kisi bhi tareekh mein ab tak nahi dekha gaya. Khuda ki marzi hai ki woh bada karega. Woh ek din aisi greatness haasil karega jo sirf King of Kings ke laayak hai.

Lekin, kaise? It’s simple.

Ek awaaz Aliyar ke laash ke andar se sunayi deti hai, jo sirf Aliyar ko sunayi deti thi (jab woh jaagta tha, jo filhal nahi hai, isliye yeh aapko bataya ja raha hai).

[Nizam ZULFIQAR has been activated]








Filhal yahi hai. Shukriya mere update ko padhne ke liye. Mujhe umeed hai ke aapko yeh pasand aayi hogi, aur main aapke feedback aur suggestions ki qadr karunga. Main apni vision ke mutabiq jo bhi suggestions honge, unhe implement karne ki puri koshish karunga. Shukriya!

Bhai sabse pahle aapko story shuru karne ki bahut badhai.aapke likhne ke tarike se pata chal raha hai ki story kitni shaandar hogi ek iltiza hai story par koyi kaise bhi comment kare aap story band nahi karenge Jo dil mein hai Dil khol kar likhe or regular update dete rahe Mera full support aapke sath hai dua karta hu story shaandar jaandaar rahe best off luck bhai

 

[yasasvi4]

UPDATE 3 - NAZIA AUR HANIA KA TAKEOVER​

Is waqt Baloch Mansion mein…


Zaviyar: Aliyar abhi tak wapas nahi aaya, usay itna waqt kyun lag raha hai?


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Sania: Ji, aap bilkul theek keh rahe hain. Woh kahaan ho sakta hain?



Nazia: Woh apne doston ke saath hamesha ki tarah badmaashiyon mein masroof hoga.

Hania: Aapi bilkul sahi keh rahi hain.



Sania: Nahi, yeh sach nahi hai. Woh hamesha waqt par wapas aa jata hai, aur abhi raat ke 10 baj rahe hain. Yeh uski aam aadat nahi hai. Main kaafi pareshan hoon.

Nazia: Aray Aapi, aap bina wajah fikar kar rahi hain. Woh jaldi wapas aa jayega. Shayad waqt ka pata nahi chala.



Zaviyar: Nahi, Nazia, Sania bilkul sahi keh rahi hai. Yeh uske liye aam baat nahi hai. Woh calls aur messages ka jawab bhi nahi de raha, jo woh hamesha karta hai. Main pareshan hoon ke shayad kuch galat ho gaya ho.

Sania: Abbu, mujhe lagta hai ke humein police se baat karni chahiye.

Zaviyar: Haan, tum bilkul sahi keh rahi ho. Mere achhe connections hain AIG ke saath, woh humein madad kar sakte hain.

Nazia: Abbu, iski zaroorat nahi hai. Woh apne doston ke saath awaragardi kar raha hoga. Aap bina wajah pareshan ho rahe hain.

Hania: Haan, Abbu, Nazia bilkul theek keh rahi hai.

Lekin unki koshishon ke bawajood, Zaviyar ne AIG ko call karne ka faisla kiya. AIG ne Zaviyar ko bharosa dilaya ke Aliyar mil jayega.

Zaviyar ke contacts ke zariye ek search party Aliyar ko dhoondhne ke liye bheji jaati hai. Hania aur Nazia sir dard ka bahaana bana kar apne kamron mein chali jaati hain.

Rabia poori guftagu ke dauran khamosh rahi, shayad woh itni hairaan thi ke kuch keh nahi paayi. Uska pyaara bhai, jo uska sabse achha dost bhi tha, laapata tha, aur kisi ko uske patah nahi tha.




Sania aur Zaviyar, jo ghar ke sabse baday thay, ghar se nikal kar AIG ke saath search party mein shaamil hone gaye thay.

Shayad ab tak aadhi raat ho chuki thi, aur search party ne poore ilaaqe ko chhaan maara tha, lekin unhein koi suraag nahi mil saka.

Sania ne samajhdari se yaad kiya ke unhein uske doston ko call karna chahiye. Unhon ne Iqbal ko kai dafa call kiya lekin usne phone nahi uthaya. Phir unhon ne Hamza ko call kiya, pehli dafa koi jawab nahi aaya, aur doosri dafa kisi ne phone uthaya jo Hamza nahi tha—shayad ek nurse thi. Sania ki nurse ke saath guftagu se yeh maloom hua ke Hamza goli lagne ki wajah se zakhmi ho gaya tha. Yeh sun kar aur Iqbal ke phone na uthane par Sania ko sabse buri sochne par majboor ho gayi.

Ab khaufzada Zaviyar aur Sania ne AIG ko Hamza ke saath huay waqia ke baare mein ittila di aur AIG se darkhwast ki ke woh kuch karein.

AIG faisla karta hai ke unhein sabse bura haal maan kar tayyari karni chahiye. Woh apni force ko hidayat deta hai ke sab hospitals se raabta karein aur mumkin hai ke kisi lash ki talaash karni parhe. Yeh sunkar Zaviyar aur Sania aur bhi zyada daar gaye.

Aur zyada waqt guzar chuka tha, aur ab subah ke 4 baj rahe thay. AIG ne socha ke shayad iss waqt kuch milna mushkil ho, aur woh talaashi rokne hi wala tha ke usse ek officer ka phone aaya. Officer ne ittila di ke Malir dariya ke paas khoon mein lathpath kapde mile hain jo Aliyar ke wohi kapde hain jo usne apne gaib hone se pehle pehne thay.



AIG, Zaviyar, Sania, aur baqi search party ke log site par pohanch gaye aur ye tasdeeq ho gayi ke yeh waqai mein Aliyar ke kapde hain. Yeh nishchit kiya gaya ke Aliyar ko qatal kar diya gaya tha aur shayad uska jism dariya mein phenk diya gaya, kapde chhod diye gaye the.

AIG ne qatal ki tajweez ke liye ek tahqiqat ka hukam diya aur Zaviyar aur Sania ko ghar jaane ke liye keh diya.

Un dono ke liye, wahan unka duniya khatam ho gayi. Waqt jaise ruk gaya tha, unki aankhon se aansoon beh rahe the. Zaviyar ne ek mazboot shakhsiyat dikhayi taake apni beti Sania ko bekaar na mehsoos ho. Lekin Sania apne aansoon ko nahi rok paayi; usne behad royaa, kyunke Aliyar uske liye ek apne hi beta jaisa tha—shakal se sharaarati, lekin dil se meherban.

Waqt guzarta gaya, lekin Zaviyar apne eklaute bete ke inteqal ka gham bardasht nahi kar paaye, jiske natije mein unhe ek bara heart attack hua jo unki maut ka sabab bana. Isse Baloch Group of Companies ki zimmedari Nazia ke haath mein aa gayi, jo ab CEO aur President of the Board ban gayi. Iska matlab tha ke saari power ab uske paas thi. Woh company ki eklauti aabroo aur zimmedari ban gayi thi.



Ghar ka mahol kharab ho gaya tha kyunki ghar ke dono mard ek ke baad ek wafat pa gaye the. Rabia aur Sania ne mushkilat ke bawajood apne aap ko sambhal liya aur apne rozmarra ke kaam ko pehle ki tarah chalane ki koshish ki. Hania aur Nazia, dono hi, is sab se bilkul beparwah thi, lekin unhone achi tarah se dikhaya ke woh dil se dukhi hain. Lekin yeh sab dekh kar yeh samajh aata hai ke yeh unke liye shayad sabse behtareen nateeja tha. Nazia CEO bani aur Hania COO.

Kitna waqt guzar chuka hai? Main kahunga, behtareen halat mein ek hafte ke aas-paas. Theek hai, magar hamara main character kahaan hai? Yeh accha sawaal hai, jiska jawab agle update mein diya jayega. Hamne ye tay kar liya hai ke main character maut ka shikaar nahi hua, to phir woh kahaan ho sakta hai? Uske kapde mile hain, lekin uska jism kahin nahi mila. Agar woh zinda hai, to ab woh kahaan hai aur kis haal mein hai? Uske jazbat kya hain?



Thank you for reading, I agree that the Update is a little short but I felt that it is better to write the smaller parts first and then worry about the larger details in the next Update as we’ll cover the whereabouts of Aliyar and his way forward.

Story narration well satteled..... story writing nice..... updates count very good and hope aap aage bhi yahi constantly banye rakhnge updates ka jaljala.... waiting for your next update

 

[Somahvii]

Achi shuruwat hai
Bs normal se jayada kuch bhi mat likhna (ladai jagada suspence magic etc).
Keep it up
Waiting For Next Update

Haan, mujhe maaloom hai, main bhi chahta hoon ke kahani fitri taur par aagey barhe.

 

[Somahvii]

Bhai sabse pahle aapko story shuru karne ki bahut badhai.aapke likhne ke tarike se pata chal raha hai ki story kitni shaandar hogi ek iltiza hai story par koyi kaise bhi comment kare aap story band nahi karenge Jo dil mein hai Dil khol kar likhe or regular update dete rahe Mera full support aapke sath hai dua karta hu story shaandar jaandaar rahe best off luck bhai

Bohat shukriya, main apni poori koshish karunga ke aap sab ko kahani utni hi pasand aaye jitna mujhe ise likhne mein maza aata hai.

 

[Somahvii]

Story narration well satteled..... story writing nice..... updates count very good and hope aap aage bhi yahi constantly banye rakhnge updates ka jaljala.... waiting for your next update

Main apni poori koshish karunga ke lagataar updates milti rahain aur inhe jitni jaldi ho sake, nikaalne ki koshish karunga.

 

[urc4me]

Romanchak updates. Jar jamin aur Joru yeh teeno afat ki jade hai. Pratiksha agle rasprad update ki

 

[Somahvii]

Romanchak updates. Jar jamin aur Joru yeh teeno afat ki jade hai. Pratiksha agle rasprad update ki

Aap bilkul sahi keh rahe hain aur kabhi kabhi lalach humare andar se buraai nikaal laati hai, chahe andar se hum itne bure na bhi hon.

 

[Somahvii]

There will be a Mega Update coming out today. If you have any inputs please don’t feel shy not to mention as I will make sure anything helpful be included within the story.