Romance Bepanaah Ishq (Completed)

[Jaguaar]

करन की मेहनत रंग लाया इतना खोजबीन करने के बाद आखिर रेकी करने वाला पकड़ा ही गया वाह भाई क्या दिमाग की गोटी गुमाया हैं सक कि सुई सीधा रंजीत और राजेश पर टिका दिया हैं। अभी तो करन को और भी पापड़ बेलने हैं मुजरिम जो इतना चतुर हैं दो चतुर कौवा आपस में लड़ मारे अपना यहां किया कोई नहीं।

राज ख़ुद को सोनल की नजरों में गिरने से बचाने के लिए उसके सामने नहीं आ रहा है और सोनल गिल्टी फिल कर ख़ुद को ही कोस रही हैं। कोस ने देता हु उसे यहां भी अपना काम नहीं


मैन मुद्दा ये हैं करन चाला था बीबी से गुपचुप गुटरगू करने लेकिन बेटे ने सारा मज़ किरकिरा कर दिया विचारे के अरमान धारा धारा का धारा रहा गया। ज्वाला भड़कते ही टांडा पानी पड़ गया। सुतली बम फटने से पहले ही फुच हों गया।

अप्रतिम

Thank you

 

[Jaguaar]

To mahashy raghu tapori ne sab ugal diya vichara karta bhi kiya dane dane ka motaj tha dane ko jugar me kar baitha gunha ab bhugat raha hain kiya dhoya hain mast dhobi banke dhay patak dhay patak kar chithde chithde kar diya tb jakr kahi muhn khola dhit kahi ka pahle bol deta to itni kutai na hota khair bola aur raj bhi khola sajish karta ka pata bhi diya kya rajesh aur ranjeet pakda jayega nepu vo to chtur kavoa hai kahi na kahi se nikal bhagega.

Excellency your highness
Aprtim

Thank you

Aap likhte mast ho. Aur shabd bhi mast chunte ho.

 

[Jaguaar]

Bhai update???

Thoda wait karlo

 

[Dhaal Urph Pradeep]

Update 56​

Thodi hi der mein Raj aur Yash uss jagah pahonch jaate hai jaha ka address Raj ke mobile mein aaya thaa.

Yash: Abee main tujhe kab se puch raha hu tu batata kyo nhi. Tujhe kispe shak hai aur tujhe yaha ka address kisne diya.

Raj: Tu kuch der shant nhi reh sakta kyaa. Kab se bak bak kiye jaa raha hai. Ekbaar unhe pakad lu phir apne aap pata chal jayega.

Yash: Par tu yaha dhundega kaisee. Yaha toh kitne saare ghar hai.

Raj: Yeh tune ki kaam ki baat. Kuch toh sochna padegaa.

Abhi Yash kuch bolta tabhi usko waha ek gaadi aate hue dikhti hai.

Yash: Abee woh dekh ek gaadi aarahi hai.

Raj: Yehh toh bhaiyaa ki gaadi hai. Par woh yaha kaisee. Unhone toh mera call tak nhi uthaya.

Idher Karan jab Raj aur Yash ko waha dekhta hai toh woh bhi hairaan hojaata hai.

Karan: Tumdono yaha kyaa kar rahe ho.

Raj: Hum toh yaha ek jaruri kaam se aaye the par aap yaha kya kar rahe ho aur aapka phone kaha hai kab se try kar raha hu aap utha hi nhi rahe.

Karan: Aree main toh yaha tere kaam se hi aaya tha aur mera phone silent hai. Par kisliye call kar raha tha.

Raj: Mera kaam matlab. Aur main toh aapko yehi bulane ke liye call kar raha tha.

Karan: Matlabb.

Yash: Matlab yeh bhaiya ke isse pata nhi kaise yeh pata chala hai ke Sonal ka accident karne wala yaa karwane wala yaha chupaa hua hai aur yeh usse pakadne aaya hai.

Karan Yash ki baat sunke shock hojaata hai.

Karan: Tujhe kaise pata chala woh kaun hai aur yaha chupaa hua hai.

Yash: Main bhi kab se ye puche jaa raha hu par yeh batata hi nhi.

Raj: Woh bhaiya mujhe ek jan pe shak tha. Aur kuch din pehle hi meri mulakat ek detective se hui thi toh maine usko uss aadmi ke baare mein sabkuch pata lagane ko kaha tha. Toh abhi usne mujhe msg karke yaha ka address diya.

Karan: Aur tujhe kispe shak hai.

Raj: Ranjeet pe. Kyoki usne pehle bhi mere upar jaanleva humla kiya hai toh hosakta hai issbaar usne Sonal pe attack kardiya.

Karan: Hosakta hai nhi. Usi ne kiya hai. Kal raat tera pichha karne wala aadmi pakda gaya tha aur aaj subah usko 2 dande maare toh sab kuch boldiya hai aur usne dono baap bete ka sketch bhi banwa diya tha aur usine humhe yaha ka address diya hai.

Par mujhe ek baat samaj nhi aarahi hai jisse hum police wale itne time se nhi khoj paaye usse tere iss detective ne kaise khoj nikala.

Raj: Bhaiya actually iss detective ne Ranjeet ko ekbaar yaha tak apni gaadi mein lift di isiliye usko pata chala aur usne mujhe bata diya.

Karan: Toh chal chalke dekhte hai uss Ranjeet ko.

Yash: Par bhaiya itne saare ghar mein se kaunse ghar mein jaayenge.

Karan: Wohlog kaunse ghar mein honge yeh mujhe pata hai. Chalo ab.

Phir sablog Karan ke saath ek ghar ke paas aate hai.

Karan: Tumdono yehi ruko. Hosakta hai uske paas koi hatiyaar ho. Inspector apni position lo. Aur dekho ghar ke andar jaane ka koi dusra raasta hai kyaa.

Inspector aur Hawaldaar ghar ke charo taraf faill jaate hai aur achhi tarah se check karte hai toh unhe pichhe ki taraf se ek darwaza dikhta hai.

Inspector ishare se bolta Karan ko yeh baat bolta hai. Toh Karan uss taraf jaata hai.

Karan: Ek kaam karo 2 hawaldaar yaha ruko agar woh yaha se bhaagne ki koshish kare toh unhe pakadlena.

Phir sab aage ke darwaaze ki taraf jaate hai.

Karan: Hawaldaar(Jo Civil dress mein tha) bell bajao aur dekho wohlog hi hai yaa nhi.

Hawaldaar bell bajata hai toh kuch der baad ek aadmi gate kholta hai.

Aadmi: Ji kahiyee.

Aadmi ki awaaz sunte hi Karan bahar aata hai toh dekhta hai yeh koi aur aadmi hai.

Woh aadmi police dekhte hi thoda ghabra jaata hai.

Aadmi: Jii sahab kahiyee. Kyaa hua hai.

Karan: Aadmi ko pakadte hue. Inspector pure ghar ki achhe se talashi lo. Aur dekho woh dono kamine kaha hai.

Inspector hawaldaar ke saath jhatt se andar ghusta hai aur ghar ko achhe se check karne lagta hai.

Karan: Ghar mein aur kaun kaun hai.

Aadmi: Sahab ghar mein aur koi nhi hai. Main iss ghar ka caretaker hu. Yaha main aur meri biwi rehte hai jo market gayi hai.

Karan: Sach sach bata warna tu bhi jail ke andar jaayega.

Aadmi: Sahab main kyo jhoot bolunga. Agar aapko yakeen nhi hai toh aap dekh lijiye.

Tabhi Inspector bahar aata hai aur bolta hai sir yaha koi nhi hai. Pura ghar khaali hai sirf ek kamre mein kuch kapde hai aur kitchen mein thoda khaane ka samaan hai.

Aadmi: Main sach keh raha hu Sahab. Yaha sirf main aur meri biwi hi rehte hai jo iss ghar ki dekhbhal karte hai.

Karan: Yeh ghar kiska hai aur yaha ka maalik kaha hai.

Aadmi: Sir yeh ghar Sharma Sahab ka hai aur woh toh london mein rehte hai 6 months mein 1 baar aate hau family ke saath.

Raj: Par bhaiyaa uss aadmi ne yeh ghar aur mere detective ne toh yehi area bola tha.

Karan: Yehi toh samaj nhi aaraha hai. Shayad uss aadmi ne mujhe jhoothi khabar di hai. Phir Karan Rajesh aur Ranjeet ki photo uss aadmi ko dikhata hai aur puchta hai.

Karan: Kyaa inndono ko yaha kabhi dekha hai pichle kuch mahino mein yaa dino mein.

Woh aadmi uss photo ko dhyaan se dekhta hai phir bolta hai.

Aadmi: Haa sahab. Iss budhhe aur iss jawaan ladke ko maine inn kuch dino mein bahot baar dekha hai yaha. 2-3 baar toh iss ghar ke aaspaas bhi ghumte hue dekha hai. Maine ekbaar pucha bhi tha toh bola tha isko iss area mein ek ghar lena hai toh wohi dekh raha hai.

Phir Karan Raghu ka photo dikhata hai aur puchta hai isko dekha hai.

Aadmi thikk se dekha hai aur bolta hai haa sahb 1-2 baar inn dono ke saath isko bhi dekha hai.

Inspector: Matlab sir woh Raghu sach bol raha tha. Ranjeet ne usko jaanmuzz ke yeh ghar dikhaya hoga jisse agar Raghu kabhi pakda jaaye toh humhe ghumra kar sake. Aur Raj ji ke detective ne jo iss Ranjeet ko lift di thi woh bhi sach hi hai.

Karan: Hmmm. Saale ne bahot hi chalaki se issbaar yeh sab kiya hai. Usko pata tha hum kaise bhi karke usske baare mein pata laga lenge.

Yash: Bhaiyaa hum toh wapas ghum fhirr ke phir se wahi aagaye jaha se start kiya tha.

Raj: Nhii Yashh. Pehle humhe pata nhi tha yeh sab kisne kiya hai par ab humhe pata hai.

Karan: Haa Yash. Aur abhi bhi humare paas ek option hai unn tak pahonchne kaa.

Dono: Kaun sa option.

Karan ekbaar uss aadmi ko dekhta hai aur phir waha se wapas apne car ki taraf aata hai aur waha bolta hai.

Karan: Inspector uss aurat ke baare mein kyaa pata chala. Kab uski rihaai horahi hai. Uska Beta aur Pati usko apne paas jarur bulayenge aur tabhi saalon ko pakdenge.

Inspector: Sir kal hi uski rihaai hai.

Karan: Greattt. Ek kaam karo uske pichhe ek lady constable ko uske pichhe laga do civil dress mein. Aur usko boldena ek pal ke liye bhi woh uski nazro se ojhall naa ho paaye. Kal unn saalon ko pakad ke rahenge.

Inspector: Yes Sirr.

Karan: Raj Yash ab tumdono jaao. Main bhi nikalta hu.

Phir sab waha se nikal jaate hai.

Raat ko jab Raj ghar aata hai toh woh dekhta hai aaj Sonal apne kamre mein naa hoke bahar hall mein sabke saath baithi hui hai.

Sonal ko aise sabke saath baat karte dekh kar Raj ko achha lagta hai. Woh wahi khada Sonal ko haste muskurate dekh raha tha tabhi Smita bolti hai.

Smita: Aree Raj aagaya. Waha kyo khada hai.

Smita ki awaaz sunke Sonal darwaaze ki taraf dekhti hai toh usko waha Raj khada dikhata hai. Itne dino baad Raj ko dekh kar Sonal ko ek ajeeb si khushi milti hai par woh iss khushi ka matlab samaj nhi paati. Par iss khushi ke saath saath usko thoda dukhh bhi hota hai uske behaviour ko leke.

Sonal: Mann mein. Aaj itne dino baad Raj mere saamne aaye hai. Aaj toh inse maafi maang hi lungi jisse mere dil mein jo guilt hai woh durr hojayega. Warna yeh guilt mujhe chainn se jeene nhi de raha hai.

Idher Sonal Raj ko dekh kar yeh soch rahi thi udher Raj Sonal ki taraf dekh bhi nhi raha tha jisse Sonal ko thoda bura lagta hai par filhal woh iss chiz ko ignore kardeti hai.

Nandini: Raj jaldi se jao fresh hojao. Dinner ready hai.

Raj: Ji bhabhi.

Phir Raj apne kamre mein chala jaata hai aur Sonal usko jaate hue dekhte rehti hai.

Thodi der baad Raj fresh hoke nichhe aata hai aur dinner karne baith jaata hai aur chup chaap dinner karne lagta hai. Par itne waqt mein usne ekbaar bhi Sonal ki taraf naahi dekha tha aur naahi usse baat karne ki koshish ki thi. Jo Sonal ko lag rhaa tha uske dil mein ek anjaana sa dard paida kar rahi thi jisko woh samaj nhi parahi thi. Par asal baat toh yeh thi ke jabse Raj ghar aaya tha woh mauka milte hi Sonal ko mann bharr ke dekh leta tha aur Sonal ki nazar uspe parti uske pehle hi apni nazre hata leta tha.

Dinner khatam hojaane ke baad Raj hall mein baith jaata hai aur Sonal ko bina pata chale usko dekh raha tha. Thodi der baad Sonal bhi apni wheelchair jo ab woh khud hi chala paa rahi thi usko leke Raj ke paas aajati hai.​

Sonal ke dil panshi ban udne ko utaru hain lekin raj bahu apni image sudharne me lage hain sahi hain sonal apne galti se pashta rahi hain aur raj bahu luka chhupi khelte huye chup chhup chhup kar dekh rahe hain bada hi gajab najara hain do hansho ke jode ka ek sab kuch bhul chuka hai dusara un yado ko sanjo ka ji raha hain.

Kuch toh sochna padegaa.

Daya kuch to sochna padega lo ji soch liya ab jo ukhadna hai ukhad lo jaguaar ji bhi vilan bhi mast chokha dhundh kar laye hain ek sher to svasher hain aise jal bichha kar dav phaik rha hain jaise chosar ka mahir khiladi ho supar villan mera pasandida kirdar banta ja raha hain.

Aur ek ummid karta hu apki agli story pura ka pura jasusi ho

Shandar update aprtim

 

[Jaguaar]

Sonal ke dil panshi ban udne ko utaru hain lekin raj bahu apni image sudharne me lage hain sahi hain sonal apne galti se pashta rahi hain aur raj bahu luka chhupi khelte huye chup chhup chhup kar dekh rahe hain bada hi gajab najara hain do hansho ke jode ka ek sab kuch bhul chuka hai dusara un yado ko sanjo ka ji raha hain.

Daya kuch to sochna padega lo ji soch liya ab jo ukhadna hai ukhad lo jaguaar ji bhi vilan bhi mast chokha dhundh kar laye hain ek sher to svasher hain aise jal bichha kar dav phaik rha hain jaise chosar ka mahir khiladi ho supar villan mera pasandida kirdar banta ja raha hain.

Aur ek ummid karta hu apki agli story pura ka pura jasusi ho

Shandar update aprtim

Thank you

 

[Sauravb]

Update 57​

Sonal waha baith baith Raj ke akele hone ka intezaar kar rahi thi aur kuch der mein hi Raj waha akela baitha rehta hai.

Sonal: Rajjjj.

Raj Sonal ki awaaz sunke uski taraf dekhta hai toh paata hai Sonal nazre nichhe kiye hue thi.

Raj: Haa bolo.

Sonal: Woh actually mujhe aapse kuch kehna tha.

Raj: Haa bolo.

Sonal: Wohh actually woh main aapse woh kehna chahti thi ke woh...

Raj: Kyaa huaa bolo.

Sonal: Ek gehri saans leke. Woh actually I Am Sorry. Mujhe aapke saath waisa behave nhi karna chahiye tha. Maine aapko galat samaj liya jabki aap meri madad hi kar rahe the. Please mujhe maaf kardijiye. Uss din ke aad mere dil mein ek bahot bada guilt tha ke maine aapko galat samajha jiske baad se main aajtak chain se nhi reh paayi.

Itna sabkuch Sonal ek hi saans mein boldeti hai aur Raj usko bas dekhte reh jaata hai.

Kuch der tak jab Raj ka koi reply nhi aata toh Sonal nazre uthake dekhti hai toh paati Raj usko hi dekhe jaa raha hai.

Sonal: Rajjjj. Rajjjj.

Raj: Haaa. Haaa main sunn raha hu.

Sonal: I Am Sorry.

Raj: Muskurate hue. Tumhe Sorry kehne ki koi jarurat hai. Main samaj sakta hu tumne jaanmuzz ke mujhe wohsab nhi kaha hoga.

Sonal: Actually. Aapne sahi kaha. Meri soch kisi ki wajah se aisi hogyi hai. Woh actually Jaipur mein ek ladka hai Vicky. Jo by mistake papa ka business friend ka beta hai jo mujhe hardin ghurta rehta hai touch karne ke bahane khojta rehta hai. Jiski wajah se mujhe laga aap bhi waise hi hai isiliye maine aapko woh sab boldiya. Once again I Am Sorry.

Raj: Koi baat nhi. Par meri baat maano toh aise ladko ke baare mein apne ghar mein bata dena chahiye kyoki aise ladke mentally disturb hote hai kab kyaa kar jaaye kisi ko pata nhi chalta.

Sonal: Hmm aap sahi keh rahe hai. Par ab shayad aisa kuch nhi hoga. Kyoki main piche 9 mahine se coma mein thi aur Mumbai mein hu toh ab shayad woh mujhe bhul gaya hoga.

Raj: Haa yeh bhi hai. Waisee ab tumhari tabiyat kaisi hai. Sir mein dard nhi hota naa.

Sonal: Tabiyat bilkul thik hai. Bas ek baar yeh pairr thikk hojaaye toh wapas apne ghar chali jaungi.

Raj yeh sunke thoda udaas hojaata hai ke Sonal wapas Jaipur jaana chahti hai.

Raj: Hmm achhi baat hai. Toh aage ka kyaa socha hai.

Sonal: Socha hai Interior design mein masters karu aur phir ek achha sa start up open karu jaha ghar ka interior achhe se design kar saku. Par confuse hu ke kaha se karu.

Raj: Achha hai. Waise tumne jo socha hai woh bahot achha hai aur meri nazar mein ek bahot achha college bhi hai jaha se tum apna master complete karsakti ho.


Sonal: Achhha kaha pe.

Raj: Woh yehi Mumbai mein hai. Tum chaho toh yaha se apni padhai karsakti ho uske baad yaha pe tumhe apne start up ke liye achhe achhe projects bhi mil jaayenge.

Sonal: Thank You. Par yaha mumbai mein akele rehna possible nhi. Aur mummy papa nhi manenge.

Raj: Maine bas idea diya hai. Ab tum dekhlo kyaa karna hai.

Sonal: Okk Good Nightttt.

Raj: Good Nightt.

Phir Sonal waha se apne kamre mein chali jaati hai aur Raj wahi baitha kuch sochne lagta hai.

Tabhi waha Deepak aata hai.

Deepak: Kyaa hua kyaa soch rahe ho Raj beta.

Raj: Sonal ko yaha Mumbai mein rehne ka ek idea toh diya hai par darr hai kahi woh inkaar naa karde.

Deepak: Kyaa idea diya hai.

Raj: Sonal confuse hai masters kaha se karee. Toh maine usko yaha mumbai se karne ke liye idea diya hai. Par woh darr rahi hai gharwalo se itna durr rehne se. Aur kahi usko Jaipur mein hi koi achha college mil gaya toh woh yaha se chali jaayegi.

Deepak: Tum chinta mat karo. Sonal ko jaipur mein koi achha college nhi milega woh yehi rahegi tumlogo ke saath.

Raj: Woh kaisee.

Deepak: Woh main dekhlunga. Tum chinta mat karo. Jaao jaake so jaao.

Raj bhi bina kuch bole waha se chala jaata hai.

Thodi der baad Deepak Sonal ke kamre mein aata hai.

Deepak: Sonal.

Sonal: Papa aap aaiye naa.

Deepak: Kyaa kar rahi ho.

Sonal: Kuch nhi papa. Aap bataiye.

Deepak: Beta main puchna chahta tha ke tumne aage ko leke kya socha hai.

Sonal: Maine interior design mein hi masters karne ka socha hai. Par confuse hu kaha se karu.

Deepak: Maine itne mahino mein yaha tumhare liye ek achha college dekha hai. Agar tum chaho toh yaha se kar sakti ho. Woh college bahot achha hai.

Sonal: Par papa ghar se itni durr akele kaise rahungi main.

Deepak: Akeli kaha ho beta. Tum yehi Kapoor House mein rehna.

Sonal: Nhi papa yeh achha nhi lagta. Aur phir 1-2 din ke liye toh rehna nhi hai pure 2 saal ke liye rehna hai. Itne din kisi ke ghar mein rehna achha nhi lagta.

Deepak: Woh sab main dekh lunga. Tum bolo kyaa tum yaha padhna chahti ho. Koi force nhi hai bilkul tumhari marzi hai.

Sonal: Main soch ke bataungi papa.

Deepak: Tum aaram se socho. Koi jaldi nhi hai. Good Night.

Sonal: Good Night Papa.

Phir Deepak waha se chala jaata hai aur Sonal Deepak ki baato ko sochne lagti hai. Aur thodi der baad kuch faisla karke woh sone ke liye dheere dheere bed mein aati hai aur aaram se so jaati hai.

Agle din subah sab dining table mein nashta kar rahe the aur issbaar inke saath Sonal bhi thi. Sablog naashta kar rahe the tabhi Karan ko ek call aata hai.

Karan: Haa Bolo.

Saamne se koi kuch bolta hai.

Karan: Thikk hai main abhi aata hu. Yeh bol call cut kardeta hai aur bolta hai. Rajjj chall jaldi.

Raj: Jii bhaiya.

Phir dono aadha naashta karke hi jaldi se jikal jaate hai. Karan ko nikalte dekh unko ajeeb nhi lagta hai par Karan ke saath Raj ko nikalte dekh sabko ajeeb lagta hai.

Vijay: Nandini.

Nandini: Jii Papa.

Vijay: Beta Karan ka toh samaj aata hai par woh Raj ko apne saath kyo le gaya.

Nandini: Pata nhi papa. Unhone mujhe issbaare mein kuch nhi bola.

Sablog phir apna naashta karne lagte hai.

Idher Karan aur Raj gaadi mein jaa rahe the.

Raj: Kya hua bhaiyaa. Hum kaha jaarahe hai.

Karan: Uss Ranjeet ki maa rihaa hone wali hai. Toh woh rihaa hoke jarur apne pati aur bete ke paas hi jaayegi. Aaj unn kamino ko pakad ke hi rahunga.

Raj: Bhaiyaa. Aapko unke saath jo karna hai karlijiyega. Par mujhe uss Ranjeet ko 10 mins ke liye mere hawale kardijiyegaa.

Karan: Ek pal Raj ko dekhta hai aur uski aankho mein jo gussa tha woh dekh kar woh bolta hai. Thikk hai.

Phir dono jaldi se police station ki taraf badh jaate hai.​

Fabulous update...raj aur sonal k bich thoda closeness ayi he

 

[Jaguaar]

Fabulous update...raj aur sonal k bich thoda closeness ayi he

Thank you

 

[Dhaal Urph Pradeep]

Update 57​

Sonal waha baith baith Raj ke akele hone ka intezaar kar rahi thi aur kuch der mein hi Raj waha akela baitha rehta hai.

Sonal: Rajjjj.

Raj Sonal ki awaaz sunke uski taraf dekhta hai toh paata hai Sonal nazre nichhe kiye hue thi.

Raj: Haa bolo.

Sonal: Woh actually mujhe aapse kuch kehna tha.

Raj: Haa bolo.

Sonal: Wohh actually woh main aapse woh kehna chahti thi ke woh...

Raj: Kyaa huaa bolo.

Sonal: Ek gehri saans leke. Woh actually I Am Sorry. Mujhe aapke saath waisa behave nhi karna chahiye tha. Maine aapko galat samaj liya jabki aap meri madad hi kar rahe the. Please mujhe maaf kardijiye. Uss din ke aad mere dil mein ek bahot bada guilt tha ke maine aapko galat samajha jiske baad se main aajtak chain se nhi reh paayi.

Itna sabkuch Sonal ek hi saans mein boldeti hai aur Raj usko bas dekhte reh jaata hai.

Kuch der tak jab Raj ka koi reply nhi aata toh Sonal nazre uthake dekhti hai toh paati Raj usko hi dekhe jaa raha hai.

Sonal: Rajjjj. Rajjjj.

Raj: Haaa. Haaa main sunn raha hu.

Sonal: I Am Sorry.

Raj: Muskurate hue. Tumhe Sorry kehne ki koi jarurat hai. Main samaj sakta hu tumne jaanmuzz ke mujhe wohsab nhi kaha hoga.

Sonal: Actually. Aapne sahi kaha. Meri soch kisi ki wajah se aisi hogyi hai. Woh actually Jaipur mein ek ladka hai Vicky. Jo by mistake papa ka business friend ka beta hai jo mujhe hardin ghurta rehta hai touch karne ke bahane khojta rehta hai. Jiski wajah se mujhe laga aap bhi waise hi hai isiliye maine aapko woh sab boldiya. Once again I Am Sorry.

Raj: Koi baat nhi. Par meri baat maano toh aise ladko ke baare mein apne ghar mein bata dena chahiye kyoki aise ladke mentally disturb hote hai kab kyaa kar jaaye kisi ko pata nhi chalta.

Sonal: Hmm aap sahi keh rahe hai. Par ab shayad aisa kuch nhi hoga. Kyoki main piche 9 mahine se coma mein thi aur Mumbai mein hu toh ab shayad woh mujhe bhul gaya hoga.

Raj: Haa yeh bhi hai. Waisee ab tumhari tabiyat kaisi hai. Sir mein dard nhi hota naa.

Sonal: Tabiyat bilkul thik hai. Bas ek baar yeh pairr thikk hojaaye toh wapas apne ghar chali jaungi.

Raj yeh sunke thoda udaas hojaata hai ke Sonal wapas Jaipur jaana chahti hai.

Raj: Hmm achhi baat hai. Toh aage ka kyaa socha hai.

Sonal: Socha hai Interior design mein masters karu aur phir ek achha sa start up open karu jaha ghar ka interior achhe se design kar saku. Par confuse hu ke kaha se karu.

Raj: Achha hai. Waise tumne jo socha hai woh bahot achha hai aur meri nazar mein ek bahot achha college bhi hai jaha se tum apna master complete karsakti ho.


Sonal: Achhha kaha pe.

Raj: Woh yehi Mumbai mein hai. Tum chaho toh yaha se apni padhai karsakti ho uske baad yaha pe tumhe apne start up ke liye achhe achhe projects bhi mil jaayenge.

Sonal: Thank You. Par yaha mumbai mein akele rehna possible nhi. Aur mummy papa nhi manenge.

Raj: Maine bas idea diya hai. Ab tum dekhlo kyaa karna hai.

Sonal: Okk Good Nightttt.

Raj: Good Nightt.

Phir Sonal waha se apne kamre mein chali jaati hai aur Raj wahi baitha kuch sochne lagta hai.

Tabhi waha Deepak aata hai.

Deepak: Kyaa hua kyaa soch rahe ho Raj beta.

Raj: Sonal ko yaha Mumbai mein rehne ka ek idea toh diya hai par darr hai kahi woh inkaar naa karde.

Deepak: Kyaa idea diya hai.

Raj: Sonal confuse hai masters kaha se karee. Toh maine usko yaha mumbai se karne ke liye idea diya hai. Par woh darr rahi hai gharwalo se itna durr rehne se. Aur kahi usko Jaipur mein hi koi achha college mil gaya toh woh yaha se chali jaayegi.

Deepak: Tum chinta mat karo. Sonal ko jaipur mein koi achha college nhi milega woh yehi rahegi tumlogo ke saath.

Raj: Woh kaisee.

Deepak: Woh main dekhlunga. Tum chinta mat karo. Jaao jaake so jaao.

Raj bhi bina kuch bole waha se chala jaata hai.

Thodi der baad Deepak Sonal ke kamre mein aata hai.

Deepak: Sonal.

Sonal: Papa aap aaiye naa.

Deepak: Kyaa kar rahi ho.

Sonal: Kuch nhi papa. Aap bataiye.

Deepak: Beta main puchna chahta tha ke tumne aage ko leke kya socha hai.

Sonal: Maine interior design mein hi masters karne ka socha hai. Par confuse hu kaha se karu.

Deepak: Maine itne mahino mein yaha tumhare liye ek achha college dekha hai. Agar tum chaho toh yaha se kar sakti ho. Woh college bahot achha hai.

Sonal: Par papa ghar se itni durr akele kaise rahungi main.

Deepak: Akeli kaha ho beta. Tum yehi Kapoor House mein rehna.

Sonal: Nhi papa yeh achha nhi lagta. Aur phir 1-2 din ke liye toh rehna nhi hai pure 2 saal ke liye rehna hai. Itne din kisi ke ghar mein rehna achha nhi lagta.

Deepak: Woh sab main dekh lunga. Tum bolo kyaa tum yaha padhna chahti ho. Koi force nhi hai bilkul tumhari marzi hai.

Sonal: Main soch ke bataungi papa.

Deepak: Tum aaram se socho. Koi jaldi nhi hai. Good Night.

Sonal: Good Night Papa.

Phir Deepak waha se chala jaata hai aur Sonal Deepak ki baato ko sochne lagti hai. Aur thodi der baad kuch faisla karke woh sone ke liye dheere dheere bed mein aati hai aur aaram se so jaati hai.

Agle din subah sab dining table mein nashta kar rahe the aur issbaar inke saath Sonal bhi thi. Sablog naashta kar rahe the tabhi Karan ko ek call aata hai.

Karan: Haa Bolo.

Saamne se koi kuch bolta hai.

Karan: Thikk hai main abhi aata hu. Yeh bol call cut kardeta hai aur bolta hai. Rajjj chall jaldi.

Raj: Jii bhaiya.

Phir dono aadha naashta karke hi jaldi se jikal jaate hai. Karan ko nikalte dekh unko ajeeb nhi lagta hai par Karan ke saath Raj ko nikalte dekh sabko ajeeb lagta hai.

Vijay: Nandini.

Nandini: Jii Papa.

Vijay: Beta Karan ka toh samaj aata hai par woh Raj ko apne saath kyo le gaya.

Nandini: Pata nhi papa. Unhone mujhe issbaare mein kuch nhi bola.

Sablog phir apna naashta karne lagte hai.

Idher Karan aur Raj gaadi mein jaa rahe the.

Raj: Kya hua bhaiyaa. Hum kaha jaarahe hai.

Karan: Uss Ranjeet ki maa rihaa hone wali hai. Toh woh rihaa hoke jarur apne pati aur bete ke paas hi jaayegi. Aaj unn kamino ko pakad ke hi rahunga.

Raj: Bhaiyaa. Aapko unke saath jo karna hai karlijiyega. Par mujhe uss Ranjeet ko 10 mins ke liye mere hawale kardijiyegaa.

Karan: Ek pal Raj ko dekhta hai aur uski aankho mein jo gussa tha woh dekh kar woh bolta hai. Thikk hai.

Phir dono jaldi se police station ki taraf badh jaate hai.​

Ab ayega maja raj aur karn adhe pet hi nikal chuka hai ranjeet aur rajesh ki band bajane kita bajata hain ye suspenc ka vishya hain

Sonal ko jaipur mein koi achha college nhi milega

Sonal jaipur chali gayi to raj aur sonal ki bepanah mohbat adhuri rah jayegi to adhuri na rahe iska tigdam bhidaya gaya aur sonla ko ek sujhav diya gaya jisme auke baap ne bhi apna bharpur sahyog diya ab ye soch ka vishay ban chuka hain sonal kya fhaisla lene wali hain.

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Update 58​

Thodi der mein jab dono police station pahonchte hai toh dekhte hai Ranjeet ki Maa jiska naam Reshma hai uski rihai hochuki hai.

Raj aur Karan gaadi se utar ke uske saamne se andar jaate hai aur woh dono ko gusse se ghurr ke dekh rahi thi par filhal woh koi panga nhi karna chahti thi isiliye chup hi rahi.

Karan: Inspector saari taiyaari hochuki hai.

Inspector: Haa Sir. Ek lady constable civil dress mein ready hai.

Karan: Good. Usko bol do ek pal ke liye bhi isko apne nazro se durr naa karee. Aur sambhal ke rahee.

Inspector: Yes Sir.

Phir woh inspector waha se chala jaata hai.

Idher Reshma police station se nikal ke waha se ek taxi karti hai aur nikal padhti hai apni manzil ki taraf aur uske pichhe pichhe woh lady inspector bhi jaarahi thi.

Takreeban 1 ghante ke baad Reshma taxi ko ek ghar ke bahar rokhti hai. Jo ki aisi jagah mein tha jaha bahot kam log hi rehte the.

Reshma taxi se utar ke charo taraf nazar ghuma ke dekhti hai jab usse yakeen hojaata hai ke koi uske pichhe nhi hai toh woh uss ghar ke darwaaze pe aake bell bajati hai.

Bell bajane ke kuch der baad ek aadmi darwaza kholta hai aur woh Reshm ko dekh kar khush hojaata hai.

Aadmi: Aakhir kaar aayi hi gayi tum.

Reshma: Woh toh aana hi tha. Ab jaldi se andar chalo. Agar kisi ne dekh liya toh musibat hojayegi.

Phir dono ghar ke andar chale jaate hai.

Lady Constable apni location Inspector ko bhej deti hai phir usko call karti hai.

Lady Constable: Sir maine aapko location bhej di hai. Rajesh ko maine dekha hai. Umeed hai Ranjeet bhi andar hi hogaa. Aaplog jaldi se aajaiye.

Inspector: Thikk hai tum waha pe hi raho aur nazar rakho hum thodi der mein aate hai.

Lady Constable: Yes Sir.

Phir Inspector Karan ke paas aata hai.

Inspector: Sir unka pata chal gaya hai. Humhe jaldi nikalna chahiye.

Karan: Greatt jaldi chalo. Aur woh arrest warrant bhi sang le lo.

Inspector: Yess Sir.

Phir Karan aur Raj nikal padhte hai uss location ki taraf. Inspector bhi kuch hawaldaar leke nikal padhta hai.

1 ghante ke baad woh log uss location pe pahonch jaate hai.

Karan: Kaha hai woh log.

Lady Constable: Sirr uss ghar mein hai.

Karan: Thikk hai. Inspector uss ghar ko gherr lo. Aaj woh bachh ke jaana nhi chahiye.

Inspector: Yes Sir.

Phir Inspector Hawaldaar ke saath ghar ko charo taraf se gherr leta hai. Aur Karan ko ishara karta hai.

Karan: Tum(Lady Constable) bell bajao.

Lady Constable bell bajati hai toh thodi der baad Reshma darwaaza kholti hai.

Reshma: Aap kaun aur kisse milna hai.

Lady Constable: Main teri saas. Tujhe sasuraal le jaane aayi hu.

Reshma: Matlab.

Karan: Matlab main samjhata hu.

Reshma Karan ko dekh kar darr jaati hai aur chillane hi wali hoti hai tabhi lady constable usko pakad leti hai aur uske muh ko band kardeti hai.

Karan: Agar chillane ki koshish karegi toh yehi thokk dunga. Phir Karan sabko leke andar aata hai toh dekhta hai Rajesh aur Ranjeet hall mein baithe baate kar rahe hai.

Karan: Karle jitni baate karni hai. Aajke baad tum dono baat karne toh kya kuch bhi karne ki halat mein nhi rahoge.

Rajesh aur Ranjeet Karan Raj aur baaki police walo ko dekh kar darr jaate aur pichhe ke raaste se bhaagne ki koshish karte hai. Jaise hi pichhe ka darwaaza kholte hai police unko pakad leti hai aur ghaseet ke unko andar leke aati hai.

Karan: Bahot bhaag liya aur bahot karli apni manmaani ab marte dum tak sadte rehna jail mein.

Ranjeet: Choro mujhee. Maine kaha choro mujheee.

Raj jo gusse se Ranjeet ko dekhe jaa raha tha woh ishare se hawaldaar ko bolta hai Ranjeet ko chor dene ko.

Jaise hi Hawaldaar Ranjeet ko chorta hai Raj Ranjeet ke seene mein ek laat maarta hai jisse woh durr jaake girta hai.

Raj: Tujhe aaj main nhi chorunga. Tune meri masoom si Sonal ko maarne ki koshish ki. Aaj tujhe yehi zinda gaar dunga. Yeh bol woh Ranjeet ke paas jaake usko maarne lagta hai. Kabhi laat kabhi ghushe usko andhadhun maarne lagta hai.

Raj apna saara gussa Ranjeet ke upar nikalta hai. Ranjeet ki halat kharab hochuki thi. Uske pure chehre se khoon beh raha tha.

Karan jaake Raj ko rokhta hai.

Karan: Bas kar Raj bas kar. Mar jaayega woh. Aur mat maar.

Raj: Mujhe chorr do bhaiyaa. Jaan le lunga main iski. Isne meri Sonal ko maarne ki koshish ki hai. Maardungaa isse main aaj.

Karan: Nhii Rajj. Yeh kaam tera nhi hai. Chorr de usse. Tujhe teri Sonal ki kasam chorr de usse.

Sonal ki kasam sunte hi Raj shant hojaata hai aur Karan ko dekhta hai.

Karan: Shant hojaa mere bhai. Isne jo kiya uski saza isse mil ke rahegi. Par gusse mein tu koi aisa kaam naa kar jisee tere pichhe Choti Mummy Sonal aur hum sab ko dukhh ho.

Karan ki baat sunke Raj puri tarah shant hojaata hai. Phir Karan adhmaare Ranjeet ko uthata hai aur usko ek thappad khinch ke maarta hai jisse woh wapas jaake nichhe girta hai.

Karan: Inspector arrest karo isse.

Inspector aake Ranjeet ko uthata hai aur uske haath mein hatkari lagata hai aur iss dauran Raj usko ghuree jaa raha tha.

Phir Karan aur Raj aage chalne lagte hai. Idher Inspector Ranjeet ko le jaane lagta hai. Par tabhi Ranjeet apni puri chalaki se Inspector se uski gun chinn ke usko dhakka de deta hai aur gun ko Raj ke upar point kardeta hai.

Ranjeet: Rajjjjjjj.

Sablog pichhe ghumm ke dekhte hai toh shock hojaate hai. Karan bhi apni gun nikal ke Ranjeet ke upar point kardeta hai.

Karan: Ranjeet gunn fhekk de. Tu chahe kuch bhi karle par tu bachega nhiii.

Ranjeet: Abeee chuppp. Mujhe pata hai main marunga. Par main akele nhi marunga. Mere sabse bade dushman iss Raj Kapoor ke leke marungaa.

Karan: Ranjeet main bol raha hu gun fhekk dee. Warna yehi tujhe thokk dungaa.

Ranjeet: Gun tu fhekk Karan. Warna tera bhai toh marega hi saath main tu bhi maregaa. Sunaa hai teri haseen biwi ne bete ko janam diya hai. Bechera iss umar hi anaath hogaa. Yeh bol hasne lagta hai.

Karan: Gusse se. Kamine apni hadd mein reh. Warna yehi tujhe zinda garr dungaa.

Ranjeet: Rajjj. Tune mere har kaam mein apni taang adaayi. Main jiss project ko paana chahta usse tu chinn leta. Teri uss kamsin behen se thodi baat kyaa karli tune bharee bazaar mein meri beizaati ki. Tujhe tere parivaar ke saamne beizaat karne ki koshish ki par tere iss bhai ne tujhe bacha liya aur humsab ko jail meim daal diya.

Teri hi shaadi mein tujhe maarne ki koshish ki par tu bachh gaya. Phir baari aayi teri biwi ki. Manna padega badi haseen aur kamsin hai. Par saali woh bhi bachh gayi. Par aaj nhi aaj tujhe maar ke apna badla lunga.

Raj: Ranjeet tune apni gandi jabaan se meri biwi ke baare mein bolke apne din pure karliye. Aaj tu yehi maregaa.

Ranjeet: Jorr jorr se hasta hua. Mujhe pata hai main marunga. Par tujhe maarne ke baad. Yeh bol ek nazar sab pe ghumta hai aur goli chala deta hai.

Par idher ek nhi do goli chalti hai. Ek Ranjeet ke gun se aur dusri Karan ke gun se. Par chikhh sirf 1 jan ki nikalti hai. ​

Plan accha kiya Karan ne ranjeet,Rajesh pakde gaye lekin uske pass se pistol chin lena chahiye tha.Phir last moment me suspense.amazing update..

 

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Ab ayega maja raj aur karn adhe pet hi nikal chuka hai ranjeet aur rajesh ki band bajane kita bajata hain ye suspenc ka vishya hain

Sonal jaipur chali gayi to raj aur sonal ki bepanah mohbat adhuri rah jayegi to adhuri na rahe iska tigdam bhidaya gaya aur sonla ko ek sujhav diya gaya jisme auke baap ne bhi apna bharpur sahyog diya ab ye soch ka vishay ban chuka hain sonal kya fhaisla lene wali hain.

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