Incest BETE KI AJEEB KHWAAHISH

[MOMSONRP]

Please check updates on page 158 and 159. Thanks!!!

 

[Kawal Kumar]

Not as per expectation sorry

 

[Yash420]

भाई स्टोरी का यह अपडेट मज़ा नही आया
रोमांस तो है लेकिन बहुत हो रहा है
बाकी आप कहानी कै भाग्यविधाता हो आप जो करोगै सायद कहानी के लिए करोगे
हम तो भाई सिर्फ राय ही दे सकते हैं
Nice
Keep it up

 

[MOMSONRP]

Updates guven. Please check page 158 and 159. Thanks!!!

 

[firefox420]

well yaha par kuch logo ki apni alag rai hai .. story ko le kar .. kuch log isko fast badhana chahte hai .. kuch bas final moment tak jaane ke liye bahut besabar ho rahe hai .. aur koi - koi to bahut bechain hai .. aur koi - koi to apne e-motions ko control bhi nahi kar paa raha hai ...

waise maine jo expect kiya tha uske hisaab se ye kaafi better direction mein story jaa rahi hai .. story kaafi erotic hai .. iss baat se koi deny nahi kar sakta .. aur naa he ye sirf sex based hai .. har story ka ek apna taste hota hai .. har writer ka apna likhne ka style hota hai .. jo log iss story ko criticize karte rehte hai .. unko samjhna chahiye ki .. unko ye story kahi - na - kahi deeply pasand aa rahi hai .. tabhi ve iski taraf khiche chale aate hai .. but un readers ki frustration bhi understandable hai .. par yaha sex nahi balke pyaar he adhaar hai .. agar pyaar ghera, majboot aur saccha hoga to sex to ho he jaayega .. that's a consequence not the final destination ...

rahi baat story line aur uski speed ki to writer iss story ko thoda real life perspective se likh rahe hai .. ye sirf ek ladke ke najariye se he nahi dekhna chahiye .. balke isko ek patni .. ek grehni .. ek bahu .. aur sabse jaroori ek MAA ke najariye se iss story ko mehsoos karna chahiye .. ki wo kitni majboor aur kitni pareshaan hogi .. jo usko apne bete ki khushi ke liye apne dil par patthar rakh kar aise kaam karne pad rahe hai jo usne kabhi socha bhi nahi tha .. sirf isi liye kyonki wo apne bete ko dukh nahi pahuchana chahti hai aur isi liye wo uski har khwahish poori karne ke liye maan jaati hai .. magar wo apne andar chal rahi aantrik vichaaro se aur usoolo se khud he lad rahi hai ...

kahi na kahi wo maa thoda bahut attention ko enjoy bhi kar rahi hogi apne bete se .. magar wo ek social life mein bandhi .. iss samaj ke bandhano mein kaid ek ijjatdaar ghar ki jazbaati aur khuddar stree bhi hai .. aur aisa he uska beta bhi hai .. wo apni maa ki feeling ko bhi samajh raha hai ki uski maa ko internally kitna suffer karna pad raha hoga apne bete ki khwahishe poori karne ke liye .. wo har baar khud he apne usoolo ke khilaaf jaa kar apne mamtamayi pyaar ke aage vivash ho kar kuch na kuch aisa karna padta hai .. jisko ki uska dil gawahi nahi deta .. par fir bhi wo us hadd se aage bhadhti hai .. taaki wo apne bete ko .. jo ki uspar apni jaan chidakta hai .. usko khush de sake ...

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waise ye bahut jaroori hai .. ki story mein beech - beech mein avrodh paida hote rehte hai .. aur kabhi - kabhi to itne slow update bhi aate hai .. waise dekha jaaye to ye slow updates he story ko acchi direction aur uski storyline ka balance maintain karte hai ...

aur isi tarah ke updates story mein interest banaye rakhte hai .. waise to ye ek tarah ki googli hoti hai .. jis par ki almost sabhi readers ke dil ke wicket gir jaate hai .. par ye accha hai ...

aur rahi story ko aage badhane ki baat to .. ye bhi note karne wali baat hai ki story kis point se start hoi thi .. ek simple si house wife aur uska ek average sa emotional beta .. aur aaj dekhlo wohi simple si housewife, bahu, Maa apne bete ko blowjob de rahi hai dinn-dahade .. aur sex mein bhi aise kaam kar rahi hai .. jinka usko pata bhi nahi tha ...

bhai muzhe to ye story bahut pasand aa rahi hai .. aur mere hisaab se to aise he chalti rehni chahiye ...

bas ek kami hai ki updates aane mein kabhi - kabhi late ho jaata hai .. magar usme bhi writer ki majboori hai .. pehle personal life jaroori hai .. ye to ek virtual life hai .. aur na he iski koi value hai .. par chalo jaisa bhi hai .. sab ki apni majboori hoti hai .. but still as a reader main to writer se request karta rahunga ki updates jaldi - jaldi post karte rahe .. baaki main writer ki majboori bhi samjhta hu so .. jyaada force karna accha nahi lagta .. par ek request hai MOMSONRP bhai se ki wo agar time lage post karne mein to ek comment karke bata dena chahiye ki aaj update nahi aayega .. ya 2 din baad aayega ...

well thanks for this lovely story .. will wait for the next update ...

 

[pie]

well yaha par kuch logo ki apni alag rai hai .. story ko le kar .. kuch log isko fast badhana chahte hai .. kuch bas final moment tak jaane ke liye bahut besabar ho rahe hai .. aur koi - koi to bahut bechain hai .. aur koi - koi to apne e-motions ko control bhi nahi kar paa raha hai ...

waise maine jo expect kiya tha uske hisaab se ye kaafi better direction mein story jaa rahi hai .. story kaafi erotic hai .. iss baat se koi deny nahi kar sakta .. aur naa he ye sirf sex based hai .. har story ka ek apna taste hota hai .. har writer ka apna likhne ka style hota hai .. jo log iss story ko criticize karte rehte hai .. unko samjhna chahiye ki .. unko ye story kahi - na - kahi deeply pasand aa rahi hai .. tabhi ve iski taraf khiche chale aate hai .. but un readers ki frustration bhi understandable hai .. par yaha sex nahi balke pyaar he adhaar hai .. agar pyaar ghera, majboot aur saccha hoga to sex to ho he jaayega .. that's a consequence not the final destination ...

rahi baat story line aur uski speed ki to writer iss story ko thoda real life perspective se likh rahe hai .. ye sirf ek ladke ke najariye se he nahi dekhna chahiye .. balke isko ek patni .. ek grehni .. ek bahu .. aur sabse jaroori ek MAA ke najariye se iss story ko mehsoos karna chahiye .. ki wo kitni majboor aur kitni pareshaan hogi .. jo usko apne bete ki khushi ke liye apne dil par patthar rakh kar aise kaam karne pad rahe hai jo usne kabhi socha bhi nahi tha .. sirf isi liye kyonki wo apne bete ko dukh nahi pahuchana chahti hai aur isi liye wo uski har khwahish poori karne ke liye maan jaati hai .. magar wo apne andar chal rahi aantrik vichaaro se aur usoolo se khud he lad rahi hai ...

kahi na kahi wo maa thoda bahut attention ko enjoy bhi kar rahi hogi apne bete se .. magar wo ek social life mein bandhi .. iss samaj ke bandhano mein kaid ek ijjatdaar ghar ki jazbaati aur khuddar stree bhi hai .. aur aisa he uska beta bhi hai .. wo apni maa ki feeling ko bhi samajh raha hai ki uski maa ko internally kitna suffer karna pad raha hoga apne bete ki khwahishe poori karne ke liye .. wo har baar khud he apne usoolo ke khilaaf jaa kar apne mamtamayi pyaar ke aage vivash ho kar kuch na kuch aisa karna padta hai .. jisko ki uska dil gawahi nahi deta .. par fir bhi wo us hadd se aage bhadhti hai .. taaki wo apne bete ko .. jo ki uspar apni jaan chidakta hai .. usko khush de sake ...

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waise ye bahut jaroori hai .. ki story mein beech - beech mein avrodh paida hote rehte hai .. aur kabhi - kabhi to itne slow update bhi aate hai .. waise dekha jaaye to ye slow updates he story ko acchi direction aur uski storyline ka balance maintain karte hai ...

aur isi tarah ke updates story mein interest banaye rakhte hai .. waise to ye ek tarah ki googli hoti hai .. jis par ki almost sabhi readers ke dil ke wicket gir jaate hai .. par ye accha hai ...

aur rahi story ko aage badhane ki baat to .. ye bhi note karne wali baat hai ki story kis point se start hoi thi .. ek simple si house wife aur uska ek average sa emotional beta .. aur aaj dekhlo wohi simple si housewife, bahu, Maa apne bete ko blowjob de rahi hai dinn-dahade .. aur sex mein bhi aise kaam kar rahi hai .. jinka usko pata bhi nahi tha ...

bhai muzhe to ye story bahut pasand aa rahi hai .. aur mere hisaab se to aise he chalti rehni chahiye ...

bas ek kami hai ki updates aane mein kabhi - kabhi late ho jaata hai .. magar usme bhi writer ki majboori hai .. pehle personal life jaroori hai .. ye to ek virtual life hai .. aur na he iski koi value hai .. par chalo jaisa bhi hai .. sab ki apni majboori hoti hai .. but still as a reader main to writer se request karta rahunga ki updates jaldi - jaldi post karte rahe .. baaki main writer ki majboori bhi samjhta hu so .. jyaada force karna accha nahi lagta .. par ek request hai MOMSONRP bhai se ki wo agar time lage post karne mein to ek comment karke bata dena chahiye ki aaj update nahi aayega .. ya 2 din baad aayega ...

well thanks for this lovely story .. will wait for the next update ...

Itna achaa vishleshan aka review meiney aaj tak nahin padhaa bahut hi sanjeedgi aur baareeki se Aapne apna review iss kahani ke baare mein diyaa.... Hats off

Rahi baat kahani ki I love the way writer is writing and narrating this story it's a cult story that'll I can say at the moment.......

 

[MOMSONRP]

Thanks so much for lovely reviews. I know some people dont like my story but cant help it. I dont like Sholay movie. But its loved by millions. Is duniya me har aadmi ko khush karna impossible hai. Isliye bas dil ki suno. dil ki karo. Aaage mehnat aur kismat pe chod do. Thanks. Take care

 

[Dev Raj]

Hot update bhai
Par ab toh dono chudai kar lena chahiye
Just a suggestion

 

[MS DHONI]

Itna achaa vishleshan aka review meiney aaj tak nahin padhaa bahut hi sanjeedgi aur baareeki se Aapne apna review iss kahani ke baare mein diyaa.... Hats off

Rahi baat kahani ki I love the way writer is writing and narrating this story it's a cult story that'll I can say at the moment.......

Bhai ye to chhota sa namuna tha..Ap pyaar 100 baar story padhiye..Wahan to Firefox bhai isse bhi vayankar reviews diye hain..Boleto ek ek review ek update se bada aur jyada vishleshan ke saath hai with finding writer's faults..Ha ha ha

 

[sumit duuta]

UPDATE CONTINUED

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OUCHHHHHHHHHHHH.. DHAK DHAK KARNE LAGA


MORA JIYARA DARNE LAGAA


SAYYAN BAYYAN CHOD NA


KACCHII KALIYAN TODH NAA

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Sonu: Chalo mummy, lets start the dance.

Sonu ki Mummy: Uff iss gaaane pe, tu bhi na, badmaash.. achha baba


Sonu ne gaana lagaya aur mummy ke peeche jaake unke dono haath peeche se pakad ke unko nachwaane laga bilkul jaise us gaane me hota. Mummy bhi kya kuch kam thi. Woh to madhuri se bhi zyaada qaatil ada se naach rahi thi. Uski mummy us gaane ke hisaab se dance karne lagee. Sonu bhi us romantic song me mummy ke saath join hogaya. Mummy ki kalaii pakdee. Mummy kalaai chudaai. Mummy unka chest dheere se hilaa rahi thi. Peeche se unki peeth bhi sexy tareeke se move ki.

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DIL SE DIL MIL GAYA

MUJHSE KAISEE YEH HAYAA

TU HAI MEREE DILRUBAA

KYA LAGTEE HAI WAAH RE WAAH
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Fir uski song jaise hi sonu mummy se romance karne laga dance me hi. Unke peeth pe kiss deta kabhi, kabhi mummy ke gaal pe kiss deta. Kabhi unka neck sehlaata.

Mummy kabhi door hatke waise hi dance kar rahi thi, wo peeche jaake waise hi peeth ko move kar rahi thi jaise ki gaane mein hota hain.

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Sayyan bayyan tod na


Kacchi Kaliyan tod na

Fir uski mummy kamar bhi matkaatee gaane ke anusaar to Sonu peeche se mummy ki kamar ko pakad leta. Sonu fir kabhi ghutnon pe baithke mummy ke kamar ko kiss deta. Mummy fir door jaatee dance karte huve hi adaayen dikhaate huve. Fir Sonu bhi dance karte huve mummy ko pakad leta.

Sonu to romantic dance ka poora mauka lete huve mummy ke jism ka mazaa le raha tha. Sonu ki mummy ab gadde pe gayee aur rengte huve gadde pe dance karne lagi to sonu bhi peeche se chipak gaya aur mummy ke saath hi rengne lagaa. Is samay poora Sonu ka badan uski mummy ke badan se chipka tha.

Fir uski mummy gadde pe hi khade hoke dheere se dance karne lagee aur classical style me ek pair uthaake nritya karne lagee to Sonu ne mummy ka ek pair haath se pakda aur doosre haath se unki kamar pakad li taaki unko balance karsake. Usi pose me uski mummy haath hilaate huve nritya karne lagee.

Aap log imagine karsakte ho kaisa pose tha. Sonu ki mummy ka ek pair hawa me aadha utha huva jise Sonu pakda hain. Mummy is pose me bhi nritya kar rahi thi to Sonu ko apni mummy ki gazab ki flexibility ka andaaza ho rahaa tha. Usne fir doosra pair bhi uthaaliya mummy ka aur unko godee me bithaaya.

Sonu ki mummy:::: aaahhhhhhh. Gir jaaungeee.

Sonu:: nahi girogee na. Naacho mummy.


Sonu ki mummy ke dono pair sonu ki kamar pe kase the. Sonu unko apni godi ne bithaye the aur ab usi pose me uski mummy ne dono haath peeche karke hi nritya kiya. Yeh pose nritya ka to aise lag raha tha jaise Kamasutra ka pose ho.

Fir ab usne mummy ka leg choda aur uski mummy ne fir usse door jaate huve aankhon se adayen dikhaayee jaise ki aankhon se kehrahi ho ke mai haath nahi aane wali. Sonu par kareeb gaya fir unke. Gaane me ab fir se last me "" ouchhhh" shabd aane wala tha last me. Usne peeche se mummy ke chootad pe halke se thappad maara mazaak mein. Aisa karne se uski Mummy ke Muh se OUCHHHH nikal gaya aur theek usi time gaane ki bol par hi uski mummy ke muh se bhi niklaa zor se.

Sonu ki mummy::: Ouchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Sonu:: haha are waah waah. Kamal hogaya. Aap to itni acchi dancer ho.


Sonu ki mummy:: ouch badmaash. Tu bhi na. Wahan kyun maara , tere badmaashi badhtee jaarahi roz roz.


Sonu:: taaki aapki ouch nikal jaaye mummy, haha hahahahaa


Sonu ki mummy:: besaram kahin ka. Chal ab maine to tune jause bola waise kardaala na. Ab to mai pass hogayee na?


Sonu:: bilkul mummy. Aapko to 100 me se 100 marks. Boliye ab aapko Kyaa chaahiye.

Sonu ki mummy:: hmm mujhe.. Mujhe ek kasam chahiye tujhse.

Sonu:: kaisee kasam mummy.

Sonu ki mummy:: pehle kasam de mujhe.

Sonu:: accha mummy lo kasam dedi. Ab bataao to.


Sonu ki mummy:: woh Sonu. Agar kuch bhi kaaran se ham dono ka pyaar poora na ho paaye to tu tu fir shaadi karlega aage jaake. Mai nahi chaahtee ki tu mere liye tadapta rahe.

Sonu:: mummy. Yeh kyaa kehrahi ho. Aur aisee kasam kyun dedi mujhe.

Sonu ki mummy emotional hote huve. Unki aankhen nam hogayee.

Sonu ki mummy:: kyun ki mai teree maa hun. Bahut pyar kartee hun tujhse beta. Mai tujhe tadapte nahi dekh saktee na.

Sonu: aapne aisa kyun soncha. Mai aapke bina nahi rehsakta khush. Agar aap nahi mili to marr jaunga main.

Sonu ki mummy:: chuppppp... Maarungee fir se marne ki baat bola to.

Sonu:: ha maaro mujhe . jitna chaahe maaro aap mummy. Par aapse judaai ki baat mat karna kabhi. Please.

Sonu ki mummy::: itnaa pyar hai mujhse.

Sonu:: sabse zyaada... bahuttt zyaada. Had se zyaada karta hun. Par aap aise kasam di mujhe to lagta hai aapko mere pyar pe bharosa nahi na mummy. Mere pyar me ho koi kami hogee jo aapko bharosa nahi .

Sonu ki mummy::: shhhhhhhh. Pleasee aise mat bol. Mujhe maaf karde Sonu. Tera dil dukhaaya kya maine. Mujhe maaf karde. Mai bhi tujhe bahut pyar kartee hun aur tu kitna mujhe chaahta hai mera dil jaanta hai beta.


Sonu ki mummy apne bete ko udaas dekh ke jaise rone lagee aur emotional hoke usse maafi maangne lagi. Sonu bhi emotional tha ki mummy ne aisee kasam kyun dee usko.

Sonu:: mai bas aapko paana chahta hun mummy. Aajtak mai kisi ladki ko us nazar se nahi dekha mummy. Bas aap hi basee ho dil dimaag me. Marr jaaunga aapke bina main.


Sonu ki mummy emotional thi. Ansoo chalak rahe the. Fir se bete ke muh se woh baat sunke unhone emotion me aake Sonu ko thappad maara aur gale se lagaa liya.

Sonu ki mummy:: bahut marungee. Fir se aisee baat ki to haan. I love u Beta.. Maaf karde mujhe.

Sonu:: i love u mummy. Jitna chahe thaplad maar lena bas judaai ki baat mat karna kabhi.

Sonu ki mummy:: nahi karungee. Kabhi nahi karungee mere laal. Mere bacche.

Sonu ki mummy aur Sonu ekdoosre ko lipat kar bahut der tak roye. Udhar gaanv me Sonu ki daadi mandir jaake pooja karne lagee aur woh bhi yehi bas prartha me thi ki bas Sonu aur uski mummy ke pyar me koi bhi archan na aaye. Par sonu ke pitaaji ka kya. Unka kya hoga. Unki bhi dharam patni thi Sonu ki mummy. Bas yehi baat daadi maa ko khaaye jaarahi thi. Kaise Sonu ki mummy apne pati ko door rakh paayegee.

Sonu ki mummy aur Sonu ek doosre ke pyar me doobe the shehar me. Sonu mummy ke gale se lipta tha. Ekdoosre ko hug karke ek doosre ko laad karte rahe. Un dono ko pata nahi tha ki kal daadi maa aur Sonu ke pitaaji waapas aane ke baad na jaane fir kya modh legee zindagi. Par itna bas dono jaante the ki "" mohabbat jinhe hogayee ho kisi se mohabbat ka anjaam kab sonchte hai"

Mohabbat karne wale anjaam nahi sonchte. Aap log bhi sonchiye mat. Mohabbat karte rahiye, padhte rahiye!!!!

main pehle bhi kaha tha aap ki likhne ki shamta badhaye hai.....amazing , wowwwww ,love it