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Incest BETE KI AJEEB KHWAAHISH
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Kawal Kumar
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well yaha par kuch logo ki apni alag rai hai .. story ko le kar .. kuch log isko fast badhana chahte hai .. kuch bas final moment tak jaane ke liye bahut besabar ho rahe hai .. aur koi - koi to bahut bechain hai .. aur koi - koi to apne e-motions ko control bhi nahi kar paa raha hai ...
waise maine jo expect kiya tha uske hisaab se ye kaafi better direction mein story jaa rahi hai .. story kaafi erotic hai .. iss baat se koi deny nahi kar sakta .. aur naa he ye sirf sex based hai .. har story ka ek apna taste hota hai .. har writer ka apna likhne ka style hota hai .. jo log iss story ko criticize karte rehte hai .. unko samjhna chahiye ki .. unko ye story kahi - na - kahi deeply pasand aa rahi hai .. tabhi ve iski taraf khiche chale aate hai .. but un readers ki frustration bhi understandable hai .. par yaha sex nahi balke pyaar he adhaar hai .. agar pyaar ghera, majboot aur saccha hoga to sex to ho he jaayega .. that's a consequence not the final destination ...
rahi baat story line aur uski speed ki to writer iss story ko thoda real life perspective se likh rahe hai .. ye sirf ek ladke ke najariye se he nahi dekhna chahiye .. balke isko ek patni .. ek grehni .. ek bahu .. aur sabse jaroori ek MAA ke najariye se iss story ko mehsoos karna chahiye .. ki wo kitni majboor aur kitni pareshaan hogi .. jo usko apne bete ki khushi ke liye apne dil par patthar rakh kar aise kaam karne pad rahe hai jo usne kabhi socha bhi nahi tha .. sirf isi liye kyonki wo apne bete ko dukh nahi pahuchana chahti hai aur isi liye wo uski har khwahish poori karne ke liye maan jaati hai .. magar wo apne andar chal rahi aantrik vichaaro se aur usoolo se khud he lad rahi hai ...
kahi na kahi wo maa thoda bahut attention ko enjoy bhi kar rahi hogi apne bete se .. magar wo ek social life mein bandhi .. iss samaj ke bandhano mein kaid ek ijjatdaar ghar ki jazbaati aur khuddar stree bhi hai .. aur aisa he uska beta bhi hai .. wo apni maa ki feeling ko bhi samajh raha hai ki uski maa ko internally kitna suffer karna pad raha hoga apne bete ki khwahishe poori karne ke liye .. wo har baar khud he apne usoolo ke khilaaf jaa kar apne mamtamayi pyaar ke aage vivash ho kar kuch na kuch aisa karna padta hai .. jisko ki uska dil gawahi nahi deta .. par fir bhi wo us hadd se aage bhadhti hai .. taaki wo apne bete ko .. jo ki uspar apni jaan chidakta hai .. usko khush de sake ...
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waise ye bahut jaroori hai .. ki story mein beech - beech mein avrodh paida hote rehte hai .. aur kabhi - kabhi to itne slow update bhi aate hai .. waise dekha jaaye to ye slow updates he story ko acchi direction aur uski storyline ka balance maintain karte hai ...
aur isi tarah ke updates story mein interest banaye rakhte hai .. waise to ye ek tarah ki googli hoti hai .. jis par ki almost sabhi readers ke dil ke wicket gir jaate hai .. par ye accha hai ...
aur rahi story ko aage badhane ki baat to .. ye bhi note karne wali baat hai ki story kis point se start hoi thi .. ek simple si house wife aur uska ek average sa emotional beta .. aur aaj dekhlo wohi simple si housewife, bahu, Maa apne bete ko blowjob de rahi hai dinn-dahade .. aur sex mein bhi aise kaam kar rahi hai .. jinka usko pata bhi nahi tha ...
bhai muzhe to ye story bahut pasand aa rahi hai .. aur mere hisaab se to aise he chalti rehni chahiye ...
bas ek kami hai ki updates aane mein kabhi - kabhi late ho jaata hai .. magar usme bhi writer ki majboori hai .. pehle personal life jaroori hai .. ye to ek virtual life hai .. aur na he iski koi value hai .. par chalo jaisa bhi hai .. sab ki apni majboori hoti hai .. but still as a reader main to writer se request karta rahunga ki updates jaldi - jaldi post karte rahe .. baaki main writer ki majboori bhi samjhta hu so .. jyaada force karna accha nahi lagta .. par ek request hai MOMSONRP bhai se ki wo agar time lage post karne mein to ek comment karke bata dena chahiye ki aaj update nahi aayega .. ya 2 din baad aayega ...
well thanks for this lovely story .. will wait for the next update ...
U also start writing a story.
We may get one more good concept.
komalkh
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ab thoda sa romance aagey badao dono mein.....aur erotic banao...now sonu ko bhi poonam k juice ka taste karao....unke paas bas ek din aur hai khulke pyaar karne k liye....ab to poonam ko nude rakho ek din ghar mein sonu ki khwaissh......aur ab poonam ka bj aur sonu ki licking her juices regular hona chahiye...kum se kum oral aur 69 to dono mein karao....ussko bhi enjoy krao....ussska bhi juice release krwao sonu k munh mein......
baaki aapko jo sahi lge...yeh kuch suggestion the......thoda story ko fast karo agar possible ho to...
baaki aapko jo sahi lge...yeh kuch suggestion the......thoda story ko fast karo agar possible ho to...
lekhak ji .. aapke aane ka intezaar hai .. hume pata hai ki aapke saath majboori hai .. magar yaha ka bhi dhyaan kar liya karo .. ab to 4-4 dino tak bhi aapki taraf se koi pratikirya nahi milti ...
thoda samay nikaal kar .. aage ka update bhi post kar do mitrr .. waise bhi likhne ke baad uske saath GIF dhoond-dhoond kar lagane mein kaafi time lagta hai ...
thoda samay nikaal kar .. aage ka update bhi post kar do mitrr .. waise bhi likhne ke baad uske saath GIF dhoond-dhoond kar lagane mein kaafi time lagta hai ...
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