Adultery BHABHI MAA (Completed)

[Ben Tennyson]

Kahani me thoda pelam pela bhi karao

 

[kamdev99008]

Waah bhai ilzaam bhi lagaya to Pratima ka, ek baar ritu ya nidhi ke bare me kaha hota to kabool karne ke bare me sochta bhi,

khud ko viraj mat samjho...................shiva hi theek ho

 

[Damha]

Main ne aj he puri story parhi Tittle se to lag raha tha ke bhabi aur devar main hawas ke rishte ke upar kahani ho gi

But ye bilkul he alag hai start me mujhe laga tha maa baap bure ho gye bhai aur bhabi ke saath hero khara ho ga

Lekin jaisa socha tha waisa kuch bhi nahi tha main har baar kahani ko jaisa aage sochta hu us se alag he kahani nikal ker ati hai

Mujhe bohat achi lagi story bohat acha laga ap ne hum jaise reader jo devnagri nahi parh sakte un ke liye hinglish me story likhi


Main shayad regular support na ker saku kiu ke main ne apni story per bhi dhayan dena hota hai lekin jab bhi waqt mile ga main zaroor support karu ga

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Ritu aur Nidhi to ghar par hi thi .. ghar se farar to Pratima aur Viraj he the ..

Topic close,,,,,

Mujhe dr sahab ki story dhyaan se padhne dijiye bhai,

 

[TheBlackBlood]

naya sansaar ke baad to ab koi aur he sansaar basa liya hai .. Viraj ne .. ab pata nahi Shubham bhai ke mann mein kya chal raha hai .. magar hum bhi Die hard fan hai .. Viraj bhi 27 saal ka ho gaya peete - peete aur Ritu didi bhi 31 ki ho gayi bechaari Viraj ka intezaar karte - karte .. Abhay chacha ne to apne ladke ko he ghar ka ek maatr vaaris ke taur par set kar diya tha .. Nidhi to khud apne bhai ke thukraye jaane ke viyog mein mon dhaaran kar baithi hui hai peechle 5 saalo se aur us bechari ne to "Ha Nahi to" tak bolna chod diya tha .. Pawan ki sister ki bhi shaadi ho gayi .. Ritu ki mausi ki ladki ki bhi shaadi ho gayi .. Aditya expire ho gaya .. aur ye Choti (hair tail) wali ladki pata nahi kaha se aa tapki hai story mein bas kamdev99008 bhiya us baare mein baat na karo .. us kahani ka soch - soch kar dimaag kharab hota hai .. ye TheBlackBlood bhai to bahut matlabi nikle .. apni ego ko badi kar ke .. hum readers ko chota karne mein inhe jyaada accha lagta hai .. AAH Damn it!!

Hahaha waah bhai story ka sara joos nikaal ke rakh diya aapne. Ye maanna padega ki story ke andar ki sari baat ab tak yaad kar rakhi hai aapne.

Main aur matlabi.????

 

[TheBlackBlood]

aap innocent hi ho bhai ,
meri tarh

 

[TheBlackBlood]

khud ko viraj mat samjho...................shiva hi theek ho

Aree bhai main apne aap ko wahi samajhta hu jo main hu,

Shiva ke jaisa banne ka main khwaab me bhi nahi soch sakta,

 

[kamdev99008]

dr sahab............
ab lekar aye ho kahani ki asli heroin.........
sussssssssu......... sus

bhabhi heroin nahi hain........... wo to godmother hain...........
aur unko wahan se neeche giraakar hero ke barabar mein laakar mat khada karna

gaon ka khel to bhai ki hawas se shuru hua...........jisne pyar ke nam par ek ladki ko bhagakar shadi kar li
aur apne liye bina roktok ek permanent choot ka jugad kar liya
uske bad jab maa baap raste se hate to usne apne hissedar bhai ko bhi raste se kinare karna shuru kar diya
daulat pas ate hi nayi choot ka bhi intzam ho gaya........ ek kya 10 ka bhi intzam kar sake ....itni kshamta ho gayi uski
..................hissedar bhai ko raste se hatane mein biwi adchan daal rahi thi aur nai choot ki wajah se biwi vaise bhi faltu hi thi
to usne ek teer se hi dono ka shikar kar diya
ab bhabhi ne ghar se bhag ke shadi ki thi to uske maykewale uska sath nahi dete............dusre usne ye bhi socha hoga ki agar wo mayke pahunch bhi jaye to shayad use kisi kone me jagah bhi mil jayegi............ lekin sonu ko to unmein se koi bhi bardast nahi karta...... unki beti ko bhaga le jane wale ka bhai..................................... aur ye bat bhabhi bhi jaan gayi thi ki biwi ko to usne sirf ghar se nikalkar hi tasalli kar li............ lekin bhai ko to jan se mare bina use poori jaydad nahi mil sakti....................... isiliye arti...sonu ke sath hai

ab shahar ka chapter
khel shuru hua tha tiwari ke paltu police walon ki bhabhi par niyat kharab hone se..........fir policewalo ke katl
aur ab sampat ki tiwari se dushmani..........jiski wajah se sonu ko sampat ne panah di apne pas
is khel mein.................. pahle to sonu ne ..........pyade maar dale anjane mein ki....bisat kiski hai
lekin ab jab bisat pata chal gayi................... to rani (queen)........ samne aayi hai...........
dekhte hain

sus ya uske bap ko sonu@ankit@shiva ke bare mein kitna aur kaise pata chalta hai.............
aur sonu.........wo to pahchan hi gaya apne target ko................
to wo kaise aur kitna handle karta hai...........sussu ko..........

ab mat kahna mein comment nahi karta...............
poora review diya hai...................apke update ke barabar

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Update 12​

Abhi ham college canteen me baithe the , mere pas to paise hote nahi the aur roj in logo se kharch karwana mujhe achcha bhi nahi lagta tha isliye main yanha aane se mana karta tha aur ye chij shayd unhe bhi samjh aa gayi thi , wo mujhe khich kar canteen le aaye the ..


“dekho yaar tumhare halaat ka hame bhi pata hai ham sab dost hai isme hisab ki kya baat hai “


Monika ne apne behad hi akarshit karne wale andaj me kaha


“wo bat nahi hai mujhe pata hai ki tum logo in chijo ko mind nahi karte lekin yaar roj roj aisa achcha nahi lagta na ki mere canteen ka pura bill tum log hi dete ho ..”


Meri bat sunkar Neha ne ek narajgi wale andaj me mujhe dekha


“ab tu ye sab sochne laga hai , hamare dimag me ye kabhi nahi aaya na aayega tu apne dimag se ye sab nikaal de”


Ye Neha ne kaha tha aur uska andaj bilkul mujhe dhamkane wala tha .. jise dekhkar sabhi muh hasane lage the .. wahi mera chahra thoda utar gaya tha


“are tu pagalu hai yaar pura , in sab chhoti chhoti chijo ko mind mat kiya kar , aisa kuch nahi hai ki ham tere uper koi ahsaan kar rahe hai ya aisa kuch aur tu dost hai apna , dosti me log jaan de dete hai aur tu sale bill nahi dene de raha hai “


Akki ki bat par maine sahmati me sar hilaya ,


“lekin main bhi tum logo ko treat dena chahta hu, main tumhe canteen me to nahi khila sakta lekin main tum logo ke liye bhabhi ke hatho se bana hua khana launga , dekhna ynha ke is pizza se kai guna testy hoga ..”


“lagata hai tum apni bhabhi se bahut pyar karte ho “


Neha mere ankho me hi dekh rahi thi


“bahut … jaan hai wo meri , aur unke siwa mera is duniya me hai ki koun ..”


Janha bhabhi ka naam lene se mere chahre me ek khushi aayi thi wahi ye yad karke ki mera duniya me bhabhi ke siwa koi bhi nahi hai , mere chahre me ek udasi si chha gai ..


Maine in logo ko apni story batai thi ki kaise aur kin halat me maine ganw chhoda tha , aur ynha aakr majdoori karne laga … ha ye nahi bataya tha ki maine teen police walo ko bhi maara hai , baki sab kuch sach hi bola tha , sath hi ye bhi ki main malik ke ghar me hi rahta hu to main tum logo ko apne ghar nahi le ja sakta ye mujhe isliye bolna pada kyoki ye log bhabhi ki itani taarif sunkar unse milne ki jid kar rahe the …


Ye mere halaat ko samjhte the isliye mere dil me bhi inke liye ek prem ka janm ho chuka tha , ye sach me achche log the …aur main inse bole gaye jhuth ko bhi sach karna chah raha tha main puri mehnat se padhai karta tha taki class ke teachers aur mere dosto ke bich mujhe sharminda nahi hona pade…


Ham canteen me baithe hue masti kar rahe the tabhi ek aur group aaya , unme ek ladki jisne behad hi chhote kapda pahne the aur jiske hotho me ek cigarette thi ,


“hiii handsome… hii Monika “


Usne arjit ki or dekhkar kaha jise dekhkar Monika ke chahre me ek gussa saf saf dikhne lga tha


“hii Sus “


Us ladki ki ankhe nashili thi , uska skirt jangho ko saf saf dikha raha tha shayd thoda aur uper ho jaata to uski panty bhi dikhne lgati , ager usne pahni hui ho to …


Lag raha tha ki arjit aur Monika ki usse kuch khas dosti si lag rahi thi kyoki uske aane se dono ke chahre ka rang thoda utra hua lag raha tha, wahi Akki aur Neha chup ho gaye the wo to usse ankhe bhi nahi mila rahe the , lag raha tha ki koi purana yarana ho isse …


“baby tumne abhi tak in faticharo ka sath nahi chhoda na “


Wo mujhe nahi balki Akki aur Neha ko fatichar bol rahi thi , iski maa ki ye uske liye fatichar the to main kya tha


“main kitni bar bol chuka hu ki ye mere dost hai “


Arjit ki awaj me gussa aa gaya tha , lekin wo bas hansi


“tumhare dosto ka standard din ba din girta hi jaa raha hai Ajju darling , pahle ye Monika aur fir ye garib log aur ab to tumne college ke sabse bade fatichar ko bhi apna dost bana liya “


Is bar wo mujhe dekh kar bol rahi thi, ajib bat thi ki koi use kuch bol bhi nahi raha tha .. lekin main thahra ganw ka thass buddhi wala adami maine uski or rukh kiya


“ye madam sus …….. ham logo ko fatichar bolne se pahle na ja ke apna naam badal, sun kar susu wali feeling aa rahi hai, aur Ajju ko mat sikha ki dosti kise bolte hai hamara Ajju bhai na insano ko pahchanta hai, shayd isliye tera nahi balki hamara dost hai samjh gai susu ..”


Meri bat sunkar wo hi nahi balki sabhi buri tarh se chouk gaye koi thodi der tak to kuch bhi nahi bola fir Monika joro se hans padi , wahi sabhi ke chahre me muskuraht aa gai thi siway arjit ke , wahi sus ka chahra lal ho gaya tha


“ye gawar mind your language “


Uski bat sunkar uske group ke log bhi hamari taraf bhadane lge the …


“sus jane do ise naya banda hai tumhe janta nahi abhi , na hi hamare bare me janta hai ..”


Arjit ne turant hi kaha , wo arjit ko dekhne lagi


“to batao ise pahli bar hai, tumhara dost hai isliye chhod rahi hu warna ……”


Wo wanha se nikal gai


“sahi jawab diya Sali ko ab se hamare pas aane se daregi “


Uske jate hi Monika bol padi


“chup raho yaar, janti bhi ho iske karn ise kitni pareshani ho sakti thi … tumhara kya hai tumhara baap tumhe bacha lega lekin inka kya “


Arjit thoda upset ho gaya tha


“ye hai koun bhai jo Akki aur Neha ko bhi garib bol rahi thi “


Meri bat sunakr Akki hans pada


“bhai ham log bhi iske samne garib log hi hai , hamare baap ke pas arabo ki doulat nahi hai jaisa Ajju aur Monika ke pas hai ham log middle class family ke log hai aur ye Sali sus to hame kida makoda samjhti hai ..”


Akki ki bat me ek dukh mujhe saf saf mahsoos ho raha tha , mujhe in sabhi chijo ka andaja nahi tha kyoki maine kabhi itana paisa dekha hi nahi tha na hi mere ganw me aisa kuch tha ,


“stop yaar Akki , tu janta hai na ki ye Sali kaisi hai”


Ajju fir se thoda pareshan ho gaya


“abe to wo tere dosto ki bejjati karke chali jati hai aur tu chup hoke sunta rahta hai , akhir hai koun wo ..”


Mujhe abhi tak samjh nahi aa raha tha ki akhir Ajju chup hokar sun kyo raha tha


“wo tumhari hone wali bhabhi hai Ankit miya, hamare Ajju ki fiancé Smita Tiwari urf sus ..”


Monika ne hasate hue Ajju ki khichai ki


“what ??”


Mere dimag ka blub hi fuse ho gaya tha


“abe tu pagal hai ki is ladki se shadi karega “


Mujhe sach me apne dost ke uper daya aa rahi thi


“mat puchh yaar , iska baap bahut bada mantri hai daya sanker Tiwari naam to suna hoga tumne aur mere baap ka achcha dost , samjh le ye rishta ham dono ke baapo ne hamare uper thop diya hai , naa hi sus ko ye pasand hai na hi mujhe , hamari life style bhi bahut hi alag hai yaar lekin kya kare dono apne pita ke samne kuchh nahi bol sakte bas jivan bhar ye jhelna hoga ..”


Ajju ka chahra hi utar gaya tha, wahi Tiwari ka naam sunkar mere kaan khade ho gaye the ..


Maine uske kandhe par hath rakha


“koi nahi ham tudwa denge tera rishta “


Sabhi mujhe aise dekhne lge the jaise koi bhoot dekh liya ho


“sale majaak samjh liya hai kya, janta bhi hai ki iska baap koun hai aur mera baap koun hai, hamari himmat nahi hoti unke samne jakar kuch bolne ki aur tu tudwayega rishta ..”


Ajju ke chahre me gussa aa gaya tha wahi mere chahre me ek muskan


“bhai tujhe dost bola hai to tera jivan barbad hote to nahi dekh sakta na ..”


Ajju ne mujhe pyar se dekha


“bhai tere pyar ko main samjhta hu lekin ye ganw nahi hai ki ladke ladki ko kisi dusare ke sath dekha ya sharab pite dekha to rishta tod dete hai…. Ye sale log to ise shan samjhte hai be “


Maine uski bat sunkar ek gahri sans li ..


“koi bat nahi bhai koi na koi rasta to nikaal hi lenge , main ganw ka banda hu aur mere pas khone ke liye kuch bhi nahi hai , mere dost ki jindagi banane ke liye ager jaan bhi deni padi to pichhe nahi hatunga …”


Meri bat sunakr sabhi ke chahre me ek chamk si aa gai thi , Ajju ne bhi mujhe gale se laga liya tha , ye bat maine apne dil se kahi thi , maine apne ganw ke dosto se ye bat sikhi aur samjhi thi ki dost ke har musibat me uske sath khada hona hi asali dosti hai …

वाह!! बहुत ही शानदार तरीके से लिखा गया अपडेट था डाॅक्टर साहब।

तो सोनू उर्फ अंकित उर्फ शिव ने ये तय कर लिया है कि वो अपने दोस्त की शादी उस तिवारी की बेटी से नहीं होने देगा या फिर ये कहें कि उन दोनो का ये रिश्ता तुड़वा देगा किन्तु सबसे बड़ा सवाल ये है कि कैसे.???

यहाॅ पर इस बात की भी जानकारी मिली कि सोनू की दोस्ती जिन लोगों से है उनका संबंध तिवारी जैसी शख्सियत से है जो कि ज़ाहिर है कि संपत के दुश्मनों में से एक हैं। सोनू को तो इस बात का पता चल गया किन्तु उसके दोस्त अभी इस पूरे वाक्ये से ही अनभिज्ञ हैं। ख़ैर अब देखना ये है कि जिस तिवारी की बेटी से हमारे सोनू मियां ने पंगा लिया है उसका असर क्या होता है। क्या ये बात यहीं पर दब जाएगी या फिर इसके आगे भी कुछ ऐसा होगा जिसका अंदेशा लगाना मुमकिन नहीं तो असंभव भी नहीं है।

 

[Chutiyadr]

Superb story hai Dr Sahab... keep writing... excellent update

dhanywad acme bhai
bahut din laga diye dost aane me welcome hai aapka