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Adultery BHABHI MAA (Completed)

Chutiyadr

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Hahaha waah bhai story ka sara joos nikaal ke rakh diya aapne. Ye maanna padega ki story ke andar ki sari baat ab tak yaad kar rakhi hai aapne. :)

Main aur matlabi.???? :bat:
hamare firefox420 bhaiya ki ye hi visesta hai :approve:
writer se jyda to inhe pata hota hai story ke bare me :)
 

Aakash.

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I remembered one thing again from the canteen, there was one such boy in my group. Now it seems that all of Sonu's friends are very good, even in such circumstances they are supporting him. Only someone who has friends can understand the importance of a friend. Smita is a strut girl, Smita needs to learn. You have created a very good college atmosphere.
Send Smita to me I teach her to love...:loser2:
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story. Thank You...:heart::heart::heart:
 

Chutiyadr

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dr sahab............
ab lekar aye ho kahani ki asli heroin.........
sussssssssu......... sus

bhabhi heroin nahi hain........... wo to godmother hain...........
aur unko wahan se neeche giraakar hero ke barabar mein laakar mat khada karna

gaon ka khel to bhai ki hawas se shuru hua...........jisne pyar ke nam par ek ladki ko bhagakar shadi kar li
aur apne liye bina roktok ek permanent choot ka jugad kar liya
uske bad jab maa baap raste se hate to usne apne hissedar bhai ko bhi raste se kinare karna shuru kar diya
daulat pas ate hi nayi choot ka bhi intzam ho gaya........ ek kya 10 ka bhi intzam kar sake ....itni kshamta ho gayi uski
..................hissedar bhai ko raste se hatane mein biwi adchan daal rahi thi aur nai choot ki wajah se biwi vaise bhi faltu hi thi
to usne ek teer se hi dono ka shikar kar diya
ab bhabhi ne ghar se bhag ke shadi ki thi to uske maykewale uska sath nahi dete............dusre usne ye bhi socha hoga ki agar wo mayke pahunch bhi jaye to shayad use kisi kone me jagah bhi mil jayegi............ lekin sonu ko to unmein se koi bhi bardast nahi karta...... unki beti ko bhaga le jane wale ka bhai..................................... aur ye bat bhabhi bhi jaan gayi thi ki biwi ko to usne sirf ghar se nikalkar hi tasalli kar li............ lekin bhai ko to jan se mare bina use poori jaydad nahi mil sakti....................... isiliye arti...sonu ke sath hai

ab shahar ka chapter
khel shuru hua tha tiwari ke paltu police walon ki bhabhi par niyat kharab hone se..........fir policewalo ke katl
aur ab sampat ki tiwari se dushmani..........jiski wajah se sonu ko sampat ne panah di apne pas
is khel mein.................. pahle to sonu ne ..........pyade maar dale anjane mein ki....bisat kiski hai
lekin ab jab bisat pata chal gayi................... to rani (queen)........ samne aayi hai...........
dekhte hain

sus ya uske bap ko sonu@ankit@shiva ke bare mein kitna aur kaise pata chalta hai.............
aur sonu.........wo to pahchan hi gaya apne target ko................
to wo kaise aur kitna handle karta hai...........sussu ko..........

ab mat kahna mein comment nahi karta............... :angry: :bat:
poora review diya hai...................apke update ke barabar :D
:thanks: dhanywad kamdev bhai :)
aapne to ek sath hi pura review de diya ,badiya hai aise ise kamchori bhi kahte hai :lol1:
aise hi comments dete rahiye apke comments se mujhe naye ideas aate rahte hai ,:idea: aaj ke comments se kuch naye ideas aaye hai jo aage ki story me dikhenge :approve:
 

Chutiyadr

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वाह!! बहुत ही शानदार तरीके से लिखा गया अपडेट था डाॅक्टर साहब।

तो सोनू उर्फ अंकित उर्फ शिव ने ये तय कर लिया है कि वो अपने दोस्त की शादी उस तिवारी की बेटी से नहीं होने देगा या फिर ये कहें कि उन दोनो का ये रिश्ता तुड़वा देगा किन्तु सबसे बड़ा सवाल ये है कि कैसे.???

यहाॅ पर इस बात की भी जानकारी मिली कि सोनू की दोस्ती जिन लोगों से है उनका संबंध तिवारी जैसी शख्सियत से है जो कि ज़ाहिर है कि संपत के दुश्मनों में से एक हैं। सोनू को तो इस बात का पता चल गया किन्तु उसके दोस्त अभी इस पूरे वाक्ये से ही अनभिज्ञ हैं। ख़ैर अब देखना ये है कि जिस तिवारी की बेटी से हमारे सोनू मियां ने पंगा लिया है उसका असर क्या होता है। क्या ये बात यहीं पर दब जाएगी या फिर इसके आगे भी कुछ ऐसा होगा जिसका अंदेशा लगाना मुमकिन नहीं तो असंभव भी नहीं है।
:thanks: dhanywad shubham bhai :)
aage dekhte hai ki kya hota hai ..:approve:
 

Chutiyadr

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भाई डॉ जी वैसे तो तुम्हारी कहानियो का हीरो राज कपूर की महिला प्रधान फिल्मों के हीरो जैसा होता है कुछ बेबस, कुछ बेचारा सा पहली बार इस कहानी का हीरो अमिताभ बच्चन के एंग्री यंग मैन जैसा है :laugh::laugh:
sandy bhai abhi to story shuru hui hai, kya pata aage kya ho jaaye :lol1: :hinthint:
 

Chutiyadr

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I remembered one thing again from the canteen, there was one such boy in my group. Now it seems that all of Sonu's friends are very good, even in such circumstances they are supporting him. Only someone who has friends can understand the importance of a friend. Smita is a strut girl, Smita needs to learn. You have created a very good college atmosphere.
Send Smita to me I teach her to love...:loser2:
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story. Thank You...:heart::heart::heart:
:thanks: dhanywad akki bro :)
smita ko kya sikhaoge aap...:wink:
 
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