Incest Bheed me akela (abhay)

[Samar_Singh]

Excellent Story Dirty banda Bhai.

I was ignoring this story for a long time. Lekin kal jab padhna shuru ki to ek hi din me sare update padh dale.

Mtlb bhai kya jabardast story hai. Writing skills kamal ke hai aur kahani ka plot bhi jabardast hai.
Koi jyada writing mistakes bhi nahi hai jisse kahani ko samjhne me dikkat ho. Sab kuch clear rehta hai.

Kahani ke plot ki baat karu to ek baar padhana shuru karo to phir break lena hi bhul jate hai. Kahani ki explanation aur world building bhi badhiya hai.

Abhay ka character bhi sahi develop Kiya hai, halaki abhi 35 update me bahut kuch kehna thik nahi, lekin uske action ka reason bilkul sahi thehrta hai. Bechare ne bachpan se itna kuch jhela hai ki agar kisi ke sath sach me ho to pakka mar jaye. Parivar ka har ek member abhay ka gunehgar hai. Jo kuch usse pyar karte the vo bhi nahi rahe. Jaise gangu Tai.

Jab bhi kuch thik hone vala hota hai ki sab kuch aur jyada khrab ho jata hai. Bachpan me sab kuch saha, socha 5 saal ka hone par thik ho jayega to ghar se hi bahar kar diya. Ek ummid thi ki shayad padh likhkar shayad parivar ka pyar mil jaye lekin vo ummid bhi jati rahi. Ulta pyar karne valo ki choti si list aur choti ho gyi.

Ghar parivaar ko bhulkar aage badhne ki sochi to pyar me aisa dhokha mila ki kya hi kahe.

Aur ab nafrat ke alava kuch bacha nahi hai uske Dil me.

Jab divya ko pta chalega tab kya hoga. Kya abhay divya ko galat samjhega yaa sahi. Baki sab to uski nafrat ke hi layak hai ab.

Abhay ne red, blue, grey aur green color ke section bana rakhe hai, isse hi vo tay karega ki kisko kya saja deni hai. Green vale ko sabse Kam aur Red vale ko sabse jyada. Jin do photo ko usne green list se hatake table pe rakha vo jarur uske chote chacha aur Priya ki hongi. Chacha ab rahe nahi aur priya me use apna attey najar aaya. Aur jiski photo usne blue se hatake red me dali vo uski bua ho sakti hai. Priya ki baat sunne ke baad unki ranking badh gyi. Red list me top par ranveer hai. Dadi dada maa aur aarav bhi jarur usi red list me honge.

Abhay ke dil me ab pyar ki koi jagah nahi hai, lekin vaani ke liye soft corner jarur banna shuru ho gya hai, ab dekhna hai ki vo kis had tak badhta hai. Vaise ek baar dipti se chutiya katvane ke baad itni jaldi to kisi par bharosa nahi karega vo.

Abhay ke chote chacha ki death ek accident me huyi, lekin kya vo sirf ek accident tha yaa kisi ki sajish. Abhi bahut se raz hai kahani me jinhe abhay bhi nahi janta jab vi Raaz khulenge tab abhay ka kya reaction hoga ye bhi dekhne vali baat hai.

Philhal to kahani dhamakedaar jaa rahi hai. Ab aage dekhna hai kya hota hai.

Eagerly waiting for next update

 

[Dark Cobra]

Waiting for next update sir ji

 

[Dark Cobra]

Kab de rhe ho update sir ji

 

[Ak47203]

Dirty bhai update ka intezar hai

 

[Sunli]

Weating for next padey bhai

 

[Dirty banda]

Update - 36

kisne kiya ye kiski itni himmat hui dhundo use chahe to pura sahar jaam kardo

ranveer hospital me khada chilla raha tha kajal abhi operation theatre me thi doctors ek ghante se andar the kisi ko kuch bhi nahi pata tha thakur pariwar me matam ka mahol tha sanjay bhi hospital me tha kamini ghar par ladkiyo ko sambhal rahi thi

arav aaj subha hi flight se nikal gya tha usse contact nahi ho paya tha
ranveer gahre dukh or gusse me tha bhale hi woh bahar kitna bhi muh maarle par kajal uski biwi thi uske bacho ki maa thi uska pyaar thi uske liye kajal arav se zada naa sahi par kam zaruri bhi nahi thi

tabhi darwaza khulta hai or doctor bahar aata hai

ranveer- (besabri se) kya hua doctor meri kajal theek to hai naa

doctor - thakur sahab aap befikr raheye thakurain bilkul theek hai bas car ko jhatka lagne ki wajha se gardan ki haddi me chot hai
tabhi waha ek nurse aati hai or woh doctor ke kaan me kuch kahti hai

doctor - thakur sahab aapke driver ki sar pe chot lagne ki wajha se paralyse ho gyi hai

dhananjay - koi baat nhi doctor ab uske pure pariwar ki zimmedari thakur pariwar ki hai

kajal ke theek hone ki khabar sunkar sabne rahat ki saasli thi sab khush the ki kajal ko kuch nhi hua par apni pareshani or khushi me jis baat par thakur pariwar ne dhiyaan nahi diya woh tha
waha se thodi dur par khada admi
jisne doctor ki baat sunte hi kisi ko call kiya

Location hospital ke bahar ka canteen jisme abhi ek ladki baitha hua tha jisne mask lagaya hua tha

admi - bhai woh theek hai

ladka - ok

ye bolkar woh ladka hospital se bahar jane laga abhi woh darwaje tak hi pahucha tha ki uski aankhain fati ki fati rah gyi

hospital ke bahar lagbhag 1.5 hazar gadiya thi jo 3 alag alag rods se aayi thi sabme bhar bhar ke log the or sabke hi pass hatiyaar the
unhe dekh kar ayisa lag raha tha jaise ye cahhe to kisi chote mote desh par kabza karle

ye log the Sangwan Rathod or Chaudhary pariwar ke log
aaj sach me us ladke ko andaza ho raha tha ki uski ladai kitni khatarnak ho sakti hai usne apne sahayad hone wale dushmano ko halke me liya tha

(ab jaan lete hai ye sab yaha kar kya rahe hai abhi se 2 ghante pahle)

jab abhay or kajal ki cars ki takkar hui to waha kheto me kaam karne wale log jaldi se car ke pass aaye or jab unhone car me behosh pade 2no logo ko dekh to waha bhagdar mach gyi woh takuro ka ilaka tha or wahi kisi ne unki thakurain ki gadi ko takkar maardi jaldi se kajal ko hospital pahuchaya gya or thakur pariwar ke logo ko khabar ki gayi

pahle to jab thakur pariwar tak ye khabar pahuchi to sab dar gye likin jab kajal ke hospital me admit hone ki baat pata chali tab sabki jaan me jaan aayi
likin jab ranveer dhananjay or sanjay ne ye pata kiya ki accident hua kaise or jab unhe police ne bataya shayaad kisi ne jaan_bujh kar kajal ki gadi ko takkar mari hai tab to jaise ranveer pagal hi ho gya

wahi dusri taraf

tinka - bhaga bhaga jaldi bhaga agar ek baar apne adde pe pahuch gye to bappu usko chodega naa

gopal - mujhe to ye dar hai ki agar woh galti se bach gya to woh kisi ko nahi chodega

tinka - (darte hue) subh subh bol gopu

gopal - dekh pahuch gye ham chal jaldi se gadi se utar ke bhag agar dhere
chale to kahi woh pagal hamare uper gadi hi naa chada_de

ye bol kar woh dono jaldi se gadi se utre or apne godam ke andar bhagne lage likin jab darte hue gopal ne piche dekha to

sannata ek dum sannata unke piche koi nahi tha likin fir bhi unke man kaa dar khatm nhi hua or woh dono jaldi se andar gye

tinka - dadda dadda

gopal - dadaji kaha hai

shyaam Chaudhary - ( apne office se bahar aate hue) aryy halla kyu macha rakha se ek chore ne maar ke to aaye ho intzaar kro inaam mil jayega

apne dada ki baat sun kar unhe samajh hi nahi aaya ki kaise pratikriya de
ki tabhi ek assistant bhagta hua aaya or

assistant - (kaan me) .......................

s.c - kyaaaa
(Fir chillate hue) bhiku o bhiku jaldi bhar aa

bhiku - (bahar aate hue) ke hua bappu

s.c - jaldi apne logo ne ikkatha kar banduk goli gadi sabnele or jaldi se city hospital chal

bhiku - (canfuse) ke hua bappu koi badi khabar

s.c - jaldi kar kisi ne kajal thakur pe hamla kiya se or thakuro ne ye galti se bhi bilkul naa lagna chaheye ki is kand se chaudharyo ka koi lena dena hai

or ye khayaal sirf shyam Chaudhary ke man me hi nahi balki baki ke dono pariwaro ke man_me bhi chal raha tha

kajal thakur koi choti moti hasti nahi thi hone wale raja ki maa thi or sab yahi cahte the ki thakur pariwar ko ye lage ki woh unke sabse acche dost hai or unka is sabse koi lena dena hi nahi hai yahi soch kar sab lagbhag apni puri tagat ke sath aaye the

yaha tak ki jab raja ko apni samdan ke uper hamle ki khabar mili to woh bhi apni personal army ke sath mamle ko dekhne aaye the


(Time same abhi se 2 ghante pahle )
Location Jungle



ek car me aag lagi hui thi or uske aage ek ladka baitha hua tha uske cahre se uske emotions ka andaza lagana mushkil tha tabhi woh ladka apni jebse mobile nikalta hai or kisi ko call karta hai

ladka - hello *******##########

abhi tak aap log samajh hi gye honge woh ladka kon hai ji haa woh koi or nahi abhay hi hai

darasal gusse me abhay ne apni maa ki car ko takkar to maar_di thi par ab use samajh nahi aa raha tha ki use kya feel ho raha hai

kyuki use gusse or nafrat ke alawa koi or emotion samajh nahi aata tha to woh gumsum sa jungle me hi baith gya fir uske man_me khayaal aaya ki kahi uski maa mar to nahi gyi ye sochte hi

abhay - ( pareshani se ) nhi itni asani se woh nahi mar sakti

fir woh kisi ko call lagata hai or hospital jake thakuro par nazar rakhne ke liye kahta hai likin woh khud bhi zada der waha ruk nahi pata or bechain hokar khud bhi hospital
pahuch jata hai likin woh thakuro ke pass nahi jata

balki woh hospital ke cantin me hi baith jata hai use dar tha ki agar unse kisi thakur ko dekha to woh fir apna cantrol kho dega or use bhi maar dega

likin jab uske jasus ne ye khabar di ki kajal theek hai tab jake use chain aaya or woh bahar jane laga likin jab usne bahar itna sab dekha to heran ho gya
kyuki usne nahi socha tha ki baki 3no pariwaro ki itni tagat hogi

Location flat

petar - bhai apun log ne aaj kya rada kiya hai maza aa gya

abhay - apun log ne

petar - kya bhai apun to bas aapka test lerela tha nahi to ye jhegur log apun ke aage pani kam chai the
waise bhai aap kya lagta hai fight karte waqt ek dum hero mafik

abhay - ( cold tone ) petar me is kahani ka hero nahi me hu VILLAIN

fir abhay kisi ko call karta hai

abhay - hello Suleman mujhe kuch chaheye

suleman - hukum kro mere aaka

abhay - mujhe *****************************************

or bas abhay ki baat sunkar to petar or sulemaan pure thande pad gye suleman ka shareer bhavishya ki soch kar darse kaapne laga

30 min baad jab petar apne sadme se bahar aaya tab

petar - bhai par apunko ye samajh nahi aaya ye chachundar log apun log par hamla kaiko kiye


aajke liye itna hi to abhay ne ayisa kya kaha suleman se or akhir abhay ki kis baat se naraz hai ye pariwar or abhay kaise muqabla krega itne tagatwar pariwaro se

 

[Alok]

Super nice update bhai lekin abhay ke emotions ko bahar aane do toh aur bhi maza aayega

 

[Dark Cobra]

Update - 36

kisne kiya ye kiski itni himmat hui dhundo use chahe to pura sahar jaam kardo

ranveer hospital me khada chilla raha tha kajal abhi operation theatre me thi doctors ek ghante se andar the kisi ko kuch bhi nahi pata tha thakur pariwar me matam ka mahol tha sanjay bhi hospital me tha kamini ghar par ladkiyo ko sambhal rahi thi

arav aaj subha hi flight se nikal gya tha usse contact nahi ho paya tha
ranveer gahre dukh or gusse me tha bhale hi woh bahar kitna bhi muh maarle par kajal uski biwi thi uske bacho ki maa thi uska pyaar thi uske liye kajal arav se zada naa sahi par kam zaruri bhi nahi thi

tabhi darwaza khulta hai or doctor bahar aata hai

ranveer- (besabri se) kya hua doctor meri kajal theek to hai naa

doctor - thakur sahab aap befikr raheye thakurain bilkul theek hai bas car ko jhatka lagne ki wajha se gardan ki haddi me chot hai
tabhi waha ek nurse aati hai or woh doctor ke kaan me kuch kahti hai

doctor - thakur sahab aapke driver ki sar pe chot lagne ki wajha se paralyse ho gyi hai

dhananjay - koi baat nhi doctor ab uske pure pariwar ki zimmedari thakur pariwar ki hai

kajal ke theek hone ki khabar sunkar sabne rahat ki saasli thi sab khush the ki kajal ko kuch nhi hua par apni pareshani or khushi me jis baat par thakur pariwar ne dhiyaan nahi diya woh tha
waha se thodi dur par khada admi
jisne doctor ki baat sunte hi kisi ko call kiya

Location hospital ke bahar ka canteen jisme abhi ek ladki baitha hua tha jisne mask lagaya hua tha

admi - bhai woh theek hai

ladka - ok

ye bolkar woh ladka hospital se bahar jane laga abhi woh darwaje tak hi pahucha tha ki uski aankhain fati ki fati rah gyi

hospital ke bahar lagbhag 1.5 hazar gadiya thi jo 3 alag alag rods se aayi thi sabme bhar bhar ke log the or sabke hi pass hatiyaar the
unhe dekh kar ayisa lag raha tha jaise ye cahhe to kisi chote mote desh par kabza karle

ye log the Sangwan Rathod or Chaudhary pariwar ke log
aaj sach me us ladke ko andaza ho raha tha ki uski ladai kitni khatarnak ho sakti hai usne apne sahayad hone wale dushmano ko halke me liya tha

(ab jaan lete hai ye sab yaha kar kya rahe hai abhi se 2 ghante pahle)

jab abhay or kajal ki cars ki takkar hui to waha kheto me kaam karne wale log jaldi se car ke pass aaye or jab unhone car me behosh pade 2no logo ko dekh to waha bhagdar mach gyi woh takuro ka ilaka tha or wahi kisi ne unki thakurain ki gadi ko takkar maardi jaldi se kajal ko hospital pahuchaya gya or thakur pariwar ke logo ko khabar ki gayi

pahle to jab thakur pariwar tak ye khabar pahuchi to sab dar gye likin jab kajal ke hospital me admit hone ki baat pata chali tab sabki jaan me jaan aayi
likin jab ranveer dhananjay or sanjay ne ye pata kiya ki accident hua kaise or jab unhe police ne bataya shayaad kisi ne jaan_bujh kar kajal ki gadi ko takkar mari hai tab to jaise ranveer pagal hi ho gya

wahi dusri taraf

tinka - bhaga bhaga jaldi bhaga agar ek baar apne adde pe pahuch gye to bappu usko chodega naa

gopal - mujhe to ye dar hai ki agar woh galti se bach gya to woh kisi ko nahi chodega

tinka - (darte hue) subh subh bol gopu

gopal - dekh pahuch gye ham chal jaldi se gadi se utar ke bhag agar dhere
chale to kahi woh pagal hamare uper gadi hi naa chada_de

ye bol kar woh dono jaldi se gadi se utre or apne godam ke andar bhagne lage likin jab darte hue gopal ne piche dekha to

sannata ek dum sannata unke piche koi nahi tha likin fir bhi unke man kaa dar khatm nhi hua or woh dono jaldi se andar gye

tinka - dadda dadda

gopal - dadaji kaha hai

shyaam Chaudhary - ( apne office se bahar aate hue) aryy halla kyu macha rakha se ek chore ne maar ke to aaye ho intzaar kro inaam mil jayega

apne dada ki baat sun kar unhe samajh hi nahi aaya ki kaise pratikriya de
ki tabhi ek assistant bhagta hua aaya or

assistant - (kaan me) .......................

s.c - kyaaaa
(Fir chillate hue) bhiku o bhiku jaldi bhar aa

bhiku - (bahar aate hue) ke hua bappu

s.c - jaldi apne logo ne ikkatha kar banduk goli gadi sabnele or jaldi se city hospital chal

bhiku - (canfuse) ke hua bappu koi badi khabar

s.c - jaldi kar kisi ne kajal thakur pe hamla kiya se or thakuro ne ye galti se bhi bilkul naa lagna chaheye ki is kand se chaudharyo ka koi lena dena hai

or ye khayaal sirf shyam Chaudhary ke man me hi nahi balki baki ke dono pariwaro ke man_me bhi chal raha tha

kajal thakur koi choti moti hasti nahi thi hone wale raja ki maa thi or sab yahi cahte the ki thakur pariwar ko ye lage ki woh unke sabse acche dost hai or unka is sabse koi lena dena hi nahi hai yahi soch kar sab lagbhag apni puri tagat ke sath aaye the

yaha tak ki jab raja ko apni samdan ke uper hamle ki khabar mili to woh bhi apni personal army ke sath mamle ko dekhne aaye the


(Time same abhi se 2 ghante pahle )
Location Jungle



ek car me aag lagi hui thi or uske aage ek ladka baitha hua tha uske cahre se uske emotions ka andaza lagana mushkil tha tabhi woh ladka apni jebse mobile nikalta hai or kisi ko call karta hai

ladka - hello *******##########

abhi tak aap log samajh hi gye honge woh ladka kon hai ji haa woh koi or nahi abhay hi hai

darasal gusse me abhay ne apni maa ki car ko takkar to maar_di thi par ab use samajh nahi aa raha tha ki use kya feel ho raha hai

kyuki use gusse or nafrat ke alawa koi or emotion samajh nahi aata tha to woh gumsum sa jungle me hi baith gya fir uske man_me khayaal aaya ki kahi uski maa mar to nahi gyi ye sochte hi

abhay - ( pareshani se ) nhi itni asani se woh nahi mar sakti

fir woh kisi ko call lagata hai or hospital jake thakuro par nazar rakhne ke liye kahta hai likin woh khud bhi zada der waha ruk nahi pata or bechain hokar khud bhi hospital
pahuch jata hai likin woh thakuro ke pass nahi jata

balki woh hospital ke cantin me hi baith jata hai use dar tha ki agar unse kisi thakur ko dekha to woh fir apna cantrol kho dega or use bhi maar dega

likin jab uske jasus ne ye khabar di ki kajal theek hai tab jake use chain aaya or woh bahar jane laga likin jab usne bahar itna sab dekha to heran ho gya
kyuki usne nahi socha tha ki baki 3no pariwaro ki itni tagat hogi

Location flat

petar - bhai apun log ne aaj kya rada kiya hai maza aa gya

abhay - apun log ne

petar - kya bhai apun to bas aapka test lerela tha nahi to ye jhegur log apun ke aage pani kam chai the
waise bhai aap kya lagta hai fight karte waqt ek dum hero mafik

abhay - ( cold tone ) petar me is kahani ka hero nahi me hu VILLAIN

fir abhay kisi ko call karta hai

abhay - hello Suleman mujhe kuch chaheye

suleman - hukum kro mere aaka

abhay - mujhe *****************************************

or bas abhay ki baat sunkar to petar or sulemaan pure thande pad gye suleman ka shareer bhavishya ki soch kar darse kaapne laga

30 min baad jab petar apne sadme se bahar aaya tab

petar - bhai par apunko ye samajh nahi aaya ye chachundar log apun log par hamla kaiko kiye


aajke liye itna hi to abhay ne ayisa kya kaha suleman se or akhir abhay ki kis baat se naraz hai ye pariwar or abhay kaise muqabla krega itne tagatwar pariwaro se

Nice update action se bharpoor
Waiting new update sir ji

 

[Smith_15]

Update 37

 

[Shahrukh]

Fantastic update bhai keep posting