Incest Bheed me akela (abhay)

[lovenaeem88]

Supper fantastic update janab

 

[pppy]

jabardast update bhai......!!!! bhai divya aur abhay ki bhi mulaqat karav!!!!

 

[Dirty banda]

jabardast update bhai......!!!! bhai divya aur abhay ki bhi mulaqat karav!!!!

Abhi dilli dur hai bhai

Par haa agle 3 update me shok ya surprise mil sakte hai

 

[parkas]

Update - 36

kisne kiya ye kiski itni himmat hui dhundo use chahe to pura sahar jaam kardo

ranveer hospital me khada chilla raha tha kajal abhi operation theatre me thi doctors ek ghante se andar the kisi ko kuch bhi nahi pata tha thakur pariwar me matam ka mahol tha sanjay bhi hospital me tha kamini ghar par ladkiyo ko sambhal rahi thi

arav aaj subha hi flight se nikal gya tha usse contact nahi ho paya tha
ranveer gahre dukh or gusse me tha bhale hi woh bahar kitna bhi muh maarle par kajal uski biwi thi uske bacho ki maa thi uska pyaar thi uske liye kajal arav se zada naa sahi par kam zaruri bhi nahi thi

tabhi darwaza khulta hai or doctor bahar aata hai

ranveer- (besabri se) kya hua doctor meri kajal theek to hai naa

doctor - thakur sahab aap befikr raheye thakurain bilkul theek hai bas car ko jhatka lagne ki wajha se gardan ki haddi me chot hai
tabhi waha ek nurse aati hai or woh doctor ke kaan me kuch kahti hai

doctor - thakur sahab aapke driver ki sar pe chot lagne ki wajha se paralyse ho gyi hai

dhananjay - koi baat nhi doctor ab uske pure pariwar ki zimmedari thakur pariwar ki hai

kajal ke theek hone ki khabar sunkar sabne rahat ki saasli thi sab khush the ki kajal ko kuch nhi hua par apni pareshani or khushi me jis baat par thakur pariwar ne dhiyaan nahi diya woh tha
waha se thodi dur par khada admi
jisne doctor ki baat sunte hi kisi ko call kiya

Location hospital ke bahar ka canteen jisme abhi ek ladki baitha hua tha jisne mask lagaya hua tha

admi - bhai woh theek hai

ladka - ok

ye bolkar woh ladka hospital se bahar jane laga abhi woh darwaje tak hi pahucha tha ki uski aankhain fati ki fati rah gyi

hospital ke bahar lagbhag 1.5 hazar gadiya thi jo 3 alag alag rods se aayi thi sabme bhar bhar ke log the or sabke hi pass hatiyaar the
unhe dekh kar ayisa lag raha tha jaise ye cahhe to kisi chote mote desh par kabza karle

ye log the Sangwan Rathod or Chaudhary pariwar ke log
aaj sach me us ladke ko andaza ho raha tha ki uski ladai kitni khatarnak ho sakti hai usne apne sahayad hone wale dushmano ko halke me liya tha

(ab jaan lete hai ye sab yaha kar kya rahe hai abhi se 2 ghante pahle)

jab abhay or kajal ki cars ki takkar hui to waha kheto me kaam karne wale log jaldi se car ke pass aaye or jab unhone car me behosh pade 2no logo ko dekh to waha bhagdar mach gyi woh takuro ka ilaka tha or wahi kisi ne unki thakurain ki gadi ko takkar maardi jaldi se kajal ko hospital pahuchaya gya or thakur pariwar ke logo ko khabar ki gayi

pahle to jab thakur pariwar tak ye khabar pahuchi to sab dar gye likin jab kajal ke hospital me admit hone ki baat pata chali tab sabki jaan me jaan aayi
likin jab ranveer dhananjay or sanjay ne ye pata kiya ki accident hua kaise or jab unhe police ne bataya shayaad kisi ne jaan_bujh kar kajal ki gadi ko takkar mari hai tab to jaise ranveer pagal hi ho gya

wahi dusri taraf

tinka - bhaga bhaga jaldi bhaga agar ek baar apne adde pe pahuch gye to bappu usko chodega naa

gopal - mujhe to ye dar hai ki agar woh galti se bach gya to woh kisi ko nahi chodega

tinka - (darte hue) subh subh bol gopu

gopal - dekh pahuch gye ham chal jaldi se gadi se utar ke bhag agar dhere
chale to kahi woh pagal hamare uper gadi hi naa chada_de

ye bol kar woh dono jaldi se gadi se utre or apne godam ke andar bhagne lage likin jab darte hue gopal ne piche dekha to

sannata ek dum sannata unke piche koi nahi tha likin fir bhi unke man kaa dar khatm nhi hua or woh dono jaldi se andar gye

tinka - dadda dadda

gopal - dadaji kaha hai

shyaam Chaudhary - ( apne office se bahar aate hue) aryy halla kyu macha rakha se ek chore ne maar ke to aaye ho intzaar kro inaam mil jayega

apne dada ki baat sun kar unhe samajh hi nahi aaya ki kaise pratikriya de
ki tabhi ek assistant bhagta hua aaya or

assistant - (kaan me) .......................

s.c - kyaaaa
(Fir chillate hue) bhiku o bhiku jaldi bhar aa

bhiku - (bahar aate hue) ke hua bappu

s.c - jaldi apne logo ne ikkatha kar banduk goli gadi sabnele or jaldi se city hospital chal

bhiku - (canfuse) ke hua bappu koi badi khabar

s.c - jaldi kar kisi ne kajal thakur pe hamla kiya se or thakuro ne ye galti se bhi bilkul naa lagna chaheye ki is kand se chaudharyo ka koi lena dena hai

or ye khayaal sirf shyam Chaudhary ke man me hi nahi balki baki ke dono pariwaro ke man_me bhi chal raha tha

kajal thakur koi choti moti hasti nahi thi hone wale raja ki maa thi or sab yahi cahte the ki thakur pariwar ko ye lage ki woh unke sabse acche dost hai or unka is sabse koi lena dena hi nahi hai yahi soch kar sab lagbhag apni puri tagat ke sath aaye the

yaha tak ki jab raja ko apni samdan ke uper hamle ki khabar mili to woh bhi apni personal army ke sath mamle ko dekhne aaye the


(Time same abhi se 2 ghante pahle )
Location Jungle



ek car me aag lagi hui thi or uske aage ek ladka baitha hua tha uske cahre se uske emotions ka andaza lagana mushkil tha tabhi woh ladka apni jebse mobile nikalta hai or kisi ko call karta hai

ladka - hello *******##########

abhi tak aap log samajh hi gye honge woh ladka kon hai ji haa woh koi or nahi abhay hi hai

darasal gusse me abhay ne apni maa ki car ko takkar to maar_di thi par ab use samajh nahi aa raha tha ki use kya feel ho raha hai

kyuki use gusse or nafrat ke alawa koi or emotion samajh nahi aata tha to woh gumsum sa jungle me hi baith gya fir uske man_me khayaal aaya ki kahi uski maa mar to nahi gyi ye sochte hi

abhay - ( pareshani se ) nhi itni asani se woh nahi mar sakti

fir woh kisi ko call lagata hai or hospital jake thakuro par nazar rakhne ke liye kahta hai likin woh khud bhi zada der waha ruk nahi pata or bechain hokar khud bhi hospital
pahuch jata hai likin woh thakuro ke pass nahi jata

balki woh hospital ke cantin me hi baith jata hai use dar tha ki agar unse kisi thakur ko dekha to woh fir apna cantrol kho dega or use bhi maar dega

likin jab uske jasus ne ye khabar di ki kajal theek hai tab jake use chain aaya or woh bahar jane laga likin jab usne bahar itna sab dekha to heran ho gya
kyuki usne nahi socha tha ki baki 3no pariwaro ki itni tagat hogi

Location flat

petar - bhai apun log ne aaj kya rada kiya hai maza aa gya

abhay - apun log ne

petar - kya bhai apun to bas aapka test lerela tha nahi to ye jhegur log apun ke aage pani kam chai the
waise bhai aap kya lagta hai fight karte waqt ek dum hero mafik

abhay - ( cold tone ) petar me is kahani ka hero nahi me hu VILLAIN

fir abhay kisi ko call karta hai

abhay - hello Suleman mujhe kuch chaheye

suleman - hukum kro mere aaka

abhay - mujhe *****************************************

or bas abhay ki baat sunkar to petar or sulemaan pure thande pad gye suleman ka shareer bhavishya ki soch kar darse kaapne laga

30 min baad jab petar apne sadme se bahar aaya tab

petar - bhai par apunko ye samajh nahi aaya ye chachundar log apun log par hamla kaiko kiye


aajke liye itna hi to abhay ne ayisa kya kaha suleman se or akhir abhay ki kis baat se naraz hai ye pariwar or abhay kaise muqabla krega itne tagatwar pariwaro se

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Dirty banda bhai....
Nice and beautiful update....

 

[Devil Lust]

Bhai ye story mujhe pasand aayi. Isme action, drama, surprises hai. Sath hi iska plot well defined hai .Hope aap jaldi hi complete karenge

Update - 36

kisne kiya ye kiski itni himmat hui dhundo use chahe to pura sahar jaam kardo

ranveer hospital me khada chilla raha tha kajal abhi operation theatre me thi doctors ek ghante se andar the kisi ko kuch bhi nahi pata tha thakur pariwar me matam ka mahol tha sanjay bhi hospital me tha kamini ghar par ladkiyo ko sambhal rahi thi

arav aaj subha hi flight se nikal gya tha usse contact nahi ho paya tha
ranveer gahre dukh or gusse me tha bhale hi woh bahar kitna bhi muh maarle par kajal uski biwi thi uske bacho ki maa thi uska pyaar thi uske liye kajal arav se zada naa sahi par kam zaruri bhi nahi thi

tabhi darwaza khulta hai or doctor bahar aata hai

ranveer- (besabri se) kya hua doctor meri kajal theek to hai naa

doctor - thakur sahab aap befikr raheye thakurain bilkul theek hai bas car ko jhatka lagne ki wajha se gardan ki haddi me chot hai
tabhi waha ek nurse aati hai or woh doctor ke kaan me kuch kahti hai

doctor - thakur sahab aapke driver ki sar pe chot lagne ki wajha se paralyse ho gyi hai

dhananjay - koi baat nhi doctor ab uske pure pariwar ki zimmedari thakur pariwar ki hai

kajal ke theek hone ki khabar sunkar sabne rahat ki saasli thi sab khush the ki kajal ko kuch nhi hua par apni pareshani or khushi me jis baat par thakur pariwar ne dhiyaan nahi diya woh tha
waha se thodi dur par khada admi
jisne doctor ki baat sunte hi kisi ko call kiya

Location hospital ke bahar ka canteen jisme abhi ek ladki baitha hua tha jisne mask lagaya hua tha

admi - bhai woh theek hai

ladka - ok

ye bolkar woh ladka hospital se bahar jane laga abhi woh darwaje tak hi pahucha tha ki uski aankhain fati ki fati rah gyi

hospital ke bahar lagbhag 1.5 hazar gadiya thi jo 3 alag alag rods se aayi thi sabme bhar bhar ke log the or sabke hi pass hatiyaar the
unhe dekh kar ayisa lag raha tha jaise ye cahhe to kisi chote mote desh par kabza karle

ye log the Sangwan Rathod or Chaudhary pariwar ke log
aaj sach me us ladke ko andaza ho raha tha ki uski ladai kitni khatarnak ho sakti hai usne apne sahayad hone wale dushmano ko halke me liya tha

(ab jaan lete hai ye sab yaha kar kya rahe hai abhi se 2 ghante pahle)

jab abhay or kajal ki cars ki takkar hui to waha kheto me kaam karne wale log jaldi se car ke pass aaye or jab unhone car me behosh pade 2no logo ko dekh to waha bhagdar mach gyi woh takuro ka ilaka tha or wahi kisi ne unki thakurain ki gadi ko takkar maardi jaldi se kajal ko hospital pahuchaya gya or thakur pariwar ke logo ko khabar ki gayi

pahle to jab thakur pariwar tak ye khabar pahuchi to sab dar gye likin jab kajal ke hospital me admit hone ki baat pata chali tab sabki jaan me jaan aayi
likin jab ranveer dhananjay or sanjay ne ye pata kiya ki accident hua kaise or jab unhe police ne bataya shayaad kisi ne jaan_bujh kar kajal ki gadi ko takkar mari hai tab to jaise ranveer pagal hi ho gya

wahi dusri taraf

tinka - bhaga bhaga jaldi bhaga agar ek baar apne adde pe pahuch gye to bappu usko chodega naa

gopal - mujhe to ye dar hai ki agar woh galti se bach gya to woh kisi ko nahi chodega

tinka - (darte hue) subh subh bol gopu

gopal - dekh pahuch gye ham chal jaldi se gadi se utar ke bhag agar dhere
chale to kahi woh pagal hamare uper gadi hi naa chada_de

ye bol kar woh dono jaldi se gadi se utre or apne godam ke andar bhagne lage likin jab darte hue gopal ne piche dekha to

sannata ek dum sannata unke piche koi nahi tha likin fir bhi unke man kaa dar khatm nhi hua or woh dono jaldi se andar gye

tinka - dadda dadda

gopal - dadaji kaha hai

shyaam Chaudhary - ( apne office se bahar aate hue) aryy halla kyu macha rakha se ek chore ne maar ke to aaye ho intzaar kro inaam mil jayega

apne dada ki baat sun kar unhe samajh hi nahi aaya ki kaise pratikriya de
ki tabhi ek assistant bhagta hua aaya or

assistant - (kaan me) .......................

s.c - kyaaaa
(Fir chillate hue) bhiku o bhiku jaldi bhar aa

bhiku - (bahar aate hue) ke hua bappu

s.c - jaldi apne logo ne ikkatha kar banduk goli gadi sabnele or jaldi se city hospital chal

bhiku - (canfuse) ke hua bappu koi badi khabar

s.c - jaldi kar kisi ne kajal thakur pe hamla kiya se or thakuro ne ye galti se bhi bilkul naa lagna chaheye ki is kand se chaudharyo ka koi lena dena hai

or ye khayaal sirf shyam Chaudhary ke man me hi nahi balki baki ke dono pariwaro ke man_me bhi chal raha tha

kajal thakur koi choti moti hasti nahi thi hone wale raja ki maa thi or sab yahi cahte the ki thakur pariwar ko ye lage ki woh unke sabse acche dost hai or unka is sabse koi lena dena hi nahi hai yahi soch kar sab lagbhag apni puri tagat ke sath aaye the

yaha tak ki jab raja ko apni samdan ke uper hamle ki khabar mili to woh bhi apni personal army ke sath mamle ko dekhne aaye the


(Time same abhi se 2 ghante pahle )
Location Jungle



ek car me aag lagi hui thi or uske aage ek ladka baitha hua tha uske cahre se uske emotions ka andaza lagana mushkil tha tabhi woh ladka apni jebse mobile nikalta hai or kisi ko call karta hai

ladka - hello *******##########

abhi tak aap log samajh hi gye honge woh ladka kon hai ji haa woh koi or nahi abhay hi hai

darasal gusse me abhay ne apni maa ki car ko takkar to maar_di thi par ab use samajh nahi aa raha tha ki use kya feel ho raha hai

kyuki use gusse or nafrat ke alawa koi or emotion samajh nahi aata tha to woh gumsum sa jungle me hi baith gya fir uske man_me khayaal aaya ki kahi uski maa mar to nahi gyi ye sochte hi

abhay - ( pareshani se ) nhi itni asani se woh nahi mar sakti

fir woh kisi ko call lagata hai or hospital jake thakuro par nazar rakhne ke liye kahta hai likin woh khud bhi zada der waha ruk nahi pata or bechain hokar khud bhi hospital
pahuch jata hai likin woh thakuro ke pass nahi jata

balki woh hospital ke cantin me hi baith jata hai use dar tha ki agar unse kisi thakur ko dekha to woh fir apna cantrol kho dega or use bhi maar dega

likin jab uske jasus ne ye khabar di ki kajal theek hai tab jake use chain aaya or woh bahar jane laga likin jab usne bahar itna sab dekha to heran ho gya
kyuki usne nahi socha tha ki baki 3no pariwaro ki itni tagat hogi

Location flat

petar - bhai apun log ne aaj kya rada kiya hai maza aa gya

abhay - apun log ne

petar - kya bhai apun to bas aapka test lerela tha nahi to ye jhegur log apun ke aage pani kam chai the
waise bhai aap kya lagta hai fight karte waqt ek dum hero mafik

abhay - ( cold tone ) petar me is kahani ka hero nahi me hu VILLAIN

fir abhay kisi ko call karta hai

abhay - hello Suleman mujhe kuch chaheye

suleman - hukum kro mere aaka

abhay - mujhe *****************************************

or bas abhay ki baat sunkar to petar or sulemaan pure thande pad gye suleman ka shareer bhavishya ki soch kar darse kaapne laga

30 min baad jab petar apne sadme se bahar aaya tab

petar - bhai par apunko ye samajh nahi aaya ye chachundar log apun log par hamla kaiko kiye


aajke liye itna hi to abhay ne ayisa kya kaha suleman se or akhir abhay ki kis baat se naraz hai ye pariwar or abhay kaise muqabla krega itne tagatwar pariwaro se

 

[Akxnx]

Just waiting for the shock when ABHAY'S family will know the truth that he's not dead.
अच्छा हुआ की काजल बच गई अभय के बदले का शिकार होने के लिए
वैसे भी फिजीकल छोट से अच्छा होगा की इमोशनल शॉक दिया जाए काजल को
Waiting for next update bro
Take ur time so that we'll get more awesome updates

 

[Devil Lust]

Just waiting for the shock when ABHAY'S family will know the truth that he's not dead.
अच्छा हुआ की काजल बच गई अभय के बदले का शिकार होने के लिए
वैसे भी फिजीकल छोट से अच्छा होगा की इमोशनल शॉक दिया जाए काजल को
Waiting for next update bro
Take ur time so that we'll get more awesome updates

It's easy to predict. Abhay apni maa bua bahno samet ghar ki aurto ko chodne wala hai.
Lekin kaise kab ye writer par depend karta hai.
Ha ye shocking hoga ki abhay jinda hai

 

[peerdip Meena]

Nice update bro

 

[Akxnx]

It's easy to predict. Abhay apni maa bua bahno samet ghar ki aurto ko chodne wala hai.
Lekin kaise kab ye writer par depend karta hai.
Ha ye shocking hoga ki abhay jinda hai

Ur jab abhay apni maa ko chod rha hoga tab agr wo apna Raaz khole to Mazza hi aa Jaye
But writrer apne hisab se likhe to jyada aacha hoga

 

[Samar_Singh]

Ise kahte hai story ko ghot kar pi jana shukriya dost ye bahatreen review likhne ke liye

Thanks to you Bhai itni mast story likhne ke liye.

Vo to ek hi baar me 35 update padhne ke baad review diya so kai chize chhut gyi jo likhna chahta tha.

Jaise jab 12 th ke baad abhay apne Ghar phone karta hai uske baad hi uske hostel par attack hua. Ab kisi army hostel par attack hona koi hairani ki baat nahi, ye terrorist attack bhi ho sakta hai. Lekin abhay ke jinda hone ki khabar ke baad hi uss hostel par attack kya sirf ittefak tha ya kisi ne abhay ko marne ke liye hi aisa kiya.

Aur jis ladki ko abhay ne police station me dekha tha ladakh me kya vo dipti hi thi. Jaisa ki mujhe lagta hai.
Lekin ab tak abhay ne dipti se direct baat nahi ki hai, kya writer koi aur bhi suspense rakhna chahta hai. Kya madhu ne jhut to nahi bola.

Vahi ab tak aarav ka character kaisa hai iska koi khass varnan nahi aaya hai. Jo kuch ek batein abhi huyi hai usse to lagta hai ki vo amir bigdail aur swarthi hai jise apna pyar pane ke liye apni beheno ki bhi parvah nahi, but abhi usko aur janne ki jarurat hai.

Aur bhai hemant ke kya haal hai train me Sajid aur abhay se pitne ke baad uske bhi to 3 saal bit chuke hai. Gaon jakar apni badi maa ko usne bajaya yaa nahi.

Eagerly waiting for next update